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Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
« Reply #20 on: December 08, 2012, 03:20:47 PM »
no ideas? mou~ Mo-chan~ ideas come when you are not looking for them~

So watch a movie, read a book, have fun, and when you will think in a moment of relaxation in these times, you will somehow end in a 'what if' and these are what help the ideas.I hate 'what if's but they help ideas.

I love the photos~~~ Mayu and Yuki~~~~
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Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
« Reply #21 on: December 08, 2012, 03:25:34 PM »
I loled at Sae xD

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Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
« Reply #22 on: December 08, 2012, 06:49:35 PM »
@yuukimoko: don't worry yuuki-chan I got many ideas after  :grin: I'll post it this night the chapter a present for yuuki-chan I'll make mayuki kiss  :cathappy:
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Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
« Reply #23 on: December 08, 2012, 07:00:07 PM »
Mo-chaaaan~ Updatoooo! :3

Wheeen? I'm rolliinnnggg now lolol.

Hope you better keep what you said to Yuuki-chan. Lol I wonder when tonight is in your country xD
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #24 on: December 08, 2012, 07:26:34 PM »
@ChuuuPuffss: don't worry Chuu-chan I keep my promise  ;) and about the time now it's night and It's 19h20 now

sorry to keep you wait minna-san! here is the chapter  :thumbsup





Chapter 3
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<><>same day same time same place when Mayu walked away and let Yuki alone<><>


“ ah we found out Yuki!” a girl shouted and hugged Yuki

“ah Haruna” Yuki said smiling patting Haruna’s head

“don’t touch my Harunya!!!” Yuko started yelling

“ I’m not yours Yuko” Haruna glared to Yuko and let Yuki

“ what are you spacing out for?” asked Rena

“ you’re always after Watanabe-san” Jurina said smirking

“ ehhh that scary girl” Yuko said

“ What do you mean scary girl?” Haruna asked

“ well It was really an accident her skirts where so long that I wanted to know what is behind it” Yuko said in innocent look

“ pervert! Of course she would be scary all girls will get angry if you do it to them!” Haruna said

“ but it wasn’t really my fault her skirt where att-“

“what a lame excuse” Rena said rolling her eyes

“ even you Rena-chan” Yuko said teary

 “ I think Watanabe-san doesn’t like you Yukirin she’s been avoiding you all the time” Jurina said

“ eeeh! you think?” Yuki said in a sad tone

“ un! Un! “ all said and nodded at the same time

“ you all don’t say un un “ Yuki said and sigh

“ Let’s go to karaoke together! You promised remember!” Rena said to Yuki

“ yeah of course I remember let’s go then” Yuki said smiling

“ let’s invite cute girls with us” Jurina said smirking

“ Let’s choose girls who have big boobs!” Yuko said jumping

Rena and Haruna sighed at the act of Jurina and Yuko

“ you really don’t have anything else on your mind you two”  Haruna said

“ Isn’t it more fun with cute girls?” Jurina replayed

 Rena only faceplamed

“maa maa you know them let’s have fun” Yuki said smiling

Someone where looking the group of girls from far not really happy.




<><>Mayu work’s place <><>

“ I’m off manager-san I’ll go now” Mayu said

“ okey good work Mayu-chan!” the Manager said

“ thanks manager-san  good work you too good night” Mayu said and she walked out of the otaku coffe.

 Behind it stinted a guy . He is a regular comer in Mayu’s work place.

It was night Mayu was walking back to home the same guy was walking all the time on her back .

 Mayu got really scared the guy had been fowling her for almost all the way. She entered in the nearest convenient store .

 She was really terrified . She took her mobile phone and called home but no one answer.



<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

“ that man he always comes to sit in the otaku coffee I work in doesn’t he?

Is he following me or is it just a coincidence but he’s standing there outside looking at me.

 What if it isn’t coincidence and he’s really been following me? Mom please pick up!!

<><>end of PVO<><>


Mayu looked at the piece of paper Yuki gave to her.


 <><>In karaoke<><>

I want you !

I need you !

 I love you !

