[UPDATE] THE SONGS 121120 ~

[Oshiforlife]

hello there ~  Lana's songs are so pretty ~ I'm addicted to them ~ 
so here is my new attempt :
 
THE SONGS
pairings : Black x Nezumi / Mayuki <~ LOL you will know why I separated them 

douzo ~  and please comment too ~ 

CHAPTER ONE : DARK PARADISE

Wow wow ~ hello there Black
Black shifted her gaze from the bible to the girl who was standing in front of her . the said girl was wearing a pink hoodie and black combat boots , she chewed her gums while slowly walked around Black .
What r u doing here ? recently you come up here quite often – Nezumi asked and smiled at the taller girl .
Black still didn’t pay any attention to Nezumi  and continued reading her bible . Nezumi  stared at Black then decided to sit next to her . They just silently sat there , one looked at the words , one looked up to the sky ‘til Nezumi tried once again
It feels good being up here right ? looking down from the top
Still she got nothing but silent from the queen . 

And there no remedy for memory your face is
Like a melody , it won’t leave my head

She looked so beautiful . cold eyes like black holes sucked Nezumi in , yet so sad . “those questioning eyes” . Was hypnotized by Black’s beauty , the mouse sat there staring at her . “ this feels like forever , so peaceful , so strange” Nezumi felt like she could do this forever and would never get tired of it . But then Black turned around and their eyes met . A strange shock ran through the small body and Nezumi’s heart ached a little bit . Her mind went blank and they kept doing eye contact for a while . Black was the one who broke it , she stood up and quickly exit , left alone Nezumi .

Your soul is haunting me and telling me
That everything is fine
But i wish i was dead

“ So that this strange feeling could just disappear”  She murmured looking at the closed door .

Everytime I close my eyes
It’s like a dark paradise

“ I just gone up there again , what’s wrong with me” Black thought while walked back to the rappapa room . Suddenly she stopped . “ those eyes...” Black stood in front of the room door .  “ whose eyes ? “ A  voice from no where brought Black back to reality and she quickly turned around
It’s none of your bussiness , why did u read my mind ? – she asked with a pissed off tone .
I wasn’t – Torigoya smiled –u said it . now tell me whose eyes ?
Black’s eyes opened wide as she was stoned at Torigoya’s words
It’s nothing , forget it – she said then walked away .
 “It felt weird , I couldn’t turned away , yet looked at those diamonds was painful . what exactly is this feeling “
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I’m lying in the ocean , singing your song
Ahh , that’s how you sang it
Loving you forever , can’t be wrong
Even though you’re not here , won’t move on
Ahh , that’s how we played it

Seems like she won’t come today
Who ? – Center asked
Nezumi didn’t answer and kept looking further into the blank space from the balcony . Center had used to that so she asked no more . Lately , Nezumi did nothing . she stopped all the war things and everyday , came up to the rooftop and sat .
I think I will have to transfer to another school , Center
What ?!?!?!
My father said that this yankee school does me no good after he accidentally passed by . I will be transfer to some shitty school for the rich and bitchy kids .
WHAT ?? U REALLY R GONNA LEAVE ?
I don’t know
U don’t want to stay here with me anymore ? reach for the top ?
Once again Nezumi said nothing back . maybe she did want to stay here , something didn’t let her go that easy . “ah , it’s aching again , why ?” Nezumi thought and sighed .

But there’s no you , except in my dreams tonight
I don’t wanna wake up from this tonight
There no relief , I see you in my sleep
And everybody’s rushing me , but I can feel you touching me
There’s no release ,  I feel you in my dream
Telling me I’m fine

Nezumi walked home though she didn’t want to . It would be only her , the big house and the maids . They were good but still something was missing . She was drown in thoughts . She thought about everything , yet nothing at the same time . But then suddenly , there was a flash , a huge truck was coming and the lights was so bright , a long and loud noise from the horn .
WATCH OUT
BAAAAAAAAAAAM
KZKKKKKKKK
All black out .
Nezumi could only hear someone called out her name , a familiar voice , her favourite tone
Bl..ack?

[kurogumi]

Woaah. Interesting!!

