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Re: More Than This Chapter 4 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #20 on: August 09, 2012, 04:40:06 PM »
@Mo-chan : SPOILER : There will be a scene when Milky gets jelly belly fufufu
@Masokun : I will put Shiokichi X Akarin ! Coz I ship unique xD Thinking of putting MaYuki, KojiYuu and WMatsui 8D
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Re: More Than This Chapter 4 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #21 on: August 09, 2012, 04:59:33 PM »
There will be a scene when Milky gets jelly belly you said  :kekeke:
good idea Mayuki and Wmatsui are my best pairing  :shy2: :nya:

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Re: More Than This Chapter 4 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #22 on: August 10, 2012, 02:20:47 AM »
milky get new male fans..HA! but, her heart is already for sayanee <3

sayamilky need more courage to tell their true feeling to each other..

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Re: More Than This Chapter 5 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #23 on: August 10, 2012, 05:06:16 PM »
Is this late ? I think it is.. I was busy making another fic since it's Haruna Ono's bday  :bingo:
But I'm super tired  :cool2:
Dozooo ~  :hee:

Chapter 5


After 4 days…

Krrrrrrrrrnggg… Krrrrrrrrrrrrrngg..


Rain was pouring and thunder was roaring. As Milky was watching boring TV shows her phone suddenly rang “ Eh ? Who could be calling at this hour ? “ She picked up her phone and answered without looking who was the one calling “ Milky desu— “

Milky didn’t get to finish what she said as the caller sneezed “ M-Milky.. “

Milky recognized her voice “ S-Sayanee ??? What’s up ? and what’s with the sneeze ?? “

“ Milky, I caught a cold.. “ after that she sneezed again causing Milky to flinch

“ A cold ? That’s not a cold, that’s a fever ! “

“ How do you know, huh ? “

“ With a sneeze as hard as that, huh ! A fever ! Where’s your mom ? “

“ She and my grandmother went a trip to the hot springs.. “

“ Your brother ? “

“ He’s staying at Dad’s for the next for a week—“

“ WHAT ?!?!? YOU’RE ALONE ?!?! DID YOU TAKE YOUR MEDICINE ??? WHEN DID YOU FEVER START ??? ARE YOU RESTING WELL ??? ARE YOU—“

“ Milky !!! “ followed by a sneeze

“ G-Gomen.. Are you okay there ?? “

“ Unh.. It’s just that, I’m gonna run out of medicine soon.. So I thought I could at least inform you I’m going out to a pharmacy. “

“ It’s raining, Sayanee, It’s raining. “

“ But, I have to buy medicine, you know. “

“ I’ll buy it. “

“ Aargh ! I knew I shouldn’t have a called you for this ! “

“ Come on, we’re friends. I’ll buy it for you. “

“ Milky ! You are not the one who is sick here. I’ll buy it since I’m the one needing it. “

“ You’ll need more later on because you’ll get more sick when you get wet in the rain and you’ll run out again. So I’ll buy it or you’ll get sick over and over again. “
 
This girl is effing smart. Sayanee thought and was left speechless

“ Ha ! You lose ! Okay. I’ll be there in 30 minutes with the medicine ! “

“ Wait—

BEEP BEEP BEEP

Sayanee hung up and sighed “ This girl is so…. Crazy. “ Sayanee said and laid back on her bed.

As Milky was running through the rain wearing a hoodie, short shorts, and a white polo shirt. Some people we’re looking at her. “ Pfftch. Never seen a girl ? Dumb heads. “ She mumbled to herself.

A few minutes after, she reached Sayanee’s house. She was about to ring the doorbell but she realized it was only Sayanee inside. So she reached a pin from her hoodie’s pocket then she made the pin a representative for the key. Then Click ! Door opened ! She walked slowly and went to the kitchen as where she remembered where it was. She took a glass and poured water in it then she went to Sayanee’s room. She put down the glass slowly and sat down.

“ Mmnn.. M-Milky… Where are you… “ Sayanee suddenly said

“ Eh ? “ Milky stood up and looked over at Sayanee. She was asleep. “ It’s good to hear you say my name when you’re asleep. “ Milky whispered and grinned. She went back to her chair and browsed some mangas on the floor. Some we’re smut and Milky was all poker face when she read it. But as she soon got bored, she fell asleep.

