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Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
« on: November 16, 2012, 12:45:33 PM »
Hi there people of jphip! i posted this oneshot on tumblr but then i remembered that i had this account so why not post it here. feel like i need to give you a heads up that what you're about to read is a really really fluffy OS and its also really long too about 5k+ words. those of you who can't stand fluffy fics can read my other oneshot on my Tumblr
:3  (i can't post the other one here because of the new rule). there are also TONS of grammatical error on this thing. This is my first ever oneshot so go easy on me  :oops:
A comment from you will be really well appreciated  :wub:
oh theres a link at one point of the story and i extremely recommend you to click it.

i suck so much at introductions *crawlsunderarock

btw Jurina and Mayu are both 15 in this story lol



Choudai, Darling!



“What about this one?”

A girl  in a black knee length dress spun around in front of her laptop screen. She strikes a pose,  A nervous smile plastered on her face as she waits for a response from an irritated looking girl on her laptop screen.
“Unless you’re planning to go to church with her, i suggest you try something else” The girl on the laptop screen exclaimed.
Feeling slightly hurt from her best friend’s comment, Mayu made a mental note to herself:

Next time Rabutan asks for advice, instead of being helpful give her a sarcastic comment instead.

“But this is the last outfit i have in my closet”
Mayu pouts as She looks down on her black dress. The long sleeved dress has a flappy white collar around the neck area and it makes Mayu’s sensitive skin itches like crazy.

‘Who am i kidding, Rabutan is right. I look like a freaking nun’

Feeling defeated, The girl with twin pigtails sits on the edge of her messy bed. She sighs as she stares at the already empty closet in front of her. It’s contents are scattered all over her pink room that you can barely see the surface of the floor. Her stuffed alpaca is staring at her from the corner of her room, judging her.

“I give up. Lets just Face it, im hopeless” She mumbles as she lays down on her back.

Hearing Mayu’s declaration, Rabutan immediately reacts
“Now now dont be so pessimist. You do realize how lucky you are dont you? Girls would kill to be in your position!”

Mayu stood up and put her laptop on her lap, ready to give her stubborn friend a piece of her mind
“Cant you see? thats the problem! im not one of those girls! I dont have stylish clothes, im not popular, i dont wear heels wherever i go, heck I dont even know how to use make up! what should i do? Shes gonna regret ever asking me out. Oh my God shes going to hate me… Rabutan, shes going to hate me!”
Mayu’s eyes starts to well up with tears. Her lips are quivering. Seeing the pathetic state of her best friend, Rabutan facepalms herself and let out a sigh   

“Mayu you idiot, don’t cry. Everything is going to be okay. You’ve had a crush on Jurina ever since middle school. You should know her better than anyone else. Besides, Jurina wouldnt even asked you out if she didnt like you in the first place.”

Hearing Rabutan’s comforting words, something snapped inside of her. Realizing crying isnt gonna solve anything, Mayu stood up as an idea striked her like a lightning bolt. She wiped the remaining tears on her face and turned around, facing her best friend.

“Youre right, i can’t give up now. I’ll be back in a bit” said Mayu before she rushed to the door, leaving her best friend dumbfounded, staring at the now empty pink bedroom.. 



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Mayu quietly opened the door to her parents bedroom and peeked inside to find her mom lounging on the bed, watching TV. She swallowed hard before completely entering her parents bedroom.

“Mom? Can i talk to you?”

Hearing her daughter’s voice, the woman turned and stood up from her position.

“You wanna talk to me? As in…. asking me for an advice?” the figure on the bed points to herself as she raised her eyebrows

Mayu answered with a slight nod as her mom questioned further

“Really?” her mom whispered

Mayu nods shyly and lowered her head trying to avoid her mother’s eyes.

Meanwhile, Mayu’s mom looking at her own daughter in disbelief, her hands covering her mouth as if something magical just happened in front of her eyes. Well, to the woman named Maeda Atsuko it is pretty magical.

“I have been waiting for this moment ever since you were born!! Come here! Sit here on the bed!”

Atsuko exclaimed enthustiacally as she pats the empty space on her bed, signalling her daughter to come over. Mayu closed the door behind her and flopped down next to her mom. She crossed her legs on the bed and fumbles with the hem of her nun looking dress.

“Okay here it goes…. Dont laugh okay?”

Atsuko shook her head  and lower the TV volume down before she let Mayu continue

“A girl i really like asked me out to dinner and im… I just have no clue what im doing right now”

Mayu mumbles into her hands. The older woman gasps in disbelief.  All this time, she never thought that her only daughter was capable of having human feelings. Atsuko is not prepared for this, but she’s gonna try her best.

