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Re: Mean Atsumina os
« Reply #40 on: December 15, 2012, 01:22:23 PM »
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acchan why oh why T_T

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Re: Mean Atsumina os
« Reply #41 on: December 21, 2012, 06:41:11 AM »
Thank you for the stories.

I like both stories (Say you love me & Mean)

I can't wait to see the update.

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Re: Mean Atsumina os
« Reply #42 on: December 26, 2012, 10:53:07 AM »
Mo-chan, I just noticed something lol. Isn't 'Say You Love Me', 'Sukitte Iinayo' the anime? XD

Lol~ Nice idea making it an AKB fiction! Hope you update soon, though lol
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Re: Mean Atsumina os
« Reply #43 on: December 26, 2012, 03:15:22 PM »
great fanfic.  :inlove:
the couple mayuki & atsumina really like it.  :thumbsup
please update

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Re: Mean Atsumina os
« Reply #44 on: December 26, 2012, 06:07:06 PM »
Mou.. i don't want Acchan pass away :'(

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Re: Mean Atsumina os
« Reply #45 on: December 26, 2012, 08:34:09 PM »
mo-chan, whats on earth you going to do with acchaan ??!  :OMG:
i trusted you, please, dont hurt acchan and takamina feeling will you ?  :shifty:
please update soon~  :tantrum: :tantrum:

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[ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari | one-shot
« Reply #46 on: December 30, 2012, 12:47:07 PM »
@TakaminaBG and @chemicalstar: why the you think I'm going to kill Acchan  :shocked
@miayaka: in the next upadate she will tell you why  :P
@cisda83 and stepk : sorry I'll make you wait more.  :(
@ChuuuPuffss: hey Chuu-chan long time no see  :lol: yes about Mayuki's fanfic you don't like Sukitte Iinayo Mayuki remake  :P
@FNK23:  what are you going to do if I do something to Acchan :lol: good I'll kill her then  :twisted: I'm joking  :rofl:


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Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari | one-shot
« Reply #47 on: December 30, 2012, 01:30:59 PM »
Yeeeey o/ finally a incest here *.*

Loved it o/ thank you o/

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Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
« Reply #48 on: December 30, 2012, 03:53:40 PM »
Oh you are back, mo-chan...   
Acchan is dying??  :mon whine:
An indirect kiss of AtsuMina!  :mon lovelaff:
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Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
« Reply #49 on: December 31, 2012, 05:59:57 AM »
OMG, I love this incest os :cry: I love it :cry:

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Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
« Reply #50 on: December 31, 2012, 06:46:46 AM »
It kind of Sad....I even cried.... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

What...I quite didn't understand the story...Rena is Deaf ???...Really... :? :? :? :?

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Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
« Reply #51 on: December 31, 2012, 10:53:25 AM »
@BbSis: I'm happy that you like this kind of fic  :D
@correnereyes: no Acchan won't die  I said it earlier  :catglare:
@JuRikki: I'm happy you like it I put all my feelings on it
@xxx220: don't cry it's a fic  :P yes Rena had an accident caused gher deafness so she can't hear she read what the other say by see her/his lips  :D

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Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #52 on: June 16, 2013, 11:25:44 PM »
I'm really really sorry I updated very late   :( But still I want someone read my fic  :nervous But this break made me think of lot of think and made me change things in this fic  :roll: Be careful drama is coming in the next chapter  XD
 I'm thinking about writing a Mayuki one-shot too  :lol: I hope you will like this chapter  :sweatdrop:
and  @momondmozide: momo-chan sorry for making you wait  :(




Chapter 5



You’ll see. I’ll take my revenge. I will make you suffer. Like you made me and all my family suffer. If you didn’t show then we would be ok. We would be a happy

family without any problem. It’s your entire fault. Yes it’s all you fault...

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“RingRing”

I heard the music of my phone right beside me. So I opened my eyes and I woke up from my dreams. I really hate waking up Sunday but I have to go to my part time job. I slowly stood up from my bed took a quick bath and rushed to wear my clothes. After that I went to my job.

At the maid café, I got in the dressing room to put my uniform. Then the ceo called for me saying that he has something to tell me.

