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Re: My Tutor is an IDOL!? (AiNana) [Announcement] =Dropped=
« Reply #20 on: July 05, 2013, 05:58:43 PM »
Uwoooogh!!  NOOO Dx you cant do this xd MIMMS arent finished yet xd amakuchi saaaan.. Whaey? :cry:

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Re: My Tutor is an IDOL!? (AiNana) [Announcement] =Dropped=
« Reply #21 on: July 06, 2013, 04:07:47 PM »
Uwoooogh!!  NOOO Dx you cant do this xd MIMMS arent finished yet xd amakuchi saaaan.. Whaey? :cry:


Please reread the post, okay?


"To answer your question, I have officially graduated as a writer and any further updates will be done as long as my laziness isn't present. TGTGA and MIMMS will be updated because... Erm... Ask GinkoX. Wait. A reason will be... Because those 2 are requests and therefore can't be dropped unless the requester told me to do so. So yeah, Imma update them when I have time. And when this RETIRED BASTARD'S LAZINESS DOESN'T ATTACK."

So... It's impossible for me to drop those 2 ficts, okay? ( = _ =' )

And since I have written this, I would like to announce that a new fict will instead be placed here and it's a YAMADA NANA X OGASAWARA MAYU FICT. NOT SURE ABOUT THE NUMBER OF CHAPTERS BUT IT'S UNDER DEVELOPMENT. This fict was requested by my sister before my graduation. And thus, I am obliged to write it as a fict exchange.

SO PLEASE STAY TUNED.

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[A/N: Requested by my sister GinkoX, as a payment for my fict request. She told me to drop MTIAI and do this shit instead so yeah, I'm writing this for compensation. OTL]

 

In Namba Academy: Cafeteria...

Yamada Nana POV...

 

Loving someone... Is probably one of my hatest things to do. He broke my heart, found another girl and then left me alone... And now... I'm living everyday as if there is no tomorrow.

 

I gave him everything he wants from me. I gave him my time, helped him on everything he needs... But he still left me. 'Ai-kun... After I gave you everything... Including my Virginity... You just left me...'

 

After a few weeks, I found out that I was pregnant. My parents were angry at me for letting Ai-kun have what he wants and getting me pregnant too. So I stopped for a year and after giving birth, I went back to studying. But still, I can't forget him... After all... HIS PICTURES WERE SCATTERED LIKE THE STARS IN EVERY PART OF MY ROOM. And don't forget the ceiling. OTL

 

[A/N: You forgot something. The wall tiles of the Toilet, the Toilet seat cover, even your wall-]

 

I hit the author with my invisible harisen. What the heck.

 

In order to forget him, I lived with my Aunt and her family and switched schools as well... Now why did I switch schools? Simple. Ai-kun secretly took a video of us doing that and then did a freaking PRESS RELEASE of it. Now my image of a smart and lady-like Student Council President is destroyed.

 

And then I met this guy who knows nothing but to make me feel miserable. He's always with me after that. We're like siblings-

 

"Oi, gran gran. What the heck are you thinking about? By the way, you're paying this, right?" Yuuma asked. Sigh... Forget about being siblings, I wanna kill him so badly RIGHT NOW. This guy really annoys me. The first time we met, he threw tomatoes at me.

 

Flashback...

When Yuuma and Nana first met...


 

"So you're that granny who gave her virginity to a gorilla for free?" he said without caring about what I'll feel.

 

"You don't know anything-" before I can finish my sentence he threw a tomato at me. ( = _ =* )

 

"Hope you won't have STDs. Gorilla was the origin of STDs, right? Ha-ha-ha!" he then left.


 

End of flashback...

 

When I asked my aunt about him, I found out that he was a worker in my Aunt's resto. When my aunt properly introduced us to each other, she assigned him to be my 'bodyguard'. I think he's the one who'll kill me on what he's doing right now. DX

 

"Hey! You're the guy, you pay this!" I answered. I'm not paying for a bucklehead!

 

"I'll pay for your baby, yes. But for you? NO~!" He said with a teasing voice.

 

"Whatever." I said as I pulled out my wallet. The moment I opened it, I saw Ai-kun's face there. It only hurt me more.

