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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #80 on: November 19, 2012, 10:11:35 AM »
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Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #81 on: January 07, 2013, 11:35:01 PM »
Takamina u  sure are popular bro 5 girls!? bro 5! ( Acchan, Ray, Haruna, Tomochin, Yui*):farofflook:  LOL woot~ woot~  :on gay:
I'm hoping you continue this, I really would like to see the ending  :wriggly:
thx for work....! :kneelbow:






PS: I'm really really really really really really really really really really really really really hoping you will finish this.... hahahaha  :on GJ:

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« Reply #82 on: January 18, 2013, 07:30:17 AM »
UPDATE~!!!!!!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 8!
« Reply #83 on: January 23, 2013, 12:49:01 PM »

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Chapter 8 - Make things right.

“Oi, Kid! Whatcha’ got there? Rubbish suited for someone like you?” An older girl snarled with sarcasm as she kicked the little girl’s stomach and laughed.

The younger girl stayed silent.

She took the item within the little hands and stuffed it into her pocket. “Well its mine now!“

“Picking on Bakamina again?” Out stood a pretty girl with a distinct feline aura.

“Pretty low. Considering she’s only 7, and you’re double that.” Another girl replied, her hands clenched into a fist as she gave the girl a big smirk.

“K-Kojiharu…Minegishi!!!” The bully’s eyes opened wide for these girls were known for their over-protectiveness of the young and weak Takahashi Minami. 

Minegishi walked straight pass the bully and outstretched her hand for Minami to hold. The bullied girl nodded and took the younger girl’s hand. “T-Thank you, Mii chan.”

Mii chan smiled, followed by Kojima who came over and handed the small ‘Luffy’ figure back. “Don’t ever lose this to anyone again! Mou, and we sneaked all the way to town the other day to get it for you.”

“Sorry Kojipa…” Minami pouted, and Kojiharu smiled, taking Takamina’s other hand.

“Just remember…We’ll always be there for you.”



Takamina rubbed her eyes and opened them, adjusting back to reality. “Haruna…”

She unconsciously touched her lips and recalled the bizarre scene she had encountered several minutes ago. Maybe, just maybe, Haruna was just trying to protect her from Ray, since it was obvious the midget had not even the slightest affection to the Diva. Yeah…maybe that was why her sister had kissed her. That has got to be why.

The dense midget nodded in confirmation to her deduction and looked out the window seeing the dark sky, she wondered how long had she slept? She sighed, she was really tired these days and maybe the weird kisses she received gave her the excuse to catch up on the sleep she desperately needed. Though, it didn’t help that she had so much to do.

She was about to get up but realized someone sleeping on the side of her bed, Tomochin. The blonde wigged girl smiled and patted the sleeping girl, before getting out of bed making as little noise as possible. Next, Takamina placed her jacket over the saber toothed girl.
“Thank you…” the midget whispered.

Opening the bedroom door, Takamina could hear Mii chan and Mariko whispering away and laughing as they both scribbled something down. She decided to let them be, and proceeded back to her desk, where she continued to research about the murder incidents.

Will I see you tomorrow?

“So, why are both Kuu and Riku sleeping here tonight? If dad hears about th-“

“Relax ~~ Acchan. If you don’t tell no one will know~” Yuko exclaimed happily, even though deep down, she wanted to be alone with her Nyan Nyan, asking him if she should just give up on this seemingly impossible love.

Do I even have a chance?

She took a quick glance at the red streaked haired boy who was sleeping in his futon. Soft sobs and sniffs could be heard. Yuko wanted to do something…anything.

Mii chan nudged the perverted squirrel and whispered into the heartbroken girl. “The Date’s tomorrow…you up for it still?”

Yuko looked at Riku and back at the speaker. “What’s the point…?”

Mii chan smiled. “You giving up already?”

A single tear rolled down Yuko’s cheeks as she grasped the futon tightly in her hands.

“I-I love him.”