Haato no oku janjan afureru itoshi sa ga

 Hebii rooteeshon

Hebii rooteeshon
♫♫♩♪ ” Haruna ended the her song

“ Harunya! You’re the best!” Yuko shouted

One girl of the girls Jurina and Yuko invited  ended up all around Yuki she took the mic “ here Yuki it’s your turn”

“thanks” Yuki attented to take the mic *ring ring* her phone is ringing

“ ah excuse me for a second” Yuki said

she took her phone and answered “ moshi moshi”

“ well it’s Watanabe…”

“eh!”

“ save me please save me”  Mayu said

“calm down Mayu . where are you now?” Yuki asked

“at the convenient store near the 8th district”

“ stay where you are I’ll be right there!”

“ yes”




<><>at the convenient store <><>


Yuki entered the store looking for Mayu. When she found her she run to her. Mayu was trembling she was really scared.

“ what happened?” Yuki asked Mayu

“ that man outside he always comes by my workplace” Yuki looked and saw the man outside

“ he’s been following me since I left the shop he followed me all the way here”

“ how long have you been here?” asked Yuki

“ for about half an hour” Mayu answered

“ that’s called being stalked!” Yuki yelled

“ I didn’t know what to do my mother wouldn’t pick up the phone I didn’t have anyone else I could call”

“ leave it to me” Yuki wicked to Mayu

Yuki went and took something and bought it

“ it’s XXXyen” the man’s store said

“ here XXXyen” Yuki gave the money

“ thank you very much” the man’s store said and bowed

“ Kashiwagi-san what are you doing?” Mayu asked confused

“ here!” Yuki showed Mayu what she bought

“ ice-cream?” Mayu said

“ I need something to cool down after running all the way here” Yuki said smiling

“ I see”

“ I know what to do” Yuki said put herself next Mayu and she put her arm around Mayu’s neck “let’s go” Yuki said and dragged her out

“ eh what are you doing wait!” Mayu said

The same guy still waiting for Mayu . Mayu started trembling again and looked down.

“ It’s alright” Yuki said Mayu looked to Yuki’s face. Yuki was serious.

The guy started to go to their way . Mayu couldn’t face him so she closed her eyes .

 But a warm voice called her the owner of the voice was only Yuki.

“ Mayu!” Yuki called her again

Mayu looked to Yuki and Yuki said softly “ Mayu I love you”

“eh”   before being surprised by Yuki said to her she was even surprised when she felt a pair of lips kissing hers sweetly . Mayu’s eyes were open wide but the guy

faced the back of hers he didn’t saw it when he sow the kissing scene he walked away


<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

She kissed me. I don’t know what kind of fate this

<><>end of PVO<><>



“he left” Yuki said relived

Mayu was really surprised that she couldn’t  move

“ Mayu?” Yuki looked at Mayu who was all red


<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

I…. I for the first time… my first kiss




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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #25 on: December 08, 2012, 08:14:16 PM »
I LOVE IT!!!!! :inlove:

Ahahahah! Yuki!! :wub:

And Jurina, Yuko... :smhid
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #26 on: December 08, 2012, 09:22:14 PM »
kyaaaaaaa~~~~

Like that Yukiiiiiiii!!! good job tiger!!! *grin*

I just hope Mayu wont be mad or something....

Go Yuki go~~~~!!!!
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #27 on: December 08, 2012, 10:00:20 PM »
Wooooow! Yukirin taking the lead! *.*

That was a great update o/

I think Mayu should scold Yuki and Yuki should ran after Mayu *.*

My friend showed me the anime heuheuhe and I think it's a very good story. Keep going o/

Thank you for the update *.*

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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #28 on: December 08, 2012, 11:12:05 PM »
Ehh!!? Wow uh i need the next chapter!

I need yuki POV for explanation what she was doing to mayu awww its sweet,yuki stole mayu first kiss!


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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #29 on: December 09, 2012, 01:56:19 AM »
Wow this fic. is awesome can't wait for the next chapter!!!!


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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #30 on: December 09, 2012, 04:51:49 AM »
Asdfghjklqwertyuiopzxcvbnm!

I just hope Yukirin meant that kiss~ Bwahahaha!

