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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 4
« Reply #20 on: September 01, 2012, 05:12:07 PM »
So cute~ A bit creepy but cute~
Can't wait for WMatsui to appear

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 4
« Reply #21 on: September 01, 2012, 07:44:41 PM »
Mayuyu did the opperation even  her hands were burned  :mon cry:
Mayu love Yuki so much  :mon waterworks:

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 4
« Reply #22 on: September 01, 2012, 09:55:21 PM »
Read trough chap 3&4....
LOL Yukrin got to be a mother for 1 day  :rofl:
But it was more like a lover having a day off and just cuddling  :oops:

And then Yukirin just left! It's must have been hard for Mayu to find Yukirin in that state.. :panic:

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 5
« Reply #23 on: September 02, 2012, 05:31:21 AM »
Minna! Yuuki isn't feeling very good right now so she's going to be gone for a couple of days. That means you're going to have to deal with me for a while! Haha I'll do my best and wait untill she gets back. Let's all hope she gets better soon!
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Chapter 5

Mayu woke up and found Yuki wrapped around her. She was so glad to find Yuki there. Mayu cuddled with Yuki a little longer before she finally got up. She walked into the kitchen and was about to start her morning routine when the door bell rang.

"Who could that be?"

Mayu tapped a screen in front of the door and two girls popped up.

"Mayu open the door!"

"Hai~"

Mayu pressed a button and a series of locks unlocked themselves. Then Mayu opened the door and two girls walked in.

"Rena, Jurina what are you doing here?"

"We think we've made a huge break through in our research. But we need to borrow some of your lab equipment. Is that alright?" Rena asked.

"Sure. You know where it all is."

"Thanks!"

Matsui Rena is famous in the medical department. She researches medicine and creates new drugs meant for helping people with illness. Matsui Jurina is her young assistant who helps her with everything. The two aren't related by they act a lot like sisters. Mayu quickly got breakfast and then headed down to her lab.

"So what do you got?" Mayu asked.

"I have developed a new vitamin that's supposed to make a person super strong. I want to test it but I don't have anyone to test it on. All my other voulenteers have been hospitalized because of my previoius failures." Rena said. 

"So why not try it on Jurina?"

"Because last time I ended up throwing up for two hours straight." Jurina said.

"So who are you going to test it on?"

"I guess myself since I can't find anyone else."

"But what if something bad happens? I don't want you getting hurt!"

"Don't worry Jurina I'll be fine."

"I'll have the medics on stanby.'

Rena was about to take the pill but then suddenly Yuki walked in.

"Mayu who's that?" Jurina asked.

"Oh that's Yuki. She's my livein maid." Mayu said.

"She's really cute."

"Yeah she is. Wait a minute Jurina you stay away from her. She's mine."

Mayu gave Jurina a death glare letting her know she was serious. Jurina ran and hid behind Rena.

"It's nice to meet you." Rena said.

"Nice to meet you." Yuki said.

"Yuki this is Rena and the one behind her is Jurina."

"Nice to meet the both of you."

"As to you."

"Ne Mayu I'm hungry. Do you have anything to eat?"

"Yeah here."

Mayu took the vitamin and handed it to Yuki. Before Rena could stop her Yuki took the vitamin.

"Why did you do that Mayu?!" Rena said.

"Well it had to be tested one way or another." Mayu said.

"But if she dies it'll be my fault!"

"You're fine."

"What did I just take?" Yuki asked.

"A vitamin that supposed to make you stronger. It hasen't been deemed safe yet so we're using you as the test subject"

"Mayuyu!"

"Don't worry your fine see?"

Yuki was ok. There was nothing bad happening to her. Nothingi that could possibly endanger the user. But then Yuki started to feel funny. She started to get dizzy and light headed. She was having a hard time standing and her body was starting to get hot.

"Yuki are you ok?"

"I'm ok. I just need to sit down."

Mayu led Yuki over to the couch and had her sit down.

"How are you feeling?"

"Dizzy. My body feels hot and I'm having a hard time focusing."