Acchan shuffled towards her sister, knowing that the confession was made towards the red streaked boy, she hugged her tightly. The actress had left the dining room early that morning because of that stupid stunt made by the Diva. Acchan had no idea why, why she was so infuriated with that kiss, probably because Kai’s doing that ‘playboy’ act again. But judging from Yuko's depression, aside from the STUPID diva's kiss, something else must’ve happened, something aside from the STUPID kiss.

“Don’t give up…Yuko.” Acchan murmured in the crying girl’s ears.

The comfort provided from her emotionless sister was something that warmed her heart and she loved it. She pulled back from the hug and grinned. “I won’t give up. Kuu, let’s go on that date tomorrow.”

I’m not losing to that midget!

Acchan smiled and asked again. “So…why are there two boys sleeping in our room tonight?”

“What? You want three?” Mariko asked innocently.

Yuko smirked.

“N-N-No! I tremendously dislike Kai!” Acchan cried, anger seething through her words.

“I didn’t even mention the midget, it could’ve been Sato-san, right? Yet your little lovesick mind jumped straight to a certain blonde.”

“I really don’t like him!” Acchan’s cheeks flared a hot pink before walking out the door.


Will I see you tomorrow?


Tomochin awoke from her short slumber and looked around, hoping to find her blonde crush. She spotted him sitting on his desk scribbling something down.

The saber tooth girl smiled.

The desktop light illuminated the blonde midget and his small back seemed so cute, that Tomochin couldn’t help but embrace Takamina from behind.

“You’re working hard.” Tomochin mumbled into Takamina’s ears.

Takamina, surprised by the sudden touch quickly covered her reports with her hands.

“T-Tomochin.”

Hearing her name, Tomochin couldn’t help but smile sadly.

“Ne, Kai, I was told that…you kissed both Ray and your brother this morning.”

“A-Ah, that…was an accident.”

Tomochin tightened her grip on Takamina. “Sure it was…” She said sarcastically. “I mean who wouldn’t want to kiss the amazing and famous Diva…”

“It actually was an accident.”

“One of the kiss was! But the one with Ray, it was different right?....How’d it feel?”

Takamina sighed. Why was everyone so concerned about this morning’s kisses. She gets that it was her first kiss, and reading novels and stories, she understood first kisses are very important, but it only concerned her and well Ray, and maybe her sister right? So she didn’t understand why Acchan would throw a cereal bowl at her, and Tomochin would interrogate her. She just didn't want to unknowingly hurt someone.

“Wet and sticky.”  Takamina answered honestly and pondered back to the bizarre events, remembering Ray’s sticky lips which were covered in lip gloss as it touched hers.

What did that kiss mean to Ray?

 Aren't kisses supposed to be between lovers?


Wet and sticky? Ray made Kai feel wet and sticky? Was the kiss that amazing?

Tomochin’s grip tightened even more around Takamina’s shoulders as she buried her head upon Takamina’s shoulders. “Ja…can I make you…wet and sticky…” Tomochin whispered the last part with a bit of seduction as she licked Takamina’s ears.

Immediately the midget shot up from his chair and covered his ears. “W-What are you-“

A light chuckle heard.

Then, soft lips crushed against the other.

Déjà vu

Tomochin’s hands travelled from cupping Takamina’s cheeks to her blonde hair as she tangled her hands within the blonde strands. “Hmmm…mmmhh”

Takamina couldn’t even comprehend the situation….again.

As fast as a blink, the midget was pushed onto the wall, while the kiss deepened, however it was still one sided. Takamina was not reacting. Yet Tomochin continued.

So caught up in the heat, Tomochin had no idea, her stoic sister was standing right behind her.

“Tomochin!?” Acchan walked closer and pulled her sister off the blonde singer.

“A-Acchan…” Tomochin face burned red as she stared at her sister and what she had just done.
“Just get out of the room, while I had a talk with the midget.” Her expression was dangerously emotionless, and Tomochin only knew the right thing to do was flee the room.

But she didn’t.

“W-What are you going to do with Kai?”

“Don’t worry, I’ll dispose of the body myself.”

