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ITS MY FIRST TIME.  :yawn:

Please Ignore my Errors..  :cry: ahahaha

Here Goes..

In My Class, I Was known For Making Crash Pairings.



"Heh. Heh. Heh."The Voice of The Witch is all over her Secret Room, She was Mixing the Spices.

But, A Girl Knocked, A Very Tall and Beautiful Girl.

"May I Ask you Something? Young Witch?" The Girl Asked.

"What is It?" In a Flash, The Witch Answered.

"Can You Curse this Very Tall, Slacker, and Noisy Woman?"

"Your Wish is My Command." The Witch Poured down the Ingredients in her Cauldron, Including The 'Very Tall, Slacker and Noisy Woman.''s Picture

"I Have Put the Curse."

Little did The Witch Know, That She Has Bestowed the Curse on the Wrong WOMAN...

At That Time, Yukirin--- The Tall and Beautiful Girl, Thought that she hid Mariko's Face while her finger Pointed The Other Girl's ... But Instead, She actually pointed Mariko's Face.

Meanwhile, In a Quiet apartment, A Single Room Destroys the Endless Silence of The Apartment.
"I'll Apply for a Work today." A Tall-short-haired girl said as she was fixing herself for her 'Job Interview'

"Nee-chan... yep. Go On... No One's Stopping you." replied her Lil' Sis while reading a Newspaper.

"Oh, C'mon.. Aren't you Happy for Your Sister?" The Short-haired Girl said again before leaving Their Room.

". . . ." The Lil' Sis Didn't Reply.

"Snobbish Earthworm." The Short-haired girl, Closed the Door.

Maririn's Introduction...
Shinoda Mariko desu~ an UNEMPLOYED noisy SLACKER. I Have a Sister. THE LEFT AND THE RIGHT. oh Sorry. My Sister's Name is Haruna. She loves Cats but I Feel Sorry for her, Because I LOVE DOGS. Today.. Uhm... I'm Going to Apply for Work!! yay!!

Did You Know?

Its My 48th time to Apply for Work! Yay!!

I Don't know why.. but.. I'm Always being fired at work.... IDON'TKNOWWHY!!! ( TT 3 TT)

Well. That's It.. M.Y.I.N.T.R.O.D.U.C.T.I.O.N.

[END OF LE PROLOGUE.]



Too Ugly Right? Like meee..  ;)
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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2012, 07:36:27 PM »
New author...new story..yay!  :cow:

No..it's not ugly at all..I found that the prologue is very interesting..really..

I hope you'll update the first chap soon because the prologue really mekes me interested to your story..

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@yukofan: Well yeah. Thanks Man... Is it Really that Interesting???

LOL.



CHAPTER 1: Girl to Boy.

It was Blazing Hot in the Morning, Mariko was Riding her Bike, Today was her Job Interview, Of Course.
"Atsui ne~" Mariko was Talking again to her Self.

Continuing, She Stopped for a While and Opened her Bag to Get her 'Umbrella Hat'.

"Hahahahaha." Certainly, She was Trolling the People on Her Way. But, Her trolling stopped when she Accidentally Bumped into a Volkswagen Beetle. When She Noticed that she Bumped into a Car, Mariko's Face was Like.. 'OOPSSS.' She Thought that the Volkswagen Beetle Owner didn't Notice that She Bumped the Car. And So, She Quickly Dashed to The Building Not Far from where she was Hanging. "Thank Goodness, They didn't Notice!!" She Entered the Building and Rushed into The Counter.
"Uhm.. May I Apply for Janitress?" She asked.
"President Takajo is Up Stairs. You.Go.To.Him!" The Chinese Counter Lady Answered.
"Xièxiè nín"Mariko Thanked the Counter Lady.
". . . . . ." Counter Lady was Silent.
"Earthworm."
Mariko directly Walked to the Elevator, She Didn't Know that Unauthorized Person's are not Allowed to Ride The Elevator. Little did She Know that The president is Also Riding the Elevator.
"Are You an Employee?" The President Asked.
"Yep."Mariko Answered.
"State your Name."
"Shinoda Mariko Desu~"
"I Don't Know You. Come With me."
The Elevator was Going Down Again. Mariko didn't know what's Hapenning. When The Doors Opened, The President Shouted at Her...
"YOU'RE NOT AN EMPLOYEE!! GET OUT! GUARDS!"
[Author's notes: In The Next Part that I Will Write, Is The Part Outside The building. The Time When Mariko Was Already inside.]
Meanwhile, Outside the Bulding...
"Kitahara, Did You See the Guys Face?" The Lady Inside the Volkswagen Beetle said
"Yes Master Aki, I Believe, He Entered the Building of Your Dad's Company." Her Maid, The One who is Called 'Kitahara' Answered.
"I'll Let Him Pass."
A Minute Passed and... Something happened to Akicha...
"Master AKI! MASTER AKI!"she was repeating This All Over.

