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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #260 on: September 09, 2012, 04:28:15 AM »
@sasumiofjp: I'm sorry for hurting you! But don't worry things will turn out good I promise!  :cry:

@Megumi: I know it's sad. But who knows? Maybe everyone will find out? Maybe or maybe not.  :?

@kahem: Yep but the problem will be solved! It will!  :cry:

@Crossing Crossroads: Well let's see if you know what's going to happen. Let's see if you get it right shall we?  :twisted:

Alright it looks like Minami is in some big trouble. Let's see what the cyborg has planned for our dying chibi.
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Chapter 15

(Day 25)

Minami was in the classroom when Mayuyu walked over to her. She slammed her fist against the desk making Minami look up.

"What is it?"

"I know your secret."

"What?"

Mayuyu took out her phone and showed Minami the picture of her and the scar.

"Where did you get that!" Minami said.

"None of your business. And unless you don't explain what that is I'm going to show this to everyone." Mayuyu said.

"Mayuyu please. It's kind of personal."

"So? Tell me or I'll show this to everyone."

"Alright, alright!"

Minami explained everything to Mayuyu and when she was finished, Mayuyu had that same emotionless face but there were tears running down her face. She was silent and then said,

"Have you told anyone else?"

"Only Rena knows." Minami said.

"So it's only me and Rena?" Mayuyu asked.

"Yes."

Mayuyu sat down trying to process everything she had just been told. Then she got a huge smile on her face.

"Alright I won't tell anyone. But you have to do something for me."

"What would that be?"

After school, Minami was now outside a manga store where a bunch of otakus have gathered. The thing Mayuyu wanted Minami to do was go into the store and get a new manga that had just come out. First 100 customers get a limited edition figurine and Mayuyu wanted. Minami was in the middle of the line and didn't know how long she was going to be there.

"Mayuyu why do I have to go in?" Minami asked.

"Because I'm currently banned for getting into a fight with one of the staff members. So you're going to get it for me!"

"Great."

"Oh put this on as well."

Mayuyu pulled out a pair of bunny ears and put them on Minami.

"Why am I wearing these?"

"Because you're short. wearing these will help me spot you better."

"I'm going to get you after this."

The doors opened and everyone flooded in. Because she was small, Minami was able to slip through all the people. She grabbed a manga and then ran to the register. When she got into the line, she was only ten people away. But then some big guy shoved her way back.

"Hey!"

"Get in line shorty!"

"I was already in line!"

The guy ignored Minami and the little chibi was getting mad. She was too far away and wouldn't make it in time to get a figurine. She had to think of something before they ran out. Minami stood there thinking when she finally got the idea. Minami took some nearby shock pens. She turned it up and then zapped herself in the neck.

"Oh my gosh someone help!"

Everyone ran over to Minami to try to do something and help. But then Minami opened her eyes and jumped up. She ran over to the now open register and bought the last figurine.

"I got it!"

Minami ran out and found Mayuyu.

"Here."

"Yay!"

Mayuyu took the bag and looked at her new figurine. While Mayuyu was happy, Minami was trying to catch her breath. Shocking herself was very dangerous and she could've killed herself. But now she demanded payment.

"Ok I did what you wanted. Now delete the picture."

"Happy to."

Minami watched Mayuyu delete the picture and she already started to feel better.

"Well thanks Mayuyu. I'm going home now."

"Wait!"

"I may have deleted the photo but the original sender is still has the original."

"And who would that be?"

"Jurina."

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #261 on: September 09, 2012, 05:04:50 AM »
Poor Taka has a tumour now! & wow, Jurina took that pic of Takamina and sent it to mayu :P @ Least the copy mayu has is now gone but I wonder if Jurina sent it to more people before Takamina reaches her. Great chap updates, I enjoyed them! Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next! Thanks for the updates, looking forward to your next chapter ^^

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #262 on: September 09, 2012, 05:22:28 AM »
aww minami.. please tell acchan T_T

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #263 on: September 09, 2012, 05:31:37 AM »
I knew Jurina would send it! Geez, atleast this chapter was semi-happy lol, waiting for the next chapter as always

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #264 on: September 09, 2012, 06:31:32 AM »
Oh no, I'm sure Takamina's going to have to do some crazy stuff to get Jurina to delete that picture lol. Ahh, poor Takamina, it seems like things are just getting worse and worse for her.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #265 on: September 09, 2012, 08:24:06 AM »
uh oh Jurina has trouble hehe
rofl I like Takamina technique hahaha!!!