An hour later, Sayanee woke up. She found medicine and a glass of water on her side table. Then she caught something in the corner of her eye. She saw Milky sleeping soundly with a manga in her hand. She carefully got up her bed, swallowed the pills and drank water.

“ Sayanee ? “ Milky yawned cutely making Sayanee blush

“ M-Milky, y-you’re awake. “

“ Unh. I was waiting for you to wake up, but I fell asleep. “ Milky said as she held the manga

“ by the way, you read stuff with mature content ? “ Milky asked curiously

“ Eh ? They’re interesting, that’s why. “ Sayanee said followed by a cute sneeze

“ I forgot you had a fever. “ Milky stood up and touched Sayanee’s forehead

“ Aiish ! You’re so hot !! “ Milky flinched

“ Ehehe~ “

“ You should take care of yourself more ! “

“ I am ! “

“ It’s not enough ! “

“ Mouuu.. “ Sayanee lost again


“ Anyway, “ Milky lightly pushed Sayanee to her bed “ You stay her on your bed “

“ Whaaaaaat ? Why ? “

“ You need more rest ! “

“ But I just woke up ! “

“ Just stay here, will ya ‘ “

“ Hai, ‘Mother’ “

“ Shut up. “

Milky rushed to the kitchen and grabbed an apron. She cooked some kind of soup. It’s clearly undefined. After a few minutes the soup was ready. She grabbed a bowl and put some in it. Looking back at the kitchen, she realized she made a huge mess. So she started cleaning. Then she rushed to Sayanee’s room with the soup. Then suddenly, she heard music. A guitar and a very nice voice. She followed the sound and it lead her to Sayanee’s room. When she came in, she found Sayanee playing the guitar. She never noticed a guitar in Sayanee’s room.

“ Ah! Fooooooooooooood ! “ Sayanee jumped off her bed and left her guitar there then raced for the food. When she grabbed the food, Milky pulled it

“ HEY ! I WANT FOOD ! “

“ You’ll get food If you sit down. “

“ Haaaai ~ “ Sayanee sat on her bed and did a face that looked like a puppy’s

“ Alright. Say Ahh “ Milky sat down the chair and made a spoonful

“ Ooh, you’re gonna feed me ? YAY “

“ That’s not something to be proud of. You’ll look like a kid with no hands or something “

“ You’re the one who insisted on feeding me… “ Milky blushed

“ Eh whatever. Food ! “ Sayanee said

“ Geez, you’re still hyper when you’re sick “

“ I have my reasons ! “ Then Milky fed Sayanee and Sayanee ate happily

“ Oishi !“

“ Arigatou.. Give me a reason why you’re hyper. “

“ Well, “ Sayanee said as she munched and swallowed “ Milky is here to accompany me ! “ That statement made Milky blush

“ W-Why do you always say stuff like that ? “

“ Because you like it ? “

“ Like what ? “

“ The compliments. They’re true though “ that made Milky blush even more

“ I like it when you blush ! “

“ Y-You’re acting l-like a child.. ! “

“ Ne, Milky ! “

“ Hmm ? “

“ Can you stay here for the night ? I don’t wanna be alone and… I’m scared of Thunder. “

“ Ehhhhhh ! You’re scared of thunder ?! “

“ hai ! It just roars suddenly its scary ! “

“ Hahaha ! Okay okay. I’ll stay to protect you from you so called “ Scary Thunder “ “

“ YAY ~ I loveeee Milky ! “ Sayanee said as she hugged Milky tight. Milky blushed as she wondered Could you be serious with the words you said ?



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Re: More Than This Chapter 5 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #24 on: August 11, 2012, 02:41:28 AM »
kya~
milky was taking care of sayanee <3 so sweet..
sayaka afraid of thunder? me too..yes, thunder is scary..
in the end, sayanee said she love milky <3
LOL at sayaka like to read smut manga..HA! when i read this part, i thought that maybe sayanee want to do smut with milky. LOL. blame it to my perverted mind..

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Re: More Than This Chapter 5 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #25 on: August 11, 2012, 11:47:18 AM »
Sayanee is sick  :stoned:
but it's the good excuse for milky to stay with her  :ding:
something will happen I'm sure now  :kekeke:

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Re: More Than This Chapter 5 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #26 on: August 11, 2012, 01:52:54 PM »
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“ Hahaha ! Okay okay. I’ll stay to protect you from you so called “ Scary Thunder “ “

“ YAY ~ I loveeee Milky ! “ Sayanee said as she hugged Milky tight. Milky blushed as she wondered Could you be serious with the words you said ?

