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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena, JuriMayu)
« Reply #20 on: January 02, 2013, 05:47:00 AM »
----------Chapter 5----------


--Mayu's house--


"Nee Mayu-chan wanna do something?" Jurina said as she rolled at the floor while reading a manga


"But I'm too lazy to go outside!" Mayu said


"Please Mayu-chan let's go outside!" Jurina said


"Where are we going?" Mayu said


"Wanna go to the park?" Jurina said


"Don't wanna it's too hot!" Mayu said


"Amusement park?"


"Not interested"


"Toy Store?"


"Nope!"


"AnimeSho" Jurina said (AnimeSho is an anime store that I made up)


"Okay!" Mayu said


"So to AnimeSho it is!" Jurina said dragging Mayu out of her house


--Mall--


"Excuse me have you seen this girl?" Ryuu said showing the lady in front of him a picture of Yuki


"Nope!" The lady said


"Have you seen this girl?"


"I saw her went outside just a minute ago" The guard said


"Thank you!!" Ryuu said


Ryuu went outside and looked for Yuki but he couldn't find her so he went back to where Kirito is and brought him back home with him then he left Kirito with Akane and he went back to his car to look for Yuki


"Where are you?" Ryuu said


--JuriMayu--


"Mayu-chan are you in love with someone?" Jurina said


"No!" Mayu said


"Why?"


"Because I haven't met anyone that's my type"


"What's your type Mayu-chan?"


"I like somebody who's nice, energetic, cool, good-looking and smart!"


"Hmmmm"


"What about you Jurina-chan?"


"I like the cute type, smart, and somebody that I can spoil!"


"So you're gonna spoil your boyfriend?"


"I don't really like boys"


"Then what do you like?"


"I like girls!"


"Oh ok!"


"Wait Mayu-chan did you heard what I said?"


"Yeah  I did, you said you like girls"


"You're fine with it?"


"Yeah! I mean whether you like boys or girls Jurina is still Jurina no matter what"


"Mayu!!! I sure did found myself a good best friend!" Jurina said hugging Mayu


"Get off of me! It's too hot!!!" Mayu said trying to push Jurina away from her


--Meanwhile--


Yuki was cornered in a dark alley


"Hey girl! you still owe me some money!" A big guy said while holding a long metal stick on his hands


"If you don't give us the money you know what will happen right?" The guy continued


"I don't owe you money! He does!" Yuki said


"Well he's dead so you're gonna have to pay us!"


"I don't have no money!" Yuki said


"Then you give us no choice. GET HER!!!" The big guy said and after that the guys ran to Yuki swinging their weapons


"You don't know who your dealing with!" Yuki said as she entered her Black mode and withing 8 seconds 20 yankees are down


"Train harder and after that come back to challenge me again" Yuki said (Her back's facing the yankees)


"Yuki watch out!" A voice said but it was too late Yuki was already stabbed when he finished the sentence


"Rena?" was the last words that Yuki said before she fainted then silence came and after that a really frightening laugh enveloped the silence
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That's it for chapter 5  :hee:
Hope you liked it! :byebye:

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #21 on: January 02, 2013, 10:29:31 AM »
-FoF-san-


-Nice chapter!


-Thank you for update :)


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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #22 on: January 02, 2013, 04:35:15 PM »
No Yuki!!!!
Is Jurina Center and Mayu Nezumi?

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #23 on: January 03, 2013, 03:38:29 PM »
OMG, Yuki have been stabbed  :on kimbo: :on kimbo:
So, when will Mayu meet Yuki and Jurina meet Rena ? :on drink:
I so curious  :tantrum:
Wait for your new update :)
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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #24 on: January 04, 2013, 07:02:11 AM »
-Hello-

-Sorry for late comment-

-By the way, It’s so sad that Yuki got stabbed ?

-Please update!

-Thank You

-this chapter is nice!