"Rena what did you do!" Mayu said.

"What have I dont? You're the one who made her take it."

"Oh yeah that's right. Yuki I think you need to rest. Yuki?"

Yuki had her head down so Mayu couldn't tell what was wrong with her.

"Yuki...."

Yuki snapped her head up and looked at Mayu. There was a weird look on her face that Mayu had never seen before. Her eyes looked half open and her smile looked off. She was leaning from side to side not being able to sit still.

"Yuki are you ok?"

Instead of saying something, Yuki leaned onto Mayu and started touching her chest.

"Yuki!"

"Mayuyu you're so cute. Let me rape you~"

"Rena do something!"

"Uh uh let me run home and try to make a cure. Jurina let's go!"

Rena and Jurina left leaving Mayu with Yuki. The litle cyborg was struggling to keep the horny girl off her. But it wasn't easy.

"Yuki stop this! Snap out of it already."

"Mayuyu is so cute. I just want to eat you up."

Yuki bit Mayu's ear causing her to squeal.

"Yuki!"

"So cute. I want more..."

Yuki starte to take off Mayu's lab coat unbuttoning each button. She tossed it to the side and then pulled up Mayu's shirt revealing a pink lace bra.

"They're so small."

"Hey!"

"I love them."

Yuki slip the bra up revealing Mayu's chest. Then she started to nip on each one. Mayu let out small moans as Yuki continued to nibble on her small buds.

"Yuki... stop this..."

"No. Mayu is so cute. I don't want to."

Yuki went back to eating Mayu. Then slowly, Yuki started to make her way to Mayu's pants. She unbuttoned them and pulled them down revealing her panties.

"So adorable."

"Yuki please stop!"

"Hmmm no."

Yuki was about to pull down Mayu's panties when Rena came running back in. When she saw the two, her entire face turned red. Jurina was about to walk in as well but Rena pushed her out.

"Stay out for a while Jurina. I got this."

Rena shut the door and then ran over to Mayu. She pulled Yuki off her and handed her Mayu's shirt. Then she turned towards Yuki who was slowly getting up.

"I got it!"

Rena pulled out a syringe with the antidote and started running towards Yuki. But then she tripped dropping the antidote. Rean's body was positioned ever so right where her skirt was pulled up revealing some of her panties and her shirt had come a little undone. Yuki saw this and started to go after Rena.

"Kya! Mayu help!"

"Hey hands off!"

Mayu took the antidote and injected it into Yuki. Within seconds Yuki passed out on top of the now half naked Rena. Mayu got Yuki off of Rena while she got dressed. Then she opened the door letting Jurina in.

"Did you do it?" she asked.

"Yeah I got it. Thanks Mayu." Rena said.

"No problem. Rena I think you made a weird viagra for women not a vitamin." Mayu said.

"Shoot. Well back to the drawing board. Come on Jurina. Thanks for helping Mayu and sorry about everything."

The two left leaving Mayu with Yuki. She looked over at Yuki was asleep on the couch. Mayu thought Yuki looked very pretty asleep. If she haden't tried to rape her a couple minutes later then Mayu would kiss her. But for now she had to plan. Plan her revenge for what Yuki did to her.

"No one calls my boobs small."

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Chapter 4 done! I hope everyone liked it. Please tell me what you think and tell Yuuki to get well soon! I'll see you guys later!


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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 5
« Reply #24 on: September 02, 2012, 06:27:35 AM »
LOLOL Epic Viagra xDDD

Rena, I am definitely proud of you  :rofl:

Lol they ended half way o.o

Last line got me xD " No one calls my boobs small. "

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 5
« Reply #25 on: September 02, 2012, 11:30:25 AM »
 :rofl: What if Rena-chan DID eat that pill?


LOL totally hilarious! Viagra vitamin!

Mayus revenge *fufufu waiting patiently for next update...
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #26 on: September 03, 2012, 01:40:31 AM »
Minna I have good news! Yuuki is almost better. She has the fly but claims it's not bad and she'll be fine by tomorrow. So for now please enjoy this next chapter!
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Chapter 6

It was around 2 in the morning when Mayu heard some strange noise in her kitchen. She started to get up but then she felt something tug her.