“Aaaww! Isnt that nice? tell me, Whos the lucky maiden? “

 Atsuko asked in a sing song voice. She cant help to think that time flies by so fast. It only seems like yesterday she was teaching Mayuyu how to walk, picking her up from the kindergarten, reading her bed time stories and now, shes fifteen years old and asking her mom for dating advices.

“Her name is Jurina”

Murmured Mayu, she paused for a few seconds, trying to find the right words to describe the perfection that is Matsui Jurina .

“She goes to my school and shes a member of the track team. She has a gorgeous short black hair that she recently cut to add bangs which i think looks extremely cute on her. Shes also really nice to everyone at school, really smart too and she has this prince-like aura around her. Its kinda hard to explain, but youll know when you see her in person, but If i had to choose one word to describe Matsui Jurina, i think it would be… Perfection.”

   Mayu smile unconsiously from ear to ear  as the thought of Jurina’s face suddenly races through her brain. She failed to realize that her cheeks are turning bright pink and this doesnt go unnoticed by Atsuko whos having the time of her life, hearing her daughter babbling about her first crush.

“Seems to me that you really fancy this Matsui girl” teased Atsuko

“I do. Mom, i really really like her. Ever since i could remember” Mayu sigh as she grabbed one of the pillows on the bed and snuggle it

“All this time i never thought i could ever had a chance with her. Lots of girls in my school are crazy for her mom, and theyre not just ordinary girls mind you. Some of them are even models and here i am just…. Plain old me”  Mayu mumbled into the pillow.

“Plain? My kid is not plain! aww Come here honey” Atsuko wrapped her arms around her daughter, pulling her to her warmth. She kissed her forehead before she broke the hug.

“Listen, you are the prettiest, most adorable girl i have ever seen in my whole life”

Atsuko smiled as she stroked her daughter’s hair lovingly.

“And if that Matsui girl cant see that, well thats her lost. Honey, i know you really really like this girl, but you dont have to change who you are just to get her to like you. Make sure she likes you back because youre you. My previous otaku daughter”

“Thanks mom” mumbled Mayu

“The last part was really unnecessary though” Mayu joked receiving a soft giggle from her mom

“What time is your prince going to arrive?”

Before Mayu was able to reply, a loud voice coming from her papa downstairs cut her in.

“Atsuko! Theres a handsome looking girl at the door looking for our daughter!”

“That must be her. Shes early! Mom what do i do?” Mayu stood up as panic starts to take over her.

“Okay… First of all, youre not going out wearing that arent you?” Atsuko cringed. Making gestures with her hands.

“I dont know what else to wear! Thats why i came here in the first place! i was gonna ask you to pick out the outfit and maybe… do my make up for me” Mayu mumbled. Both the tips of her index fingers touching each others in a cute manner.

Atsuko stood up. She put both of her hands on Mayu’s shoulder and gaze into her daughter’s eyes.

“Dont worry honey, you have come to the right person”



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    Two figures are sitting opposite of each other in the living room. The girl with the short hair was fidgeting on her seat. her eyes are wandering around the room trying to distract herself from the obvious glare coming from the person sitting in front of her. The room is eerily quiet, only the ticking sound of the clock on the wall can be heard. The person sitting opposite of her is wearing a v neck tee and a pair of sweat pants, while the handsome looking girl was cladded in a cream colored knitted sweater, layering a buttoned up shirt inside of it.

“How long have you been dating Mayuyu?” The shorter of the two suddenly asked, making the short haired girl in front of her jolt.

“Oh were not dating. This is actually our first date” the short haired girl answered, flashing a cat like smile to appear confident. Shes not gonna lie though, she’s nervous as hell. She never thought a women this small could be so… Intimidating.

“What was your name again?”

“Its Jurina, Matsui Jurina.”

“Hmmm” the shorter one nods. Stroking an invisible beard below her chin.

“How do you do at school?”

“Pretty good. I dont mean to brag, but Im the top of my class” Jurina said, flashing a wink as she leaned closer to the women in front of her.

“I see”

The older woman crossed her hands in front of chest. Her face still bearing the same cold expression, While the younger girl keeps grinning from ear to ear.