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 15
« Reply #266 on: September 09, 2012, 11:17:22 AM »
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Minami explained everything to Mayuyu and when she was finished, Mayuyu had that same emotionless face but there were tears running down her face. She was silent and then said,
Mayu I cry with you  :cry:

But LOL still it doesn't stop her from using Takamina to get a limited figure edition  :lol: such an otaku.
Now Takamina had another problem...

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #267 on: September 11, 2012, 04:12:05 AM »
@arrow27: Who knows? Maybe Jurina sent it to a ton of other people. We can only hope she didn't.  :)

@Haruko: She can't find out yet! But she'll know soon. Very soon so be patient!  :)

@sasumiofjp: Yeah I guess it was semi-happy. Things are starting to get serious so let's get serious!  XD

@Sasshii: Don't worry! There will be good things that will happen to Takamina! Just give me time to think of them!  XD

@kahem: I wonder what Jurina will do. And yes Takamina can do anything!  :lol:

@Megumi: Mayu will do anything for her mangas even if it envolves putting other people in danger. Such an otaku!  :P

Minna I'm back! Time for another update! Also, the poll is really close right now between 48 Days and Mad House. Well just remember everyone, since this one is new I'm going to have a hard time writing a season 2 so I'm hoping Mad House. But you guys are the readers and as the writer I will give you what you want.
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Chapter 16

(Day 26)

"So Jurina was the original sender huh?"

Minami was in deep thought trying to think of a way get the photo away from Jurina. But at the moment she wasn't at school. Minami had no idea where she was. She decided to go look for Rena who would have the right idea of where she is.

"Hey Rena."

"What is it Takamina?"

"Where's Jurina?"

"She's at home taking care of her sibilings." Rena said.

"Isn't that what her parents should do?" Minami asked.

"Well Jurina's parents are working and the oldest is still at work so Jurina has to take care of them being the second oldest."

"Ohh. So where does she live?"

"You can follow me after school. I was going to go there anyways and check on her."

"Ok sounds good."

After school Minami and Rena went to Jurina's house. It was a small apartment room and when Rena opened the door, two kids came running out.

"I don't wanna take a nap!" one said.

"Me neither!" the other said.

Soon after a tired looking Jurina came as well.

"You two get to bed now!"

"Jurina?"

"Takamina? Rena? What are you guys doing here?" she asked.

"We came to help." Rena said.

"Great!"

"Rena onee-chan!"

The two girls ran over and hugged Rena's waist.

"Hello Kumi-chan hello Kanon-chan."

"We missed you!" the one called Kumi said.

"Onee-chan has been mean to us!" the one called Kannon said.

"Jurina be nice. They're only kids." Rena said.

"Just get inside."

Minami and Rena walked in and saw two other girls. When one saw Rena, she got up and ran over.

"Rena onee-chan!"

"Hi Airin!"

"I made you something today!"

The girl walked over and handed Rena a drawing.

"What is this?"

"It's you and me! We're together and we live in a BIG house!"

"It's beautiful Airin. I'll keep it somewhere safe."

"Yay!"

"Airin? Who's here?"

Another girl walked over holding a stuffed teddy bear looking like she had just woken up from a nap.

"Go back to sleep Paru-chan. It's just Rena."

"Ok."

"So these are your siblings?" Minami asked.

"Yep! Kumi is 7 while Kanon is 6. Airin is 5 and Paru is 4. They're not old enough to be at the house alone and my older sister won't be home from work until late." Jurina said.

"How do you manage all these kids?"

"Somehow I do."

"Well we're here to help so what do you need help with?" Rena asked.

