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Hi AKB48 Fans!!!!  :welcome

My alias is Mikomiko and I’m a huge Atsumina shipper, and since they’re “missing at the moment”, I’m going to be writing a fic focusing on the Atsumina couple, KojiYuu couple and more.

Thank you for your support.

The first chapter does not have any atsumina or kojiyuu interaction, but in the later chapters, I promise you I will try my best. :)

Well then,

Here goes my first fanfic:

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Will I see you tomorrow?

Chapter 1: The beginning


It was one of those bright sunny days, where the sun illuminated the surroundings and everyone would be enjoying themselves in the afternoon sun.

Everyone….

Expect these three.

“Why would anyone have their secret base in a sewer?!” The tallest of the three complained; even though the foul stench was prevented by the cough masks which covered part of their face, they wore.

“Argh! I feel all icky and argh, digusting!” The youngest of the three followed. She quickened her pace, decreasing the distance from herself and their leader.

“I believe we’re nearly there, so hang in there for a bit more.” The midget leader encouraged,  her voice silent to their enemies but audible to her sisters.

The two sisters looked at their leader’s back and nodded.

They soon found the entrance metal door to their enemies’ secret location which was protected by an electronic armed keypad. The leader turned around to her sisters and nodded to her older sister, directing her to do what was required.

At once the tallest one ran in front and hacked the electronic alarm. “Piece of cake.” She smiled, and the door slowly opened and before their eyes was a factory of white powdery drugs.

Despite, knowing there would be exactly 30 members to this gang, they did not prepare a defined plan. However all that was needed was another nod from their leader and the triplets were off. While the oldest and youngest of the three battled the 30 members, the leader ran to the door located at the back of the base and kicked open the entrance.

There, in the center of the room, was Yamada Shintaro, the son of a millionaire, wrapped around a chair with several ropes restricting him from basic movements. And next to him was the attacker and the leader of the gang, who was holding a pistol to the victim’s head.

The attacker’s eyes widen as he saw the door burst open and there stood there was not any tall, muscular man, but instead a midget girl armed with her utility belt, dressed in black. (Much like the appearance of Takamina in “RIVER”)

He snickered. “Oh, What do we have here? A midget trying to save the day?” The noisome man redirected the pistol from Yamada san’s temple to the rescuer’s direction. “Mmphh” The victim mumbled from under the tape which covered his mouth.

The gang boss laughed, and within milli-seconds a loud BANG was heard and all movement was halted from inside the room and outside.

“Looks like it’s over, for your little leader.” the henchman who was sparring with the youngest sister smirked.

“ Heh, can’t you tell between a gunshot and a punch?.” She replied along with a full force punch to the man’s gut.

Meanwhile, the oldest member was sparring with three henchmen who wield iron bars. While dodging the attacks, she stumbled back from the constant bashing but was fortunately stabilized by her sister’s back. “Mii chan. Thanks.”

Mii chan smirked. “Let’s finish this.”

Inside the small dark room, everything was still. The small leader had one of her knees to the ground and her fist was buried in the gang boss’ stomach. The pistol was not fired.

Lifting her fist from his stomach she walked back, and watched the boss fall to the ground, as she quickly untied the kidnapped victim from the seat. “Are you okay?” she asked in concern. “The police will be here any sec-“ From the sewage, police sirens could be heard from outside causing the small leader to smile. “Faster than usual.”

The leader gave a short pat on the victim’s head and ran towards her sisters who were surrounded by fallen henchmen. She gave them “the nod” and the triplets ran off, avoiding the police on their way.

They ran from the area acting as normal and casual as they could.

“I still don’t get why we have to hide from the police. I mean our mother…aka our boss is the chief. I really don’t get it. We need some fame! Right? Takamina! Kojiharu!”

“Well, if we did show our faces, the other gang members would chase after us all the time.” Takamina reasoned.

Kojiharu nodded. “I won’t be able to play my NDS in peace.”

They arrived to a secluded forest like area where they chucked their clothes beforehand in certain bushes. “Another successful mission!” The oldest and youngest sister said in unison as they fist punched their leader on the shoulders. The leader eyebrows curled in worry while put on her banana parka over her “mission” clothes. “You’re not injured anywhere right?.” Takamina eyed her sisters.

“Of course not! Don’t you trust our abilities?” Miichan joked, but she knew the small leader took it seriously.

“Noonoono! I trust you and your abilities more than anything! But I’m just worri-“

“I’m joking. Calm down..” Mii chan laughed as she patted their leader’s back. Their leader smiled. “Mii chan I’m glad you’re alright. But…Haruna.”

“Y-Yes?!” The older of the three stuttered as she saw her sister approaching her. As Takamina reached her sister, she bent down and pulled her socks down revealing her swollen ankle. “But..you’re hurt. Why didn’t you tell me?”

Haruna gave a hesitant laugh. “I can never hide anything from you.”

Just when Takamina was about to say something else, her  phone rang. “It’s a video call from mum.” She said as she held up her phone so the call was visible to her sisters.

“Girls! I want you to be at home by 5 tonight. I have news for you. Don’t be late…or else…. *WHACK* you’ll regret it. Bye.”

The girls stare at each other and gulped. “I don’t want to feel the ship of Saeko-shachou!!!! But it’s 4:42..now…” Miichan cried as she started running. “Let’s go!”

“Yabai!” Haruna said as she started running aswell.

The small leader looked around at the bags left on the ground from her sisters. She quickly grabbed them with no complain and followed her sisters eyeing her older sister’s ankle. Catching up to her sisters in no time, she pulled Haruna’s arm, halting her and Miichan. “Climb onto my back.” The leader commanded. “Don’t push yourself!.”

“But…”

“Haruna.” 

Haruna slowly obeyed her sister and climbed onto her back, a smile tugged at her lips as she wrapped her arms around her sister. “You’re such a man.” Haruna snickered.

“S-Shut up!” Takamina said as she started running. “You’ll be a good boyfriend! Hahaha.” Mii chan laughed. “I’m not a guy!” Takamina retorted.

Haruna tightened her grip around Takamina and laid her head near the small girl’s neck. “Thank you…Minami.” She mumbled so quietly which was inaudible to her carrier, as she drifted to sleep.

