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Artificial Love update Chapter 8
« on: August 29, 2012, 05:00:47 AM »
Minna! This is miyumi! I have some interesting news. I have decided to write a fanfic with yuukimoko. You may all know her as the creator of Love Puppy and Risky Game. We've talked about writing a Mayuki fanfic for a while and now here it is! I hope everyone enjoys it and finds it both lovely and tragic.
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Artificial Love Prolouge

Watanabe Mayu is known for being the greatest scientist in the world. Her alone has done so much in the world of science that has helped the world so much. Everyone sees her as a hero and a genuis. People say that she's greater than Einstien and Newton combined. Watanabe Mayu is the the world's greatest scientist. But there is one thing she has not done yet that has never been done before. And that is bring back the dead. But today, she will make that happen with a little science.

"I need a fresh one. One that died recently..."

Mayu flipped through the channals hoping to find a report of dead bodies. She was looking for one that was fresh and not rotten and gross looking. She also wanted the body to be young and pretty. She knew finding a body like that wasn't going to be easy but she had her hopes up. She was flipping through the channals when she saw a news report.

"Today a young girl died when she fell off a building during a field trip. She was 21 when she died and witnesses say it was the manufacturer's fault for not making safer rails."

Mayu didn't care about the rest of it. She just wanted to know where the body was. She looked around and then saw that the body was going to be buried at certain cemetary that happend to be close to her.

"Perfect!"

Later on that night Mayu snuck into the graveyard and dug up the coffin the body was in. With the help of her hover pad, Mayu brought the body back to her lab. She opened the coffin and stared in awe at the body. The girl was truly beautiful and it was a shame that she died. But soon she was going to be back.

"Alright let's get started."

Mayu set the body on the table and began the operation. She had to get rid of all the organs that were no longer useful and replaced them with new ones. She also had to replace a couple limbs because the bones were so badly broken. The brain was a mess so she scooped it out and put a new one in. The last part Mayu needed to complete her creation was a heart. Mayu had every body part except a heat.

"Ahh what to do.... I know!"

Mayu walked over to her table and pulled out a small heart shaped decive. It was an invention she was working on for the hospitals. It would serve as an artificial heart and keep patients that needed a heart transplants alive until they found a donar. The staff didn't want her to try it on a live human but they didn't say anything about a dead one.

"Alright now one more thing."

Mayu grabbed two metal bolts and shoved them into the left and right sides of the head. She twisted them in to make sure they were nice and tight. Then she was ready to start the experiment.

"Alright Mayu let's see if you did this right."

Mayu put on her goggles and then walked over to a switch. She flipped it and then two bolts of lightning shot out and aimed right at the bolts on the head. She left it on for about two minutes and then switched it off.

"Did it work?"

The body was silent. It didn't move at all let alone look like it was breathing.

"Maybe I did something wrong."

Mayu turned around to go look at her notes but then she heard shuffling from behind her. She looked over and saw the girl alive breathing and all.

"IT'S ALIVE!"

"Hey what's going on?"

"Oh and it can talk to."

"Yes now can you please tell me what's going on?"

"Well long story short, you died and I brought you back to life."

"EHHHH!"

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Well there is the prolouge! Let yuuki-sama and I know what you think and whether or not we should continue. It's up to you guys! Yuuki-sama, I leave the rest to you.
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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 05:49:52 AM »
 :welcome :welcome :welcome
very interesting I hope your next update
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I hope other couples who are
You're the best
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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #2 on: August 29, 2012, 06:20:02 AM »
A collaboration! Nice! :thumbsup

The prologue looks mighty interesting and I would love to see more definitely. Yuki's over-the-top reaction is already making me LOL :lol: FrankenYuki!

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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2012, 11:29:17 AM »
..... :ptam-glow:

OMG! Must continue! Collaboration! Woaaah! Franken Yuki!
How cool is that!


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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2012, 11:50:23 AM »
It's really interesting miyumi-chan yuuki-chan  :ding:
"Yes now can you please tell me what's going on?"

