JPHiP Radio (13/200 @ 128 kbs)     Now playing: Aya - Shelter

Author Topic: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Special Snippet Series: Rin! + Kuu! [09/29/13]  (Read 22807 times)

Offline takamae

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 107
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #40 on: November 25, 2012, 06:14:06 AM »
Any love story between acchan x kai x ray?  :inlove:
Haruna always can make yuko different than usual
Rena likes sae, poor jun  :nervous
Thanx for the update, will be waiting for the next update ^^

Offline cisda83

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 3088
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #41 on: November 25, 2012, 10:29:57 AM »
interesting development....

looking forward to your next update

Offline qweakb

  • Member+
  • Posts: 270
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #42 on: January 05, 2013, 04:54:10 PM »
please update the story soon...  :bow:
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

Offline korin48

  • Self-proclaimed Greatest and Most Loyal AtsuMina fan!
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 290
  • But I think TakaHarem is not too bad either ^~^
    • kooorrriiinnn
    • korin.desu.48
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #43 on: January 05, 2013, 05:34:43 PM »
I love your fanfic! Please update soon! Don't take it long time  :mon pray2:
Twitter | Facebook (fangirl account, dont use much)


Kami-oshi: -----
AKB oshi: Okada Nana, Kizaki Yuria, Yamada Nanami,
Mogi Shinobu
SKE oshi: Takayanagi Akane, Tani Marika, Matsumura Kaori,
Oba Mina
NMB oshi: Jo Eriko, Yamamoto Sayaka
HKT oshi: Murashige Anna, Sashihara Rino, Yamashita Emiri,
Kojina Yui
NGT oshi: Kitahara Rie, Ogino Yuka
Graduated member: Oshima Mai, Ohori Megumi, Shawako Hata,
Ogiso Shiori, Fukumoto Aina, Akimoto Sayaka (original kami-oshi),
Furukawa Airi, Yamada Nana, Kadowaki Kanako,
Takahashi Minami (2nd kami-oshi), Oya Masana, Kinoshita Momoka

Offline kahem

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2675
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #44 on: January 07, 2013, 01:42:27 AM »
Hahaaha this fic is so funny!
There so many wtf scene that I can't help but laugh xD

Offline Elo

  • ~~ YuKo ~~ SAIKO !!!!
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 342
  • Dont you dare to mess with my ~~YUKO~~
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #45 on: May 05, 2013, 10:08:10 PM »
takanyan we are waiting for your updates please update soon

it is an interesting fic so please update soon
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
                           ~AtsuMina~
                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

Love this Pairing
                                And more ^^

Offline cisda83

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 3088
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #46 on: May 06, 2013, 01:29:26 AM »
Please update...

This story is one of my Fav.

Can't wait to read the next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Offline blakwhite

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 290
  • Atsumina Shipper
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #47 on: May 20, 2013, 04:57:07 PM »
lol jun jealous :3,
acchan x kai x ray, kai x acchan pls  :grin:
and btw pls update  :bow: i wanna read more atsumina  ;)

Offline ashiya

  • Member+
  • Posts: 82
  • (・_・”)/珠理麻友 \(・_・”)
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 3 + Personal Replies [9/3/12]
« Reply #48 on: May 20, 2013, 05:56:24 PM »
I love your fanfic, as a... JunKai shipper lololol  XD

Please update soon TakaNyan-san
PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA  WARETE BARI BARI
PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA

Offline TakaNyan

  • ecchi
  • Member
  • Posts: 20
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #49 on: September 21, 2013, 05:02:23 AM »
Guess whose back. Yupp meh.
But I must say I am sooooooo sorry for going on an un-warned/un-expected hiatus.
I really wasn't planning on ever being inactive for this long but gaaah stuff happened. But all that doesn't matter cause what does matter is that I am back, and better than ever!
Thanks to all those who were faithful and great fans to my fanfics and I am updating this for you guys!  :heart:


Personal replies:

Haruko: Kojiyuu is always interesting  :thumbsup  Thanks for commenting and reading my fic. Help you continue to read and comment!  :bow:

yuukimoko: Confuse, really? Sorry I will try to write the next chapter less confusing  :)  What parts were you confused on? Maybe I can help un-confuse you.  :D  Don't worry more of Yuki/Rin coming up! Thanks for commenting and reading my fic. Hope you continue to comment and read in the future!  :)2

Crossing Crossroads: Glad to hear that my chapter and previous profile picture succeeded in making you fangirl.  XD What's life without fangirling? LOL at your radar and reaching ten for the JuriTaka moment.  :on lol:  And you really scared your dad? lmao. You must have screamed pretty loudly. XD JunKai shipping sounds fun and I was actually thinking of having a little fun with that in my fanfic but I'm not too sure about that  ;)  Oh my fluffy marshmallows is just something I usually says so and I thought it could fit nicely with Kuu saying it so I'm glad you enjoyed that line.  :D Ab chanting for no reason? Sounds like my kind of fun. lol  :lol: Thanks for commenting and reading my fic, hope you continue to read and comment!  :bow:

kiruchi: Yeah, my updates are slower than turtles and snails racing. But I'll try and become better with that  8)  Jurina getting jealous is a good thing to you? lol good cause it's quite fun to write  XD  You'll find out the pairings soon enough.   :)2   Thanks a ton for reading and commenting on my fic, it means a lot to me. I hope you continue to read and comment. :bow:

BbSis Lazy perverted Jun is the best no?  :lol:  I'm glad you like Starr  :grin:  And yes Acchan is a soloist while Ray is her usually diva self  :P  Your KaixRay hopes aren't too crazy. If you get what I mean  :cathappy:  KuuxMariko forever  :inlove: :heart: Lol Jealous Jun is awesome and always have to have a perverted Yuko for Haruna.  :lol:  Please don't have a heart attack! DX And thanks a ton for reading and commenting on my fic, it means a lot to me. I hope you continue to read and comment.  :kneelbow:

kojiama Naomi: I hope you think it's a very good story  :nya:  Thanks a ton for commenting and reading my fic, and I hope you continue to read and comment.  :bow:

Chanaline: Glad to hear that you think my story plot is interesting.  :k-thrilled: Yuki/Rin danso is always the best  :heart: We need for Yuki/Rin danso. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on my fic, it means a lot to me. I hope you continue to comment and read.  :grin:

Megumi: Don't worry about it, you can comment whenever!  :D I'm glad you like my long updates  :) I'm glad to hear that you liked the headline scandal thing  :lol: I actually laughed while thinking of it. Kuu always being a perv.  :rofl: Thank you for reading and commenting on my fic, it means a lot to me. I hope you continue to read and comment  :cow:

qweakb: Glad to hear that you love my fanfic  :k-thrilled: Thanks a ton for comment and reading my fic, it means a lot to me. I hope you continue to read and comment on my fic.  :squirrel:

Amakuchi: ERMEHGERD I LOVE YOU FOR LOVING MY FIC  :k-inlove: Thanks for reading and commenting on my fic, means a lot to me. Hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic  :cow:
 
alpacas: I apologize for my slowness in updating  :kneelbow:  I'm really flatter that you find the way I write and great and my story interesting.   :shy2:  Thanks a lot for commenting and reading my fic, it means a lot to me  :heart: And don't worry, I may have slow updates but I won't give up on this fic. Hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic.

takamae: Acchan x Kai x Ray love triangle is always good  :)  Kojiyuu is pure love  :heart:  Thanks a lot for commenting and reading my fic, it mean a lot. Hope you can continue to comment and read my fic.  :grin:

cisda83:  Glad you are enjoying the development of my story. Thanks for commenting and reading my story, it makes me happy  :cathappy: Hope you can continue to read and comment on my story.  :bow:

correnereyes: I'm glad you love my fanfic!  :on gay:  Thanks for reading and commenting. I hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic  :)2

kahem: I glad you find my fic funny!  :cow: I try my best at comedy. I love making people laugh  :) Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on my fic, means a lot to me. Hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic.  :grin:

Elo: I apologize for making you wait so long for my fic  :kneelbow: I will try to update in a better fashion.  :)  I'm glad you think my fic is interesting. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my fic, it means a lot to me. Hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic  :cow:

blakwhite: Jealous Jun is always entertaining  :lol:  Thanks for commenting and reading my fic, it means a lot. Hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic.  :grin:

ashiya: LOL JunKai shipper  :lol: Well I have good news to you fellow JunKai shipper, expect more silly JunKai moments in my fic, because I find them fun to write.  XD Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my fic, it means a lot to me. I hope you can continue to read and comment on my fic.  :)


And thanks a ton to all you silent readers as well, thank you all for reading my fic.

Now without further or do here is chapter 4!

What if Persona had 7 members?
Chapter 4-


“Rena! Wakeyyy!~”

“Rena-chaaan wake up pleeeease.”

The four other members of 'Starr' stood around Rena's bed waking her up, with curiosity gleaming in their eyes.

“Are you finally awake?” The shortest of the group asked as she sat down on Rena's bed.

“Yah Yuko don't rush, can't you see that she's just waking up now.” Mariko replied as she too sat down on Rena's bed.

“Gaaah but curiosity has been eating me up since yesterday night!”

“Yeah...same here,” Mayu softly spoke up. “Just what did happen between you and that cute guy Sai yesterday? You both just sort of disappeared, so we left without you guys.” Mayu continued this time looking at Rena.

A blush of embarrassment crept its way onto Rena's cheeks. “Well...”

*Flashback*

Sae, who was beside Rena, felt her heart race at the dangerous situation they were in and ran towards Rena and the person grabbing onto her tried to release her.

“Let her go!” Sae shouted as she tried to save Rena.

But Sae stared in confusion as the person that held onto Rena began laughing while posing in a flashy manner.

“A plus!” The strange woman shouted and Rena turned to look at her in shock.

“Ma-manager-san?!”

“Manager?!” Sae repeated in utter disbelief.

“Kuuumin!~” Rena's manager sung out in glee. “Did you get all of that?”

“Neh Neh Sasshi! I got it all.” Kumi chirped out as she came out from behind a rack of clothing with a video camera in hand.
 
“What's going on?” Rena asked in a soft delicate voice as she stared at Sasshi doing her happy dance with Kumi standing beside her showing her the video that she captured.

