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Offline blakwhite

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woa, ray is pregnant lol  XD , update pls, i want atsumina, pls update your fic  :bow:

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Mikomiko-san

Update please...

'Will I see you tomorrow?' is one of my favorite story

I have always enjoy MendolxAKB

Can't wait to see what happen next to Atsuko and Minami?

Thank you

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I love this story sooooooooooooooo much!!!!! :heart: :heart:
Thank you for writing! :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Ray you dare to lied. :angry:
Kai(takamina) belong to acchan you know :catglare:


Please update I will wait you.  :thumbsup :bow:
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Ray is pregnant...
My Reaction:
 :shocked
.....eh!? yabbai!!! acchan is going to be mad(...Again.) better prepare takaboy!!!!
*after a while*
EH!? CHOTTO MATTE!!! KAI IS NOT A 'HE'!!! SHE DOESN'T HAVE...uhm...you know 'that'.
*realizes*
RAY!!!! liar!!!  :angry:
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Offline Elo

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Come on how is she pregnant I mean minami dont have a ****

so it is for me just funny that she thinks that minami made her pregnant

I hope acchan dont belive it


anyway I hope you will update soon
Love AKB
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Love this Pairing
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Offline IntanLakz

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Done reading from chap 1


What? ray is pregnant ? what a liar


Please update soon

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Ray is such a liar..
Why she can be as annoying as she is ? :mon xmas2:

Please update soon.  :on asmo:

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OMG SOOO MUCH DRAMA!!!

That last bit was hilarious  :on lol: Ray is lying sooo hard!!! Takamina is a girl ya know X3, hopefully her sister can back her up with the baby thing

I wish Takamina would just tell Acchan that she's Kai  :onioncheer:

Update soon Onegai Shimasu  :kneelbow:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 10 [11/03/13]
« Reply #149 on: September 28, 2013, 10:17:32 AM »
Ray definitely was lying hard. :? no way ray is pregnant.. :nervous
Plz updated it soon. .  :cow: :bow:

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Please continue!!! :bow:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 10 [11/03/13]
« Reply #151 on: November 27, 2013, 08:54:33 AM »
pleseees continue  :bow:
really really wanted to know wht happen next till end....i hope u can continue this story soon  XD

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 10 [11/03/13]
« Reply #152 on: December 02, 2013, 04:28:48 PM »
Omg what is going on Ray is pregnant

Omg Ray you to crazy, Kai is a girl

Acchan going to get mad at this one

I wonder how Takamina going to solve this problem

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 10 [11/03/13]
« Reply #153 on: December 03, 2013, 02:21:51 PM »
pleeese update  :bow:
cannot wait on wht happen next ><
ur story is very good  :twothumbs   :twothumbs
looking forward for ur update  XD

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 10 [11/03/13]
« Reply #154 on: December 18, 2013, 06:39:24 AM »
love this!!! :) thanks for creating such an awesome story:)

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter11 [1/01/14]
« Reply #155 on: December 31, 2013, 02:33:36 PM »
It's MikoMiko!!!

I'm so sorry about the llllaaatteee update, but I had the biggest writer's block and with atsumina and graduations, I just couldn't write.
I'm watching Kohaku at the moment, and seeing the wonderful, beautiful yet cool Takamina.  :heart:

This isn't a long chapter, but I hope you can forgive me. I will try my best to deliver the next one after this. And I thank you all for commenting and reading. The encouragement to continue this story and to receive supporting comments even now, after so long after my update really warms my heart. I love you all so much. Thank you for everything. I'm so sorry for the wait, but I will never forget you guys and this story. Your comments make me strong.  :rock:

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!

Here we go: (I hope it's okay, and my writing style hasn't well died)

Will I see you tommorrow.

Chapter 11 - The mess we created

The entire room went completely silent, everyone still registering the impetuous words of the Diva. As their thoughts tried to puzzle the shocking news, all eyes slowly scrutinized Takamina with confusion, bewilderment, amusement and disgust.

Takamina’s eyes never left Ray’s as she claimed she was pregnant with her baby.

“Well…Kai, I guess, there’s no choice… you have to marry me.”

The room remained silent with shocked faces and disbelief.

Mii chan decided to break the silence that was caused by such a preposterous lie.  “Wait! Kai can’t marry you! I mean there is no way Kai got you pregnant! She’s a blimmin’ g-“

“I did.” Kai exclaimed before Mii chan finished.

The sabre toothed girl stood forward and turned to Kai, her eyes filled with hurt and her heart with pain. “What?”

Takamina turned her head sideways. “I did. I got her pregnant.”

Ray smirked.