[Back to Mariko.]

"Hah! Ano Yarou!" She was Hanging on her Favorite Place again, With Her Precious 'Buddies'..
"Thanks for the human who invented The Alcohol!" As you can see, She's Already Drunk.

Then, An Hour later, She Felt That her Clothes is Somewhat Getting Tight...
"Am I Getting Fat?" She was Talking to Herself.
She Looked at her Self Once again.. She Noticed that something was missing from her body.
"Heh?! HEH?!!!" She was touching her chest.. and it was Missing..
"Wha--?? I-I-I B-B-BECAME A MALE?"Mariko was Surprised. But she did Ignore what happened to her.
"Oh well, Haruna won't notice it, so it'll be FINE~"

She rode her bike again to make her way home. When she Arrived, she saw a Letter.
'Nee-chan, I'll Be Home on 11 pm.'
"Du Heck?!"Mariko stared at the Paper, in a Few Seconds, She Crumpled the Paper and Threw it in the Trash Can.
"I'll Take a Bath first. Its Only 10:30 pm."She Entered the Bathroom to take a Shower.
While 'she' was taking the shower, Mariko didn't Notice The Time. Then Her Sister, Haruna, Opened the Apartment's Door.
"Tadaima~"
"That was fast, Haru." Mariko stepped outside the Shower, Topless.
"O-Onee-chan?! n-n-n-n-no! a ROBBER!! POLICE!! HELP!!"
"Haruna!? Shut your Trap! Lemme Explain!"
"ONEE-CHAN!!!" Haruna Rushed in the Bathroom, She Saw nothing but her 'Sister's' Clothes.
"Oi! HA-RU-NA! I'm Your Sister!"
"Eh? What happened to you Nee-chan?!"
"I Dunno."
"Well. Its Fine. I'd Rather Have a Brother than a Sister like You."
"Earthworm."
"Just Wait here. I'll Borrow some of Miyazawa's Clothes  for you."
"Thanks Haru!"

And So, They Ended the Day.


Chapter 1 Finished.
Many Errors Again I Assume.  :nervous
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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2012, 05:32:13 AM »
wow! you update so fast ^_^
heh? maririn transform to a mele?? wohohoo how could it be? how?? i'm so curios..
sae will appear in the next chapter?! (/^o^)/ yoosh! hoping there will be some saeyuki :| it's rare to found them again.. please continue <3 i love this new pair

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2012, 05:40:29 AM »
nice story~
so the curse is to change to male,
so Mariko sudden changed to male already,
the one who curse her is Yuki?
Nice update also,

looking forward for the next update.

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2012, 02:14:07 PM »
@fuu-kun: There will be a VERY DRAMATIC SAEYUKI. xDD why Mariko transformed to a Male?. Its in the Prologue  XD. It is also the Mistake of Yukirin to Point Mariko's Face Instead of Pointing The Other Girl's (Kojiharu) Face.

@m00nchild: ahaha. Thankies. Yep, You're Right. Yukirin is The One who Cursed her.  But It was not Meant by Her. She was Mistaken..

LOL.

for other readers and Anons...

I Might update late because of my EXAMS  :bleed eyes:, Anyways, I'll try to update as fast as I can   :cathappy:.

