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Re: Thank you - Kuminon
« Reply #60 on: November 05, 2012, 09:56:02 PM »
Oh now I see, interesting!

Thank you for your update!
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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 10 )
« Reply #61 on: November 15, 2012, 05:33:40 PM »
@yuukimoko : glad that you like it :D , and your welcome ... Thank you for already read this Fic and comment it yuukimoko-san :)

@JuRikki : hmm , you will now it later .. And yea , I will bring annin here to this Fic , but it's on the chapter 11 / 12 I think .. I already have a plan so .. Yea I think annin will make an appearance in chapter 11 / 12 :D please be patient ^^ and thank you very much JuRikki-san :)

@Kuro--Black : yeah , it seems that mjsk 2 & 3 are combined :D thank you for already read this and comment it Kuro--Black-san :)

@Seighcretz : uhn , yea , I'm very sad too when I know that kuumin will graduate ... But we can still support her , so cheer up Seighcretz-san :D hehe , and thank you very much Seighcretz-san :)

@Megumi : glad that you understand it and your welcome :D Thank you very much Megumi-san :)

So so so so sorry that I update it for sooo long ... I'm very very sorry :'(  and so here is the chapter 10 ( Sorry for the grammatical error )

Chapter 10 ---------------------------------------------------------As the others is chatting in the wooden house , in the woods , a certain girl is searching for someone in a panic state . She keep on searching until finally she found a girl , with a black hoodie jacket standing in front of a big tree . Yuki can't see his eyes because the shadow of her hoodie , Only her mouth that revealed . The mysterious girl with black hoodie jacket look at Yuki , while Yuki stop and stared at that girl with a suspicious look .

" Hello young girl .. " The girl said with a smile as she take a step forward .

" who are you ? " Yuki said , trying to be calm as she's not take a step backward .

" Ah .. You're quite a brave girl " the girl said as she start to smirk , making Yuki shivered a bit .

" Answer my question " Yuki reply . Her reply make her look up at Yuki . Somehow , Yuki can see her right eyes shining in red color , in her red color eye there's a weird and complicated symbols , and below her right eye's there's written a number , it shows '002'

".. You will know it soon ... Kashiwagi Yuki .." that girl said , as she smirk and turn into a dust and disappeared . Hearing her own name being said making her startled . Yuki then noticed that there's small box in the ground , Exactly where the place where the girl just disappeared .

Yuki open the box and realize that there was a piece of paper in it .. She took it and read it 'treasure your time like you treasure your life' that is the only word in that piece of paper and in the edge of the paper , there's a familiar symbol , Yuki realize that the symbol was the same symbol in the mysterious man's eye , and on the box there's a timer , The more Yuki think about it , the more she's become confused , so she just put the paper inside the box and then put it in her pocket , ignore it , and keep searching for her beloved cyborg .

When she was walking , suddenly her foot was pulled up by a rope , making her body floating in the air in an upside down position . The first thing she saw was a girl that go to their camp with Kumi and Yuria .

" Ah , I think I've see you somewhere " the girl said as she put her index finger on her chin .

" O yea ! you're one of Kumi's friend .. sorry for this .. I made a trap for an animal but unfortunetaly , you're the one that got caught " The girl said as she giggle , while Yuki pout . Sayaka cut out the rope that caught Yuki's foot . before Yuki land hardly to the ground , sayaka catch her and put her down slowly . 

".. Thank you .. " Yuki said

"Your welcome ... It's dangerous so it's better if you stay there , what are you doing here ?? Judging by your appearance , you seems not the sporty type so it's dangerous for a girl like you to go to this place" Sayaka said

" .. Well , I want to help Kumi and the others so I chase them with Mayu , but we got separated and so on here , I keep on searching for her but I still don't found her yet .. " Yuki explained .

" Eh ... I try to find them too , but still don't find them yet .. I think we could cooperate to find them , ne ? " Sayaka said with a smile .

" Uhn " Yuki reply with a smile too .

" By the way , my name is Yamamoto Sayaka , you can call me Sayaka .. " Sayaka said with a smile

" My name is Kashiwagi Yuki .. You can call me Yuki " Yuki reply with a smile too .