-Please make appearance of the Queens


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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #25 on: January 05, 2013, 02:33:16 PM »
OMG Yuki have been stabbed  :OMG:
When will Yuki meet Mayu and Rena also? :dunno:
I'm so curious about what'll happen next :prayers:
Hope you will update soon :)
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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #26 on: January 05, 2013, 04:40:07 PM »
nice story..please continue to update.  :thumbsup
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 5- (YukiRena)
« Reply #27 on: January 10, 2013, 04:52:38 PM »
Hahaha... Geki is back to kill....

Oh No why... Black need to be stabbed...

Kirito is funny... same with Jurina

Mayu is a good friend... to Jurina.... but Jurina seems to like Mayu type of girl...

Thank you for the story

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 6- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #28 on: July 22, 2013, 07:35:14 AM »

Uwaa~~~ It's been ages since I last updated this fic! :mon huh2: So much for saying that I'm a fast updater (Well I used to be until I got all those writer's block :mon dunno: ) I'm truly deeply sorry minna~~~ :kneelbow:

---Chapter 6---

“Nee~ okotteru? Aha! Ahahaha!!!”

“Oi! If you don't want to get killed you better stay out of my way” The guy who stabbed Yuki said as he walked pass Geki

“The one who should be scared here is you” Geki said in a serious tone

“Huh? What did you just said” The guy turned around but fell on the groud instantly “Ite!!! What's your problem?”

*Clack* *Clack* “Nee~ okotteru?” Geki started biting his nails while kicking the guy's stomach until he coughs up blood. Soon enough Geki's face is getting more and more blood stain

“Teme!!!” The guy managed to stand up with his bloody mouth

“I'll show you fear” Geki said followed by the usual creepy laugh. Geki pulled the guy's collar and started punching him over and over and over and over. The guy didn't stood a chance against the fearsome girl that won't stop laughing

“Please stop... I won't do it again... *cough* *cough* let me go... please it hurts”

The laugh subsided and the alley is now covered with silence

“Like I care” Geki said and resumed laughing. When Geki got bored she threw the guy on the side and picked up a stick. Geki stared at it while biting her nails and as soon as she broke it in half she started laughing again. Geki slowly went to the guy

“Nee~ kore na~ni?” Geki asked as he faced the pointy part of the stick to the eyes of the guy who's begging for forgiveness

“P-please no!!!”

“Kore na~ni?”

“A-a-a joke?”

“Buu buu!!! Wrong~ you need to do your homework properly... you need discipline... hmm I wonder what type of discipline you need?” Geki said pretending to think and as he looked at the stick he flashed his crazy smile “Nee~ kore dou~?” Geki started laughing and as every seconds passed the pointy part of the stick was getting closer and closer to the guy's eyes

“No... AHHH!!!! Yamette kure!!!”

“RYUU-NII!!!” A voice interrupted Geki as Geki looked towards the source of the voice. All of the sudden Geki dropped the stick and his eyes started going at every direction

“No... stop!!! STOP!!!!!” Geki held onto his head really tight and let out a scream as he fell on the cold hard ground

“Ryuu-nii!!!” The girl ran up to Geki and looked at the bloody guy that Geki was beating up “I hope you learned your lesson” The girl said to the shaking guy

“Jurina!”

“Mayu!” Mayu came running towards Jurina's direction but was stopped by a certain body of a girl. Mayu looked down and gasped

“Jurina! There's a wounded girl over here!” Mayu said. Jurina stood up and ran towards Mayu

“Ah! Yuki-san!”

“Yuki-san?”

“Yeah! She's Ryuu-nii's girlfriend! So that's why Ryuu-nii acted like that” Jurina said and looked back but she saw the guy that was trembling getting ready to stab the unconscious Geki

“Looks like you still haven't learn your lesson” Jurina said as she came running towards the two and landing a punch at the guy holding a knife “Well then let me teach you some extra lesson” Jurina said as she popped her fist along with her neck “ORA!!!” Jurina sent a fist in the air that was going to the direction of the guy's bloody face but was stopped by a palm. Jurina looked up and saw a stylish girl with brown hair and when she opened her mouth her fangs can be seen

“Don't waist your energy with a small fry like him... go help your dachi first”

Jurina was about to say something but she was stopped when the girl stared at her it's as if something inside Jurina stopped her “Hai” Jurina said and helped Mayu with Yuki

The stylish girl walked towards the unconscious guy and looked at his face “Geki?” Geki opened his eyes and started laughing while biting his nails “Nee~ okotteru?”

