Author Topic: [Update! 8/31/12] Candlelit Smile | Atsumina (Read 20346 times)

Wmatsui22 · « **Reply #40 on:** September 01, 2012, 11:17:18 AM »

THANKS FOR UPDATING!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN..

THANK YOU..

GOODLUCK!!!

kairi · « **Reply #41 on:** September 01, 2012, 09:18:42 PM »

this is one of my favorite fanfiction ! ~
Please continue ! i can't wait for the next chapter !

Wmatsui22 · « **Reply #42 on:** September 02, 2012, 04:26:39 AM »

I READ YOUR CHAPTER 4 !!!

IT'S VERY NICE!!!

PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN

THANK YOU!!!

yourockme · « **Reply #43 on:** September 02, 2012, 03:02:59 PM »

HUWAA
some of the chapters are Sad

tehehe But I really like it

Please Update soon Arigatou

crazywota · « **Reply #44 on:** September 03, 2012, 03:45:26 AM »

Now my TakaHaru is completely done. OTL
but reading again the prologue it seems like Haruna did tried to get back with her? when the AtsuMina couple is finally together, and then Acchan saw them hugging?
Can't wait to see how things will work out now, aswell as the sidestory of MariHaru.
Thank you and Great Chapter!

Can't wait for the next one

Megumi · « **Reply #45 on:** September 09, 2012, 11:07:45 AM »

I'm sorry I didn't comment on this fanfic of yours

Takamina is such a nice girl caught up between Haruna&Mariko

Acchan&Takamina 3rd awkward meeting.
That director is a idi*t I want to

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Manager for Acchan? Go for it!

ArígatoU!

TakaminaBG · « **Reply #46 on:** September 09, 2012, 01:48:39 PM »

I just realized I haven't commented on the last chapter?!
That stupid director I want to *************!!!

And Takamina and Acchan met again, but hmmmmm what a meeting!
Takamina is going to be Acchan's manager. Looking forward to the next chapter please update, soon!!!!!!!!

miayaka · « **Reply #47 on:** September 11, 2012, 08:51:10 PM »

TO anonymousdowner-san

cheering you for another update!

half-baka · « **Reply #48 on:** October 08, 2012, 03:08:28 PM »

waaaahhh !!!

i keep coming back and re-reading your fics!!! it made me make an account here and im so glad i made one!!!~~~

please update soon~~~~ and the other fanfics too please~~!!!

kahem · « **Reply #49 on:** October 08, 2012, 11:59:00 PM »

I'm sad for Takamina T_T but I'm glad Acchan is here for her
Lol Takamina will passed from photographer to manager

FlameHazeKatsu · « **Reply #50 on:** January 17, 2013, 11:33:58 PM »

Prologue- reading the prologue I forgot that it was the prologue and I was like no!!!

Then when I read the authors note I was like "oh,right, the prologue" xD lol I was also thinking "I think that is Tomomi!!!" Grrr... ahahaha

Chapter 2- damn...... I really can imagine CLEARLY every single thing that was written here! xD

oh god.... It's kinda scaring me...

Chapter 3-man... I never really thought about Haruna x Mariko pairing Hahhaha but awwww...poor Takamina!!

Chapter 4 - I'm speechless I don't know what to say....

But man! this is really good....did this get drop or wat.... I wanna read some moooorree~~~~~

lol

anonymousdowner · « **Reply #51 on:** January 18, 2013, 01:21:01 AM »

Quote from: FlameHazeKatsu on January 17, 2013, 11:33:58 PM

Prologue- reading the prologue I forgot that it was the prologue and I was like no!!!
Then when I read the authors note I was like "oh,right, the prologue" xD lol I was also thinking "I think that is Tomomi!!!" Grrr... ahahaha

Chapter 2- damn...... I really can imagine CLEARLY every single thing that was written here! xD oh god.... It's kinda scaring me...

Chapter 3-man... I never really thought about Haruna x Mariko pairing Hahhaha but awwww...poor Takamina!!

Chapter 4 - I'm speechless I don't know what to say....

But man! this is really good....did this get drop or wat.... I wanna read some moooorree~~~~~ lol

Thanks! 'xD I didn't drop this however...I don't update anything on jphip anymore^^ I have like half of chapter 5 posted on my blog (the link is in my blog lol) I'm trying to work diligently on the next update so I appreciate the support heh.

--Oh and about Tomomi being on the prologue, no one has thought of that one yet...you're focusing on the right things kekeke.

FlameHazeKatsu · « **Reply #52 on:** January 18, 2013, 01:46:34 AM »

Quote from: anonymousdowner on January 18, 2013, 01:21:01 AM

Quote from: FlameHazeKatsu on January 17, 2013, 11:33:58 PM
Prologue- reading the prologue I forgot that it was the prologue and I was like no!!!

Thanks! 'xD I didn't drop this however...I don't update anything on jphip anymore^^ I have like half of chapter 5 posted on my blog (the link is in my blog lol) I'm trying to work diligently on the next update so I appreciate the support heh. --Oh and about Tomomi being on the prologue, no one has thought of that one yet...you're focusing on the right things kekeke.

