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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #160 on: November 10, 2012, 03:51:40 AM »
Thanks for the update  :)

I always thought it was strange that Yuria wasn't included to begin with but now she makes an appearance, well sort of  XD
It also sounds like she's some sort of vampire but who knows what's wrong with her

Looking forward to the next update and a trip into the perverted and confusing mind of Airin  :w00t:

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #161 on: November 10, 2012, 05:09:00 AM »
Oh my! Good chapter \o/ Your creativity don't stop to surprise me o/

Now we know why Sally is needed for.

That part on the old facility did freak me out >< Was th at Yuria?

I don't mind get to know everyones past now as long as you keep the exciting end =p

Can't wait next update o/

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #162 on: November 10, 2012, 05:27:09 AM »
Yay update :D And don't worry, take your time with the updates, your readers will always be here :)
Oh God, I have so many questions, and Yuria :O I wonder if that monster was her.
Can't wait to get inside Airin's mind though!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #163 on: November 10, 2012, 10:55:11 AM »
Whoaa Yuria! Now I know why Kanon always need Sally.

I wonder who Yuria? And what is the thing that scared Miichan?

Better look the answer from next update.
Can't wait xD 

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #164 on: November 10, 2012, 11:21:46 AM »
This chapter is so cool! A bit scary but cool ^^

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #165 on: November 10, 2012, 03:35:17 PM »
yeayy update! >o<)/
uwooo mayuyu was so great~! good cyborg b^^d
and kanon xd i can't believe xd
all of my question was asked by mariko XD
please continue~~ :bow: thankyou ^-^

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #166 on: November 11, 2012, 12:47:11 AM »
Chapter twelve: Kumi had such a bad BAD past! But at least she survived!

Chapter thirteen: Thank god Mayuyu saved Kanon! So so SO curious who Yuria is!!!

Thanks for the update! Update soon.  :)

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 13
« Reply #167 on: November 12, 2012, 05:10:45 AM »
Nice chapter..
Yuria also here huh...
That is why Kanon need Sally so much,
Mariko seem to be having more question,
Churi mystery past.

Looking forward for the next update

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #168 on: November 17, 2012, 04:37:08 PM »
@nori: I'm not going to tell you much about Yuria except there's going to be a huge surprise at the end!  ;)

@BbSis: My imagination scares me sometimes so I wonder. Yeah Yuria is kind of scary but it's all for a good cause!  :)

@Sasshii: Thank you for understanding how hard it is to update with so many things going on! I will update as soon as possible!  XD

@JuRikki: Yuria is the one who scared Miichan. But I won't reveal too much yet.  :P

@kahem: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I hope you like this one as well!  XD

@fuu_kun: Mayuyu is amazing. Nothing can stop her! I will gladly continue to the end!  :P

@Straberri: I'm happy you like the updates and I hope you like the other update as well!  :)

@m00nchild: This update is full of surprises and strange turn outs. But it will all make sense in the end!

Minna! It's been a while since I've lasted updated. Sorry it's been such a long time but you know, school is tough! Anyways I hope you enjoy the update!
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Chapter 14

Mariko was sitting at her desk watching the security camera being bored out of her mind when suddenly she heard a shout coming from down the hall. She ran down and saw Yuko chasing Airin with a pair of scissors. Mariko wondered where Yuko got the scissors but she was more concerned about Airin being stabbed to death by Yuko. Whatever she did it probably wasn't good. Mariko got up and started to run after them. She lost sight of them when they turned around the corner. But then when she came out, she almost freaked out when she saw.

This time Airin was on top of Yuko and was holding a pen right above Yuko's eye. It was close to coming into contact but then Yuko threw her off and they both rolled on the ground. It wasn't until finally Mariko stepped in and pulled them apart.

"Hey what happened?" Mariko asked.

"This pervert was trying to strip my Nyannyan! Only I can do that!"

"I was going to sketch her beauty! I need to add it to my collection!"

Airin held out an old beat up looking sketch book. It looked like it would fall apart at any minute if it even fell to the floor. Seeing it made Yuko mad run over to Airin.

"Get rid of that thing!"

