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Re: Thank you - Kuminon
« Reply #40 on: September 23, 2012, 11:13:19 AM »
@okotteru : ahaha , no it's okay  :) and beside i didn't teel you the rule before too right ? i'm sorry too  :kneelbow: and glad that you feel relieve  :bingo: hope you like this one okotteru-san :hee:

all right , this is chapter 6 , i hope you guys like it  :kneelbow:
 

"where is it , where is it ?" jurina though as she keep searching. and then she saw a picture on the wall . with a picture of a animal like a goat got kill by many people with a knife and and blood spill out everywhere on the ground , and in the back of them , near the tree , there is a man , with a masker and a big knife . his face is covered by the masker so his face cannot be seen.

"what the heck?" jurina though . she's keep staring at the picture , and after a while , she though that she have to remove that picture , so she take the picture and put it on the ground . when she remove the picture , behind the picture on the wall , there is mirror , and it's reflect rena

"r-rena-san ??" jurina said as she keep staring at the mirror and she start to confused . on the rena side/room , the mirror looks normal , rena just see her own reflection and she start to fix her hair .

"r-rena-san ..? rena-san ??" jurina said many times but rena just keep fixing her hair . jurina waved her hand in front of rena face , but it's useless because in rena room , she doesn't see anyone reflection except herself , as jurina doesn't see rena realize her , she became even more confuse .

"this is sooo weird .... she can't see me , but i can see her !! " jurina though and take a step back , jurina sit on her bed , and watching rena fixing her bangs

"she's sure are beautiful.." jurina though and daydreaming , but it took only a while . rena go to her bed , and looks like searching for something in her bag , and then after a minute of searching , she take out a shirt and she smile as she look at the shirt

"...don't tell me..." jurina though , rena go to the mirror and start to unbutton her clothes

"sh**" jurina said as she is blushing , she walk to the door to go out but then she stop , her one side want to go out but her other side want to see rena body , she only stand in front of the door . and then she decide to take a peek at her back , she saw rena naked body only with her bra and her underwear , after seeing that scene she decide to look rena body for a while . she look at rena with a blush in her face , and she start to nosebleed as she just keep see rena body , but then when rena walk to the mirror , jurina face became more red like her face is burning , and she decide to close her eyes

" you gotta be kidding me " she though and she throw a light punch to the wall beside the mirror . on rena side , rena shocked that there was a sound beside the mirror , and she start to become afraid

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after that , jurina tell the story to rena , kai and acchan 

" very weird ..." kai said and he start to examine the mirror

"very very weird...."acchan said as she just keep staring at the mirror and put her hand on her chin

" well , as long as it's not bothering you guys , you guys no need to worry , and it's not a big deal !" kai said as he turn around and smile to them

"....it's a big deal...."jurina and rena though with a sweatdrop

"alright then , i will leave then , o yea and jurina , prepare for the punishment in the court later" acchan said and then leave

"...crap ! i forgot ! rena-san i'll be leaving then , see you!" jurina said fast and leave in blink , rena just stay still , not moving for an inch . rena just realize something

" ........ SHE SEE ME ONLY IN BRA AND UNDERWEAR !!??" rena though as she is blushing very hard

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"so- *pant* sorry .. *pant* i'm late *pant*" jurina said as her hands touch her knees , holding her to stand

"alright everyone except jurina , please follow miss sayaka" acchan said as she take a glance at jurina

"oh ,come on !!" jurina said still panting , and then sigh with a frustrated look , but acchan just put a smirk on her face without jurina knowing it

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"so ... we will go to the woods on that way" sayaka said as she walk and take a look back at all of the students , and then look back to the front.and then , after half and hour of walk , they reached the lake . the lake is so beautiful that can make your body , mind and eyes relaxed .

"for today , we will take a rest for day first on this zone " sayaka announced to all of the student , as all of the student mood become bright , maybe all of the students think that it is a very good decision that they will stay beside the beautiful lake even if it's only for 1 day . yuki and mayu go to somewhere else where no one know , while sae cursed herself for letting her guard down . yuko , like always skinshipping haruna in a public place , while haruna struggling to get away from yuko . kai and acchan was having a romantic scene beside the lake where there is no student at all . all of the student is enjoying the view and they're start to walking around the lake except kumi . she's though that now is not a good idea to explore and see the lake view because it was too crowded , so she plan to go around the lake when there is only a few student left . while waiting , she decide to make a tent first , so later she can relax . when she trying to make a tent , the wood just keep bend here and there . when she tried it again the wood bend again .

"what's wrong with you ?? " kumi though with a annoying look . on the other side kanon just giggled , she stand up and walk to kumi . seems like kumi didn't know that kanon is walking to her because she's too focused with her own problem .

"need some help ?" kanon ask

"ah , kanon . sure if you don't mind " kumi said and smile to her

"okay then" kanon smile back . after a while , they finally finish make a tent .