" Err .. By the way , I still don't have an idea how to find those guys , so .... Do you have an idea ? " Sayaka said .

" Hmm , I don't know too ... " Yuki said as she take out the box that she just got and stare at it . Sayaka notice it and decide to ask her what is that .

" What is that ? " Sayaka ask .

" Ah , I got it just before I got trap by your trap .. I got this From a girl with black hoodie jacket .. " Yuki said , Sayaka eyes widen by what was just Yuki said . This don't go unnoticed by Yuki .

" What's wrong ? " Yuki ask with a confused look .

"..M-may I see that ? " Sayaka ask to Yuki with a serious face , ignoring what was Yuki asking to her . Yuki have no idea what was happening all of the sudden in Sayaka's reaction but she just gave it to Sayaka anyways .

Sayaka open the box and see the paper . Her face seems so pale and shock , her body start to trembling . She fall down hardly to the ground . Yuki seems very very confused and shock by Sayaka's reaction . She go to the girl side and tried to help her to stand up .

" You okay ?? What's the matter ?? " Yuki ask with a concert tone .

" Oh no .... Follow me ! We gotta go , Now ! " Sayaka start to run , once again ignoring Yuki's question . she got no choice so she's just follow Sayaka to run .

" I've got to tell Nezumi " Sayaka though as she keep running .

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*Meanwhile , back to the base house*

" Why you guys don't go to other place instead of staying in this woods and jungle ? " Kanon ask . There's a silent for a while , but Nezumi broke it .

" You see this ? If we get out from this place , we will explode from our inner body ... We got this from a doctor in this place " Nezumi said as she show's a red big bracelet on her wrist .

" The same bracelet on Yuria and Sayaka's wrist .. " Kumi though

" Who is the one that can do such a thing ?? To play a human's life is a horrible things ! " Jurina said 

" Glad that I can met a kind human like you ... But too bad , we're not a human .. " Nobunaga though as she smile sadly.

" Why don't you guys go to their place to search for the truth and to free yourself ? You guys know where their location right ?" Mayu ask .

" Yes , we know it , but we don't dare to go there ... " Black said.

" Why is that ? "Jurina ask .

" Because .... It will be useless ... We once go there with our comrades ... In the past , there are so many of our friend in this place .. But when we tried to fight againts  them and steal the document , many of them are died in their hand ... We got no choice but to retreat because only a few of our friends that save from their attack .. Two of them is Gekikara and Nobunaga ... The proof is there's a scar on their face .. It's a traumatic past for all of us " Black explained , everyone face change into a sad one and they all look at the floor .

"I-i'm so sorry to hear that .. " Jurina said as she feels guilty because she ask a question that made the replicas remembered the sad past .

" It's okay " Centre smile a bit , soon the others replica recovered and smile a bit too . Second have past , and suddenly , the door open hardly , making a loud voice of bang . All of them look at the source of the voice and found out that it was Sayaka standing there panting . Sayaka walk in a fast pace to Nezumi and give her the box . Soon , Yuki show up , and when Mayu realize Yuki standing there , she run to Yuki and hug her .

" Ma-mayuyu ?? " Yuki says with a shock face , still panting as she tried to hug her back .

" I'm glad that you okay " Mayuyu said as she broke the hug and smile to Yuki , Yuki blush , so as Mayu as they realized that there face was just a few inches a way , they just keep staring each other for so long , and then Nezumi broke the moment .

" Get a room you two !! Don't do that kind of things now , We still in a conversation you know " Nezumi says irritated . Soon , the two of them back to the real world and look the other ways , tried to hide their blushing face while Nezumi face palmed .

"Oh c'mon Nezumi , we will do it too right ? " Centre said as she tried to kiss Nezumi cheek , but Nezumi stop it by her hand and give her a glare . Centre stop and look down like a puppy that get scolded by her master .   

" Back to the conversation , what is this Sayaka ? " Nezumi ask Sayaka that still trying to catch a breath .

" J-just open it .. " Sayaka said as she's panting

When Nezumi open it , her eyes widen and she's frozen , not moving at all . The others seems very shock because it's the first time that they see Nezumi in a state like that .

" W-what's wrong Nezumi ? " Centre ask , while the other replicas already sense that something bad will coming to them .