“Perfect.” Sasshihara grinned brightly and turned towards Kumi. “Keep the good work up and I'll hook you up with my cousin in no time.” Kumi blushed at Sasshihara's comment because of the presence of Rena and Sae but couldn't fight the dorky grin that graced her face.

“Excuse me? But what in the world is going on?” Sae asked in a louder voice than Rena did.

“Hm?” Sasshi hummed in curiosity as she turned her head towards the two and another grin creeped onto her face, which just made Sae feel weirded out. And instead of answering Sae's question Sasshi asked them a question instead. “Rena-chan, is that your boyfriend?”

“Eh-ehh?” Sae exclaimed in surprise while Rena was left a blushing mess as she waved her arms around frantically.

“N-no...This is Sai. He's just a friend of mine.”

“Uhuh okay...” Sasshi replied with a sly smile on her face which just caused Sae to lightly shake her head, and Rena just smiled apologetically at Sae.

“Anyways,” Sae began to ask. “Why the heck did you startle us and have your assistant record it?”

Sasshi smiled sheepishyly. “I'm afraid that information is classified.”

*End Of Flashback*

“And then Manager-san took us both home since you guys have already left.” Rena finished off her story.

“Are you sure that's all that happened?” Yuko asked with mischief in her voice while wiggling her eyebrows.

“Yeah, you did seem to have taken a liking to him.” Mariko added in the teasing while the other girls just looked at Rena with curious glances and goofy smiles.

“Gyaaah,” Rena squealed feeling her face become red, while at the same time grabbing one of the pillows on her bed and whacking the other girls softly with it. “Get out, and lemme get ready.”

~~

“The Indies Concert wow...” Kuu gushed as he lazily stretched in the dance practice room with the other Persona members.

“I know, it's incredible! Only the best of best can perform it's rare to see newbies debut at the Indies concert unless much is expected of them.” Kai added on to Kuu's gushings.

“I just hope I don't make any mistakes and make us look bad.” Min spoke out his fear with nervous looking eyes.

“Aww, don't worry Min,” Jun said as he put his arm around Min's neck smiling. “Even if you make a mistake no one will see it, everyone is gonna be too busy looking at me.” Jun smiled cheekily.

“Yah, get your head on straight,” Rin playfully smacked the top of Jun's head with a soft smile.

“Yeah cause I'm obviously more handsome than you any day.” Sai added as he flashed a playfully smug grin at Jun.

Riku quietly snickered to himself before joining the rest of his group members. It was quite nice for him, the leader to watch his bandmates being all cheerful and friendly towards each other.

“You six,”Riku clapped his hands together loudly. “Let's get to practicing now.”

“Mou, don't be such a sourpuss.” Kuu said with a slight pout in his lips. “Come over here and join us.”

Riku waved his hand, “No thanks, we gotta get to practicing. Now let's get to it.”

“Not uh, no way!” Jun waved his hands signaling Riku to join them. “We won't start practicing unless you join our group hug.”

Riku looked at the six other guys and tried to suppress a smile looking at their pleading eyes. “Okay okay fine,” he said finally giving in. “But we gotta start practicing right away.”

“YOSH!!” They all shouted gleefully as Riku joined their group hug.

~~

“One! Two! One Two Three Four!” Riku counted off the beats as the 7 of them began dancing the choreography of their first single '7 seconds.'

After about a trillion re-runs of the same choreography the 7 young men were tired out and they all sprawled out on the dance practice room's floor.

“I still can't believe that we're gonna be performing at the Indies concert.” Kuu continued to gush in a dreamlike way.

“I know, I know it's such a great opportunity for us, don't know how Saeko did it but I'm glad she got us a spot in the concert.” Sai said thankfully.

“Hmm, you think 'Starr' would be there?” Jun asked softly trying not to sound eager in meeting them again.

“Dunno,” Kuu shrugged. “If they're good enough to be on at the Indies Concert.”

“Hey-” Jun was about to protest and say how good and amazing 'Starr' is but Kuu beat him to it.

“Well with that Mariko girl in their group they're most likely good enough to perform at the Indies Concert.” Kuu said with a goofy grin on his face.

“Aww gross you love sick puppy.” Jun teased as he lightly shoved Kuu.

Kuu lightly shoved Jun back, “Like you aren't mister Rena fanboy.”

“Why you...” Jun breathed while getting ready to pounce on the other boy but they heard a person clear their throat behind them.

“Ahem...sorry to interrupt your rest time boys but we must get running along.” Saeko said as she walked in the dance room clapping her hands loudly to get all the guys up and running.

~~

“This is Kitahara Rie-san, your make-up artist. Responsible for all of Persona's fashion and make-up. And of course she will be receiving help from Umeda Ayaka-san, which you 7 have already met before, for she will be responsible for all the hair necessities.” Saeko explained as she motioned towards the two women.

The 7 boys of Persona smiled and bowed down politely, “Please treat us nicely.” They all said in unison.

The two women smiled at the 7 boys and bowed as well.

“Alright!” Saeko clapped her hands loudly. “Enough with the formalities and let's get to beautifying, you 7 have a concert to perform in less than 2 hours so we have no time to waste.”

Right after Saeko said those words both Kitahara-san and Ayaka-san had a look of determination in their eyes as they walked towards the Persona boys.

“I was thinking of going for a casual yet...”