Did nezumi get hit by that truck? Or black?

Uh i want to know!

Thank for this interesting story...

[yuukimoko]

ah~! so good to see another BlackxNezumi writing a fic about them~!


I like it! please update soon!!!!!!!!

[kiruchi]

I think there's a reason why Mayuki and BlackxNezumi is separated. 
I'm guessing that we will have two yukirin in here...one is black and the other is yukirin. (well... i think)
or some kind of parallel world...
Whatever it is... pls. update. 
I hope that Nezumi was not run over by that truck  ... but I really do think that instead of Black.. Yukirin's the one who save Nezumi. 

[Oshiforlife]

YOSH ~ UPDATE ~  hope you like this chap too ~ 

CHAPTER 2 : ALL THIS AND HEAVEN TOO 

Oh , you wake up ! – a woman wore white uniform spoke to Nezumi  - I’m gonna call the doctor
My head , aw ... where am i ? – Nezumi sat up and looked around . the drugs’ smell , the sight of people wore white blouse and uniform , white rooms and all the machines made her realized – hospital ? why am I being bandaged ? aw ... Nezumi tried to remember what was happen to her but she couldn’t . Then the nurse came in with a doctor and a girl .
How do you feel  ? – the doctor asked her while examined her bandaged head and arm
Kinda dizzy and my head hurts – Nezumi said with a painful tone ‘cause her head ached right after the doctor asked
Ok , I’m gonna call your parents , now just have some rest – the doctor quickly exit and that was when Nezumi noticed that the girl was still sat there next to her bed
Are you felling ok ? – the girl asked
Nezumi looked at her questioningly . “who is this girl ?”
Yes , why am i here ? do you know ? – she asked still had no ideas who the girls she talk to is
You was hit by a truck , I brought you here – the girl looked at her calmly and started praying with her necklace cross , thanked god for having saved Nezumi . “so that’s why i’m here” Nezumi thought .
Thank you – she smiled at the raven
Black felt something really weird in the eyes of the young girl . She leaned closer to Nezumi
Do  you really sure that u r alright ? and dont u remember anything ?
No , but thank you so much . It’s really good of a stranger  to bring me to the hospital – Nezumi smiled againd and bowed to the girl in front of her
“WHAT ? “ now that the problem ! Black couldnt believe in her own eyes . She saw a well behave Nezumi ! no mocking , no dark smirk and more shocking , not remember who Black is . “that’s why her eyes look so meek, she must have lost her memory” Black felt shock then sadness invaded her mind . “She doesn’t remember me” Black tried once again
Hey , what’s your name ?
Mayu , Watanabe Mayu – Nezumi answered with no hesitation
Black was stoned . she ran out of the room
DOCTOR ! – she called out for the doctor and right when he came in , she told him Nezumi’s problem and was totally panicking . She didn’t know why she panicked , she scared but of what ?

And the heart is hard to translate,
It has a language of it's own,
It talks and tongues and quiet sighs and prayers and proclamations,
In the grand days of great men and the smallest of gestures,
In short shallow gasps.

But with all my education,
I can't seem to commend it

She might have lost her memory . Luckily she still remember her family , who she is , how old she is ... but sadly , she forgets the rest – the doctor informed Black – You r her friend right ? I’m really sorry but it seems like she forgets you too .

And I would give all this and heaven too,
I would give it all if only for a moment,
That I could just understand the meaning of the word you see,
'Cause I've been scrawling it forever,
But it never makes sense to me at all.

And it talks to me in tiptoes,
And sings to me inside,
It cries out in the darkest night,
And breaks in morning light.

