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« Reply #320 on: June 04, 2013, 11:06:21 PM »
Mayu did her best in warning her and in the end Yuki found the truth through abuse
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« Reply #321 on: June 04, 2013, 11:14:05 PM »
thank you for this fanfic :deco:
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« Reply #322 on: June 05, 2013, 08:47:16 AM »
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« Reply #323 on: June 05, 2013, 12:36:45 PM »
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« Reply #324 on: June 05, 2013, 01:14:50 PM »
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Ultimate Sacrifice
« Reply #325 on: June 05, 2013, 03:36:17 PM »
Mayuki: Ultimate Sacrifice

So twisted drama there... lots angst in there...

But great OS...

At least after all those drama... both Yuki and Mayu able to be together

Thank you for the OS

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« Reply #326 on: June 05, 2013, 04:40:22 PM »
i can't speak a word...so sad

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« Reply #327 on: June 07, 2013, 06:33:22 AM »
Well here is the JuriMari OS that Yuichii requested! Hope you like it Yui!
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JuriMari: Perfect

Once upon a time there was a young girl who lived in an orphanage. She was a bright young one with a heart filled with joy. Despite being alone most of the time she manages to hold onto the little happiness she was given. The girl plays with all her friends in the orphanage and enjoys being with them everyday. However as time goes by, the her friends slowly leave one by one. They are lucky and get adopted while Jurina is still left behind. Jurina is not like the rest of the kids. She's rambunctious and wild and something the other parents can't handle. Jurina is a problem child and because of that she has yet to be adopted. Eventually all her friends left and she had no one left. It was just her and the staff members of the orphanage. They try to cheer Jurina up saying that she'll find someone to take her but in their hearts they don't know if Jurina will be adopted or not. One night Jurina was sitting in her bed reading a book when she saw something outside her room.

"Wah a shooting star!"

The star was flying across the night sky lighting a path as it moved. Jurina closed her eyes and wished hard for the one thing she longed for the most. A family. After that Jurina fell asleep hoping that her wish would come true. The next day Jurina was playing out in the garden when one of the staff members called her over. She walked over and there standing at the door was a tall woman with short brown hair. She wore a white blouse and pink skirt and carried a small white purse. When Jurina walked over the woman saw Jurina and smiled. The head of the orphanage walked over and said,

"Jurina this is Mariko and she is looking for a daughter. She's come to take you home."

Jurina smiled brightly and hugged the woman's leg thanking her. Jurina packed her things and together the two left the orphanage once and for all. When they arrived at the house Jurina was surprised at how big the place was. Surely the woman who adopted her was someone with a lot of money. Jurina followed the woman up a spiral stair case up a where her room was. When she opened the door she couldn't believe at how beautifully decorated it was. There were all kinds of toys and dolls to play with and in the closet were all kinds of pretty clothing. The bed was as soft as a cloud and the wall was painted with cute animals on it. The room was something Jurina came to love and couldn't believe how lucky she was.

"Jurina come down stairs!" her new mother called.

"Coming!!" Jurina said.

She ran down the stairs and there in the kitchen was her mother who was setting the table for dinner.

"Jurina can you bring this plate over to the table for me?"

"Hai!"

Jurina grabbed the plate and started to walk towards the table but suddenly something caused her to twitch and spasm making the plate fly out of her hand. The plate fell onto the ground and broke into pieces. Her mother walked over and saw the mess and Jurina who was looking at her with sorry eyes. She looked like she was going to cry for she feared her new mother would send her back to the orphanage. Her mother walked over and looked down on Jurina. Jurina was expecting the worse but instead she knelt down to Jurina's level and patted her head. The confused Jurina looked at her and she only smiled and said,

"Accidents happen it's alright."

Her mother started to pick up the broken pieces but then suddenly dropped one and let out a small yelp. Jurina looked over and saw blood coming from her mother's finger.

"Are you ok mommy?!" Jurina said.

"Ah I'm fine. It's just a small scratch see?"

Her mother held up her finger and that's when Jurina took it and placed it in her mouth.  She licked the blood clean and then pulled the finger out. Her mother smiled and thanked Jurina for the medical treatment and then put on a band aid. Once the mess was clean, the two sat at the table for one of the most delicious meals Jurina had ever eaten. She ate until she could eat no more and then after such a good meal Jurina felt really tired. Her mother picked her up and carried her up to her room where she tucked her into bed and kissed her forehead.

"Goodnight Jurina." she said.

The next morning Jurina woke up and found the house empty. Her mother was no where in sight and Jurina started to get worried. She ran frantically searching every room for her mother but her mother was nowhere in sight. Jurina started to cry thinking that her mother had left her alone. However suddenly the door opened and her mother came in carrying a bag. Jurina saw this and quickly ran over hugging her mother tightly.