Coming to her senses, Takamina blinked a couple of times and sighed inwardly. Why is all this happening? I just want everyone to get along.

The younger girl stepped in front of Kai, her arms outstretched. “Don’t hurt him.”

Acchan sighed. “I won’t. Just a talk….please”

Seeing the seriousness, harboured on her sister’s face, Tomochin gave in and quietly walked towards the door, her cheeks still tinted pink.

As soon as the door was closed shut, the actress glared at the midget and slapped him hard on the cheeks.

“Mae-“

Another slap.

“da-san”

Slap

“Sorry.”

SLAP

Hands hung lifelessly at the sides of Maeda. “Why? Why would you do that to my sister?”

“It wasn’t meant to happen. The kiss, it wasn’t supposed to happen.”

SLAP

"I thought you weren't what I thought. But I've now confirmed it. You're a dirty, sneaky, perverted, Player!"

"I-"

“My sister l-loves you! Yet, how can you wipe away her feelings like that. Why do you like playing around with girl’s feelings?”

“I don't. Pl-“ Tears streamed down the actress’s cheeks.

"Maeda-san..."

“Just…please…keep your hands off of my family. I don’t care what you do anymore.” Maeda walked back to the door and reached for the door knob.

“I don’t ever want to see you again.”

The door slammed shut.

Takamina fell to the ground and held her head as she punched the ground.

My sister loves you

I don’t ever want to see you again.


“Why am I always hurting everyone?” Tears dripped uncontrollably down Takamina’s eyes.


Will I see you tomorrow?

Tomochin returned to her room and found it pretty crowded. Riku was sleeping in a futon in the corner while Yuko slept next to him in her own futon, her arms wrapped around the oblivious ‘boy’.

“Ah, you’re back.” Mariko greeted the blushing girl. “What’s wrong, you looked flushed.”

The saber tooth girl fell into her sisters arms and hid her blushing face.

“So what happened?”

Mii chan scooted towards the sisters and patted the red girl.

“I-I kis-“

The door slammed open and a very very furious Acchan was in view. “Don’t you ever ever kiss that thing again!”

“That ‘thing’ has a name!” Tomochin retorted back.

“He’s a player.”

“So, I like players.”

“Players play with your feelings!”

Tomochin walked closer to her sisters their, noses touching. "I like Kai, and I don't mind having my feelings played with if its him."

"But I do. I don't want you to be with him!"

Tomochin stepped back crossed her arms and smirked.

“You’re just jealous.”

“J-J-Jealous? Me?”

“Yes you, because you like him too. You wanted to be the one with your lips on his."

"T-That's n-not i-" Acchan trembled as she fidgeted with her hands. A soft blush planted itself on Acchan's cheeks.

"You want to be the one touching him, you want him to touch you, plant those soft lips on you. You wan-"

"STOP! Please, just stop! I don’t. I hate him." Acchan averted eyes turned back to look at Tomochin. "I’m just trying to protect my little sister! Is that wrong? I’m just doing what older sisters do!”

“I wished I NEVER HAD YOU AS A SISTER!” As soon as those words came out, Tomochin covered her mouth and shook her head.

“Acch-“

“I understand. You finally spoke the truth. I’m sorry.” Acchan mumbled as she lost eye contact with her sister.

She stumbled into bed and pulled the covers over her head.

“Goodnight.”


Will I see you tomorrow? 

Everyone took the day off to visit the amusement park. Of course they were all in unidentifiable disguises.
Mariko and Miichan had two goals in mind that they hope to have achieved by the end of the day.

Number 1: To get Tomochin and Acchan to reconcile

Number 2: To get Kojiharu happy again and get her to forget Takamina by making her jealous

However right now, things weren’t looking too good. Tomochin hadn’t said a word to her sister and Acchan hasn’t even muttered one word. Kojipa was not her usually self she was all gloomy and ruining the happy dandy amusement park atmosphere. Yuko wasn’t happy that her Nyan Nyan wasn’t happy but she put on the biggest smile she could.

“Sigh”

“This is boring.”