"Where you going?" Yuki said.

"I'm just going to check something. You stay here ok and don't move."

"Ok."

Yuki let go and Mayu silently walked out of the room. She walked to the kitchen but stopped when she heard voices.

"It's not here boss!"

"Well keep looking. The entrance has to be here somewhere."

"To think a kid could hid an entire lab."

These guys were after something in Mayu's lab and whatever it was she wasn't going to let them have it. She quickly ran back to her room and shut the door. Then she rushed over to Yuki and woke her up.

"Yuki get up."

"Mayu? What's going on?"

"I'll explain later. For now I need you to hide in the closet over there."

"Why?"

"Just do it."

Mayu helped Yuki into the closet and then shut the door.

"Wait there and don't come out until I say so."

Mayu ran back out and this time had a weapon at hand. She look around the corner and saw the guys were gone.

"Where did they-"

Suddenly someone grabbed her from behind and pulled her back. Mayu tried to fire her weapon but it was knocked out of her hand. The person took Mayu in to the main room and tied her down. Then two masked figures stood before Mayu.

"Where's the lab?" one asked.

"Tell us where it is or else we'll kill you." the other said.

"Go ahead and kill me. Like a care. You can't find it if I'm dead."

"We'll kill your family then."

"Uh dorobo-san, I have no family let alone anyone I care for. You can't do anything." Mayu said.

"Shoot. Boss what do we do?"

"Don't worry I'll make her crack."

The one man called boss kneeled down and pulled off his mask.

"Listen kid. You have something that I really need and unless you don't give it to me I'm going to have to hurt that pretty face of yours."

"Go ahead. You'll never get to my lab."

"I really hate to do this."

The man stood up and took something shiny out of his pocket. That's when Mayu realized that they were brass knuckles. He put them on and then said,

"This is your last warning. Are you going to tell?"

"Never."

"Then you leave me with no choice."

The man swung at Mayu and hit her right in the face. Then he threw another jab into her stomach and one more in the side.

"Are you ready to talk?"

Mayu spat out some blood and then said,

"You wish."

The man continued to beat Mayu. But then suddenly the door opened and Yuki came in.

"Yuki!"

"Mayu? What's going on?"

"I tolf you to stay in the closet!"

"Well look what we have here."

The other man grabbed Yuki and threw her onto the floor.

"Hey boss this one looks really tasty. Can i have her?"

"Sure. Do what you want."

"No!"

"Mayu!"

The man pinned Yuki down and started to tear her clothes.

"Yuki!"

Mayu tried to move but the man punched her again in the face.

"You're not going anywhere until you tell me where the lab is."

"Never!"

"Mayu!"

The man had taken off Yuki's blouse and was now aiming for her panties. Mayu could see the buldge in his pants and knew exactly what he was going to do to her. If Mayu didn't do something then Yuki would be ruined.

"Yuki!"

Mayu stood up and slammed into the the guy. He fell to the ground and then Mayu ran over to the other guy on Yuki.

"Get away from her!"

Mayu slammed into him knocking him over. She struggled to keep him down and managed to loosen the ropes on her. With a little strength, she broke free from the ropes and then proceeded to beat the guy to a pulp.

"Mayu!"

Mayu looked over and saw the other man holding Yuki with a gun pointed to her.

"NO!"

"Tell me where the lab is!"

Mayu was silent. She wasn't sure what to do. She had to decided what was more important. Her lab or Yuki. It was a hard decision and Mayu was running out of time. Then she finally said,

"I'll only tell you if you let her go."

"And why would I do that?"

"Because that girl is a dead girl. Even if you shoot her she won't die."

"You're kidding me."

"Would I lie?"

The man stared at Yuki and then saw the scars on her arms and legs where they had been sewn on.

"I can't believe it. The rumors were true after all. I congradulate you Watanabe for creating such a magnificent master piece. It's no wonder you take so much pride in it."

