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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 5 :))!!
« Reply #40 on: November 15, 2012, 11:42:26 AM »
Hi, update today!! Sometimes I'm scared that my fanfics make people sad, even if it's atsumina love and that at the moment we read it we fell good and relief, I can't help but think, after it, that I want to see them together so bad, even just in a new picture, now that Atsuko is on twitter, i guess I'm desperatly waiting for a picture with her and Minami or just her saying that she saw the general. I don't want to depress anyone, I guess some of you are feeling the same, it just good to say it sometimes... But I still have faith in them and believe in them. Somehow writing those fics help me waiting for them. Thank you for reading anyway.  :thumbup



At Oishi restaurant

"So how was NY?!" Asked Miichan with a big smile.
"Great, actually! It's...different. But good!"
Miichan smiled, she was so happy that her friend was back. She was relief, it was hard to be in AKB without Aachan and knowing that she was in another country was sad.
"Anyway, Atsuko, do you have what I've asked you?"
"No, Mariko, I'm not gonna cooperate with you so you can laugh at your general^^"
"Geez, I knew you wouldn't be able to! So, how was the reunion with mini Akimoto-sensei?"
Atsuko blushed, she was always shy when her friends was asking about their relationship.
"Etoo...good. It was...good to see her..."
"Oh, I see...Takamina possessed you widly, like I imagined it" smiled Mariko with an evil laugh.
"Marichan, you should give Aachan a rest, you sound like Yuko lately..."
"Nyaro, relax, I'm punishing Aachan because she left us to go seduce american people^^"
They all laugh, so happy to be there together, eating and joking.

They were all eating when Kojima's phone rang.
"Ah, it was about time..."sighed Mariko smiling.
"Moshi moshi? Ah Yuko-chan, how are you?"
"Yuko is always stalking Nyaro in case she would be with boys...^^ "said Mariko to Atsuko, winking.
"Ah, I'm with the girls and Aachan, we're eating. Yes, but, you said that you had something to do tonight... Hai! Aachan, Yuko said that you have to be home before 1pm."
"Hm, tell her I can't tonight, I have...something to do" blushed Atsuko.
"No, tell her that Takamina ordered her to be home so they could have sex together" said Mariko.
Kojima ignored her while Atsuko looked at Mariko with a weird face.
"I know that right now you find me scary and well informed...What can I say, it's a innate talent" smiled the trollface.
"Hai Yuko, I will come when we'll finish this, but not so long okay? Hai, see you."
Kojima hang up and started to eat again, before noticing that everyone was looking at her.
"What?!"
"Haruna...?" asked Atsuko smiling.
"What?"
"What is going on with you and Yuko, are you finally together?"
"No!"
"Yes" said Mariko.
"No! Anyway, I'm worried about Takamina, is she allright?"
"Yes... Why? "
"You know, all what's going on those days, her promotion, you leaving... She's stressed and sad... you should take care of her, she needs it..."
"...Nyaro, you're such a good person...you should let Yuko alone and date me, I'm so much better!" Sighed Mariko.
"Marichan! Don't joke with that" blushed Kojima.
Atsuko stood silent, she was thinking about Minami. Kojima was right, she had to take her of her more.
"Guys, I think I'm gonna go home..."
"Home?" Asked Miichan smiling.
"Yeah...sort of...^^" blushed Atsuko.
The girls smiled, they always supported the atsumina couple and they felt relief that they were always so close despite the graduation of the Ace.
"Okay, go! You're free!" Smiled Mariko. "But don't forget us, okay?"
"No way! I talk to you later. And if you don't know where I am or what do I do, ask Mariko, she knows everything...!
Bye!"
Atsuko called a taxi, she wanting to be with Minami as soon as possible. On the way she thought about last night, and how happy she were to be back. She knew that caming back to Japan meant work and be away again, but for now she just wanted to be with her loving general.

When she entered the living room, she saw Minami sitting at the kitchen table, sleeping on some paper sheets. She smiled and slowly caressed her cheek.
"Minami..."
"…"
Atsuko leaned forward until her lips touched Minami's ear.
"Minami...I love you..."she whispered.
"...Eh? Aachan...?"
The litlle leader woke up slowly, blinking because of the light in the room.
"What time is it...?"
"Almost 23pm, you shouldn't be working" she said as she took off her coat.
Minami stood up and stretched her muscles, looking at her girlfriend.
"You're beautiful...Was it fun?"
"Yes, it was good to see them! And I think Haruna might be used to Yuko skinship after all..."
"Yeah, lately she's not so reluctant with the midget."
"What? And you didn't tell me!"
"Atsuko, you're back since few hours, there is so much things I want to tell you, I saw you so little..."
Atsuko smiled and hugged the leader tightly.
"I'm here now, you can do anything you want with my body or my soul..."
"Yes, well, do you want some tea, I'm gonna make one for me. We could talk..."
"Hm...What's up with you beeing a general and angry so you need to satisfy your needs...?"
"Well...It's true but I'm tired and I want to listen to you...know what you've been doing in NY."
"More than have sex with me...?" asked Atsuko before kissing Minami's lips.
"Atsuko...I've missed you so much...I couldn't talk to you as much as I wanted, you were not with me everyday...It was really hard..."
Aachan felt really sad when she understood that Minami was about to cry, she seemed really tired and sad. She thought again about what Haruna had said and decided to stop being selfish and take time.
"Gomen, Minami. You must be really tired, and I've missed you too. Go sit and I'll bring the tea. I'm gonna tell you how was my trip, but you need to tell everything you know about the gossips in AKB!!^^"

