Yui Oshi 48's fics One-shot 'Takamina-sempai' and Short fic 'Milk on the Mountai

[Yui Oshi 48]

I'm probably not very good at this.  in fact I should probably not even do this. But nonetheless, I'm doing it, let's see how bad you think I am. (There may be some smut portions, if there are they'll be posted in the perv and I'll say so here). Anyway, here's my awful fic.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   


Yokoyama Yui pulled on her uniform, put a ribbon in her hair so that she looked like the one she desired, picked up her bag, grabbed the letter she hoped would change everything, and stepped out of the door.

She ran on her way to schoo, hoping to be at school before her target.

'Yui-chan!' came a voice, stopping her in her tracks. Yamamoto Sayaka, one of her best friends, was nearby. Feeling she couldn't just ignore Sayaka, even if it meant she'd miss her target, she walked over to her.

The two talked on the way to school, Yui refusing to mention why she'd been in such a rush no matter how many times Sayaka pressed her. Sayaka was Class N's president, and was also top in that classes specialty subject, maths. Yui was in class N, but because she was also good at science she was also in Class A, which one she was in depended on the lesson. Her target was also in Team A.

As they walked to the school they were joined by Watanabe Miyuki, another girl who got to sit in the front of Class N. Nobody was quite sure why though, since she wasn't nearly as good at it as they were. She saw a couple of her classmates from Class A arriving as they did, but not the one she was looking from, meanign they were almost certainly already inside.

Since there was no chance of finding her target before class now, Yui headed off to her first lesson, which was with Class N, spending all lesson distracted and cursing Sayaka for ruining her plans, which even distracted her from finishing the problem on the board Kitagawa-sensei had set them before Sayaka did. They were both miles ahead of Miyuki though.

Yui left for Class A after first period, where she'd have the rest of her classes, though she was slightly concerned that Miyuki's ears appeared to have been letting off steam.

She was hoping to make her move at recess, only to find for the entirety of class that her targets seat was empty. Of course they were busy, being the student president for the whole school, but she'd not expected they'd be so busy.

She saw her target entering class afterwards, meaning she's be able to act during lunch. She spent most of the lesson distracted and trying her best not to stare at her target.

After class she stalked her prey, hoping to catch them alone, only to be dragged aside two of her friends, Kitahara Rie from Class K and Sashihara Rino from Class H. The to of them pressed her into eating lunch with them, so she sat quietly joining in the conversation only when spoken to, and then immediately ran off the moment she saw her target, yelling a rushed apology to the pair.

She cornered her target just outside the building.

'Takahashi-sempai'

The object of her affection, Takahashi Minami, a fair bit shorter than her, turned round to see who it was.

Looking Takahashi in the eye and trying to keep a straight face, she trembling reached for the little envelope she'd prepared, and handed it, hands quivering, to Takashashi.

'Will you please...read this?'

                                                                                                                                           


Sorry for subjecting you all to this   

[kiminitodoke0408]

This is a great fanfic because Takayui is a pairing you don't see much in fanfics.
Keep up the good work!!!

[ikun1216]

I liked it! I hope there's gonna be more 
I thought the class system was clever 

[bimbo]

Please please please continue! A pretty new pairing, but I still love it! Practically I am Takamina X Everyone shipper
A smut?  Oh yes! 

[hara]

Wow TakaYui ?  Never thinks about this pairing..

please continue this story.. waiting for your update  ^^/

[Yui Oshi 48]

Well thanks everybody for the undeserved praise. I'm glad ikun1216 liked the class system, but I haven't really put much thought into it at the moment, I only came up with it whilst writing he first chapter, decided the speciality thing on a whim, and there's not really a lot left to say about that mess of a first chapter.

Anyway, it might become clear in this next chapter that I don't really know where I'm going with this beyond having some vague ideas, and then working towards setting those ideas up.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   
Takahashi looked at her, with what almost looked like a sad expression. Yui trembled as her sempai took the envelope, and removed the letter. The shorter girl finished reading, put the letter back into the envelope, and handed it back to her. It was only then she spoke.

'I'm sorry!'

'Eh?'