 

Ogasawara Yuuma POV...

 

Wow, she should've pressed me more to pay. A few more and I'm going to pay anyway. The moment she opened her wallet, she saw his face again. She dropped her wallet and went to the freaking toilet AGAIN. Everytime she opens her wallet, she cries. One day, I even tried throwing her wallet on the sewers but she caught me red-handed and slapped me as the punishment.

 

WRONG MOVE, YUUMA. WRONG MOVE.

 

To tell you the truth, I fell in love with this girl the first time we met. I'm just a coward who can't and won't tell her about my feelings openly. I think she hates me now. Anyways, I'll pay since Nana left me here. I wonder if I can confess, before I-

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Thanks Author for cutting my line. Now I know how Shinoda Mario of MIMMS felt when his confession to Kojima was CUT OFF. ( = _ =* )

 

[A/N: A warning to Ogasawara Yuuma, please don't break the fourth wall. And yeah. I cut it off for a reason. IT'S NOT GOOD TO SPOIL THE READERS.]

 

Whatever, Author. After paying, I left the Cafeteria and waited for her in front of the Female Rest Room.

 

30 minutes later...

 

WHAT THE!? She's not here? Damn that girl! I'm leaving! I then walked away until I reach the school gates. Mhmm~! SMELLS LIKE S#!T. After all, the school's dumpsite is just meters away from the school gate.

 

As I walk to the school gates, I heard somebody calling my name. When I looked behind me, I saw Nana.

 

"Why the heck did you leave me?" She asked angrily. Leave her?

 

"HAH!? YOU'RE THE ONE WHO LEFT ME IN THE FREAKING CAFETERIA!? WHY THE HECK ARE YOU ACCUSING ME OF SOMETHING THAT YOU DID!?"

 

"YOU COULD'VE WAITED FOR ME, Y'KNOW!? I JUST HAD A STOMACH PROBLEM INSIDE THE TOILET!"

 

"I'M NOT THAT IDIOTIC ENOUGH TO WAIT FOR AN OLD HAG WHO GAVE UP HER VIRGINITY AS IF IT WAS ONLY A CANDY TO THAT NO GOOD GORILLA!-"

 

She slapped me. "Who are you to call him a NO-GOOD GORILLA...? Y-you don't even know him!" She answered with tears flowing on her eyes. "H-he was kinder, more of a gentleman than you are!" she reasoned.

 

"So a gentleman takes a WOMAN'S VIRGINITY and then runs away as if he never met her?" I answered back.

 

Thus, another slap flew to my face. "You never know even a bit about him... SO DON'T TALK AS IF YOU KNOW EVERYTHING!" she answered.

 

"Whatever. I'm sick of hearing things about that gorilla so PLEASE SHUT UP." I told her.

 

We then walked home without even talking to each other.

 

Upon entering the wooden door, I spoke to her. "Old hag, I'm sorry a while ago." I then embraced her, hoping it will reach her and finally... Forgive me.

 

"Sure... I think I was wrong about what I said earlier too..." She answered. "By the way... I'M NOT AN OLD HAG!"She then got out of my embrace. She then went inside and ran to her room.

 

"Why can't you forget about him...?" I muttered faintly as I watch her go away.

 

-END OF CHAPTER-

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Prologue]
« Reply #23 on: July 07, 2013, 06:14:32 PM »
End ?   :cry: but why ???  :cry:

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Prologue]
« Reply #24 on: July 07, 2013, 09:19:43 PM »
This is going to be another NEVER-UPDATED-FIC-AFTER-CHAPTER ONE-OR-PROLOGUE right?

I dunno why but I just had this feeling of calling you old hag  :kekeke: :on lol:

You broke my heart after me seeing baby Nana(AH YES DAT OLD HAG IS MINEEEEHHH NU TOUCHIN KAY?!) uhh....having a baby? Like..kill me you.But since the fic looks good you're forgiven  :on lol:

I wonder when your next update will be....

BACK TO DA POINT!