I'LL TRY TO UPDATE TOMORROW! :bow:


This is the Only One I Can Give today.    :lol:

Mariko/Maki Shinoda
-Free Loader
-The Troll
-Called as 'Slender Man' by the Kids close to their Apartment.
-Heavy Drinker
-Super Human
-Loves DOGS.
-Tall

Aki Takajo
-Arrogant and Snobbish Woman
-Princess
-Has a Sensitive Heart
-Quiet in School, Noisy At home.
-Ladylike Vintage Car lover
-Foodie
-Likes her name Being Added by ((e.g Master, Mistress, nee-chan etc.)) [Like This, e.g.:Master Aki.]

Haruna Shinoda
-Loves Cats
-Cafe's favorite
-'Snobbish Earthworm' - Shinoda Mariko
-That Beautiful lady from the Cafe.
-Late Reactionist

Yuki Kashiwagi
-Cafe's Hatest Worker
-Tall and Beautiful
-Black Marimokkori
-Envious
-Inlove with Sae
-Big Reactions

Sae Miyazawa
-Boyish Girl
-Inlove with Yukirin
-A Certified Good Friend
-A Yankee Biker
-The Baker Yankee

The 'Young Witch':  Minami Minegishi
-Loves Money
-Adventurer
-Friendly Witch
-Secretist

Others Next Time.  :P

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #6 on: October 17, 2012, 02:33:29 PM »
In the name of my kami-Oahu who celebrate her birthday today, I swear that your fix is interesting. Moreover, I never read abut mariko-akicha pairing so it also felt fresh..

LOL..mariko was turn into male..I wonder what will she do with her "newgender identity"..LOL..


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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #7 on: October 17, 2012, 04:02:37 PM »
In the name of my kami-Oahu who celebrate her birthday today, I swear that your fix is interesting. Moreover, I never read abut mariko-akicha pairing so it also felt fresh..

LOL..mariko was turn into male..I wonder what will she do with her "newgender identity"..LOL..

wahahaha. My sister Loved that part too and Now.. I'm Still thinking of What will Happen next. LOL.
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« Reply #8 on: October 17, 2012, 04:03:24 PM »
eh? but haruna saw mariko half naked as a guy right? :?
yeaaay!! thanks GOD XD finally ! finaly~~ saeyuki will appear!! yeaah! \ (^o^) / ~jump like crazy when you mentioned "there will be dramatic saeyuki"~ yeah! i can't wait! i'll always follow this fic.. *bookmark it* hehe ^_^)

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« Reply #9 on: October 17, 2012, 04:17:58 PM »
eh? but haruna saw mariko half naked as a guy right? :?
yeaaay!! thanks GOD XD finally ! finaly~~ saeyuki will appear!! yeaah! \ (^o^) / ~jump like crazy when you mentioned "there will be dramatic saeyuki"~ yeah! i can't wait! i'll always follow this fic.. *bookmark it* hehe ^_^)

Yep. Kojipa saw MariMari as a Topless Male... LOL.

Iam a SaeYuki Oshi. LOL.. THATS THE REASON WHY I AM PUTTING THEM IN THE STORY!! LOL!!

SAEYUKI!! lol.  :thumbsup

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« Reply #10 on: October 17, 2012, 04:31:12 PM »
yeaah XD i'm saeyuki fans tooooo (/^_^)/\(^_^\) now it's so rare to find this pair :( soo.. ganbatte for our otp!! yuhuuuuu x)

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« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2012, 06:00:57 PM »
TROLOLOLOL~! UPDATE SOON!!! xDD
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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][Chapter 2]
« Reply #12 on: October 18, 2012, 04:06:54 AM »
Wahahaha. Can't Stop My Hands. :lol:

I'm doing an Assignment. THEN I OPENED GOOGLE TO LOG ON.! xDD :inlove:

Chapter 2: That Damn Volkswagen Beetle.!
In a Certain mansion, A Princess was crying in her room because of an Incident, She was with her Maid, Named Kitahara Rie. Rie was with Aki Since she was 5, She's Always been by Her side and Never left her... even in the bathroom.

