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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.4 released
« Reply #20 on: January 04, 2013, 08:53:28 PM »
midget GM and my princess yui...I always think that if takamina and acchan got married yui will be fit to be their kid :on lol:

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.5 released
« Reply #21 on: January 08, 2013, 10:37:56 PM »
@ikun1216: I'm writing them as their current ages, which means in Japan it is totally legal for Yui to buy alcohol.

You may or may not want to read my first story in the perv: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34824.0  which is basically stuff that happens between the kiss at the end of chapter 4 and the start of this one, but it's really not important  to the story, I just felt like writing it. Because I'm a perv. So be sure to enjoy my terrible writing there.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                         
Yui opened her eyes, and took a couple of seconds upon seeing Sayaka's face to remember that she was staying at hers that night. Nothing to worry about. She did start to worry when she realised she was naked. And so was Sayaka. And their legs were tangled. And Sayaka's hand was on her shoulder.

Yui couldn't remember what had gone on last night, but she was sure it must have been more than just the kiss she remembered. She honestly hoped Sayaka wouldn't remember any more than she did. Carefully and quietly she got out of the bed, and went and had a shower, before getting dressed into the change of clothes she'd bought and quickly finding, without looking at them too closely, the clothes she'd been wearing and putting them away in her bag.
She went downstairs and sat watching television quietly. She honestly didn't want to stay until tomorrow like planned anymore, worried about the atmosphere between them being awkward, but she felt it would be worse to just leave without saying anything.
Sayaka came down, looking a little unsure of what to say, and made breakfast, while Yui sat trying to avoid talking about anything. They ate their meal in silence. Eventually Yui spoke up.

'I'm, going home.'

'Eh?'

'I can't stay here. It's awkward.' She didn't mean to say that last part.

'Well if you think it's so awkward, maybe you could either tell me what the hell happened, or talk about it, or try to work things out.'

'I'm sorry Sayaka, but I can't. I feel awful'.

Yui rushed upstairs, grabbing her bag, and left even as Sayaka begged her to stay at least so they could figure something out. She couldn't do it.

Returning home earlier than her parents expected, Yui sat in her room. She felt awful, thinking she must have forced Sayaka to do whatever they did, and not wanting to deal with whatever had happened when she still had feelings for Takahashi.

Yui didn't speak with Sayaka at all on sunday or monday, keeping to herself and only talking to Miyuki in class. She returned home and retreated to her room.

She only spoke to someone that night because her mother let Iwata Karen, a girl from class A who was actually too young for their year and had made it in by being especially talented in certain areas. Yui sometimes helped her with her work when she didn't understand it.
She tried to keep a happy facade up, while explaining to Karen how to do the work. However, she noticed Karen wasn't her usual cheerful self either. Eventually she decided she had to ask the girl what was wrong.
Karen tried to say something, but eventually just moved and tried to kiss Yui. Yui pulled away after only a second, but she was surprised by what had happened.

'I love you..Yui-san'

'Karen, I've seen you in class for a long time, and we both know that's not true. It's something to do with Sumire, yes?'

Sato Sumire was another girl in class A, who got along very well with Karen they all knew. It'd had been no secret anybody that Karen only had eyes for Sumire, but Sumire herself had never seemed to notice.

'I.. just don't know how to make her notice me.'

'You just have to go and try. Don't sacrifice something you could have out of fear.'

Karen left soon after, leaving Yui to think about her own words. Eventually she realised that even if she still had feelings for Takahashi, she could probably be happy with Sayaka. If she hadn't messed it up already.

She ran out of the house, and straight over to Sayaka's, stopping only to ask Sayaka's mother if she was upstairs. She ran into Sayaka's room.

'Yui?'

Before Sayaka could say any more Yui carefully, took her head and leaned in to kiss her. She broke it, and after a moment, Sayaka returned the kiss.

'I'm sorry I left.'

Sayaka's only response was to kiss her again.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         
I honestly have no idea how or when TakaYui will actually happen. Or how long SayaYui will last. I guess we'll find out together.