Hope you update soon and baiiiii baiiiii  :mon angel: *fades ninja way*

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Prologue]
« Reply #25 on: July 08, 2013, 01:54:10 AM »
...I don't really know how to comment on it~
but it was interesting... nod nod...
the old hag thing...
nod nod...
I love how your fics are always so crazy

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Prologue]
« Reply #26 on: July 08, 2013, 08:02:25 AM »
Replies:


@Tiptip: I'll update so dun cry, okie?  :on GJ:


@WotaOtaku: It's gonna be updated I TELL YOU. It's my sissy's request so it's my duty to update this.  :on asmo:


Oh, you should kill Ainyan (Fukumoto Aina, NMB48 EX-TEAM N). She's the father.  :wahaha:


PLEASE STAY TUNED!  :kickass:


Shinoki: LOL. Thanks. Wait... My ficts are always crazy? My Wmatsui Xmas oneshot wasn't crazy, y'know?  :glasses:

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Replies] (July 8, 2013)
« Reply #27 on: July 08, 2013, 05:11:13 PM »
Okieee   :on GJ: :on gay: i'll wait for your update  :nya:

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Replies] (July 8, 2013)
« Reply #28 on: July 08, 2013, 11:54:22 PM »
Ama-chawn~!! Ama-chawn ish back!

......Nana X Maachun.... I never...really...thought about those two..

Looks good tho :) Can't wait for more ;')

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Re: Before I leave... (Nana x Maachun) [Replies] (July 8, 2013)
« Reply #29 on: September 05, 2013, 05:34:20 PM »

恋愛被害届け - SayaMilky OS

??? POV…


‘I-is that her…? I gotta make sure… I have to ask her…’ I thought as I looked at her back.


“W-wait, Miss!” I said as I ran whilst trying to call her.


A few inches more… Just a few inches more-


*BLAGAG!*



Normal POV…
Koyanagi General Hospital…



A skinny man in his early 20s woke up inside a Hospital ward. The hospital ward was filled with advance mechanisms that are not of the 21st century. The man was a known musician, having his own music label. He is also known as a womanizer who made many girls cry and sadly… take their own lives.


He had no recollections on how he ended up in the hospital. Oblivious to what happened to him, he asked the nearby skinny-looking doctor who had the name Koyanagi Arii on his nameplate. “Excuse me sir… Why am I here?”


“You were hit by a car, sir. The detectives will arrive any minute now to tell you about the incident.” The doctor replied.


Sai POV…


‘I was hit by a car…? All I remember is following a- Okay… My womanizing side almost killed me.’ Truth be told, I was following somebody whom I thought was my childhoodfriend. I haven’t seen her since Junior High School but I bet she’s a beautiful chick by now. Now why am I searching for her? The answer is… It’s because I have fallen in love with her long time ago… But she suddenly left me…


While I was thinking about it, 2 detectives arrived. Both of them looked fresh from college. One of them looked like a rebel with the touch of perversion. The other, a timid and innocent-looking guy.


“Yamamoto-san, we checked your memories and found that the moment of the incident to be corrupted or otherwise forgotten in your brain.” said the timid-looking detective.


“Yeah, yeah… But we found some data about the people who were with you on the day of your accident.” Said the pervert-looking one in a bored tune.


It seems he’s not even interested in the case but on those people who were with me on the day of the incident. In actuality, the people who were with me on the day of the incident are. All. GIRLS. I can see his hidden motive.


“We believe we can find the culprit of your accident using that time span for we think that the culprit is somebody you encountered these past few days.” Said the timid one.


“Mind if you introduce yourselves?” I asked. The author’s getting tired writing some awful descriptions.


“Kinoshita Momoshiro’s the name. This buddy of mine is Tanigawa Akihiro.” the perverted looking detective answered.


“Now that we’ve been acquainted to each other… What move would you suggest, detectives?” I asked with curiosity. Well, obviously, they’ll need me to identify the culprit, right?


“We had already contacted the people who were seen in your memories. Tomorrow, we can examine them to see if one of them could be the culprit. Of course, we need cooperation from your memories for your brain had forgotten about the incident. I hope your memories recover and you remember how the culprit looks like. Well, that’s about it. I’ll see you tomorrow in the Police Office.” Detective Momoshiro answered then left with his pal.