"Rena you can help me make dinner while Takamina you watch the kids."

"Sure thing."

Rena and Jurina left leaving Minami with four small children.

"So what do you want to do?" Minami asked.

They didn't say anything. They just kept staring at her. Then Kumi said,

"You're short."

Minami was slightly agitated by the comment but ignored it.

"Yeah you're really short!" Kanon said.

"You remind me of a chibi character." Airin said.

"A chibi with a bow." Paru said.

Minami was now getting really annoyed. But she decided to do something to get back at them.

"Well since I'm short then that means you're getting taller which means...."

Minami grabbed Kumi and raised her high into the air.

"Grow taller!"

"Ahh put me down!"

"I got you!"

Kanon ran over and kicked Minami in the shin causing her to put Kumi down.

"Hey that hurt!"

"That's what you get for messing with Kumi chibi!"

"Why you!"

Minami started to chase the two around while the other two watched. Eventually, Airin went into the kitchen while Paru went back to sleep. At the same time, the front door opened and another girl came in.

"Hey I'm ho- what in the world?!"

Everyone froze in their tracks. Right now things weren't going so well considering the fact she had Kumi pinned to the ground and Kanon on top of her trying to bite her.

"Jurina!"

Jurina came running in and saw the girl.

"Onee-chan you're home!" Jurina said.

"Care to explain what's going on?"

"They're helping me take care of the others."

"That's your job!"

"Hey someone had to make dinner."

Just then Rena came in with Airin wrapped around her leg.

"Ahh Sawako! Welcome home!"

"Thank you Rena. Anyways Jurina watch the kids while I make dinner."

"Alright."

The girl walked into the kitchen while Jurina and Rena walked over and sat down.

"That was my older sister Sawako. She works like three jobs helping out mom and dad and comes home super late." Jurina said.

"She sounds scary." Minami said.

"Oh she's not. She's actually a very shy person and doesn't talk much. She only gets mad when she comes home and everything is a mess."

"I see. So including her that's five siblings. How do you manage?"

"Well it's hard to explain but we get by."

"It must be tough."

"Tell me about it."

"Hey Jurina I need to call my mom but forgot my phone can I use yours?"

"Sure here."

Jurina handed Minami her phone and Minami took the chance to look for the photo. She found it and quickly deleted it. She was about to give the phone back but also noticed a picture of Rena changing. Minami thought it would be funny to make Mayuyu mad so she sent the picture to her in hopes Yukirin would find it.

"Thanks."

Minami handed back the phone and then Sawako came in.

"Alright here's dinner everyone! Eat up!"

"Yay!'

After a big meal and hours of playing, Minami was tired and ready to go to bed. She felt like she had become a kid herself and was five years old. Sadly that's not true.

"Thank you so much for helping." Sawako said.

"Thank you for the dinner. It was really good." Minami said.

"Come by again sometime."

"I will."

Minami was about to leave but then Jurina caught her.

"By the way Takamina.."

Jurina pulled in Minami real close.

"That's not the only photo. I have copies. But because you helped me, I won't send it to anyone."

Minami only stared in shock as Jurina waved goodbye and shut the door. After processing what she was just told, Minami let out a sigh in relief. Then her phone suddenly went off. It was a call from Yukirin.

"Takamina have you seen Mayuyu? She needs to be punished for being a pervert."

"Sorry haven't seen her."

"Well if you do tell her she's in big trouble when I find her."

"No problem."