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.4 released
« Reply #22 on: January 09, 2013, 12:02:59 AM »
uhh where is minami?  :?

but is a great chapter with the perv section  :twothumbs

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.5 released
« Reply #23 on: January 09, 2013, 04:12:47 AM »
thanks for update..

i'm prefer to SayaYui than TakaYui.. *LOL*

But, just waiting what will happen next  :on gay:

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.5 released
« Reply #24 on: January 09, 2013, 04:48:07 AM »
SayaYui <3 ;A; I'm so happy you wrote this fic, cause I ship both TakaYui and SayaYui <3

I really loved last chapter, the way Yui goes back to Sayaka' side and gives her a chance ;A;

I don't really care if Yui ends either with Sayaka or Minami, cause I like both pairings, but just keep writing the fic :D

Waiting for next chap <3
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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.5 released
« Reply #25 on: January 09, 2013, 06:23:09 AM »
Okay... is this story TakaYui or MiyukixYui?

Anyway, it's a very nice story there... Thank you

Well... why did Minami needs to cry, just because she rejected someone feeling...

What did she mean by destroying someone's life just because of rejection.

Curious.... interesting... Can't wait to see the next update

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.5 released
« Reply #26 on: January 09, 2013, 08:14:57 AM »
Oohh plot twist lol , I'll wait with you for the TakaYui  :thumbsup

As much as I would love to read your not terrible writing I can't get into the perv section link  :badluck:

So I'll just sit back and wonder when Takamina shows up again, and see if another poor girl falls for her charms
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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.5 released
« Reply #27 on: January 09, 2013, 10:23:32 AM »
I really wish this is takayui
Please make it takayui

Thank you  :bow:

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.6 released
« Reply #28 on: January 17, 2013, 11:10:08 AM »
Well I'm glad not everyone is hating on this twist. and @cisda83 I haven't even gotten to the MiyukixYui yet. Be patient (isn't sure if I'm joking or not).

Anyhow, I've been busy, and this chapter would've been longer, but I've got an idea for another fic which I'm going to have to get done before I write more of sempai. Anyway, here's the next, short chapter.

                                                                                                                                                                                                             

The pairs lips danced over eachother. Yui tried to poke her tongue into Sayaka's mouth, and started pulling her shirt up.

'What are you doing?'

Yui broke the kiss with a start, and looked over to Sayaka's bed to see Miyuki sitting on it, a confused expression on her face, a workbook forgotten next to her along with Sayaka's own. Not only was their relationship public a little quicker than Yui might have liked, but Yui was awfully concerned that Miyuki had somehow decided the answer to the maths problems they'd been given was Kitagawa-sensei.

'Miyuki... what are you doing here?'

It was obvious what she was doing there, but Yui was just trying to distract attention from what they'd just done. She'd gotten over how she was feeling about Sayaka, but having it seen was quite embaressing.

'Did you two.. hook up?'

Yui could have died from embaressment. Sure, she'd known going into this that they'd have to tell people sooner or later, but she'd hoped to have a few minutes to talk about this with Sayaka before letting people know about it. Fortunately for Yui, who was still racking her brains for what to do, Sayaka spoke up first.

'Miyuki, I'm sure you find this very exciting, but we'd like to keep this quiet. Can you do that?'

'Of course. Leave it to me.'

She left, but Yui and Sayaka were unsure if she'd keep her promise.

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Takahsahi sat in her room. She picked up a photo, an look at the girl she was with in the picture.

'Atsuko..'

She placed the photo aside, and cureld up in a ball, tears in her eyes.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

Hope you liked it.

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.6 released
« Reply #29 on: January 17, 2013, 12:10:57 PM »
Thanks for the update :) Wonder if Miyuki will keep her promise :p
& aw, Poor Takamina, guessing atsuko is the reason she isn't accepting any other girls feelings. Wonder what happened with Atsuko!
Thanks again, can't wait to read the next chapter :)

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.6 released
« Reply #30 on: January 17, 2013, 05:32:41 PM »
so this fic still Takayui ? :? :)
Hurm I wonder what happened with Takamina and Atsuko
waiting for your update
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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.6 released
« Reply #31 on: January 17, 2013, 07:14:25 PM »
As much as wanna read THAT part, I have yet granted access there so I guess I should just go on with what I can read  :bleed eyes:

I wonder if Miyuki will go "if you want me to keep it secret you should sleep with me"  and blackmail the two, lol.  :panic:
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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.7 released
« Reply #32 on: January 22, 2013, 06:29:22 PM »
^That might have happened at one point. Won't be anymore. Probably.