‘Yeah right. You just wanted to mingle with the ladies.’ I thought as I watched them leave the room.


Tomorrow Afternoon…
Normal POV…


When the clock struck 12, the interrogations began. First, 6 ladies entered the room as the first batch of people who are going to be interrogated.


The first batch of women to be interrogated are as follows: a 15 year old Middle Schooler named Kinoshita Haruna WHO IS NOT ON ANYWAY RELATED TO THE PERVERTED DETECTIVE, a 20 year old Coffee Shop Waitress named Fukumoto Aina, a 20 year old College Student named Watanabe Miyuki, Sai’s personal Doctor named Yamada Nana (aged 21), a 16 year old Senior High School student named Yagura Fuuko and a 20 year old Fresh College Graduate named Yamaguchi Yuuki.


“These are the first 6 people we saw in your memory. Have your memories about the incident returned yet?” asked Detective Momoshiro.


Puzzled and confused, Sai answered, “S-sorry detective… But I still don’t remember…”


“Ok… Let’s start the investigation. Kinoshita, step forward.” Said the perverted detective to the Middle Schooler.


‘Great. My mom thought I used a car to hit this guy. Just Great. I don’t even know how to drive a freaking car. Argh.’ The Girl thought then stepped forward without any signs of malice.


“Do you remember her?” asked the detective.


Flashback…


Sai was walking towards the pedestrian lane when he saw the middle schooler on a bike. Kinoshita Haruna then bowed slightly then pedaled away.


End of Flashback…


Still confused, Sai answered, “Uhm… I really don’t know…”


“Step back.” The detective said as he called the next person.


“Fukumoto, step forward.”


‘I just spilt some coffee… Why am I included as a suspect?’ Fukumoto Aina the waitress thought then stepped forward.


“What about her?” the timid detective asked. Sai looked at her carefully then remembered what happened…


Flashback…



As the waitress puts the coffee to his table, the platter made the coffee spill, making it spread through the table even reaching Sai’s pants.


“Oh my goodness, I’m sorry sir! I didn’t mean it! I’ll just clean this mess, sir. I’m really sorry!” the Waitress said as she wiped the coffee off the table using the cloth in her hand.


End of Flashback…

The waitress was then asked to step back.


The College Student was in deep thought while waiting for her call.


Watanabe Miyuki, the College Student was then asked to step forward. An order which the girl followed.


Flashback…


While Sai was walking on the streets, a girl bumped to her. The girl then dropped something. It was a booklet. He went closer to pick it up when a hand crossed his. It was Watanabe Miyuki’s hand. The girl then looked at him intently, retreated back then hurriedly bid her farewell.


End of Flashback…

The College student then stepped back. Yamada Nana, his personal doctor, then stepped forward.

Flashback…

Earlier that day, Sai was scheduled for a check-up with his Personal Doctor, Yamada Nana.

“Move forward so I can reach your forehead.” she told him kindly. When his forehead was within her reach, she touched his forehead. “Hmm… I told you to be careful with all those medicines. And I also noticed that you drank an Ecstasy pill today.” She then let out a sigh.
 
Sai then unbuttoned his shirt so the Doctor can observe his heartbeat.


She then used her stethoscope to observe Sai’s heartbeat. ”Your heartbeat is normal.”  she told him.



“Thanks, doc.” Sai replied while buttoning his shirt back.


“I’ll let you go this time but the next time you drink one, I’m going to punish you.” the female doctor said kindly.


“Yes, doc.” Sai replied without any second thoughts. Well… HE NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT IT SERIOUSLY.


What he never knew is that the Doctor was secretly in love with him.



End of Flashback…


The doctor then stepped back. The timid Senior High School Student, Yagura Fuuko, then stepped forward.


Flashback…



Yagura Fuuko was walking across the streets holding a navigation map. She realized she was lost and she saw Sai walking so she asked, “Sir, where is the famous Osaka Gakuen?”


“Ah, there.” Sai pointed the place using the map then told her the directions.


“Thank you, sir.” the girl said then smiled at him before she went away.



End of Flashback…


The Senior High School student then stepped back whilst the Fresh College Graduate stepped forward.