"thank you kanon " kumi said with a smile

"you're welcome" kanon smile . kumi looked around , she realized that there is only a few of student that walk around the lake , so she decide to explore the lake . she put a jacket , cap and her necklace on .

" where are you going ?" kanon ask .

" well.. i want to go around the lake and see the view .. you want to come with me ?" kumi said

"okay , i will come with you" kanon said with a cute smile , make kumi blush a little without kanon know .

"let's go then" kumi said as she tried to hide her blush . kanon just nod . they walk and walk and walk around the lake and they are having a conversation happily . not knowing the time , it's already night .

" it's already dark .. i think we should go back , they're start to preparing the food " kumi said as she look to the camp from far away.

"yes , the lights was so bright , i even can see our friends shadow " kanon said . after that , they walk back to the camp , but there's a sound of roar .

"what......was that ?" kumi said with a confused look

" i-i think it's a wild animal .." kanon said with a creep out look

" we better run , but don't make any sound " kumi said as kanon nod . they start to run quietly but stop when kanon feel something touch her shoulder .

"KYAAAAAA!!!" kanon shout , freak out and then run to kumi and hug her . kumi blush by the sudden movement

"woa , woa .. easy there sis .." kanon know who's that voice are , it's her sister , jurina , kanon sigh in relieve knowing that it's her own sister .

"e-err...kanon..?" kumi said stuterring . kanon look at kumi , and realize that she hug her tightly , kanon blush and immediately step back fast

"so-sorry , kumi" kanon said while kumi scratch her cheek with her finger with a blush .

"i-it's okay" kumi said shyly with a smile . but suddenly there's a crack from behind them . jurina , peek back , and saw something very dangerous .  a dangerous animal called bear , and the worst is , it's a wild bear .

"...oh my God.." jurina , kumi and kanon though . and in one time , they all start to run for they life . they all run and run and run , kanon and jurina manage to run from that bear but kumi isn't. kanon and jurina look around but they don't found kumi anywhere .

"this is bad... very very bad ... i think we have to inform this to the teachers , let go back first and inform them !!" jurina said as she panting , kanon agree and they start to run to where the camp was placed.

" kumi , wait for a while , i will definitely find you !!" kanon though with a worry face on her face .

*kumi pov*

" oh my God .. it's a bear , more worst it's a wild bear !! " i though as i keep running for my life , i see that bear is chasing after kanon and jurina . don't want they to get hurt , i whistle that bear and start to dispers from kanon and jurina was , that bear seems distracted by my whistle and start to chasing me ,  i go inside the woods , not knowing that going alone inside the woods is very dangerous . i ran as fast as i can not knowing where to go . beacuse it's a little foggy , i fall down because of a tree root . and when i want to stand up , i saw a shadow in front of me . the bear is staring at me with a hungry look . at that time my vision become black . seems that i fainted  because of fear . when i open my eyes , my vision was still blurry . i only know that it's already morning because there is a sunlight , and after a while trying to focused my vision . i open my eyes , my vision already not blurry and i can see clearly know , there is a girl with a long hair kneeling in front of me and she's staring at me with a warm eyes . i must say that she's pretty and moreover , because on sunlight effect , she become more pretty .

"e-eh?" i said

TBC

so , i hope you guys like this one , and is this short  :? i'm so sorry if this is short and i'm sorry for the mistake if there was and sorry if it's boring ..  :cry: if you guys don't mind please comment or critic it  :on ksweat: and thank you for all the readers  :kneelbow: i will try more for the next chapter  :bingo:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon
« Reply #41 on: September 23, 2012, 11:35:38 AM »
The wmatsui part was lovely~ Jurina saw Rena almost naked~?! 


thanks for the update~....but what happened to Mayuki? they leaved to a place no one knows? that sounds misteryous~
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« Reply #42 on: September 23, 2012, 11:51:16 PM »
 :shocked Weird really weird LOL Jurina couldn't resist...  :rofl:

This is just hilarious!
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Re: Thank you - Kuminon
« Reply #43 on: September 27, 2012, 03:56:32 PM »
ahaha , kanon is so cute and kumi was so sweet  :lol: i just read it yesterday actually  :bingo: poor kumi family , i feel pity for her  :cry: i'ts because of that guy :mon uggh: :mon headbang: and a trip , yes !!  :mon beam: lol jurina see rena almost naked  :rofl:  :on spit: and kanon kumi jurina got attack by a bear  :shocked wonder who's that girl is  :dunno: i'm looking forward for the next chapter  :nya:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon
« Reply #44 on: September 29, 2012, 05:00:12 PM »
@yuukimoko : yup, Jurina almost see rena naked  :lol: and yea mayuki go to their secret place   :on lol: :bigdeal: thank you , i hope you like this chapter  :hee:

@megumi : yes , what a weird picture and mirror isn't it  :smhid thank you , and i hope you like this chapter  :oops:  :hee:

@seighcretz : yea , poor kumi family :'(  about that girl , you will know it in this chapter  :) thank you and hope you like this chapter   :hee:

so this is chapter 7 , i hope you guys like it
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*Kumi pov*

" oh my God .. it's a bear , more worst it's a wild bear !! " i though as i keep running for my life , i see that bear is chasing after Kanon and Jurina . don't want they to get hurt , i whistle that bear and start to disperse from Kanon and Jurina was , that bear seems distracted by my whistle and start to chasing me ,  i go inside the woods , not knowing that going alone inside the woods is very dangerous . i ran as fast as i can not knowing where to go . because it's a little foggy , i fall down because of a tree root . and when i want to stand up , i saw a shadow in front of me . the bear is staring at me with a hungry look . at that time my vision become black . seems that i fainted  because of fear . when i open my eyes , my vision was still blurry . i only know that it's already morning because there is a sunlight , and after a while trying to focused my vision . i open my eyes , my vision already not blurry and i can see clearly know , there is a girl with a long hair kneeling in front of me and she's staring at me with a warm eyes . i must say that she's pretty and moreover , because on sunlight effect , she become more pretty .

"e-eh?" i said

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few minutes have past but none of them speak . they just keep looking at each other eyes . Kumi feels that there is something familiar on that girl eyes . but then , that girl decide to break the silent .

"you .... okay ?" that girl ask . kumi just nod as a yes , she keep look at that girl eyes . kumi though there's something familiar in her eyes .

"... i saw you got attack by a bear . i though you can get away from that bear because you are running so fast . but you got tripped by a tree root , and seems that you fainted . my friend see that scene so she decide to help you . she distracted that bear and because she's clever with a animal trap , she make a trap in a short time , and that bear fell into her trap . then , she said that i better take you to our camp and she will search for water . but until this time , she still not getting back yet " she said with a worry look when she mention her friend still not getting back yet .

" ah....thank you then .. and don't worry , i'm sure she'll be back later " Kumi said with a smile. that girl smile back too

"o yeah , by the way my name's Yagami Kumi , you can call me Kumi if you want to" Kumi said.

"uhn , alright .. Kumi... my name is Kizaki Yuria , you can call me yuria" the girl name 'yuria' said . not long after that a girl came .

"ah sayaka " yuria said with a glad smile plastered on her face .

"sorry for being so late ... aa , you already wake up ... " that girl said , kumi just smile to her

"oh yeah , this girl name is Yamamoto Sayaka . she's the one that help you from that wild bear " Yuria said

" thank you for already helping me " Kumi said

"your welcome" Sayaka smile to Kumi

"BTW , why are you so late ???" Yuria ask her .

" well , the story i like this.."

----flashback----

Sayaka ask Yuria to take Kumi to their camp , while she want to search for water . she know where is the wellspring located is , so she directly go to where the wellspring direction. and after a few minute , she already arrived . and then , she pour the water on a bottle . all of the bottle that she brought already filled , so she decide to go back to their camp . when she turn her back , she saw a girl .. beautiful girl that seems very familiar to her . that girl keep staring at sayaka face with a shock face , and after a few second , tears start to fall down from her eyes .

" S-Sayaka....?" that girl said , her voice is trembling but she keep looking to Sayaka eyes while Sayaka eyes form a tears too but she don't say anything , she just keep silent . but then , that girl walk slowly to Sayaka.

"Sayanee..?" she said , that sentences make sayaka ear twitched .

"..milky..." Sayaka said . this time her tears fall down from her eyes too. without sayaka know she got a hug by that girl named 'milky' .

"I-i though ..... you died .... on that day .. we don't find you every....where..." milky said between her sob , while sayaka hug back milky and rub milky head .

"shh , don't  cry , don't cry ....." Sayaka said as she keep rubing milky head . but tears keep falling from milky eyes , so sayaka decide to keep silent for a while until milky stop crying . 10 minutes have past , milky already stop crying but she still hiccuping . Sayaka just smile when she look at milky .

".....i'm glad that i meet you again ... i miss you .." Sayaka said with a warm smile , make milky blush slightly .

"....i miss you too..." Milky mumble looking other way.

"hehe .. i hear that .." Sayaka smirk . make milky blush more redder . and then without milky know , she feel sayaka lip touch her lip . at first , milky just stay still , but then , she kiss sayaka back . and then , sayaka pull back because the lack of air , she smile sweetly to milky , milky smile sweetly to sayaka too .

" I love you ..." sayaka said as she smile

" I love you too... " milky said but this time with a clear voice . and so they enjoying the few while holding each other hand.

----flashback end-------

"...so it's like that .. and guess what she said that i better go to her school , so i decide to go to her school later " sayaka said with a wide smile .

"ohh..." Yuria said with a not so interested look while Kumi just smile after hearing Sayaka story .

"......why do you looking at me with that face ? " Sayaka ask.