Reaching their house, Miichan looked at her watch again. 5:00.34.

Mii chan gulped along with Takamina. “We’re late…” Takamina being the leader, walked in front and opened the door, her arms shaking in the process. If it was anything that these three girls were scared of, it was Saeko-shachou…and her whip.

The door opened and the girls stepped in with Miichan clinging onto Takamina’s shirt.They turned the corner to their living room and there sitting on a coach with her legs crossed and whip ready was their mother.

At once the two girls bowed. “We are really really really sorry!”

“No excuses!” Their mother snickered as she walked towards them stretching out her whip.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHH”

( Will I see you tomorrow?)

The three girls sat on the dining table opposite their mother, while rubbing their butts in pain. Well, two of the girls were punished, the third managed to get away with it.

“I don’t get why Kojiharu doesn’t get whipped!!” Mii chan moaned as she pointed her index finger at the girl sitting in the middle of the three.

“I like the faces of sleeping girls. And, she was cute.” Saeko said.

“Pedo…” Miichan argued.

Saeko deviously smiled. “What was that?!” The sound of her whip hitting the table managed to make the girl shiver and furiously shake her head in denial.

“Well, now that’s sorted. I have news for you girls!”

The two girls who were still concentrating on their pained bottoms gave a slight nod. The third sat there and giggled at the two victims..

“Instead of minding your butts! TAKE NOTICE OF THIS BEAUTIFUL WOMAN sitting next to ME!” Saeko growled.

The three girls immediately straightened their backs and started taking notice of the woman sitting next to their mother.

“She’s so lovely, so beautiful. Like a flower blooming from a sakura tree.” Mii chan said with a smile.

“Hi, please to meet you. I’m Takahashi Minami, this is Minegishi Minami and this is Kojima Haruna.” Takamina said as she shook the woman’s hand.

“Who are you?” Haruna bluntly said, resulting in a whack on the head from her mother.

“Oww..”

“This is Marilyn and she is my wife. We married yesterday.”

The girls’ eyes widen. “WHAT?!”

Marilyn looked uncomfortable, as she shifted in her seat and her eyes kept glancing from the girls to her wife.

“ We weren’t invited?” The three said in unison.

Saeko smiled. “I told you, they won’t mind.” She said in Marilyn’s ears, causing them both to smile.

“So, we are going on a honeymoon and I have no idea when we’ll be coming back. I will still contact you and assign you missions and tasks. But, there is one mission I need you guys to follow. You know the serial murder cases occurring in Tokyo? I want you to investigate it.”

Takamina nodded, and seeing this the other two sisters also nodded.

“Where will we stay?” Mii chan asked.

Saeko held up a piece of paper from the desk so it was visible to the girls. “Here! If you don’t succeed…then you won’t have a place to stay.”

The girls studied the poster and frowns emerged on their faces.

FIVE BODYGUARDS NEEDED
Required attributes:
-   Intelligence
-   Agility
-   Strength

Competition held on 20th December.
Venue: Tokyo Forest
Payment: Will be discussed

MUST BE MALE.

Cheating of any sort will result in execution


“Um…we’re girls…right?” Takamina asked.

“Yeah two of us are actually girls! They’re asking for males!” Mii chan shouted, causing Marilyn to giggle in amusement.

“HEY!” Takamina said.

“What! I never said anything about you being the guy?!” Mii chan replied back.

They continued to eye each other when: “We’ll do it!” Haruna said out of the blue.

“Huh!?!” The two sisters stopped their argument and looked towards their older sister.

“It’ll be fun!” Haruna said with a smile.

Marilyn stood up from her seat and walked towards the closet situated at the end of the living room. She opened the door and grabbed a box out from it, bringing it back to the kitchen table. “These are the clothes Sachou prepared for you in order to transform you.” She opened the box lid and in there were wigs, formal wear and make up sets.

Saeko sat up causing the girls attention to direct from the box to their mother. “From now on.Takamina! You’re Kai!”

“H-Hai!” Takamina also stood up.

“No. No. Answer with Osu! Be a bit manly. You are manly already but still not there.”

Can I call that a compliment? “O-Osu!”

“Mii chan you’re Kuu, and Kojiharu you’re Riku.”

“OSU!”

“Your plane is tomorrow morning. At 5. Well then, good luck, Bye!” Saeko waved as she headed out the door with her new wife who also waved.

The three girls looked at each other.

“WHAT?!”

End of Chapter 1

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Um…How was it?  :thumbdown:? :twothumbs?
« Last Edit: February 25, 2015, 12:48:21 PM by Mikomiko »
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2012, 11:06:54 AM »
I think this will be a great fic! Goodluck! Do your best for this fic  :) And update please  XD i want kojiyuu!!!!!  :heart: :twothumbs



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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2012, 01:16:47 PM »
Sound interesting in this fic
Look forward next chapter~ ganbatte
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2012, 01:33:11 PM »
Awesome chapter :D This seems like it'l be very interesting ^^ Looking forward to Atsumina and Kojiyuu :) Thanks for the update :D

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2012, 02:25:51 PM »
The first chapter is really interesting :thumbup

We shippers all miss our Atsumina in real life, so thank you for creating this fic to make us feel better :P

Looking forward to the next chapter!!! :lol:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2012, 04:35:20 PM »
keep writing this fic...
look forward for the next update..  :thumbsup

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #6 on: October 07, 2012, 04:33:36 AM »
Oh my fucking god PERSONA IS BACK!!!!! HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!1

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #7 on: October 07, 2012, 11:24:51 AM »
yeahh,,mendol..  :twothumbs
update soon...  :bow:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 2!
« Reply #8 on: October 07, 2012, 01:54:41 PM »
Thank you very very very much for reply and commenting my first chapter. I really really really appreciate it. Knowing that you guys are enjoying my fic and finding it interesting and wanting me to update is all the motivation that a writer can ask for so ...Thank you *bows*

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Chapter 2- Let's be body guards!


The three sisters were now sitting on the plane heading to Tokyo. They fumbled with their wigs perfecting them and adjusting them subtly. Kojiharu chose the black haired wig with red streaks while, Mii chan chose the black haired wig with blue streaks. Meaning what was left was the blonde wig for Takamina, who didn’t mind but had no idea what to say if anyone were to ask why she dyed her hair blonde. .