“I agree.”

“Why don’t we split up. I go fix my sister’s problem and you fix the couple problem.” Mariko suggested. “We better run while Sato san is off to buy ice cream.” She added.

The two nodded.


Will I see you tomorrow?

In the meantime, Takamina was at home putting together the gadgets her sisters had created and planning them out around the house. As she got towards Aoi’s room, she could hear him speaking on the phone.

“Yes, I think the blonde was suspicious, he booked a photoshoot for all the sisters on Wednesday, where they are needed to sleep over at a hotel.”

“You’re certain the blonde is Takamina?”

“Can’t I kill her aswell?”

“Fine.”

“How could I forget?”

“Special?”

“So no poison. Why?”

“Sorry Mam”

“So, outside killing”

“All?”

“Yes Mam.”

“….”

“But I think I’ve already completed the first task…”

Footsteps neared the door.

Suddenly the door swung open and a knife dove straight into the stomach of Takamina.

“Didn’t your mum teach you any manners?”


Will I see you tomorrow?


“Look what I got you guys! One tiny Toffee apple, which we have to share! ” Mariko exclaimed at the two girls who were busy being gloomy and ignoring each other.

The oldest sister sat on the bench and offered them the apple which none of them took.

“Don’t want it.”

“No, thanks.”

Mariko sighed and took a bite off the apple and seconds after she started coughing and choking. She fell to the ground holding her throat and her coughing fit started.

The two alarmed sisters immediately turned to their oldest sister and patted her back.

“Mariko oneesan!”

“Mari nee!”

“Tomochin, I need you to get a bottle of water from the bag.”

“Yup.” The youngest girl rummaged through their bag and brought out her bottle of water.

Acchan started rubbing her sister’s back while Tomochin gave her the bottle of water which she drank. In the midst of things, Mariko laughed.

“Tricked you!”

The two sisters breathe a sigh of relief before glaring at their oldest sister.

“That wasn’t funny!” They said in sync.

They turned to each other. “Stop copying me!” They said in sync again.

 “Acchan, Tomochin, do you remember what you guys said 10 years ago when you guys were in the same situation?”

The two sisters shook their heads.

"You know the one about toffee apples."

Both girls gazed towards the ground, each one avoiding each other's eye contact.

Mariko sighed.  "You know we're really fortunate to have each other. Nothing's going to be easy, but you know Tomochin, Acchan, we're a family so please stop acting stupid."

Mariko nee chan was right, this was stupid, why were they fighting anyways.

Acchan smiled and hesitantly held Tomochin’s hands. “Our blood is redder than any toffee apple…”

“and nothing can break our bond.” Tomochin squeezed her sister’s hands and returned the smile.

10 years ago...

“Noooo!!!! I want the toffee apple!!!! Why does Yuko neechan and Mari neechan get their own! I don’t want to share with Atsu neechan!!!”

“I don’t want to share with you either!”

“I want it.” The two primary children held onto the stick of the toffee apple and neither one would let go.

“Don’t fight. That was the last toffee apple. Besides you guys are sisters. Sisters share.” Akimoto tried to comfort his two daughters.

“She’s not my sister! We aren’t even blood related!!!!” Tomochin shouted as she gripped the toffee apple stick harder.

Acchan let go of the toffee stick and wiped the tears that started forming in her eyes.

Before the other two older sisters could intervene, Tomochin dropped the toffee apple on the ground and hugged her older sister. “Atsu neechan…I’m sorry.”

They broke the hug and looked at each other in the eyes. Acchan wiped a stray tear off Tomochin’s cheeks. “It’s okay, tatte, our blood is redder than any toffee apple..”

“and nothing can break our bond.” Tomochin winked and took her sisters hands.

Akimoto smiled at their bond and squatted down to their heights, picking up the toffee apple. “We can’t eat this, but I’ll buy one for you each later.”

The two younger sisters shook their head, their hands still held to each others.

The two older sisters ruffled their younger sister’s hair and laughed.

“Acchan, Tomochin can share with us!” Yuko exclaimed.