Congatulation captain...your mission accomplish  :kekeke:

They are cute in this chapter.. I like it  :twothumbs

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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #27 on: August 11, 2012, 05:37:38 PM »
Hello ! I guess I wanna focus on Two other pairings on this chapter !  :hee:
Remember when I said I'd add MaYuki and WMatsui ?  :bingo:
YES. That was true. So I'm gonna focus on them on this one. Okay. Maybe MaYuki on this part xD
I read my own fic, and I'm like, " TELL HER YOUR EFFING FEELINGS ALREADY !!! "  :angry1:
So I'm kinda tired of them ryt now, So I'll make MaYuki and WMatsui on this one! I'm still not over the SayaMilky love tho xD
And so I guess, I'm gonna have to work on a confessing scene for them nxt chapter fufufu I think I'll put smut too  :ding:... after awhile  :on lol:

PS : There's gonna be danso here

Chapter 6


It was a very nice day today. The sky was clear, the birds we're chirping, the fresh morning air was blowing, and it was a fine weather. Matsui Jurina and Watanabe Mayu we're on their way to school.

" Ne, Ne, Mayuyu, do you think we could find a boyfriend this year ?? " Jurina asked as her friend, Mayu took off her earphones

" What ? Boyfriend ? Suit yourself. I'm gonna live young, wild and free. " Mayu said as she walked playfully

" Exactly, Mayu ! Young, wild and free right ? Let's get a boyfriend. "

" No way. That'd be like hell on Earth. "

" Awwe, C'mon, Mayu! Don't be such a pussy. Don't you wanna experience love ?? "

" Love is stupid. It's not true. "

" Chicken. "

" What ? "

" CHICKEN. Come onnn ! What could hurt ?! "

" Your heart could hurt if you fall in love. "

" I sometimes want to kick your face for that brain of yours ! "

" Ha ! Like you could do that. I mean, Juri, if you want a boyfriend, then go get one. "

" How about you ? I want you to get one coz' you might be lonely when I'm not around. " Jurina said as she pinched Mayu's cheeks

" Ittaaaii ! " Jurina let go as she let out a soft chuckle " Mouuu, Juri.. I won't be lonely. Instead, I would be here rooting for you ! Okay ? " Mayu offered her pinky to Jurina. Jurina held their pinkies together. " Deal. "

As the two of them arrived at school, Mayu suddenly spoke

" AH ! Juri, you can go on ahead. I forgot that I have to go to the Practice room ! "

" EH ? Sure.. Just don't get late, kay ? "

" Yeah~ "

Mayu went to the practice room located on the 5th floor. The hall was empty to be expected because the 5th floor only contains the Library, computer rooms, Music rooms, and the gym. Other students find it scary to go to the 5th floor because it was always silent. But Mayu wasn't scared. She didn't believe in any of those scary stories. As she entered the practice room, she heard heavy foot steps. She peeked out of the wall that was blocking her. She saw a guy. A beautiful guy. The guy was dancing so well that Mayu's jaw dropped. The beautiful guy stopped and fell down.

" Ittai ! " Without thinking, Mayu rushed to the guy and helped him up

" Are you okay ?? " Mayu asked with worried eyes. The guy was shocked. His eyes looked like it would bug out. but to Mayu, he still looked cute.

" Ehh.. err... I'm fine, thank you.. " Mayu helped the guy up, and unexpectedly, he was quite tall. Well, that's normal for a guy.

" Y-You're welcome.. " Mayu turned away and saw what she came for. A big box containing the files of her teacher. She walked over to the box and tried to pick it up, but she couldn't. It was too heavy. Then suddenly, the guy went in front of her and carried the box.

" Let me help you with this. " the guy smiled

" A-Ahh.. T-Thank you. " Mayu blushed

As they we're walking to Mayu's classroom, they weren't talking at all. Seemed like the guy was shy too. As they reached the halls of the classrooms, girls we're staring at the guy. They we're talking about him. Is this guy bad or something ? Wtf is with those gossips.. Mayu thought. When they reached Mayu's classroom, the guy looked at Mayu with hesitation

" Umm.. You can give me the box now. " Mayu said coldly

" Ahh.. But are you sure you could bring this ? It's actually kind of heavy. " The guy said with a sheepish smile

" ... " Mayu blushed. It was true. She wasn't really the type who likes sports.