"T-this is bad ... Okay I will explained it fast .. For the replicas , we still have 45 hours before we explode from our inner body and we better go now to their place rather than stay here and wait for the end .. And for the others , I don't want to tell you guys this .. But if your replica got vanished , you'll be vanished too from this world .. " Nezumi explained , and everyone's eyes was widen .

" WHAT !!?? " They all exclaimed .

" How did you know that ?? " Kumi ask still with a very shock face.

" I will read it then ... A message from Forex : 'to all of my dear replicas , I give this box to you guys by the help of my special assist ,  Yuko Oshima .. I sent you guys this to invite you to a game that you will have to accept it , or else you guys will die , explode like all of your friend died . So , you guys have 48 hours before you explode and if you want to be save , just make sure that you guys can past the game .. Oh yeah , for the non-replicas , I invite you too to this game .. The rules is if your replica died in this game and vanished , the original of you will vanished too from this world , so you have to make sure to cooperate with them and don't make them died .. So that's it .. I give you guys the map where the location of the game was held ... And so hurry before your time is up ... And remember .. Don't let you replicas died and for the replicas .. Don't waste time , time is a treasure of your life .. So then , that's it ! Jaa~ ' " Nezumi finished it , and then , she entering a number to the box , and a paper that was rolled up by a tie pop out suddenly from the small box.

Nezumi open it and and see the location . She look up at them and give them a serious look .

" Prepare everything that you thing that it will help you guys later .. Everythings okay ! and hurry up !! We don't have much time left " Nezumi says , while everyone recovered from their shock state and in a no time they already got prepared .

"We have to go to their location now .. It will take about 3 hours to go there by walking .. Don't waste your energy too much , because we don't know what will happen in there .." After Nezumi said that , they all nod and so the game of the death begins .

TBC

Sorry if it was sucks or others .. And sorry if there is a mistake ^^" if it wasn't bothering please leave a critic or a comment :) thank you for all the readers that like it or don't like it , I really appreciate it :) 

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 10 )
« Reply #62 on: November 15, 2012, 06:27:22 PM »
Mayukiiiiiii! finally together!!!

I wonder what the game will be like? really interesting!!!! love the Mayuki moment.....

Thanks for the update~!!
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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 10 )
« Reply #63 on: November 15, 2012, 09:22:55 PM »
Whoaaa!! They'll be vanished!!  Noo!!

I wonder how the game like, and you bring Annin too? Yeaa! XD

Love your fic!! <3
Can't wait for next update..

Thank you very much :twothumbs

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 10 )
« Reply #64 on: November 16, 2012, 03:35:10 AM »
Yea , I'm curious about the game too .. Wonder what will happen to them  :hehehe: wow , the girl that give Yuki the box is Yuko ? Or should I say .. Yuko replica ? ( Or not ? ) :otomerika: ahh , I'm really curious now :ding: thank you for the update ,  looking forward for your next update :hee:

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« Reply #65 on: November 17, 2012, 03:43:19 AM »
Wait .. what ? that girl is Yuko and below her eye's there is a number that written in '002' right ? Exactly like in the flying get PV !! Interesting  :w00t: don't tell me that there is '001' ? ( aka acchan )  :hehehe: well i'm just guessing haha  :hee: Hope you can update soon  :stuffed: and i'm curious about the game too though  XD

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« Reply #66 on: November 26, 2012, 09:49:30 PM »
 :panic: Oh my gaaaa!

This is ahh I can't wait for next update!

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #67 on: December 09, 2012, 12:52:27 PM »
@yuukimoko : your welcome .. Ah , I'm glad that you feel that way :D  thank you very much yuukimoko-san :D :kneelbow:

@JuRikki : yea , I will bring Annin :D ah , I'm really glad that you like my fic JuRikki-san :kneelbow: ( because , sometimes .. I think that maybe everyone think that this fic sucks so yea .. I'm really glad that you like it :) ) your welcome and thank you very much JuRikki-san :kneelbow:

@burakuaria : glad that you're curious :D and yea , the '002' girl is Yuko ... Hmm , yea I think it was Yuko's replica :D your welcome and thank you very much burakuaria-san :kneelbow:

@Kuro--Black : uhum , yes it's Yuko and below her eye's there is a number that written '002' .. Yea , I just realize it after I post this chapter 10 , haha :D hmm , about that , you'll see :hee: thank you very much Kuro--Black-san :kneelbow:

@Megumi : ahaha , Thank you very much Megumi-san XD :kneelbow:

So ... Errr ... I want to say sorry because I update it so long ... But I hope you guys like this one :) ... And o yea , maybe this chapter is a bit complicated and have many grammar mistake so please pardon me , I'm suck at english ^^" .. So this is chapter 11 , hope you guys like it :)

"Prepare everything that you think that it will help you guys later .. Everythings okay ! and hurry up !! We don't have much time left " Nezumi says , while everyone recovered from their shock state and in a no time they already got prepared .

"We have to go to their location now .. It will take about 3 hours to go there by walking .. Don't waste your energy too much , because we don't know what will happen in there .." After Nezumi said that , they all nod and so the game of the death begins .

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" Umm ... May I ask you something ?" when all of them were walking silently because of the seriousness , Suddenly Kanon break it with a question .

"What is it ?" Nezumi replied not bothering to look back at Kanon .

"..a-are you sure about ... This ?" Kanon ask.

"About what ?"

"About this .... This plan ... You sure we can win this game ?" Kanon ask again.

"I don't know .... But better if we try than waiting for the end ... I even feel guilty if we , the replicas are vanished ... You and your friends life will end , and it was all our fault if things like that will happen .. So we will try as best as we can" Nezumi said. Not knowing how to reply it back , Kanon just keep her mouth shut and continue to walk behind Nezumi.

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*3 hours later*

"I think this is the place" Nezumi said as she stared at the building.

'3 hours sharply ?? You've got to be kidding me' Yuki though as she see at her watch and sweatdropped .

"Wha ?? This kind of places ??" Kumi says half shouted. The place look like an old wooden building and it's look like in a second it would collapsed. 

"Not sure of it .. But the map show it here .." Nezumi reply as she open the front door slowly. before she open it fully , she already sense that there is someone stood in the middle of the room . She know that it was a bad timing but she just open it anyway . When she open it , they was welcomed by a girl that was familiar to Yuki .

"Hello my dear brother , sisters .. And humans" the girl said as she smile . Her action make the groups uncomfortable .

"This is the first part of the game .. I will tell you something about this place .. Maybe this building look very old and can break down anytime , but you guys don't need to be worry . This building is well built up and almost impossible if it will collapse ... That's all the info about this building .. Now , I will tell you about the game " the girl say as Kumi gulp.

"First part ... In this building , there are so many of rooms , maybe a hundred .. But one of the hundreds rooms , there is a single golden key ... you guys have to search the golden key ..." She says . All of them sigh in relieve but it's stop when the girl says another.

"But , every single room has a trap , so don't choose it playfully" the girl says. 

"Now , you guys can search for it , the game was already started" she says as she disappeared.

"Before we start the game , who the heck is that girl ??" Jurina ask.

"That girl appeared when I was searching for Mayu and she gave me that box !" Yuki says

"She is Dr Forex assistance .. Well , I think you guys already know the name , it's Oshima Yuko .. Second testament that Dr Forex made ... See the symbol below her eyes ? It's show that she was the 2nd" Nezumi says.

"Hey guys look ! I think the golden key is in that room !" Shaku said as she run to the room. Few of them come with Shaku , while the others walk slowly to the room.

A box suddenly showed up . Shaku and the others walk to the box , but then , Nezumi remembered something.

'Every single room has a trap' that words echo in Nezumi's head as she see that there was a little crack on the floor.

"Hey wai-- " before she finished , the floor start to crack all the way and it makes them to separate into 2 groups. They look down to the place where they got separated , Expecting that there was a ground , but when they see it , their thought was wrong .. It was an endlessly and there was some kind of hole that will suck you , like a black hole .

"Yabai.." All of them though.

"What's that ?? a black hole !? " Kumi ask with a shock face.

"No idea .. But I think It's a good idea not to come near the crack floor .. Because once we got suck in it , we will never get back here .." Mayu says with no expression.