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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #31 on: December 09, 2012, 04:54:57 AM »
Yuki looks so mature XDDD And there's so many characters XD

The new chapter is so cute, and Mayuyu lol at her reaction, she must be very shock. I wonder if someone in the school see them >:]

Thank you, please update soon

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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #32 on: December 09, 2012, 12:02:03 PM »
mayu needs to open up and makes more friends.

and yuki, she did that on purpose right? stealing someone's first kiss ... hahaha! winner!  :theking
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
« Reply #33 on: December 10, 2012, 02:21:58 AM »
Because it said 'you will see' and it made me laugh, I don't why xd
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
« Reply #34 on: December 11, 2012, 11:05:19 PM »
I'm sorry all I will only update the chapter I'm really busy thank you to all who commented and I'm sorry for who was waiting for something else
about Yuki she only kissed Mayu to save her or it isn't?  :nervous
I had a little I think this chapter will be boring  :catglare:




Chapter 4


<><>in karaoke<><>

“what song should we sing next?” a girl said

“ I wonder” an other girl said

“ hey Yuko-senpai  what are eating anyway?”

“this is delicious want some Harunya?” Yuko asked Haruna

“ you eat too much” Haruna said pouting

“what”

“did you see that commercial last night?” a girl said

“it was so cute wasn’t it?” Jurina said to the girl

“It was adorable!” the other girl said ( girls Jurina invited)

“ I told you.  you are eating too much!” Haruna said to Yuko

“ but Harunya I’m hungry..” Yuko  said

“ If you let me touch your boobs then I’ll stop eating” Yuko said smirking

“ forget it then” Haruna said and looked away

“ Harunya…” Yuko said sadly

“Watanabe-san did you choose a song?”  Rena asked Mayu

“ I can’t sing” Mayu said looking other way

“ I see.. here you go” Rena said and give the mic to Yuki

“ Mayu you’re not going to sing?”

“ you heard what a pity I wanted to listen to Watanabe-san’s voice singing” Rena said capped her two hands and smiled

Mayu kept staring to Yuki who was thinking. She was looking exactly to the lips of Yuki. Then she started blushing.

 She remembered how Yuki kissed her yesterday.

“ Mayu!”

“…”

“Mayu”

“…”

“ Mayu” Yuki kept calling for her but she didn’t answer so she got up and sited next to her .

“ let’s sing something together Mayu  okey? ” Yuki said showing the mic to Mayu . But Mayu was only foxed 

on the lips of the girl who is in front of her. Mayu's

face turned red again . when relized what she was thinking about and looking . She slapped Yuki’s hand which made

Yuki fall the mic of her hand. There was a silence on the room and looked to Mayu.  Mayu couldn’t beer it so she took her bag and run away.


<><>out on the way<><>

Mayu was really sad of what she did to Yuki a while ago. She felt embarrassed and guilty at the same time.

The kiss with Yuki was repeating again and again in her mind.


<><>flashback<><>

After the kiss. Mayu was really embarrassed and her face was a red to ears . She was standstill she couldn’t move.

“Mayu? What are you blushing for?” asked Yuki surprised

“eh!”

“ you know why I did it don’t you?” Yuki asked concerned

“ I know I did know you did it to get rid of that man ” Mayu shouted nervously

“ I know..” Mayu kept saying it but she was all red

“ don’t tell me this was your first.. sorry I-” Yuki said worried

“ It’s alright you don’t need to apologize!” Mayu kept shouting

“but-“

“ I told you it’s alright!” Mayu yelled

The silence reigned in the area it didn’t last long when Mayu broke that silence.

“ to tell you the truth I didn’t expect you to come”

“why? Is there a reason for me to not to come?” asked Yuki

“ I was happy when you called me. I was able to help you out” Yuki continued talking kindly

“ didn’t you need me?”

“ well I-I needed you this time!” Mayu shouted nervously

“ this time you say!” Yuki said

Mayu looked down.

“ then can I call you in return?” Yuki asked

“eh?”

“ call history” Yuki said smiling and showed her phone. Mayu pouted when she saw it.