The sketch book flew out of Airin's hand and landed in a bucket of mop water. EVerything got silent as they knew something bad was going to happen. Mariko looked over at Airin who had a crazy look in her eyes. She looked over at Yuko who had a happy expression on her face. Mariko was interested into seeing what would happen next. Suddenly Airin walked over and picked Yuko up by the neck. There was a dark look on her face and a scary look on her face. Airin took Yuko and slammed her head a against the wall slamming it hard enough to make cracks.

"Give them back!"

She took Yuko's head and slammed it into the ground.

"Give them back! Give them back!"

Airin kept hitting Yuko and Mariko had to put a stop. Mariko pulled out a sedative and knocked Airin out. She took her to her room and also took Yuko back to hers. Then she collected the wet sketchbook and tried looking at some of the artwork Airin had been sketching. She could make out the bodies but none of the faces. But then there were some drawings that weren't damaged by the water. She looked at them and was surprised at what she was seeing.

She had drawn scenes of some kind of garden. It looked beautiful in the drawing but Mariko wondered how beautiful it looked in real life. She turned the page and saw a picture of a little girl. The next one was a bunch of children all in a big group. Behind them was some kind of building. Mariko couldn't read the sign becasue it was too small but it looked like some kind of orphanage. Mariko turned the page and was surprised to see what was next.

The next page was the same girl only she was all beaten up and badly brusied covered in cuts. Then in the next page it showed the children in poor condition and some of them were evning missing. The next picture scared Mariko the most because it was children only this time it was their skeletons. There were even some old blood stains on the corners of the page. The next drawing was a picture of the building only this time it was burning.

The pages after that were damaged by water and Mariko couldn't see it. There was one she found that was half damaged. It was a picture of Rena with a pair of white wings. Perhaps Airin saw her as an angel? Then thee was a picture of Churi who had a dark pair. Mariko wondered why Chrui's was black. She was going to look more into it but then there was a loud shout from Airin's room.

Mariko ran into the room and saw her throwing things around and throwing a fit. Mariko ran over and tried to pull her back and prevent herself from making things worse.

"Bring them back! It's you who should've died not them! It's all your fault!"

Airin was shouting at a lamp confusing it with a person.

"Don't give me that look you murder! You killed all of them!"

Airin got loose of Mariko's grip and ran after the lamp. She took it and smashed it against the wall repeatedly. The lamp was bashed to pieces and Airin just kept on hitting it. Mariko was scared to move fearing she would be hit so she kept her distance. But then Churi saw and came rushing in. She took Airin into an isolation room and then came back in.

"What happened?" she asked.

"Her sketch book was ruined so she went beserk and started smashing things." Mariko said.

"Ohhh I see. Was she screaming things about children?"

"Umm yes?"

"Ahh that girl. She truly needs to learn how to let go."

"What do you mean?"

"Rememeber when I told you Airin used to be a famous artist?"

"Yes."

"Before she lost it, she went to draw a garden that was supposed to be beautiful. It was beautiful and she got the drawing. But then she foudn an orphanage that was very interesting to her. She stayed there and got to know all the children. They say she enjoyed every moment there and thought about even adopting them. But then an accident happened and the building caught fire. Because it was night, no one knew and by the time they found out they were too late. All the children died and the only survivor was Airin. It was said that it was an accident but Airin believed that it was caused by a man who was trying to shut down the orphanage."

"The one she keeps confusing everyone for?"

"Yep and she got sent to me when she almost killed him by trying to run over him with her car. When I foudn her she was severly delusional and derranged. She caused trouble whereever she went and wasn't safe to keep around the other patients. There have been many times where I have had to sedate her without me wanting to."

"So why does she like Rena so much?"

"Rena looks like one of the children she knew. She probably formed a close attachment to her because of that and didn't want to lose it. Drawing is her way of preserving memories. And when she saw Rena she wanted to keep that memory by drawing her."

"So why does she try to strip them naked?"

"The deullsional part has something to do with that. I don't know but she claims she can see aura and when we wear clothes it covers them up. Airin wants to see all of the aura so she strips them naked to see it fully. I think it's part of her dellusion with the whole aura thing but then one day she drew this picture of Sawako that really surprised me."

Airin reached into her pocket and pulled out a drawing up Sawako. It was her curled up in a wall leaning against the wall. But then what Mariko saw was there were three different things surrounding Sawako. They looked like people staring down on her as she stared at the wall. Mariko realized it was the auras of her separate personalities. She also saw one tiny one inside Sawako that looked like it would die out an minute. It must have been hers.