"This is sure a horrible game" Jurina says as she start to shiver a little bit.

Nezumi see the other side of them that come earlier to the room . There , she see that there was Shaku , Jurina , Kumi , Kanon , Yuria , Nobunaga , Mayu , Yuki and Sayaka.

"We get separated into 2 formation , I think they would be okay as there was Sayaka , Nobu and Mayu .. I can make sure that all of them would be okay but That Gachapin will surely become burden to them .." Nezumi though as she stares at Shaku as Torigoya giggled .

"I don't know what are you saying in your mind but I'm sure 200% it was not a positive things" Shaku though as she sweatdrop.

"Okay , as you can see we can't become one formation again as this ground separated us .. So you guys have to continued the game to that door , while we continued the game too but with different direction .." Nezumi says , as Nobunaga nod .

"Nobu , you will take the lead .. And Mayu you will be helping Nobunaga .. And I would like to give you guys something.." Mayu says as she search something from her bag pack and take out 1 thing.

"Catch it" Nezumi says as she throw the things to Yuki and Yuki successfully catch it.

"Kashiwagi Yuki , you will get the part to tell me the condition of your formation , and tell me if something happen , that little chip will be useful .. It's almost the same thing as walkie talkie but the voice was more smoother ..  And I know that you have a hand clock on your wrist so use it to know how many hours that was left for us .. " Nezumi says as Yuki heard it seriously .

"The others will help to find where's the golden keys located , but don't make the same mistake as Gachapin do " she continued following by a pout Shaku. After that , Nezumi give them a move that signaled them to open the box . Kanon open it and take the silver key out of the box and shows it to Nezumi.

"Is that door locked ? If yes , open it with that silver key.." Nezumi says . Jurina open the door in the corner of the room but it can't be open . It's shows that it was lock , so Kanon come near the door and unlock it with the key and it was open , showing a long corridor.

"Okay then I hope we can meet each other again" Nezumi says as they nod and left.

"Let's go" Nezumi said as she look back and walk , following by the others.

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*other side*

Rena keep walking , leaving Acchan and Kai behind until finally she found something on the ground. It's a cellphone. She take it to her hand and stare it for a while. Don't know who it's belong to , she flip it open like she will know whose its belong to of she open it.

she open it and press a 'power' button on . The cell phone screen start to light up and in a second it shows girl picture . She already know who it was as she see a girl with a cat like smile in the cell phone wallpaper.

'Jurina..' Rena whisper softly as she keep the cell phone in her pocket and continued to walk.

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"Emmm ... Which one that we should open it first ?" Kumi ask as she look back to others.

"Just open whenever you feel it was not a dangerous one , but choose it carefully like what Nezumi said." Nobunaga reply.

When they all heard it , one of them open the room without hesitation . All of them look at the one who just open the door . They all was quiet concern when they see who is the one that open it while Nobunaga give a glare to the culprit.

"You sure didn't choose the dangerous one , Gachapin.." Nobunaga said as he enter the room while Shaku pout .. again.

The room is big , but not extremely big . Its just like it fits perfectly to their thought. They all entered the room and were shock by the view that they see .

"What is this ? It's Empty , It's a white colour room that's empty" Kumi said with a confused look .When they are looking around , suddenly the door close hardly . They all get shock because the door was close and when Sayaka tried to open it , the door can't be open.

"What the.." Sayaka said as keep trying to open the door .

"Wait Sayaka .. " Mayu said while Sayaka stop and look back to her.

"Don't waste your energy , it will not be open by one of us in this room ..." Mayu continued while Sayaka stop her action.

"We just have to finish this game quick.." Mayu said as she look every side of the room .

"In every room , there must be an exit and I'm sure that this place have a trap , so be careful when you guys search for something " Nobunaga said.

"The wall ... The shape was all square.." Kanon say as she touch the wall to make sure of it.

"..So is the floor" Kumi said.

"The roof was ... So high.." Yuki said as she look up.

"And so dark ... The top can't be seen" Yuria continued.

"Hey , wait. There's a one big hole in the wall over there ... Maybe 10 meter from the ground" Jurina said as her face slowly start to become panic. "Don't tell me ... We have to climb this wall to reach there.."