"well ................ i don't need your romantic story to tell us actually.." Yuria said with a sweatdrop.

"well i just want to tell you guys .." Sayaka pout , but Yuria just ignore it .

"nevermind ,  Kumi... we better take you to your camp too now .." Yuria said.

"oh yeah .... i forgot , they say that I and my friend will go to the woods today .."

"well then , we better go n-- E-EH !!??"

" w-what's the matter ?" Kumi ask in a confused face .

"maybe i mishear it ... today you will go to where ?" Yuria ask

"Today , we will go to the woods .." Kumi said , while Yuria and Sayaka face show a disbelief look.

" you gotta be kidding me..." Yuria said

"Why was that ?" Kumi ask .

"the woods in here is very very dangerous , we better stop them" Yuria said with a serious tone .

" okay then " and then they go to where the camp is ( kumi leading the way , because she now where the camp is by GPS )

" kanon , hang in there " Kumi though while Sayaka i thinking about Milky .

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*other side*

"where do Kumi go actually ???" Kai said with a worry look . the other keep searching for Kumi but still don't find her yet . kanon keep silent , her mind is full of negative things that maybe will happen to Kumi , without kanon know it , tears start to fall down from her eyes .

"sis ...." jurina said as she's approaching Kanon .

"Jurina...." kanon said .

"don't worry , we will definitely found her !!" Jurina said with a confidence look .

"yes ..." kanon smile back to Jurina .

TBC  :bleed eyes:

aih , i hope that you guys like it :panic: sorry if this is boring , and if there is any mistake , i write this in hurry because in my country , it's already late at night ... so i'm hoping that you guys don't get bored ..  :cry: and thank you for all the readers  :)

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« Reply #45 on: September 30, 2012, 12:14:56 AM »
Nope not boring at all it's very interesting  :twothumbs


And I had a hunch that the "girl" was Yuriiiiiaaaa *fufufu my guessing was right
But it seems that Kumin recognised Yuria but I wonder from where  :)
CAn't wait for next update!


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« Reply #46 on: September 30, 2012, 01:20:52 AM »
I want the same mirror than Jurina! lol

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« Reply #47 on: September 30, 2012, 03:48:57 PM »
 Uwaha Sayamilky make an appearance :shakeit: love it :deco: and that 'girl' is Yuria , eh ? Muahahaha , As I though :onionwhip: and yeah like Megumi-san said it's not boring at all :yep: it's good 'ya know  :thumbsup thank you for the update :onioncheer:

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« Reply #48 on: October 06, 2012, 08:43:13 AM »
my oshi make an appearance  :drool:  :farofflook: if Kumi with kanon i wonder who is Yuria pairing  :dunno: .. is it Yuria with Paru like in jehovachiabi-san fanfic ? :hehehe: anyway , gracias for the update and please update soon  :on comhere:

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« Reply #49 on: October 07, 2012, 12:37:31 PM »
@Megumi : thank you so much megumi-san  :) ahaha yea you're guessing was right  :lol: about that you'll see in the next chapter  :bingo: ( but i'm sorry it's still not yet finish , still in the process  :cool2: ) thank you for already spare your time reading this :kneelbow:

@kahem : ahaha , me too me too  :lol: kidding , thank you for already reading this kahem-san  :kneelbow:

@Kuro--Black : yea Hha , thank you for already reading this Kuro--Black san  :kneelbow:

@burakuaria : Hha , yea your oshi make an appearance  :D ( though i don't know who is your oshimen  :lol:  ) .. well about that .. i still don't know yet .. i'm sorry  :err: thank for already reading this burakuaria-san :kneelbow:

....i think i use too many kneelbow huh ? :lol: thank you for all the readers whether it's silent reader or not i'm very appreciate that , and i will try to update ASAP  :kneelbow:

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« Reply #50 on: October 14, 2012, 01:22:58 PM »
hey guys , i want to say thank you for all the readers and commenting .. i finally finish this chapter ..  sorry , i'm taking a long time to finish this , because i got many homework to do , but now i got a free time so i decide to update ... i hope you guys like this chapter  :)

Chapter 8
hour have pass but kumi still not founded yet . Kanon become more worried , she keep on searching for Kumi until she's become very exhausted . after a while , she sit on a big rock and wiped her sweat , she think maybe that Kumi was in the woods , she don't want the others to get in danger like kumi does , so she go there alone . but in the way to the woods , her sister , Jurina met Kanon .

"still don't find her yet ?" Jurina ask

"no , so you too , huh ?" Kanon say

"yea ... it's already been half of a day but we still don't find her yet .. i think Kumi-san was in a danger right now .." Jurina say as she think

"i don't think so ... kai sensei said this forest already guarantee that this forest is totally safe" Kanon complaint

"hmm ... then .. maybe Kumi-san is in the woods ..." Jurina say

"i though so too...."