Suddenly, the sound of light footsteps can be heard coming from the stairs, causing the two figures to turned their heads to the source of the noises. Jurina stood up from the couch and watch enthustiacally as Mayu make her way to the bottom of the stairs. She’s cladded in a simple floral dress with a brown knitted cardigan over. The usual flats Mayu usually wear are replaced with a pair of stylish ankle boots.

“Wow…”

‘So… So cute!’

Jurina thought that all her effort, mustering every bit of confidence she had to ask Mayu out was worth it at that point. The girl standing in front of her is simply… Breath taking.

“Sorry for the wait” Mayu said, fixing the cardigan her mom had lent her.

“You let your hair down….” Jurina pointed out.

“Y-yeah. Im still not sure about it though. What do you think?” Mayu asked shyly, while stroking the long strands of her hair.

“I think you look beautiful… N-not that you look less beautiful with your pigtails, i mean theyre great! I… I think any kind of hairstyle w-would fit you. You could even shave your head and still look pretty.” Jurina mentally facepalmed herself as she finished her sentence while Mayu is blushing furiously at Jurina’s compliment.

“Wow. She really does look like a prince” Atsuko suddenly appeared behind Her husband, smiling from ear to ear.

“She looks like a shemale to me” Takamina spat.

“Yhey look cute together” Atsuko elbowed her partner, as she watch the lack of interaction between the two girls in front of her. Jurina is fumbling with the hem of her sweater, while Mayu is struggling to make an eye contact with her

“We uuhm.. We should probably get going now” Jurina exclaimed

“Un” Mayu nods in agreement. She turned her head to her mom and mouthed ‘wish me luck’ before making her way to the front door. Jurina follow her behind.

Suddenly, Takamina grabbed Jurina’s arm and yank her before the poor girl reach the front door of the house.

“Listen, if she’s not back a virgin, i will hunt you down like a wolf.” growled Takamina.

Jurina shudders when her eyes met the older woman’s threatening ones.

“Y— yes ma’am.”

Satisfied, Takamina loosened her grab on Jurina’s arm. She then watches the young girl jog to catch up with Mayu whos already waiting on the front gate.

“You okay?” Atsuko asked Takamina while her hand is rubbing her back, calming her down.

Takamina sighs ”I just dont want her first date end up like our first date”

“Hey! whats wrong with our first date!” Atsuko pouts as she playfully slapped her lover’s arm

“Atsuko, please. Don’t act like you don’t remember. We had sex on our first date”



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A black SUV is parked neatly near the front of Mayu’s house. On the driver seat, A suspicious figure of a women holding a binoculars can barely be seen through the black tainted window

“Nyanyan, shes coming out!”

“Let me see!”

A long haired brunette exclaimed as she snatched a pair of binoculars off of a certain dimpled women next to her.

“What do you think?”

“Wow… Not bad.”

“Not bad? I think shes extremely cute! “ Yuko snatched the binoculars back to take a second look on the girl who has successfully stolen their daughter’s heart.

“As expected from the daughter of Oshima Yuko”  Yuko proudly stated,

“But wheres our Jurina?”

“I dont know. What is that girl doing alo- oh! There she is! our Juri just walked out! Why does she look so pale? what happened inside?”

“Can someone please tell me what the heck are we doing here ?” A girl who has been sitting in the back seat suddenly proclaimed. She has been silent the whole time but she has had it up to here. She has an important math test the next morning and instead of encouraging her to study, her parents had dragged her out to tag along on their little ‘adventure’.

“Sakura! Honey! Language please!” Haruna yelled

“Mom! Look at your husband! Shes nuts! What kind of parents spying on their kid’s date like its the most normal thing in the world? just what kind of parenting is this?!”

“Dont worry Sakura, we’ll spy on yours too when the time comes” Teased Yuko as she turned her attention to her youngest daughter.

“You guys are sick you hear me. SICK” Sakura furrowed her eyebrows and crossed her arms in front of her chest.

“Yuuchan they’re getting into that bus! Lets go follow them!” Haruna pats Yuko’s shoulder, ignoring Sakura’s statement.

“Aye aye cap’n!”

With that, Yuko turned on the engine of the car, following the bus which Jurina and Mayu got on. Sakura kept babbling about the lack of privacy she and her sister have during the trip, making a promise to herself that she will never ever let her parents know if she’s ever gonna plan to go on a date. Ever.

After minutes of driving, Yuko and Haruna was surprised that Jurina and Mayu got off at a stop not too far away from Mayu’s place. Relieve soon fills the parents when the pair are seen entering a normal looking cafe. That feeling was soon replaced with a feeling of nostalgia when they observe the vintage looking cafe in front of them.

