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Offline ZeriusLei

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You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« on: December 07, 2012, 01:12:48 PM »
As i promised to write a AtsuMina fanfic *thought would end up with drabble* ..
So, here it is! i only finished half of it, will upload the other half later.
Writing in phone is a very bad idea.
Pardon me for my grammar mistakes and inexperience enough in writing fanfics, especially AtsuMina.
I don't know much about them @@
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You're mine
1/2

Since today is an off day for all AKB48 members from training, Atsuko woke up pretty early.
'8am..'
She mumbled while reaching for her clock.
'Ma, i should wake Minami up and ask her to go out with me~' Thinked Atsuko while walking slowly towards Minami's room.
'Minami~ I'm coming in~'
She knocked the door twice before she walked in.
Takahashi Minami was on her bed sleeping soundly.
A cute snore can be heard.
Atsuko giggled.
Minami was wear a light blue- ish green pyjamas, sleep with a frog pose on her double size bed.
Atsuko walked and stopped beside Minami's bed.
She then laid a kiss on Takahashi Minami's cheek.
'I should take some picture.'
She smirked and took out her cellphone.
'E-eh?..'
Minami woke up as she felt that there's some flash.
'A-acchan?'
She stared at Atsuko, looking confused.
'Ohayou, Mi-na-mi~'
'M-Morning. *yawns* What are you doing in my room?'
Atsuko smiled at the midget.
'Waking my cute girlfriend up~'
Minami blushed madly.
She could feel that her cheeks going really, really red.
'So..'
'.. So?' Minami looked at Atsuko with' a questioned look.
'Where's my morning kiss?'
Atsuko flashed a smile.
'M-m.. Morning kiss?!'
'Yup~ I want my morning kiss~ If you don't give me one, i will take it myself~'
Minami was shocked for a moment and blushed again as she thinking wildly.
(Writers POV:*letting your imagination running wild eh, Minami?*)
'B.. bu--..'
Before Takahashi midget can find a reason to skip this morning kiss, Acchan had already sealed her lips and hers.
A few seconds later, Atsuko released her from the kiss.
'Yosh! I'll be making the breakfast. Once we finish the breakfast, we'll be going out. Get yourself ready, Mi-na-mi~'
Minami was dumbfounded there while Atsuko taking her leave to the kitchen.
'W-w...What.. What just happened?!'
She fainted.

(Writer's POV: *due to nosebleed, Midget? That's not a good idea. People might kill me for not finishing AtsuMina. *revives Minami*)

-------- End of 1/2----------
Alright o.o here's the first half.
How was it?
Idk. ;A;
And oh. The second part will come late because i am writing a smut WMatsui. *coughs*
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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #1 on: December 07, 2012, 01:25:04 PM »
Lol. minami is so cute. please continue...

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #2 on: December 07, 2012, 01:31:08 PM »
@chemicalstar: Ah, well.. I'm almost done with the second part. But it's really short, so i thought of making it longer. Might post it tomorrow. WMatsui smut version is 95% done. Would you like me to post it later? Owo
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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #3 on: December 07, 2012, 01:34:13 PM »
yey!atsumina!XD
I hope no one dies here!haha,
I have a trauma after reading ur kojiyuu fic,XD :doh:

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #4 on: December 07, 2012, 01:39:19 PM »
@Chichay12: dont worry xD You wont see anyone die here. Atsumina are mostly in romantic sense, so yeah. *wrote this based of observation* Smut version of WMatsui come first before i gonna continue the second part of this. Hence, please prepare extra bloodpack and tissues incase you died because of major bloodlost ;3
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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #5 on: December 07, 2012, 03:07:06 PM »
Ah Yeah an AtsuMina fic  :heart:

Acchan is really bold as always ^^

very nice fic I love it  :heart: :twothumbs

Please continue


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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #6 on: December 07, 2012, 04:22:15 PM »
Thanks for reading it.
Ah, btw.
I am so, so, so sorry for didnt read the rules i posted that stupid wmatsui of mine on the new topic.
In result.
I will punish myself and upload the part two of Atsumina within 1 and the half hour.
*rushes*
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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #7 on: December 08, 2012, 02:38:36 AM »
Cute~

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #8 on: December 08, 2012, 03:23:23 AM »
short but sweet :)

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #9 on: December 08, 2012, 06:23:06 AM »
jejejejej acchan.. always get what she wants right?