Mariko held out her toffee apple in front of her sisters and smiled.

“Are you sure?” Akimoto asked. “You don’t want one each?”

Acchan and Tomochin each took a bite of Mariko and Yuko’s apple and smiled. “We're sisters!”



“Acchan…I’m sorry.”

Acchan pulled her sister into an embrace and smiled. “It’s okay. I’m sorry for how I acted.”

“I love you nee chan.”

Mariko smiled, then took another bite of the toffee apple. “Wow this is sweet.”


Will I see you tomorrow?

Yuko Miichan and Riku were all seated in a 3d movie, and Riku, depressed as she was, she  couldn’t help but feel irritated by the constant screaming and hugging beside her. Oh and not to mention the stupid flirting! It irritated her, the movie wasn’t even scary!

“Ahhh Kuuuu~ That was so scary.” Yuko screamed as she pointed to the screen where it displayed a giraffe eating leaves from a tree.

“Oh, oh is that so…it’s okay! I’m here for you~ You’re so cute when you’re scared.”

“Ah Kuuu`~~~ sukiiii” The squirrel nuzzled into the arms of Kuu while constantly eyeing her crush.

Kojiharu’s eyebrow twitched and she mumbled under her breath. What the heck!


As they left the 3d movie, Yuko pulled Kuu towards the ice cream stand. “I want a ice cream Kuu~”

Kuu bought Yuko an ice cream and they both settled on a nearby bench, with Kojipa slowly following.

While Yuko was licking her ice cream, cream covered her cheeks and as if this was a sign Kuu grabbed her handkerchief and wiped it clean.

“You’re so cute.” Kuu murmured as she licked the last puff of cream off Yuko’s cheeks.

Yuko giggled lightly and once again eyed Kojipa, who was getting ready to leave the couple.

“Wait…Riku, wait Don’t leave!” Yuko pleaded. She got up from the bench and stood in front of her Nyan Nyan holding out the ice cream.

“Ice cream?”

Riku ignored the squirrel and walked briskly passed her. Mii chan seeing this was a good opportunity ran from the scene and smiled. Yuko, Ganbatte.

“Rik-“

POP

“AH!” Yuko instantly dropped her ice cream and embraced Riku’s back.

“Hey, what are you-“ Riku felt the trembling girl’s arms wrapped around her. Yuko wasn’t pretending to be scared this time, it was real, she was actually scared.

Riku turned around and returned the embrace. Slowly Yuko pulled herself out of the hug and looked Riku in the eyes.

“Thank you.”

“Balloons scare you?”

“Hahaha…I don’t like balloons.”

Seeing the scared and cute expression Yuko presented, Riku laughed.

The midget’s eyes widen and she smiled aswell, tears dripped down her eyes. “You finally smiled.”

“Yuko…”

“I was worried I wouldn’t be able to see your smile anymore. I’m so glad, I’m so so so glad.”

“My smile? You weren’t disgusted…by what I did?”

“Disgusted? No, of course not. I was though…sad and jealous…of Kai and Takamina.”

“Jealous?...”

“Yeah…because you’re my Nyan Nyan! But MY Nyan Nyan likes someone else,” yuko muttered the last bit, as her heart ached.

“I-I”

“But I won’t give up! Because I love you…and because I love you, please keep moving forward.”

Kojiharu stood there dumbfounded. Not only was the girl in front of her not disgusted by the kiss she shared with her sister…brother, but she just claimed she loved her.

“Nyan Nyan, I love you.” Blushes could be seen on both of their cheeks.

“Yuko, I-“ Whatever Kojiharu was going to say was cut off by Yuko, who pulled Kojipa down by her collar, to her height and soon her lips were claimed by the midget.

Kojiharu closed her eyes and reciprocated the kiss.

But then she realized something, something wrong.

Nyan Nyan pulled away.

“Nyan Ny-“

“Aren’t you and Kuu? Um..a couple?”

“Hahahha, no, no, no,no!!!!!!”