Black didn’t react at all . “She forgets about me” a heavy feeling suddenly formed inside Black . But she kept calm as always , still showed nothing but a blank face .
Her parents will come soon , so please keep an eye on her for me ‘til then . – the doctor said – don’t worry , maybe it’s just temporarily .
Black walked to Nezumi  , sat down and looked at her . “so her real name is Mayu”
Hey , do you need any----
Didn’t wait for Black to finish her line , a young woman rushed in
Oh my god , oh my god , are you alright , are you hurt , ojou-sama ? – the woman asked worriedly to Nez..uhm ...Mayu
I’m ok , Rena-san – Mayu said and tried to adjust her pillow to sit properly
Here , let me help you – Black reached out to pull the pillow
Oh , you must be the girl who has helped my ojou-sama , thank you so much , thank you , I’m Rena Matsui btw – Rena bowed to Black and shook her hands
It’s nothing . now that you have Rena-san here , I gues s I’m gonna leave – Black took her jacket and bible ready to leave when Mayu took her hands
Thank you very much uhm...- Mayu struggled and remembered she hadn’t asked Black’s name
My friends called me Black – Black said while looked at Mayu then to her hand which was holding Mayu’s small hand . A warmth spread from that little hand to Black’s soul . Black smiled lightly
Black-san , what can I do for you as a gift to thank you ? – Rena asked
Nothing , I’m happy that Mayu is alive . take care
Good bye Black-san – Mayu smiled like a good girl and let go of Black’s hand
Good bye Mayu , Rena-san – Black bowed and her face was emotionless again
Black walked out of the room and leaned her head against the wall . “it doesn’t matter , at all . It doesn’t matter even if she forgot ‘bout me”

No, words are a language,
It doesn't deserve such treatment,
And all my stumbling phrases,
Never amounted to anything worth this feeling,
All this heaven,
Never could describe such a feeling as I'm having,
Words were never so useful,
So I was screaming out a language that I never knew existed before.

“It’s not like we have something and it’s better this way when this world finally back to normal . good girls are good .” she thought while walked back to her home .
But I miss the old Nezumi already - Black murmured
Meanwhile in hospital
Nezumi-sama , you’ll stay here for at least a week so is there anything you need me to bring here for you ? – Rena smiled and asked Mayu
Nezumi ?
Eh ? You told all the maids to call u Nezumi . ah , the doctor informed me ‘bout your condition . that’s right – Rena sadly looked at Mayu – but things r gonna be alright , don’t worry , you will get your memory back soon . or as well forget all of it at once , I don’t think those memories r good .
Nezumi, Black ... – Mayu murmured . somehow they sounded so familiar and especially the name Black . she thought back when she held Black’s hand , something like an electric ran through her brain and she felt like never letting go . “will i have a chance to see her again, I owe her my life”

[kahem]

No Nezumi!!!!!
So, Rena is not Gekikara?

[yuukimoko]

e------ehhhhh~!?

Nezumi forgot Black and now is Mayu........so Black saved her!

for a second there I thought it was Yuki that saved Nezumi and later Nezumi will have 2 Yuki-Black~!


Poor Black.........she alredy misses her Nezumi......w-wait?! 'her'?  Mayu is Yukirins so Nezumi is Blacks......

please update soon~!!!!!

[kiruchi]

Oho.. Black did save her (well... there goes my theory ). but unfortunately Nezumi forgot Black.... I wonder how will the plot develop from here? 
and wait?! Rena isn't Gekikara? What happened to Geki?

[mo-chan]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh 
Nezumi lost her memory 
but she still have feelings for Black I know it 
update soon please   

[Pwety]

Waaaah new BlackNezumi yeahhh!!!!!!!

No!!! Nezumi lost her memory

She forgot Black. To bad .

Update soon please It is a really good fanfic.

[Oshiforlife]

@kahem-san : no , but Geki is gonna appear soon ~ please continue reading ~ 
@yuukimoko-san : LOL , no ~ but it's a good ideas , maybe I should hit Black too "dark smirk"
@mo-chan san : They're for each other ! yay ! 
@pwety-san: thank you 
Yay ! thank you all for reading my fic  and don't worry , Geki is my fave girl in mg so of course she's gonna be in here "dark smirk" 
Here chap 3