Minami smiled, she desperatly needed some talk with Atsuko. It was crazy how much the Ace was missing in AKB rank, and even if she didn't tell anybody, she was suffering everyday, wishing that it was just a dream and that when she woke up, Atsuko would be there, smiling and dancing. It was another step for AKB48 but damn, it was so hard to accept... She was feeling nostalgic all day, even if she wanted to continue, and have faith in new members. Somehow she felt ashamed of feeling sad like this, she didn't have the right to think about Atsuko all day, and cry when she was alone. But it was recent, and she wasn't used to it yet.
They sat on the sofa and talk for three hours, they were both tired but they didn't want to sleep before telling all what they had in mind, the jokes, the stories, the gossips... It was so nice to be like this again, just the two of them laughing and holding hands.
Maybe in a couple of years their life could be like this, but everyday together, as a real couple...Who knows...


Next update will see new events coming, it's gonna be hectic!!

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Re: Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 4 :)
« Reply #41 on: November 15, 2012, 06:50:38 PM »
great thank you for update i hope for the next

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 4 :)
« Reply #42 on: November 15, 2012, 07:43:14 PM »
A bit sad but still like it!!
Wait for lovey dovey moment..xD
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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 4 :)
« Reply #43 on: November 16, 2012, 02:21:23 AM »
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she left us to go seduce american people
:lol: oh that was a good one!!
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"I know that right now you find me scary and well informed...What can I say, it's a innate talent" smiled the trollface.
Mariko-sama is a boss  8)2

We still gotta believe in our Atsumina!! <3

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #44 on: November 17, 2012, 01:24:50 PM »
Update!!
@Pdpond: did yout hink it was sad? Actually I thought it was a lovey-dovey moment...^^ :nervous Aah I get it; it's because they didn't have sex right??  :twisted:


"Atsuko...?"
"Hm..."
Minami slowly caressed her hair.
"Wake up, my shoulder is numb..."
Atsuko raised her head, gently rubbing his eyes before opening them. Minami looked at her; completely conquered. She lifted the Ace chin with a finger and kissed her gently.
"You know you always look like an angel when you woke up?"
"What time is it...? Did I sleep for a long time?"
"Not so much, an hour, but anyway I had to work on something so it's fine."
"Hmmmm..." she said as she hugged her girlfriend.
Minami felt surprised and happy of this gesture. Suddenly she desperatly needed to kiss her. She did with passion and enthusiasm, like she actually had realized that Atsuko was back.
"Hmmff...Minami..."said the Ace, breathless.
"Your lips are so soft, I could kiss you all day, it feels so great..."whispered the leader against Atsuko's lips, tickling them.
Aachan wasn't totally awake but she shivered, her heart was already beating like crazy, responding fastly to Minami's act. Despite all the desire that she had at this moment qhe coudn't hold a big yawn, right in frint of the midget.
"I really want you right now, but I'm so tired and dirty...can I take a shower please?"
"Sure" smiled Minami, "take your time, there is a big towel on the bathroom, take a bath if you want."
"Thank you Minami, you're so kind to me..."
She stood up and walked slowly toward the bathroom.
"Aachan, can I use your notebook please, I need to send few mails..."
"Sure, take it" she answered before closing the door.

Minami took Aachan's notebook and sat in a comfortable position. She had to send those mails to some teams to inform them of their activiies and schedule an appointment with Akimoto-sensei. 
She was writing her first mail when a instant chat window opened. It was the chat that Atsuko was using all the time with friends and collegue, Minami wasn't familiar at all with that but the thing was right in front of her and someone was writing something.
His name was...James... Who was this James, never heard of him. The general didn't want to spy on her girlfriend but soon the words made her froze.
« Hi Aachan!! How are you? Did you get home well? Anyway, I miss you like crazy...:') »
Minami was feeling a bit jealous but thought that it was a new friend of Atsuko, and it was okay to feel that way.
«  I hope you will be back in NY soon, I need to talk to you! You know...about that kiss, and what I've said, and done. It's weird not having you here, not talking to you everyday...Please give me news soon, and take care pretty girl, love you <3 »

