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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 7
« Reply #200 on: August 29, 2012, 09:34:42 PM »
Well you never know haha some authors like to kill off their characters but, Takamina is so sweet. I can't wait for the tenth chapter :D

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 7
« Reply #201 on: August 30, 2012, 12:21:15 AM »
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"Oi Acchan?"

"Yeah hic!"

"Oh great not you too."

"I'm fine talking little person hic."

"Come on I'm taking you home."

LOLLOLOLOL talking little person now I imagine that candy commercial AKB did, dancing kids but with the members head  LOLOLOL  :rofl:


Aww poor Acchan so she lives by herself that's maybe why she goes around and beating up yankees  :cry:

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 7
« Reply #202 on: August 30, 2012, 01:31:47 AM »
Oh~ I wonder what a drunk Kojiharu would do to Yuko hehe

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #203 on: August 30, 2012, 05:03:47 AM »
@Rukaeru: I'm glad you like it! I will try to make it more romantic and sweet in the future so I hope you continue reading!  :)

@Haruko: Who knows? Maybe Yuko had her way with Haruna. Who knows.  :?

@Crossing Crossroads: Well how you feel is up to you. I hope you continue reading the fic!  :)

@sasumiofjp: Now now we don't need to tell her yet. Acchan will find out eventually.

@mo-chan:Yeah Acchan's life is sad. But don't worry! Minami will be there to comfort her.  :P

@TakaminaBG: No Acchan's parents aren't dead. And Takamina in a white suit is so cool! Don't worry the kiss will come soon.  :P

@Wmatsui22: There will be more updates in the future so look forward to them!  :lol:

@Sasshii: But I'm not like some authors. I like to keep everyone alive and well!  XD

@Megumi: We don't know much about Acchan but don't worry. Chapter 10 will explain it all.  :)

@kahem: We'll never know. Just imagine what would happen in your own brain.  :lol:


Ok everyone here is chapter 8! School has been tough so it's been hard updating. But I will do my best! I hope you enjoy the chapter.
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Chapter 8

Minami was walking in the street a car pulled up to her. She stopped and watched the window roll down. In it was no one other than Sayaka.

"What do you want?" Minami asked.

"I need you to come down with me for a while." she said.

"Why?"

"Just get in. I'll explain to you on the way."

Minami got into the car and Sayaka drove off.

"So what do you need?" Minami asked.

"I need you to help me with something."

"What?"

Sayaka took in a deep breath before telling Minami.

"I need help with being more girly." Sayaka said.

"What?" Minami said with a confused look.

"Well for the longest time I've been called cool and always compared to a guy. But actualy I hate it and want to be more girly. So I came asking you because you're the girliest person I know."

"Seriously? Why can't you asking someone like Yukirin or Haruna?"

"They're all busy with other stuff."

"So you're asking me?"

"Yes."

"You're crazy Sayaka."

"Well you're the only person I left. I can't ask Sae because we're going out and I wanted to surprise her by looking cute. But I can never look cute because cute just doesn't work with me. But you look really cute with that ribbon in your hair everyday. It's like your signature look."

"Really? I never thought about it that way. Guess that's what it is."

"Yeah so I need your help picking out and outfit for me?"

"Sure."

"Great cause we're here."

Sayaka parked into the parking lot and the two stepped out. The store was one of the stores lots of girls Minami's age goes to. Minami just never goes shopping anymore because she's going to die anyway so what's the point of buying stuff? The two walked in and were greeted by the store clerk.

"Alright let's get started. I was thinking some cute and pink."

"Well then let's look around."

The two started search all the racks and shelves. Then eventually Sayaka came running over with a pink skirt and white blouse and a pink head band with hearts on it.

"Go try it on."

Sayaka came back out and Minami almost bursted into laughter. Sayaka looked so stupid in the outfit. Her legs were too long for the skirt and the shirt didn't look right. Not to mention the head band looked like a head light you see on cars.

"Why don't we try something else on. Here try this."

Minami handed Sayaka a random outfit she saw and had her try it on. When she came out again, Minami almost lost it. The shirt she was wearing was a puke green color and the pants looked too tight. The whole image didn't look right.

"How about this?"

Sayaka came out in a light blue dress with frills on the ends. But to Minami, she looked like an old lady getting ready for bed at 6:30.

"Try something else."

"How about you try on something. I want to see you how do it."

"Alright fine."

Minami picked out a plad skirt and a pink shirt that had a heart on it. Then she took a pink bow and put it on her head.