And yes, the fic is still TakaYui. It's just going to take a while to get there.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

Yui and Sayaka walked to school together, then Yui went to Class A for her morning classes. She was worried the whole time people were discussing her behind her back. But it wasn't until she met up with Sayaka for lunch that her fears were realised.

Ogaswara Mayu, another girl in Class N, was making a lot of jokes, Sayaka was sat looking angry, and Miyuki looked guilty.

'3 minutes' Sayaka said, 'thats how long it took for Miyuki to spill the beans. I wouldn't be surprised if the whole school knows by now'

Based on the way Sashihara and Kitahara were looking over in their direction quizzically, that was the case. Of the students in the dining hall, only Karen and Sumire seemed oblivious, Karen was too busy hugging Sumire.

Yui sighed, and sat down. Deciding there was only one way the crowd would stop looking at them, took hold of Sayaka's cheek. 'Well then, shall we?'

They leaned in and kissed each other. The new development confirmed, most of the school returned to their lunches, Class K's Oshima Yuko was amongst those still watching, trying to see if they did any more.

'Miyuki didn't tell them about the sex did she?'

'YOu two had sex?' Came Miyuki's surprised and a little too loud response. Yui buried her face, embarressed.

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Takashia had been busy with Student President stuff the whole day, and had missed the news developing. She left the school as one of the last, and happened to spot Yui and Sayaka walkig home together. Nothing unusual about that of course. She wondered if the girl had gotten over her properly yet.

Oh okay. Looked from the somewhat agressive game of Tonsil Tennis they were playing the answer was yes, yes she had gotten over her. Maybe things could have worked out with them after all, Yui was a strong person all things considered. Then again, she'd thought Atsuko had been strong as well. She couldn't do that to someone else after knowing what Atsuko had done. Better to let her down than accpet her and then have the cycle repeat. Even so, she was sort of jealous of Yamamoto.

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As their kiss ended, Yui saw Takahashi walking towards them.

'Ah. Takahashi-sempai.'

Takahashi smiled at them, then asked to talk with Yui a moment.

Around a corner Yui spoke.

'Sempai, what is it?'

She was surprised when Takahashi grabbed her, gently.

'Yokoyama, just tell me, right now, are you happy?'

Yui was puzzled a little by the question. But it was just concern,  no reason not to answer.

'Of course.....'

                                                                                                                                                                                     

Guess what happens next?

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.7 released
« Reply #33 on: January 24, 2013, 04:55:39 AM »
Good  Job Yuihan !


Forget about Takamina, Moving on to Sayane !  :luvluv2:

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.8 released
« Reply #34 on: January 27, 2013, 12:12:12 AM »
Not much to say, except updates are probably going to be infrequent now.

                                                                                                                                                     
'... I'm happy, because I'm in Takahashi-sempai's arms.'

Takahashi took a hold of Yui's chin, and leaned in. Both girls closed their eyes as their lips came closer together...

...Until Takahashi's collided with her bedroom wall. She recovered from her daze. She'd been daydreaming. She'd wanted, deep down, for Yokoyama to say something like that. She'd wanted to be able to accept Yokoyama's feelings whenshe confessed. Now she wished she had even more. But she couldn't do that. Not after Atsuko. Tears ran down her cheek as she looked through her photos.

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That weekend, Yui's parents were both out, so she, along with Sayaka and Miyuki, had gone to her house to do their homework together. Miyuki wasn't doing too well at it. After they finally finished all of the work, Miyuki went home to collect her things, before coming back so they could all spend the night there.

Yui and Sayaka hadn't planned to do much while she was gone. They talked for a bit and were planning to start on cooking dinner, but there innocently-starting conversation soon turned to some kissing. The pair of them were half-naked making out on the sofa when Miyuki returned. Embaressed, but with nothing they could do about it, they let her come in. Sayaka let her come over. After a moment, she took her two friends heads, and guided their mouths to one another. After shocked moment, the two of them kissed again. Then Sayaka kissed Miyuki. They went upstairs.

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20 minutes later Yui was covering herself with a duvet, Miyuki was sat sadly in a corner and Sayaka was trying to break her skull on a cabinet.

Yui spoke up. 'OK, I think we're all agreed that that was a terrible idea. Miyuki, you can go home if you want to, Sayaka, please sto trying to break your skull.'