"Well long story short, you died and I brought you back to life."

"EHHHH!"
wow I like this part she is alive  :whistle:
please update soon I want to know the next chapter 1 please  :onioncheer: :on gay:

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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #5 on: August 29, 2012, 12:26:06 PM »
LOL!!!!! Yuki is like the franckeinstein's monster ^^
I like it!!!!!

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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #6 on: August 29, 2012, 01:13:46 PM »
Waahwaaah ! I so like the prologue ~~~

Yee~ So, it's a collab ! Naisu ! With Yuuki-chan and Miyumi ! Woah, seems like you ppl like MaYuki too much~

Not that we hate it or anything xD

LOLOL Yuki Frankenstein  :rofl: :rofl:

I hope you guys would update soon  :cathappy:
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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2012, 01:40:07 PM »
HELLO.

MIYUMI-SAN.

CAN YOU MAKE AN ATSUMINA?OR BLACKGEKIKARA?

THANK YOU.

I HOPE YOU CAN DO MY REQUEST.


I WILL WAIT :D
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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2012, 06:52:21 PM »
Yeah, so how Miyumi-chan said. Its a collaboration........So I must post the first chapter.....

Byt I'm sooooo tired right now~ I must learn for my english exam from tomorrow...but Im lazy to do that ...Ill try writing the chapter.Please forgive me everyone!!!

Forgive me ,ne?


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"EHHHH!"

Mayu stared blankly at her for a second, before on her face appeared a smile
'Your over reaction is kind of cute'

Yuki blushed 'w-what do you mean I died and now I'm alive?! That's impposible!'
'But it is. With science everything is posible!' Mayu looked at her with a frown

'science?' Yuki looked at her 'but arent you just a kid?'
Mayu was getting mad now, how could she say that?!

'I am not a kid! I am the best in the world at science!' Mayu looked determined at Yuki 'I am Watanabe Mayu!'
Yuki was shocked be the shouting but lookedt at her confused
'hmm.....should your name say something to me? I dont know you'
Mayu stared shocked too '....do you ever watch tv, or read news?'
'no' Yuki shock her head
Mayu facepalmed, this was a girl how didnt know her

'so your name is....?' Mayu asked
'Kashiwagi Yuki desu, ready for fight~' Yuki said not thinking

'fine then! but I still brought you to life.So from now on you must take care of me as thanks.' Mayu crossed her arms and looked Yuki's body from head to toe.
Yuki saw that and covered her chest ,blushed and looked somewhere else.
'you....pervert....' Yuki said close to tears
'well, you have a nice body so dont make that face.' Mayu said with a sigh

'so.....I must be your maid?'
'yes.You will live with me from now on.I will take care of you and you of me.' Mayu smiled a little
Yuki watched her blankly, after she recovered from the shock.
Mayu watched back, they started a staring contest .

2 minutes later Mayu spoke
'.....is it me, or are you missing something? did I forgot something?' she said thinking
Yuki sat up, while Mayu started moving around her
'you have all your body parts, but be careful, they can sometimes fall.You are dead so dont be surprised'
Mayu said as she admired Yuki's shocked expression again

;Just.....how did she die anyway? if I would have watched the news careful.....; Mayu thought and sighed


'what is that?' Yuki asked as she pointed at a thing in Mayu's house for the xxxxx time. '...or that?'
Mayu groaned frustrated, she had been answering all questions until she felt like making a closing button so she could close Yuki and make her sleep. But she decided to think a little more about it, for now she needed to make Yuki go to sleep.

Mayu went with Yuki to her new room and put her in bed, then went for the exit
'wait..' Yuki's voice was just a whisper
Mayu stoped and turned with a questioning gaze
'I cant.....I cant sleep in new places alone.....I need to sleep with someone for a few days before I can sleep alone...'
Mayu sighed but smiled a little 'arent you just cute~ you're scared of being alone?' she said as she walked to the bed and under the covers beside Yuki
'scared.....what is scared?' the voice whispered again a little quietly as it feel in the abiss of dreams

Mayu stoped dead in her moves, her smile disappeared as she watched Yuki from above her.
Mayu moved her hand and stroked her cheeks, neck and then lips, stoping at her 'heart'

'....you dont have a real 'heart'.....no emotions...'