"You look so cute!"

"Really?"

"Yeah!"

From the side, Minami heard someone say,

"Look it's a real life chibi!"

"I just wanna hug her!" (I would say that)

"Let me try that on."

Sayaka tried on the outfit Minami tried on but when she came out she didn't look right.

"Mou why can't I look cute!"

"Well maybe we're looking at the wrong style. Let's try asking someone for help."

Minami found a store clerk to help them. She took a long look at Sayaka and then said,

"Your body type isn't really suited for cute. But I think I can make something even better."

The store clerk left and then came back with a new outfit. Sayaka tried it on and came back out. For once Minami didn't laugh and was actually surprised. Sayaka looked cute. She was in short shorts and a baggy white shirt that had a banana on it. It was a little baggy but it look just right on Sayaka. Along with some cute sandals and some bracelets, Sayaka looked cute.

"Wah this is perfect!" Minami said.

"Thank you so much for helping us." Sayaka said.

"Let's go check you out."

Sayaka bought the outfit and them left. Now they were on their way to meet Sae.

"I can't wait to see how she reacts."

Sayaka walked over to Sae and when Sae saw Sayaka her jaw dropped.

"Sa-sa-Sayaka?"

"Hey!"

"You look so cute!" 

Sae jumped up and hugged Sayaka.

"Thanks Takamina!"

"No problem."

The two walked away leaving Minami alone. But then someone snuck up behind her and tickled her sides.

"Hey!"

"Got you!"

Minami turned around saw Atsuko standing behind her.

"Acchan? What are you doing out here?" Minami asked.

"I was around." Atsuko said.

"Why?"

"Just because. Nice outfit by the way."

"Thanks I got it at the sto-"

Minami stopped as she realized something important.

"What?"

"I forgot to pay for the outfit!"

"Takamina!"

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I'm sorry this chapter is kinda short. I barely have time to update anymore. Please tell me what you think! Also to all my mayuki fans, I've started a new fic with yuukimoko-san so check it out. It's called Articficial Love. Anyways, I will do my best to update soon! 

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #204 on: August 30, 2012, 05:56:21 AM »
lol poor Minami is spending her final days helping out each member with a problem of theirs :P But it's becoming a happy & interesting life for her :) TAKAMINA COMITTED THEFT! Hope she went back to the store to pay for that lol :P & though short, the Atsumina moment in the end was cute ^^ Thanks for the update even with your busy schedual. Wish you luck with that by the way :D

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #205 on: August 30, 2012, 06:28:30 AM »
OMG!! takamina is a robber... jajaja cute chapter

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #206 on: August 30, 2012, 09:01:59 AM »
Takamina.... You ae so stupid and a robber!!!!
How can you live a store with out paying????
Takamna is a good person helping others with their problems.
I HOPE she WONT Die (or I hope you wont kill her :D)
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #207 on: August 30, 2012, 11:34:17 AM »
baka ne Takamina wa  :hiakhiakhiak: :wahaha:

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #208 on: August 30, 2012, 12:44:27 PM »
*imagining what Kojiharu did to Yuko*... OMG brain!
I think cute don't really suit Sayaka. Sayaka is pretty and sexy hehe

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 8
« Reply #209 on: August 30, 2012, 09:57:42 PM »
 :rofl: Sayaka trying to be cute!

Well personally I think that Sayaka is surely a pretty person  XD
She had become a truly beauty trough years.  :wub:


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"Just because. Nice outfit by the way."

"Thanks I got it at the sto-"

Minami stopped as she realized something important.

"What?"

"I forgot to pay for the outfit!"

"Takamina!"

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 9
« Reply #210 on: August 31, 2012, 03:55:27 AM »
@arrow27: Thank you for understanding! And yes Minami went back to pay for the clothes. She is the captain of AKB and it's her job to help the other members.  :)

@Haruko: Minami is a theif! But I made sure she paid it!  XD

@TakaminaBG: She is stupid sometimes but that's why I love her. And don't worry, THERE WILL BE NO KILLING!  :)

@mo-chan: Indeed. Indeed she is.  :lol:

@kahem: I agree Sayaka is cool. But she can act pretty darn cute and that sets my moe meter through the roof!  :wub: :inlove:

@Megumi: Sayaka has become a goddess who I worship and pray to everyday! Thank you for liking the chapter.  :wub:

Well here is the next chapter! The big kiss scene will come after this one so I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 9

(Day 9)

Minami was in the middle of class when Acchan suddenly came running in.