“Okay i see no drug dealers or yankees here. I think onee chan can manage going home by herself. Can we go home now please?” Sakura pouted as she emerge from the gap between the front seats.

“Nyan-nyan, this place is…” Yuko widened her eyes.

“Do you think its a coincidence?” Haruna murmured.

Silence fills the air as the couple both have their eyes glued to the wooden sign that says ‘Rusty’s Jazz Café’

“Hello? Parents? You there?” Sakura asked, waving her hand in front of her parents face trying to gain their attention.

“Yuuchan.. Lets go home” Haruna muttered softly as grabbed Yuko’s hand and gave it a squeeze. They stare at each other lovingly and share a warm smile.

“Yeah. Lets go home” Yuko replied as she softly carresses her wife’s cheek

“YES! Lets go!” Sakura yelled, startling the married couple out of their little momentum.

Haruna giggled and pinched the 13 year old girl’s nose playfully, As Yuko drives the SUV away from the building and into the dark of the night with warm smile on her face.

Ganbatte, Juritan’



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“This is it. This is the place i told you about”

“Rusty’s jazz café?”

“I know it doesnt look much from the outside, But i can assure you - you’ll love it here.” Jurina flashed Mayu a smile, making Mayu’s heart thumping wildly like a Taiko drum. How can she say no to that smile?

“lets go inside”



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   As soon as Mayu stepped into the café, the smell of wood and lavender greeted her. The café is larger that what she had thought. Theres a wooden bar counter on the left side of the café and the bartender is dressed neatly in a white buttoned up and bowtie. Although theres not much customers in sight, a band is performing on a little stage in the far corner of the café while a couple is dancing in front of them, swaying their bodies to the slow rhythm of jazz. Mayu thinks that she has never listened to something so soothing in her whole life. Jurina then led The shorter girl to the reserved table located in front of the stage. She took the chair out for for Mayu, and the other girl blushed furiously at the sweet gesture.

“So, What do you think?” Asked Jurina as she seated herself on the chair

“I love it.”  Mayu replied. Her eyes are wandering around the café, gawking at the beautiful interior.

“Really? Cause if you dont we can always go someplace else like that danso cafe. Girls like to go there right? O-or maybe we could go to that french restaurant down the street. Theres always Mcdonalds if yo—.”

“No! Its okay really! I like it here.” Mayu exclaimed. She cant believe that Jurina, THE Matsui Jurina is nervous because of her.

“Okay… Good then”

There she goes with that smile again. I bet she could get away with murder using that gorgeous smile.
Mayu thinks to herself

“So uuhmmm” Jurina mumbled. Her hand is rubbing the back of her head.

“Im glad you like the place” she continued

“I- its peaceful” Mayu proclaimed, mentally cursing herself for the short answer which creates minutes of awkward silence for the two. Beads of sweat starting to form on Mayu’s forehead. She’s brainstorming for things she could say to Jurina, but the only thing she could conjured up is; ‘nice weather huh?’

Jurina furrowed her eyebrows when she noticed the uncomfortable look on the shorter girl’s face. She cleared her throat and starts talking;

“Im sorry if this date came out too weird for you. Its just that, I have never asked a girl out on a date before and..”

“Wait a minute, you have never been on a date before?”  Mayu cut Jurina in, not letting her finish her sentence.

Hearing Mayu’s question, Jurina shook her head and smile like an innocent little kid, oblivious to the effect of her words.

Mayu was completely taken aback at her new found revelation. How can a girl like Matsui Jurina has never been on a date? Does this also mean that Jurina never had a girlfriend?

The thought of being Jurina’s first ever girlfriend sent butterflies to Mayu’s stomach and she cant help but hope for tonights date to end up wonderfully even though she knows she shouldn’t be building her hopes that high.

“Can i ask you something?” Mayu mumbled

“Yeah sure”

“Why me?”

“Why you?”

“Yes. I mean, youre quite popular in our school and  you have tons of pretty good looking girls falling on your feet and kissing the ground youve walked on so… why me?” Mayu asked nervously, she just has to get it out of her head one way or another.

“I think you were a little exaggerating.” Jurina giggled, recieving a pout from the girl in front of her.

“Truth is… I dont know how to answer that without sounding like a total creep but anyway.” muttered Jurina

“I flunked my exam”

Eh?”

“I did, and its all because of you.”

“M-me?”