“Formal look?” Ayaka continued Rie's sentence for her, as if both girls shared the same thought process.

“Yes,” Kitarie nodded and pointed towards, Sai, Jun, and Kai. “I'll take these three with me for now and get them fitted and properly situated into their outfits, while you can handle the other four and start with their hair styling and then we'll swap, is that good?”

Ayaka nodded with a smile on her face, “Couldn't have said it any better myself.”

~~

“And there you saw it all! The Wonderful Superstar Diva Ray perform her latest hit single!” The announcer on the stage shouted with utmost enthusiasm as the crowd went wild with Ray's performance.

“Too bad she has a terrible personality...” Kai muttered under his breath as him and his group watched Ray perform.

“Hm, what was that?” Min asked when he heard Kai mumble to himself.

“It was nothing.” Kai smiled and took one last glance towards Super Star Diva Ray as she walked off the stage.

Min noticing that Kai was eyeing Ray decided to ask him about it but stopped as he heard the announcer speaking.

“And now in just a couple of minutes a new boy group by the name of 'Persona' will make their first ever debut appearance here on our stage! And following up after them are the quickly raising idols 'Starr'!”

“Starr?” Jun's ears perked up as he looked around to see if he could see any of the members from 'Starr.'

“Total fanboy.” Kuu teased.

“Shut it.” Jun fired back but failing to cover up his burning cheeks.

“Alright here it is, our time to shine is finally here.” Riku began his pep talk. “Now we have nothing to worry about cause we're gonna go up there and show everyone our great talent!”

“OSU!”

Saeko smiled at the 7 boys admiring their closeness as teammates. “Now listen up!” She slightly shouted to get their full attention. “After your performance, you all must meet me in our dressing room because I will have a special guest for you all to meet and you mustn’t be late for it. Anyone who's late will receive a punishment, Saeko style.” And with that Saeko walked off with Marilyn following closely behind after wishing the boys goodluck on their performance.

~~

“Phew we made it just in time, I thought we were gonna be late for sure.” Yuko said as she and the other girls arrived at the Indies Concert.

“Hey Look! Aren't those the other guys from the mall?” Mayu asked as she pointed to the stage where Persona was performing.

“Yeah it is! Hey Rena, I didn't know there were famous.” Sayaka commented with an impressed look on her face as she watched the seven guys perform with much talent.

“Neither did I...” Rena replied softly in somewhat of a daze as she was fascinated by the fact that they were idols.

Kuu while in the middle of the performance noticed the presence of girl group 'Starr' watching them and locked eye contact with Mariko and winked at her flirtatiously.

“Ew...” Mariko wrinkled her nose in disgust. “Those dimwits are terrible.”

“What are you talking about Mariko?” Yuko asked as she bobbed her head to the song. “They're good!”

“Pffft...whatever.”

~~

While all seven boys of Persona were happily chatting amongst themselves 100% excited that their first performance went so well Kai and Min, who were at the back of the group, were suddenly pulled back by a hooded figure wearing sunglasses.

“Eeep!!” The both shouted out in unison as they were hurled back. “Help!” They both paniced, thrashing around like fish out of water.

“Sssh! Guys calm down! It's me.” The hooded figure took off her sunglasses and pulled down her hoodie.

“Ma-Maeda-san?!” Kai and Min both shouted in surprise.

“What are you doing here?” Kai questioned.

“And why are you dressed like that?” Min asked motioning towards the oversized hoodie and sunglasses Atsuko had.

“I was here to cheer you guys on your first performance.”

“Really?” They both had silly grins on their faces. “Thank you so much!” Both boys bowed while saying thanks, causing Atsuko to have a silly grin of her own.

“You guys, there's no need to thank me. Remember I'm your number one fan.” Atsuko smiled sweetly watching as both guys excitedly smiled at one another.

“Oh wow! So you really did mean it when you said you'd be our fan!” Kai jumped around in excitement.

“This is too amazing!" Min joined Kai in his jumping around, until they both heard Atsuko giggling.

“Oh no...we did it again.”

“We embarrassed ourselves in front of Maeda-san again.” Both Kai and Min face palmed themselves, while Atsuko just smiled at them.

“Well I gotta go now guys, but here.” Atsuko held out a piece of paper with numbers scribbled on it.

“What is this?” Kai questioned as he grabbed onto the piece of paper.

“It's my phone number.” Atsuko smiled at the look of pure bliss on both boys' faces. “Both of you text me kay? I'll be waiting for it.” And with one last sweet smile Atsuko slipped the oversized hoodie and sunglasses back on and left.

“I.can't.believe.it.”

“I.know.” Min nodded. “We have Maeda-san phone number!”

“And she told us to text her! How awesome can that get?” Kai spazzed excitedly taking out his cellphone typing Atsuko phone number in, when he noticed the time.

“Oh my Min! Saeko is sooooo gonna kill us! She told us to be back in our dressing room early!”

“Oh no you're right! Let's go!” Min rushed as he lightly pushed Kai as they began running.

But in the middle of their running Kai stopped and held onto his abdomen. “Kai? Are you alright?” Min asked as he walked over towards Kai's side to check on him.

“I'm fine,” Kai waved his hand. “Go on without me. I really need to use the bathroom and I can't hold it in any longer.”