“But you were all…cute and seductive to her.” Kojiharu’s blush intensified as she turned her back towards Yuko.

….


“Did you just call be cute and seductive?” This time it was Yuko’s time to blush, her eyes glittering she threw herself onto Kojiharu’s back and whispered in her ears.

“I’ll be cute and seductive all night long if you want~” The sound of Yuko licking her lips were enough to make Kojiharu feel all hot and bothered.

“Hehe.”


Will I see you tomorrow?

Takamina was lying on the wooden floor of Aoi’s bedroom with only a ripped white shirt, which was soaked in red. The door was locked and her hands were tied by a rope.

She had no gadgets but fortunately if it’s even for a bit, Aoi had just left the room and she took this opportunity to get up and walk towards the window.

As she was attempting to get out from the window the door creaked open and a murderous stare caught Takamina. “Where do you think you are going?”

Nakamura sprinted towards the girl and stabbed her wound again, slowly taking out the knife.

“Arggghhhh!!!!!”

Takamina was losing her vision and she couldn’t do anything to stop them from coming back. She should’ve been more cautious, more aware, but she wasn’t and now she couldn’t even keep her consciousness. She was stupid, now her friends and family were in grave danger and it's all because of her.

It's my fault. I should've worked harder, should've planned eariler.

Aoi pulled Takamina up by her hair and laughed hysterically.

“You are a girl, can’t believe you get all the chicks though.”

Next he threw the girl to the wall and walked out the door again. “Don’t try to escape, unless you want a bleeding brain.”


Will I see you tomorrow?


“Where were you guys? I searched forever for you guys?” Takeru whined. It wasn’t fair for him but the trip was worth it. Everyone was happy, everyone right?

Mii chan unlocked the door and stepped in still conversing with Mariko about the success of the date. They laughed but as they lifted their eyes to look in front of them, all smiles and happiness were halted.

There in the middle of the room was a pile of blood and on top of that pile was a short midget, who was holding her stomach and suffering. To the right of Takamina was Nakamura Aoi. 

“R—R---ru-nn” Takamina managed to spit out along with surges of blood.

“TAKAMINA!!!!!!” Kojiharu and Mii chan both ran towards the girl with no hesitation whatsoever. Tears instantly ran down both of the girl’s eyes.

The others were frightened, and so very scared.

The murderers started to speak. “Who wants to die first?”

Kojiharu and Miichan stood up, their anger flared as they charged towards Aoi. 

“HOW DARE YOU!!!” They both threw punches and kicks at the murderer.

Acchan didn’t know what got to her but she ran towards the injured girl and wrapped her jacket around the girl’s wound, pressuring it from bleeding anymore.

“A-Acch”

“Don’t talk.”

She then took the girl on her back and carried her towards the door, however just that second two large men came barging into the house.

“M-Mariko nee chan, I’m scared.” Tomochin shivered as Mariko’s arms wrapped around her sisters even tighter.

One of the large man charged towards the group and prepared to attack Yuko. Thankfully, Takeru pushed Yuko out of the way and gave a roundhouse kick.

“I’ll handle this one.” He smirked.

The second man grabbing the opportunity, took a gun out from his pocket and held it towards Yuko’s temples. “Say bye bye.”

The trigger was prepared to be pulled but at the moment a gas bomb was placed and taking this opportunity Yuko ran from the man’s arm to meet another.

This time it was Riku’s. “Yuko, take the others and run.”

“B-But Nyan Nya-“

“GO!”

“Please come back.”

“I will.” Riku crouched down and planted a kiss on Yuko’s cheek.

The gang headed towards the door and ran as far as they could.

As the fog abated from the room, it was clear who was in danger and who had left. The only ones left in the room were Nakamura Aoi who was still sparring with Miichan, Sato Takeru who was sparring with one of the large guys, Riku, and the other large man who was taking Acchan as hostage and stepping on Takamina’s wound.

“Arggghh…L-Let g-g *cough*o of A-Acchan..”