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I AM SORRY FOR THE LAME CHAPTER!!!! PLEASE FORGIVE ME EVERYONE!!! I had lack of imagination cuz I was half asleep without any music and a hurt back.....

please forgive me Miyumi-chan!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:

Ill try to make the next one a little longer....

R-review..? pl-please? everyone?
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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 07:38:25 PM »
It's ok yuuki-chan I think it's very good in condition like "being tired" and "exam" If it was me I think I could never right a thing  :lol:
 but still you forgot about Yuki's name don't tell me that Mayu didn't listen to what is the name of the dead girl  ( I mean Yuki) in news  XD

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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 07:52:15 PM »
WAAAAAAAHHH :shocked

Really really interesting :twothumbs eheh FrankenYuki! :thumbup
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Re: Artificial Love Prolouge
« Reply #11 on: August 30, 2012, 12:06:13 AM »
LOL Yukirin covering her chest  :rofl:
She doesn't even know the worlds greatest scientist "Watanabe Mayu"  :rofl:
And a part of her body can falling off? OH MY GOD LOLOLOL!

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'....you dont have a real 'heart'.....no emotions...'

Oh I'm sure it will work somehow with a little help from "Mayu" *smirk


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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 2
« Reply #12 on: August 30, 2012, 04:05:02 AM »
Hi everyone I'm back! Here is chapter 2! Chapter 1 was interesting so now I'm going to continue where yuuki-sama left off. I hope you guys like it!
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Chapter 2

Mayu woke up and found herself trapped in Yuki's arms. She basically had to squirm her way out of her grip. Mayu walked into began her daily routine. She walked into the kitchen and activiated her automatic tea maker. While the tea was being made, Mayu pressed a button and a newspaper came out of the table. She grabbed the newspaper and tea and walked over to her computer.

"Computer pull out scheduale."

"Here is today's scheduale."

The computer showed a bunch of different screens showing Mayu's rigorous scheduale. She had three different experiments and two three hour long lectures. Four business meetings and a lunch meeting with a study group. She had a long day planned for today and she was ready.

"Wah!"

Mayu looked over and saw Yuki on the ground. She must have tripped and fell over. Mayu walked over and actually saw that Yuki's right leg had come off.

"What is this!"

"Hang on let me get my kit."

"Why has my leg fallen off?" Yuki said.

"Well it was late last night when I was working on you so the stitching was a little sloppy. But don't worry I'll fix it later." Mayu said.

"Fix it now!"

"Ok ok hang on."

Mayu fixed Yuki's leg and then helped her back up.

"Now be careful. You're still not the most stable thing on the planet."

"Ok. Ne Mayu I'm hungry. Do you have anything to eat?"

"You're hungry?"

Mayu was surprised that Yuki actually felt hunger.

"Yeah. Do you have anything to eat?"

"Um sure hang on. Computer make some toast with stawberry jam!"

"Coming right up."

A couple seconds later a piece of toast came out of the table.

"Ehhh! Where did it come from?"

"The table. Now eat."

"Oh ok. Thanks!"

Yuki took a bite into the toast but then spat it back out.

"What's wrong?"

"It tastes awful!"

"Really?"

Mayu took a bite from the toast.

"Tastes fine to me." Mayu said.

"It tasted like garbage to me." Yuki said.

"Hmm maybe your tastebuds aren't right. I'll fix it later."

"Why must you do things later?"

"Because I'm an important person. Now while I'm gone I need you to do some house work. I'll be back before dinner."

"I have to do work?"

"Yes it's part of the payment for me bringing you back to life."

"I didn't ask to be brought back to life you know."