"Airin drew this?"

"Yes and it surprised me because I tried imagining that and when I did I actually saw what she was talking about with Sawako. So then I started to wonder if Airin really  could see auras. I did a study and every time she drew a different one. I was amazed at how many different types she could see. Then one day I asked her to draw mine and what she told me was she didn't want to. I asked her why and she said she was scared. I didn't push her further because I didn't want to cause more stress. But to this day I wonder why she didn't want to draw mine."

Mariko took one long look at Churi. She wan't sure what to say but when she looked at Churi she suddenly felt a scary chill run down her spine. Mariko shook of the chill and decided to go check on Airin in the isolation room. Inside Mariko could see Airin huddled in the corner lightly hitting the padded walls. But then she also saw something else that was interesting. Mariko thought she saw hands grabbing onto Airin trying to pull her down.

Mariko wasn't sure what it was but she saw them reach up and grab Airin's shoulder. When it did Airin stood up and shook it off.

"Leave me alone!" she shouted.

But every time the hands would come back and start to creep up her again. Mariko didn't know what was going on but for some reason she could see it and was slightly scared. However she knew that this had to stop because it was only hurting Airin. Mariko had an idea of how to help her and knew exactly who to call.

A couple minutes later Mariko convinced Rena to come down and Jurina to watch silently. Rena walked in and sat down next to Airin. The two sat there for a long time silently staring at each other. Then Rena finally asked,

"Are you ok?"

Tears started to roll down Airin's face when she heard those words. Then suddenly Airin reached out and hugged Rena holding her in a tight embrace. Jurina saw this and started to stand up but Mariko kept her down. She then focused on Rena and Airin making sure nothing was going wrong.

"I.... I missed you so much... I thought you were gone forever..."

Rena understood the situation and played along.

"It's ok. I'm here now and I came to see what was wrong."

"I miss you. I miss you and all the others."

"It's ok Airin. We're all still with you inside. We never left."

"B-but I saw you burn in the fire. I watched you all die!"

"Airin! There was nothing you could do. It was already too late."

"But I wanted to save you! I wanted to save you and the others! It's all my fault you died."

"Airin it's not your fault. What happened happend and you can't do anyhting about it. I'm sorry but that's how it is."

"B-but...."

"Don't mourn over our deaths Airin. It's time for you to move on be happy. Live the lives we all never got a chance to do. Then when you die of old age, we'll be waiting for you up in heaven ok?"

Airin didn't say anything. She just sat there and cried more and more holding onto Rena. Mariko thought the moment was sweet and touching. But then she saw that there was something starting to glow from Rena's back. The glow got brighter until it branched out and formed the shape of bright wings. Now Mariko could see why Airin drew that drawing. Rena was the angel sent from heaven to comfort the broken sould of Airin.

"I have to go now. The others are calling."

"No don't go! Stay with me!"

"I'm sorry Airin but I have to. You don't want to keep me away from the others do you? That would make them very sad."

"No you're right.... But when you go back up, tell them that I'll see them soon ok?"

"I promise..."

With that, Airin passed out and Churi came into to take over from there. Jurina and Rena walked out while Churi stayed in there holding Airin. There was a dark look on her face and then slowly, the black wings came out. Mariko was starting to get scared so she rean out of the room fast. It was no wonder Airin didn't want to sketch that. Unlike Rena's that was white and light, Churi's looked dark and heavy. It was truly something to fear.

As Mariko was walking down the hall she didn't see where she was going and ran into someone. She looked up and saw Sawako on the ground shaking. Then Sawako stopped and looked over and saw Mariko.

"You ok Sawako?"

"Yes I'm ahhhh!"

Sawako hunched over in pain and clutched onto her head. She started groaning in pain and fidgeting. Mariko tried to touch her, she snapped and lashed out at Mariko. Then in a strange voice she said,

"Don't touch me!"

Mariko was shocked by this reaction and didn't know what to say. She was about to say something but then Sawako got up and walked over to Mariko. She got on top of Mariko and pinned her arms back.

"Sawako what are you doing?" Mariko asked.

"I'm Ken. Sawako is sleeping for a while."

"Ken get off me before I kick you."