Jurina let out a sigh and propped her elbows on the wooden table before she explained further

“theres this girl in my class who’s always been my rival. her name is Nakanishi Yuka. She’s also a member of the track team like me. are you familiar with her?”

“Of course. everybody in school knows her. “

“I hate losing. with her, it has always been a tight competition. I would study and train really hard everyday to be number one while she always came in second. Thats why i never had time for girls. My mind was too occupied with wanting to be the top. My papa’s been nagging about it too you know. She said that i was too serious.. That i should loosen up. I know its stupid, but i just hated seeing that smug grin on Nishishi’s face whenever her grade is better than mine”

Mayu tilted her head in confusion.

what does anything she just told me has anything to do with me?

Although, seeing the girl of her dream talk so openly in front of her, in a dimly lit cafe, with a romantic song playing in the background, Mayu wonders if she should care.

“Then one day, i saw you, sitting alone in the library reading manga with your cute little pigtails. I didn’t know why, but when laid my eyes on you… I felt like my heart was gonna jump out of my chest. You were like the cutest thing i have ever seen! I’ve never felt like that towards anyone before. Everything was so new to me. It all kinda went downhill from there, everyday when you walk pass by me in the hallway, my chest would flutter. It got so bad to the point that i wasn’t able to study because you kept popping up in my brain. ” Jurina chuckled, her cheeks are turning shades of red and Mayu thought she could die from the cuteness

“When i failed my exam, Nishishi was so ecstatic of course, she wasn’t even trying to hide it. The odd thing is… i didn’t mind at all…”  Jurina shook her head and lean back on her seat. Her eyes travelled from the table to Mayu’s pair of black orbs.

“Thats when i realized i was a goner” exclaimed Jurina as her lips curved into a somewhat  sad smile.

Mayu can’t believe everything she just heard. did Jurina just say the she was the cutest thing she has ever seen? it can’t be… the girl she’s been having a crush on since forever, is feeling the same way towards her. things like that only exist in movies right? Mayu feels butterflies, no, fireworks in her stomach. she would roll around on the floor with happiness if its not Jurina sitting in front of her. She wants to climb to the top of Fuji mountain and screams out

 ’MATSUI JURINA LIKES ME! SHE LIKES ME! SHE THINKS IM CUTE! HA!’

“Do you…. hate me now?”

“I would never!” Mayu answered automatically and immediately. She quickly put her hand over her mouth to prevent anymore word vomit to come out.

“You would never….. hate me?” Jurina questioned.

Mayu dipped her head. she fumbles with the napkin on her lap. she was hesitated at first, but she has decided. if she wants for things to go the way she wants, she’s gonna have to do it. yes, she’s gonna tell Jurina that her feelling is not one sided after all.

“Be-because… I l-li—like you too.” 

A pregnant silence fills the air. Mayu lifts her head up, curious for the lack of reaction coming from the other girl. She found Jurina frozen in her seat, grinning from ear to ear.

“You have no idea how happy you just made me” Jurina softly murmured.

She extends her hand and resting it over Mayu’s on the table. Her thumb is moving slowly in circular motion, caressing the back of Mayu’s hand.

 Jurina doesn’t know where she got the courage to do that, but when she sees a smile forming on Mayu’s lips, she knows she’s done the right move.



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   The two lovebirds continued their chatting as they wait for their foods to arrive. Getting to know each other was an important part of the date that Jurina had in mind. Mayu turned out to be a really easy person to talk to and Jurina feels like she could tell her everything. She also found out several interesting facts about Mayu like how she hates vegetables, how she spends most of her time reading manga, how she has an annoying best friend with a funny name and the most interesting one is the fact that Mayu has had a crush on her since middle school. that one sent Jurina to cloud 9.

   The pair kept stealing glances at each other even when they’re eating. Jurina had cut Mayu’s steak into bite size pieces and Mayu wished that Jurina would stop being such a gentlewoman because she doesn’t know how much her heart can take anymore. It feels like it would burst out of her chest anytime now. the two had finished their dinner when Jurina asked

“Do you wanna dance?”

Mayu glanced to the empty dance floor. the band is still playing but the couple that occupied the dance floor earlier had gone.

“I don’t know how..”

“Don’t worry. i’ll lead” Jurina stood up from her seat and offered Mayu her hand.