“You never changed... except for your appearance that is” The stylish girl said smiling. Then once she turned around and faced the guy that was trying to escape the smile faded

“Oi! Don't think i'll let you off that easily” The girl said as she kicked the guy's chest and pushed him against the wall only to hit him very hard on his spot “Oi! Chibi! Let's go!” The girl said

“Chibi?” Mayu said in a question tone

“Ah! Wait! Who's that on your shoulders?”

“Yuki-san!” Jurina said

“Tsk! Oi! I don't care anymore if you're human or not. Now that I know what you did you're a dead meat” the girl said as she kicked the guy even more

“Shibuya... don't touch him”

“Geki?”

“He's mine... take Black to the hospital... here's the key to my car” Geki said between laughs

“Got it” Shibuya said and left the guy to Geki's care

“Oi! Chibis! Let's go!” Shibuya said. Mayu and Jurina nodded and followed Shibuya while carrying Yuki

“Now that we're alone... time to face your death” Geki said as she marked a trail of blood on the guy's face

---

“Shibuya-san?”

“What?”

“Are you sure you know how to drive?” Jurina asked

“Of course... who do you think you're talking to?” Shibuya said as she started the engine. Jurina sighed in relief and was closed her eyes as she leaned back on the leather seat, but then.

CRASH!!!

Jurina jumped up and looked back only to see Shibuya hit the vehicle that's parked behind their car

“Ano~ are you really sure?” Jurina asked

“Oi! Chibi! If you don't shut you mouth I'm going to seal that with a stapler” Shibuya said as she gave Jurina one of those looks

“Gomenasai~” Jurina said and looked down

“The cops are here” Mayu said in a bored tone

“Heh~ so what if the cops are here? Wait! The cops you said??? Yabai! We have to get out of here!” Shibuya said as she stepped on the gass sending them flying

“SHIBUYA-SAN~~~” Jurina yelled from the backseat

As for Mayu she's just seating at the back with Jurina

“Wait! Where did we put Yuki-san again?” Mayu asked

“Ah!” Shibuya and Jurina said

“YABAI!!!! Why did we put her in the trunk???” Jurina yelled

“WHO THE HECK SAID TO PUT BLACK IN THE TRUNK???” Shibuya yelled

Mayu and Jurina looked at each other shaking their head

“YOU DID!!!!” Mayu and Jurina yelled at the same time.

Shibuya stepped on the gas harder the car went so fast that they didn't noticed the 'road work ahead sign'

“SHIBUYA-SAN!!! WORKERS! WORKERS! YOU'RE GOING TO RUN OVER THEM!!!” Jurina yelled

“I KNOW THAT JUST KEEP YOUR HORSES DOWN!” Shibuya yelled with her eyes concentrating at the view in front of her

The car drove past the workers and to the road that leads to the hospital
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Wmatsui22: Thank you!! And I'm deeply sorry for not updating this for the longest amount of time
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cisda83: I'm am very sorry for making you wait for a very long time~~~
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Ok you're all probably getting sick of me saying I'm sorry but this is the very last time so please let me say this... I am very sorry~~~ (I just now realized how fearsome a writer's block can be)  :mon POd:  (Next update will be soon (Probably after 2 or 3 days)

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Yuki got stabbed! :shocked

Shibuya came to helped JuriMayu to bring Yuki to hospital..