"Yuki is not an object! Now give her back!"

"And what do I get in return?"

"Take me. You need my hand scan and retna scan to her in."

"Alright then let's go."

The man threw Yuki to the side and grabbed Mayu.

"Mayu!"

"Stay Yuki! I don't want you to get hurt."

"I would listen to her if I were you."

Mayu led the man to a book shelf. She pulled a certain book and it open revealing a secret entrance. She had to scan her hand and eye for the door to unlock.

"Just follow the path and you'll get there. Can I go now?"

"Not yet."

The man pushed Mayu down the stairs and she fell all the way to the bottom.

"You stay there for a while."

The man left Mayu lying in pain. He walked over to her computer and pulgged in a flash drive. Then he started to down load certain files. Those files were her research on her bionic body parts expeiment. When he finished, he walked back over to Mayu.

"Thanks for the help."

He was about to walk away but then Mayu grabbed onto his leg.

"Oh still got fight left in you? Well then..."

The man started to punch Mayu and kick her with his other leg. But not matter how much he hit her Mayu would not let go. That research was important to her and wasn't going to let him have it.

"Stupid brat."

He kept kicking and punching untiil suddenly he stopped. Mayu felt blood drip onto her face. She looked up and saw a large blade sticking through the man's chest. Then he collapsed to the ground entirely. Standing behind him was Yuki.

"Yuki!"

"Mayu!"

Yuki hugged Mayu so tightly that she tought her already damaged organs were going to break.

"Yuki I can't breathe!"

"Sorry!"

Yuki let go giving Mayu a chance to catch her breath.

"Where did you get the knife?" Mayu asked.

"It was under your bed." Yuki said.

"Really? How come I didn't remember that?"

"I don't know and I don't care. I just want to know if you're alright. You look badly beaten."

"I'm fine Yuki really. See?"

Mayu tried to stand but fell back down from the pain.

"I knew it. You weren't fine."

"Can't blame me for trying."

"Hold still and let me get the first aid kit."

Yuki got the first aid kit and started to bandage Mayu. Her injuries weren't too bad and she would live. Yuki helped Mayu get up and were about to walk back into the house. But then the other man who wasn't dead was standing there pointing a gun right at Mayu.

"You'll pay for that!"

He fired and the bullet shot straight at Mayu. But instead of her getting hit, Yuki was the one that got hit.

"Yuki!"

"I'm fine Mayu. See?"

Mayu could see where the bullet had hit and see the blood coming out. But yet Yuki remained perfectly fine. Mayu remembered that although Yuki has organs they only act out thier main tasks. Thing keeping Yuki alive was the heart Mayu gave her. Shoot it and Yuki was dead but the man didn't know that.

"Finish him."

"As you wish."

Yuki took the blade that had been in the other guy and threw it at the one holding the gun. It hit him right in the head killing him instantly.

"Good job Yuki!"

"Yay I did good!"

"You did Yuki you did!"

"Mayu I'm tired. Let's go back to bed ok?"

"Alright let's go."

Mayu and Yuki went back to bed and Mayu was tired after a long and scary night. She would have to worry about cleaning up the bodies later. But for now all she wanted to do was rest. However right when she was about to fall asleep, her alarm went off saying it was time to get up.

"You have got to be kidding me."

Mayu had no choice but to get up and walk into the kitchen. Then she grabbed the phone and dialed a number.

"Hey Rena I got two fresh ones here for you. Send Jurina over to comes and get them."

A couple minutes later Jurina showed up with two body bags.

"Where are they?"

"Down in the lab."

"You don't look to good." Jurina said.

"Well they did almost kill me so looking good isn't what I'm going to worry about now." Mayu said.

"Sorry I'll go get the bodies."

Mayu forgot to mention that sometimes Rena likes to take dead bodies and use their organs for something else. Mayu didn't know entirely but she knew it was gross.

"Rena says thanks. See you later."

Jurina left and then Mayu started to get ready for work. But then Yuki walked in half awake and staggered over. When Mayu saw Yuki she almost screamed. Mayu forgot that the bullet was still in Yuki and she didn't take it out yet.