Mayu smiled and take Jurina’s hand. the contact sent electricity through her body and she can’t seem to wipe the smile off her face as the other girl lead her to the dance floor. The taller girl let go of their hands and Mayu watched silently as Jurina made her way to the stage and whispered something to the lead singer of the band which was replied with a thumbs up. She then turned to Mayu as the band began to play another song. The close proximity between the two girls makes them 10x nervous than they already are. Jurina pursed her lips, her right hand slowly making its way to Mayu’s waist and her left hand is holding Mayu’s right hand up.  Mayu is resting her right hand on Jurina’s  shoulder as they begin to sway to the slow, hypnotizing music. (CLICK)

“Do you know this song?’” murmured Jurina.

Mayu shook her head.

“It’s called ‘Me and Mrs Jones’ its one one my favorite song.”  explained Jurina

“So… am i Mrs Jones in this song?” Mayu smiled teasingly.

Jurina dipped her head as she let out a chuckle.

“This is actually a song about adultery. lets not relate anything to this song shall we?”

Mayu nods and lower her head in attempt to hide her flustered face as Jurina keeps swaying their bodies, left and right.

The taller girl stares at the girl in her arms. Her lips curve into a cat like smile as they bring their bodies closer to each other. Both girl are drowned in each other eyes and Jurina wished that time would stop so that she can stare at Mayu’s beautiful eyes forever. Mayu then leans closer, resting her head on Jurina’s shoulder. Mayu’s hair is smelled of chocolate and it makes Jurina’s mind go haywire. She closed her eyes, savoring what could be the happiest moment of her life.

She wonders if Mayu thinks so too. 



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On the side of the quiet road, two figures can be seen walking together hand in hand.  The lights from the street lamps reflected on their faces, creating a romantic atmosphere around them. Mayu and Jurina had decided to walk home instead of taking the bus. The idea of having to part soon irked them and they rather not to think about it.

“And then my mom was like ‘MY SCARF!’ And she was sobbing and screaming in the kitchen. it was so crazy And then she was like ‘Mayuyu! You are grounded forever!’” Jurina bursts into fit of laughters. She hold her stomach while her other hand is still holding firmly on to Mayu’s.

“I cant believe you used your mom’s Hermés scarf to wipe a spilled bolognese!”

Jurina said in between her laughter.

“Well, my papa said it was okay! We had no idea it was that expensive. That thing looked like a rug anyway.” Mayu deadpanned.

The taller girl wiped tears on her eyes as they both continued walking in a snail pace.

“Well, were here” Mayu exclaimed as the pair stopped in front of her house.

“I had a really good time” Said Jurina as she tighten her grab on Mayu’s hand, not wanting to let go yet.

“I dont want tonight to end yet”

Mayu pouted and dipped her head, silently cursing whoever it is who came up with the idea of curfew.

Jurina chuckled at how adorable the girl in front of her is. She lifts up her hand and stroke the older’s girls cheek softly like its the most fragile thing in the world. Mayu feels goosebumps all over her body and she knows for sure why.

“Lets do this again” Jurina muttered under her breath.

“I would love that”

Mayu exclaimed as her lips curved into a cute smile that successfully turns Jurina’s legs into jelly. She lowered her caressing hand and let it rest awkwardly on her side.

“Uhm.. i need to tell you something”

“What is it?”

“Theres a reason why i took you to that jazz café” Jurina exclaimed, her hand rubbing the back of her neck

“Because you like jazz?” Mayu guessed

Jurina giggled and shook her head

“Actually, that place is where my parents met for the first time.” proclaimed Jurina, her fingers are fumbling with the hem of her sweater out of nervousness

“The song we danced to - that was the song my parents also danced to on the night they met” Jurina continued as she lowered her head. Her face is red in embarrassment.

did i take it too far?

“Wow… That’s.. I don’t know what to say” Mayu murmured under her breath

“No! you don’t have to say anything! I’m freaking you out aren’t i? god you’re so stupid Jurina! i knew i should’ve taken you to that danso cafe instead!” Jurina said, smacking herself on the head.

“Thats not what i meant! i think what you did was really sweet! i really liked it there and knowing that its where your parents met, it meant a lot more to me” said Mayu, Her fingers are tracing the outline of Jurina’s bangs.

“Thank you for not freaking out”

“You’re welcome. Take it down a notch next time will you.” exclaimed Mayu while pinching Jurina’s cheek lightly. She nods as a response and gave the other girl puppy eyes.

Its hard to believe that the younger girl took it that far with her. Mayu finds it kinda funny that the cool prince-like Matsui Jurina shes constantly fawning over at school is actually a hopeless romantic. She can’t wait to tell Rabutan all about it.

