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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #20 on: July 30, 2012, 12:01:16 PM »
takabaka!! you forgot acchan birthday!!!!

Stupid Takaboy is Stupid  :lol:

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The Problems for 1 month Chapter 3

After changing her clothes...



Takamina:DANG IT!ALL THIS TIME?!
 
 
FLASHBACK:
 
*Before Shibuya AX performance:
 
Acchan:Takamina~!
 
Takamina: not now Acchan!
 
*Listening Persona 3 seconds song
 
*Middle of the event
 
Acchan:Takamina~!here's a yakisoba bread to boost up your energy!
 
Takamina:No,I'm good,thanks anyways.
 
Acchan:But you might get hun--
 
Takamina:It's ok.
 
*Memorizing to Persona 3 seconds song & dance steps in her head
 
*Closing event
 
MC:Happy Birthday Acchan~!!!
 
Acchan:Thank you very much!!
 
@dressing room...
 
Takamina:Sanbyou mitsumeru dakede...
 
*Practicing the dance steps
 
END OF FLASHBACK



Takamina:WHY?!WHY AM I SO COLD?!!
 
2 years ago...Acchan's 1st celebration of her birthday in AKB theater:
 
 

Acchan:*Minna!(Everyone) thank you for coming here and being with us to celebrate my birthday!
 
 
AKB fans:YEAH~!!!!
 
 
Yuko:wow~!what a strong reply for our fans!
 
 
Acchan:Thank you very much. *bows
 
 
Yuko:By the way Acchan,who's the 1st person that greeted you on your birthday today?
 
 
Acchan:To tell you the truth my mom was in 2nd place~!someone beated her.
 
 
AKB fans:WOAH~!!
 
 
Yuko:well who is it?
 
 
*Acchan points out the member who greeted her 1st.
 
Yuko:Wow!It's Takamina~!
 
 
AKB fans:WOAH~!!!!
 
 
random AKB fan:ATSUMINA!!!!!
 
 
Yuko:hahaha indeed.It's Atsumina,right?well how did Takamina greeted you 1st Acchan?
 
 
Acchan:well she called on my phone and I woked up because of that.
 
 
Yuko:Wow~!A phone call~!what did whe said?
 
 
Acchan:she said "Happy Birthday~!Sorry If I waked you up!I just want to greet you so badly right now,I lo--"
 
 
Takamina:WAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!Quit it already acchan!it's embarrassing!
 
 
Acchan:Eh?why wont you share our story with each other?
 
 
Takamina:It's embarrassing!*blush*
 
 
Yuko:hahaha Takamina really doesn't want to show her love from acchan in public huh?
 
 
*Akb members & fanslaughs
 
 
Takamina:Y-Yuko!It doesn't mean that if your the MC you keep teasing me like that!
 
 
Yuko:hahaha~!well~ It doesn't mean that if your the MC you keep sharing your failing jokes~!
 
 
*Akb members & fans laughs
 
 
Takamina:err...*blush
 
 
Acchan:Yuko stop that~!Don't tease my Takamina that way~!
 
 
Takamina:E-eh?!
 
 
Yuko:hahaha~ ok~
 
 
Acchan:You didn't mean that huh?
 
 
Yuko:yeah!
 
 
*Crowd laughs
 
 
Acchan:well anyways that's how Takamina do it everytime I'll celebrate my Birthday~!sometimes she's the 3rd person that
            greets me and even 2nd!but that doesn't matter! the important thing is that...She didn't forget my Birthday!
 
 
AKB fans:YEAAAH~!!!ATSUMINA~!!!
 

 
FLASHBACK END

"Dang it!I focused on Persona too much I forgot that it's her Birthday today....
I'M SO STUPID!!!" Takamina said with full of disappointment.
 
 
RING RING, RING RING, RING RING
 
@ phone...
 
Takamina:H-Hello?
 
 
???:You're so stupid you know?From all the AKB members that would forget her birthday,why you?
 
 
Takamina:Y-Yuko...
 
 
Yuko:There is still time,Go buy her a gift,go to the *says location*.that's  place where we are going
        to celebrate Acchan's birthday.
 
 
Takamina:What should I buy?
 
 
Yuko:Buy something that she likes,It doesn't matter if it's cheap or expensive,but most importantly
         it's from your heart!
 