"Takamina guess what!" Atsuko said.

"Acchan I'm in the middle of class. Wait until after." Minami said.

"But I have to tell you now!"

"Acchan no!"

"Maeda-san you are disrupting class. Please leave the room." the teacher said.

"But this is really important!"

"Make it quick."

"Ok. Takamina look what I found!"

Atsuko pulled out an old photo book of Minami back when she was in grade school. She looked a lot different back then and hated it. She thought she threw that old book out but Atsuko must've had a copy.

"Look it's me and you back in grade school!"

Atsuko pointed to the picture of Minami and her on the swing set. That picture was really embarrassing because in the picture Minami was upside down flashing her underwear at the camera.

"Takamina you looked so cute!"

"Let me see!"

"Me too!"

Everyone started to gather around Atsuko to see Minami.

"This is worse than my own mother!" Minami thought.

"Takamina you look cute in this one!" Haruna said.

"She looks like a boy in this one." Jurina said.

"Takamina are you eating glue in this one?" Yuko said.

"That's enough!"

Minami took the photo book and threw it out into the hall. Then she grabbed Acchan and threw her out as well.

"I'll talk to you later."

When class ended, Minami found Atsuko waiting out in the hall.

"What was that all about?" Minami said with an angry tone.

"I wanted to show you what I found." Atsuko said.

"Why didn't you wait until after class?"

"I wanted to show you really badly and couldn't wait."

"You embarrassed me in front of everyone!"

"I'm sorry Takamina."

"Don't talk to me for a while. I need to think about it."

"I'm sorry."

Atsuko hugged Minami and then walked away. Minami felt bad about yelling at Atsuko so she tried to run after her. But suddenly her body became weak and she couldn't move. Her chest started thumping like crazy and she was having a hard time breathing. She fell to the ground and passed out soon after.

"Oi Minami!"

Minami opened her eyes and saw Mariko staring at her.

"Mariko? What happened?"

"You had an attack. The pace maker alerted me so I rushed over and got you. You're in my office now." Mariko said.

"How long have I been out?" Minami asked.

"A couple hours. The pace maker brought you back but you were still out."

"What exactly happened?"

"Well the only thing that could cause that is a lot of stress. Did you get into a fight with someone?"

"Yeah with Atsuko."

"Well there's your problem. Your heart rate went up to unstable levels and the pace maker couldn't keep up with it."

"So what do I do now?"

"Well I could set the pace maker to a stonger setting but that's going to take a while. So for now just take your pills and go. Try to relax a little and don't do anything that would make that heart rate go up."

"Alright thanks Mariko."

Minami took her medicine and then left. It was four o clock which meant Atsuko was just getting out of school. Minami thought she could make it in time if she caught a ride. She got on a bus and off to school. When Minami got there most of the kids were already gone. But she knew Atsuko was there because her bike was still parked. Minami walked into the school and started searching for Atsuko.

"Acchan! Where are you?"

Minami wandered the halls and still couldn't find her. Atsuko was no where in sight.

"Acchan!"

"Takamina?"

Minami turned around and sae Rena staring at her.

"I'm looking for Acchan. Have you seen her anywhere?"

"I think she's on the roof. She looked pretty upset to. I wonder what's wrong."

"Ok thanks Rena!"

Minami got up to the roof as fast as she could. There leaning up against the fence was Atsuko with a blank expression on her face.

"Acchan."

Minami started to walk towards Atsuko but then Acchan started to walk away.

"Acchan!"

"Don't talk to me!'

Atsuko started to run making it difficult for Minami. But in the end she was able to catch up to her and latch onto Acchan like a koala. She held on for dear life not moving and inch.

"Let go of me!"

"Acchan stop!'

"Let go!"

"No! Acchan I'm sorry!"

Atsuko stoppped moving. She looked over at Minami with tears filled in her eyes.

"You really mean it?" she said.

"Yes I mean it. I'm really sorry for what I did and I feel terrible. I wasn't thinking and I ended up hurting you. I'm really sorry Acchan. Can you please forgive me?"

"Hmmm...."

Atsuko looked at Minami with judgemental eyes. Then she finally said,

"Ok I forgive you but on one condition."

"What?"

"You have to let me take a picture with you."

"Eh?"

Atsuko reached into her bag and pulled out a photo book.

"I made this to put in pictures of you in it. Look."