" Ah, kawaii. " The guy said

" E-Ehh ? "

The guy laughed " Nothing. Where do I put this ? At the teacher's table ? " The guy asked with a smile

" Yeah. " The guy entered " Sorry for the intrusion " then he put the box down and straightened his uniform and went outside

" Thank you, uhmm...

" No problem. And it's Kashiwagi Yuki. You are ? "

" Watanabe Mayu " Yuki reached out his hand inviting Mayu for a handshake and Mayu accepted his invitation. She blushed to the sudden warmth that spread out her body.

" Pleasure to meet you, Mayuyu. " The guy said with a cute smile

 " Mayuyu ? How'd you know ? " Mayu asked curiously as she let go of Yuki's hand

" Eh ? That's really your nickname ? I just guessed really. " Yuki said as he scratched the back of his unitchy hair

" Ahh.. Okay.. "

" If you're not comfortable with me calling you that, I'd call you Watanabe-san then ? "

" Ahh, no, it's okay. Only if you let me call you something too. "

" You can call me Yukirin! " Yuki said as he smiled again. Mayu was dying inside. His smiles we're killing her.

" Okay, Yukirin ! "

" Un.. So umm.. I'm in Class 2-A. Just call me if you need help, okay ? "

" Okay. Thank you. "

" You say thank you too much. " Yuki ruffled Mayu's hair

" Ehhhh "

" Hahaha you're so cute ! " Yuki said as she pinched Mayu's cheeks like what Jurina did only softer.

" it hurts ! " Mayu squealed

" Ah, gomen ! " Yuki caressed Mayu's cheeks carefully " I'm sorry. "

" It's fine.. " Mayu blushed

" Well, I gotta go. Bye bye, Mayuyu ! " Yuki let go of Mayu's cheeks then smiled and went away

" He said I'm cute... "

" HEY, Mayu ! "

" Eh ? Baa-chan ! "

" Did you know him ? "

" You guys seemed close. Is he your boyfriend ?? " Maachun asked

" What ?! NO ! I just met him ! "

" Ehhh.. You looked like a good couple though.. " Aina said

" You should definitely go for him ! He had the looks ~ " Nana said

" Shut up. I don't have time for relationships. " Mayu said as she rushed to her seat

" Ah, Mayuyu ~ " Jurina peeked out from behind

" Hey, Juri ~ "

" Who was the dude ? Making your move already huh ? " Juri said as she wiggled her eyebrows up and down

" No ! He was just helping me okay ? "

" Tell me his name then ? "

" .... I dont wanna talk about him. "

" Pfft yeah, sure " Juri said as she leaned back her seat

Lunch Time - Court Yard

Jurina yawned " Ahhh ~ It's such a nice day to laze around ! "

" ... His name is Yuki. "

" Ohoho ~ So you finally speak ! So, how'd you meet him ? "

" He was dancing in the practice room. He was dancing some kind of Korean song, but he dances really well. Like he's a professional. "

" WOAH. He dances, he's kind, and he's cute ! You got jackpot, Mayu ! "

" I don't plan to befriend him though. It's better to avoid him. "

" You're mean. i think he's into you ! "

" Shut up ! He's not ! "

" Denial ! "

" We wouldn't know okay ?! "

" Okay, okay " Jurina said as she was laughing. Jurina paused for awhile

" Do you hear that ? "

" What ? "

" THAT ! " Jurina pointed to a room with an open window. They tip toed to eavesdrop. Yeah, they know, it's bad, but the girl was crying ! Then they saw Yuki with a girl " H-hey, why is that girl crying ? " Mayu whispered to Juri " I think she's confessing. Just observe. "

" I'm really sorry.. It's just that you're not my type and I don't feel the same way.. "

" But Yuki-sempai ! I hic I .. I worked hard for you ! Please ! Accept me ! I'll let you do anything to me ! " The girl hugged Yuki

" .... I'm sorry. " Yuki gently pushed the girl away from his body " You know, you are very beautiful.. and I am not deserving to be with you. And your body... I'll hand that over to a guy who loves you, okay ? "