 
Takamina:*smiles thanks yuko,you save me.
 
 
Yuko:Enough thanking me!Go buy her a gift!
 
 
Takamina:Ok,thanks again.
 
 
As Takamina bought her gift for acchan,she ran off as fast as she can on her destination
where Acchan's Birthday party is being held.
 
 
After a few,minutes she finally reached her destination but as she opens the door she was
too late...the party was over...Acchan wasn't there....Yuko wasn't there...the other AKB
members wasn't there and even Aki-p.( <--- wut? XD Writter's POV)
 
Takamina was so disappointed about herself...Acchan was always by her side earlier & she
didn't even remember a thing about her birthday at all...and so she thought "Am I really a
Good friend ? Do I really deserve it?"even though it's her own question she can't answer it
properly even if their friendship with each other reached for...6 years.
 
As Takamina was full of disappointed of herself, she hears some footsteps approaching her.
She thought "Maybe this person is Acchan",she can feel her presence and so she said:
 
"ACCHAN!"Takamina said with full of relief.
 
"Excuse me miss but we have to clean this mess up.The party just ended up a few minutes ago
so please leave,it's already midnight."said by the janitor.
 
"Ah,sorry..and thanks for your concern."Takamina said sadly.
 
Takamina left the building.she thought that if that person was acchan the her day would have gotten
better, that if she didn't concentrate on Persona so much then she have spent more time with Acchan
but she didn't...
 
As Takamina was so down on that time,suddenly someone hugged her on her back,she had no idea on
who's that person that is hugging her back until she heard that person's voice,saying:
 
"Osoi na...(You're so slow...)"said by the person behind her hugging her tightly.
 
Takamina was so shocked when she heard the voice of the person that was hugging her,but that was at first,
in the end she ended up crying and said...
 
"I'm...I'm.....



I'M SO SORRY!!!!"Takamina said out loud while crying.
 
"It's ok I forgive you..."Acchan said.
 
"I'm sorry."Takamina said it repeatedly.
 
"It's ok.Stop crying will you?you're making me cry too!"Acchan said while she was also about to cry.
 
"By the way here's my gift for you...*Otanjoubi Omedettou.(Happy Birthday)"Takamina said with a smile.



"*smiles Thank you...I'll treasure it forever..."acchan said while crying on takamina's shoulder.
 
"I'm so stupid right?for all the things that I would forget,It was your birthday.."Takamina said while hugging
acchan.
 
"Mou.... Baka...(Idiot...)"
 
Takamina accepted that thing Acchan said to her....what matters to her is that she spend some time with Acchan and
right now they are sharing the warmth of their body heat with each other even though she wish that day would never
end...
 
T.B.C.

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Ack~!! My neck hurts!!! (back/neck pain because of writting,editing and checking of type errors  :depressed:)

I think I left some typos  :err:

anyways please tune in for Chapter 4! >.< if not I'll probably not continue this atsumina fiction.... :badluck:
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #21 on: July 31, 2012, 04:13:57 PM »
amfff I forgot to say.... the update for Chapter 4 would be kinda late because exams are coming up on our school so sorry for those who tune in this fiction.... :kneelbow:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #22 on: July 31, 2012, 04:33:24 PM »
Takamina... Baka da yo... forgetting Acchan's b-day! tsk.
(I still think that Acchan stalked Bakamina to that Persona event.. hahah)
And good luck with the exams... then again have an exam too.. ><
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #23 on: July 31, 2012, 04:37:22 PM »
Such a sweet chapter..  :farofflook: Acchan so forgiving..  :luvluv2: it's just that Taka!!  :scolding: how can you forgot Acchan's birthday!!  :temper: never forget her birthday ever again!!  :on thumbb:

I really love your drawing..  :on GJ:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #24 on: July 31, 2012, 04:44:20 PM »
I love your illustrations!
minami no baka! forgot the ace birthday  :smhid

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #25 on: July 31, 2012, 04:51:49 PM »
Ow... so sweet :mon cute:

the teddy bear is so cute  :mon lovelaff: kyaaa... and your drawing is so cool~  :mon thumb:

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what matters to her is that she spend some time with Acchan and
right now they are sharing the warmth of their body heat with each other even though she wish that day would never
end...