“I think you should go inside. Your papa is watching us and i don’t think she’s pleased” Jurina said, glancing to the window on the second floor of Mayu’s house. Mayu followed Jurina’s gaze and found her papa standing behind the window of her parents bedroom, watching them like an eagle eyeing its prey. Mayu let out a sigh and turned her head to the girl in front of her.

“So i guess i’ll see you tomorrow at school?” muttered Mayu, her palm is getting sweaty from holding hands with Jurina for so long but she doesn’t mind a bit.

“I’ll see you then” Jurina said as she slowly took a step backwards, her hand is still connected with Mayu’s and her eyes not leaving hers. she took another step backwards till it was impossible for them to keep their hands in contact. With one last smile, Jurina turned around and started walking away from the other girl.

Mayu glanced at the second floor of her house again, her papa is still standing there in the same position, her eyebrows are even furrowed as if telling her ‘don’t do it Mayu’.

ah, screw it

“Jurina!” Mayu yelled, catching the attention of the other girl as she turned around

“Yes?”

Mayu wasted no time. She ran towards where the other girl is standing and kissed her tightly on the lips. Mayu snaked her arms around Jurina’s neck and the other girl who was caught by surprise has her eyes closed, kissing Mayu back with the same force. They pulled back when oxygen becomes an issue.

“My make up for making you flunk your exam” Mayu said, panting

“Well in that case, maybe i should just fail all my exams”  Jurina giggled receiving a playful smack on her arm.

“You should go now before my papa chase you down”

“Wh- what? she’s not gonna do that for real right?”

“Well, do you wanna stay and find out?” teased Mayu

“Fine~ ill go.” Jurina pouted  as she walks backwards, waving goodbye to the older girl.

Mayu blew a kiss and Jurina pretended to caught it with her hand and brought it to her chest.

Mayu felt like she could die from all the happiness right now. As soon as the other girl was out of her sight, she clutched her chest and lean on the gate of her house. A wide smile plastered on her face. She sighed and turned around, skipping her way to the front door while humming the song she and Jurina danced to.



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“OH MY GOD! Acchan they’re kissing in front of our house!”

“Minami, relax… Mayu is all grown up now. you can’t treat her the same way you treated her 10 years ago. i learned that today.” Atsuko exclaimed as she got off the bed and walked towards her fuming husband

“this is unacceptable. I’m gonna kill that shemale! let me grab my gun” exclaimed Takamina as she rushed to the door of her bedroom

“no no no no! you are not going to embarrass your daughter!” Atsuko grabbed Takamina by the arm and yank her to sit on the bed.

“But they..”

“Breathe, honey”

“But what if she…”

“I said BREATHE”

“Okay okay I’m breathing! Jesus Christ Atsuko.”

“Inhale.. exhale…”

The shorter women took a deep breath and release it on Atsuko’s command. Her body starts to relax, under Atsuko experienced hands massaging her shoulder. She then slowly pushed Takamina to lay down flat on the bed and straddle her waist. 

“Now… where were we?”


The Endo
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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2012, 01:03:55 PM »
i read this on tumblr...haha
and i really love it
mayu and jurina is so so so so
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i cant explain in one word.. :sweat:
and atsumina and kojiyuu + sakura..
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thank god you put it in here so manny can read ur awesome fic.. :thumbsup
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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #2 on: November 16, 2012, 01:30:35 PM »
i read this on tumblr...haha
and i really love it
mayu and jurina is so so so so
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i cant explain in one word.. :sweat:
and atsumina and kojiyuu + sakura..
 :imdead:

thank god you put it in here so manny can read ur awesome fic.. :thumbsup
 :kneelbow:


Thank you thank you thank you so much for reading my OS. *sheds tears of happiness
and thank you for giving it a comment  :cry:

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2012, 01:55:44 PM »
i read this on tumblr...haha
and i really love it
mayu and jurina is so so so so
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i cant explain in one word.. :sweat:
and atsumina and kojiyuu + sakura..
 :imdead:

thank god you put it in here so manny can read ur awesome fic.. :thumbsup
 :kneelbow:


Thank you thank you thank you so much for reading my OS. *sheds tears of happiness
and thank you for giving it a comment  :cry:

i want to give you a virtual hug :') your my first commenter and oh my god I'm just so nervous

dont be nervous..ur fic is so cool..just wait..
they gonna love it just like i do..  :wub:

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2012, 02:10:47 PM »
Yeah good fic!! :D Good idea those pairings, Jurina is a prince, i like when people call her like that  :panic: :banghead: Of course I can't hide that i was hoping for atsumina sex  :nervous :nervous But it's okay, good job!!  :thumbup

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #5 on: November 16, 2012, 02:22:33 PM »
I just love fluff   :heart: I too first read this on tumblr and I gotta say this is extremely adorable  :thumbsup

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #6 on: November 16, 2012, 02:28:16 PM »
Wow...just so FLUFFY!! It's was well written and definitely brought out squeeling from all that cuteness. Just sweet innnocent love. Sigh. :heart: Except for that last part of course. Heh heh. :shocked

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #7 on: November 16, 2012, 02:33:41 PM »
Waahh! Mama Mustache! You posted it hereee~ Since you did, I read it again and still awesome as ever! Please write mooaaar!  :deco:
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« Reply #8 on: November 16, 2012, 02:43:54 PM »
you widened up my smile  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
thank you for this!

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #9 on: November 16, 2012, 04:03:00 PM »
yeah! i saw it in tumblr... but here is better love it :B

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #10 on: November 16, 2012, 04:07:09 PM »
This fic is sooooooo sweet. I love it  :wub:

Please write more of these fluffy stuffs. I'm a sucker for this type of stories. As long as there's Mayuyu in it, I'll love it, really  :lol:


Thanks so much for posting it in here.

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #11 on: November 16, 2012, 04:22:09 PM »
these comments are just :cry: :cry: :cry:

@Chichay12: ah stop it you. :wub: thank you for the words of encouragement *bows
@fausto: just so you know i wasn't planning to make Jurina that prince-like but her darned handsome face was like asking for it. aaww man Sex scenes are so hard to write  :cry: no matter how hard i try i will always end up cringing at my own writing. its just too awkward for me  :bleed eyes: i seriously need someone to teach me how to write smut. thank you for the comment! :two thumbs
@marisado: I SAW YOU ON TUMBLR!!! *does victory dance* I'm glad you like fluff cause its the only thing I'm able to write :P thank you for the wonderful comment!  :bow:
@kuronekosan: thank you!  :bow: I'm glad i made you squeeled! (lol is it just me or does that sound so wrong? naah probably just me) yeah that last part just came out of nowhere actually >.<
@ChuuuPuffss: MELOOON MY CHILD *glomps. i posted a renairin on tumblr actually but I'm not sure if you're interested  :cry:
@anzai48: aawww really? you were grinning? xD Yuki as Mayu's mom.... WHY DIDNT I THINK OF THAT??!!!!!!!  :banghead: :banghead: :bang head: you know come to think of it it would've made much more sense. Yuki has always been Mayu's 'mom' after all xD
@miayaka: and you sir just brightened up my day :)
@Haruko: thank you for reading it on tumblr and here and not getting sick of it!! :wub: matte, are you Haruko48 on tumblr?
@ jell_o_jello: then i hope you enjoy my upcoming oneshots!!  cause honestly all i can write is this vomit inducing type of fluff. fluff is kinda my forte :3

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #12 on: November 16, 2012, 04:45:27 PM »
I actually just finished reading it, Mama~ I want part 2 of it!
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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #13 on: November 16, 2012, 05:44:01 PM »
That so sweet!! :heart: :heart:
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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #14 on: November 16, 2012, 05:57:01 PM »
wuaaaa i havent read this!! and this fic is beautiful ><

they're so cute oh Jurina and Mayu  :farofflook:

dont know how to describe this :imdead:

you should make part 2 of this  :kneelbow:

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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #15 on: November 16, 2012, 07:01:46 PM »
I read and liked this on Tumblr when you posted it. It's so cute and funny~  XD :heart:
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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #16 on: November 16, 2012, 08:34:23 PM »
This is TOOO cute!!!
I love this fic!!
Jurina and Mayuyu :)))))
I know it's an OS but you really should continue!!
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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #17 on: November 16, 2012, 08:45:15 PM »
Aww kojiyuu is so cute!! Thanks for the kojiyuu!!!



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Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
« Reply #18 on: November 17, 2012, 01:01:22 AM »
That was such a wonderful fic really heart warming  :heart:

Then I decided to read the wMatsui fic on your tumblr, totally different just as awesome  :cry: :thumbup

I hope you post another fic here or on your tumblr either I will definitely read it  :)

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« Reply #19 on: November 17, 2012, 01:15:02 AM »
i love this fanfics the first time i read it was on tumblr but now its here i cant stop reading it over again and again  :cathappy:
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