Min looked at Kai, “You sure, I can wait for you and we can both be super late.”

“No no,” Kai shook his head. “It's alright, I don't you to get an extra scolding on my behalf. Just tell them I took a quick potty break.”

Min nodded and continued rushing towards the dressing room. While Kai desperately looked around for the nearest bathroom. And when he finally found where the restrooms were located he hesitated and stood in front of the two doors.

“Great...now I don't know which bathroom to go into. Should I go into the Men's? But eww...” Kai looked down at his body then nodded. “But I am a male, so the I will use the Men's Bathroom.” After taking a deep breath Kai hurriedly entered the restroom in lighting speed and exited in a hurry. But during Kai's exit of the bathroom he accidentally whacked someone with the bathroom door.

“Oppss...I'm sorry. I didn't mean to...” Kai began as he saw the man's angry expression.

“Sorry...?” The tall buff man scoffed. “Sorry won't cut it.” The tall buff man violently gripped onto Kai's collar and lifted him up. “I'll show you never to mess with me.”

“But...it was...an accident.” Kai struggled to say in complete sentences.

“Yeah Yeah,” The tall buff man ignored whatever Kai had to say and lifted up his free hand, ready to punch Kai. But when Kai saw that the guy was about to punch him his anger took over him and Kai kicked the other guy where it hurts most, the groin.

“Itaai...” The tall buff man dropped down Kai to hold onto where Kai kicked him. “Why you...” Now even more angry then before the tall buff guy charged towards Kai, while Kai just dodged him stepping sideways then glaring at him.

“You really are quite pathetic sir, picking a fight with someone for no reason. You're a scum that doesn't deserve to be breathing the same air as all the other good people.” Kai stepped closer to him giving him a nasty glare. “Don't ever mess with Kai again.” And with that Kai dashed off towards the Persona dressing room, hoping that Saeko doesn't skin him alive.

~~

“Ray just listen to me okay.” Sarukawa continued rambling on. “It'll be just for a couple minutes, all you have to do is go in and introduce yourself then let me handle all the talking okay?”

Ray shook her head. “I don't want to, last time you introduced me to some rookie group they all practically graveled at my feet to exchange phone numbers with me. I don't want a repeat of something like that to happen.”

“Now now,” Sarukawa began in a smooth tone of voice. “Listen to me, these kids are different I meet them, trust me. If anything these young men are a bit strange but anyways,” Sarukawa shook his head lightly. “My point is,” He held up a white piece of paper which Ray guessed to be some sort of contract. “I made a contract with their president that you'll do a collaboration with them.”

“You what?!” Ray yelled out, furious. “Why in the heck would you do that without my consent!”

“Well you see Saeko and I have a bit of competitiveness between us...” Sarukawa began nervously.

“I don't care what's between you and that Saeko-whatever person, but I want,” Ray pointed a heated finger at the contract. “That thing ripped into pieces and I'll agree to meet these rookies and get this thing all over with no collaborations. I don't do collaborations.”

Sarukawa nodded and ripped up the contract in his hand, despite his displeasure. “There all ripped, happy?”

Ray nodded, pleased. “Now...” Ray lifted up her sunglasses and put them on her face. “Lead the way to these newbies so I can get this over with.”

“As you wish.” Sarukawa nodded and lead the way towards the Persona dressing room.

~~

“Now you are very lucky that I don't have my whip here with me or else I wold have punished you right here.” Saeko hissed at Kai, very angry at his tardiness.

Kai shuddered. 'Gaah why does it have to be the whip? Why couldn't it be a different punishment like running extra laps or something.'

Right when Saeko was finally calmed down, they heard a knock at the door. At the sound of the knock all the members of Persona started fixing their hair and shirts to make sure that they looked presentable for Saeko's guest.

And once the door was opened for the 7 boys to see who it was their jaws dropped open.

“Ra-Ray?” They all exclaimed.

Ray strutted into the Persona dressing room much like the diva she is and fashionably took off her sunglasses to offer the star struck boys a dazzling smile.

“She's your special guest?” Kuu asked Saeko while not removing his graze from Japan's number 1 diva.

Saeko nodded with a small smile on her face.

“Ray-san...I've always been a big fan of yours,” Riku began as he started to wipe down his hand against his pants, to make sure they are clean. “May I...shake hands with you?”

The other members of Persona began doing the same wiping their hands to make sure they are clean, while Riku began to slowly extend his hand out towards the diva to shake. And just when Ray extended her hand out to shake Riku's a rather large and hairy looking hand made it's way towards Ray's hands before Riku's did, shocking everyone in the room.

“Ehh?!”

“Ray I am so very moved that you would be right here in this same room as me! Breathing the same air as I. Ray, please sing a duet with me.” The man exclaimed excitedly.

“Eh, You?!” Kai held onto the tall man's shoulders getting a better look at him. “You're that jerk guy, what are you doing in our dressing room?” Kai aggressively spat at him.

The tall guy shrugged off Kai's hands and looked at Ray giving her weird looking goo-goo eyes. “Where ever my beautiful Ray is I shall be as well.”

“Hmp,” Ray scoffed looking the guy up and down as he stood there in janitorial clothing. “Ordinary.”