".. how about we check it now ?" Jurina said

"well , now i want to check her in the woods .. i will just go there by miself , you just check her in the forest .."

"eh? but it's dangerous , i don't want you to be in danger like Kumi-san .. i want to come with you!" Jurina said

"but--"

"no buts !! even if you complaint i'll still coming with you!!" Jurina force Kanon , while Kanon just sigh

"what a troublesome little sister" Kanon whisper to herself

"Hey , i hear that !!" Jurina shout

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*Kumi , Yuria and Sayaka side*

"is it still far ?" Yuria ask

"i think we almost arrive .. we just have to follow where the point location is " Kumi said as she keep see her GPS

"o yeah , why we cannot go to the woods ?" Kumi ask

"... i will just tell you in short , see this symbol on my arms ?" Yuria said , showing a symbol , and the paint was like a tatoo

"woa , cool , what was that ? " Kumi said

".... see this little digital chip in the middle of the symbol ?" Yuria ask

"uhum"  Kumi nod

"it's a bomb" Yuria said with a serious face

"....i will take my words back then..." Kumi said

"you better ... Sayaka have it too in her arms .." Yuria said , while Kumi look at Sayaka , then Sayaka show her digital chip bomb

"..why do you guys have that ?? you guys better just take it of " Kumi said with a frightened look

" I and Sayaka try to take of this since long time but it cannot be taken off , even if you rip your skin ... you know why we don't get away from this forest from the first we got this chip?" Yuria ask while Kumi just shrugged her shoulder

" because if we still got this digital bomb chip on our arms  and we get away from this forest we will get explode , from the inner of our body ... our friends once try to get away from this forest , but when she cross the line , in a second her body explode  " Yuria said , try to hold back her tears , and manage to hold it

"...what the heck was wrong with that chip .. " Kumi though

" .. so .. if you guys go to the woods , you guys will become like us too ... " Sayaka said

" what's that suppose to mean ?" Kumi ask

"you guys will got this digital bomb chip too" Sayaka reply

" the ones who always play with human live , his name was Docter Forex ... beside us , there was many people that got this digital bomb chip ... most of them was girl "

" .. why don't you guys go to that ' docter forex ' places and find a way to cure ?" Kumi ask

" we once try to fight againts him , but we fail .... our condition even more worse than before .. our teamate .. all of them was dead , in our group only the two of us that survive .." Yuria explained

" i'm so sorry " Kumi said as she feel sorry for Yuria and Sayaka

"no no it's okay " Sayaka reply with a sad smile , while Yuria just nod .

PIP PIP PIP

suddenly there's a voice coming from Kumi GPS .

" Finally ! this is our camp .. thank God they're still in this place " Kumi said as they finally arrived at Kumi and the others camp

" KUMI !? " a girly voice called her name , she already know who is that voice belongs to .

" .. IT'S YOU !! " her best friend , Rena shout and then hug her . while Kumi just smile and hug back

"yes , it's me " Kumi said

" where have you been !? you've been missing in a long time " Rena said

" Well the story is long , i'll explained it later " Kumi said . soon after that , the other student finally realized that Kumi was back to their camp . Kumi got many question form her friends , so she decide to explained them later "

" this is my new friend , this one is Yamamoto Sayaka , while the other one was Yuria Kizaki " Sayaka and Yuria smile and then bow to them .

" nice to meet you guys " Sayaka and Yuria said in unison

" nice to meet you guys too " they reply and then bow

" okay , now eve--- wait , where's Kanon ? and Jurina ? " Kumi ask . there was a silent for a few second , but then

" i think i saw them back then " Yuki said

" w-where did you see them ? " Kumi ask

" back then , i saw her with Jurina go to the woods " Yuki said , then Mayu nod

" WHAT !? " Kumi shout in dibelief , Sayaka and Yuria face full of shockness , while the other was just confused . without waiting , Kumi run to the woods , make Yuria snap , and then run to hold Kumi . Sayaka said to everyone that they better stay in this place , so they juts stay stiil , except Kai , Rena and Yuki .

" Kai , it's dangerous , we better stay in this place " Acchan said with a worried look

" but i can let my students get hurt " Kai said

" i know you are a stubborn boy , so i will not hold you ... if you want to go , just go . just keep yourself safe and sound when you reach back here ... and no need to be worry with the other students just leave that to me " Sayaka akimoto said

" thank you .. " Kai said as he smile to sayaka , and then run to them , while Acchan follow him , making Kai stop .

" Acchan , you better stay there .. no need to worry about me " Kai said

" no , i don't want to ... if you leave , then i'll follow you . if you stay , then i will stay " Acchan said as Kai sigh

" fine .. just stay with me and don't get involve in a dangerous thing okay ? " Kai said

" okay~ " Acchan said as she make her finger interwhined with Kai , making Kai blush without Acchan know it .