" AT LEAST GIVE ME A REASON, SEMPAI ! " The girl cried even more

" You see, as what you are now, I'm in love with someone else.. To me, she's the one. I'd do anything for her to love me back. But forcing her to love me isn't good. So you should know, forcing someone to love you is very bad. I don't deserve you.. "

" Who is she ?! I'LL DO ANYTHING TO BECOME LIKE HER !! SO THAT SEMPAI WILL LOVE ME ! "

Yuki smirked " How matter you try to be just like her, to me, she's the only one. When I see her, it's like, I don't care anymore for the world.. "

" Wh-who is she, sempai ???! "

" Her name is.... Watanabe Mayu. "

Mayu and Jurina we're wide eyed

" You mean that girl you were with this morning ?! She's ugly ! I even heard she's a trouble maker ! and has a bad personality !! " The girl said

" No. None of those are true. I have been observing her almost a year now. She is really kind. but she hardly ever noticed me.. And now, I talked to her. Gave me much more courage ! and a chance.. So please, I have been yearning for this day to come. "

" I understand, sempai.. But I won't lose ! "

" Hai. Gambatte. " Yuki smiled

" Yes ! " the girl ran out of the room as Yuki sighed he looked over the window and saw two heads.

" Who's there ? " Yuki said as he went closer

" Oh, hi ! I'm Jurina ! " Jurina popped out and dragged Mayu " And this is Mayu, and she heard everything ! " Jurina laughed " And yeah, I'll give you guys privacy ! " Jurina ran away " Jurina ! Wait ! "

" Mayu... " Yuki looked down " Y-you heard everything ? "

" H-hai... "

" Umm you might find me weird now. " Yuki squatted and covered his face

" Eh ? " mayu patted yuki's head " Hey, don't cover your face "

" Don't look at me. I.. I look bad right now. "

" Come on, you know you can't change the fact that I know what you feel. " Mayu said which made Yuki stiff and looked at her with a blushing face

" Then, I shall end what I started... "

" Eh ? "

" Mayu.. I've been observing you for almost a year. Ever since I saw you defend my little sister when she got bullied.. I began observing you. And little by little, I fell in love with you. When I heard the school you're in became Co-ed, I forced my parents to let me transfer here. I know you just met me and all but c-can you give me a c-chance ? "

" Hmmm... I'm flattered. " Mayu said as she looked away while blushing " Of all the girls, you chose me ? That girl who confessed to you was a beauty. "

" I only have eyes for you, Mayuyu. " Yuki said as he carefully pulled Mayu's chin to look at him

" I... I suppose I'll give you a chance... " Mayu blushed really hard

" Seriously ???? REALLY ?? "

" H-Hai... "

" YATTA ! Arigato, Mayuyu ! " Yuki smiled looked into Mayu's eyes

" W-What're you doing ? "

" C-can I kiss you.. ?? " Yuki asked

" EEHHH ?! "

" Ah, It's just a chance. So I suppose you really don't like me yet. So I am sorry for that question.. " Yuki stood up and dragged Mayu with him. He turned away " I have to go. I'm all embarrassed.. " then suddenly, Mayu pulled Yuki's hand enough to make him turn around. When he turned around, his lips we're caught by Mayu's in a deep kiss. First, it was forced. Then she pulled away. " T-That was my first, you know " Yuki smiled and pulled Mayu in for a soft one. All the feelings combined in one kiss made the both of them realize they really are meant for each other.

" I love you, Mayuyu... "

" I love you too, Yukirin.. " Yuki smiled upon hearing Mayu mumble those words in their kiss.



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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~ MAYUKIIIII !!!  :farofflook:
Tell me whatcha think ~ This is just part 1 ! Nxt part will be about WMatsui nxt tym !  :hee:
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #28 on: August 11, 2012, 06:20:46 PM »
ahhh~ you did Mayuki!?  so sweet! and Yuki sure looks cool like a boy!!!!!!  I want more Mayuki.........Im still starving for Mayuki.......