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #10 on: December 08, 2012, 08:11:02 AM »
Can't wait for the next update  XD

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #11 on: December 08, 2012, 04:01:11 PM »
Ahaha xD
I'm a person who always alck of imagination!
The electric got cut off yesterday so i wasnt able to finish it.
but dont worry, i continued it on my phone!
It's almost done ^^
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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #12 on: December 08, 2012, 04:53:19 PM »
I'm sorry about yesterday ! :kneelbow:
My electricity got cut offed for no reasons  :frustrated:
I've lost all my idea again  :gyaaah:
But it's okay, here's goes Part 2/2!
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Enjoy~!
*Pardon my mistakes*
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After Minami had brushed her teeth, make her bed and changed into her casual clothes, she walked out from her room and headed towards the kitchen.
She spotted the eggs and bacon on the table.
Without thinking, she ate it.
"Not bad.. Never knew Acchan's cooking would be this nice."
She mumbled to herself.
"I heard you, Minami. "
Minami turned and saw Atsuko smirking.
Atsuko was wearing one of her favourite casual clothes.
"I-i didn't mean it!"
Minami panicked.
"I know."
Atsuko smiled again.
"Are you done? If you're done, we're going out to date~"
"A.. a.. d-date?!"
Minami chocked on her food.
"Hey, Hey, Chillax, I'm not going to eat you. "
Atsuko laughed abit.
"I will be waiting you outside. Be fast."
Atsuko left the house after laughing.

A... A date? With Acchan!? Is this a dream!? Ow, ow. Minami, control yourself! Just act normal! Take a deep breathe!

Minami calmed down, washed the dishes and walk out to meet Acchan outside.
'Minami, you're done already?'
'Yeah.'
'Alright then, let's go!'
So, they went to a random pet shop in Osaka..
'Minami~! This doggie is so cute~'
'It is.' Minami nodded while looking around the shop.
'It's as cute as you!'
Atsuko giggled, leaving Minami blushing at a side.
'Mou, Acchan!'
'Ehhehe~'
Minami suddenly made a troll face.
'Minami, what are you doing?'
'Eh? It wasnt funny?'
'Uhhhmm~ Were you trying to make a joke just now?'
Acchan looked at her.
She nodded.
'Ah, gomen~'
'It's okay.'
Minami said while letting out a sigh.
She wonder if Atsuko remembered her birthday.
'Ne, Minami? Let's go eat?'
'Okay.'
So they went to had their lunch somewhere then went shopping and bought alot of stuffs. *Acchan stuffs, to be exact*
'Alright, last destination . . Close your eyes Minami~'
'Huh?'
'Just closed it already!'
Atsuko pouted.
'Okay, okay!'
Minami closed her eyes and felt a cloth is covering her eyes.
'E-ei? Acchan? Why did you blindfold me?'
'It's a secret, now lets go~'
Atsuko called a taxi and pushed Minami inside.
They reached back to their house.
Althought Minami is blindfolded, her instinct told her that it was their house.
'Accha---'
'Shhhh, Minami~'
She wanted to ask but stopped by Atsuko.
'Uhmmm . . . Could it be that she actually remembered?' Minami thought in her head.
After walking up for awhile, they finally reached their apartment.
Atsuko opened the door and pushed Minami in.
'Alright, you can open it now~'
Minami tooked the cloth that been blindfold her all these time down.
'Surprise! Happy birthday Minami~!'
Everyone was in their house.
Yuko, Haruna, Sae, Yukirin, Mayu, Mariko, Miichan, Sayaka, Ono, Meetan, Tomochin, Kasai and others are all present.
Minami was shocked.
Is this why Atsuko had asked her to go out early in the morning?
Is it because everyone wanted to give her a surprise?
She cried of happiness.
'Hey, hey Midget! Dont cry! We don't want our birthday girl to cry on this day!' Miichan teased the little captain infront of her.
'S-shut up..! I'm not that short as you think!'
The midget wiped off her tears and protest.
'Right Acchan?'
She turned around to get Atsuko's help, but the ace is nowhere to be seen.
' .. Where's Acchan?'
Minami asked everyone and looked around.
'Who cares, Birthday girl? You can find her later! Now come open your gifts!' Mariko pulled Minami in front of a pile of gifts.
'W-woah.. That's alot..'
Minami was lost of words.
'Of course! 17 from NMB, 24 from SKE and others are from us!
They opened all the gifts together.
Afterwards, Yuko suddenly yelled and tried to catch everyone's attention.
"Alright~! Attention ladies! Here goes the last present! "
"Okay~!" Everyone replied together.
"Huh? There's more?" Minami looked around, she couldn't find any unwrapped present.
"Yep! Last and the best one~!" Yuko flashed a smile.
"Hello, hello~ Excuse me kudasai~ "
Jurina shouted from the kitchen while helping Rena to push a huge present that is even taller and bigger than Sayaka's body.