But Shibuya and JuriMayu moments.. Just. . . ↓

Ahahahaha~ Ohman! Can't stop from laughing.. :lol:

I even forgot that Yuki is bleeding to death and she's in the TRUNK.. :banghead: Gomennasai~♪XD

Looking forward for more.. :fap

Thank you for the update :bow: :twothumbs

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Oho~ Geki fearsome side :ding:
Yeah! Teach him a hell lesson, Geki!! :scolding:
How can he just stab Yuki?  :temper: He's Yuki's boyfriend, right? :on voodoo:
Anyway, Shibuya call JuriMayu is chibi~ Love it :on lol:
Shibuya surely very easy to forget type :wahaha:
Poor Yuki, being stabbed then being put in the car trunk by Shibuya :bigdeal:
You don't need to sorry too much :whistle:
I'll wait for your update impatiently :shifty:
Update ASAP, please :kneelbow:
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I can't believe I didn't comment on this...
well, then again that was my time as a silent reader hehe~
so great
Shibuya shows up~~~!!!!!
I love their recklessness~~
Gekikara will make me happy just seeing her~

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #32 on: July 25, 2013, 06:50:17 AM »

---Chapter 7---

That same night Geki went home... walking

“Papa!!!” Kirito came running towards Geki and hugged him causing the both of them to stumble but Geki got his balance fast enough so they won't fall

“Papa!  Where's mama?”

“Mama's not coming home tonight and like I said I'm not your papa” Geki said as he leaned down and rested his hands on Kirito's shoulder

“Geki-sama! Did you get into another fight again?” Akane asked as she came rushing with a wet towel to cleans off the blood on Geki's face. Geki looked the other way biting his lower lip “There! You're not Geki-sama anymore! You're Ryuu-sama!”

“Nee, Akane... is it okay if Kirito sleeps with you tonight? I really have to go see her”

“I understand... don't worry Kirito-sama will be just~ fine”

“Got it... I'll be back by tomorrow” Ryuu said as he walked towards the door

“Kirito-sama... let's go read a story about birds” Akane said with her hands on to of her knees to support the upper part of her body

“Don't wanna”

“Why?”

“I don't like birds”

“Don't worry... once you finished listening to the story you'll like them!” Akane said as she started escorting Kirito to the room. Ryuu smiled a little as he turned the door knob leading to the garage. There he took another key from his pocket and pushed a button as the blue motorcycle lights up. He put on the blue helmet and rode the motorcycle to the hospital.

Once he reached the hospital Ryuu ran around to the counter and slammed the surface of it

“Where's Kashiwagi Yuki's room?”

“How are you related to her sir?” The nurse asked

“I'm her friend”

“She's at room 202”

“Thanks” Ryuu ran to the elevator and pushed the button repeatedly in a very fast phase but it was too slow so Ryuu ran to the fire exist and ran up to the fourth floor. Once he reached the fourth floor  Ryuu turned the knob and ran to the said room. On the way there Ryuu bumped into somebody and ended up falling on the floor with him on top. Ryuu opened his eyes and saw a familiar face

“Itai~ what just happened?” The girl asked with her eyes still closed and when she opened it “Yo! Geki!”

“Don't... Yo! Me! Where's Black?” Ryuu asked

“Oh! About that! Don't worry the doctor said it wasn't too deep so she'll be able to go home by next week”

“NEXT WEEK????? Why that slow? I also got stab but it only took me a day to heal!”

“But that's only because you're practically a monster... anyway mind if you get off me?”

“Oh! Right” Ryuu stood up and offered his hand to the girl

“Anyway... here's your key and I think I might have scratched it a little. Before I forget, next week at your house seven p.m sharp be sure to be home with Black by then” The girl said and walked away

“Wait! Shibuya!” Ryuu called out but the girl already disappeared. Ryuu shook his head, turned around and ran towards the room. When he got there

“Ryuu-nii!” Jurina ran up to him while Mayu's just sitting down and she looks like she's deep in thoughts while looking at the sleeping Yuki. “You're late! We've been waiting for you for a long~ time!”