Takamina had her study book wide open on the eating draw and although she was gazing at it her left hand was busying fiddling with her blonde hair.

“ Takamina, still worried about your blonde hair?” Kuu asked

Takamina nodded while stroking her blonde hair. “If I’m caught out, it will affect you two aswell and Sachou, I don’t want to ruin her honeymoon.” 

“Just change your personality a bit. Act a little…um…naughty. Then you’ll suit it and people won’t ask” Mii chan explained. She knew how worried Takamina could be if it concerned others, and she wanted to give the best possible suggestion to her but on the other hand “naughty” Takamina was what she wanted to see.

“Naughty?” Takamina asked in confusion.

“You know… break a bit more rules and act a little perverted…”

Takamina’s eyes drained of any amusement. “No. Definitely not.”

“I agree. I’m not fond of perverted people…” Haruna stated, as she turned from the plane window to her sisters. “By the way. We’re nearly there.”

The excitement bubbled inside the two girls as they leaned towards Haruna to get a clearer view of the landscape of Tokyo. “I can’t wait.” Mii chan exclaimed.

“Um…excuse me. But the plane is due to land soon, so please fasten your seat belt.” The flight attendant said to the back of the disguised girls.

Takamina and Mii chan turned around to look at the flight attendant and as quickly as possible fastened their seat belt and tightened it. “Sorry about that.” Takamina apologized as she looked the attendant in the eyes.

Takamina didn’t realize but a blush formed on the attendent’s face.

Mii chan chuckled and nudged Haruna, and they both started giggling quietly. Haruna and Mii chan both know as well as the flight attendant that Takamina looked dashing in her boy disguise, and it seemed it could as a very efficient  girl magnet. Of course they knew they looked handsome as well but, Takamina’s nature manly charm gave her an advantage.

“Ah- it’s okay but you didn’t fasten your seat belt properly, why don’t you let me do it…~” The flight attendant smiled and bent down, unfastening Takamina’s seatbelt. She kept her head close to the blonde’s (bounded) chest and stayed there fiddling with the seatbelt.

“Um…is everything alright?” Takamina had no idea what was happening, she seriously thought the seatbelt was faulty.

“Y-Yes.” The flight attendant quickly fastened Takamina’s seatbelt and gave a fast bow before leaving and attending to other occupants.

On the midget’s lap was a ripper piece of paper with a number written on it. Mii chan leaned over to Takamina’s side and looked at the piece of paper on her lap. “Takamina…someone left their number for you~”

“Number?” Takamina took the sheet from Mii chan’s hands and read the paper with the number written on it and the name Mochi. “Did she drop this?”

Mii chan took the piece of paper and stuffed it in her own pocket. This could be a good prank. Takamina’s dense nature was something to take advantage of was what Mii chan always thought. This was one of those times something needed to be done.

“I’ll take care of this matter.” Mii chan stated quickly to avoid any interrogation. Takamina simply nodded, closing her eyes, she waited for their landing.

(Will I see you tomorrow?)

The three disguised girls walked out of the airport, with their fake passports, created by Sachou in their pockets, and their backpacks. The air in Tokyo was nowhere near the humidness in Okinawa so they all hastily took out their jackets from their bags.

They grabbed a taxi and settled down.

“So where are you folks headed?” The cab driver asked, as he glanced back in his car mirror.

“Somewhere as close to Tokyo Forest as possible, with 300 yen.” Takamina answered. Though Takamina did a bit of research before coming to Tokyo, she still was unsure as to where they could settle due to their limited amount of money.

Last night after Sachou left, Takamina decided to pack her stuff and check their expenses.

The three of them had a communal money bank where they would place their payment in from part time jobs. However searching under her bed where the bank would normally be stored, she found nothing except a note, stating that the money has gone for romantic usage.

As you might have predicted, Mii chan went ballistic,  :banghead: Haruna whined,  :cry: and all Takamina could do was sigh.  :huhuh As a result all they have was 800 yen to spare for the three of them.

“300 yen will get you nowhere near that, young man.”

Mii chan took the 300 yen from Takamina’s hand and stuffed it to the man. “300 is all we got!. We’ve got nothing left. Just take us somewhere.”

“Eh. No. I have expenses and a family to raise aswell, Tokyo Forest is too far. Who do you think you are?”

Mii chan smirked. “I don’t know who I am, but I know all about you.” Mii chan tapped her chin.
“ You’re not really faithful are you?”

The man scowled. “What the heck are you talking about!”

“I’m talking about what you do behind your wife’s back at night. Hmm, Is Saori club any good?“ 

“H-How did you know that!”

“There’s a box of matches sticking out from your chest pocket. The logo is Saori club’s is it not?”

“I-I went there for a business meeting! Don’t make accusations!” The man growled and it was evident he was getting frustrated.

“You want to escape, right?. Right now, you wish to just walk out of the car door and run away from us. You know how I know? Look at the direction that your feet is pointing. To the car door right?” Mii chan smiled.

“You’re also wearing a high neck shirt….why? Might be your fashion, but taking into account of the jandels and shorts you’re wearing…I’ll say it’s too hot for you, to be wearing a sweater like that. What are you hiding…”

The man was silent. It was obvious, Mii chan had hit the target with her statements. “Not going to tell me? Why don’t I tell you…Kiss mar-“

“OKAY!!!”

The man quickly took the money from Mii chan’s outstretched hands and started the taxi engine. “You guys seem desperate so I’ll take you to Tokyo Forest.”

“That’s awfully nice of you.” Mii chan smirked. “But…do you ever think about your children and wife when you’re doing those sorts of things?”

The man once again stayed silent. “I’ll talk to her.”


 (Will I see you tomorrow?)


After getting off the cab, the girls settled under a tree in Tokyo Forest. Surprisingly, they were not the only ones there. Right next to their spot was two tents and the girls assumed they were doing the same thing they were. In a few moments, rain started to pour and although the tree acted as a shelter it was freezing.

Mii chan stood up and walked towards the tents, asking permission to share it for the night, but was unfortunately declined. She walked back to her sisters with her head bent down and shivering.