Atsuko showed Minami all the pictures she took. Some of them were of her but most of them were of Minami. She had pictures of Minami when she was laughing, eating, sleeping, even studying. It was like Atsuko was her little stalker.

"Why did you make this?" Minami asked.

"Because I wanted to keep them as memories." Atsuko said.

"Why?" Minami thought atusko knew about her heart.

"Because I like to have them so I can look back at them in the future."

"Ok so you want to take one of me with you?"

"YES!"

"Alright then let's get over with it."

"Ok say cheese!"

Atsuko took the picture and Minami blinked from the flash. 

"Wait I think my eyes were closed." Minami said.

"Too bad. It's going in the book!" Atsuko said.

"No Acchan I want you to have good photos of me."

"I like silly ones too."

"Acchan!"

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Well there's chapter 9! 10 is coming up next so I hope you guys like it! Please tell me what you think and check out my OS and my new story with yuukimoko. Oh god I sound like a salesmen. Well check it out when you have the time and leave a comment. Thanks!

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 9
« Reply #211 on: August 31, 2012, 04:13:29 AM »
awww atsumina... I think that acchan gonna kiss takamina´s cheek :D in the photo :D so  bad

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 9
« Reply #212 on: August 31, 2012, 04:37:22 AM »
Aw, that was such a cute and awesome chapter :D Poor minami had an attack again. The end was great with Minami and Atsuko taking that pic together :) Thanks for updating, as always i look forward to the next chapter :D

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 9
« Reply #213 on: August 31, 2012, 06:29:34 AM »
Waw..
The story was so deep.. :'(
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 9
« Reply #215 on: August 31, 2012, 11:43:56 AM »
WOW!!! YOU UPDATE VERY FAST!!! (THAT'S GOOD)

I'M VERY THRILLED AT EVERY CHAPTER YOU MAKE :D

I HOPE IT'S HAPPY ENDING

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #216 on: September 01, 2012, 03:49:17 AM »
@Haruko: I don't know maybe. But I do know they will be kissing in this chapter so look forward to it!  :lol:

@Rukaeru: You want lovey? Alright then I'll give some! This two parter is going to be filled with lovey dovey so I hope you like it!  :)

@arrow27: Well I'm back and it's the weekend which means I will have plenty of time to update. I hope you enjoy the chapter.  :)

@Jessye: And it's not over yet! We still have a while to go! So get ready for a huge tear jerker!  :P

@TakaminaBG: Here is the chapter you have been waiting for! I hope you like it! I know how much you've been wanting the huge atsumina kiss and I will give it to you now!  XD

@Wmatsui22: Well of course the ending will be happy. Or will it? That's only for me to decide.  :twisted:

Well everyone here is the long awaited chapter 10 kiss scene! I imagined this all week during my classes and now I am here to show it to you. There will be crying, fighting, and even a little kissing. Who am I kidding, there's gonna be a lot of kissing! I hope you like it!
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Chapter 10 part 1

(Day 10)

For the past few days, Minami had noticed that Atsuko had not shown up to school for quite some time. She was thinking that maybe Atsuko was sick and thought about visiting her. But just a couple days ago she saw Atsuko out in the Shibuya district. When she tried to talk to her Atsuko only ran. Minami got worried and started to ask around if anyone knew what was wrong. She first went to Mayu and Yuki since Mayu knew about everything about everyone.

"Hey Mayuyu!"

"What is it Takamina?"

"Have you seen Acchan around lately?" Minami asked.

"No. She's been gone for a week now hasent' she?" Mayuyu said.

"Yeah I'm sorry to get worried."

Suddenly Yuki cut in.

"You know a couple days ago I saw her in the Metropalin district a couple nights ago in front of a hostess club. She looked all dressed up and stuff like she was one of the hostesses."

"No way!"

"Yeah. I even saw her walk in with a guy."

"There's no way Acchan would do something like that."

"I don't know but that's what I saw."

"Well I don't believe you. I'm going to ask Yuko."

"Ok well let me know how things go." Mayuyu said.

"I will."

"And as for you Yukirin I think you need to be punished for making Takamina upset."

"Not again!"

Minami went to the front hall where Yuko was latched onto Haruna trying to lick her ears.

"Hey Yuko I need to ask you something."

"What is it?" Yuko asked.

"Have you seen Acchan lately?"

"No not really. Nyannyan have you?"

"No I haven't. Now stop licking my ears!" Haruna said.

"But they're so cute!"

"Ok thanks for the help. Good luck Haruna."

"Don't leave me!"