Minami hung up and smiled feeling proud that she got revenge on Mayuyu.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #268 on: September 11, 2012, 04:18:50 AM »
jajajja minami vs kid is so funnny :D

awww chibi paru aww :D

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #269 on: September 11, 2012, 04:49:25 AM »
Ha... ... :stoned: *Happy and speechless*

This is... It's just... Chibi.... chibichibichibichibi. AHHH!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :shy1: :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv:

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #270 on: September 11, 2012, 05:42:34 AM »
Haha as much as I love Mayuyu, I'm glad Takamina got her revenge >:) awwww chibi Airin is so cute. I can just imagine haha. Also it's pretty hilarious that Kumi, Paru and Airin are all older than Jurina in real life, reading them as little kids with Jurina as the big sister is cute.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #271 on: September 11, 2012, 05:38:34 PM »
What a cute family~
LOL! Takamina is a devil xD

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #272 on: September 11, 2012, 05:59:37 PM »
wow Jurina has many siblings!  :dizzy:
hehe chibi Airin loves Rena  :wahaha:
what will Yuki do to Mayu  :kekeke:
Takamina can do anything  poor Mayu :on lol:
Mayu will get her revange I'm sure  :ding:

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #273 on: September 11, 2012, 10:33:24 PM »
 :mon ko: Oh MY GOD! Kids everywhere!  :rofl:
We have a SKE cameo Kumi,Non,Airin and Sawako!  :thumbsup
Oh and Paru...I just wanna pinch their cheeks  :rofl:
What a total mess!  :lol:

LOL Takamina got her revenge on Mayu and it seems that she had settled the problem with Jurina
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #274 on: September 12, 2012, 11:42:48 AM »
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 16
« Reply #275 on: September 14, 2012, 11:55:27 AM »
First, Space Love!

Oh my! I laughed so much! Love your creativity.  It was so good I got really sad when it ened ;p I wanted to know maid cafes which gives away masions in competitions huahuahua

Second, 48 days!

Poor Takamina! Things are getting worse... Hope that tumor is a benignous one >< Acchan might get alone again earlier ><

Please keep updating o/ I'm super curious here


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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 17
« Reply #276 on: September 15, 2012, 02:41:25 AM »
@Haruko: Minami versus the children is a battle waiting to happen. I hope sometime soon...  :P

@Crossing Crossroads: Looks like you liked the chapter. Remind me to make a possible SKE fic in the future.

@Sasshii: I thought it would be cute to see Jurina as the older one since everyone in SKE sees her as an older brother character.  :)

@sasumiofjp: Takamina is a boss. She can do anything with just the touch of her finger.  :lol:

@kahem: Takamina isn't evil! She's the queen of all chibis! I love chibis.  :wub:

@mo-chan: Let's see what Mayu does when she finds out Minami wa the one that tipped Yukirin off.  :P

@Megumi: Yes everything is back to normal for Takamina! Or is it?  :?

@Wmatsui22:Thanks! Now I'm back and ready for action!  :)

@BbSis: Thank you for reading my stories. Check out the other ones if you haven't read them yet. I hope you liked the rest of the story! I'm going to make the ending really interesting. I hope.  XD

Minna! I'm finally back! Ahh so much school work. But now I'm back and because the weekened is here that means I can write more! Hooray! Now onwards to Minami!
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Chapter 17

(Day 27)

Minami was relieved to get the photo deleted off of Jurina's phone. Now she had nothing else to worry about right? Now she could spend the rest of her days relaxing and enjoying her days. Or so she thought. It was around noon and Minami was in the cafeteria. She was looking for Atsuko who she didn't see all day today.

"Hey Yuko have you seen Acchan?" Minami asked.

"Yeah she's outside with Yukirin and Mayu." Yuko said.

"Ok thanks."

Minami walked outside and saw Mayuyu talking to Atsuko. She walked over and Mayuyu had a mad expression on her face.

"What is it?" Minami said.

"Yukirin now!"

Out of no where Yukirin grabbed Atsuko and carried her away.

"Acchan!"

Minami tried to run after her but Mayuyu stopped her.

"Mayuyu what's the meaning of this?"

"This!"

Mayuyu showed Minami the photo she had sent her using Jurina's phone.

"What about it?"

"I know it was you who sent this to my phone. Jurina told me and because of you, I got punished by Yukirin!"

"Ohh..."

"Yeah so now this is your punishment! I'm taking away your Acchan!"

"NO!"

"Too late!"

Mayuyu started to running leaving Minami behind.

"Come back here!"

Minami started running but she remembered her heart and had to stop. She really wished she could sprint as fast as she could after them. But if she pushed it too hard then she could die. She had to think of another plan. She had to get someone who could run super fast.