Takamina saw her shivering sisters and took off her jacket. “Here Har-Riku, hold this, wear it if it’s too cold. I’m gonna run up to the city and buy some stuff.” The midget was already gone before the sisters could respond.

Kojiharu sighed. “She’s doing way too much stuff for us. I’m going to go as well.” She stood up, but was held back by Mii chan. “You’ll just cause more trouble for her with your sore ankle. Let it rest so it’s ready for tomorrow.”

Sighing again, the tall disguised girl sat back down. “I hope Takamina doesn’t get too cold.” She said as she held her sister’s jacket to her chest.

“Me too.”

(Will I see you tomorrow?)

The rain was pouring harder than it already was.

 Takamina reached the entrance of an convenience store, but before she got in she halted upon hearing an old woman scream. “Help!”

The small midget ran to the fallen elderly woman and helped her up. “Are you okay?”

“My purse was t-taken” the woman managed to say among her pants.

Takamina looked straight ahead and saw a black running blob, at once she asked one of the bystanders to take the woman to a shelter and care for her.

The small midget began chasing the culprit, despite her small stature and weak legs,  Takamina was the fastest runner out of her three sisters. All these years with her mother, and all the training she and her sisters had gone through,  resulted in...well you could say abnormal abilities.   

She managed to catch up to the man in a black mask with no trouble and stood in front of him. “Going somewhere?” Takamina smirked.

The man charged pass the midget but before he could get away he was held by the collar of his shirt and pulled up. “What the fu-“

In seconds the criminal was handcuffed and taken away by polices who were in charge of circumspecting the area.

“Thanks for your hard work pal.” One of the officers said as he patted Kai on the back.

Takamina smiled and ran back to the convenience store. She approached the elderly woman with her purse. “Here you are.” She said as she handed the purse back. “Get back home safely and quickly or you might get a cold from the rain.”

“Thank you. Thank you. You don’t see many youngsters like you nowadays. Your family must be so proud of you. Here take this.” The woman said as she handed Takamina an envelope which the small leader assumed was money.

Quickly, Takamina handed the money back to the elderly woman and smiled. “Thank you. But I don’t need it. “

The woman frowned. “But you helped me.”

“I wanted to help you. I don’t need anything back. It’s not my style.”

The elderly woman smiled again, this time, wider. “I think I might’ve fallen for you. Hohoho, if only I was years younger. Hahaha. I’ll introduce you to my granddaughters one day.”

Takamina scratched the back of her hair/wig, unsure of how to reply. “Uh…thank you. My name is Tak- I mean, Kai.” She said as she shook the woman’s hand.

“Well then, Kai. When we meet again, let me treat you to tea…and my granddaughters. And... we will meet again. I’m sure.”

As the elderly woman soon left Takamina’s sight, she smiled and looked at her watch. She had been gone for almost an hour already. 

“Achoo.” Takamina rubbed her nose but quickly dismissed the thought of her getting sick and hurried into the convenience store. She quickly checked the prices and grabbed the cheapest emergency blanket costing her the remains of her money. 

(Will I see you tomorrow?)

“Hahaha, look at these innocent looking sleeping guys. Do they really think they have a chance to be chosen.” One of the guys who occupied one of the tents said.

“You wanna prank them with a bit of this?” The other guy said as he held a packet of white powder.
The guys sneaked a packet of the drugs in Riku’s pants and scurried away, laughing and hitting their legs as they crawled back into their tents.

(Will I see you tomorrow?)


20 minutes after the prank

“Ah. Sorry for being late guys.” Takamina whispered as she wrapped the blanket around her two sleeping sisters.  She sat next to Haruna and gave both Mii chan and Haruna a kiss on the head before drifting off to sleep herself.

(Will I see you tomorrow?)


20th December 12:01am

The beaming lights awoke the tallest girl from her slumber and as a result she stood up and her eyes widen at the decoration displayed in front of her.

“Don’t tell me…it’s started…the competition.” Kojiharu gazed out on the plain ground ahead and her question was confirmed as she saw and heard the well known millionaire Akimoto Yasushi commentate with several competitors below.

“Wake up Ta- I mean, KAI!!! KUU!!!”  Kojiharu shouted as she shook her sisters. “The competition has started!!!!”

“WHAT?!” Upon hearing those words, Mii chan woke up and adjusted her hair frantically. She then quickly fumbled in her bag and took out three toothbrushes and toothpaste. “Even if we’re late, we can’t leave until we brush our teeth.”

Kojiharu nodded, took the toothbrush and sped brush, while trying the wake Takamina up. “What’s wrong with Takamina, she’s always the first to wake up…”

The girls dropped their toothbrush and walked closer to Takamina. “Takam-Kai. Wake up.” Haruna whispered in her ears and consequently felt the small girl’s temperature. “Mi- Kuu…Kai’s got a fever.”

“Seriously! It’s because she was pushing herself to protect us from getting sick. Let’s carry her to the nearest hospital.” Mii chan said as she lifted Takamina , however before she could touch their leader, Takamina held her wrist.

“No. Give me the toothbrush.” Takamina ordered, and Mii chan reluctantly obeyed. The leader, still with her eyes closed, cleaned her teeth.

“Kai, we need to get you to a hospital. You’re burning up.” Haruna said in concern. She really definitely did not want to see Takamina push herself again. But, no matter what anyone says, Takamina always tried her best and even when it was not humanely possible, Takamina would never give up. Haruna loved that about Takamina, but it worried her most of the time.

“Let’s go. Riku. Kuu.” Takamina said as she sat up and ran to the competition area. The two sisters looked at each other and sighed.


(Will I see you tomorrow?) 

The area of competition was unusual; the area was leveled and had 4 levels. At the top level, sat Akimoto Yasushi in a king like chair, and beside him were four ladies who were masked. Each level consisted of different tests, and there were 20 contestants.

Level 1 – Intelligence (8 eliminated)

Level 2 – Strength and Stamina (3 eliminated)

Level 3 –Personal Questioning (2 eliminated)

Level 4 – Endurance (2 elimated)

As a result for being late, the three girls received a punishment of 50 push ups, which they completed with no sweat, except for Takamina who was sweating from her fever.