“Ordinary?” The members of Persona repeated, dumfounded.

Ray shook her head as if correcting herself. “No...worse than that. If I am like high-class caviar, you're...hmm,” Ray hummed with a slightly evil grin on her face. “Fish crap.”

Everyone in the room froze from Ray's rudeness. The tall janitor guy had a look of absolute devastation on his face.


“For fish crap and caviar to stand on the same stage and sing with each other...”Ray paced around the room slowly. “Makes me sick to my stomach. Just give up that ridiculous dream of yours and please do me a favor and disappear.” As the diva finished spitting out her nasty insults to the poor jerk of a janitor she sat down on a couch that was in the dressing room, completely oblivious to all the different range of reactions from the persona boys she was receiving. While Rin, Min and Kuu had looks of complete shock on their faces, Sai, Jun and Riku had disappointed looks on their faces. While on the other hand Kai looked absolutely outraged.

“You ugly women!” He erupted taking fearless steps closer to the diva. “What's wrong with someone clinging to a dream? You might be some big star, but I am not in the least thankful to be in the presence of someone with such an ugly personality.”

Riku being the leader of the group tried to calm down the raging down by placing a hand on his shoulder. “Hey! Why are you saying  such things to Ray?”

“Let go!” Kai pushed Riku away, a bit too roughly than he intended, causing the taller member to fall back and crash into the table that was behind him getting splashed with water.

“Riku!” Kuu called out as he checked to see if the other guy had injured himself in anyway. While the 4 boys of Persona just stood there and watched as Kai continued to scold Ray.

“You'll continue to live all alone if you don't fix that ugly personality of yours.” Kai continued with his rant as he neared himself towards Ray grabbing her hand and pulling her up so that she was standing.

And before Kai could say anymore to Japan's No.1 diva Saeko had finally bolted into action charging towards Kai and shoving him away.

“I AM SO SORRY.” Saeko begged as she bowed down, pleading for Ray's forgivness.

But Ray was too absorbed in her thoughts as she pouted and dashed out of the dressing room. Sarukawa sighed heavily and followed after Ray. “Ray!” Sarukawa shook his head. “That girl...” And chased after her.

~~

“Ah...” Takamina whined as she rubbed her bottom where she received countless and ruthless strikings from Saeko and her whip.

Ami smiled softly watching Takamina sit down and join her on the living room couch. “Saeko really went all out huh?”

Takamina nodded, “She told me if I ever was mean to Ray ever again I'd receive a beating that's ten times worse.”

“Ten times worse...” Ami winced. “Yikes, that doesn't sound too fun. But it shouldn't be too hard to be a little nice to Ray, she is Japan's number 1 diva.”

“I wouldn't care if she was the queen of England, but with an attitude like hers someone needs to put her in place.”

Ami nodded, “You do have a point, but let's just hope Saeko won't be too harsh with that.”

Takamina squinted her eyes in annoyance, “That L, she's just picking on me.” Takamina pouted.

Ami smiled and was about to respond to Takamina's comment when Takamina suddenly snapped her fingers. “Oh!” Taking out a small piece of paper from her pants' pocket Takamina smiled at Ami. “It's Maeda-san's phone number, we promised to message her remember?”

“Oh yeah,” Ami smiled and took out her phone and saved Atsuko number onto her phone. “So...should we send her a message right now?”

Takamina nodded and looked at the time, “Yeah, let's do it now.”

Kai's Messages:
'To: Maeda Atsuko
Sent: 9:05pm
Hey Atsuko-san, it's me Kai. ( ̄▽ ̄)ノ
Just sending you a message like I said I would.
Hope you're doing good.'

'From: Maeda Atsuko
Received: 9:09pm
Kai! ヾ(^∇^)
I'm so glad you actually messaged me!
I've been waiting for your message.
Thanks for wishing me well, hope you're all good too.'

'To:Maeda Atsuko
Sent: 9:11pm
Oh wow! You reply so quickly.
I'm good as well, just sitting around not doing much ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌
How about you? What are you up to?'

'From; Maeda Atsuko
Received: 9:16 pm
Yes, my replies are quick because I'm not doing much at the moment, just in my dressing room waiting for my cue to do a TV show recording.
Not doing much sounds pretty relaxing.
And oh! I gotta go now producers just called me in. Talk to you later (^o^)/ '

'To: Maeda Atsuko
Sent: 9: 17pm
Alright good luck on your TV recording!
Talk you soon.'

Min's Messages:
'To: Maeda-san
Sent: 9:05pm
Maeda-san! ( ・ω・)ノ
It's me, Min from Persona.
Hope you didn't forget me yet ( ´∀`)
I apologize for the sudden message, but Kai and I did promise to message you, so this is my message to you!
Wishing you the best of luck!'

'From: Maeda-san
Received: 9:06pm
Min! ヾ(@⌒ー⌒@)ノ
Forget you? Ha! Never, remember I'm your number one fan I can't forget you or the other members of Persona, even though I only really know you and Kai (⌒_⌒;)
But I will learn the other members names soon!
No need for apologies I love sudden and unexpected messaged the best!
Thanks for wishing me luck, I wish you and Perosna the best of luck as well!'