Will I see you tomorrow


“So everyone hates you now. What’s the story Minami?” Kojiharu stated calmly yet her heart and mind was nowhere close. She needed an explanation, and it wasn’t because she was jealous, but because she sincerely loved her sister, her Minami, and knowing her, whatever Takamina had just proclaimed an hour ago was an obvious lie.

Takamina pulled her blankets over her head and mumbled a soft, “Sorry.”

Miichan not satisfied with the answer, probed her even further. “I always knew, you were a guy. Explains why you never take a bath with us, or even change in front of us.”

“I-I’m not!”

“Really now? You got a girl pregnant?”

“Stop.”

“Or does the dense Bakamina need some explanation as to how a baby is formed? I can provide you with some very juicy detail.”   

Takamina pulled her blankets off her face and glared at her sisters who was seated at the end of Takamina’s bed. “Do you really think I got her pregnant! I didn’t even touch her.”

The youngest girl snickered. Too easy.

“Then what happened?” Kojiharu placed her hand on the smaller girl’s knee. “We’re your sisters. You can tell us anything. Please…trust us.”

Takamina smiled. “I trust you guys more than anyone.”

The midget sighed and massaged her temple. “It was that night, the night where I, well Kai came back home….”

That night

A knock on the door brought Takamina back to reality.

“Ray?”

Ray walked straight to the blonde, a cup of water in her hands. “Here, I brought you a drink of water.”

Kai smiled at the nice gesture and took a sip when she realised from her police training that water…never really meant water. Her sight started to fail and her head felt dizzy.

“Ray…t-this….isn’-“

The midget was cut off with soft lips that collided with hers. After a few seconds, both were panting as they withdrew from each other. Kai desperately tried to push the diva away, but the drink literally took her strength away.

“S-Stop!” Hands roamed Kai’s shirt, and buttons were broken as Ray ripped it off.

“Please!”

Ray brought her lips to Kai’s neck and sucked on it lightly.

“Please! Stop!”

Hands groped the bounded chest, and Ray brought her gaze to Takamina’s. “So, you’re a girl.”

Takamina breathed heavily, tears in her eyes. “I don’t want this.”

“Don’t you?” Ray smirked seductively.

“Stop please.”

“But I know your secret now.” Ray caressed Kai’s hair as she ripped off the blond wig.

Takamina stifled a groan from the pain. “W-What do you want?”

“Hmm, not much. I want you, but let’s make a deal.”

Ray’s hands played with Takamina’s lips and trailed down her neck.

“W-What.”

“I’ll keep you little secret and you…owe me one.”

Ray brought her tongue down towards Takamina’s body and licked her neck, while unwounding the bandage from Minami’s chest.

“N-No! Stop!” Takamina groaned.

Finishing with the bandage, Ray placed her hands on top of Takamina’s chest. “Is it a deal?” She asked as she tightened her grip.

“Fine.”

Ray got off Takamina and smiled. As she was about to exit the room, she leaned in to Takamina’s ears and whispered words that made the midget shiver. “You know, you still turn me on, girl or not.”



“Woah, wait. She practically wanted to 'you know' you! She drugged you and she was going to take advantage of you, Takamina! How can you even let it go and have her way. “ Mii-chan cried, her hand holding onto her shivering sister’s.

“I am going to bash the living daylights out of that thing!” Kojiharu stated, bringing Minami into a hug. Tears rolled down Haruna's cheeks. “You’ve been holding this pain for 2 months. Why didn’t you tell us? No! Why did you even let her get away for this! Just tell the police or mum”

Minami pulled out of the hug and smiled. “I can’t. I can’t go back on my word and I’m trying my best to maintain my secret. If they know Kai is Takamina, then people I love will be in danger.”

“W-What do you mean?” Kojiharu asked.

“Takamina’s life is in danger.”

Miichan shuffled closer to the midget. “Minami. Tell us the story.”

“There is no story. I just have the hunch and I don’t know either what the story is.”

“No. I can’t let you do this alone. We’re bash Ray together and we’re make sure you’re safe, together.” Mii chan exclaimed taking in both Kojiharu and Takamina’s hands.

Takamina pulled away. “I’m not strong enough….to have people I love get hurt. So please, trust what I’m doing.” 

The pleading look Takamina sported touched both Kojiharu and Miichan that despite them disagreeing they both ended up nodding.


Will I see you tomorrow?


Yesterday brought a huge shock and crushing blow to the stoic black haired actress. She always knew Kai was a good for nothing playboy, and now that her suspicions were confirmed she couldn’t help but feel empty, disappointed, hurt and anger.