I~YAAY~~!!! xD lol I didn't read anything here except for the chapters since I was like copy and paste, copy and paste...cuz i always put it on my ipod (where the notes is o.o) so like I have something to read in class....yupp...lol AND what seriously?!?! no one thought of it....... I just had the feeling about "that" being Tomomi hehehe lastly ARIGATOU GOIZAMASU (keep up the good work ^_^)

and now imma go check it~~~~~~

takamae · « **Reply #53 on:** January 19, 2013, 03:03:00 PM »

I thought this fic is in hiatus, and I was wrong

Thank you for still writing this fic

FlameHazeKatsu-san, why did you say that is tomochin in prologue??
I still don't see it

Anonymousdowner-san, is it really tomochin??
I mean, I thought it was haruna trying to get back with takamina

Please update soon

I really want to see a happy end for takamina

C@@3! · « **Reply #54 on:** January 19, 2013, 11:17:03 PM »

I loved the first fanfics even though the story is great but I was very confused with the prologue re-read and from what I understand prologue seems a "fact of the future" as if Acchan and Minami were living together and happened to fall in love but when Acchan arrive at the apartment to see his "beloved" in the arms of "other" that it seems it would be "Haruna" as if they were to reconcile since Minami loved her .. but something caught my attention you wrote "Beloved" instead of "girlfriend" maybe Acchan would not have even declared to Minami and crashed into the scene as if he had lost the chance to be with her .. from what I read so far and try to understand what the prologue was deducted but I could be wrong =) lol 'anyway congratulations is a great fics .. I hope to read more fics met here but got the address of the blog and also to watching there and read through chapter 5 =)

FlameHazeKatsu · « **Reply #55 on:** January 20, 2013, 12:07:41 AM »

Quote from: takamae on January 19, 2013, 03:03:00 PM

I thought this fic is in hiatus, and I was wrong
Thank you for still writing this fic

FlameHazeKatsu-san, why did you say that is tomochin in prologue??
I still don't see it
Anonymousdowner-san, is it really tomochin??
I mean, I thought it was haruna trying to get back with takamina

Please update soon
I really want to see a happy end for takamina

You know, ur asking a 14 year old kid this question...

ahahaha lol and well when I was reading, idk but I just got the feeling it was Tomomi....

also when I kept reading I was like it can't be Kojiharu since she already did "those" things to Takamina and ik that Mariko won't let go of Kojiharu

and when Tomomi had a scene, you know where she was reading the newspaper and when she said "Takahashi Minami" even though I was reading it, I imagined her showing interest..

yepp..yepp....then that really made me 101% that it was her during that time.... hehehehe... maybe I'm wrong but itz the feeling

o.o (am I talking not sense or what)

but yeah that's my explanation.... e-heh~

takamae · « **Reply #56 on:** January 20, 2013, 04:19:42 AM »

Quote from: FlameHazeKatsu on January 20, 2013, 12:07:41 AM

Quote from: takamae on January 19, 2013, 03:03:00 PM
I thought this fic is in hiatus, and I was wrong
Thank you for still writing this fic

FlameHazeKatsu-san, why did you say that is tomochin in prologue??
I still don't see it
Anonymousdowner-san, is it really tomochin??
I mean, I thought it was haruna trying to get back with takamina

Please update soon
I really want to see a happy end for takamina

You know, ur asking a 14 year old kid this question... ahahaha lol and well when I was reading, idk but I just got the feeling it was Tomomi.... also when I kept reading I was like it can't be Kojiharu since she already did "those" things to Takamina and ik that Mariko won't let go of Kojiharu and when Tomomi had a scene, you know where she was reading the newspaper and when she said "Takahashi Minami" even though I was reading it, I imagined her showing interest.. yepp..yepp....then that really made me 101% that it was her during that time.... hehehehe... maybe I'm wrong but itz the feeling o.o (am I talking not sense or what) but yeah that's my explanation.... e-heh~

Wow...you really observe well
I didn't even thought to much when tomochin said takamina name
Maybe you are right about mariko won't let haruna go but I can't help to think that haruna finally will realize her love for takamina and try to get takamina back (maybe it just my own wish)

FlameHazeKatsu · « **Reply #57 on:** January 21, 2013, 02:07:21 AM »

Wow...you really observe well
I didn't even thought to much when tomochin said takamina name
Maybe you are right about mariko won't let haruna go but I can't help to think that haruna finally will realize her love for takamina and try to get takamina back (maybe it just my own wish)
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hahaha yepp, pretty much

and also there's this question "why would author-san even bother putting that scene, if it didn't have any purpose?" (maybe it was just there o.o) but lol yepp ANYTHING can happen after all...right? xD and yeah this is the 2nd time (I think) that I read something that Kojiharu was inlove with Takamina.... =3 and I'm pretty much, a new fan for Atsumina....even....though...Acchan...graduated....already....T_T

den_takacchan · « **Reply #58 on:** March 17, 2013, 06:47:48 AM »

hi i'm a new reader great fic. i've almost cried from ur chapter three the scene where takamina saw

haruna and mariko

. why would they do that to takamina

well it's okay cause atsumina is on the way

hehe. i hope you update soon!

noah minami · « **Reply #59 on:** January 08, 2014, 06:18:38 PM »

I love your story. But the way mariharu make takamina unspeak its not the way its suppose to be..
Hoping u update real soon...
I'm facing final and yet I'm reading ur fic.

Hahahaha.
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