"What should I Do?! Kitahara!" The princess----Aki, was overflowing in tears because of what happened to her car.
"Master Aki, Please calm down. I'll get the Car repaired as Soon as Possible."Rie said to her Princess who was in tears.
"MAAASSSTTTEERRRR AKIII!!!!!"Ooppsss, she became addicted to it again.
"Anyways, Thanks Kitahara. I'll Be Going to School now."
"Master!? You'll go to School by Walking?!"
"No, I'll Borrow dad's Limo. Lets Go, I Might Became Late." The Arrogant Princess walked down the stairs. she made her way to the garage and forced her Dad's driver to bring her to school.

When Aki Arrived to her School----Watanabe All Girls school, everyone was greeting her, including the Teachers. She walked the stairs to go to her classroom, as usual, no student wants to hang on the classroom, they all want to hang in the Tea Shop or sweets shop inside the school. She just sat quietly on her chair, she was scrolling her phone checking messages. After Minutes of Waiting, One of her Friends, Arrived---- Sashihara Rino.

"Yo~! Aki~ Forever Alone aye?!" Rino said, Hugging AKi to the Fullest.
"Shhh. I'm studying."
"Studying? Where's your book? I Can Only See one thing in your hands... THE CELLPHONE."
". . . . ."
"Snobbish."

Seconds After That, The Bell Rang.

Meanwhile, in a Cafe, 3 females are cleaning the whole shop.
"Yukirin, How Much is your Paycheck Every month?"Haruna asked Yukirin, She was Smiling.
"500 yen. Blame the Manager that hates me."Yukirin answered while she was wiping the table.
"500 YEN?! SERIOUSLY?!"a Girl wearing a Gakuran----Sae, was Moping the floor.
"Yep, You Got it Right."
"Anyways, Forget about your Paycheck, I'll give you some of mine." Sae smiled at Yukirin.
"Thanks Sae."Yukirin Smiled.
"I Feel Like I've been left out of the Conversation."Haruna Sighed.
 THEN, a woman Barged in the Shop."Sorry for being LATE!!"-- and it was The Late Midget----Oshima Yuko.
"NYANNYAN~!"Yuko hugged Haruna very Tight.

After The Cleaning session in the Cafe, The 4 Girls Made their way to the Arcade and started Playing the Arcade games, while they were Enjoying their selves, Someone called Yukirin.
"Did you Like The Curse?" The Young Witch----Minegishi Minami, Said on the Phone.
"I Like it. HOW YOU FOOLED ME TO BELIEVE ON YOUR WITCHCRAFT!"Yukirin shouted at the Phone.
"Eh?! I'm Sure! I Did something to the Tall and Short-haired girl!"
"Tall and Short-haired Girl?! Its not her I wanted to curse! Its The Other girl with Long Hair! I Know that they're both tall, noisy and Slacker but.. HARUNA IS MORE ANNOYING!"
". . . .bye. . .  CURSE HER YOURSELF! She's my BESTIE you know?!"
Conversation Ended.

After the Call, Because Yukirin got annoyed by Mii-chan, She Almost Lost balance of her Self, When She is About to slip, Sae Guided her Back with her hands, And their faces was close to each other.

"A-e-a-ah-ah-ah." Yukirin was Blushing, Her Heart thumping very fast.
"Yuki, Are You Alright?"Sae asked her, Hiding the feelings that she truly feels.
"Y-Y-YES! I'M FINE!!"

In Maki's(Mariko) State...
She's Biking Again, 'Starting Today, You'll Be Called as Maki!' While thinking of what Haruna said before leaving, He didn't notice that he Crashed on a Limousine, This Time, The Owner came out, Its Aki.
"Gokigenyou, To The Man who Broke my Volkswagen Beetle."Aki said, While Crossing her Arms.
"Ah! The owner! Good Day to You too!"Maki was certain that he is Trolling the Owner.
"Do You Know how much That Car Costs?"Aki raised a brow
"Yep."Maki was smiling like an Idiot.
"How Much?"
"500yen."He Trolled Aki Again.
"You're Wrong, Its worth is 500,000 dollars"
"Ahhh... Bye-Bye."
"Oi! You're Paying For That!"
"In Your Dreams. HEHEHEHEHE."Maki escaped, he ran to the nearest Shop.
"Grr! Kitahara---No, I Mean Rie, You Know what to do."
"Yes Master Aki."
"MASTER AKKKIIII!!!!"Addictness over 5000.
"Master, This is His Location, Everywhere he goes."
"Thank You."