“GET OFF TAKAMINA!!!” Riku screamed as she charged towards the man, but was stopped as the man held his gun towards Acchan’s head.

“You don’t mind if she dies?”

“You, You BAS-“

“Look Out!” Acchan shouted as she saw the other large man preparing to throw a punch at Riku from behind. Riku perfectly dodged it and using his body as an advantage, she kicked him in the groin, where it always hurts and punched his guts. 

“What do you want! Take me! Just let Takamina go to hospital!!!!!” Riku turned back and screamed.

Aoi Nakamura kicked Mii chan, and laughed as he answered Riku’s answer. “We want you all to die! Half of you has already left, so I’m already not finishing my orders but…killing you guys will make up for it, so you must DIE!”

Mii chan trembled as she got up, her arms weak, but as soon as she saw Takamina, she stood up despite all the pain. Takamina was still trying to stop the attackers, she was still trying to stand up. It wasn't appropriate if she stayed low, while her sister kept trying.

Riku, seeing the large man’s eyes on Takamina, quickly kicked the gun from his hand and took Acchan back. Next he went in to attack the man, knocking him down with the anger flaring inside him. “Don’t you ever HURT Takamina!!”

Riku ran to Takamina’s side and embraced her. “Let’s go to-“

The man who Riku knocked out was still conscious and he was preparing to attack Acchan with the gun he had in his hand. Takamina’s eyes widen and despite the blurred vision and the trouble breathing, she lifted herself and ran to Acchan’s side.

Takamina pulled Acchan towards her and fortunately the gun had only scratched Acchan’s arm. Using the strength she had left she stood up and punched the guy right in the face and next on the groin, where it hurts. Sato Takeru gained his consciousness back and ran towards Acchan leading her to side of the room. He stood up and helped Takamina. Kojipa did the same and caught Takamina in her arms before she fell to the ground. She was really worried for her sister, she wanted to cry, seeing her sister in this state. Yet she was angry, angry, she couldn’t do anything, anything at all. When her sister was suffering, the only thing she did was sulk because of the kiss.

I’m a coward.

“…Please keep moving forward.” Remembering Yuko's words suddenly gave Riku a surge of courage.

Yuko…thank you.


Riku dropped Takamina by Acchan’s side. “Please look after my sister. Make sure she doesn’t lose any more blood. She’s not as strong as she looks.”

Kojiharu caressed Takamina's cheeks and gave her a kiss on the forehead. "Takamina, We'll always be there for you."

Mii chan dodged his furious kicks. “Damn, he’s tough.”

“Mii chan.”

Mii chan turned towards her sister and smiled. “You look better.”

“I’ve figured something out.”

“What.”

“I’m going to confess to Takamina.”

“You’re forgetting something!” Aoi charged his punch right towards Mii chan, but Mii chan didn’t give him a single look “Shut up, I’m listening to something really important at the moment!” she growled before she kicked him in the groin and punched his face.

“So repeat that.”

“Haha. I’m going to confess my love for Takamina. I love her and I want to tell her. I know she’ll reject me but, I’ll always be looking over her, always.”

Mii chan embraced her sister and smiled. “That’s my sister. You’re so brave.”

“Thanks.”

They broke their embrace and remembered something very important. “TAKAMINA!!!!!!!!”

Acchan who was quietly minding the dying girl’s wounds scrutinized the familiar’s midget’s face.

Acchan held Takamina’s hand and comforted her even though tears dripped down her cheeks as she looked at the girl shivering in pain.

“I-Is e-everyo-one ok?” Her voice was rasp and hoarse. Blood slid down the girl’s mouth as she talked.

Acchan nodded. Anymore words would of have resulted in her bursting into tears.

How can you still think of others when you in this much pain?

The sound of the ambulance and police siren was heard outside the house.