" Yukirin , you want to go with them ? " Mayuyu ask

" yes , you want to come with me ? if you don't want just stay with them " Yukirin said

" fine then , i will go with you " Mayuyu said with a poker face

" such a cyborg " Yukirin though as she smile , and then they run to the woods

" Airin , i will go with them .. stay here and please take care of them " Rena said and then she run

"but..." Airin see that Rena was out of sight so she stop what she want to say

" just please be careful ... " Airin though

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" it's getting creepy here sis " Jurina said as she shivered

" and cold ... he-- "

"KYAA !!"

Jurina words was got cut by a girl , with a pink jaket , and she wear a ribbon .

" ita ta taii ! " She said but with a loud voice

" e-eh ? Kumi ???" Kanon said with a shock face , while the girl just plastered a confuse look on her face .

" ... Kumi ? who is that ? and who are you ?? " the girl ask . when Jurina want to say , she got cut again .

" baka , how clumsy are you .. " a beautiful girl with a brown hair said to the pink jacket girl .

" ehehe , sorry .. i got tripped by a rock " soon after that pink jacket girl finish her words , she got a punch right on her face and a blood show on her nose . Kanon and Jurina just jaw drop when they see that scene

" K-kumi , are you okay ? " Kanon ask as she move near the pink jacket girl

" hey wait ... who is Kumi exactly ??? "

TBC

i hope you guys like it , sorry if it was short and if you don't mind please write a critic , so that later i'll improve  :) thank you  :kneelbow:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon
« Reply #51 on: October 14, 2012, 02:19:32 PM »
Eeeehhh!! what happened? *curious*

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« Reply #52 on: October 14, 2012, 02:39:18 PM »
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« Reply #53 on: October 14, 2012, 06:19:48 PM »
Eeeeh? Who's that? Kumi?! No Jurina, Kanon don't go to the woods!

I'm curious....

Well, update soon ~

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« Reply #54 on: October 16, 2012, 06:09:29 PM »
Wonder who's that 2 girl :? And hurry Kumi before something happen to Kanon and Jurina  :bleed eyes: thank you for the update by the way  XD

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« Reply #55 on: October 28, 2012, 02:55:18 PM »
@Saeseki : Hha , glad that you're Curious .. I'm afraid that you will get bored of this fic  :sweatdrop: thank you saeseki-san , I hope you like this chapter  :)

@yvet_951 : uhn , I will make Wmatsui , but I hope you you'll be patience , because now it's still in the part of 'introduction'  :D thank you yvet_951-san , I hope you like this chapter  :)

@juRikki : I'm glad you're curious ..  :D thank you juRikki-san , I hope you like this chapter  :)

@Kuro--Black : thank you Kuro--Black-san , I hope you like this chapter  :)

So this is chapter 9 , sorry for the very long update .. I hope you guys like it :)

" K-kumi , are you okay ? " Kanon ask as she move near the pink jacket girl

" hey wait ... who is Kumi exactly ??? "

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" E-ehh ?? It's you ! " Jurina shout , still with a confused face 

" W-what ? What are you talking about ?? My name is not Kumi , My name is Dance ! Who are Kumi ?? You guys keep saying Kumi , Kumi and Kumi until now it's making me irritated " the girl name 'Dance' say while a confused look was plastered on Kanon and Jurina face .

" ... Eh ? " Kanon said .

" Ah !! " A voice interrupted them from behind

" Kanon !! " Kanon look back to the source of the voice

" ... Kumi ?? " Kanon ask with a shock face while Kumi run to Kanon and hug her .

" Thank God you're fine " Kumi said between her hug , while Kanon try to hide her blushing face . Jurina just look at Kumi and then look back at Dance .

" ... What on earth was happening here .. ? " Jurina , Dance and the brown hair girl though .

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" Yuki .... Yukirin ! " Mayuyu shout . Unfortunately , she and yukirin got separated and lost because of the fog during their walk in the woods .

" Hey ! What are you doing here !? " Someone shout , that voice seems so familiar to mayu . She look at were the source of voice are , when she look back , she saw a certain girl that she love the most , but a little bit different . The girl wearing a black jacket and seems very similar to someone that dear to her .

" Yukirin !! " Mayu shout as she run and hug the girl .

" Hey what are you doing !? Get of me ! " The girl said as she tried to get of from mayu , soon she hear giggle beside her , she saw another girl  with a scar .. she's tilting her head and biting her own nails . The girl push Mayu away from the black jacket girl  , making Mayu fall down hardly .

" Ne .... Okotteru ? " The girl with scar said , while the jacket girl help Mayu to get up , making the girl with scar frown .

" You okay ? " The girl with black jacket ask , Mayu just nod as a yes .

" Geki , don't do that " the girl with black jacket said as she scolded the scar girl , while the scar girl look down but still biting her nails . That scene make Mayu sweat drop .

" She seems confused ... I'm really sure that this girl was not her ... " The girl with black jacket though as she take a peek at Mayu .