Update soon please~ next Wmatsui?! and a little Mayuki....?
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #29 on: August 11, 2012, 06:27:57 PM »
@Yuukimoko : Ehhhh I'm glad you like the MaYuki scene~ I wasn't sure about it xD
And don't worry, I'll add more MaYuki in the nxt few chapters coz' MaYuki is my OTP  :hee:
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #30 on: August 11, 2012, 07:31:42 PM »
to much mayuki
     OMG
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
xcted to the next part
Wmatsui!! Woohoo
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And now :imdead:
Looking forwrd to the next update..
Thank you for the update
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #31 on: August 11, 2012, 09:19:38 PM »
Woooh your fanfic is really interesting  :ding: I'm sorry I was a silent reader  :kneelbow:

SayaMilky Too Cute I love their interaction  :shy2:

And you make a Mayuki  :luvluv1: ...YYYAAAAYYYY... Yuki is a boy He is sure looks cool as a boy *fangirling*  :luvluv1:

Next Wmatsui YAAAYYY!!!  :onioncheer:

Update soon please :peace:
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #32 on: August 11, 2012, 11:11:27 PM »
wow Yuki is a guy !
but I prefer Yuki as a girl  :nervous
yatta next time is about Wmatsui I can't wait to read it  XD

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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part II : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #33 on: August 12, 2012, 09:19:08 AM »
YAY I update early  :on lol: I'm gonna make this interesting, long okay I'm not sure with long lol., and fast !
Since I have Homework pilling up my desk  :dozing:
BTW, just for everyone's sake, while I was making MaYuki, I was watching Dream High. Explains the dancing lol  :bingo:

Chapter 6 Part II

A Month later...


The archer was ready for shooting. Fans we're nervous to the fact their star player would lose. The red target was very far away. But the shooter was not scared. He was brave and confident. Standing straight and silently praying to Kami-sama. 3. 2. 1. He shoots. The arrow was fast approaching the target. Looks like it's not going to hit the right spot... But it did. The crowd gone wild. Their star player was once again, undefeated. But that was a year ago. Right now, their undefeated champion, Matsui Ren is focusing more on his studies.

" Matsui Ren ! ... Matsui !
"..."

" REN !!! "

" Hai ! "

" Stop daydreaming, Ren. You have to focus or your grades will go kaboom! "

" Hai. Sumimasen, sensei.. "

" Just focus. You can focus on your target, I believe focusing on Biology isn't as hard. Mmh ? "

" Hai, sensei. "

" Good. Now listen. "

The teacher started writing something on the board and discussed. Ren looked out the window and sighed. He was thinking of a certain girl. His childhood friend, best friend, fan, and somehow unrelated family. The person who has been there for him all the time he needed to calm down.  The person whom he missed so much. The person he didn't see for a week. And it's making him feel restless. Somehow, this person is his kryptonite. He truly loved this girl for a long time. But this girl doesn't seem to notice. This girl sees Ren as a big brother instead. So Ren had decided. He couldn't bear any longer. He will confess right away.

Krrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrnggg... !

" Ah, Ren. Let's go buy lunch now. I'm starving ! " Ren's friend, Yagami Kuu said

" Yeah. I need to warm up. "

" Warm up for what ? "

" I decided that I would confess to her, Kuu! "

" Eh ? Seriously ?! "

" Yeah. I got to make a move before someone takes her away, right ? "

" You got a point there.. Well, for being your 2nd best friend, I'd like to help you. So just call me if you need help ! "

" Thanks, kuu ! "

" No problem, bro! And goodluck ! " Kuu said as he winked

" Yeah, well we better get lunch. I wanna eat pasta ! "

" Ah, yeah ! Let's go ! " The two of them rushed to the cafeteria as fast as they can. When they reached it, it was already crowded. So they had no choice but to force their way in. Kuu managed to get what he wanted, also Ren.

" Hey, isn't that Jurina-chan ? " Kuu pointed out a girl in the crowd struggling her way out

" Ren, she's gonna slip if the crowd keeps on moving ! " Kuu warned

" Ah, yeah. Here hold this. " Ren handed his pasta to Kuu as he made his way through the crowd to help Jurina

" Juri ! "

" R-Ren ! "

" Here, climb up my back. " Ren turned around and kneeled a little so that his best friend could climb up

" What ? Are you serious ?? "

" Hurry or do you want to get stepped on random people ! "

" Yokai ! " Jurina immediately climbed up Ren's back then Ren struggled his way out.