"I thought you left me! I thought mommy left me!"

"Mah mah Jurina I only went to the store. I'm sorry I worried you. Come here."

Her mother picked her up and cradled her gently calming her down. Once Jurina stopped crying her mother carried her into the kitchen where she made breakfast.

"Jurina would you hand me that egg please?"

"Hai!"

Jurina grabbed an egg and was going to hand it over but then she had another spasm and the egg was thrown into the air. It went high and then landed right on her mother's head. Jurina couldn't help but giggle as she saw the egg yolk drip from her mother's head. Her mother wiped some of the egg out and said,

"I was gonna get in she shower anyways. You'll pay for that next time you little devil~"

The two had breakfast and then her mother went to get into the shower. When she came out she put on some very fancy clothes and told Jurina to go put on a nice dress as well. Jurina put on one of the white dresses with pink frills and bows on the chest. She put on some new shoes and then came out and saw her mother. Her mother was in a tight red dress with a black belt and high heels. Her mother was already tall but now she was super tall to Jurina. She put on some jewelry and at the same time the doorbell rang. Jurina ran to the front door and answered it where there was a woman standing at the door. When she saw Jurina she squealed and grabbed onto Jurina hugging her tightly.

"Mommy help!!" she cried.


Her mother came out and saw her friend and said,

"Miichan could you please let go of my daughter."

The woman let go and said,

"Mariko I didn't know you had a daughter!! She's so cute~"

The woman reached out and was about to grab Jurina again but Jurina quickly ran behind her mother and said,

"Don't touch me you Gachapin!"

"Oi what did you call me?!"

"Miichan cut it out. We're going to be late."

"Oh right let's go!"

Her mother took Jurina's hand and the two walked out to the front driveway where there was a fancy car waiting for them. They got in and the car took them to a huge building. They walked inside and Jurina saw all kinds of pretty women in amazing outfits. Jurina and her mother walked into a big studio where there were cameras and sets with different back grounds laid out. One looked like a modern house while another looked like it was outside. There was one that was full of stuffed animals and then one that looked like a beach. Jurina was told to sit in a chair and watch while her mother went to work. She sat there and waited and then soon saw her mother walk out in a beautiful black dress with heels and silver necklace. Jurina stared in amazement as she watched her mother walk out onto the set and pose in front of the cameraman.

"Wah mommy is so cool!"

"Your mother is Shinoda Mariko. Japan's top fashion model." Miichan said.

"A model?!"

Jurina couldn't believe her mother was a model. She had always seen them in magazines before and sometimes she would pretend to be one with her friends but now she was seeing an actual model. She watched her mother come out in all kinds of outfits and doing all kinds of poses. Jurina was curious and wanted to see what the pictures looked like so she walked over by the camera crew and stared at the images coming onto the screen. The pictures were amazing and Jurina wanted to see more of them. She grabbed a chair and stood on it to get a better view of the screen but then the cameraman yelled at her.

"Hey kid why don't you come over here yourself!"

"Eh?"

Jurina walked over and the cameraman handed Jurina his camera. He told her how to take a picture and so Jurina became a cameraman.

"Smile mommy!"

Her mother smiled and Jurina took all kinds of pretty pictures of her mother in all kinds of outfits. Then the cameraman said,

"Alright kid now it's your turn."

Little did Jurina know, now it was her turn to be a model. She went back stage with her mother where the makeup artists did her make up and hair. They gave her and outfit to put on and when it was all ready she walked out on to the set where her mother smiled and said,

"Jurina you look adorable! Now smile for the camera just like mommy!"

"Hai!!"

Jurina smiled and did poses just like her mother did and the cameraman loved it. She held onto stuffed animals to give it a cuter look and played with some toys. Then they cameraman had her mother come in and they took photos together. They played with games and made silly faces. Jurina made her mother laugh like crazy with some of the faces she made. Then around lunch time Jurina and her mother sat down to eat. They had a small lunch and then after it was almost time to go for the two. They finished up the last couple of shots and then the day was done.

"Hey you were great kid! Come again next time."

"Come one Jurina let's go get some ice cream."

"Ok mommy!"

The two went to a small ice cream shop where they enjoyed the sweet treat. Then they went home and ate another fantastic dinner made by her mother. After dinner Jurina and her mother played all kinds of games and little by little Jurina learned more about her mother. She could play the piano like an expert and drew like and artist. She could sing like an angel and could dance like she was in a pro group. Jurina's mother was something someone would call perfect. It was around bed time but Jurina didn't want to sleep. Her mother kept on insisting that she went to bed but Jurina refused and said she wanted to play more.

"I wanna play more with mommy!" Jurina said.

"But Jurina mommy is tired and needs her sleep." her mother said.

"I wanna play with mommy!"

"Jurina you need to go to bed right now!"

"No!"