'I had no idea you felt like this about me Yui, and I'm flattered... but I just don't feel the same about you. You're a beautiful girl, and I'm sure you'll find someone who will love you soon, but that person isn't me'

'B-but..'

Takamina pulled her into a hug, then released her. 'I'm sorry,' before walking away, leaving Yui standing there with her letter, tears in her eyes.

Yui walked sadly to class. Since she'd left her bags behind when chasing Takahashi she couldn't do any of the work, but she was in no state to work properly anyway. She just sat quietly, trying to avoid looking at her beloved sempai in case she got hurt more, or just embaressed her.

After the last class, Yui walked home sadly, without her bag, or anything apart from the letter containing her rejected feelings. She walked into her house without talking to anybody, and shut herself in her room, not talking to her parents, and refusing to come down for dinner. It was the weekend so it didn't matter if she didn't get her homework done tonight, though she normally would have anyway. She'd been hoping to spend the weekend having fun with Takamina if she'd said yes, but that was just a distant fantasy now.

Yui didn't do anything until her mother called her saying to answer her phone because Sayaka was calling her. She picked up her phone, trying to sound as composed as possible.

'What is it?'

'Well apparently you left all of your things with Sashihara-san, and she gave them to me because she knew we were supposed to be meeting later. Speaking of which, why aren't you here?'

Yui had completely forgotten over the days events that she'd agreed over a week ago now to go do karaoke with Sayaka that night. And honestly, after her day, she didn't really feel like doing it now either.

'Ah, sorry. I just... don't feel like going out tonight anymore'

'That doesn't sound like you. And if you don't agree to come over now and at least get your stuff, I'll send Miyuki over to check up on you.'

'Fine, I'll come'

It wasn't that she dislike Miyuki of course, but she didn't want to deal with her overwhelming cheerfulness right now.

It wasn't far to Sayaka's house, but it was still a trip she'd rather not have made, especially after seeing groups of couples happy together made her sulk. When she arrived Sayaka quickly brought her up to her room, and then questioned why she was still in her uniform. Not wanting to tell her she'd spent the last 5 hours in her room crying, Yui wanted to just take her things and leave, but was pressured by Sayaka into going out to karaoke anyway.

At karaoke Yui just picked a few sad songs to reflect her mood to sing, and sat quietly drinking her cola and re-reading the letter while Sayaka sang her, generally more upbeat songs. Eventually they sang a couple of duets before they went back to Sayaka's.

It was late now, so Sayaka fetched the spare matress so that Yui could stay the night. Yui spent a lot of time re-reading the letter before finally going to sleep, leaving the letter and envelope on the floor.

The next morning, a barely happier Yui picked up her things and headed home to get her schoolwork done. She never really thought to check if she still had the letter. Sayaka, having seen her off, went back into her room to see a letter on the floor, marked Takahashi-sempai, and curiosity getting the better of her, picked it up and started to read the letter inside.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

So yeah, they're not getting together this soon  just thought that would be a bit quick, wanted to develop things more. I knew writing the first chapter that Takamina wouldn't accept her immediately, and I honestly don't really know how it's eventually going to happen yet. I just know it will. Also we'll probably wind up implying/outright having some other Yui pairings in this, and in at least one case that's actually going to mean 'writing out long, multiple paragraph descriptions of hot steamy les sex between them', but only for the perv.

Anyway, hope going this way doesn't wind up upsetting too many people. 

[hara]

Yuihan had broken heart...
Noooooooooo....

what are u doing with Yuihan ? 

*LOL*


nice update ! waiting for another one 

[Yui Oshi 48]

^I'll make things better for her. At some point.

Can anyone explain how to change the thread title? I've seen other peoples threads having it done.

[sakura_drop_]

^I'll make things better for her. At some point.

Can anyone explain how to change the thread title? I've seen other peoples threads having it done.

Just go and edit the first post's title

[ikun1216]

I'm glad there's going to be more to this  I wonder how this will develop even more.

Like new characters and what not.

You can do it Yuihan! Work Hard for love!

[Yui Oshi 48]

New characters? Yeah I might like to work on that. Only got one idea in the pipeline really.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 
Takamina walked into the house she lived alone in, and after spending a few minutes in quiet thought she pulled from her photos a photo she'd taken with Yui one time. She looked at it sadly.