"Uh Yuki come sit over here."

"Ok."

Yuki sat down on the chair and Mayu pulled out her operation kit.

"Pull up your shirt."

Yuki pulled up her shirt revealing a bloody black hole. If Mayu didn't pull it out soon then it would get infected.

"Alright Yuki I just need you to hold still."

Mayu took a pair of plyers and drove them into the wound.

"Let me know if you feel any pain."

Yuki couldn't really feel pain. That was one thing Mayu had done for her when she brought Yuki back. She turned off Yuki's pain receptors. Mayu dug in further until she felt the bullet. She slowly started to pull it out but then it got stuck midway. She pulled a little harder but it still wouldn't budge.

"Yuki you're going to have to help me out."

Mayu reached out and pressed her hand against Yuki's left mound.

"Kya! Mayu!"

"Sorry but I gotta get it out!"
 
Using Yuki as leverage, she slowly started to pull the bullet out. Yuki moaned every time Mayu had to tighten her grip. Then finally Mayu got the bullet out. She threw it out and then sealed the wound. She cleaned the blood up and put a bandage on Yuki. Then she walked over to the table and got herself a glass of tea.

"You didn't have to be so rough you know." Yuki said.

"Hey it was the only way to get the bullet it out." Mayu said.

"But still it felt really weird. Don't do that again."

"Roger that."

Yuki walked away and Mayu stared at her. But more importantly she stared at Yuki's chest. Mayu looked back at her own and frowned.

"At least you have something."

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Chapter 6 done! I hope you guys liked it! Mayu came to the rescue and saved Yuki! But then Yuki saved Mayu so I guess they could call it even. Yuuki is almost ready to come back so just wait a little longer. But for now please tell us what you think and look forward to the next update!

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #27 on: September 03, 2012, 12:57:33 PM »
Poor Mayu has a flat chest xD

She's growing LOLOL
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #28 on: September 03, 2012, 08:42:51 PM »
Hel-lo~.....we did I say it like that? No reason.  I'm feeling better now, I slept almost half of the day~ sooo I hope Ill write something interesting....

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Chapter 7


Could the mornings be all the same? In the same familiar scent and warmth, the same soft breath so close to her.The sof hair ,the godness of a body that died with a kind personality.Colud they always be Mayu's?

The same morning that Mayu hopes to never end.To wake up beside Yuki, a girl how's life ended too soon.A ded girl that Mayu had wake up from her eternal sleep as soon as she started it, for a science reason, for a stupid reason.

Can she have Yuki with her forever? What really does Mayu wants? To be a scientist as such a age, to be known and rich....and still to have no one with you.Mayu maybe wants 'love', a mothers one or a lovers one.

But had Mayu always been like this? Had she never been kissed, cared and loved be someone else?

Well ,todays chapter is about Mayus first love.

How we got here? Well, everything started on a morning like all others.....

Mayu wake up with the same warm body beside her, sometimes wondering why Yuki's body was warm , as it shouldnt be? The warmth was sometimes making Mayu lost her ambition and just sleep all day beside Yuki.But she was still busy, there was no way she would give her science for another hour of sleep beside Yuki,right?

Mayu ribbed her eyes, now she was starting to deny that.....maybe another hour of sleep wouldnt hurt.
Mayu moved to face Yuki, only to bury her face in Yuki's chest.It was soft, and warm like always.....Mayu rubed her nose on hee chest,yearning soft moans from a sleeping Yuki.Mayu smiled a little.Everything was so paceful, outside was sunny, the sky was clear.Nothing bad was happening, inside she was sleeping in her big bed with Yuki, the person....the dead girl how.....the woman.....someone important to Mayu.Mayu couldnt really put in in words, the emotions she felt.

These emotions have been there before.With the first person that made her feel like that.Mayu sat up suddenly and looked at the calendar on the door.It was 20 June, her first important persons birthday.Mayu smiled sadly and looked outside the window.