"You won't because I'm in Sawako's body."

Mariko cursed herself because she knew he was right.

"So if you don't mind I'm going to have some fun~"

Ken started to unbutton Mariko's shirt when suddenly he stopped. He backed away and held his head again. Mariko quickly got back and wathced.

"Ahhh stop it Yuuki! It's my turn to use the body!"

"No way Ken it's my turn! You used it last night!"

"Buzz off brat I'm trying to have fun!"

"I wanna have fun too!"

"Ahhhhh!"

As the two fought in the same body, Mariko wondered what was going on. Then finally everyhting stopped and Sawako came back. She saw Mariko and apologized. Then she ran off saying things to herself. Meanwhile Mariko stood up and tried to think of what was wrong with Sawako. Looks like she was going to have to deal with another problem.

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Well there is the update! I'm sorry it's been a while but I hope you like it! Next time we're going to look into Sawako's messed up brain. Look forward to the next update!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #169 on: November 17, 2012, 04:51:02 PM »
Wow,, the only survivor,, but at the last part, two of the personalities fight for have control?? History about Sawako in the next chapter maybe??  :) :)
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #170 on: November 17, 2012, 05:09:53 PM »
Whoaaa, so it was Airin's past. How sad..
Thanks Rena.

And why Churi's wings are black? Why Airin don't want to draw Churi?

And what happened to Sawako?
I guess, I should wait then..
Thank you Miyumi-san ^^

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #171 on: November 18, 2012, 12:00:09 AM »
Zomg! Poor Airin >< this story is so going to dramatic ways, but it's soooo good anyways....

I wonder why Churi is a dark angel >< :?

And whaaat happened to Airin ahter that? Just too curious ><


And don't be scared of your imagination. I think it's really awesome! I would be really happy if I had 1% of your creativity ><

Hehheuh I can't wait to see Yuria appearing o/

See ya next chapter \o/

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #172 on: November 18, 2012, 02:20:06 AM »
Airin's past was so bad, poor Airin :( It feels like all of Churi's patients have a really tragic past...I wonder why. Now I'm really curious about Churi especially after this chapter.
I'm excited for the next update :D

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #173 on: November 18, 2012, 03:09:01 AM »
OMG Churi starts to scare me

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #174 on: November 18, 2012, 06:01:50 AM »
Nice update,
Seem that Churi Past is still special,
why Airin & Mariko can saw her black wing,
and Mariko seem to start can see people aura,
or just her imagination??
Airin sketch book about Sawako seem real,
the small aura like going to dead soon is the real Sawako,
Sawako going to lost control about the other personalities?

Looking Forward for the next update.

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #175 on: November 19, 2012, 06:04:52 AM »
when airin talk to 'angel' rena... it's so sad :( :(
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be strong airin :')
d'next is sawako battle mind eh?? XD can't waitt ~ go ken!

thankyou for the update :bow:
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #176 on: November 26, 2012, 11:14:44 PM »
 :sweatdrop:AHHH I haven't commented for a while  :panic:

Seems that everyone is having a sad past.
Kumi, Non and now Airin. Probably we get to see Sawako's sad past too.


Ahhh Airin poor her I wanna cry  :cry:
I wonder Churi seems to be a good girl taking care of them but she's suspicious...

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #177 on: December 31, 2012, 03:08:03 PM »
hello there! :hand: :) i'm a new reader and a new member in this forum.                                                                                 

when i open this forum for the first time, i open all the fic in this forum one by one, then i found the mad house and start reading it. i found your story is very intresting. i had read all your previous fic. it was excellent! :twothumbs i like it very much. i can't stop reading it. :D

keep writing it. you have an amazing imagination :twothumbs it makes my days. :wub:

keep updating! :thumbsup i'll be waiting :)

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #178 on: January 09, 2013, 03:10:36 AM »
Very nice there....

More problem for every one that work at the hospital...

Can't wait to see more more action... and mental problems.

Thank you for this interesting fic.

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 14
« Reply #179 on: January 09, 2013, 04:20:18 PM »
Wow! I didnt know that you made season 2!! Yay!!! SKE appearance!!
I read all chapters in 1 hour!!! XD
I wonder who is Yuria...
Churi seems good in taking care of them but i got feeling that she is the bad person....
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