“How is she?” Ryuu asked looking at the girl laying on the bed

“She's sleeping right now... the doctor said it's not a big deal so~ yeah!” Jurina said jumping up and down. Ryuu rested his hand on top of Jurina's head and pushed it down to keep Jurina from jumping. Mayu stood up and stood beside Jurina

“So you're her rumored boyfriend huh?” Mayu said in a low tone while looking at Ryuu then the dreadful silence arrived. Yuki opened her eyes and moaned.

“Where am I?” Yuki asked. Once Mayu heard the noise that came out from the girl she grabbed Jurina's hand and dragged her out of the room without looking back

“We'll leave the both of you alone for now” Jurina said and closed the door

“You're at the hospital... are you hurting anywhere?” Ryuu asked as he took the nearest chair to seat on

“No... I don't feel anything right now... What happened to me?”

“Nee... Yuki... why did you lied?”

“Rena what are you talking about?”

“The guy that stabbed you... it's him... you said he's dead! Then why was he there?”

“Can we just talk about this later?”

“Yeah you're right... let's just talk about this later” Geki said as he stood up and headed to the door

“Rena!”

“It's Ryuu... not Rena” Geki said and left without looking at Black

“Ryuu-nii!!” Jurina jumped from her seat and landed in front of Ryuu

“I'm going for a walk” Ryuu said and walked away leaving Jurina who's just dumbfounded and Mayu who's reading a manga that nobody knows where she pulled out from

“Mayu-chan! Let's go check on Yuki-san!” Jurina said and dragged Mayu back to the room. As they walked in Mayu covered her whole face with the manga that she was reading

“Jurina-chan! Who's that cute little girl with you?” Yuki asked

“Mayu-chan!”

“Mayu-chan... Why are you covering your face with a manga? Are you shy?”

“Come on Mayu take it off” Jurina said and tried to take the manga away from Mayu but Mayu won't let go of it... in the end Jurina got her way by tickling the little girl and once her face was uncovered Mayu let go of the manga and covered her face with both of her hands.

“Mayuyu?” Yuki said a little surprised

“Yo~ Yukirin” Mayu dropped one of her hand and the other is rubbing the back of her neck

“EHH???? YOU KNOW EACH OTHER???” Jurina yelled while the two just nodded awkwardly

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Ryuu took the elevator down to the lobby and walked to the parking lot to get some drinks from the vending machine that's placed not too far away from his motorcycle. One Ryuu got four drinks he walked around a little more and saw a familiar car. Ryuu walked towards it and dropped all four of the cans.

“WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO MY CAR?????” Ryuu yelled
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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #33 on: July 25, 2013, 07:16:48 AM »
Aww.. Rena worried about Yuki's condition..

And Yuki just pushed Rena away :O Ohwell..

How? When? Mayu and Yuki met already! :?

Ah! Poor car! Still in one piece.. I guess :oops: *clank~ rolling tin can* :shocked

Thank you for the update :bow: :twothumbs

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #34 on: July 25, 2013, 01:42:15 PM »
Does Yuki and Mayuyu know each other?

Lol I wonder what Shibuya did with Ryuu's car xD

Update soon I can't wait!

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #35 on: July 25, 2013, 04:13:42 PM »
Rena's surely very worried about Yuki's condition :mon star:
Juirna's, well... being Jurina :mon sweat:
Mayu and Yuki knew each other :mon wtf: Ex-girlfriend :mon fan:
What's happen to Rena's car :mon huh2:
Shibuya or someone did something on it :mon dunno:
Kirito calls Rena papa :mon thumb:
Akane's such a birds lover :mon speechless:
Anyway, update soon, please :mon pray2: or I'll come to your house :mon worklate: :mon cweepy:
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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #36 on: July 26, 2013, 01:46:05 AM »
it's ok, I'm evenworse at writing dark stuff... cuz it always turns out like weird.... yeah.. your stuff is fine
the ending make me go like.... [...] Geki's car.... am I supposed to laugh or feel bad for Geki's car...
Hehehe~ Kirito's papa~~ of course, Geki-papa and Black-mama
Black-mama will take longer to heal...
OMG... Mayuyu knows yukirin... Well, not so shocking, but worrying?
Don't tear Yuki-Rena apart!! Though there might be drama... hehehe
Even though I ship any pairings between Jurina, Mayu, Rena, and Yuki