“Introduce youselves” Akimoto demanded to the late comers as he looked through the application sheets (which they sent earlier via email)

“Osu! My name is Riku. I am 21 years old and I have graduated from two universities, gaining my Bachelor of Computer Programming and Computer Science.”

“Osu! My name is Kuu. 17 years old. Studying in Psychology, this year.”

“Psychology?” The commentator interrupted.

“Commentator san, you work in an insurance company. Am I right?”

“H-How’d you know”

“You’re wearing your company badge, plus even though your shoes is well polished the soles of your shoes is worn out. From walking too much right, selling and marketing insurance?” Mii chan smirked. “Don’t look so scared. I just like observing.”

From the corner of Mii chan’s eyes, Haruna gave her the thumbs up.

“Hahaha…N-Next please.”

“I’m Tak- no um, I’m Kai. I’m 18 years old and studying medicine.” Takamina knew she wasn’t feeling well, and she just hoped she could act normal as possible, but her brain felt like it was melting. She couldn’t however let her sisters down.

“Now the introductions are done. Let’s begin! LEVEL 1.” The commentator said as the competitors sat on desks and were given out test papers

( The disguised girls will now be referred to as their alter egos.)

Kuu and Riku passed first level with no difficulty; however Kai just barely scraped it being 12th.

“Aw, did the midget just make it. What a dumbie.” Two guys chuckled as they passed by the midget giving him a nudge. “Hahahhaha.”

“Those bastards.” Kuu growled, preparing to jump at them when Riku held him back. “Not worth it.”
 
LEVEL 2

In this level they were to carry a 80kg weight, and in order for them to win they must be hold it for the longest. The longest 9 gets to move on to the next round.

Again, Riku and Kuu made it in the top 3, however Kai, stopped right after the 10th person let the weight down. She was sweating hard and received another insult from the two guys who provoked her earlier.

LEVEL 3

In this level, the 4 masked girls would ask one question each and for that one question the four of them would each choose one member they liked. The person with the least votes at the end will not move on the final and last round. There were 9 competitors left, meaning the 2 they disliked the most would be eliminated.

The 9 competitors consist of:

Currently in 1st place: Sato Takeru
2nd – Kuu
3rd- Riku
4th- Nakamura Aoi
5th - Ishida (Guy 2 from tent) 
6th – Nobu (Guy 1 from tent)
7th –  Random
8th- Random
9th- Kai

The first masked girl with a tall model like figure and short brunette coloured hair asked her question.
If I was in a clown costume and a kid asked for a balloon, but I had none, what would you do?

Sato: Compromise with him.

Riku: Pat the kid on the head and tell him there’s no balloon nicely

Kuu: Take the red nose off you and tell the kid that you are no clown.

Kai: Find the kid a balloon.

The second girl with her saber tooth showing asked her question.
“Hmm.  What if I fell in love with you and asked you to kiss me.”

Sato: First I need to ask myself what I feel about you. If it’s mutual, I’ll ask Akimoto sama for his permission to be with you, then after knowing you, I’ll kiss you.

Riku: I don’t know…talk to you more about this matter?

Kuu: Kiss you.

Nobu: Give you my love and shower you with all the kisses I can give. I mean you’re such a hottie. Rwar~


Kai: Would you really fall in love with me?


The third girl with a midget like body, but taller than Kai, asked her question
“Let’s say…I’m a pervert. What would you do if I just couldn’t stop touching you? ”

Sato: If that’s what makes you happy. But I would ask you to control yourself a bit. *wink*

Riku: Run away as far as possible.

Kuu: Hmmm…but what if I was a bigger pervert?

Kai: … What kind of question is this?


Lastly, the girl with black hair asked her question.

“If you caught be ready to suicide. What would you first say?”

Sato: Don’t do it. You have so much ahead of you. Don’t!

Riku: Is it worth it; is what you are doing worth it?

Kuu: You really want to just throw the only life you have?

Kai: Why?

After a few minutes the votes were added up and the contestants moving through to the final round were: Sato, Kuu, Kai, Nakamura, Ishida, Random and Riku.

FINAL LEVEL

For this test the contestants will be given a secret word that they must keep secret despite anything that might happen.

Firstly for this test the contestants, would be whipped with a large leather whip for 15 minutes. If they can endure this they will move on to the next torture. Kai, Kuu and Riku looked at each other as inwardly smiled.

We have an advantage. Thank you Sachou…for whipping us.

14 minutes passed and only "random" blurted out the word, and was thus eliminated from the round. The contestants with their muscular body found it fairly easy as well as Riku and Kuu. The only one suffering was Kai, his face was flushed red and he was perspiring like crazy. His hyperventilation was one not to be missed. Riku and Kuu looked from their position to Kai and their face curled in concern. Kai looked back, knowing what they wanted to do: to stop the competition. Of course Kai didn't let them, he smiled at them and gave them a reassuring nod.

I’ll be alright.

The remaining 6 contestants moved onto the final round: Ice age, as they call it. They would have to emerge themselves in a bath of cold freezing water for as long as possible. The first one to come to the surface loses.

They were all submerged into a bath of freezing water, and for 2 minutes already, no one struggled, except for Kai who was shivering from the beginning.  Ishida, who was beside Kai took notice of his struggle and decided to make it easier for the  midget. He took out a pin sized needle and poked it completely into Kai’s leg, making him squirm and eventually surface. Next as subtly as possible he poked Riku’s pants pocket, revealing the white substance from his pants.

Ishida inwardly laughed and also reached the surface. “Looks like the midget leaves.”

The other contestants surfaced and quickly Riku and Kuu swam to Kai. “Sorry guys…guess I can’t be with you.” Riku and Kuu quickly took Kai out from the tank and laid him down on the ground.

“Kai’s still got a fever. It's worst than before!” Riku cried in concern. “We need to take him to the hospital-“

“Before that, I think you need to take a visit to police station. Tsk Tsk. Drugs?” Ishida said as he pointed the trial of white powder from Riku’s pants.

Akimoto stepped down from his seat along with the four girls and inspected the area. “What is the meaning of this…Riku kun?!”

Riku looked into Akimoto’s eyes. “It’s not mine.”