When Maki got Home, He Felt relieved because he knows that the girl who owns the Volkswagen Beetle doesn't know his Location.
"Hah, Hah, Hah, Hah... Whoo."He was really exhausted hiding from Aki.
Then Someone knocked the door, He Thought it was Haruna. But when He Opened the Door...
"Gokigenyou."Aki said, She Surprised Maki.
"WAHAAHHH!! What the heck are you doing here!?"
"I'm Here to Make you pay."
"I DON'T HAVE MONEY!"
"What a Dirty Room. You Don't Have Money? Give me Your Number. I'll Call you if I Have thought a Good type of Payment."
"Here."
"Well, I Should Take My Leave."

Few Minutes after the Arrogant and Snobbish Woman left, Haruna with Friends Arrived.
"Aniki, Who's That girl? She looks so Fashionable."Haruna asked.
"Hmm... Hah.. She is the owner of the Volks-something Bitter that I have crashed Yesterday."he Took a breath before speaking.
"Yuki, What do You Think of Her?"Sae Asked.
"Hmm..... She Looks Beautiful and Eccentric."She answered.
"Don't worry, You're Way more Beautiful to her Yuki." Sae smiled.
". . . . Thanks . ."Yuki was Blushing, Seeing Sae's Smile.



I'll make sure that in the Next Chapter, I'll Put More. and. More Errors. xDD
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« Reply #13 on: October 18, 2012, 04:38:28 AM »
wohohoo~ you update so fast!
good job!! nice chapter ^o^)/ saeyuki momment <3 love it~ akicha is superr arrogant huh :|
can't wait for the next chapter~ thankyou!
ps: i think there's nothing error :? keep the god job bro

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #14 on: October 18, 2012, 05:07:11 AM »
wohohoo~ you update so fast!
good job!! nice chapter ^o^)/ saeyuki momment <3 love it~ akicha is superr arrogant huh :|
can't wait for the next chapter~ thankyou!
ps: i think there's nothing error :? keep the god job bro

wahaha. I Might update the next chapter next thursday. xDD I Have my Exams and Fieldtrip. xDD

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« Reply #15 on: October 19, 2012, 05:15:31 PM »
I HAVE THE LAST UPDATE AS OF THIS WEEK. NEXT WEEK I'LL BE STUDYING.

HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY, I Made it Longer. and more.and.more. errors, as I promised.  XD

Chapter 3 - Sleep Over Part 1
In The Takajo Mansion, Aki was thinking for the solution of 'Maki's' Payment. She Had thought of One Thing, Making 'Maki' as her Problem Solver and Tutor."Atlast, I Have thought of a Payment!"
"What is it, Young Miss?" Rie asked her, she was curious about what her master is planning.
"GIVE ME THE PHONE! I'LL CALL HIM RIGHT AWAY!"
"Here you go Ma'am."

Aki, then dialed 'Maki's' Number."Gokigenyou, Aki Takajo here. I Have thought of a Wonderful Payment!"
"Ah? Who's This?" Haruna was the one who answered the phone.
'Wait?! What?! It must be his Girlfriend!' Aki thought on her Mind, But, she was Mistaken.
"Hello? You Still there?"Haruna asked on the phone.
"May I Talk to your Boyfriend?"
"Sorry, I'M STILL SINGLE YOU FREAK! LESBO!"
"Oh, Sorry, Are You his Mom?"Aki asked her.
"Nope.AS I SAID, I AM STILL SINGLE! and ready to mingle. and too young to be his MOM. "Haruna answered.
"Then, Who're You?"
"I AM HIS FREAKING SISTER!"
"Anyways, May I Talk to him?"
"Wait."