What is this..? And wait, since when they are here!?


"Alright Takamina~! Go open it!" Yuko gave a small push on Minami's back.
"Uhm... Okay.."
Minami saw a door like thing on the present and opened it.
"Otanjoubi Omedetou, Mi-na-mi~~"
It was Acchan inside.
"Eh.. Eh?! What is the meaning of this!?"
"Baka, i'm giving myself to you!" Atsuko hit lightly on Minami's head and let out a sigh.
"A-ah, i see.."
"What, you're not happy with this present?"
Atsuko glanced at Minami with a unpleasant look.
"N-no, it's not like that!"
Yuko decided to disturb the couple.
"Well, Takamina~ If you don't want her, i'll take her with all my love~"
Yuko claimed while hugging Atsuko.
"Hey, Yuko! Get off my girl!"
Minami yelled and tried to make Yuko release Atsuko.
"Wooh! Did you heard that? She said "Get off my girl!" !! "
The crowd exclaimed.
"Yuuchan, get here. Now." Haruna appeared and pulled Yuko away by pulling her ears.
"Itai itai itai~! it hurts NyanNyan! Be gentle!"
"In your face! " Miichan teased.
"Shut up, Gachapin." Mariko said.
"Hey!"
*crowd voices*

"So~"
Atsuko voiced out.
"Eh? Hai, Acchan?" Minami replied.
" 'you girl' , eh? That so sweet, Minami~"
"Erkk--" Minami blushed again.
"If i'm yours, who do you belong to?"
Atsuko asked on purpose.
"Y-yours.."
Minami looked away.
Atsuko let out a smile and hugged Takamina.
"You're mine."
She whispered.

"Hey, stop loveydovey there, come eat! Sae and Yuki cooked alot of nice food!
"Yeah! You dont even see NyanNyan do this to me!"
Haruna knocked Yuko's head with her fist.
"Ouch! That hurts!"
Everyone laughed.
"Should we go then, Atsuko? "
"Un!"
Minami holded Atsuko's hand and walked to their friend.



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There!
Part 2 is done!
Enjoy!
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« Reply #13 on: December 08, 2012, 07:25:45 PM »
aww so sweet... love it!! i laught about all present by ske and nmb girls.. seriously i never think about it..


jeje in that kojiyuu moment.. jajaj love it too.. awww my atsumina keeps strong like ever!

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« Reply #14 on: December 08, 2012, 09:34:16 PM »
Quote
So~"
Atsuko voiced out.
"Eh? Hai, Acchan?" Minami replied.
" 'you girl' , eh? That so sweet, Minami~"
"Erkk--" Minami blushed again.
"If i'm yours, who do you belong to?"
Atsuko asked on purpose.
"Y-yours.."
Minami looked away.
Atsuko let out a smile and hugged Takamina.
"You're mine."
She whispered.



THIS KILLED ME
/DEAD
OH WAIT I CANT BE DEAD I STILL NEED TO READ MORE ATSUMINA!!!!
TO THE AUTHOR..
GREAT JOB!
MUAH!

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #15 on: December 09, 2012, 01:31:10 AM »
WOOohOooo!
No one dies at its a happy ending!XD
this is so cool!
ATSUMINA!!

Thank you for the update!

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« Reply #16 on: December 09, 2012, 01:33:32 AM »
really like when yuko is so perverted.  :lol:
and nyanyan hit her or do something else , is so fun  XD  :lol:

so depraved yuko .. Go acchan, be the best present for Minami!   :w00t:

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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #17 on: December 09, 2012, 04:35:26 PM »
Yuko just really need to learn how to not to be perverted before Haruna start to hit her head till she goes nuts xD
And yep, No sad ending in this AtsuMina~
More like.. Idk how to make a sad one for them because i dont know much about them xD
Thanks for reading everyone~
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Re: You're mine. -AtsuMina-?
« Reply #18 on: December 17, 2012, 01:51:00 PM »
very sweet fic there..

Looking forward to your other fic.

and Thank you for this story

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« Reply #19 on: December 17, 2012, 02:20:03 PM »
@cisda: Thanks! x3 I'm actually trying to work on a long wmatsui fic. But the korea temperature is freezing my imagination *-*;; So cold @_@~
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