'To: Maeda-san
Sent: 9:10pm
Haha, well that's good to know. I'm glad to know that I won't be forgotten <( ̄︶ ̄)>
Have no fear! With the assistance of the great and all name knowing Min you shall know all of the names of every Persona member in no time!
Thanks for wishing us luck, it means tons to us.
So what's up? ♪(´ε` ) '

'From: Maeda-san
Received: 9:15pm
Great to know that I have the great and all name knowing Min's help.
I feel honored “ヽ(´▽`)ノ”
I'm actually in my dressing waiting to called in for a TV show recording, which the producers just called me out for so I'll talk you laterrrrr.'

'To: Maeda-san
Sent: 9:17pm
Good Good honored is the way you should feel will the help of the great Min!
I see, well then I wish you the mostest luck, which if course you don't need because you are Maeda Atsuko. Talk you later (`・ω・´)ゞ Saluteeeee.'

TBC
I just thought that the messages was an okay way to end this chap. I hope you all enjoyed. And Again I am sooooo sorry about the loooong unannouced/unexpected haitus. I will try to update in a better fashion, and I hope you all didn't find chapter too boring or too short. You guys have no idea how many times I had to re-write this chapter to finally be happy with it. But time to say bye bye cause it like late here and I'm sleepy. So I apologize for any spelling or grammar errors being I didn't read over this and also English is not my first language. Thank you and I hope you all enjoyed this update even though it was short.
Oh! But wait, to make up for the shortness in this chapter and the slooooowness of the update I put together a little extra-something for you guys. I'll post it up soon and hope you guys find it amusing or cool :>
Well that's it for now Takanyan out!  :byebye:


Offline olive29

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 407
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #50 on: September 21, 2013, 05:34:56 AM »
FINALLY.. AN UPDATE !!!!  :bow:

Whew..will Ray also fall in love with Kai?? How about Atsuko??

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon, please.. :bow:

Offline cisda83

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 3088
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #51 on: September 21, 2013, 08:37:35 AM »
An update at last..

Ah... You put the short scene on Mendol to this

Here next... Ray started to like Kai...?

What about Atsuko?

Would you make Atsumina or ray x Kai?

Whatever it is..,

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Offline chichay12

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 729
  • atsumina for life....
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #52 on: September 21, 2013, 09:38:21 AM »
Guess whose back. Yupp meh.
Finally ur back!! :on woohoo:
i was just thinking when u will update this..
and then kitaaa!!!
finally i can read again ur update!!

i want more atsumina momentssss please! XD
anyways..i just happy ur back!!
thank u for the update :on gay:

Offline kiruchi

  • Pinoy Alliance >:D
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 172
  • Soda-addict Aries. Caffeine is my blood.
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #53 on: September 21, 2013, 09:52:53 AM »
Finally an update in this one. :farofflook:
I'm happy but honestly the update left me hanging...  :err:
I want more character interaction  :tantrum: <-- Demanding
Just kidding... but please update soon  :pleeease:

Quote
to make up for the shortness in this chapter and the slooooowness of the update I put together a little extra-something for you guys. I'll post it up soon
I'm looking out for this one.  :mon innocent:

Offline BbSis

  • Girls love rules *.*~
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 582
  • Clean the nosebleed and keep reading/writing! @.@
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #54 on: September 21, 2013, 10:12:16 PM »
YEEEY UPDATE!!! Better a late update than no update :)

I was thinking about this fic two days ago :p it is so good to have an update :D welcome back o/

You know, I forgot who are who under the nicknames xp but it's ok :)

So we have Ray bitchy being scolded by Kai hehe the doors are open now for love lol I'll keep my hopes up for KaixRay hehehe~
Yabai! Rena got a crush on Sai! Fanboy Jun will need to put some effort to get her~
Nhyuu Mariko and Kuu :heart they are gonna have wonderful moments hehe
Acchan, I wonder if you will fall in love with Kai or Min...
And what Sasshi want to do with that recording?... and who is her cousin that made Kumi blush? Hehehe

I'm so glad you're back! Thank you for the update o/

<3
Sorry about my lack of activity... I'm kinda stuck in life...

My fics:
It started in a wedding (MariMii + usual couples) - ongoing
The fanfiction post thread (KojiYuu, WMatsui) - ongoing
The cry of a lonely star - ongoing
Oneshots
Oneshots at Perv area
 

Offline prof.j

  • Member
  • Posts: 21
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #55 on: September 22, 2013, 04:54:24 PM »
hi!   :wave:
I'm a new here  :D  however I was a silent reader before, and this is my 1st post   XD

i really like mendol, and it's rare to find mendol fanfic  :(
i'm glad to find your fic    :w00t:  :twothumbs

About the pairing, I prefer KaixRay than atsumina  XD  So there will be Wmaeda (I can see it when Acchan was replied Min first than Kai)   :mon determined:  hehehe  :grin: 

i'm looking forward to the next chapter :D it will be great if you can update sooner  :twothumbs


*sorry if my english bad*

Offline p-o-p-e-y-oppa

  • 48/46wota, SONE, Say A
  • Member+
  • Posts: 71
  • cuz Wang Feifei
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #56 on: September 23, 2013, 08:49:30 AM »
Best fanfic everrr

I fucking love nail art.
Fanfics.

