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Re: Atsuki's Stories: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #120 on: March 19, 2014, 05:39:02 PM »
Domo~ im new reader here  :)

U know,i really love read ur story but where are u atsuki-san?  :l

I need ur update,please come back and update this story.
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Re: Atsuki's Stories: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #121 on: April 20, 2014, 04:52:38 AM »
Woah, it's been a year and i've really been busy [[plus hell with akb graduations specially yuko's]] anywayyy please look forward to an update this week ^^


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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #122 on: April 21, 2014, 12:45:58 AM »
whoa!!! atsuki-san u back!!!
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welcome back atsuki-san  :welcome
are u going to continue this fiction???  :ding:
i will so happy if u really do cause i really love ur fiction.
so please continue it atsuki-san,i'll be waiting   :hee: :on gay: :on GJ: :on asmo:

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #123 on: April 22, 2014, 02:38:03 AM »
adorei a fanfic :twothumbs
mal posso esperar pela atualização!  :thumbup

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #124 on: April 22, 2014, 08:48:07 AM »
welcome back Atsuki-san >.<

I'm still waiting for the updates of this fic :)

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #125 on: April 22, 2014, 09:07:16 AM »
Wow, now that you're back...

I guess its a good time as ever to comment about your fanfic lol since I thought you dropped it...

I really love it. The writing is great and I just love the story line. Minami being the leader and having that aura that no one dares to say anything back is freaking awesome  :heart: and sad for Atsuko, being bullied by Minami's fans X3 Wish something would happen already so other fans can worship her too haha

anyway, please update soon. I'm dying to know more XD
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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina)Chap6.2[5/4/13]
« Reply #126 on: April 22, 2014, 01:56:03 PM »
Chapter 6

Part III

Sayaka has been looking for Yuko all over the university but to her misfortune, there’s still no sight of a squirrel-like girl. Her beloved classmate as well as childhood friend who is the epitome of pervertedness and lack of obedience to commoners’ rules and regulations has only been appearing in their very own haunted house whenever she likes or when Sayaka is guarding her.
 
Yuko is like magic, one blink from Sayaka and she’s gone. And with all due respect to Sayaka’s deducing skills, a certain Tomomi Itano left her post too along and went with Yuko.

Kami-7 her ass.

There will be no gods or whatshits on Class K. Every member – like what Sayaka calls her beloved blockmates, equal. They will abide to every damn rule there is. Even with idiotic things like school-festival. And neglecting your duties has consequences.

But this is not really the reason why she’s looking for Yuko. Before, maybe it is. But now, it’s something more terrifying.
 
“How could I even forget?!” Sayaka said as she started walking to Class B’s maid café. Of course, this is where the squirrel would go. Again.

As much as Sayakahated going into Class B’s booth, she must swallow whatever she must swallow and tell Yuko about the incoming storm. They’re friends after all.

“Otsukare-samadeshita.” A girl in maid costume said, bowing her head.

She’s the one from before.

“Oh,” The maid realized, “It’s you again.”

“Yeah, it’s me again.” Sayaka sighed. “I don’t want to make any fuss about this again too. But I need to talk to that pest over there.” Sayaka said, pointing at the perverted squirrel who has a lot of food on her table, which looks like untouched, for the sake of overstaying inside the café.

“Yuko-sama?”

“The one and only yeah.”

Sayaka started walking towards Yuko who’s apparently in heaven with the maid she paid for a private serving – Haruna. Despite Haruna’s usual attitude of being a tsundere towards Yuko, the two looked like they’re having a great time. Too bad.

As if it’s automatic, Yuko immediately sensed Sayaka’s aura.

“No- Sayaka, i-I’m just eating here. I got hungry you see.” Yuko blurted out. “Please don’t scold me, Nyannyan’shere, I might drop my cool points.”

Haruna chuckled at Yuko’s words. “You don’t have one to start with.”

“Mou, nyannyan~” Yuko pouted. “Stop being a tsundere to me. Just tell me you like me too and we will live naughtily ever after in every bed in existence.”

Haruna’s face turned red. “P-pervert! I’ll never say yes to you!”