"No. way." Kumi said , disbelief by what was Jurina said .

"Ugh , if it was like this .. We are wasting our time .. We cannot met with the others and cannot go to that stupid Forex place" Nobunaga said while the others become silent.

"You got to be kidding me .." Kanon said cracking the silent  ."Don't tell me that this is dead end .. Don't tell that from the start , he already p-" not yet finished her word , Kumi grab Kanon's shoulder and make Kanon to look at her face.

"Kanon .. It's okay , there must be a way to reach there , so don't give up yet" Kumi said as she smile to make Kanon calm.

"...okay" Kanon calm and smile a bit.

"Then , for this time .. We have to wait and see what's next .." Mayu said as she sit down .

They all wait silently . The room was very quiet , no one speak until ..

'Bamm!' Suddenly a block fall down near them from the very high roof  , making all of them very shock.

"A-ahh...." due to the shock , Yuki unable to speak properly.

"Look out !" Mayu shout making them to look up and run to the place where the next block don't fall down on there.

"T-this.." Kanon stutter and she start to sweat because of the fear.

"Block ! Blocks start to fall down from the top" Kumi said .

"This is definitely a game ! the game was already start ! Everybody , be careful , there's another block fall down !" Mayu shout as everybody nod and avoid the place where the next block fall down.

Meanwhile , somewhere , a guy was watching them secretly. 

'Hmmm ... How many people that can manage to get out from that room ?' Dr.Forex though

Blocks keep fall , fall and fall . But until now , they still can avoid that.

"We don't know where will the blocks fall next , we just have to avoid that . Be caution guys " Nobunaga shout.

'Haha , just keep on avoiding the blocks .. If you guys still think of protecting your teammates , you guys will be crushed .. You guys cannot finished this game if one of you don't die in this game'  he though as he smirk.

"Sooo.. I guess you really concern about your sis eh ? It's shows on your face " Dr.Forex said as he look back to a certain girl that got chain . The girl give him a glare and move hardly , hoping that she would be free , but the chain was too hard for a girl like her to broke it , so it can't be broke.

"Easy there .. It will be useless" Dr.Forex said as he smirk. "You better not wasting your energy , You just have to watch your sister die" he said as he look back to the screen.

*back to the game*

"Ugh , this is a deathly game" Mayu said between her pant.

"What should we do ??  we don't have a place to avoid the blocks again" Yuki ask.

"I know ! Climb up the blocks ! This is the only way to reach that big hole or should I say exit !" Sayaka half shout as she start to climb on one the blocks.

'nice idea' Mayu though as she grin a bit and climb one of the blocks too.

"We have to avoid being on the side of the room , we can get stuck by the blocks if we are in that place" Mayu said as the others nod in agreement. While they keep avoiding the blocks , Jurina realize something.

"! Wait ! It feels like the blocks that fall down have a tempo .... There must be a rules of the game for the location of the blocks that fall down!" Jurina said with a wide smile , she close her eyes for a moment and open it . Her face seems like she already know where is the location of the next block will fall down.

"Over there!" Jurina point with her index finger to a place and a block fall down at the place where jurina point it.

"Woa , cool ! The block fall down exactly at the place where you just point it" Shaku said as her face bright up a bit.

"Just imagine that the time where the block fall down as a tempo , while the place where the block fall down as a foot step or a hand movement .. Then it was the same as we see a dancing block right ?" Jurina said , still with a wide smile on her face.

"Ah , I see ! If that's a basic rules of the game , then this game only can be operate by a simple computer system right ?" Kanon said.

"You mean the program can't make the blocks To dance with a complicated tempo , eh ?" Kumi said .

"So then , if we just guess where the blocks will fall down next , then that's mean the game will easily be over !" Yuki said. Everyone now understand it and smile to each other and continued it.

"Kanon , hurry" Kumi said as she lend her hand to help Kanon to go up.

"Come on guys , don't give up !just a bit more , and we will finish this game" Nobunaga said.

They have done well , all of them already manage to go out except Kumi and Kanon and suddenly a block fall down to Kumi with a high speed , making Kumi and the others froze .