" Hey, Ren, over here ! " Ren ran to Kuu as Jurina held on tightly

" Yosh~ We're free. " Ren kneeled back again as Jurina set her foot to the ground

" Arigatou, Ren ! " Jurin flashed a grateful smile to Ren

" No probs ! "

" Hi, Juri ~ Where's Non-chan ? "

" Hi, Kuu. She's at the classroom. "

" Right on ! Hey, Ren, I'm going to Non a'right ? "

" Oh, yeah, sure. Take your time. "

" Yup ! Jya ne ! " Kuu ran out of the cafeteria and Ren and Jurina we're left with an awkward silence

" So, how have you been lately ? " Ren asked

" Eh ? Oh, I'm fine. But mom and uncle have been fighting everyday. "

" Uncle ? You mean your Step dad ? "

" Yeah. I can't hardly study in my room ! "

" You can stay in my apartment for the time being ! "

" What ?! Are you kidding me ?! "

" You're thinking of those kind of stuff again. Don't worry, I'm your best friend, right ? "

" Ahh you're right. Sorry. "

" It's okay. Anyway, umm.. aren't you gonna eat lunch ? "

" Lunch ? Ah no. "

" What ? Why ? "

" I'm not hungry... "

" Ehh okay. "

" Ren. "

" Yeah ? " Ren said as he munched on his pasta

" You do know I'm dating Churi, right ? " Ren choked on his pasta when he heard that

" WHAT ?! "

" R-Ren.. "

" Ehemm... When d-did you guys started dating ? "

" Last month "

" Why didn't you tell me earlier ? " Ren asked with an irritated tone as he looked away

" I thought it would distract you since you we're busy with archery and your studies.. I'm sorry. "

" You said you'd wait for me, Jurina... " Ren looked down

" I'm sorry.. "

" You know, I was thinking of confessing to you today. But I'm too late, aren't I ? Churi took you away. And I have to deal with it. "

" I'm sorry, Ren.. " Jurina said as tears fell down her cheeks

" Stop. "

" Eh ? "

" Stop saying that word... It hurts me hearing you say that. "

" Why ? "

" It's like you're pitying me.. "

" I AM ! This is why I couldn't wait for you ! I've thought about all the burden I'd set upon you if we'd be together— "

" You shouldn't worry about me, Juri. You know that I would give up my dream for you. I love you so much and all the things I did for you.. this is what I get ? "

" I know you don't deserve this. You deserve better, Ren. I'm so sorry. "

Tears fell down Ren's eyes. " It's okay. But ... Are you happy with him ? "

" ... " Jurina hesitated for a moment but she had to do this to protect Ren " Yes. I am happy with him. "

Ren smiled and looked at Jurina " That's good. As long as you're happy to be with him, I'm glad. If he ever hurts you, just call me, okay ? "

Ren, why are you still doing this ???

" H-Hai.. "

" Good. " Ren smiled. A sad smile. He ruffle Jurina's hair and walked away then Jurina broke down in tears. She lost the most important person in her life.

As weeks went by, Ren began avoiding Jurina. Everyday at Ren's club, he would see Jurina with the Oh-So-Hot-Churi. When Jurina looks at Ren, Ren just smiles and continue with what he's doing or he would just walk away. It clearly hurts Ren too much that he's pressuring himself to become better for Jurina. Studying everyday he gets home and practicing his archery skills every midnight. His marks are getting higher and higher but he just sleeps in class that he gets detention almost everyday. Jurina started worrying about Ren. She tried to ask him if he was fine but Ren just patted her head and walked away.

One day, Jurina was going to Churi and Ren's clubroom.

" Churi— " Jurina was wide eyed. Churi was kissing another girl. Churi was cheating on her.

" J-Juri ?? I-It's not what you think—"

" H-How could you, Churi !! " Tears fell from Jurina's eyes. She ran away. She couldn't accept what had happened. She ran and ran and ran. Without knowing where she was now at the rooftop at th 9th floor. She couldn't believe she ran this far. She went to rails. She was attempting to suicide. But before she was about to jump, she shouted one last name " MASTUI REN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " Then she jumped. But she wasn't falling. Somebody had grabbed her hand. She looked up and saw Ren.

" I won't let you die just yet, Juri.. " Ren said and pulled her up. Causing the two of them to fall down the floor of the rooftop with Jurina on top.