“ I almost forgot”  Yuki said then she took one of the ice-cream and gave it to Mayu.

<><>end of flashback<><>

“Mayu!!!” someone shouting

Mayu turned her back and saw the person and whispered “ Yuki..”

Yuki run to Mayu and stopped in front of her.

“ aaah I’m exhausted” Yuki said try to catch breath

“Mayu let’s walk home together” Yuki suggested

“aaaah!! I-I’ll pay for my half of the ice-cream” Mayu said trying to look for her money on her bag

“ you don’t need to I already got something in return” Yuki said laughing 

 “ah!” Mayu looked to Yuki

“ your first kiss” Yuki said smiling

Mayu got surprised by what Yuki said and started blushing then she started walking and Yuki followed her.

<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

I can’t understand her. But I think I’ll trust her .

<><>end of Mayu’s PVO<><>


Mayu was reading a manga and waiting for a certain someone at the metro station

“ Mayu!!” Yuki shouted

“ you’re late” Mayu said angry

The metro was very busy of people.

“ are you alright Mayu” Yuki asked conserned

“un” Mayu answered but someone pushed her so Yuki her arms around her. Mayu started blushing.

* ringing alarm clock in the morning*

Mayu woke up from her sleeping .

“what was that?” Mayu said shocked of her dream


<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

Kashiwagi Yuki is the most popular girl in our school. Compared to her  I have no friends and don’t even exist. Yet…

<><>end of Mayu’s PVO<><>


<><> at school <><>

Mayu was putting her shoes in the locker .

“ good morning” someone said

Mayu saw it was Yuki she got nervous

“ W-what it!?”

“ didn’t you hear me calling you? Good morning” Yuki said smiling

“good morning” Mayu replayed looking other way

“ Yuki-senpai!!”

“ ah I coming then see you later Mayu” Yuki said and went to the source of the voice.

“ Watanabe-san!!” someone shouted

“ah” Mayu tourned her back

“who are you all? I only know that pervert” Mayu pointed to Yuko

“eeeh I said It wasn’t my fault really” Yuko said

“ apologise now Yuko!” Haruna said angry

“ but Harunya It wa-“

“ Now or I wont talk to you ever again!!”

“ Hai I’m really sorry about what I did that day” Yuko kneeled and said sorry to Mayu

“ It’s ok you don’t have to do it” Mayu said “ they are so weird” Mayu thought

“ how can you forget us we went to karaoke all together yesterday I’m Matsui Jurina you can

 I’m your classmate you can call me Jurina“ Jurina said with a cat smile

“ I’m Matsui Rena I’m Yukirin’s classmate” Rena said

“ you are siblings?” Mayu said and looked to the two Matsui

“ no we’re not!” Jurina shouted

“ I would never like to be to be relived to such a pimp girl” Rena said mad and walk away

“ Rena-chan wait I’m going before I go I’m Kojima Haruna I’m also Yuki’s classmate” She said and followed her

“Wait for ma Harunya don’t leave me alone” Yuko stand up and run after Haruna

“ Rena-chan why are you so cold always with me” Jurina said sobbing

“ they are all weird” Mayu thought and rolled her eyes


<><>at class<><>

“ yesterday I was surprised that you went home so suddenly last night” Jurina said

“I’m sorry” Mayu apologized  to Jurina

“ let’s go out again sometimes Yuki would be happy if you come”

“eh!”

“ I almost forget yesterday I bought this stuff on my way home I bought two I got one for you” Jurina said smiling

“ thank you”


I'm sorry for this sorry chapter but I hope you comment  :catglare:
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
« Reply #35 on: December 11, 2012, 11:51:12 PM »
Ahaaaaa! Mayu is jus too kawaiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
« Reply #36 on: December 12, 2012, 02:49:45 AM »
Mayu is getting soft, I see.


Good luck for your exam! Will be waiting for your update! :cow:

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Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
« Reply #37 on: December 13, 2012, 12:57:48 AM »
Hum I wonder if Rena would be jealous if she sees Jurina with Mayuyu


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« Reply #39 on: December 15, 2012, 05:00:21 AM »
not atsumina!!!

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