CHAPTER 3
Three weeks later :
Ohayo, Nezumi-sama – all the maids said smiling when they saw Mayu went to the kitchen .
Ohayo , and ...uh forget it – Mayu didn’t want to be called Nezumi anymore but it wasn’t that big deal so she was just went with it . Due to her hating toward the hospital , she wanted to be cured at home , well of course the doctors didn’t let her go that easy . but Rena – who also wanted Mayu to be home – had done something only gods know and then her ojou-sama was home !
Ohayo , Nezumi-sama – Rena smiled and laid out Mayu’s breakfast
Wow , why don’t you let the maids do their job ? you’re my butler not a cook – Mayu said knowing how Rena cooking was . She felt so lucky that she could remember that so she could prepare for her stomach . “ She isn’t that bad but why does she always add so much spicy things “
I want to . ah , I see you already wearing your new uniform . you’re looking good
How was my previous school ? I can’t remember anything ‘bout it
Oh , just forget it . it really is not a good school . I’m happy now I won’t see you so – Rena immediately shut her mouth
So what ? WATER !! ah !! – Mayu cried out since her tounge was burning hard – ah !!
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I’m so sorry , Nezumi-sama – Rena said while drove Mayu to her new school
It’s okay , don’t worry – Mayu still felt hot and water in her eyes
Okay , we’re here , have a nice day Nezumi-sama – Rena happily opened the car door for Mayu
God , this school is huge , bye Rena-chan
Rena bowed to Mayu then waved at her until she couldn’t see Mayu’s figure anymore . The little girl sighed “ so boring , lucky that I bring mangas with me” . she walked straight to her classroom since Rena had gave her a piece of paper with a map on it . “ah , 3-1 , I’m here” right when she about to open the door , it opened itself and a cute girl appeared .
AH ! you must be the new girl that the teacher told me about ! – the girl said and didn’t wait for Mayu to reply , she continued while shook Mayu’s hand and smiled at her friendly
I’m Aika Oota but you can call me Rabu-tan, sr to have you looked for the classroom yourself . the teacher told me to showed you around but I forgot . but lucky that you’re here . you’re quite a smart girl ne , this school is huge that sometimes I got lost , yet you found the room so quickly
Ah , I’m Mayu Watanabe – Mayu thought it was time she should introduce to the new girl . Rabutan had cute twintails and cute dimples , her eyes were shining and they looked really nice like how she was to Mayu for the whole day later .
Lunch break
So nice a girl – Rabutan swallowed her beef – She saved you and wants no repay , it’s rare nowaday
I know , and she is pretty too , somehow I think that we have met before – Mayu took a bite and said – I really want to meet her again
Do you know where she lives ?
No , I just know her name , It’s Black . kinda weird a name , no ?
Un , then it’s hard to find her . ne , want to hang out with me after school ? I’ll treat you ice cream !
Sure ! – Mayu said excitedly . Rabutan sure was a nice person
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The girls were walking , chatting and eating their ice cream when suddenly a group of yankee girls ran past them making Mayu dropped her ice cream on her skirt
Hey ! – Rabutan yelled at the yankees
What ? – they turned around pissed off by Rabutan’s bossy tone
Rabutan realized she just made the biggest mistake of her life . Mayu did nothing but stared at them with terrified eyes .
Oh , isn’t that Nezumi ? What r you doing here you rat ? and didn’t your friend just yelled at us ?
Nezumi oh Nezumi , you’re looking riduculous in that uniform , where that hoodie to cover you bastard face ?
Then they laughed and started to surround the two girl , grinned and swang their arms and cracked their hands .
So you’re not going to fight back ? how weird
“Nezumi ? they all are calling me with that name , what exactly did I do that involved with these yankees back when I was Nezumi ? is this the reason why Rena-chan didn’t want me to recover my memories ? “ Mayu thought “oh well , seems like I’m gonna die because of whatever the fuck I had done as Nezumi”
Hey
A sudden voice echoed . Every eyes turned to the new coming girl and as soon as they found out who that girl is , the yankees stepped back a little then ran away when they saw that girl was coming toward they .
Black-san – Mayu murmured but actually yelled inside . She found her ! ...but with a kid on her back . Confusion rose in Mayu’s head
Are you alright ? – Black looked at the two . It was her first time seeing Nezumi like that. She was wearing a tie , Nezumi’s white shirt looked kind of thin and translucent , her vest was buttoning really neat and her skirt was way shorter than Majisuka skirt that revealed her thighs so white and smooth . Black felt her face hotter forced her to look the other way .
Yeah , we’re ok . thank you Black-san – Mayu said and bowed to Black
Oh ! so you’re Black-san , Mayu talked about you a lots , thank you – Rabutan smiled showing her cute dimples and bowed to Black .
“talk about me?” Black felt the heat just kept on rose up .
You need to wash that skirt ? My house is near here – Black said looking at Mayu’s skirt with ice cream on it
Ah yeah , can we ? – Rabutan replied quickly since she knew that Mayu would love to come to her savior’s house .
Alright , just wait a minute . I need to grab my things at my work .
You work where ?
Right at the store you’re standing in front of – Black pointed at the door behind them and walked fast in .
she is really pretty , but what's with the kid ? - Rabutan looked at the door
no idea - Mayu replied . she felt angry for no reason .