"Well too bad now get to work!"

"Hai...."

Mayu put on her lab coat and then set off to work. She first went to the down town lab where she was experimenting with cells. She was trying to create organs out of small tissue samples from the actual organ. If she could figure it out then organ donations would decrease. She was also working on bionic limbs. Prosetics don't work as well so Mayu was trying to make a better one. The last one she was working on was brain restoration. She was trying to create a machine that would restore a brain that had been damaged in an accident. Mayu had a lot of work on her hands but some how she managed to do it all.

"Now let's see here you go over there and you in here. Wait no maybe over here..."

Mayu was in the lab four hours. The staff limited how long she worked because she could go on for days without getting sleep. When she finished, she went to a university where she gave lectures about human anatomy and biology. One class she loved and the other she hated. She was at the university for six hours.

"Man I hate those kids. Calling me a kid I'm older than them!"

Mayu's next stop was a manufacturing company for Mayu's inventions. She had to make sure that everything was going along smoothly and there were no problems.

"Ok so this and this needs to be fixed and we need to lower the price on that. Man I hate stocks."

Her last stop was a lunch meeting with a group she worked with. They were working on a alternate fuel source for cars. They're trying to create a car that ran on water and were very close to inventing it. They would meet everyday and discuss about it over lunch. She would be there for another four hours because they usually had long indepth conversations. Plus Mayu always orderd a ton of deserts.

"Wah another full belly. I better get home to Yuki and make sure she's alright."

Before Mayu walked home, she stopped at a manga store. She would stop there everyday and buy on manga for her to read before she went to bed. It was very relaxing for the nonstop cyborg. She picked up a manga and then went home.

"Yuki I'm ho- what the heck?!"

Mayu came home and saw her place trashed. There was broken glass everywhere and the sink was flooding. There was a small fire in the corner and even a hole in the floor. The place was a mess and Yuki was nowhere in sight.

"Yuki!"

"Mayu!"

Mayu ran into the main living room and found Yuki's body parts scrambled all over and now she was nothing but a stub.

"What happened?" Mayu said.

"I fell!" Yukirin said.

"Ahh you're hopeless!"

After two hours Mayu was finally able to clean up the mess Yuki made. She didn't want to hear any excuses because she was too tired. She just changed and went into her room. She pulled out her new manga and started reading. But then she heard the door open and saw Yuki come in.

"What do you want Yuki?"

"I'm really sorry about what happened to today."

"It's fine Yuki. It wasn't your fault."

"You're mad at me."

"No I'm not."

"Yes you are."

"I'm not."

"Well incase you are, I brought you some warm milk."

Yuki set the glass down and then started to walk away.

"Wait!"

"What?"

"For tonight, you can sleep in my room"

A bright smile strecteh acorss Yuki's face.

"Thank you so much!"

Yuki hopped into the bed and snuggled closely next to Mayu.

"Jeez what am I going to do with you."

Mayu thought Yuki look pretty cute asleep.

"You know you're not bad for a dead girl."

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Well there's chapter 2! Please tell us what you think and yuuki-sama I leave the next chapter to you!

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 2
« Reply #13 on: August 30, 2012, 12:35:01 PM »
I can't understand what is Yuki she is human or a cyborg ?  :dunno:
Mayu started to devloppe feelings for Yuki  :hehehe:
I love it  :shy2: :luvluv1:

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 2
« Reply #14 on: August 30, 2012, 08:40:16 PM »
mmmmmm.... :ding:

Mayu has a really full schedule!! :dozing:

She think Yuki is cute :shy2:
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 2
« Reply #15 on: August 30, 2012, 10:25:37 PM »
Mayu is a busy cyborg  XD

But Yukirin i a walking mess LOL poor Yukirin  :rofl:

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« Reply #16 on: August 31, 2012, 05:03:35 PM »
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A dead girl....

Mayu never thought about it really.To live with someone after such a long time......