" Say....what's your name ? " The girl with black jacket ask , but the question make Mayu become even more confused .

" ... What ? You don't know me ? It's me , Mayu ! " Mayu said frowning 

" .. I think you thought me as a different person ... I'm not the person that you know .. " The girl with black jacket said as she try to make Mayu calm down .

" E-ehh ?? But .... Okay , wait a minute ... May I ask you what is your name ? " Mayu said .

" ... My name is black " The girl named black said .

" I see .... So you're not Yuki ... " Mayu said while Black just silent .

" Ne ... What your name ? " the scar girl interrupted their conversation.

" Ah .. My name is Mayu Watanabe " Mayu reply , trying to avoid the scar girl gaze . Somehow , for Mayu , the scar girl gaze making her trembling .

".. You're not her .. " Black said , making the scar girl and Mayu look back at her .

" 'Her' ? Who ? " Mayu ask confusedly .

" .. I'll explain it later .. Do you have a time ? " Black ask

" Em .. I have .. " Mayu said

" Then follow me please .. " Black said as she start to walk , while mayu and the scar girl named 'Geki' followed her .

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*meanwhile*

"Oh no ... Bad .... Sure is bad ... " Yukirin though as she keep searching for her cyborg . She just keep searching , don't know where she's heading .

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"Wh-what ... Double Kumi ?!" Jurina said . Hearing her name being mentioned , Kumi look to Jurina .

" Double Kumi ? What do you mEANN ?????? " Kumi face show a shock face after she look at Dance .

" W-what happen ?? Am I dreaming ?? Who are you ?? " Kumi ask half shouted as she approach Dance .

" Hey , that's my line !! Who are you ?? " Dance ask her back and still with a shock face too .

" Stop it , you guys make my ear's hurt ! " The brown hair girl said , then punch Dance on her face , making Kumi jaw drop .

" Ouch .. " Kumi though as she touch her face , feeling the taste of being punch .

" You guys , follow me .. We will explain it all to you guys later " the brown hair girl said .

" Ah .. O-okay .. " Kumi reply , still putting her hand on her face . Kanon and Jurina just keep silent and follow her like an obedient kid , while Dance try hard to ignoring the pain that she just got .

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" We better keep stalking them until we arrived at the place where they're gonna show it .. " Kai said .

" But ... Is it really safe if we keep doing like this ? " Acchan ask him with a worried face .

" I hope so .. " Kai reply . Hearing that reply making Acchan face become more worried  .

" Ah ! I found you guys finally " a girl said not to loud , seems so happy that she find them .

" Eh , Rena ?? What are you doing in here ?? " Kai said loudly , making Acchan panic

"Shh shh !! " Acchan warn him . Kai realize it , and then turn his voice to a whisper .

" Of course to find you guys and the others " Rena said .

" It's dangerous ! You better go back now ! " Kai said .

" No way " Rena said .

" But .. you can make me become even more in trouble " Kai said making Acchan and Rena frown .

" More ? Am I burden for you ?? " Acchan ask with an angry face , Kai just realize what he said and think 'oops' .

" Hey , I can watch myself " Rena said and then continue to stalking them , leaving Acchan and Kai alone . ( I mean not some pervy scene because Acchan now is scolding Kai :D )

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" Here it is " Black said , showing her a big wooden house .

" Wow ...  big , but a little bit creepy .. " Mayu though . Then , she follow Black to go inside the house . As soon as the door open , Mayu peek inside the house and amaze because there are many girls in there .

" Yo Black ! And who's this cute girl ? Eh , wait .... She look's like someone ... " A girl said .

" Nezumi ?? " A girl with a short hair stand up from her seat and walk approach Mayu . But then stop by Black's hand .

" Wait centre .. She's not that mouse .. " Black said .

" Yea yea , hehe .. " The scar girl said then giggle , making Mayu sweat drop again .

Soon , a pop sound hear from behind Centre , making all of them look back .

" As I though you will come here soon or later .. " A girl with a pink hoodie jacket said as she chewing her gum . Centre look at them with a shock face  , but Black and the scar girl don't seems surprised at all .

" Who are you ... ? " Mayu ask , her face seems so confused .

" Let me explain it later ... All of the guest are not here yet .. So if you don't mind please wait for a second .. " As soon as the pink hoodie jacket girl said , Kumi , Kanon , Jurina already got inside the house .

" Mayu ??? " The 3 of them said in unison .

" You guys ??? " Mayu said back .

" Wait ! Don't start a conversation I will explain it all now .. " The pink hoodie jacket girl said stopping them before they start a conversation .

" Before we started , let me introduce myself and the others .. My name is Nezumi , sometimes others call me little mouse .. This girl with a black jacket is Black , sometimes she have a black heart so if you have a sensitive heart you better be careful .. This one is Gekikara , as you know she always giggling everytime and everywhere so don't mind it .. That girl who just greet black is Gachapin .. Oops , I mean Shaku .. This girl is Dance , she's popular with her clumsiness , and the girl who always punch Dance is Shibuya ... There are many more , but I think they're busy right now so I will introduce them later .. " The pink hoodie jacket girl named Nezumi explained .