After agreeing to never do that together again, the girls decided to spend the night relaxing, ordering some pizza, and then maybe kissing a little, but nothing more than that. They then went to bed, Yui and Sayaka sharing one.

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Weeks passed, and Yui was feeling less and less happy with things. She was enjoying being with Sayaka, and felt guilty she wasn't happier, but she was feeling, deep down, that she wanted something else. Even if she knew she couldn't have her.

One day, while on her own (the two of them having had their first fight, it was a silly argument, and they both knew it, they'd just argued over where to go for the night), Yui was surprised to see Takahashi walking up to her.

'Takahashi-sempai' she choked.

Takahashi looking at her could see she'd been crying, and asked what was going on. Yui explained, leaving out the fact she still had feelings for Takahashi.

'You know something Yokoyama? I owe you an explanation. I'm sorry for not giving it to you sooner.'

'You not having feelings for me was explanation enough sempai.'

'Actually, it wasn't. And I'm sorry'

'I don't understand'

'The thing is, Yokoyama, I would have accepted you in a heartbeat'

'Eh?'

'I wanted to say yes. But I couldn't, and I'm sorry I had to hurt you like that'

'What are you saying?'

'I'm saying I couldn't let what happened to Atsuko happen to you'

                                                                                                                                         

Well this is getting bad.

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.8 released
« Reply #35 on: January 27, 2013, 03:49:00 AM »
lol it's not getting bad :P :) I'm really curious as to what Minami was referring to in the end regarding Atsuko. Please update when you can, I look forward to the next chapter :D

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.8 released
« Reply #36 on: January 27, 2013, 05:09:04 AM »
What a surprising turn of events! Acchan. . .what did you do?!?!?!
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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.8 released
« Reply #37 on: January 30, 2013, 01:50:38 AM »
I may be deserving of hate after this chapter. Your decision really.

                                                                                                                                                             


Yui stood up, and stepped away, her mind reeling.

'Yokoyama, you remember Meada right?'

'I can't talk about this'

'I blamed myself for her death. I felt like if I hadn't broken up with her, hadn't let her go  so she could pursue a relationship that would last now she was moving, maybe she wouldn't have been alone the night she died.'

'Why are you telling me this'

'I'm explaining myself to you. Because I owe it to you.'

'Why wasn't that important to me. Odds of being accepted didn't seem that great to begin with.'

'You're not the first girl to confess to me since then. I rejected them all because I blamed myself, because I didn't want t to happen to them as well'

'...'

'But, honestly, you're confession made me happy. Happier than I had been in a long time. I'm never going to feel it wasn't my fault but, I've decided now that with you I do want this. The question is, do you still?'

She moved closer to Yui, cautiously offering a hug

'I...ICANTDEALWITHTHIS!'

Yui screamed, louder than she probably intended, before leaving quickly, going to hide in her room while trying to process what had happened. Takahashi stayed where she was. feeling kin dof terrible, and realising she shouldn't really be confessing to Yui given the state she'd been in earlier.

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Yui and Sayaka didn't speak much for a few days. Yui was still trying to process what Takahashi had said to her, and Sayaka was feeling bad about the arguments they'd been having.

Eventually, on a camping trip they were both on, both of them being pretty antisocial with others, Sayaka finally approached her.

'How're you doing?'

'I'm trying to work stuff out'

'We had a silly argument, I realise I've taken too long to deal with it but could we move on from it?

'I'd honestly forgotten about that'

'Then why haven't you talked to me'

'There's something I need to tell you'

                                                                                                                                                                                                       

Please feel free to hate on me for what happened to Acchan. But know what her being dead was one of the certainties of the story for a while.

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.9 released
« Reply #38 on: January 30, 2013, 02:21:18 AM »
aw acchan has passed away :( Must be tough for Minami since she's blaming herself, but its nice she's trying to be happy again. Too bad Yui is now all confused. Looking forward to what happens next!

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Re: Yui Oshi 48's fics [Current Fic: Sempai (Takayui)] Ch.9 released
« Reply #39 on: January 30, 2013, 04:59:13 AM »
Atsuko passed away :shocked and Takamina blamed herself for Atsuko's death...Ah so sad
hope Yui not confused more and accepted Takamina
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