“Oh. She gives me the boobs… Don’t you think, Akihiro?” Detective Momoshiro asked his colleague.


Flashback…


Sai was strolling with sheer boredom when he heard somebody asking for help.


“Ouch… This high heels really suck when you step on a manhole… Somebody help?” a distressed Yamaguchi Yuuki said, asking for help.


Sai carried her to a nearby cafe then bandaged her feet which earned him a small thank you from the fresh college graduate.



End of Flashback…


“So… Are your memories back?” asked the perverted Detective.


“Sadly… No.” replied a more confused Sai.


And thus, the 6 girls were interrogated. But after the interrogations, it only earned them a ‘No, I didn’t do it.’ from them.


The Police then called the 2nd (also the last) batch of suspected women.


On a Separate Room…


“Geez… Why are we called here?” wondered the Waitress.


“The Careless Womanizing Idiot thought we are culprits to his Accident.” said Sai’s Personal Doctor.


Meanwhile, the College Student was still deep in thought. She was thinking about someone who had hurt her too much in the past. Someone who had left her heart beyond repair.


“Hmm… I think I might’ve seen him somewhere…” The Fresh College Graduate said.


“He’s a known musician here, fyi.” Yamada Nana the Doctor said.


“I think I might’ve seen him years ago…” said Miyuki while looking at her Smart phone.


“Mom, I told you for the 50th time… I’M NOT THE KILLER!” Kinoshita Haruna said to the person on the other line of the Phone Call.


“U-uhm… Could you please keep quiet…? The guards are kinda annoyed at us right now…” said Yagura Fuuko averting the annoyed gazes of the Guards.


“Oh sorry. Mom, you’ll give me 100,000 yen if I’m innocent in this case, you hear me?” said Haruna as she hung up the phone.


Back to the Interrogation room…


The 2nd batch of suspected people are as follows: An 18 year old Pizza Delivery Girl named Kawakami Rena who had a sharper chin than Sai, a 16 year old Junior High School Student named Muro Kanako, a 20 year old biker named Shimada Rena, an 18 year old Grocer named Mita Mao, a 15 year old Junior High School Student named Kurokawa Hazuki and an 18 year old Senior High School Student named Hikawa Ayame.


The detectives then asked the Pizza Delivery Girl to move forward.


Flashback…


Sai returned to his apartment. He then called for a Pizza Delivery. It was so hot that afternoon so he took a quick shower. After a few minutes of waiting, the doorbell rang.


“Pizza Delivery!” shouted the Pizza Delivery Girl.


“Wait a sec!” Sai answered as he rushed to the door wearing only his towel. He then opened the door letting the girl in.


“Pizza Deliver-” Unable to finish her sentence she gasped in amazement.


“What’s wrong?” Sai asked unaware of what the girl is thinking.


“U-uhm… Nice… Towel? Uhm…”


“Thanks?” He answered back.





It was a moment of silence.


“Anyways, here’s your pizza! Yeah!” The girl then gave him what he ordered, 2 boxes of Hawaiian Pizza. Even though he claims to be a vegetarian, his craving for meat hasn’t been suppressed at all.


“Thanks again. Here’s the payment.” he then gave her 3,000 yen.


“Ok… I’ll just get the-”
 
“No, keep the change.”


“Thanks, sir.” the Girl left with a smile on her face.



End of Flashback…


“Not her, huh?” The perverted detective sighed in dismay. “Muro, forward.”


The rebellious looking Junior High School student then stepped forward.


Flashback…


It was a rainy evening when Sai decided to go out to buy some things on the nearest Department Store.


He then saw a Junior High School Student deciding whether she should adopt the lone kitten or not.


Muro Kanako, who just became aware of Sai’s presence, then picked up the kitty and looked at Sai. She then rushed away with the cat.


End of Flashback…


“Still no recollections?” asked the now getting annoyed Perverted Detective.


“Y-yeah…” said Sai as he clutches his now hurting head.


“Ok, next.” said the Detective. “Shimada, forward.” The vertically challenged Biker then stepped forward.