Jurina started to run but her mother caught her and held her close.

"You're going to bed!"

"Yada yada!"

Jurina fought and fought but eventually gave in and let her mother go to bed. She tucked her in and was about to lean in to kiss her forehead but then Jurina had a spasm and ended up hitting her mother.

"Jurina!"

Jurina realized what she had done and tried to apologize but her mother ran off to stop the pain. She came back in with an ice pack on her cheek and an angry look on her face. Jurina said she was sorry but her mother was silent. It was then Jurina started to cry feeling awful for what she had done and knew she was going to be sent back now. However her mother reached out and pulled Jurina in for a hug.

"There there it's ok. It was just an accident it's ok." she said.

"B-But I hit you! It hurt didn't it?" Jurina said.   

"No it's fine~ You're pretty weak so it's nothing."

"I am not weak!"

Jurina pouted and her mother wiped away her tears.

"It's ok Jurina really." her mother said.

"I'm sorry for not being perfect like mommy..." Jurina said.

"Hey I'm not perfect."

"Yes you are! You can sing and dance and play music and draw.. You're perfect!"

"Jurina no one is perfect."

"Eh?"

"Look."

Her mother took Jurina's hand and placed it on her head. She moved it around until Jurina felt a small bump on her head. Jurina looked at her mother and asked,

"Mommy what is that?"

"That is a tumor. I have cancer Jurina which is an illness that kills thousands of people everyday."

"Mommy is going to die!!!!"

"No no Jurina but as mommy gets older she's going to start forgetting things. She may even forget you."

"No mommy don't forget me!"

"Haha it's ok Jurina. As long as you are by my side everyday I'm sure I won't forget you. Just remember though Jurina. No one is perfect. Not even someone like me."

The two hugged and made up and from that moment on, Jurina started to learn more about the world. That nothing is perfect and those who say they are don't know anything about life. Later on she learned that her spasms were caused by an illness in the brain. There was no known cure for it so Jurina had to live with it. However despite all that Jurina had everything else. She had a nice home and a nice life and a loving mother. Overall Jurina thought that her life was perfect.

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Hope you liked it Yui!

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Perfect
« Reply #328 on: June 07, 2013, 07:30:44 AM »
JuriMari: Perfect

Ah... Jurina and Mariko were also sick...

But Mariko had like Alzheimer while Jurina had spasms... her nerve controlled a bit out of control at times...

Yeah... Jurina as the daughter and Mariko as the mother....

I could just imagine it...

They are so sweet together as family...

Thank you for the OS

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Perfect
« Reply #329 on: June 07, 2013, 07:44:36 AM »
Great story

It is a surreal matter that imperfections make humans human
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Perfect
« Reply #330 on: June 07, 2013, 07:48:44 AM »
This is just..........  :heart: :heart: :heart:  :wub: :wub: :wub:

I WANT MOOOOORRRREEEEEE~!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

You did great miyumi~san  :yep: I luv it  :cow:

Hope you make more OSs~!  :twothumbs

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« Reply #331 on: June 07, 2013, 08:13:57 AM »
W O N D E R F U L . S T O R Y! :fap

JuriMari so sweet with each other   :) Mariko very kind  :heart:

Thank you for the story.. :bow: :thumbsup

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Perfect
« Reply #332 on: June 09, 2013, 03:01:24 PM »
why so beautiful story Miyu~  :farofflook: I like it so much!  :luvluv2:
this story made me tear up  :mon hanky:
thank you for writing this OS for me!  :mon love:

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update NEW IDEAS!
« Reply #333 on: July 21, 2013, 05:19:24 AM »
Minna! The stories I'm currently working on are coming to an end soon so I'm gonna need new ideas and well I already have them laid out the question is which one should I go with? I'll leave you some sneak peaks and you vote on which one you like the best!
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1. Royal Affairs

The Kingdom of Akihabara is known to be the most powerful Kingdom in all of Japan. Ruled by the mighty king Takahashi Minami and the beautiful Queen Maeda Atusko, no enemy can take them down. The king and queen have two daughters who they took in after a tragic accident. Princess Matsui Rena and Matsui Jurina are said to be the fairest princesses in all the land. Within the kingdom there are also three princes who help care for the land. Prince Miyazawa Sae who rules the lakes, Prince Watanabe Mayu who rules the gold mines, and Prince Kashiwagi Yuki who rules the forests. The princes are loyal to the king and are always there to fight when needed. Everything is peaceful in the kingdom but slowly, chaos will take hold and the kingdom shall fall into the darkness of madness. Princess Rena wishes to marry Prince Yuki but Prince Mayu wishes to claim Yuki for those have been close ever since they were born.. Little did Prince Mayu know that Prince Sae had her heart set on Mayu. There was something that Mayu had done long ago that had captured Sae's heart and she was determinded to capture Mayu's no matter what. Meanwhile Princess Jurina's love for her sister slowly grows into something else. Most importantly though, the king and queen separate and the kingdom falls into madness.