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #37 on: July 26, 2013, 02:48:54 AM »
 :thumbup this is what i was waiting,im glad. Thank you for update

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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 7- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #38 on: July 26, 2013, 04:05:22 PM »
I just read whole story now.
And it is awesome. Well I prefer wmatsui. But if Rena is happy I'm happy.
Poor car. :P
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Re: The Greatest Emotion -Chapter 8- (YukiRena/GekiBlack)
« Reply #39 on: August 03, 2013, 06:06:35 AM »

---Chapter 8---

“EHH???? YOU KNOW EACH OTHER???” Jurina yelled while the two just nodded awkwardly 

“JURINA!!!!” Ryuu came in yelling and shook Jurina by her shoulder

“HA~I???” Jurina asked with shaky voice (Mainly because Ryuu's shaking her)

“What happened to my car???”

“You let Shibuya-san drive it and that's what happened... case closed” Mayu said coldly

“Who is she?” Ryuu asked pocking the cheek of the emotionless Mayu

“My best friend Watanabe Mayu... that coincidentally knows your girlfriend Kashiwagi Yuki” Jurina said crossing her arms

“Yuki? She's not my girlfriend” Ryuu said pointing his thumbs towards Yuki

“Then what are you?” Mayu asked

“Just friends” Ryuu said as he walked to the door to get the cans and tossed a soda at Jurina

“Friends~ yeah like I'll believe that” Mayu said as she opened her hands catching an orange flavored soda and from the corner of her eye she saw Ryuu tossed a bottle of water at Yuki

“Mayu-chan~” Jurina said hinting the smaller girl that she's talking a little bit too much

“Just speaking the truth”  Mayu shrugged her shoulders and drank the beverage

“Why do I only get water?” Yuki asked

“Patients should not complain about getting water instead of soda” Ryuu said and sat on the nearest chair as he pump up the tab of the soda that he's about to drink while Yuki pouts “So Mayu-chan how did you and Jurina met?” Ryuu asked. Mayu looked at Jurina as if telling her to answer for her

“Etto~ we met last three years at the net. When you moved from your old house that's when I realized that Mayu-chan lives close to your new one so I decided to drop by to introduce myself and that's how we met!” Juria said swinging one of her arms around Mayu's neck

“And how did you met that girl over there?” Ryuu asked looking at the pouting Yuki

“Oh! Would you look at that! It's already late! I guess I have to go home... Bye!” Mayu said and attempted to run away from the group but Ryuu suddenly grabbed her by her wrist

“Let me drop you off” Ryuu said with a smirk

“I want to go to!!!” Jurina said jumping up and down

“No~ you stay here... somebody needs to look after her” Ryuu said and Jurina pouted “Not gonna work” Ryuu said and dragged Mayu out of the room

In the room Jurina and Yuki are having an awkward moment between them due to the silence as for Ryuu and Mayu... they're just walking towards Ryuu's motorbike and neither one of them is saying a word.

---

After the long ride on Ryuu's motorbike Mayu was confused of where they are.

“Were are we?” Mayu asked as she looked below them sparkling with lights

“Hmm??? We're at the top of a mountain... This is my secret spot, it's pretty down there, isn't it?” Ryuu said looking down at the city lights


“Yeah sure” Mayu said

“Why do you look so blank and emotionless. You're like a cyborg, pretty but have nothing in here” Ryuu said pointing at his chest

“And why are you so annoying?” Mayu said back

“See!!! Those eyes looks too deep and somehow lonely”

“Just get to the point” Mayu said

“Okay if you wanna do it that way” Ryuu's facial suddenly changed to being serious “How did you and Yuki met?” Ryuu asked as he rested his hand on top of Mayu's shoulder as their eyes met one another