Long ago, when her parents left her alone she had promised to become something they never thought she cant become. Rich.Famousl.Inteligent.Known.

Everything that she could become, she had become.She is rich, famous, inteligent and known.

But she always missed it......the thing she never had......was truly 'love' .A emotion that cause the human heart to beat faster, the mind to stop thinking and the moves to be strange.

Love was a emotions Mayu didnt really want to exparience, even if she wanted it....she wanted to feel loved. What was better, to love or to by loved?

Mayu wake up late the next morning, in Yuki's arms again.The warm feeling had invaded her, making her sleep more.But if only, if only the heart was real......

Mayu shock the idea from her head and got up and out of Yuki's arms. Yuki was after all just an experiment.So there was no need to attach to her.Yuki must just live with her, so that everything will be fine.

The contact was not needed.So that Yuki will remain here until the final, she must be nice.

Mayu walked in the kitchen and like usualy sat down at the table and started reading something.She didnt have anyting planed for that day.That was a day where she really dindt do anything! it was truly boring for Mayu.

Yuki walked in the kitchen and sat in fron of Mayu, staring at her.

'....what are you reading?'

'Science things and some boring things'

'.....what are you doing today?'

'...sitting.I dont have anything today, its one of the few days in the year when I dont do anything.'

'...how long do I have to live with you?'

'Unt---forever. I give you life again, so you have to stay here forever.' Mayu didnt even look at Yuki

Yuki frowned 'but what am I supposed to do all day? and forever? I cant do anything with a body that just goes off easy.....I want to go out!'

'No.'

'Ehhh~! Why?!' Yuki sat up

'cuz' you cant.' Mayu said

'....' Yuki pouted and glared at Mayu

Mayu continued to ignore her, reading and eating.Yuki just stond there glaring at Mayu.At a moment Yuki started looking at Mayu differently, her eyes softened and a small smile appeared.Mayu was really cute in Yuki's eyes, a scentist or not, Mayu was still a child alone in the world.Yuki wanted to reach out her hand and pat Mayu's head softly, to hold her close in her embrace and kiss her......Wasnt Mayu just so cute? her always serious face, and beautiful hair.These eyes that always seemed to study you but always searching for something, something emotional, love maybe.Or the embrace of a mother.

Yuki shock her head, trying to get all these things out her head.There was no need to feel something for someone how wake you up from sleep, without giving a reason and making her a walking her a puppet.She could be named a zombie, as her arms and legs can fall if she makes a move she souldnt, or just trip .She was like a dead body walking, her brain could still by used, but sometimes it could hurt.She hated this......all that had happened in her past......and now this.....was this a punishment?

Just, what sin did she commit to have such a punishment?

'..... ' Yuki stared at Mayu again and sat back down.

What do they have in common? They where so different....Mayu was still a kid, while Yuki was a adult alredy.Mayu was rich,famous,important, witle Yuki was a common human, no one important.No one needed Yuki.....Maybe that was why Mayu took her, because no one would care if she was back or dead.After all ,Mayu was a scientist, she could do tests on her.Transforme her in a monster, something more hideous than this.Or she could just trew her to trash, or to someone how wanted to have its way with her......why would Mayu care anyway?.....she was just a puppet in her collection.

'how about we do something together then?' Yuki asked forcing a small smile.She needed to stop thinking so bad.

'...' Mayu looked up 'fine, what something then?'

Yuki put a hand on her cheek and titled her head thinking.After a few seconds a smile appeared on her face, a smile too sweet for Mayu's liking.

Yuki looked at Mayu softly, that face could make Mayu do anything,only to see it.

'You know....I always wanted to have a daughter, but now that I'm dead I cant anymore...' Yuki's face turned sad,making Mayu's heart hurt.She wanted to see the soft eyes and smile again. 

'so would you mind......being my daughter?' Yuki looked at Mayu

These words wake Mayu up from her thoughts and asked 'w-what?!'

