Author Topic: Yellow's Funny Stories - [21-Feb-2013] Staying Where She's There... (TanaKame) (Read 108716 times)

weird · « **on:** October 27, 2012, 11:36:29 AM »

List of my oneshots
*There goes again... (TakaGaki)
Let's be together (TanaShige)
*I Miss U (KameShige)
*Patch (TakaGaki)
Knowing you... (TanaShige/TakaGaki)
*Proposal (TakaGaki)
*The Hot Spring Bath (TakaGaki)
*Shopping (TakaGaki)
Punishment (TakaGaki)
Enduring (TaKaGaki)
Hide and Seek (TakaGaki)
Avoidance (TakaGaki)
Detention (TakaGaki)
Sleeping (TaKaGaki)
*Sleepy Loving (TakaGaki)
She just can't get up (KameShige)
Staying Where She's There... (TanaKame)

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kuro808 · « **Reply #1 on:** October 27, 2012, 11:46:54 AM »

Nice one shot, well I think you better switch over for my new one shot

yellow · « **Reply #2 on:** October 27, 2012, 11:50:09 AM »

Quote from: kurosawa87 on October 27, 2012, 11:46:54 AM

Nice one shot, well I think you better switch over for my new one shot

really?

kuro808 · « **Reply #3 on:** October 27, 2012, 11:57:06 AM »

yeah go take a look

maikeatoot · « **Reply #4 on:** October 27, 2012, 12:50:23 PM »

yellow !!!!! welcome !!! hohohohoho

i want chu chu

yatta!!! kameshige goodness time !!!!!!!!!!!!!

yellow · « **Reply #5 on:** October 27, 2012, 12:51:41 PM »

how is it?

if really sucks, i won't write anymore in future

maikeatoot · « **Reply #6 on:** October 27, 2012, 01:23:36 PM »

its cute dont worry !!! hahahahahahaha

i want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !! moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

yellow · « **Reply #7 on:** October 27, 2012, 01:29:32 PM »

but you have to make me happy first in your fictions...

maikeatoot · « **Reply #8 on:** October 27, 2012, 02:14:25 PM »

yups but like i said before, im sick so i cant update

for now, i enjoy being a reader of your fic so yeah ? give me more takagaki raburabu okay??

yellow · « **Reply #9 on:** October 27, 2012, 02:22:05 PM »

ok... maybe in future... i am now engaged in my revision

actually i don't think i just want to write raburabu on them only... as you know, i am fickle-minded so...

but anyways, because i am quite towards this duo, i might end up writing more on them

yups, who knows

kuro808 · « **Reply #10 on:** October 28, 2012, 03:44:56 AM »

It is a very interesting way of putting the two pieces together as their views reflect their thoughts as a battle

yellow · « **Reply #11 on:** October 28, 2012, 03:46:49 AM »

because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story

anyway, hope you like it.

kuro808 · « **Reply #12 on:** October 28, 2012, 04:25:00 AM »

Quote from: yellow on October 28, 2012, 03:46:49 AM

because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story
anyway, hope you like it.

I do like it that way, it is not the best in writing but understanding it is not hard

maikeatoot · « **Reply #13 on:** October 28, 2012, 04:27:52 AM »

well that was .. WOW !! !! you are such a very good writer !! whoah !! write more ! this is so interesting !

yellow · « **Reply #14 on:** October 28, 2012, 04:31:37 AM »

Quote from: kurosawa87 on October 28, 2012, 04:25:00 AM

Quote from: yellow on October 28, 2012, 03:46:49 AM
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story
anyway, hope you like it.

I do like it that way, it is not the best in writing but understanding it is not hard

thanks... that's quite an encouraging comment for me.
as what i fear most... is what i have written is beyond comprehension

i really have a bad shadow when comes to writing...

thanks for your comments

yellow · « **Reply #15 on:** October 28, 2012, 04:34:37 AM »

Quote from: maikeatoot on October 28, 2012, 04:27:52 AM

well that was .. WOW !! !! you are such a very good writer !! whoah !! write more ! this is so interesting !

really

i'm glad to hear that

i'll write when i have the idea again.... please look forward

and thanks once again for not breaking my heart in your newest update in the devil's kiss... i love you maikeatoot

maikeatoot · « **Reply #16 on:** October 28, 2012, 04:37:45 AM »

yay !! mahal din kita <3 ! hehe that's a filipino word means i love you too ! yay ! update ! update ! go yellow ! how about daishi and riho.

yellow · « **Reply #17 on:** October 28, 2012, 04:40:27 AM »

Quote from: maikeatoot on October 28, 2012, 04:37:45 AM

yay !! mahal din kita <3 ! hehe that's a filipino word means i love you too ! yay ! update ! update ! go yellow ! how about daishi and riho.

to be frank, i really can't bring myself to have evil thoughts on these kids... please forgive me for that for now

but i will try if i ever find a good setting to write about them... please look forward...

yellow · « **Reply #18 on:** October 28, 2012, 10:27:45 AM »

alternatively, if you want the access... you can also drop me a message here.

maikeatoot · « **Reply #19 on:** October 28, 2012, 10:44:22 AM »

ahm hello can you send me a pm please *puppy eyes*