^this make me  :mon blood:

Good luck for your exam Mai-chan :mon blowhorn:



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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #26 on: August 01, 2012, 03:11:54 AM »
Takamina... Baka da yo... forgetting Acchan's b-day! tsk.
(I still think that Acchan stalked Bakamina to that Persona event.. hahah)
And good luck with the exams... then again have an exam too.. ><
Ja~

Thank you!!! and also good luck on your exam too :D

Ow... so sweet :mon cute:

the teddy bear is so cute  :mon lovelaff: kyaaa... and your drawing is so cool~  :mon thumb:

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what matters to her is that she spend some time with Acchan and
right now they are sharing the warmth of their body heat with each other even though she wish that day would never
end...

^this make me  :mon blood:

Good luck for your exam Mai-chan :mon blowhorn:




Thank you >.<  I'll do my best in the exams  :on GJ:

To Everyone~!:

I really thank you all for reading this fiction! (I thought no one's reading it  :fainted:)
all of your comments boosts me up to create the Chapter 4 as much as possible! :on speedy:
I'll try doing the Chapter 4 after the exams! :D
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #27 on: August 01, 2012, 06:39:04 AM »
OMG!! I love your draws :D... they make your fic unique :D...

I think the best gift for atsuko gonna be a takamina´s kiss :D.. come on takaboy whe know tha you want :D

Ganbatte with you exam.. we are waiting for your updated

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #28 on: August 01, 2012, 11:46:09 AM »
Wow you draw using tablet? o3o

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #29 on: August 01, 2012, 12:06:11 PM »
Oh My God !!!!!!  :twothumbs

Im Really happy you update very fast hehehe...

hope you can continue it..

i really love it..

thank you
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 7/31] Chapter 3- Idiot...
« Reply #31 on: August 01, 2012, 04:26:29 PM »
ah gee do you suppose we can oekaki chat? haha. i don't have any wota friend to drag along with akb related drawings xD

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #32 on: August 03, 2012, 09:38:22 AM »
Oh My God !!!!!!  :twothumbs

Im Really happy you update very fast hehehe...

hope you can continue it..

i really love it..

thank you

^uwah~!!!arigatou~!! :shy2: thanks for reading~! :DD

OMG!! I love your draws :D... they make your fic unique :D...

I think the best gift for atsuko gonna be a takamina´s kiss :D.. come on takaboy whe know tha you want :D

Ganbatte with you exam.. we are waiting for your updated

wehehe~I think so too~ and If that happens in real life i will....:mon crazyinlove: :mon blood::mon angel: and by the way Thanks for the support~!! :kneelbow:


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The Problems for 1 month Chapter 4



@Persona Headquarters... (Actually it's just a house)
 
"SO~!why do you think I called you right here?"Riku said with a playful voice.
 
"Uhmm...because....Our show is successful yesterday~!!"Takamina said with a playful voice to join in with Riku.
 
"YEAH~!!!"Riku said with a playful voice.
 
"YEAH~!!"Takamina joined along.
 
"Lalalalalala~" dancing aroud~
 
 
 
 
"NO."Riku suddenly said with a serious face & voice.
 
"Eh....T-then what is it?"Takamina got a bit scared of Riku's serious tone of voice earlier.
 
"READ THIS AND EXPLAIN."Riku said while he slammed a newspaper on the table with a serious voice once again.
 
"Uh....ok...but why do I have to dress as kai in our meeting?"Takamina asked and still scared by Riku's fearful stare.
 
*BAM* Suddenly Riku slammed his hands on the table which startled Takamina,it's like she saw what's the real persona of Riku and then he said:

"LISTEN.....



I'll be the one asking Questions here....so...READ IT....AND EXPLAIN."Riku said with a serious voice.
 
"OK!OK!No need to be rude!GEEZ!I'll read it ok?"Takamina said to chill out Riku.
 
While Takamina's reading the Newspaper Frontpage article...
 
Takamina:Center Position Kai in the Ikemen group Persona blah blah blah...finally changed?last night blah blah blah......
 
*After Takamina Finished reading the whole article....
 
"KAI HATES ACCHAN?!"Takamina reacted with full of shock.
 