“That hurts!” Yuko feigned a heart attack.

“Stop PDA-ingwill you.” Sayaka said feigning an irritated look. She’s actually enjoying it. Who wouldn’t though? The two looked cute together and all. “I’m not here to scold you, that’ll come later. I’m just here to tell you that your dad is looking for you.”

Yuko’s aura changed in an instant. Her eyes mirrored both shock and fear. The atmosphere was altered in an instant.

“Is that so?” Was all she managed to say.


ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪


Mayu is enjoying this job. Maybe, next summer she’ll apply in one of Akihabara’s danso café. If oneactually existed. She felt like an anime character and this made her very happy. Add up the fact that she looked very handsome in this Doctor Suite. It’s like cosplaying, but not really.

Everything is so perfect for her at the moment. Maybe, she’ll thank the crazy senpais who are chasing her all over the university just to be with her in the marriage booth. And there’s definitely no way she’ll be entering a marriage booth with one of them. Watanabe Mayu isn’t gonna marry anyone. She’s not into 3D peeps.

Or maybe she is.

You know how animals have this kind of instinct where they can feel the presence of their prey? It’s not really a good comparison on what’s happening with Mayu right now but it is still enough for a comparison.

In this wide and crowded room, she saw her, wandering and looking lost in this crowd of hormonal girls which she definitely didn’t belong in – her bestfriend, Yukirin.

Mayu ignored her current costumers. She stood up and tried to catch her bestfriend’s attention. “I can make you feel better, Miss.”

Yukirin raised an eyebrow. Is the doctor talking to her cause it looks like it. She looked at her back wondering if he’s talking to some other person but no, it’s definitely her he’s talking to.

Mayu signalled her costumers that their time is over, they were about to extend their time when Mayu quickly went to Yuki’s and made the other girl sit beside her.

Now that they’re only inches apart, Yuki confirmed her theory. This handsome doctor here is none other than her cute cyborg.

“Mayuyu?”

“Sshh.”Mayuyu said, placing her index finger on Yuki’s soft lips. “This is a secret okay? I’m on a mission.”

“Mission?” Yuki said, wondering.

“Yeah.”Mayu smiled, “I’m here to make you have the best day of your life.” She winked.

“Are you pimping me?” Yuki replied, pinching both Mayu’s cheeks.

“AwwYukirin, I’m trying to be cool here.”

“You’re cute.” Yukirin said, tapping Mayu’s head. “Be a good girl, okay?”

“You won’t even ask why I’m here?” Mayu pouted.

Yukirin sighed, “I thought you don’t want me acting like a mom?”

“Yes, but that doesn’t mean I don’t want you to be concerned with me anymore.” Mayu said, pouting even more. “Senpais have been chasing me all around the whole day. They want me to go with them on a marriage booth something. Those lolicons.” Mayu whined.

“Really? Tell me their names so I can talk to them.” Yukirin said, “My poor Mayuyu, come here.” She said as she gave Mayu a warm and friendly hug.

But the warm and friendly hug lasted for a long time and the two didn’t know when the hugging should stop. Or maybe they didn’t want it to stop.

The other people inside the café are looking at them wondering if it’s part of the service because they want one. Who wouldn’t?

“I- look at the time, my break is almost is over.” Yuki said forcing a chuckle. “See you later then.”

“Yu-Yukirin, i-if you’re not busy later maybe w-we can have a stroll… together I mean. Fireworks?”Mayu said with all her might. Mayu doesn’t stutter. Never does she stutter. Only now.

“Of course we can!” Yuki replied happily.

She will ask Yukirin to come with her at the marriage booth, no matter what.


ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪


Mayuyu was preparing herself for the next costumers when she suddenly saw Tomochin leaving the café. This is a new sight- Tomochin at a danso café. There must be magic involved here, or maybe midget. Funny, the two words starts with m. Add Minami and that’s three.

But this isn’t really unusual, almost everyone in their mini set of friends knows the thing about Tomochin and Takamina. It’s not really ‘a thing’ it’s more like a ‘one-sided thing’. You take the guess on whose side.

Now that she thinks about it, the bathroom scene earlier came into her mind.

Those girls.