Flashback…


Hours before he met the Pizza Delivery Girl, Sai was crossing the streets when a huge bike almost hit him.


The bike then stopped a meter behind him. The biker then removed the helmet which revealed a Rebellious College Graduate.


“Hey you! I don’t know what you’re planning in your life and I don’t even give a damn but if you repeat this again, I’ll really use this bike to run over you.” She said almost scaring the life out of Sai.


“I’m really sorry.” Sai replied.


“Well, unless you do me THAT favor.” She winked then wore back her Helmet and drove away.


End of Flashback…



“I’m getting bored in this. Move back. Mita, forward.” said the bored detective.


“Uhm… Allow me to substitute instead, Momoshiro-san.” said Tanigawa, his colleague.


“Yeah, yeah. I’ll take a break.” said the Perverted Detective as he walked out to get a breather.


Mita then moved forward.


“Have you remembered something about the accident, Yamamoto-san?” asked Tanigawa.


Meanwhile in the Separate Room…


“Say, could you tell us about that guy earlier?” asked Haruna.


“Well, that guy is obviously my client. He had this one-sided love over a girl he can’t even remember. And it hurts me!” said Nana.


“A girl he can’t remember…?” thought Miyuki. “Could he be…?” Miyuki muttered.


Flashback…
10 years ago…



“I’m in love with you, Watanabe-san.” said a skinny guy to Miyuki.


“I… I love you too but… We’re still young…” answered Miyuki.


“Then I’ll work hard until the right time comes, Miyuki. And when that time comes, I shall ask for your hand.” he said then kissed Miyuki on her lips. It was… Her first kiss.


She was really happy on the kiss she received.She then went out with the guy secretly. They were too happy until a tragic day came.


That day, she received a letter that ordered her to go to the School’s Dumps. She then saw the guy she loved, kissed by another girl. She was so hurt that she immediately asked for a School transfer. She never met the guy since that day ever since. She tried forgetting him. And she succeeded.


End of Flashback…


“Are you alright, Miss?” asked Aina.


“Oh yes! I’m alright! Thanks for asking.” answered Miyuki.


Flashback…


Later that evening, he reached the Department Store. He then grabbed some beer cans then went directly to the timid-looking Grocer in the Cashier.


“T-that’ll be 1,500 yen.” said Mita Mao.


“Here.” Sai said as he handed her down 1,500 yen.


The Grocer then smiled and said, “Come back again, sir!”



End of Flashback…


“Hmm…? Yamamoto-san?” asked Tanigawa whilst seeing Sai clutching his hurting head in pain.


Sai POV…


‘I have to remember her…’ I thought while clutching my hurting head.


Remembering the last 6 suspects a while ago… My head became more confused as to who the criminal is.


“I’m fine. Call the next suspect.” I told Tanigawa-san.


“Ok. Move back, Mita. Step forward, Kurokawa.” Tanigawa said dilly-dallying.


The innocent-looking Middle Schooler then stepped forward.


Flashback…


It was almost noon when I walked out of a Cafe. I then saw an innocent girl eating some kind of bread. She had a few of those cream on her face so I went near her then wiped it off.


“T-thanks, Mister!” she bubbly said as I walked away.


End of Flashback…


“What about now, sir?” Tanigawa asked.

“Still no good.” I answered.

“Hikawa, step forward.” Tanigawa said whilst the Charitable Senior High School Student stepped forward.


‘It’s call coming into pieces… A few more time is  all I need.’ I thought as the girl stepped forward.


Flashback…


“Guys, Happy HUGS day! Come here for your free hug!” said the girl holding a Cartolina which had a ‘FREE HUGS’ written on it. The girl, thinking that I was walking near her, ran to me then gave me a free hug.


“T-thanks.” I said as a reply to her hug which actually came with a kiss on my left cheek.



End of Flashback…


“All of you, leave the room.” said Tanigawa worryingly. “In this pace, we’ll never know the identity of the culprit.” he further said.


As I looked at the shoes of the all the leaving 2nd batch of suspects, a certain shoe was remembered in my head. It then triggered a lost part of my memories…


Flashback…


I was walking  on the streets when a girl bumped to me… Seeing her face in full detail, it made me wonder if she was the girl I met… She dropped a booklet. I went closer to pick it up when her hand crossed mine. She then looked at me intently, retreated back then bid her farewell.