"WHAT?! YOU FORGOTTEN THAT KAI HATES HER?!"Riku said with a shoked tone knowing Takamina didn't know a thing
  about Kai hating Acchan.
 
"HOW COULD I FORGET IF I DON'T KNOW?!"Takamina exclaimed to Riku."WHAT?!I TOLD KUU TO TELL YOU RIGHT?!DIDN'T KUU SAID IT TO YOU?!"Riku exclaimed.



Takamina & Riku....*Glares*
 
"W-well~!Look at that!I drop my spoon!silly me!J-Just continue your fight!Don't mind me!"Kuu said roughly with an awkward smile then he closes the door to the kitchen.
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"He didn't tell you,did he?"Riku said with a low tone of voice.
"*sigh No...."Takamina said also on a low tone of voice.
 
Riku sighted.
 
"Ok....Right now I forgive you...because you don't know a thing about Kai,but next time if you are curious ask us!"Riku said with a worried tone.
 
"ok but I know it now so Thanks!"Takamina said with a sense of relief that Riku came back to normal.
 
"Unless...after that interview Maeda-san called you and have an interaction with you~!But that's not
gonna happen right?"Riku said with a honest smiling face.
 
"Uhm...Y-yeah..."Takamina agreed awkwardly.
 
"OK then.this meeting of our is adjourned."Riku said to Takamina.
 
"Ok then,*Ittekimasu...(I'm going now..)"Takamina said.
 
"Oh yeah..remember...no interaction with Maeda-san while your Kai,got it?"Riku remind Takamina.
 
"Got it!"Takamina said with a smile.
 
*closes the door
 
Suddlenly....

 
"Oh~ look who we have here..."someone said to Takamina.



"It's Kai from persona! or should I say, MIDGET!"the unknown guy suddenly insulted Takamina because she's
Kai right now.
 
"Wha..?"and ofcourse Takamina has no clue on what is that guy's saying.
 
"OI!are you listening to me MIDGET?!"The guy keeps insulting Takamina/Kai.
 
*Closes door goes back to Persona's HQ.
 
"Uh.........OI!KAIII!!! *bam  *bam *bam *bam YOU COWARD!!!"the unknown guy keeps slamming the Door of the Presona's house.
 
"Uh....I guess....you meet him huh...."Riku said with an awkward tone.
 
"WH-WHO THE HELL IS THAT GUY???!!"Takamina said while holding the knob of the door.
 
"He's....Kai's Rival."Riku said.
 
"R-Rival?"Takamina wondered.
 
"No time to explain just go put off that wig and listen to what i say,I'll settle this."Riku said to takamina with a serious tone.
 
"Ok."Takamina answered back.
 
"here's the plan...."Riku whispers his plan to Takamina while Kai's rival is still slamming the front door.
 
*A few seconds later...
 
"LISTEN!I told you!Kai doesn't want you to talk to him right now!"Riku said to the rival of Kai while arguing with him.
 
"I WONT GO UNTIL H--
 
"MOU!SHUT UP!"Takamina said to the two guys that are shouting with each other.
 
"Uh...."The rival of Kai was shocked as she saw Takamina.
 
"Is this how you treat your guest...HUH RIKU?!"Takamina madly shouted to Riku.
 
"I'm really sorry Takamina....it's just that..."Riku was so sorry on what is happening right now.
 
"MOU!!!I HAVE ENOUGH!!!I'm leaving!"takamina said with a mad voice.
 
"Man!look what you've done!please leave?"Riku said to the rival of Kai while he's upset.
 
"tsk..."the rival of kai is so pissed of that Kai's such a weekling.
 
*The Rival of Kai leaves....
 
"*sigh finally he left....nice job!as expected of Takamina"Riku happily said to Takamina.

"hehehe~ well good thing he's pleased on that thing earlier!well I have to go now Riku!thanks again"Takamina said with a smlie.
 
"No Problem! and take care."said by Riku.
 

After that....@ a certain sidewalk...

 
While Takamina was walking in the streets on a familiar place, suddenly someone patted her right shoulder..
She was obvoiusly shocked and as she looks at her back...
 
"OSU~!"said happily by....Kai's Rival.
 
"Eh......*Dare?{Who are you?)"Takamina asked Kai's Rival pretending that she doesn't have a clue on who he is.
 