" Ah ... Then , I'm Watanabe mayu , known as cyborg , this girl is Yagami Kumi .. Beside her is Kimoto Kanon , she have a little sister .. Her name is Matsui Jurina .. " Mayu explained .

" Right .. So I will explain about why our face look the same now .. " Nezumi said , all of them just nod .

" So .. You guys seems confuse why our face look the same .. It simple .. I , Centre , Black , Gekikara , Gacha-- I mean Shaku ,  Dance , Shibuya , and the others that live in this wooden house is a replica of you guys .. Long ago , there is a doctor named as forex .. He make a replica from the face of you guys by a mirror .. I don't know that is a magic mirror or whatever .. But it can copy face from anyone face that he choose ..  " Nezumi explained .

" Then ... Why do he make it the same as all of us ? I mean .. Why don't he make one of you or all of you guys different from all of us ? " Kumi ask .

" About that I don't know too ... " Nezumi replied . Soon , the room become quiet .

" What's this ? " A guy came out from a room , followed by a girl with a doll on her hand and a girl that seems the same as Kumi and Dance .

" Woa , is this another replica of me ?? Kakkoi !! " Jurina half-shout as she see the guy , making Centre pout .

" Am I not cool ?? " Centre though as she mirrored herself .

" Replica ? Is this my original form ?" The guy ask to Nezumi , then Nezumi nod

" I see ... Okay then , my name is Nobunaga , pleased to meet you .. " Nobunaga said .

" My name is Matsui Jurina , pleased to meet you too ! " Jurina smile .

" This girl is another replica of Kumi too .. Her name is Komimi .. " Nezumi said .

" Yo ! My name's Komimi , nice to meet you " Komimi said with a smile and offering a hand to shake .

" My name's Yagami Kumi , nice to meet 'ya !" Kumi said with a smile too and shake Komimi's hand .

" this girl over here is Kanon's replica .. Her name is Nantene " Nezumi said.

" N-nice to meet you .. My name is Kimoto Kanon .. " Kanon said as she smile shyly .

" Nante ne ! " The girl just said like that , making Kanon sweat drop .

" O yea , I believe Kumi already know that girl .. " Nezumi said , pointing her index finger to a certain girl .

" Wha , Yuria ?? " Kumi said .

" Yo " Yuria said .

" What are you doing here ? Are you following me all the time ? " Kumi ask .

" Nope , Actually this place is my camp .. The place that I help you is just a safehouse .. " Yuria said , while Kumi mouth form a 'o' .

" Hey yo , my name is Peace , I'm Yuria's replica , nice to meet you guys " Peace said. Soon as Peace introduce herself , a tall girl showed suddenly in front of them .

" Hello , my name's Torigoya , please take care of me from now on " Torigoya said .

" .. Cute " Kanon though . Then Torigoya look at her .

" Why , Thank you .. " Torigoya said with a smile , making Kanon shock .

" Ah , I forgot .. Be careful , she's a mind reader .. " Nezumi said .

" With her by our side .. I think she will know all of my secret ne~ " Jurina though .

" Yup " Torigoya suddenly answered it .

" ..... "

TBC ? :?

Sorry if there's a mistake or it's boring ... But I hope you guys like it and please if it's not bothering you leave a comment or a critic ..... Thank you very much :kneelbow:

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« Reply #56 on: October 28, 2012, 03:01:54 PM »
wahhhh~!!! so cool!!! I love this even much!

I wonder what will happen now....Mayu lost her Yukirin....w-wait! where is Yukirin?!?!?!?

Thanks for the update! it was really interesting!!!
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« Reply #57 on: October 28, 2012, 10:36:21 PM »
Genius!! And I wonder why the doctor made a replica of them! And.........

Hahaha XD yes Jurina! Nobunaga so KAKKOI!!

Eum, will you bring Nanashi Annin and others?

Well, I have to wait for the answer..

Thanks for the update :bow:

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« Reply #58 on: October 29, 2012, 09:41:14 AM »
Woah , Majisuka Gakuen 2 and 3 combined ?! :w00t: so cool !!  XD and yeah agree with Jurina , Nobunaga is indeed very cool. :twothumbs pffttt , what's with Centre , she's mirroring herself because of jealous with Nobunaga :lol: lol at the 'nante ne' phrase  :rofl: thank you for the update , looking forward for the next chapter  :D

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« Reply #59 on: November 01, 2012, 02:49:33 PM »
A replica , eh ? interesting  :glasses: and you know ...  now I'm sad because the announcement that Kumi will graduate  :err: but when I read this , it's make me lighten a bit ... thank you kuumin1234-san .. I hope you can update soon  :kneelbow: :oops:

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