“Watanabe-chan I want you to know our new worker. Kashiwagi-san! Here Watanabe-chan she is our best worker here you can ask her whatever you want and
she will help you”

“Ah! You!” I shouted pointing my finger to her. For my surprise, it was a new worker was nor then Kashiwagi Yuki.

“Hi Mayu-chan~” She waved to me smiling.

I was really shocked seeing her here. Why she is here? Of all part time job she wanted this one? Why?

The ceo’s laugher snapped me from my spacing.

“It’s easier than if the two of you know each other. Ok! Ok! Let’s work! Let’s work!” I looked to the girl who is still smiling to me. The truth it’s creepy me out.

“Heuh Mayu-chan... We really should wear this?” Yuki asked me and kept looking to her uniform.

“It’s a cosplay café what do you want else? If you would not then you should have applied for a normal café not like this one.”  I told her coldly

“But I thought we would wear something else...” She had a disappointed look when she said it.

“Among all the characters the maid offers has a relaxing atmosphere. That’s what Manager-san told me when I got this job the first time.” 

“Aaah I see...”

“If you can’t do you can qu-“

“No! I’ll do my best!”

“Ok... So you need to know that we are prone to have more male customers and the female customers come during the tea time hours. For now I think you can go to the kitchen to make coffee for morning customers. If you need something call me” After finishing my explanations I went to take orders.

“cakhshhh”I heard a loud crash. It was from kitchen. It’s Yuki! I rushed to the source of the sound. I saw a panicking Yuki trying to stop the coffeemaker and the coffee was slipping everywhere.

“Mayu!! Help me!!” Without even waiting for a second, I unplugged the outlet with speed.

“You put too much coffee beans!!”

“I’m sorry I didn’t know how much I have to put” She apologised as she began cleaning.Did she do it on propose? I sighed and I told her to make juice and I continued cleaning on the floor. But still I’m asking myself why she is here. She is not the kind of daughter who needs a part time job. I thought that she is rich...

“What are you doing!!?”

“You told me to make juice”

“Yes I know! No it’s not it I mean you should you have to cut the fruit first! If you put them like that you will broke the mixer!”

“Aaah really I didn’t know it!” She took a knife and a plank and starting cutting. But I have a bad feeling saying her taking that knife.

“Itai!” I knew it. She cut her finger. I took her hand and I placed it under the tap as the water flowed.

“Here is a plaster” She took it and she put it. Seriously! why she is always so clumsy? She always ends up having my plasters.

“Geez! This girl! I’ll show you how” As I showed her how.

“I see!! Let me try!” She said as she took from my hand.

“No! It’s not like that you’ll hurt yourself again” I put my hand on hers and I showed her. When I have realized that I was too close from her, I backed away.

“Aaah!! I did it!! I did it!! Thank you Mayu-chan!!” She thanked and she smiled like she always does. But for some reason my face all red

“Are you ok Mayu-chan?” My heart started beating so fast. It made me remember that day. My co-worker got in and she broke the atmosphere.

“Oh! G-good morning Kuramochi-san!”  I snapped at her.

“Y-Yes good morning Watanabe-san you loud this day not as you do”

“Oh Asuka-chan!”

“Yuki-chan! What are you doing here?”So they know each other. It doesn’t really surprise me because Yuki and Kuramochi-san have the same age.

“I’m working here from today!”

“Eeeeeh Don’t tell me you let her alone in the kitchen Watanabe-san!!”

“Y-yes”

“Do never let Yuki-chan in the kitchen. Ok!”

“Yes!”

“You’re so mean Asuka-chan. I’m not that bad. Right Mayu-chan?”

“For someone who slipped all coffee everywhere, almost broke the mixer and doesn’t even know how to cut fruits. It’s really...”

“I told you so!” Kuramochi-san shouted at Yuki.

“Mou!”I think that what Kuramochi-san said it true. Letting Yuki in the kitchen is dangerous. If I was not there Yuki would be kicked out from this part time job from today. Thanks to me it didn’t happen. She was rather good in taking orders.  She got many fans even it was her first day.
At night woks ended. When I got out I found Yuki leaning on the wall who still waiting for me in the corner.