'please?I promise to not play the baby with you, only a little?' Yuki was about to cry, Mayu started panicking

'o-okay.But no exagerations!' Mayu sat up and crossed her arms.

Yuki smiled again, the smile made Mayu's heart skip a beat.

Yuki sat up, and hugged Mayu , whispering 'Thank you,Mayuyu....'


One hour later, Mayu found herself in a strange situation.She was in her bed reading a book.There was nothing strange about this .Absolutely nothing.That if you count out the cute clothes she was in,the pillows in the form of Yuki's breats she was resting her head on, the glass of milk on the drawer beside the bed, and the smiling Yuki behind her.

More exactly, she was sitting on the bed with her back and head on Yuki, sitting between Yuki's legs .Yuki had her hands around her wrist, holding her close and hiding her smiling face in Mayu's hair.Well, this was such a strange sittuation for Mayu how didnt have human contact for such a long time....this was warm,relaxing and .....just beautiful.It was like a mother's embrace, or a lovers one.

Mayu blushed a little as she felt Yuki pressed a kiss on top of her head.Such a warm moment.....Mayu smiled, she didnt feel like wanting this moment to ever end.

Mayu started reading from the book again, smiling as she relaxed.If only everyday could be like this....she pushed the thoughts out her head and continued reading as Yuki brushed and played with her hair.

'nee, Mayu?'

'yes?'

'do you have anyone close?like a fellow or someone that works together with you?'

'hmm~ well, I have Rena, she is a  fellow scientist and Jurina, her little assistant.I work with them sometimes, they are good to get along with.'

'hmmmm~' Yuki hummed as one of her hands lets go of Mayu's wrist and interviewed her hand with one of Mayus.

Mayu blushed again, but sat still as she liked this so much......it was so good to not be alone anymore.

Yuki hummed a song softly , Mayu continued to read ,listening to Yuki's sweet voice.Such a heart warming moment.....could things be like this forever?If not......

Yuki took the glass of milk and took a sip, it was warm and good.Even trough she still didnt have a good taste she still enjoyed it.She then smiled

'Mayuyu~ here' Yuki placed the glass in front of Mayu's mouth, making her take a sip.Mayu took it thankfuly, she liked it, and smiled happy.


The day flyed away fast, the sweet and paceful moments didnt ended trough. Mayu and Yuki got in bed, and Yuki embraced Mayu with a hand around her shoulders and legs one on the others.Mayu burried her face in Yuki's neck ,inhaling her scent and blushing.Yuki smiled, patted Mayu's head and placed a kiss on her forehead

'good night,Mayuyu...'

'Good Night,Yukirin' Mayu said back as she smiled happy.Tomorrow would be a work day again, but she felt warm inside knowing that Yuki would be there for her.She would end work fast and come back to spend more time with her dead girl.....



So was said, but the next morning Mayu wake up with no body beside her.She sat up and looked around the house, there was no Yuki.

She ran to the door, there was a paper.

'I'm sorry.'

Mayu dropped to ker knees.

Yuki was gone.

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So much for updating and all. Yesterday I had a panic attack. The stress finally got to me and I started crying in me english exam.......I feel horrible! I got all shy and scared, I couldnt look them in the eyes and I started crying when I saw that I couldnt read anything right.....

I had a written examination in witch I did something, but when I had the speaking exam I lost it.....I am soooooo bad at english......

Please forgive me everyone for my mistakes! And for the short chapter! I almost give up on writing  because of the stress, because of that I didnt update yesterday.

Once more, please forgive my idiotical actions and behavior.