Minami was not moving at all, she felt like she was falling in a enormous hole. Black hole. Suddenly all was going black, she couldn't think about anything, she wasn't able to move at all. This guy was an american, and he was talking to her Atsuko like he knew him for years, and....a kiss??? What was going on...?! She felt awful in a second, so much questions, so much pain, a rush of pain everywhere in her body...
"Minami? Is it okay if I borrow you some clothes because mine are all dirty and..."
Atsuko saw her girlfriend sat on the sofa with no expression, so pale and tense.
"Minami? What is it? Is it something wrong?" She frowned.
The leader didn't respond to her, it wasn't even sure that she had hear her. Atsuko approached her and threw a glance at the screen. When she red the words she frozed. It was bad, really bad, seeing Minami like this. She began to think about a good explonation and a way to end this quickly when Minami put the notebook on the little table and stood up, without a word.
"Minami, please, let me explain to you...This is not what you think!!!"
The leader stood few seconds like this, unable to know what to do, feeling her heart beating so hard in her head.
"You...You can stay her for the night...I will stay at Yuko's. But please, be away tomorrow when I get back" she said with a voice with no emotion.
"No, no, no, Minami, don't go!!" the Ace started to cry, the tears rolling on her cheeks. "Please, don't go, I want to explain to you!!"
"No need to"
Minami took her coat on and walked toward the entrance door. She looked at Atsuko once again.
"...I really thought you were loving me...Baka..."
The tears were all over her face, but she was crying in silent. She left the house with chaos on her mind. This night was gonna be hard and sleepless. She never had been so sad in her all life.




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Re: Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #45 on: November 17, 2012, 01:56:07 PM »
 No!!!!!! T_T
Takamina let Acchan explain!!!!

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #46 on: November 17, 2012, 02:51:40 PM »
                             NO!!!
 :OMG: :angry1: :badluck: :frustrated: :pleeease:
 :gyaaah: :temper: :on cloudeye: :on blackhole:

what just happened???
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Re: Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #47 on: November 17, 2012, 03:35:01 PM »
WHAT ? !!!  :mon spit:   No it's terrible   :mon fire: :mon mad:
what that takamina be going to make ??? and acchan  :mon dunno:
haste to know the continuation  :mon fyeah:  great fic   :mon thumb:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!  :mon innocent:


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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #49 on: November 17, 2012, 04:13:39 PM »
Ah! Somehow I missed update 5, so I was gonna comment on how  :heart: it was, but then came update 6 and aaaaah!  :panic:

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #50 on: November 17, 2012, 04:20:11 PM »
You wanna make me a little bit sad than part 5 huh?
Aghhh!! you made me sick!!
Bakamina lets acchan expain now!
Who the heck Jame?!!!!
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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #51 on: November 17, 2012, 04:51:41 PM »
My heart, My Atsumina ..
Noooooo~  :frustrated: :OMG: :err:

I thought of something that might happened between that James and Atsuko ..
since Atsuko said that "it's not what you think" ....
could it be ......
okay, I don't want to ruin the writer's storyline :on lol:

Waiting for an update :mon innocent:

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #52 on: November 17, 2012, 06:27:14 PM »
what!! no way!! atsuko cant betrayed her right?..

oww generalmanager i feelsad for her.. listento atsuko... maybe this guy kiss her suddenly or something..

but atsuko didnt say nothing...

T_T

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Re: Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #53 on: November 17, 2012, 07:54:49 PM »
wait... what!?!?!? who is this James guy??? He needs to disappear! He's getting in the way of my Atsumina!!
Takamina come back and let Acchan explain T.T

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #54 on: November 18, 2012, 01:45:00 AM »
Acchan what have you done??  :banghead: :banghead:
Minami need some time n acchan need some fixing to do
Just go back together again, atsumina forever :D
Thanx for the update ^^

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #55 on: November 18, 2012, 05:54:54 PM »
Bakamina let Acchan explain first  :panic: James just had to ruin our lovely Atsumina moment.  :thumbdown:

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #56 on: December 04, 2012, 02:29:33 PM »
FAUSTO-SAN!!! WHERE ARE YOU???XD.. :nervous

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #57 on: December 04, 2012, 04:08:26 PM »
Etoooo... :nervous I'm so sorry, I've been very busy lately and I know I said that I was going to update soon... my bad!! :banghead: Okay I made this fic the priority and it will be update before the end of the week!! :)

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #58 on: December 04, 2012, 06:11:20 PM »
nice fiction,
so takamina is heart broken because of james,
and she didnt even wanted to hear acchan explanation,
Maybe she just havnt calm to hear the explanation,
Acchan give her some times to calm for herself 1st,

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: Mail talks (Asumina) Update 6 !!
« Reply #59 on: December 05, 2012, 01:22:44 AM »
I like it please continue. aahh very emotional.

Taka.. please don't be too rude to acchan. we know you want her so bad!!!

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