Offline Amakuchi

  • きたりえ推し
  • Member+
  • Posts: 248
  • Retired writer
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #57 on: September 24, 2013, 05:15:25 PM »
LOL. With me on the NMB side, I thought I'd had second thoughts on your update... But I think it's encouraging me to go back to AKB. Nice update. Hope you'll update more. ^_^

Google+Facebook | FilwotaTwitter | Wordpress | Tumblr
-Amakuchi=あまくち=アマクチ=甘口-

Offline Haruko

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2345
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Chapter 4 + Personal Replies [9/20/13]
« Reply #58 on: September 25, 2013, 04:23:53 AM »
yey! new chapter!

Offline TakaNyan

  • ecchi
  • Member
  • Posts: 20
Re: What If Persona Had 7 Members? Special Snippet Series: Riku! [09/25/13]
« Reply #59 on: September 26, 2013, 03:51:27 AM »
Okay so haaaai guys.  :mon hi:
This is one part of the extra special present I prepared for you guys, that I mentioned before.
Though it's not very much, and it's not exactly bursting with excitement but I thought this would be a little fun thing to write for this fanfic and I hope you all enjoy this small little snippets series.
I shall reply to all comments later on when I update the next chapter for this.
Oh yeah, before I forget please all just ignore my terrible photo editing skills and the random large size of it  :sweat: I'm just terrible with technology  :cathappy:
So without any further ramblings of mine, please enjoy the randomness my brain decided to spit out!

What if Persona Had 7 Members? Special Snippet Series: Riku!

Let's Get To Know The Hot New Boy Band Persona!


Handsome Leader Boy Riku!
Full Name: Kojima Riku
Favorite Color: Red
Favorite things to do during free time: Hang out with my members.
Ideal Type: Nice girl with a good personality.



“Welcome! Welcome! Have a seat.” The reporter welcomed Riku excitedly as she motioned Riku over so that he could sit down in a chair in front of her. “So how are you this afternoon?” The reporter asked with a wide smile.

Riku smiled politely. “I'm doing fine, thanks for asking. How about you?”

“I'm great!” The reporter practically shouted, shocking  Riku a bit. The reporter then started shuffling through a stack of papers and pulled one out while exclaming, “Aha!”

Riku just sat quietly while watching the odd reporter as she read through the paper. “So your favorite color is red?” The reporter asked while never removing her eyes from the paper in her hands.

Riku nodded, “Yes it is.”

“Hmm, interesting...” The reporter continued to look at Riku's interview sheet until something caught her eye. “So your ideal type is a nice girl with a good personality eh?”

Riku nodded, “That would be correct.”

The reporter grinned while lifting one of her eyebrows in amusement. “So does that mean you currently have your eyes set on someone special then?”

Riku shook his head, “No, I currently only have eyes for my work, and work only.”

The reporter pouted slightly while narrowing her eyes at the Persona leader, “Well you're no fun at all...”

'No fun?' Riku thought. 'What did she expect, some kind of super secret scandalous relationship?'

“Ah!” The reporter snapped her fingers excitedly. “If it is alright with you Riku, I would like to ask you a few questions that weren't on the interview sheet.”

“Go ahead, I'll answer whatever you ask.”

The reporter smiled widely. “If you HAD to choose one of the members in Persona to date who would you pick and why?”

“E-eh?!” Riku let out, startled by the reporter's question.

'Well that certainly was an unexpected question...'

“Umm...I guess I would pick umm Sai?” Riku answered a bit unsure of his own answer.

“Oh really Sai, and why him?”

“Uhh...I guess cause he's handsome, and very energetic and I find these qualities very attractive.”

“Oh really?” The reporter asked while jotting down notes.

'Why is she...nevermind.' Riku shook his head. 'I think I'm better off without knowing what she's jotting down.'

“Okay so next question. What is your favorite group or artist?”

Riku took a couple seconds to think before answering, “Persona.

“Oh Persona?” The reporter seemed impressed and slightly surprised by Riku's unexpected answer. “So does that mean you consider Persona a much more talented better group than all those other groups that have also been working hard.”

Riku lightly shook his head, “No, I respect all the other groups and artist out there. But if I as leader of Persona don't say and believe that we our the best, then how am I suppose to exspect our group to succeed?”

The reporter nodded with a full smile on her face. “Those are some strong and beautiful words you've just said there, Riku.”

Riku smiled and bowed his head as a sign of thanks for her compliment.

“Well I think we're out of time,” The reporter began to say as she stood up and extended her arm out for a handshake.

Riku smiled, stood up as well and shook hands with the reporter. “It was nice meeting you.”

“Why thank you, it was nice meeting you as well Riku! And thanks again for letting us interview you!”


Annnd that's it. Hope it wasn't too boring or a complete failure.  XD I know it's a bit short but I really couldn't think of any other questions to include in here. But I would love to hear what other questions you guys think I should include! Oh! And let me know what member you all wanna see interviewed next. I'm thinking of also doing a Starr, Ray and Accahn mini interview snippet thing. Let me know what you guys think! Well thanks for reading and hope to see some comments from you guys so I know what Persona member to do next!
Seee ya.
Takanyan Out!  :mon bye:


JPHiP Radio (13/200 @ 128 kbs)     Now playing: Aya - Shelter