"Another girl I've destroyed"

She tossed the photo aside, then curled up in a bell, staying just in the corner, a tear running down her cheek.

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After the weekend, Yui had recovered somewhat, and had distracted herself with schoolwork for the rest of the time.

She was grateful that she was in Class N for the whole of Monday, which meant she had an extra day before she saw Takamina-san again, and another day to recover. She tried to calm herself down by sticking around her friends from that class, but she noticed Sayaka was actually acting a little different to normal, though she wasn't sure what she could do about that.

She went home that day quite happy, got her work done, and then spent a few hours in town with Rie and Rino, before going to sleep happier than she'd been since Friday morning.

The next morning she was in A all day. She hadn't expected Takahashi to want to talk to her or anything, but before class started she came over.

'I just wanted to make sure you were all right Yokoyama. After... well you know.'

'I'm... okay. I suppose.'

'No hard feelings?'

'I couldn't have them if I wanted to.'

'Atta girl,' Takamina laughed, gave her another hug as if to say she was sorry, and headed to her seat waiting for Togasaki-sensei to come in to teach them.

She got on well enough for the rest of the week, managing to speng time with her friends and return to some facsimile of what life had been like a week earlier, even if she wasn't nearly as happy. She found Sayaka was oddly distracted, but she couldn't do much about that could she.

It was Friday night again, and she'd just finished her homework, when Sayaka came into her room.

'Ready to go?'

It took Yui a few moments to realise that they were supposed to be going out and just having fun for the night. Sayaka's parents were out of town so they'd be staying at her house so they could be out as long as they liked. She took a few minutes to be ready before they both set off into the city.

The two headed into town and went to a club that was open to under-20's, though of course it didn't serve alcohol. Not that Sayaka was allowed to drink alcohol anyway. Given the two of them were both quite attractive, after a while they realised they were attracting some unwanted attention, and so they went outside for a bit. Yui noticed Sayaka was still looking kind of distracted, all things considered.

'Are you okay Sayaka-chan?'

'I'm fine... a little worried about you though.'

'What do you mean?'

Sayaka took out the letter.

'Thats...'

'Do you need someone to talk to about this Yui?'
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
What does Takamina mean I wonder? (I should know really since I'm writing but you know)

Also next chapter we'll get to see what was actually written in the letter. (Need to get on that as well)

I'm a terrible writer. I should just give up now.

[ikun1216]

I don't know what your talking about, you being a terrible writer. That's nonsense. So far you're on chapter 3 and I'm enjoying what I'm reading. 

Ah....Sayaka. . .I hope you're not gonna disprove of Yuihan's crush   

Takamina just attracts everyone doesn't she? 

[stepk]

Takamina i hope can she fall in love with Yui. 

Really great history

thanks for upload. 

[Yui Oshi 48]

@ikun126: interesting idea *scribbles notes*.

Now if you didn't believe my writing was awful before I think this one will convince you.

                                                                                                                             
'That's mine. Why do you have that? You didn't...'

'You left it at my house last weekend'

'Did you..'

'Yes. I'm sorry Yui, I shouldn't have, but I got too curious'

Yui just sat stunned a little.

'I understand why you've been looking so sad the last few days. I realise she must have said no'

'I'm annoyed at you Sayaka. How could you?'

'It's because you were clearly miserable. And now I see why. You've been pretending to be alright all of last week, but really you're not.'

'You can't just..'

'I brought you out here so you could have some fun and forget about it for a night. I think you really need it.'

'I understand your trying to make things better, but I'm not staying if your idea of having some fun is getting off with a bunch of random guys.'

'Eh?'

'There were a lot in the club, I assumed you were getting ideas.'

'No don't worry I wasn't planning anything like that. This is getting boring as it is don't you think.'

'Come with me to the shop then, I'll get us some booze, it'll make things funner'

'I'm not old enough'

'Come on, this way. Live a little'

Sayaka smiled a little as her friend dragged her towards the shop.

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Sayaka surveyed the envelope. It clearly said on it 'Takamina-san'. 'I shouldn't read it, this is Yui's private business.' She though to herself.