“How do you expect me to believ-“

Akimoto stopped his words when Kai kneeled before him literally begging him to believe Riku. “Riku, will never do *pant* something like that. Please believe him.” Mii chan soon followed. “Riku had nothing to do with those drugs.”

“The evidence is right-“

“I believe him. Dad, I believe Riku.” The shortest of the girls stepped down and walked closer to Riku, patting him on the shoulders. “I know it’s no-…wow, your skin...Dad!, His skin is so smooth” Yuko grinned as she rubbed Riku’s hands.

Riku retracted his hands from Yuko immediately. “Thank you....for believing me that is.” He said as he looked away from Yuko.

Hehe, acting shy are you? 

Akimoto coughed. “This isn’t a game, Yuko. It might be-“

“I believe them. That it had nothing to do with them. Son, can’t you tell between truths and lies?” Kai raised his head hearing the familiar voice.

“Baa san.” Kai murmured.

“I believe this young man would never lie.” The elderly woman said as she walked towards Kai and patted him on the head.

Akimoto sighed. “Then who does the drugs belong to.” Ishida’s face dropped and he was shaking. Why did everyone believe them, what is this? A family reunion?

Kuu laughed. “Do you even have to ask?...Who was the first person to discover these drugs?”

The crowd turned to Ishida as he stumbled back and attempted to run away, however was soon caught by Akimoto’s personal bodyguards.

“We’re not that innocent.” Kuu eyed Ishida and smirked.

“You, y-y-ou were awake?!” Ishida yelled as he was taken away.

“Nice.” Kai grinned fist punched Kuu. 

“Thank you for believ-“ Kai started but soon darkness engulfed him.

End of Chapter 2

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Sorry for the lack of Atsumina and KojiYuu, I needed to get the setting and characters established before. But...next chapter will definitely be the start of some Atsumina, Kojiharu, (maybe Marimii) action. Look forward to it.  :)  :D

I can't thank you guys enough for reading this and giving me such motivating comments. Thank you.   :love:
Atsumina forever and always.

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #9 on: October 07, 2012, 04:43:59 PM »
4 girls ~ hmm, let me guess, Mariko, Yuko, Acchan & ......... (unsure). But i believe them (Kai, Riku &  Kuu) will be hired later on.

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« Reply #10 on: October 07, 2012, 08:39:57 PM »
Thanks for the update :D Really enjoyed reading that chapter, great introduction and development :) Looking forward to the next one :D

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« Reply #11 on: October 07, 2012, 08:44:59 PM »
wooo nice fic!!  :thumbsup

please continue the next chapter!!!  :bow: :twothumbs

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« Reply #12 on: October 08, 2012, 03:12:03 AM »
wooot! so excoted for the next chapter!! :deco: :deco: :deco:
but...if tomochin is one of the girls..where's chiyuu? :(

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jajaj i love the question time!!but yuko`s questions was hilarious!! :D love it!!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 3!
« Reply #14 on: October 08, 2012, 02:01:12 PM »
Thank you to my repliers: Sydney W, arrow27, steftakami, yuuzu05, Haruko.  :heart:

Really thank you very much. 

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Chapter 3 - Who's with who

(For some reason, I like referring to the characters to their real name than (Kai, Kuu and Riku) so…)

Kojiharu sat beside the bed Takamina was resting on and gently stroked her hair, while Mii chan changed the wet towel on their leader’s forehead ever so often. Akimoto san had been so kind to lead them all back to his mansion to let their leader rest.

“Takamina….” Haruna whispered.

The sound of the door opening was unheard by the sisters as they continued to care for Takamina. 

“Riku…. You guys are very close.” The figure said from behind causing Haruna to turn from Takamina to another midget.

“Oshima oujo sama.”

“How’s Kai?” Yuko said as she walked into the room.

Her eyes connected with Riku’s and to her it felt like a magnet pulled her in. “Riku…”

“Ah sorry for staring, it’s just that it’s the first time I’ve seen you up close. You’re pretty.” Kojiharu smiled and it was all it took to raise Yuko’s pervert meter.

As quickly as possible, the midget kneeled next to Riku and she tilted his head by the chin so they were making eye contact. “~You’re very cute. I don’t think I took my eyes off you during the competition~” She said as she leaned in towards the red streaked haired “boy”.

Their lips were inches away and both their hearts were pounding of love…maybe fear for Kojiharu. Yuko closed her eyes and leaned in even more, ready to capture the lips of her attracter. “Riku…”

At once, Haruna snapped out of it and pushed the perverted midget away. “W-What do you think you’re doing!?”

“~I couldn’t help it, you’re too cute~” Yuko said seductively, landing her hands on Riku’s thigh and gently stroking it.

Riku quickly slapped Yuko’s hands away and glared at her. “You know, we haven’t even officially met. How can you do something like that to someone you just met?”

“Ah!” Yuko clicked her fingers. “Hi, I’m Oshima Yuko! An actress and singer. And you’re Riku.”

Kojiharu nodded.

“Now that we’ve introduced ourselves…I can touch you!” Yuko exclaimed as she jumped on top of Haruna making them both fall to the ground, with Yuko on top.

“W-Wait! W-What are you doing!?” Haruna’s face was in full blush and she gulped before looking into Yuko’s eyes.

I’m a girl.

“Skinship! Just a bit of Skinship.” Yuko smiled, as she quickly claimed Haruna’s lips. Haruna’s eyes widen and her heart was beating like crazy. She’s been kissed before…once by a guy, but being kissed by a perverted girl who thought she was a guy was a whole new story.

“Mmphmp” Once again Haruna pushed Yuko off and began panting due to the intense passionate portrayed by the pervert. “W-What *pant* do you think you’re *pant* doing!”

“Nyan Nyan!!! My Nyan Nyan!!!” Yuko said as she jumped onto Kojiharu again and clung to her neck. “I think I’ve fallen for you already!!!”

“No you haven’t!” Kojiharu exclaimed as she attempted to untangle herself from Yuko.

“Get off me!”

Amongst all the racket, Takamina woke up and rubbed her eyes. She turned to her left and saw Mii chan with her phone out, perhaps videoing something. She totally dismissed the idea that she was in an unfamiliar surrounding, because as she turned to the direction of the noise, her eyes widen.