[XxRoByNxX78]

so cool i cant believe nezumi lost her memory and now she isnt the awsome cool smart girl anymore now she is the sweet kind innocent mayu lol nice update =)

[mo-chan]

Black is so cool 
I prefer Mayu who lost her memory caracter then when she was Nezumi 
Mayu is cute in her new uniform 
Black with a kid and Mayu is angry what is going to happen 
they're going to Black's house it's a good step for you Mayu 
I can't wait for the next 

[Playgirlz]

You wrote a fic, and it's Mayuki!!! 
The story is so cute, Mayu lost her memory and fell in love with Black like a normal girl
However, i just can't stand that she gets bully by the other yankees. They'll know how scary Mayu is when she gets her memory back 
Thank you for the new fic, pls continue 

[Oshiforlife]

LOL , this chapter is kinda boring to me ~ but we need it for the future so please read it

Chapter 4

here is the bathroom – Black guided Mayu to the bathroom then walked out .
So this is your kid ? – Rabutan asked rocking the baby back and forth
Un .
Rabutan saw Black nodded then continued reading her bible . She wanted to ask where the father is but felt that she shouldn’t so she sat there playing with the kid . Then a noise from the door broke the silent
I’m home – a young girl walked in and Rabutan was taken aback right the moment she saw her
RENA-SAN ??? – She yelled with wide opened eyes .  the young girl looked  just like Rena-san – Mayu’s butler- who she had met at the head master room .
Stood in front of Rabutan was a pretty girl wore a dark green jacket with dragon on it , her eyes were sharp and she shot a death glare at Rabutan . but when Black appeared , she smiled at her and walked in , sat down and ignored Rabutan .  The twintails girl saw her weird hair style and the scars “and for a moment there I thought she was Rena-san”
Then Mayu showed up and when she saw the Rena-san-clone girl , she yelled just like Rabutan did . The girl’s eye brows met at the middle of her face and she looked at Mayu madly , biting her nail .
She’s Gekikara , not some Rena-san you guys were yelling for – Black said without looking away from her bible .
Gekikara surprised when she was introduced to Nezumi . after all , they knew each other but then why did Nezumi  yelled like that .
Oh , we’re sorry Gekikara-san . it’s just that you looked a lots like her – Mayu and Rabutan bowed at Gekikara and smiled arkwardly , embarrased of mistook her for Rena. 
Something flashed inside Gekikara’s mind that she forgot ‘bout Nezumi’s weird behavior. Her face showed a surprise expression then to a scared one , next was a confused one . Black looked at Gekikara confusedly then turned to see if Mayu was fine only to see another confused face .
Who is that Rena-san  ? – She asked to broke the ice
It’s my butler , you’ve met her at the hospital Black-san – Mayu answered still looking at Gekikara – And she looks exactly like Gekikara-san
Oh , that one – Black didn’t even remember meeting someone looks like Gekikara but maybe she did . just didn’t care anyway.
Do you have any relatives , Gekikara-san ? – Rabutan asked not afraid to die
No way in hell , no , no hahahahahhahahaha – Gekikara laughed madly but Black and the others could see that she was kind of nevours
Mayu titled her head but then remembered that she had to go home so she took Rabutan’s arms and made her stand up
It’s getting late , I’ve to go now . thank you again Black-san
You say thank you too much , it’s nothing
Black patted Nezumi’s head then took her hand and walked the girls back to the main road before went back home. Mayu felt nostalgic about Black’s back . it was like she had seen it a lots and been longing for it but also felt tighten in her chest . Black’s silky hair , Black’s back , the dragon on the back of her jacket , the rapid heartbeat and the sight of the fading raven made Mayu felt so familiar to them . “maybe , she is the past that I’ve forgot , if so , I want to get it back”