2. Promise of Sin

Watanabe Mayu is known to be the world's most twisted serial killer. Her killing methods are so twisted and horrid that anyone would surly break if ever witnessing the slaughter. No one knows why she kills but they say she does it for fun. Mayu is a monster that is far worse than the devil himself. Insanity is all that runs through her mind and nothing else. She listens to no one expect for one thing. Yuki is the dead bunny that she always carries with her wherever she goes. Yuki is a voice in her head that she had created when her sister was murdered right in front of her. Yuki keeps Mayu in line when things get too far. All the killing and bloodshed is the thing Mayu lives off. No one can stop her because she is never caught. With nothing stopping her, Mayu continues to kill everyday and no one can stop the walking hell that she is. However one day Mayu decides to try to be a normal girl after talking to Yuki who convinced her to got to school. Yuki wanted her to try to be normal and fit in so Mayu goes to school. Upon her arrival she already struggled with her urges for blood and gore. However slowly she makes new friends and even has a girlfriend for the first time. She feels love and care and the feeling was something that for once didn't want to make the little killer shoot or stab anyone. As much as Mayu adored the love and attention, her inner being wouldn't let her have that happiness for long. Battling her inner killer, Mayu struggles with trying to live a happy life and controlling her urges to kill.   

3. Blood Wars

A hundred years ago, there was a great accident that caused mutations in all of Japan. No one knows what caused the accident but the other countries decided to quarantine the country and let their government handle with the mutations. The accident caused a mutation in people's blood. Their blood either turned black or blue and based on the color determined the power. The blue bloods have an incredible amount of wisdom and smarts. They use their powers to help the society and try to fit in. The black bloods however are filled with madness and have incredible amounts of strength. They can be very corrupt at time and merciless if they want. The black bloods seek power and total control over everything but the blue bloods won't allow them to drag the innocent people into a world of chaos. The war had been going on for a hundred years up until this very date. The two blood clans have their leaders and their powerful warriors. They fight day in and day out to see who will remain victorious. In the middle of all this battle, there are some red bloods that still remain. Not all of them had disappeared. That one red blood is a young girl named Matsui Rena who lives with her grandmother up in the mountains far away from all the violence and war. The red blood did not know of the war and her grandmother had forbidden her from leaving the mountains. The girl had lived there in the mountains for years peacefully and unknowingly. Little did they know that their peace was about to end and a new world was going to open to the red blood.

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So tell me what you think and let me know which one I should write next! Please make sure to vote!!!

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« Reply #334 on: July 21, 2013, 05:29:28 AM »
miyumi -san
which one its atsumina?  :oops:

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« Reply #335 on: July 21, 2013, 05:37:59 AM »
All the summaries of the stories all very interesting

But I personally like the 1st idea more because there would be lots of twist in the story

The story about Mayu being a killer seem similar to 'Dexter' idea

And also I found the 3rd story about the supernatural idea about different types of blood, also interesting

I would not mind to read all the stories, because there are all interesting in their own right...

Can't wait to see what kind of stories you are going to create.

Thank you for sharing your interesting ideas.

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update NEW IDEAS!
« Reply #336 on: July 21, 2013, 08:20:36 AM »
Royal Affair: Your typical royal quarrel and alot of incest going on. Lol.

Promise of Sin: I always love this kind of genre, but again, there's alot of fic like this going on now. But it does sound promising. Cold Mayu is always fun to read.

Blood Wars: Black blood and blue blood, interesting. And this doesn't look like your typical supernatural fic either, it's more of a war between two parties (which are not vampires and werewolves) rather just a few strong people. I'm going for this.  But why Rena? Somehow I had enough of Rena's Pov from Great Escape, but if it's Rena's Pov, it's Wmatsui right? I love WMatsui but I wonder if I can request a JuriYuki? XD So maybe turning into Yukirin's pov? Ah, but I don't think you ever write Jurina's Pov before...


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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update NEW IDEAS!
« Reply #337 on: July 21, 2013, 03:02:56 PM »
I like Promise of sin and Blood wars.
Well if Blood wars are with Wmatsui then I prefer them. XD
I look forward to it. (everything what choose) :)
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« Reply #338 on: July 21, 2013, 03:12:20 PM »
I like Promise of sin and Blood wars.
Well if Blood wars are with Wmatsui then I prefer them. XD
I look forward to it. (everything what choose) :)

same hereeeeeeeeeeee!!

it's a story very interesting!, uncommon and if it's WMatsui will be TRIPLE PERFECT jdkqjklwqlkwq

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« Reply #339 on: July 21, 2013, 05:36:00 PM »
Blood Wars!!!!


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