Her sister, Haruna, well Riku, was k-kissing one of the daughters…right in front of her.

The small girl rubbed her eyes again. “Koj-R-R-Riku?”

Kojiharu’s eyes widen in fear and she immediately broke the kiss, pushing Yuko harder than before. “T-This isn’t what you think. Ta-Kai! Really it isn’t! Tell he-him it isn’t Kuu.” She said as she frantically looked from Takamina to Mii chan but to her dismay found the blue streak boy filming.

“Kuu…What is it that you’re doing!?” Kojiharu growled. Raising a fist , she started chasing Kuu along with Yuko embracing her waist. “Pervert! Get off me!”

“Never~”

“Kuu! Delete the video and tell Kai it wasn’t like that!! Please!!!”

“Why are you so keen of telling Kai it wasn’t what it seemed. It doesn’t affect her anyways.” Kuu asked while running round Takamina’s bed.

“That’s obviously because…because..” Why am I so desperate? Because I don’t want Takamina to get the wrong idea…because I….she's my sister, yeah because she's my sister. 

Takamina watched the scene unfold before her and couldn’t help but face palm herself.

Immediately the door opened and in stood the other three daughters, Akimoto san, and the other two newly assigned bodyguards. Akimoto Yasushi was well known for his adoption of 4 orphans who eventually grew up to be great superstars.

“I see…Yuko’s causing trouble…again.” Akimoto said with his hand to his face. “Yuko. Behave, and come here.”

“Haiiii.” Yuko stopped her clinging and trotted alongside her sisters. “So are we assigning body guards now!?!?!?!”

“Yes, yes. Yuko calm down!” Akimoto ordered. “Well, I have decided to hire only 4 body guards, because of yesterday’s incident with the 5th winner. So lets st-“

“No.” The two sisters said in unison while their hands were on Takamina’s shoulders.”If Kai is not assigned as one of the bodyguards, we will quit aswell!”

“That’s a problem…The little guy didn’t pass the final level.”

“It’s okay, guys. I’ll just head back h-“

“No. We’re not complete until we’re together! There’s no meaning of having us and not Kai. You will definitely regret not hiring Kai, because he’s more than meets the eye. He’s perfect!” Haruna stated, her confidence in full bloom. “You don’t know how incredible he is. He was racing through that competition with a high fever! But despite that he never gave up! Why? Because he’s Kai!”

*Clap* *Clap* “Wow, Riku…your aura’s changed. You seem manlier!!” Yuko applauded and gave a quick wink, which sent shivers down Riku’s back.

“And Akimoto sama, I heard you are very fond of the number 48. Kai’s height is 148cm and her birthday is on the 8th of April. Both which contains the number 48.” Mii chan smirked. “Kai is amazing. Akimoto sama.”

Hearing her sister’s words brought tears to the small leader. She got out of bed and walked towards Akimoto. “Akimoto sama, It’s okay. Please don’t force yourself to hire me. Hearing my sister’s words meant the world to me already. Thank you.” 

Akimoto smiled and sighed. “Kai, I don’t know why you’re thanking me but I can see you guys have a very close bond. It would be very rude to split you guys up.  Because of the number 48, Kai, you’re hired.”

At once Kuu and Riku ran towards Kai and embraced him with a warm tight hug. “YAY!!!”

“On one condition. You guys are to form a band, as well as take on the role as bodyguards. I’m sure the world needs to see your bond.”

“Our bond?” Riku asked.

Akimoto simply smiled. “Well, now that’s sorted. I have assigned each bodyguard to one of my daughters. Girls, if you would take off your masks.”

The remaining girls with their masks on, took them off causing gasps and woahs. “Maeda…Maeda san! I’m a huge fan…!!” Kojiharu gasped as she stepped forward and asked for a hand shake, which Maeda san took politely. “Thank you.”

“Riku’s been a fan of yours for who knows how long. Maeda san.” Takamina stated as she smiled at Maeda. However a glare was returned and Takamina got the weirdest feeling that she was hated.

“Um…Maeda san…”

“Don’t talk to me.” Takamina’s expression instantly dropped as her prediction was confirmed.

She was hated.

The other people in the room also looked towards them. “A-Acchan?” Yuko hesitated as she brought a hand to her sister’s shoulder. Mariko, the oldest daughter also placed her hand on Acchan’s other shoulder. “Are you okay?”

Acchan turned around to face Yuko, then Mariko and smiled. “I’m fine.”

Akimoto forced a cough grabbing everyone’s attention. “Anyways, with the new addition of Kai as a body guard the pairing would be like this:

Itano Tomomi – Sato Takeru 
The look of indifference harboured Tomomi’s face as she listened to who she was paired with. Yes, he was good looking and his answers to the questions during the competitions were ones of a gentlemen but she just had no interest. Her eyes were surprisingly fixated on the midget blonde and his actions and words.

Sato Takeru also had the same feeling as the model, but his eyes were glued to Atsuko’s. Argh…I wanted to be paired with Atsuko.

Shinoda Mariko – Kuu
As soon as their names got called, they knew they suited each other. They felt something pull them together, something called the string of pranks. They smiled at each other and the whole room shuddered.

Oshima Yuko – Nakamura Aoi
Oshima was evidently depressed, and she grabbed her dad’s sleeves. “I want Nyan Nyan to be my bodyguard!”  Akimoto looked down onto the midget and saw a pouting girl.

 “Nyan Nyan?”

“Riku…”

He sighed.”Why him?”

“I just feel so safe with him…Please.” Akimoto sighed for the umpteenth time.

“Oshima Yuko – Riku”

Stars glittered from the midget’s eyes as she ran over to Riku and jumped on top of him, kissing him in the process. “NYAN NYANNNNN!!!!”

Riku sighed. But I feel so unsafe with you. Once again Riku attempted to pull Yuko away from him, he really didn’t want to waste his energy for something like this. But in some ways this seemed more dangerous than one of their missions.

Maeda Atsuko – Kai
At once Maeda gave a menacing glare to the oblivious Kai, who waved awkwardly. “Dad, can I please switch bodyguard.”

Akimoto stared in shock.”Huh, you never complain…”

“I don’t like him.” The actress stated bluntly.