On Shinoda's Apartment.
"OI! WAKE UP! YOU GOT A CALL!!!"Haruna shouted on her 'brother's' ear.
"Hai! wait! wait! wait!"'Maki' stood up from 'his' bed to reach the phone.
"Hai, Who's This?"He asked.
"Takajo Aki."
"Who're you?"
"The Owner of The Volkswagen Beetle you crashed the Other day."
"The Volk-something Bitter?"
"Its VOLKSWAGEN BEETLE."
"VOLK-SWOLEN BEACH PARTY?"
"ARGHH! Stop this Nonsense.!"
"mm'kay. so what now?"
"Do you know how to go to Watanabe All Girls School?"
"Nope~"
"Answer me Seriously!"
"Okay, Okay, I KNOW HOW TO GET IN THERE, That's where my Mom Graduated after all."
"Good. You Need to be there in 10:00 am sharp."
"But its already 9:30."
". . . . ."
"Earthworm."
Aki Ended the Conversation. She Rushed into the School Gate to wait for Maki.
Back to Mariko's Apartment..
"Haruna, I'll go outside for a bit. and I almost forgot, Sae and Yuki will be sleeping Over."Maki said before leaving.
"Take Care Nee-chan. I Mean Aniki."
"Thank You!~"

10:01 am... [Watanabe All Girls School]
"I'm Already Here!"Maki said to Aki.
"You're Late!"she replied, her arms crossed and eyebrows raised.
"eh? but its only 10:01 am."
"Anyways, I'm going to tell you the Payment method."
"What is it?"
"You'll Going to be my Problem Solver and Private Tutor."
"WHAT?! I CAN NEVER AGREE WITH THAT!"
"So you'll have my car FIXED?"
"Nope.. I Mean.. Yes.."
"Okay, Lets Start, Lets Go to My House."
"Okay, Lets Start Walking."Maki said, she was Trying to troll Aki Again."
"Why would we walk if I have my Limousin there?"
"Uh. Sorry."Maki apologized to her, It was the first time he became serious.
Maki, However, Doesn't know whats Happening to him, Since he became a Male, His Trolling got weaker.
He asked himself over and over, It was repeating continuously in his mind.
'Huh? He didn't Troll me?'Aki said in her mind.
"Is there a Problem?"Maki asked Aki, Worries was shown in his eyes.
"Uh.. No! Nothing!!"Aki answered.
"Lets get Going, My Sister is alone in our House."
"Okay."

They Rode the Limousine until they reached Aki's Mansion. As They Arrived, Aki's Dad Welcomed her Back. But He was shocked when he saw Maki Walked outside the Limo.
"Aki, Who's That.?"Her Dad Asked.
"That's... Who are You Again?"Aki asked Maki.
"Shinoda Mari--- I Mean, Shinoda Maki."
"Oh Yeah. He's name is Shinoda Maki, The One who crashed my Volkswagen Beetle."
"So, You're The Man That My Aki is Talking about. You'll become her Tutor, Right?"
"Uh.. Yeah.., M-my Debt of... NEVERMIND, Lets Go, Master Aki."
"MASHHTTERR AKII!!!"Aki, Got Addicted to it Again.
Suddenly, Rie, Appeared and Covered Aki's Mouth.
"I'm Sorry, Mr. Shinoda, Come with me. I'll show you to Her Room."
"Mmm'kay."

A Few minutes of Walking, They Arrived on Aki's Room."I'll Leave Young Miss to You, Mr. Shinoda." Rie Smiled at Maki.
"Alright."Maki Closed the Door.
To Maki, It was his First Time Entering a Princess' room, It was Very Neat, Too Much Furniture's  Built-in Bathroom, Water Bed, and a huge Study table.
"Nice Room." Maki said to Aki.
Aki sat on her bed, she took a Deep breath Before telling her Problem.
"Now, Help me how to Confess to a Student from Matsui music school."
"What's his Name?"Maki asked.
"Miyazawa Sae."
"WHATT??!! SHE IS A SHE!!"
"Yep. I know that."
"I Know who that Guy is, I'll Help you."Maki smiled at Aki.
"You Know who He-- I mean Who she is?!"
"Yup. She or He will be Sleeping Over to our Apartment Tonight, Wanna Come Over?"
"SURE! IF HE/SHE IS THERE I'LL GO!"
"we'll just walk to get there. We'll walk for about 20 minutes."
"I'll do Everything just to Talk to him!"
"Then Lets Go."