"Hahaha!I knew you would ask!That means I changed alot huh?"Kai's Rival said happily.
 
"E-eh????"Takamina was so confused on how is that Kai's Rival talks to her so happily.
 
"It's me!!Kobayashi Keitaro!"Kai's Rival said to Takamina.
 
"wait.......EH?!!!!Keitaro?!!!!You've change alot!!!!"Takamina replied to Keitaro.
 
"Hahaha I thought you've forgotten my name!" Keitaro said to Takamina.
 
"Why would I forget your name?we're close friends right?"Takamina said with a smile.
 
"Hahaha!by the way!why are you at the Persona's HQ?" Ketaro suddenly asks to Takamina.
 
"E-eh?well...it's nothing important!we just have a small talk!"Takamina replied to Keitaro.
 
"Eh?since when do you and Riku became that close with each other?"Keitaro asked.
 
"It's a long story on how the two of us met!"Takamina replied.
 
"Eh....well I have to go!I have a meeting with my boss!See you next time,Takamina!"Keitaro happily said to Takamina.
 
"Ah..ok see you next time."Takamina said directly to Keitaro.
 
*Keitaro leaves....
 
"*sigh...It's been awhile huh..."Takamina said inside her mind.

 
RING RING  RING RING


 
"Eh...a phone call?"Takamina wondered on who's the person calling her.
 
@ the phone...
 
Takamina:Hello?
 
???:HEY HURRY UP!!!Practice is about to start!
 
Takamina:A-acchan!!!Ack!am I that late?
 
Acchan:Actually your not late...it's just that *whispers
            .
            .
            .
            .
            I want to see you right now...


 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


































































































 

Takamina:W....Watashi mo....(Me too..)
 
Acchan:*smiles bye bye I'll wait for you.
 
Takamina:U-Un..
 
*BEEP
 
After that phone call Takamina goes straight to the Akihabara Theater for their practice but mostly...for Acchan.
 
"UWAH!!what Acchan said was so intense..."Takamina said while her heart is still pumping so hard.


Takamina POV
What the hell is this turn of events?Keitaro as Kai's rival....I can't have a rival that is my friend!
Kietaro is actually a friend of mine when I was in High school, actually there were three of us!Me,Keitaro and Takumi.
I was known as the little midget,you know because....nevermind...next is Keitaro,he was known as the cheerful guy
in our circle of friends that's why I'm so shocked at his big change today but as I can see his attitude didn't change a bit!
and last but not the least is Kirishima Takumi,known as the president of our class,that's why we call him Kaicho(President),
he's a nice guy and also protects me from bullies and others too!well that's his deed I guess as the president of the class
also his height is close to me that's why some people call us "The Two Midgets of class 2-C"and yes we're kind of irritated
by that caption.

End of Takamina's POV


 
T.B.C.

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UWAH~!!!!FINALLY THE EXAMS ARE OVER~!!!  :farofflook: My brain got so tired by the questions though... :depressed:


Hahahaha I don't know what's happening to me but everytime I update this post
I always dream something that envolves atsumina moments that never happened
before XDD maybe kami-sama(God) is helping me boost up my energy~!
 
wehehe~ so that's why I want to update this fan fiction right now :DD

Anyways~!!! Please tune in for the update of Chapter 5~!!!  :D
 

 
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #33 on: August 03, 2012, 11:51:25 AM »
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING

IM REALLY lOVE EVERY SCENES...
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #34 on: August 03, 2012, 02:09:06 PM »
complicated story sure is complicated XD
how long Takamina's gonna survive in this situation? XD

btw, I love your drawings :wub: especially the one that Takamina is blushing XD

will be waiting for your next update :thumbsup

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #35 on: August 04, 2012, 04:19:30 AM »
OMG!!! love your story and draws.. are amazing.. thanx a lot for this new chapter :D

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #36 on: August 05, 2012, 12:26:19 PM »
Wow! Haha! Hilarious! I like the abrupt call scene!

 Acchan's call troll time!