'What ? The tempo's changing??' Jurina though. "Kumi , look out!" Jurina shout while Kumi snap and act fast .They all got relieve when they know that Kumi was in a full shape and nothing happen to her .

"Kumi , You okay ?!" Yuria ask from above.

"I think so" Kumi said while Yuria smile in relive to Kumi.

"Be careful , the tempos becomes quick !" Jurina said as Kumi and Kanon nod.

"Alright then , we should continue the--!!" Kumi said , but suddenly she froze at her place.

"Kumi , what are you doing ?? It's dangerous in this room !" Nobunaga said while Kumi look at Nobunaga and look back to Kanon.

"Kanon ! Give me your hand !" Kumi said , her action make Kanon confused.

"Eh ? you first , Kumi" Kanon said , but Kumi just keep telling Kanon to lend her hand , so , no choice for Kanon , she lend her hand to Kumi , and then Kumi pull Kanon up to Nobunaga .

"Come on Kumi , give me your hand " Nobunaga said . Instead of come to Nobunaga , Kumi laugh a bit.

"Wha? What's so funny ?? Hur-- ??" Nobunaga stop his sentences when he see Kumi's shirt.

"Yo-your ... Shirt .." Nobunaga said with a shock look .

"Haha ... Yea ... I got stuck .. I think this is it .. Goodbye guys .." Kumi said as the exit hole got closed because another fall down block. Everyone froze at their place.

"..eh?"

TBC

Emm ... Sorry if it was boring .. And yea .. The game in the empty room was a bit complicated .. I'm sorry , I don't know how to use it as a word , because I'm imagining the scene by my mind and I found that it was hard to make it as a word .. So I'm sorry :kneelbow: Btw , I want to say thank you for all the readers , even if you don't like it , I'm really appreciate it :kneelbow: if it's not bothering , please leave a critic or a comment :) thank you very much :kneelbow:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #68 on: December 09, 2012, 03:20:28 PM »
Owh , cool . Now it's getting more interesting XD and who is that girl that got chained ? :? Sister ? :? And waa ??? Kumi got trapped!? Man , I wonder how she will escaped from that room when her shirt got stuck .. Don't tell me that she will rip it off *Q* nah , just keed :lol: you made me really curious now :o thank you for the update :hee: and worries not , I love this fic :D

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #69 on: December 10, 2012, 12:55:36 AM »
AAAAHHHH!!!!!! What's gonna happen to Kumi?
 :OMG:
Now you got me all excited
can't wait for the next update please update soon!! :on woohoo:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #70 on: December 10, 2012, 02:11:16 AM »
Whaaaa what happened to Kumi? And..... Chained? Who? Sister? Who??

Whoaaa thank for update :lol:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #71 on: December 14, 2012, 12:59:11 AM »
I´m a little confused

but really like it the history

please continuous 

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #72 on: January 03, 2013, 03:38:09 PM »
WHAT HAPPENED TO MY KUMI?!?!?!

Please don't leave the fic like this  :cry:

Update  :bow:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #73 on: January 04, 2013, 08:07:40 AM »
@Kuro--Black : about Kumi's sister and how will Kumi escape from it , you'll know it later  :D and thank you very much for the comment Kuro--Black-san :hee:

@alexsher99 : thank you very much alexsher99-san :kneelbow:

@JuRikki : about that you'll know it later ^^ and thank you very much JuRikki-san :kneelbow:

@stepk : I'm sorry to make you confused  :nervous and glad that you like the history :D thank you so much stepk-san :hee:

@K-popJ-popAWESOMNESS : nah , I don't leave it .. You know , I just slow when it comes to to make next chapter , gomenasai , I still make it halfway because now I still focus on my OS , but I'll update ASAP :hee: thank you J-popK-popAWESOMNESS-san :kneelbow:

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #74 on: May 08, 2013, 01:26:57 AM »
Please,.. Continue this fic Dx pleaase :bow: for kuumin fans sake Dx

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Re: Thank you - Kuminon ( Chapter 11 )
« Reply #75 on: February 11, 2015, 02:26:33 PM »
Please,.. Continue this fic Dx pleaase :bow: for kuumin fans sake Dx
Yeah.. please update this i want to know what will happen to kumi T^T
want to know who is that Dr. Forex *angryface*

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