The Two quickly rushed to the gate, They Escaped from Aki's Dad because he'll not Allow Aki to Go Out This Late. They Talked All About Each Other when They were walking, As They Reached the Apartment, An Eerie feeling entered Aki's Atmosphere.
"W-why is That--"her words were blocked by Maki.
"Its Really Quiet in Here."Maki said, He is CERTAINLY trying to troll Aki again.
"You Mean.. There are ghosts in here?"
"Yep. Look at that Old Janitress, SHE IS A GHOST."
"E-eh?!"Aki was Shocked, She almost covered her mouth.
"SHINODA! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT, I AM STILL YOUNG!"The Janitress----Megumi Ohori, got irritated so Much, She Left right away.
"Maki-kun, Is she really a Ghost?" Aki asked, But she Knows that she.GOT.TROLLED.
"Nope~"Maki asked.
"Hmmph!"
"Anyways, Lets go up Stairs."

As They were climbing the stairs that seemed forever to Aki, She didn't notice that she lost her balance, all she can do is to look at Maki to grab her hand."Watch Out!"The words came from Maki's Mouth were not a Mere trolling, Those words was serious, as Maki Grabbed Aki's Hand, They both fell on the stairs, Maki's back was severely hurt.

"Oi! Maki! Are You still Alive?!"
"I'm still Alive, This is Nothing, C'mon, Lets Climb again."Maki smiled Aki, Enduring the Pain he was feeling.
". . . . . ."Aki slapped Maki, Her head down.
"Eh? What did I Do?"Maki stared at Aki.
"I Know that your back hurts, I Feel the same way when I'm at home."
"What do you mean by that? M-Ms. Takajo?"
"Nothing, I Just want to see Miyazawa right now. And, You're too Formal, Call me Aki."She looked away from him
"Yes, Aki.. Arh!!" Maki's back suddenly Ached, He almost fell down but kept his balance.
"Let me Help you."Aki Assisted him as they arrived in the Room, Haruna Opened the door."Good Evening.. wait! What did you do to My Brother?!"Her voice became louder, heat is blazing up inside her.
"Haruna, Nothing happened. we just fell from the stairs there, and I Saved her. Now, Let me rest."Maki walked directly to his room. and Closed the door.
"You're Aki Takajo from Watanabe all girls school right?"Sae said, pointing his finger to Aki.
"Yes, and You're Sae Miyazawa from Matsui Music School, am I Correct?"Aki replied, the joy is in Her Eyes.
"What Brings you here?"Sae asked.
"I'm here for a Sleep Over, Maki Invited me."
"Lets Call it a Day. Haruna said, while she was yawning."
"Yep."Yuki prepared her futon.
"Hm.. Where should I Sleep?"Aki said, Her eyes wondering.
"Here, Futon." Sae handed it to Aki.
The word 'Thank You' was marked Aki's Face.
When Haruna Closed the Lights, Sae Moved Quickly to Yuki, She Whispered to her.
"I .LOVE.YOU."
Yuki pretended that she was Asleep, Sae kissed her.
'Mmmphh!!' Yuki said on her mind.
Aki saw it, Her Heart Broke, It was Shattered into pieces.

She Cried on her Sleep.

Chapter Ends.


How was it?? xDD





Offline m00nchild

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #16 on: October 19, 2012, 07:29:51 PM »
Nice Update,
So Aki like Sae,
Sae like Yuki, love triangle,
And Mariko have become Maki,
And Miichan known NyanNyan,
how they know each other??
why Yuki wanted to curse NyanNyan??
Rie didnt follow Aki together??

looking forward for the next update,

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #17 on: October 26, 2012, 02:36:59 AM »
huwaaaa xd i don't know you had update chapter 3 for a long time xd xd sorry..
*can you change the title whenever you update the new chapter?*
you suprise me XD aki love sae! but sae love yuki <3 poor maki, lost the troll ability xp you made my day XDb
thankyou for the update :bow: and please update soon :kneelbow:

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #18 on: October 27, 2012, 03:22:11 AM »
LOL. According to GinkoX, she's having a writer block now. She'll be thinking of what to do next chapter. :D

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Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
« Reply #19 on: October 28, 2012, 04:47:37 AM »
oooh that bad :| hoping your sister can fix it amakuchi san.. but it's allright, i'll always waiting ^-^ but not too long i hope XDb

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