She got out the bed and started her morning routine.All the while wearing a sad smile on her face.But today wasnt just the persons birthday, in the same day that person had left Mayu alone and had gone.

Yuki wake up and entered the kitchen 10 minutes later, she smiled at Mayu and sat down.
Mayu looked at her for a second before turning to her work.

'ne Mayuyu?'
'yes...?'
'why.....why is that there?' Yuki asked smiling and poiting to a huge place in the room with all kind of flowers.
'...' Mayu turned to the place and looked emotionless before turned to Yuki again and smiled 'today is my best friends birthday'
'your best friend? where is she now?' Yuki asked curious
'she is at the other end.Shelives in another country...'

'ehhh?!' Yuki looked surprised
Mayu looked at her with a sad smile
'If you want I can tell you about her'

'Really?! If you can..' Yuki asked carefuly, not wanting Mayu to feel hurt as she told her
'its okay.' Mayu smiled and looked at the flowers

'We where both 14 when it happened...

We spend most of our days together, we played and had fun together.We were truly happy.But at a moment we both wanted more, more to be with each other.So it was like this, on a day after schools when we walked home, she suddenly stoped and I looked back at her
"M-Mayuyu...." she says my name trembling a little
"hmm? Whats wrong ****?" I look back at her and smile
"I....I want to be with Mayuyu more....I want Mayuyu to be my girlfriend!" she shouts and looks down trembling while I was fr---'

Yuki intrerupts Mayu suddenly
'w-wait!! You never said she was your girlfriend!!'
'didnt I?' Mayu asks innocently 'anyway!

I was frosen for a few seconds but then I smiled and said
'yes...I love you too! please be my girlfriend!'

And like that we both said our love for each other.It was awkard but I was happy and so was she.

From there on, we where still together all the time.Everywhere, the phone calls where still as many,messages and the same time spent together.But the diference where the sweet words we  would tell each other ,the groping and secret smiles at each other in classes.We loved each other....

But we never kissed, we both wherent ready yet.So we continued like that, some could say we where still only best friends, but we know the truth.

Her familly had a tragic end, that was our end.Her parents died in a car accident.She had a hard time so I stayed be her side.I didnt want to lest go, I never wanted to lets go to what we had.But after a while we both, somehow know that we werent for each other.

We loved each other, but after her parents died everyone seemed colder about our relationship.They believed she was she was too imature, and they looked coldly at us.We tried fighting but when her grandparents comed, they decided to take her and live together, somewhere far from here.....

We didnt really had a choisse.After all ,we wherent made for each other,we know that because she falled in love with someone else very fast.She know that when she will find a single person to fall in love with that will really stay more that will be.And I know that she wasnt for me as I had never imagined us doing something more than groping.....I still wanted a kiss though.

She was to go soon, and I had been at her side until the time comed.And so had it come.....she had to take the train alone, her grandparents had gone before her.So I walked her at the train, and waited until it was about to go.

But I can tell you this .....my first kiss tasted like tears.'

Mayu smiled , in front of her Yuki was crying

'why couldnt they leave you two together?..you sounded so happy!' Yuki tryed to make the tears to stop but they wouldnt, even if she didnt feel any pain, the tears just appeared.

Mayu sighed 'It wasnt good, we both wanted to go different ways anyway.But we are still best friends even if we dont spend as much time together.'

Mayu looked aout the window
'It was like love in dramas,as if it was just waiting for the right time, the departure bell-rang. We looked at each other with tears on our cheeks, even if it was winter be then.The chilly wind brushed my cheeks and made me not feel the tears.

I just couldnt say it.I rubbed my hands together ,I looked so phatetic.
I decided to not look back.So everything would be fine and we would live our lifes the way we wanted,not with regret.So I told her

'"Thank you, good-bye" and smiled

A bettersweet unrequited love.That what my love was, I loved her more than I told her.Hoping that she wont get hurt while I had my heart broken in pieces.She was a perv, a true perv ,but I loved her.

So I continued to move forward, so I wont remember our past.

Our love was a true drama....'