“Good work Mayu-chan! Let’s walk home together!”  I did not say anything. I just walked away and she kept following me. I t was the absolute silence. No one of
us said something. Halfway I stopped walking and I kept staring at her.

“Why?”

“Mayu-chan?” She was confused.

“Why you’re here with me now? Why you choose the same part-time? Why you ke-" It was really fast. For three or four second I felt her lips on mine. I felt my world froze and my cyborg system hacked.  She tilted her head as she said:

“I want to be with you all the time. I like you Mayu-chan.”

 I couldn’t bear this new feeling. My knees buckled and I fell if it was not Yuki who caught me I would be on the floor.

“What’s wrong Mayu!?”

“I-I don’t know” Yuki sighed in relieve then chuckled to my respond. She hugged me more tightly and she told me to not be shy. After that I went back to home. I went straight to my room and I didn’t even to what my mother was saying to me. I threw myself on my bed. I still can feel my heart beating very fast. I feel all hot. I can’t breathe properly. Is this love?
On Monday I went to school like usually I do. But I don’t know why, inside me there is this feeling telling me to not go.  I went in the classroom and I sat on my place. Afterward Jurina arrived, she came next to me and she stared babbling. I really didn’t pay attention at all what she was talking about. I was thinking about someone.  Suddenly a girl from my classroom I don’t remember her name came running yelling that she had news.

“ I heard that a girl will be transferred at our class!!” 

All the class was excited about it I even saw Jurina grinning and saying to herself and “Hope she is a cute!!”

“But!! There is another big news!!” The girl cut us again

What again!

“Miyazawa-sempai came back!!”

“Kyaaaaaaa!!!”

Miyazawa? I didn’t know who she is. I turned to look to Jurina. I was surprised by her reaction she was rather shocked than surprised.

Then I looked again to the news girl and she said:“I wonder if Miyazawa-sempai will come back to Yuki-sempai..”

What...


« Last Edit: September 13, 2013, 03:14:53 PM by mo-chan »

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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #53 on: June 16, 2013, 11:58:25 PM »
So... I read this... and then I was like...
how did I not notice this before...
godly writing...!!!!
yups, yuki + kitchen = either food poisoning or explosions or just destruction...
sae-chan nooooo!! Mayuki hasn't developed enough...
well, life is life, what happens is what happens~
test their bonds yosh!

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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #54 on: June 17, 2013, 12:41:10 AM »
yatta! i'm happy that you're still writing this fic :3
Waa, Sae came for Yuki? so... she is her ex girfriend? and what was that in the beggining of the chapter?
Revenge? who is talking? :O
i'm waiting for your next chapter ! ^^

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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #55 on: June 17, 2013, 02:08:18 AM »
wohoow drama is coming...  :twothumbs
I really wish it will not take a very long time for you to update this fic maybe its rude, but I really like this storiea yosshhh  :inlove:


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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #56 on: June 17, 2013, 02:58:19 AM »
Eh i dont know you wrote this before,its good you should continue

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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #57 on: June 17, 2013, 10:34:09 AM »
It's been a while... thought you discontinued it...

It's getting more and more interesting...

Yeah... more drama developing....

Can't wait to see the drama between the main characters and Sae...?

Thank you for the update

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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #58 on: June 17, 2013, 11:21:12 AM »
i love u


Lovers, keep on the road you're on
Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
Sometimes even right is wrong
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Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
« Reply #59 on: June 17, 2013, 12:07:10 PM »
I've read it many months ago but I prefer to be a silent reader :depressed:
It's an awesome Mayuki's fic :luvluv1: I love it very much :shy2:
Thanks mo-chan for writing and creating this great fic :on slopkiss:
Eh!?! Yuki has liked Mayu already :onioncheer:
Yuki in most of Mayuki's fanfics is very bad at cooking :bigdeal:
Sae's coming back and she's Yuki's ex girlfriend :shock:
I sure there'll be a lots of drama in the future :hehehe:
Who's the transfer student? Yuki or someone else? :dunno:
Can't wait to see what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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