" R-Ren.. " Jurina cried again

" You need me. You called for me. I know you love me.. Juri, Churi doesn't love you. He was using you. But you said you we're happy with him, I told him to take care of you or else. But he didn't. So Juri, I'd gladly beat the crap out of him. " Ren smiled. He tried to get up but he was held back by Jurina

" R-Ren.. I love you so much ! But I tried to hide it. My mom said to not have a relationship with you due to family circumstances or you will be perished. So I cut this connection off. I-I was just trying to protect you.. But being cheated on Churi, really hurt so much, Ren! I fell in love with him as he was so kind to me ! But he cheated on me !!" Jurina broke down into tears again.

" Don't worry, Juri. I'm always here for you and I would never cheat on you. Hurting you is the last thing I'd do. "

" But Ren, my mom ! She could do something bad to you—"

" My love for you is too great that I can't hold back anymore. " Ren pulled Jurina and kissed her passionately. Expecting Jurina to slap him or something, Jurina kissed back. After some time, Ren heard Jurina moaned so he pulled back.

" Juri, once again, with all my heart, my will, my spirit, I love you ! " Ren proclaimed

" I.. I love you too, Ren. With everything I have. " Jurina hugged Ren

" And I will avenge you from Churi. "

Later that day Ren beat the crap out of Churi and Jurina and him became official. They faced all the obstacles in their way. They we're surely a courageous couple.



A/N : Ren and Jurina are unrelated cousins. Jurina's step-father is Ren's Uncle.

Oh, WMatsui ! I was crying while making this  :farofflook:
Now, no one can stop these star crossed lovers ~~  :hehehe:
Hope you enjoyed  :shy2: :shy1: :luvluv2: :shifty: :hee:
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Re: More Than This Chapter 2 ( SayaMilky )
« Reply #34 on: August 12, 2012, 09:48:02 AM »


SMAACK ! POW ! BOOM !
BAAANG ! SHOOT ! BOOOOOM SHAKALAKA !




i'm currently reading this second chapter, but pausing (pausing?) :on lol: for a while at this sentence. this is good! seriously! when i read them, it's like i can make the sounds full with many emotions! hahaha! :hiakhiakhiak: nice, chuuupuffss-san (isn't this kind of long to spell? haha jk :P ) !!

yoshhh~ continue to reading!~
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #35 on: August 12, 2012, 10:11:32 AM »
 THAT'S it..
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
 :on bleed: :on bleed:
        :on bleed:
to much mayuki and wmatsui,,SUGOI!!!
AND NOW  :imdead:

Thank you for the update!!!
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part I : MaYuki Scene ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki )
« Reply #36 on: August 12, 2012, 10:39:45 AM »
@Lollita90 : LOL I appreciate your presence in telling me your opinion. And thank you for reading~
BTW, You can call me Chuuu or something Lol.  :hee:
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Re: More Than This Chapter 6 Part II ( SayaMilky ) ( MaYuki ) ( WMatsui )
« Reply #37 on: August 14, 2012, 04:17:42 PM »
Hello  :hee:
Well, let's see... Where should I start ?  :dunno:
First of all, I'm setting this fic on HIATUS. I repeat, HIATUS.  :dozing:
I'm so so so sorry !  :cool2: :kneelbow:
I have my reasons. One is, I'm trying to get into a good college  :on GJ:
Since, my course is really hard ( Forensics ), My father told me to lessen my writing habit  :on voodoo:
I wanted to effing punch him that time.  :on blackhole:
So I decided to pick a fic to update slowly~Since, The other fic is a hit, I'll be putting this one on HIATUS.  Repeat, HIATUS for the 4th time. :fainted:
There might be a possibility I'd hiatus the other one too  :depressed:
Please forgive me!  :kneelbow: :gyaaah:


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Re: More Than This : HIATUS For the time being :((
« Reply #38 on: August 14, 2012, 04:33:26 PM »
.....n--------n----no!!! No! NO!!noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :shocked


....I killed my oooo ....... :O


hope you get what college you want! my father would tell me the same but I still have .....what is your age? I have 3 years until college..... :? :O


anyway! please still enter and visit us~(the ones on the site..)     and please dont put on Hitatus the other one....PLEASE! Im begging you!  I love that fic!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

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Re: More Than This : HIATUS For the time being :((
« Reply #39 on: August 14, 2012, 04:34:37 PM »
Well.. priority do matter..

Ganbatte Chuuu-san..  :cow:

I'll be waiting for your next update  :twothumbs

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