Mayu finished and closed her eyes smiling.On the other hand Yuki's tears didnt stop, she didnt feel anything but still couldnt stop so she sat up and hugged Mayu.

A bell rang in the silent house.The entrace bell, the sound wake Mayu from her sweet memories and hug.

'I wonder how it is? no one really comes here' Yuki sais as she lets Mayu go and walks together to the door.

Mayu opens the door and is frozen in shock.
'Hey there Oshiri sister!' Oshima Yuko smiles at Mayu.
'Y-yuko.....' Mayu cryes and jumps on Yuko.

Yuki looks confused at them
'Im happy to see you too! today is my birthday remember~ I want cake!' Yuko takes Mayu and walks together inside.

'how is this?' Yuki asks after Mayu lets go of Yuko,Yuki was getting a strange feeling for a second there.
'this is Oshima Yuko.My best friend!' Mayu says happy
'e-ehhhhhh~!?' Yuki looks shocked at the midget

'wahh! beautiful girlfriend you got Mayuyu~ can I borrow her for a while?' Yuko asks smirking
'she is not my girlfriend Yuko.She is my maid.' Mayu says looking with a little glare at Yuko 'and you know I dont like sharing...'
Yuko sweetdropes 'yes~ sorry!'

One hour later, Yuko left with work.Mayu was happy to had seen her friend again and Yuki was irritated.
'whats wrong Yukirin?' Mayu asks looking at Yuki

'that...that squirrel is a perv!! how could she had been your first love?! ' Yuki shouts enraged 'She groped my boobs and butt ! are you sure she wasnt your pet!?a squirrel you give life with science.....'

Mayu looked at Yuki shocked for a few moments before bursting out laughing.Yuki looked at her surprised then sighed and smiled at this cute side of Mayu.

Yes, after all these kid of days where the best, as well as the mornings.Mayu didnt want it to ever end.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #29 on: September 03, 2012, 08:57:08 PM »
Wah great chapter yuuki!  :luvluv1:

It's good to finally have you back! :farofflook:

I'll be looking forward to seeing more updates from you!  :hee:

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #30 on: September 03, 2012, 10:22:51 PM »
OMG!!! Yuki almost raped Mayuyu!!! Too bad Rena came before lol

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #31 on: September 03, 2012, 10:30:07 PM »
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh  :shock:
Yuko is Mayu's first love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :grr:
it's good to see you again yuuki-chan  :onioncheer:

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #32 on: September 04, 2012, 09:22:12 AM »
Review chapter 6.
 :shocked: That was brutal!
Those guys!  :kickass:

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Oh I knew it! *she's pervert then I knew it was the "squirrel"
Oh even if Yukirin don't have an emotion/feeling but she seems jealous  XD

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #33 on: September 10, 2012, 06:41:11 PM »
Oh! Totally intersting *.* Love scify (well its kinda scify, isn't it? Xp) \o/

So Yuko was Mayu's first love heuheuhe

Funny the way she Cleaned up the bodies xD

Keep writing you two o/ I really liked this fic o/

Thanks for this chapter *.*

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #34 on: October 06, 2012, 10:56:21 PM »
Reminder: UPDATE!


Sorry, I put this so I will remember to update it tomorrow.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #35 on: March 25, 2013, 01:42:25 PM »
Please update soon  :bow:
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #36 on: March 26, 2013, 09:19:56 AM »
Oh! So it is collaboration fic?  :hehehe:
Then what happen next? Please update soon...  :hee:
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #37 on: April 15, 2013, 11:19:52 PM »
continuous soon
I want to know what will happen, this is like Frankenstain

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #38 on: April 16, 2013, 02:57:37 AM »
I like the story a lot...

I just came across it...

Wah.. modern Frankenstein

Can't wait to see how Yuki and Mayu going to develop into...

Thank you for the interesting story

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 6
« Reply #39 on: July 19, 2014, 01:11:14 AM »
The story was awsome

Mayuki is so cute and lol Yuki reaction at the end of the ch 6

Please update

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