"Now who do I know that runs really fast...."

Minami stood there thinking when she got the idea. She walked to the classroom as fast as she could and found Yuko leaning on top of Haruna.

"Yuko I need your help!"

"What is it?"

"Mayuyu took Acchan away from me. I need your help getting her back for me. You can run fast right?" Minami said.

"Yeah. But I don't feel like running." Yuko said.

"Please Yuko!"

"No. I'm not going to hurt my Oshiri sister."

Minami had to think of something quick if she was going to get Yuko to do something for her. When she saw Haruna playing her DS she got the idea. With quick speed, Minami snatched the DS out of Haruna's hands.

"Hey!"

"Give that back! That's Nyannyans!"

"Not until you help me."

"Yuko!"

"Fine!"

"Good then start running."

"Where did they go?"

"Somewhere outside."

"Then let's move!"

Yuko and Minami went outside where they saw Yukirin and Mayuyu siting on a bench. Minami walked over to them and asked,

"Where's Acchan?"

"Don't know." Mayuyu said sarcastically.

"Where is she?"

"Sae let go!"

Minami looked over and saw Sae carrying Atsuko.

"What is Sae doing?"

"Yukirin got Sae to carry Acchan and keep her away her away from you." Mayuyu said.

"Are you serious?"

"Yeah. Good luck catching her. She's a fast runner."

"Well not as fast as Yuko. Yuko go!"

"No way..."

"Yuko!"

Minami had no choice but to go do drastic things. Minami grabbed Yukirin's skirt and pulled off. Then she threw it and it landed right on Acchan. Now Yukirin was in nothing but a sexy purple with black lace bra.

"Kya!"

"Wah!"

"Sae stop!"

Yukirin starting running after Sae.

"Boobs!"

Yuko started running after Yukirin.

"Yukirin! Yuko you better not touch her you perverted squirrel!"

Mayuyu started running after Yuko. It was like and endless game of cat and mouse. Minami thought she would just sit and watch everything happen. But then she saw Sayaka come out of nowhere and stop every one. She tripped Sae causing her to let go of Atsuko. She caught Atsuko mid air and let everyone else fall on each other.

"What the heck!" Mayuyu said.

"Sayaka!" Sae said.

"What is going on? Yukirin put a shirt on."

Sayaka took Yukirin's shirt off from Atsuko and threw it back on Yukirin.

"Sayaka why did you do that! Now I can't see Yukirin's perfect boobs!" Yuko said.

"Hey Yukirin's boobs are mine and mine only so back off you perverted squirrel!" Mayuyu said.

"All of you that's enough! Look Sae you come with me. Mayuyu go back to Yukirin and Yuko go back to Haruna. Takamina take Acchan and go."

"Thanks!"

Atsuko ran over to Minami and hugged her tightly. Minami gave Yuko Haruna's DS back and exchanged dirty looks with Mayuyu and Yukirin. Then they all went back to doing whatever they were doing.

"That was so weird." Atsuko said.

"Yeah sorry about that." Minami said.

"It's ok because you came to my rescue and that's all that matters."

"I did my best."

"Yeah. You're like my knight in shining armor."

Atsuko leaned in and kissed Minami on the cheek making her blush.

"You're my chibi knight."

"Hey!"

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 17
« Reply #277 on: September 15, 2012, 07:17:02 AM »
jajaj chibiknight so cute :D

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 17
« Reply #278 on: September 15, 2012, 07:56:34 AM »
huahauhauah You bet I'm going to check out your others fics o/ I'm sure you're  gonna be able to make an interesting end o/ Looking forward to it!

I like the chapter and I like chasing scenes o/

Can't wait next chapter *.*


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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 17
« Reply #279 on: September 15, 2012, 08:40:43 AM »
Yay another update!!! I thought you died for a miute there :sweatdrop: lol glad to have you back, it was a good chapter, nice and happy! lol Update sooner, almost fell out waiting lol jk, just update period and I'll be happy

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