Walking hand in hand with Takeru through Akihabara, she halted in front of a shop, which displayed ribbon key chains outside the window. Her first thought was brought back to Takamina, her new friend whom she hadn’t been in contact with since the hospital.

She entered the shop pulling Takeru in with her and instantly bought the pink ribbon key chain. It remained her of Takamina and that brought a soft warm fluffy feeling to her chest. One she knew she should have for the boy standing next to her.

“Do…you want me to pay for it for you?” Takeru calmly asked.

Acchan simply shook her head. She didn’t want Takeru to be in contact with her connection with her short friend.

Over the corner of the store, Acchan took a glance at the cute anime character key chain. She was so sure, it was one of the characters from One Piece, that before thinking she bought it along with the ribbon key chain.

“I didn’t know you like One Piece?” Takeru stated in amusement.

Acchan simply smiled and unconsciously said. “No it just remains me of someone very special.”

Takeru frowned at that statement, his jealousy overflowing through his tone as he spoke his next words. “I hope it isn’t that good for nothing, blonde.”

The actress glared at him. “Why would you even think that? I hate him with everything I have.”

“Then…who is it?”

“You don’t have to be jealous. It’s a girl.”

“Oh.” Takeru wasn't convinced as he stared at the sparkle in Acchan's eyes. Who would look like that at the mere thought of a 'friend'?"


(Will I see you tomorrow)



Holding the phone in her sweaty palms, Acchan contemplated if she should text her friend who she couldn’t seem to get her mind off.

Tomochin and Mariko gazed at their nervous sister in amusement. “Who is your secret lover?~” Mariko teased.

Acchan instantly jumped and threw an annoyed glare at her two sisters. “I-It’s not my lover. I’m very faithful to Takeru.”

“Oh come on! Who’s going to believe you like Takeru?” Mariko stated bluntly. “There’s no spark, there’s nothing. There was even more spark when you argued with Kai every d-“

Suddenly the room grew cold.

“I’m tired. Good night guys.” Tomochin murmured as she pulled the covers over her bed and turned away from her sisters.

“Here’s a jerk. He should just rot in hell.” Acchan coldly stated, totally oblivious to the fact that she was cursing Takamina.

Mariko sighed. Having been told the story from Miichan, she wanted to defend the blonde, but it wasn’t near possible if Kai’s real identity was not exposed.

“Now, now. Acchan, weren’t you going to text your special someone?”

“Leave me.”

Acchan had already written a draft and was reading it over and over again, just to make sure it had the perfect amount of casualness, seriousness and charm.

“Just send the message already, and go to sleep.”

Mariko turned the lights off and pulled her covers over herself. “Good night, Tomochin, Acchan.”

“Night.”

Acchan squeezed her eyes shut as she ran over her text once more and with a shaking hand pressed the send button.

She placed her phone on her side table and blessfully went to sleep. Of course not before cursing a certain blonde and dreaming of a certain midget.

To: Minami 

Takamina, long time no talk. (^_^)/
It’s been boring without you.
I really wish we could hang out again.
I have so much to tell you, and
my emotions aren’t as stable as I want it to be.
I just wish you were here.
I really miss you.

Atsuko.



(Will I see you tomorrow)


The first thing Atsuko did when she woke up was to check her phone. Seeing the message indicator she squealed in delight but was all crushed by four raw cold words on her phone.

From: Minami 
Please, forget about me.


Acchan held her hands to her chest and she could feel herself drowning and very alone.

Chapter End

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I hope that was okay. It probably wasn't good. But I'l update the next chapter as soon as possible. If there are still people reading, I will do my best. I can't thank you guys enough for reading.  :oops: So if I"m taking too long, don't be afraid to wake me up.  :lol:

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« Last Edit: December 31, 2013, 03:02:56 PM by Mikomiko »
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 11 [1/01/14]
« Reply #156 on: December 31, 2013, 02:48:28 PM »
That good for nothing Ray! :angry1: :temper: :on voodoo:

Takamina... NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! :on blackhole:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 11 [1/01/14]
« Reply #157 on: December 31, 2013, 03:00:19 PM »
Omg that Ray she blackmail Takamina

Takamina stop fighting by urself let ur sister help too

Please updatesoon

Offline Sydney W

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 11 [1/01/14]
« Reply #158 on: December 31, 2013, 03:20:49 PM »
Oh my gosh, all people hate Minami (Kai) especially Acchan. That awful. Author-san please do something on it.

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 11 [1/01/14]
« Reply #159 on: December 31, 2013, 05:44:36 PM »
 why!!!!!  :gyaaah:

 i can`t wait for the next chapter....

 please update soon  :pleeease:

 and nice chapter....

 thanks for the update author san  :on GJ:

 

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