Please review? Next up is Miyumi-chan.
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 2
« Reply #17 on: August 31, 2012, 05:53:47 PM »
yuuki-chan don't cry  :pleeease:
I'm sure it will be ok in the next exam  :on GJ:
yuuki-chan gambatee!!!  :onioncheer:
I love this chapter  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
but Yuki is gone!! :stoned:
where is Yuki  :OMG:
where did she go why she leaved Mayu!  :OMG:
So was said, but the next morning Mayu wake up with no body beside her.She sat up and looked around the house, there was no Yuki.
She ran to the door, there was a paper.
'I'm sorry.'
I can't understand it whyy  :frustrated:
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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 4
« Reply #18 on: September 01, 2012, 05:06:36 AM »
Alright everyone I just wanted to let you know that I might be taking over for the next few chapters. Yuuki isn't feeling so well right now so I'm going to fill in. Let's all hope she gets better soon! So for now, let me start what she left off!
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Chapter 4

Mayu couldn't believe what was thinking. Yuki was gone and Mayu was now all alone again. Yuki left without saying a word. Just the words "i'm sorry." There was a pain in her chest. Something she haden't felt since the day her parents left her. It had been so long that she had forgotten what it was called. Was it sadness? Despair? Loneliness? Whatever it was Mayu was feeling it and she didn't like it one bit.

"What is this?"

In frustration Mayu threw Yuki's note into the fire place. But she soon realized it was a mistake and reached into the fire to pull it back out. The note wasn't burned but Mayu's hand was burned. The pain shot thorugh her body like an electric shock. That was when Mayu realized that she wasn't a cyborg. She was human and she did feel things like pain. That also meant she felt love.

"Yuki..."

Mayu grabbed her coat and ran out into the rain. She got into her car and started driving down the street as fast as she could. The fact that it was raining wasn't helping her see the road better. She looked everywhere but still couldn't find anything. Then out of the mirror, she saw somehthing that she recgonized. Mayu stopped the car and walked over to a nearby dumpster. In it was human arm. Mayu could tell it was Yuki's because she knew that kind hand from only Yuki.

"Where did you go?"

Mayu put the arm in the car and then started to walk into a alley. A few ways in she found another arm and then half way she found one leg. At the end she found the other leg but not Yuki. Mayu looked around hoping to see a nothing but a torso. Then hiding under an old newspaper was a limbless Yuki.

"Yukirin!"

Mayu rushed over and pressed her head against Yuki's chest. It was feint but the artificial heart was keeping her alive. If she got get back to the lab then she should be able to bring save her. Mayu carried Yuki and the rest of her body into the car and drove. When she got back to the house, Mayu placed Yuki on the operating table. She put on an oxygen mask and started to operate.

"Hang on Yuki. I'm not going to let you go."

Mayu spent ten hours operating on Yuki. She made sure that every limb was reattached and would stay there. She put in extra effort on the stitching so it would look like they were barely there. When she had finished she was really tired. She fell asleep holding onto Yuki's hand. A couple hours later Yuki had woken up and saw her adorable cyborg asleep. She also noticed that her arms and legs were back. Yuki was amazed at how well sewed on they were.

"Mayuyu."

Mayuyu woke up and saw Yuki starting at her.

"Yuki!"

Mayu wrapped her arms around Yuki and hugged her tightly.

""Why! Why did you leave me!"

Mayu was now crying sheding her tears on yuki. yuki felt terrible for what she had done and started to comft Mayu.

"Why did you leave me?"

"I'm sorry Mayu. I just didn't feel right being here. I'm supposed to be dead yet here I am with you. I thought this was my punishment. But now I realize I was wrong.  I'm really sorry Mayu." Yuki said.

"Don't you ever leave me again!"

"I won't."

Mayu continued to sob in Yuki's lap and Yuki stayed by her side not moving and inch. Yuki realized that Mayu used to be all alone before she showed up. Mayu must have been in a lot of pain when she suddenly left without a word. From then on Yuki promied that she would never leave Mayu alone again. But she wondered how long that would be.

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Well it may be a while until the next update. Unless I hear from yuuki there won't be very many updates so for now I hope you guys enjoy the chapter and yuuki I hope you get better soon!

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Re: Artificial Love update Chapter 4
« Reply #19 on: September 01, 2012, 11:32:14 AM »
You're doing a collab too?!
sounds great miyu!!

A short but sweet chapter!
I was fond of mayu nowadays..

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