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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #37 on: August 05, 2012, 03:37:59 PM »
i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY love your drawings!!
please continue it..Felt like I'm reading a manga!
makes the fic more unique..
this astumina-ness is killing me as always! grrrrr

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/3] Chapter 4- The Rival
« Reply #38 on: August 06, 2012, 01:56:53 AM »

complicated story sure is complicated XD
how long Takamina's gonna survive in this situation? XD

btw, I love your drawings :wub: especially the one that Takamina is blushing XD

will be waiting for your next update :thumbsup

Sankyuu~!!!  :kneelbow:

Wow! Haha! Hilarious! I like the abrupt call scene!

 Acchan's call troll time!




EH?!?!?! :stoned: WHAT DID I DO?!?! :on blackhole:

nice drawing btw~  :on GJ:

i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY love your drawings!!
please continue it..Felt like I'm reading a manga!
makes the fic more unique..
this astumina-ness is killing me as always! grrrrr

Thank you very much for reading! :kneelbow:
hahaha I also get killed by some atsumina-ness in this fic.  :on lol:
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ACK!!! :OMG: Sorry If my Update was so slow...  :kneelbow:
 
Anyways enjoy Chapter 5~!!

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The Problems for 1 Month Chapter 5 - The Announcement


"AH~!!!!I'm so tired!!!"Takamina said while laying on the stage with full of sweat on her shirt.
 
"Taka~ Don't sleep on the stage~!"Acchan said to Takamina.
 
"Wehehe~ I like laying on the stage!It's just so cold~"Takamina said with a playful voice.
 
"But that's not good!your shirt is full of sweat and you might have a cold!here take this water"Acchan said while giving Takamina the bottled water.
 
"Ok~Ok~ and Sankyuu~!(Thank you~!)"Takamina got up and gets the bottled water of Acchan.
 
"*Gulp,Gulp,Gulp...AAAAAAH~!!!!That sure hit the spot~!!!"Takamina was so refreshed after drinking the water.
 
"Ne Takamina."Acchan said straightly to Takamina.
 
"Yeah?"Takamina answered.
 
"After the practice...could we go and stroll for awhile?"Acchan said nervously to Takamina because she thinks Takamina might decline her invitation.
 
"Sure."Takamina answered fastly.



"REALLY?!You mean it?!!"Acchan was so shocked that Takamina agreed so fast
 
"Yeah~!well you know it has been awhile since we hangged out together~!"Takamina said with a smile.
 
"YEY~!!"Acchan hugged Takamina tightly.
 
"ACK!!Acchan Accha-- ack!I'm CHOKING!!"Takamina said while Acchan's still hugging her tightly.
 

Suddenly...
 
"Everyone Line Up!!"the choreographer announced to all the AKB members inside the theater.
 
After that all of the members are lined up and at that moment the choreographer said that someone's here
to announce something and so all of the members where wondering on what is going to be announced and
who is going to say it.The Choreographer said that for a meantime they should practice while waiting the
person that is going to announce the thing that they need to now.
 
And so A few minutes passed, someone opened the door, the members were shocked on who they saw and it was
AKB48's producer...Akimoto Yasushi also known as Aki-p.The producer walked straightly to the stage ans silence was
covered in the whole room, as the producer steps on the stage he straightly announced the thing he is going to say.
 
"The next concert that is going to be held in the TOKYO DOME CITY HALL is going to have........a new play"The producer
  said with a straight and serious tone of voice.
 
as the members heard the announcement some started to mumbling,others started to whisper and some of them are just
waiting for the producer to continue the thing he was saying.
 
"I know some people of you are wondering on who is going to be the main characters of this play and what the story is about...
but first let me tell you a bit of the storyline."The producer said with a small grin on his face and other members looks so excited
on hearing the plot of the story.
 
"It's about a girl that has so many problems for 1 month...why?It's because it all started on her friend's request on covering up on
one of the group members in their Ikemen group and she agreed on it! and after her performance with the group, she suddenly
stumbled upon her friend but the thing is she doesn't know that the group member that she was covering up to hates that friend of
hers...SO!that's the plot."the producer said with a smile on his face.
 
"hm~ the storyline is so good!don't you think Takamina?"Acchan whispered to Takamina.
 
"Y-yeah...."Takamina was so shocked after she heard the plot, it's like she can't believe of the coincidences that is happening right now.
 
"Ah!and for the characters,it is already settled.I made a survey along time ago on who is the two members from AKB48
 that you wanted to be the main character on the play, and the chosen one's are....Maeda Atsuko and......