‘I-is that her…? I gotta make sure… I have to ask her…’ I thought as I looked at her back.


“W-wait, Miss!” I said as I ran whilst trying to call her.


A few inches more… Just a few inches more-


*BLAGAG!*


A car had hit me.


Nearing the state of unconsciousness, I saw a pair of shoes walking away from me…The pair of shoes walking away from me seemed familiar…


Oh yeah… it was the shoes of the College Student.



End of Flashback…


I unknowingly fell asleep. When I woke up, I immediately asked Detective Tanigawa about their location.


“The girls who were interrogated, you say? They were discharged by Detective Momoshiro.” he answered.


“W-what!? U-uhm… Could you tell me the address of that College Student in the 1st batch instead?!” I asked hurriedly. I can’t let her get away from me this time!


“Oh, planning to court her, aren’t you?” Detective Momoshiro said, appearing behind me.


“N-no… I need to ask her something.” I answered. “P-please! Tell me!”


“Ok. Ok. Here.” Detective Momoshiro said then gave me a piece of paper containing her address.


“I told you! Now hand over the 100,000 Yen!” said Kinoshita Haruna to her Mom.


“Geez… Alright, alright…” Haruna’s Mom then went to the Perverted Detective. “Momo-kun, give your daughter 100,000 Yen.”


“Oi, Kanakichi! I don’t have that amount of money!” said the Detective. Trying my best to leave without making noise, I went out and left the poor Detective to suffer.


Normal POV…
Later that Evening…
Watanabe Residence…



“How was the interrogation?” asked Miyuki’s father.


“It went fine but… The victim looked familiar to me, Father.” Miyuki answered.


“Then maybe you met him years ago?” said her Father.


Miyuki POV…
Flashback as to what happened on the Accident…



I bumped to a guy when I was rushing to the University. When I looked at his face, it was him… The guy who broke my heart years ago. Due to shock, my booklet dropped. I went to pick it up but he picked it up first making our hands cross one more time after 7 years. I bid my farewell then ran across the street.


He followed me causing an accident. I saw him drenched a bit in blood. I felt it was right for him. He broke my heart, I end his life. I then left without looking back. But inside my heart, I feel guilty even though I killed him years ago in my heart.



End of Flashback…
Normal POV…



Miyuki’s mother then stormed to the Kitchen. “M-miyuki-chan! Somebody’s outside!” her mother said, still tired from all the rushing.


“W-who might that be?” Miyuki asked back.


“A skinny young man.” her Mother answered. “Is he your boyfriend?”


“M-mom! You do know that I don’t have one! And I told you I’ll introduce him to you and Father first!” Miyuki answered.


“Just go out first. I think he needs to see you urgently.” said her Mother.


Outside Watanabe Residence…


Milky then ran out just to see no one waiting for her. She then frowned and turned back. As she was nearing the gate, she heard a familiar voice.


“Remember that day I told you that I’ll ask for your hand when the right time comes?”


This statement made her heart beat faster. She then turned around, just to see the victim earlier. “W-why are you here?” she asked. She didn’t want this to happen though secretly in her heart of hearts, she knows that this is the event that she has been waiting for.


“I came here to ask for your hand. Marry me.” Sai said as he knelt in front of Miyuki.


“I… I don’t love you anymore.” said Miyuki. This was a lie however, for her heart never loved any other man besides him.


“Don’t lie to me. Why did you leave me years ago?” asked Sai.


“You still do not know? Are you kidding?” Miyuki replied.


“Tell me. Why did you have to leave me?” Sai asked further.


“You cheated on me. Now go away.” Miyuki then walked towards the Gate.


“Miyuki!” Sai said as he stopped Miyuki by hugging her from behind. “Don’t go… I love you.  I didn’t cheat on you.”


“Don’t take me for a fool. You were kissing that girl near the Dumps!” Miyuki said as she struggled to free herself from Sai’s embrace.