Minami went to the main hall where Rena and Jurina were hanging around.

"Hey Rena have you seen Acchan around?"

"No I'm afriad not. Why?" Rena asked.

"I haven't seen her in a while and I'm getting worried."

"Well I haven't seen her. Have you Jurina?"

"No but I think Sayaka saw her today." Jurina said.

"Really? Where is she?"

"In the gym with Sae."

"Thanks Jurina!"

"No problem. Now Rena what do you say when you want melonpan?"

"Aiin~"

"Good girl!"

Minami ran to the gym where Sae and Sayaka were playing a one on one basketball game. Minami ran out and took the ball away from them so they'd listen.

"Hey!"

"I need to ask Sayaka something. It'll only be a minute Sae." Minami said.

"So what do you need?" Sayaka asked.

"Jurina said you saw Acchan today. Where did you see her?"

"Uhh up on the roof why?"

"I need to talk to her. She's been gone for a few days and I've been worried."

"Well you better get up there soon. She might have left already."

"I will. Thanks!"

Minami threw the ball and Sayaka took it and went in for a layup.

"Hey no fair!"

"Too slow Sae!"

Minami ran up to the roof and found Acchan staring out into the city. Minami quietly walked over and sat next to her. There was silence and then Minami finally said,

"Acchan. Is everything alright?"

"Yeah why do you ask?" Atsuko said.

"Well cause you've missed school for about a week now and I'm kinda worried. I just wanna know if everything is alright."

"I'm fine Minami. You're being an over protective dad."

"Hey I'm only thinking about you."

"Don't worry. I'm fine."

"Really? Then what's this."

Minami grabbed Atsuko's arm and held it up. She pulled the sleeve down revealing several brusies. Minami knew they were there because she saw them earlier.

"What are these?"

"They're nothing. I got into another fight."

"With who?"

"A really tough opponent."

"Acchan you're lying. I know you are. Now tell me the truth." Minami said staring right into Atsuko's eyes.

"I told you it's nothing." Atsuko said staring right back.

"Then why do you have these bruises?"

"I told you it was a fight!"

"I don't think so."

Minami pulled the sleeve further down revealing burn marks.

"You don't get burn marks in a fight."

"Let go!"

"No!"

Minami squeezed Atsuko's arm making her wince in pain. She hated doing it but it was the only way to keep her from running away.

"Tell me what's wrong!"

"Just leave me alone!"

"Not until you tell me what's wrong!"

"No!"

Atsuko kicked Minami causing her to let go. Atsuko ran away leaving Minami with a sore stomach. She got away this time but Minami wasn't done with her yet.

"I'm going to find out one way or another Acchan."

That night Minami followed Acchan home. Because she was small, she was able to hide very easily. She followed Acchan all the way home to some worn down apartment. Through a window, Minami saw Acchan walk in and sit at the table. Then a man walked over who must have been her father and stood next to her. Out of nowhere her father hit her knocking her down. He started yelling at Atsuko and kicking her.

"Acchan..."

Minami felt her stomach twist as she watched her best friend being beaten by her own father. There was a heavy feeling in Minami's chest and she didn't like it one bit. She was mad at Atsuko's father and wasn't going to tolerate it one bit.

"Don't worry Acchan. I'll save you. I promise..."

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Well there's part 1! What's gonig to happen to Atsuko? Well find out in part 2! Please tell me what you think and check out my OS! I'm going to update an atsumina OS so be on the look out. But for the meantime look forward to my next chapter! Oh and yuuki updated the other one I'm working on and I'm about to update it too so check that one out as well. Oh and I posted a new poll as well. I have alot on my plate don't I?

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #217 on: September 01, 2012, 04:00:55 AM »
Aww you lied to me.. you say gonna be a lot of kisses.. but -_-- poor acchan come on takaboy save your wifey..

jajaj kojiyuu scene make me happy like always

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #218 on: September 01, 2012, 04:03:16 AM »
Aw, poor Atsuko :( Hope Minami can save her!
& Lol @ Haruna yelling @ Takamina not to leave her alone with yuko :P Thanks for the update, i def enjoyed the chapter :D Can't wait to find out what happens next ^^ & Looking forward to your Atsumina OS as well :) Good luck ^^

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #219 on: September 01, 2012, 04:10:25 AM »
That chapter kinda just made me mad a little bit LOL I HATE HER FATHER UGHHHHH :banghead: Takamina better come to the rescue, she's not the husband in the relationship for nothing!

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