The midget laughed awkwardly as she scratched the back of her head. Akimoto, new to Acchan’s emotion of hate decided to pursue further. “And why is that?”

“Sorry if I’m offending you.” She said while facing Takamina who simply motioned her hands implying that she did not mind and to tell her to keep going.

“He seems like the worst type of guy.”

Kojiharu and Mii chan sighed a breath of relief. At least the reason for hating Takamina was not because she found out they were actually girls. Nevertheless, both Haruna and Mii chan prepared to butt in and defend Takamina when someone else got there before them.

“You don’t even know him yet, how can you say that about Kai!” The crowd looked at the speaker who glared at Acchan. 

“Tomochin! I saw him! I couldn’t hear what they were saying but I saw his motives.I was on the same plane as him, and I saw him provoking the flight attendant to fasten his seatbelt. The flight attendant was “fastening” it for him for a bit too long. Isn’t that dirty? Maeda exclaimed.

Takamina tilted her head in confusion. Why is fixing my faulty seat belt…dirty? I took a shower before the morning plane.

"You can't just assume something. Atsuko! He's a wonderful guy! Hasn't the competition been enough to tell you that!" A faint blush appeared on Tomochin's cheeks.

"Well people can act! You don't know him well enough to say he isn't bad!" Maeda retorted back with the volume of her voice increasing.

Takamina tried to reason with the two girls. "Maed-"

Maeda directed another glare to the small leader. "Stay out of this, and don't call my name!"

"Don't talk to Kai like that! You're just being unfair!"

"Why are you defending him over your sister?"

"Because I like him...." Tomochin's face was now fully flushed. "A-A-Ah I-I mean...I mean..I l-like him to stay here without any arguments occurring all the time.

Thus slience surrounded the room and even a the fall of a feather could've been heard.

Takamina walked over to the teary eyed Tomochin. "Um...thank you. :)" She patted Tomochin on the head and wiped her tears, making her blush even more at the close proximity between them

Tomochin finally smiled back, her heart beating faster than ever.

haha What a sinful woman... you are Takamina. Kojiharu thought while trying to hide her smirk.

Among the slience, Mii chan and Mariko sama began to laugh. “Hahahaha. This is going to be a fun relationship!” Mii chan said as she nudged Kojiharu.

“Maeda san, Kai is stupid.” Kojiharu said with a smile.

“Oi!!!!” Takamina yelled.

“Slience!” Akimoto bellowed. The room seemed to have halted and Akimoto then gave Aoi san his role.

Night Body guard and manager of the newly created boy band: Nakamura Aoi
As you might’ve guessed, Nakamura was not in the slightest content with the role he was given.

“Dad, I really don’t want him as my bodyguard!” Maeda whined again.

Akimoto sighed. “One week. Be with him for one week and if it doesn’t work out swap with Tomomi. Is that okay?”

“…Haiiii…” Maeda sulked. 

Tomochin and Sato san inwardly cheered hearing the potential swaps.

(Will I see you tomorrow?)


The bodyguards were given ring with sounded whether the girls needed them. Akimoto san, left for business reasons and thus left Mariko sama in charge. The bodyguards were given a room each, however the three boys insisted to be in the same room.

After dinner, the girls of were to visit their bodyguards room and well, bond. Maeda, Oshima and Shinoda, all headed in to their bodyguards room. At the moment they were all seated on Kai’s bed except for a certain black haired actress who sat on the desk chair adjacent to the bed.

“Acchan, why don’t you just join us?” Mariko sama asked. Seriously, she had never seen her younger sister act so cold to anyone she just met. No matter how hated that person might be, Acchan would hide it through her acting, but this time it was clearly different. Basically…she couldn’t hide her hatred.

“Who knows what that guy might do on his bed, after.” Acchan murmured

The gang laughed upon hearing her answer, everyone except for the dense Takamina. “I’m not going to do anything except sleep on it. What else can I do on a bed?”

Mii chan patted Takamina on the back. “Sigh, someday you will need to step away from your innocent world. But…for now, it’s funny so stay like that.”

Mariko sama laughed. “Seriously, Kuu, your brother is one hilarious and kind kid. I really don’t get why Acchan hates him….”

End of Chapter 3

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How was Chapter 3? Tell me how you guys thought it was.

Hope you guys enjoyed it :)

Now I need to go to bed, and think of more ideas for the next chapter....:3

Thank you for reading.

Miko

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« Reply #15 on: October 08, 2012, 03:17:54 PM »
Thanks for the update! Loving this more and more!!! Everyone meeting eachother was priceless! Poor Haruna already had Yuko attack her :P & lol @ takamina being dense, I love that line where she says "I’m not going to do anything except sleep on it. What else can I do on a bed?” & poor her for being hated for the whole mocchi incident when taka didn't even know what was going on :P Really looking forward to your next chapter, thanks again :D

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« Reply #16 on: October 08, 2012, 03:36:51 PM »
Poor Takamina, she's so kind but being hated because of something even she doesn't know :lol:

I think it's really interesting to start their meeting/relationship like that :wub:

But only me or Kojiharu likes Takamina more than sister :?


Thanks for updating and hope to read the next chapter from you soon.

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« Reply #17 on: October 08, 2012, 09:57:46 PM »
omg TakaTomo moments!! :w00t:

Acchan hate a Takamina  XD

please pleas continue!!!!  :wub: :bow:

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« Reply #18 on: October 09, 2012, 06:11:02 AM »
omg so many goldy moments..

kojiyuu
jajaj yuko you  are so perver.. and you kiss oir riku so fast!! congratulations :D i think that riku need to be more careful because yuko can raper her/him ...

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jejej this two are a profesional teaser.. this gonna be interesting

atsumina...

jejej maeda you are jealousy so fast.. aww minami you are a clueless persona .. dont know about flirt and that thing.. jej love her innocent side :D..

In general this fic is one of my favorities right now.. but takaboy is gorgeous how she can make every woman in love and she doesnt notice it!! :D

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« Reply #19 on: October 09, 2012, 06:18:57 AM »
I always love Takamina's innocent side so  :wub:. Does Acchan just hate her for being flirty or is it because she's jealous of Mocchi XD?

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