“No. I’m not letting you go! You don’t understand! I pushed her away when she kissed me! Now please… Give me one more chance, Miyuki!” Sai said still hugging Miyuki.


“LET ME GO!” Miyuki finally escaped his embrace then ran inside and closed the Gate.


“I’m willing to do anything to make you forgive me!” Sai said then waited outside Miyuki’s house.


Inside Watanabe Residence…


“Miyuki, do you know him?” asked her father.


“H-he was my first boyfriend…” Miyuki said the truth.


“Sigh… I knew about this.” Miyuki’s Mom said.


“M-mom-”


A heavy rain fell.


Outside…


Sai, who brought no umbrella suffered the rain. He thought, ‘Is this punishment enough to make her forgive me? Why did I have to suffer this much just for a misunderstood incident?’


Flashback on what really happened on the Dumps…


Sai went to the Dumps because of a note that he received on his locker. It read:


Dear Sai,

Please go to the Dumps later. I have something to tell you about Miyuki.
-S.A.
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Sai then went to the Dumps, unaware that everything was a trap.


On the Dumps…


Sai saw a girl from the other Class. “What were you going to tell me?” he asked.


“This.” the girl then kissed Sai.


End of Flashback…
Inside Watanabe Residence…



“Miyuki-chan, forgive him already. It’s raining hard outside. Unless you want him to die.” her Mother said, trying to convince her.


“He’ll eventually go home, Mom.” Miyuki said. “I’m going to sleep. Good night, Mom.” she said then went upstairs.


“She’ll be taking him in before we know it.” Miyuki’s Father said.


“Yeah. Miyuki-chan is such a tsundere.” said her Mom then went back to the Dining Room.


Miyuki’s Room…
1 hour later…



Miyuki, worried, peeked into her window. She then saw that the guy is still there. Standing as if he’s only waiting for his date. “He’s still there?” she said then went back to her bed.


4 hours later…


Miyuki peeked again still seeing Sai standing by the Gate. She then felt guilty and worried. She then sneaked downstairs only to see her Mom waiting by the door, holding an umbrella and towel.


“M-mom? How did you-”


“I raised you so I know you well by now.” Her Mom answered.


Somebody then hit her head lightly. It was her Dad. “Come on, don’t make him wait. He’s injured.”


“Yes, Dad.” She then went outside the Gate only to see the guy lifeless. “S-sai… Wake up… Don’t leave me! I’m sorry I made you wait in this rain…!”


The guy then woke up. “Oh sorry… I’m really sorry…”


“S-speak no more… Go inside with me, Sai.” Miyuki said then took him inside the house.


After a few months of Sai’s rehabilitation for his legs, Miyuki and Sai got married. And had kids. This is the story of a couple, who had a Love’s Damage Report.


-END-
« Last Edit: September 05, 2013, 05:44:00 PM by Amakuchi »

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Offline abcari

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Re: 恋愛被害届け (Love Damage Report) - SayaMilky OS (9/5/13)
« Reply #30 on: September 05, 2013, 10:26:04 PM »
I think that I'm in love with this pair xD I want more fics Sayamilky <3

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Re: 恋愛被害届け (Love Damage Report) - SayaMilky OS (9/5/13)
« Reply #31 on: September 06, 2013, 06:05:12 AM »
I think that I'm in love with this pair xD I want more fics Sayamilky <3

Me too. I want more Sayamilky ficts in this forum. :v

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Re: 恋愛被害届け (Love Damage Report) - SayaMilky OS (9/5/13)
« Reply #32 on: September 07, 2013, 05:08:41 AM »
Nee chaaaaaaaan ! XD I love this fic very very very verrry much >w<

ne.. you late to post it at 2 sept > w > heheheuu

thanks for this warmth fic.. I love happy endingggg :heart:

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Re: 恋愛被害届け (Love Damage Report) - SayaMilky OS (9/5/13)
« Reply #33 on: September 09, 2013, 10:10:37 AM »
A sayamilky!!!! :D

This os was sooo sweet!!  XD

That girl that kissed sai and broke Milkys heart has to go to hell! She makes me mad!!  :angry: lol

I liked this fanfic!! I hope you write more sayamilkys!! :)


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