After the girls left , Gekikara asked Black ‘bout Nezumi’s behavior
Did she hit her head ?
Yes , and now she forgets ‘bout everything . she’s just a good girl now .
Black looked at the hand which held Nezumi’s hand and sighed . but then she looked at Gekikara and curiousity rose
Now that I remember that girl’s face , you really look like her. r u sure u don’t have any relatives ?
No , of course , no way
It’s like you’re hiding something . You’re not good at hiding secret Gekikara – Black smirked and walked in as she heard her baby cried .

Meanwhile
Rena-chaaaaaaaaaan – Center yelled and jumped on Rena
GET OFF MEEEEEEEEEEEE – Rena cried out for help but Mayu did nothing but stood there watching them and wondered who the girl climb on Rena-chan is and how did she get in when suddenly that girl turned to her .
Hey Nezumi , I heard you got hit by a truck so I pay you a visit – Center smiled and walked over to examined her friend
I’m ok , but do I know you ?
Eh ? – The young girl couldn’t believe her ears and turned back , looking at Rena with a what-the-hell look . Rena just shook  her head and sighed .
Center understood the situation immediately . she took Nezumi’s hands and looked at her with sympathy eyes
I see I see , it’s ok . If I can help anything , just ask , I’m your best and only friend after all
Mayu smiled , Center backed off and raised her hands to cover her eyes , she then nervously looked at Rena again
We need to get her back soon , I can’t handle this cuteness aura , It’s too bright !
Nee , Uhm..- Mayu spoke to Center
Un , You can call me Center like before – again she whispered to Rena : “she has such a cute voice like that ?? uhg !! I wanna hug her !! “ and to answer back , Rena gave her the look of a killer that made Center looked away immediately
Do you know any girl who looks like Rena-chan in your school ? – Mayu looked at Center’s uniform and realized that Gekikara had the same uniform but seems like she had cut her skirt a little
Ah yes , Gekikara looks a lots like Rena-chan but she’s way scarier , she’s not this cuteeeeeeeeeeee – Center answered trying to hug Rena but Rena pushed her away
Really ? you saw someone who looks just like me ? and you know her ? – Rena asked Center and Mayu with a serious tone
Un , I’ve met her today
Un , she’s going to my school
So that’s where she hide – Rena murmured and smirked - the safest place is the most dangerous one , I should have thought of that school .
“they really should have closed her bank account so she couldn’t transfer to another school and ran away hiding from us , but now I found her , finally”
Who wants cakes after dinner ? I’ll take you out tonight – The pretty butler smiled
Yay !!! – Mayu and Center yelled happily not knowing the hidden reason for Rena’s treat .

for chap 5 , it's gonne be a 2-people-hanging-around-but-no-it's-not-a-date thing ~ and of course , after all , Mayu is Nezumi , she's gonna show us a little Nezumi ! wait for meeeeeeeeeee ~  thank you all for reading my fic 

[kiruchi]

I don't find this updated chapter boring... Not at all... Instead I'm looking forward to the next one. It seems that Rena knows Gekikara.
I like where this plot lead to...
Update soon!

[smarty0821]

This story really interest me... 

Wanna know when will Mayuki happens?!?! 

Please update more!!!! 

[yuukimoko]

Geki lives with Black!?    Mayu sure was jealous!!!


And there are twins?! Rena and Geki!!!!



update soon please~

[XxRoByNxX78]

rena + gekikara = twins lol yay

[ChuuuPuffss]

WootWooot ! I wonder how Mayuyu's gonna turn out as Nezumi and she can't remember anything ! 
UPDATE MOOOAAR ! Lyk, ryt naaooooo ! Lol jks ! TYT !