All to quickly though curiosity got the better of her and she opened the letter, and read it.

'Takahashi-sempai. I'm sorry to have to bother you like this. But there's something I've been keeping to myself for a long time now and I need to speak up. I'm sure Takahashi-san doesn't even care about me, but she is kind so I hope she will at least here me out.

I love you sempai. You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. Your attitude towards life and all the things about you make me smile every day. I realise though, sempai, that you probably won't accept my feelings, but if you could, please at the least, go on a date with me to the curry house tomorrow. If you want to'

Sayaka put the letter away. A few tears rolled down her cheek. Yui had created something this beautiful out of love for someone. She realised now she must be hurting inside something awful.

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Yui had bought 2 reasonably size bottles of alcohol, and brought them out to the waiting Sayaka. They drank about half of each before returning to the club.

In the club they waited until a song they liked started playing, and then started dancing, which had the additional benefit of giving the alcohol a chance to have some affect on them.

They had been dancing as pretty much just the two of them together even when they'd been there earlier, but Yui could tell, just about, that they seemed to be getting a lot closer to each other than before, Yui even bumping into Sayanee's chest a couple of times.

At some point a random guy walked over to them, clearly with intention to try to hit on one or the both of them. Sayaka was looking for a window to escpae, Yui took a moment to realise there wasn't a choice, grabbed Sayaka's head, and kissed her. The guy quickly changed course towards another pair of girls. The moment they were sure he'd gone they pulled apart and giggled.

'Sorry, couldn't think of anything else'

'Never mind, we got a laugh in'

They stayed in the club another hour before finding where the alcohol was and leaving, heading back to Sayaka's house, finishing the alcohol just before they got back there.

There was no particular need to be quiet or tidy since Sayaka's parents weren't home, so they just dumped their things inside and walked up to Sayaka's room.

When they got up there they realised Sayaka hadn't actually prepared the bed Yui normally slept in, and neither of them was in a state to sort it out now.

'Ah well. I'll just sleep on the floor'

'No Yui. It's my fault, you can sleep in my bed'

Eventually the two agreed to just both sleep in Sayaka's bed. But neither of them was tired yet so they stole some drink from the kitchen and sat at the foot of the bed laughing about things.  Eventually they wound up talking about their kiss earlier.

'Did you see the guys face when we did it though?'

'Of course not, I was looking the other way. I have to say you did catch me by surprise a little with the kiss'

'I'm sorry, it was just the only thing I could think of.'

'No it's fine. Honestly, I actually quite enjoyed it.'

'It was quite fun wasn't it? I was happy for the distraction really.'

It took a moment for them to realise their hands were on each others faces. It took another to realise their faces were a lot closer than they needed to be. It was only seconds before their lips touched.
                                                                                                                                                       
Uh... plot twist!  It won't stay like this forever but for now I'm doing this. Please don't hurt me 

Now while writing this chapter I discovered two things One was the rediscovery that I can't write love letters. The other was that I am no good at setting up romantic tension.

Not really a lot else to say except that you can expect my first submission to the perv soonish.

[hara]

SayaYui   

this is so interesting !



waiting for next update 

[stepk]

so cute letter Yui

But I'm a little confused is Yamamoto Sayaka o Akimoto Sayaka? 

[Yui Oshi 48]

^Yamamoto. I said in the first chapter. I realise it's kind of confusing, but I didn't think using nicknames really worked in the setting (I could be completely wrong of course), and I realise I've already broken the rule with Takamina, but it's honestly just easier to think.

[hara]

Why u not use "Sayane" for nick "Sayaka Yamamoto",,
because someone had confused with "Sayaka"..


"Sayane" is a famous nickname for Sayaka Yamamoto, right ? 

[ikun1216]

Your writing is still not horrible

Though I do want to know who would sell alcohol to minors, ah well this is why it's called fiction lol.

I found the ending scene to be quite cute. 

[LoyalFlutist]

Interesting concept with both Yui and Minami. But this moment with Sayanee and Yuihan. •^• Sayanee seems to really like Yui~ How is this going to go? *^*

Hope to see the next update! \o