 
Oshima Yuko."as the producer announced the two main characters suddenly yuko said...
 
"Uhm Akimoto-san!Apparently I don't want to be the main character."Yuko said with a nervous tone.
 
"Hm~?and why is that?"the producer asked.
 
"Because my heart is for Nyan-Nyan only~!"Yuko proudy said to the producer.
 
"Y-YUKO!"Kojipa suddenly gets embarrased becuase of what yuko said.
 
"Hahaha ok then.So who's the one that you want to replace your postion?"the producer asked.
 
"Hmm......ah!wehehee~ "Yuko grinned while starring at Takamina.
 
"What?why is she starring at me???No...don't tell me she's going to..."Takamina said in her mind while making a "NO!"
sign on Yuko.
 
"I'll choose Takamina!"Yuko said happily.
 
"*sigh I knew she wont listen..."Takamina said.
 
"Hm~ Takahashi huh?this is getting interesting....Are you ok with that Takahashi?"the producer asks.
 
"E-eh?Me?uhmm......Ok I'll do it."Takamina said roughly to the producer.
 
"Are you sure?you looked like you don't want to though!"The producer said to the leader.
 
"It's ok I'll do it."Takamina answered.
 
"Ok then. Our main characters are Maeda Atsuko and Takahashi Minami"the producer announced to  all the members.



"Hm~ The Ace and The Leader huh?I think this is going to be an interesting play."The producer said inside his head while smirking.
 
As the producer leaves, some of the members keep teasing the ace and the leader, saying that Atsumina finally camed back because it's a long time they see the two together.
 
 
 
After that a few minutes later...

 
"RAH~!!!WHAT'S WITH YUKO~?!MOU~!!!"Takamina said while shouting the things she wanted to shout earlier.
 
"Eh?then If you don't want to do the play why didn't you just say "No"?"Acchan asked Takamina.
 
"Well it's because...I want to....spend more time with you...."Takamina mumbled.
 
"What?what did you say?"Acchan pretended that she didn't heard the thing Takamina said.

"MOU!I didn't say anything~!"Takamina said while walking so fast and blushing so hard at the same time.
 
"Hey!Takamina come back here!your such a *Tsundere! "Acchan said while smiling and chasing Takamina.
 
"HEY!YOU'RE THE ONE THAT IS A TSUNDERE!! "Takamina said while pouting.
 
"hahaha~OK~!OK~!Just stop running will you!"Acchan said with a smile.
 
"Ok then!"Takamina suddenly stoppend running.
 
"W-wait!"Acchan can't stop running because of the downhill road.
 
"I GOT YOU!"Takamina said while opening her arms wide.
 
"W-WAAA!!!" 


*TUD

 

"Ow...that hurts so bad...."Takamina said with a painful tone.
 
"Pft.....wahahaha!!"Acchan suddenly laugh.
 
"wahahaha!"and so is Takamina.
 




"It's been a long time right?"Acchan said with a smile.
 
"Huh?"Takamina wondered.
 
"It's been a long time that we so much fun like this...just the two of us."Acchan said while blushing.
 
"Ah...Y-Yeah..."and so is Takamina.
 
*as they stand up, Acchan suddenly hugs Takamina...
 
"A-Acchan?"Takamina wondered on Acchan's sudden move.
 
"I'm excited for our play..."Acchan said while her eyes are close.
 
"Uh....*smiles...Me too..."Takamina said gently.
 
 

Acchan's POV
 
As I hug her tightly,I can hear her heart beating so hard...and so is mine...bit by bit our hearts are synchronizing
with each other...our body heat is getting hotter....much hotter than the end of summer...the smell of her hair is so nice...
It's like I'm on a field,full of flowers with a bright blue sky but just the two of us...I never felt this kind of feeling in ages......
right now....I don't want to let her go....I just can't....I don't want this day to end...I want to be with her....I want  to make her happy...
I want to spend my whole life with her.....I want.....



her....

 
END of POV
 
 


T.B.C.
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hm~ What's going happen to Takamina now that she will play her role on what is really happening to her right now~?

 
 
 
Just tune in for Chapter 6 and Find out~!!



Ugh...My neck hurts again... :depressed: .... I need to rest this neck 1st~ ja matta ne~  :byebye:
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