Chapter End
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #84 on: January 23, 2013, 01:31:30 PM »
WTH!! No!!
Minami!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #85 on: January 23, 2013, 01:35:38 PM »
Awwww.... Takamina is injured !!!!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #86 on: January 23, 2013, 02:22:07 PM »
Someone is dying here....neh   :smhid
Sudden urge to confess (way to go kojiharu)

Thanx for the update ^^

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #87 on: January 23, 2013, 03:10:27 PM »
Go Tomochin!!!!!!!!!!!!More kisses!  :monk gboy:
Takamina!!!!!! She won't die, rght?  :mon waterworks:
Poor Yuko, but I'm sure Riku aka Kojiharu will come to love her.
That Aoi, I want to kill him!!!!Hurting my Takamina like this.  :mon zoom: :mon headbang:
At first I thought he raped her..... I was so scared....  :mon scare:
Update soon!!!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #88 on: January 23, 2013, 03:46:31 PM »
aww the sister scene with the toffee apple was so sweet!!  :heart:

NOOOO! takamina, stay strong don't die!!  :cry:

next chapter is going to be so interesting, especially know that they know the three are girls or at least that kai is a girl  :cathappy:

can't wait for your next update  :peace:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #89 on: January 23, 2013, 08:59:05 PM »
oh takamina is so great... so brave and so caring...

Riku is so brave... I guess she wants to move on with her life... first step is confession of her feeling to Takamina...

Kuu is great trying to support everyone....

Great action too... Thank you for the update

Can't wait for the next

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #90 on: January 24, 2013, 12:01:53 AM »
Woah, very intense chapter!! :DIt was really great! I like the quick flashback of Takamina, Haruna and miichans past :) As for what happened in the present, well first poor Minami for getting slapped so many times :P Glad Atsuko and Tomochin were able to get along though, and it was nice to see the development b/w Yuko and Kojima! :)

As for the end...woah 0_0 Hopefully Takamina is okay! Blood loss is def dangerous from a wound like that. Though it was amazing to see how she was brave throughout the whole situation, along with Haruna and Miichan and even Atsuko :D

Really looking forward to ur next chapter! Awesome update as always, thanks :)

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« Reply #91 on: January 24, 2013, 01:32:34 AM »
oh my god, you made me cry lol

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« Reply #92 on: January 24, 2013, 06:11:20 AM »
Minami!!!!!!!!!! no!! jejeje kojipa x yuko x kai jejej sounds good for me! come yuko! fight for your husband :B

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #93 on: January 24, 2013, 06:21:30 AM »
uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~ FINALLY you update this fic~  :farofflook:

Takamina is super super ultra cute, innocent and kind..  :luvluv2: Hope that Acchan and the rest daughters will know that Kai cs is actually a girl after this incident..  :prayers:
pls update ASAP. Can't wait for the next chapter...  :on woohoo:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #94 on: January 24, 2013, 07:41:55 AM »
Uwaaa! Q_Q
Go Nyanyan and Miichan! Kick that *toot* in his *toot! D8<
How dare he hurt bakamina! D:<<
Please update soon~ >u<
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #95 on: January 24, 2013, 11:01:41 AM »
Yuko fight! Were here for you!! Get your kojipa!!  :inlove: :rock:



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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #96 on: January 24, 2013, 04:11:47 PM »
this is my first post in your fic, and as i thought it's really greatt !!
Atsumina, takatomo and takaharu is the best ! I hope takamina can get all hot chick but she can't nahh ? Nyahaha
looking forward for your next update, hope takamina still alive

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #97 on: January 27, 2013, 03:26:31 PM »
"“Ahhh Kuuuu~ That was so scary.” Yuko screamed as she pointed to the screen where it displayed a giraffe eating leaves from a tree. "

This is just too funny!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #98 on: January 27, 2013, 10:46:48 PM »
Woot! Harem! Makes it more loveable  :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Lol and WOW great chapter! I liked the scene where Kuu was like,
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“Shut up, I’m listening to something really important at the moment!” she growled before she kicked him in the groin and punched his face.
  that was freakin' cool and AWESOME!!! lol  :nya: :nya: hehehehe

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Update [24/01/13]
« Reply #99 on: January 30, 2013, 11:04:21 PM »
oh no takamina  :cry:

please update soon  :bow:
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