“None of your business, now can you drive me home?” Mayu said as walked towards the motorbike but Ryuu grabbed her by her wrist again

“All you're doing is nothing but running, answer my question”

“Don't touch me!” Mayu said and freed herself from Ryuu's iron grip

“I said how did the two of you met?” Ryuu yelled as he rested his hand on top of Mayu's shoulder as their eyes met one another

At the hospital Jurina decided to break the ice cold silence between her and Yuki

“Yuki-san, how did you and Mayu-chan met?” Jurina suddenly yelled with her hands leaning against her knees

Red = Mayu
Blue = Yuki

Mayuyu and I

Yukirin is

are just friend

my ex girlfriend

There's nothing between us

She's my everything

“Yuki-san! Are you sure you're just friends?” Jurina is so serious that she's not even blinking anymore

“Yeah! We're just friends and besides Mayuyu is three years younger than me how can I possibly go beyond being friends? That would get me a free ride to jail and no way out” Yuki said with a smile but she's not looking at Jurina's eyes.

Jurina sighed in relief as she sat back down and closed her eyes in a brief moment “I'm so glad~”

“Why did you asked?”

“Eh? N-n-nothing ehe..ehehehe” Jurina said rubbing the back of her neck while Yuki just smiles

---

“Ex? What happened? Why did you broke up?” Ryuu asked as he let go of Mayu's shoulder

“Since she met that guy we started arguing, she started fighting again, endangering her own life. I tried to stop her but apparently that just made things between us worst. She never listened to me, no matter how many times I warn her or stop her it was no use. One night she came knocking on my house's door telling me that we're done, and she left without even telling me a reason why. I went out looking for her days after days, weeks after weeks, and I even went months of searching for her! Two year after I found out that she got a child and the father was that guy. I got so mad that I decided to go after him. Once I found him charged into him not thinking about the consequences. I ended up with my body covered with bruises, my blood spilled everywhere, broken legs and fractured ribs. It took me around 6 to 8 months to heal not including my bruises, but even during that time she never showed herself, she never came to visit me, but even so I still can't forget her” This time Mayu grabbed Ryuu's collar and pulled him towards her as she started smiling in a creepy way “Yukirin's mine. I won't hand her over to you”

“You're too young for her, give it up” Ryuu's eyebrows met in the middle while his eyes are examining the brown orbs that are glaring intensely at him. The once emotionless face turned into the kind of face that you don't want to mess with

'I know those eyes. Those eyes... Gekikara also have them eyes that are full of hatred, sadness, loneliness, and all sorts of negative emotion bunched up together, Mayu could you be-

Ryuu's thoughts were interrupted as the smaller girl collapsed

“What in the world's happening here?” Ryuu asked as he carried the smaller girl and put her on the motorcycle. Ryuu made sure Mayu wouldn't fall as he hopped on the vehicle. He started the engine and took off.

From afar somebody's watching the two riding the motorbike

“Being too comfortable are we?............. Gekikara wait till you see my trump card”

---

At that night Yuki couldn't sleep for some reason

"Shibuya-san~ watch out for the people~" Yuki looked behind her and saw the sleeping Jurina

"Sleep talking... Shibuya I think you need some serious driving lessons" Yuki mumbled
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kenjoy12: LOL yeah~ the car is 'barely' in one piece actually  :nervous  Hope you liked this chapter  ;)
WotaOtaku~: Yes Yuki and Mayu knows each other  :) Sorry for the wait hope you liked this chapter :D
leEwẬy: How did you know that they were girlfriends?  :?  What??? you'll go to my house??? Please don't kill me!!! :panic:
Shinoki: LOL thank you but your Aitakatta fic is good though (Waiting for the second season  :twisted: ) Anout YukiRena... hmmm... I'll think about it  :twisted:
Kazan: ahh!!! I'm sorry for making you wait~  :bow:  Hope you liked this one too (With the mysterious person at the ending)  :twisted:
Zita: Wmatsui~ Hmmm~ Let's just see how the story goes  :P  Hope you liked this chapter~  :D
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