If it’s because of the animes she watched, she didn’t know. All she knows is that bullying is a great no-no in this school.

Especially that it involves her friend, Takamina and Tomochin in some way. How? Takamina is getting really depressed lately about her ‘thing’ with the transferee, Tomochin is getting really depressed lately because Takamina is getting depressed and you know, with love, your emotions are technically proportional to the feelings of the person that you love.

Even if it’s one-sided.

With the information that she got, all the depression may stop. But Mayu isn’t sure whether the ‘thing’ whatever it is, will. Her decision may make things more complicated but she’s just here to help, with good intentions.

“Tomochin!”Mayu called out as she followed the other girl.

Upon hearing her name called, Tomochin looked back. “Oh, it’s you.” she said, looking disappointed.

“Expecting someone else?” Mayu joked, half-meant.

Tomochin raised an eyebrow, “What’s up? And what’s with the cross dressing? You're not a senior. And you’re not even from class A.”

“You see, Itano-senpai my other senpais have been chasing me so I hid on the bathroom then I overheard a certain group of girls talking about the transferee and somewhat bullying and then I saw Mariko-sama and asked her to allow me participate in their booth. Then I saw Yukirin and we’re gonna go to the marriage booth later. Though that’s only my plan, don’t tell her.” Mayu explained.

“What about the transferee? Who’s doing what?” Tomochin said her tone changing from not-really interested to a yankee-pitch.

“Maeda-san is getting bullied by watarirouka.” Mayu said clearly.

Tomochin clenched her fists. Those stupid bastards. What the fuck were they thinking?

“And why are you telling me this?” Tomochin questioned.

“Because you asked me what’s up.” Mayu smiled,

“I’m not interested with Maeda. She can get bullied all she wants, maybe she’ll go back where she came from.”

“But you see,Kaichou’s feelings are at risk too. And you owe me one, okay?”

And with that, Mayu went back inside the café while Tomochin headed into Watarirouka’s room.

Tomochin knows that doing this will be saving Maeda’s ass. But then, bullying is still bullying. And Takamina’s feelings are also involved here. So no matter what angle Tomochin looks at, she definitely must set things right. Even if it ends up restoring Maeda and Takamina’s friendship.

For Takamina.



She finally reached the room, they weren’t really hard to find because it’s either they’re sweeping leaves in the grounds or they’re hanging out in their favourite room - occasion or no occasion at all.

“Itano-senpai!” They said in unison with a cheerful voice. A visit from their beloved senpai is so rare, especially if Takamina isn’t with them.

“What brought you here senpai?” Komori asked.

“Takamina-senpai isn’t here.” Rabutan joked.

If this was a normal time at a normal day where nothing serious is happening, Tomochin’s face would’ve been red already by hearing the name of Takamina. But no, it’s not what she came for.

“And I’m glad she isn’t.”

All the giggling and chuckling of the six stopped. They looked at Tomochin’s face. She’s definitely not in the mood for jokes.

“What the hell are you girls thinking!?” Tomochin said furiously, “Are you out of your fucking minds?!”

“S-senpai what are you saying?” Ayarin said in shock.

“You know what I’m talking about! Why are you bullying the transferee for heaven’s sake?”

“We’re only doing this to protect Takamina-senpai.” Wasamin said, defending their group.

All she got as a reply was a slap.

“S-SENPAI! Why did you do that?” Wasamin said on the verge of tears.

“Because YOU GUYS are wrong and that’s the most bullshit thing I ever heard. You’re not protecting Takamina or anyone by bullying Maeda.” Tomochin said as she placed her hands on her face for a second. “You’re just using it as an excuse for your pathetic desire to keep Minami all to yourselves.”

“B-but we thought you didn’t like her as well.” Komori answered.

"I don’t like her too okay?” Tomochin took a deep breath, “But that doesn’t mean I’ll start hating on her or bullying her.”
“And Minami –that Maeda has been keeping this all to herself you know. She didn’t ask for any help even though she’s friends with Takamina and Yuko. The two didn’t even know that Maeda is getting bullied. Minami has been bothered why Maeda isn’t talking to her anymore. Your beloved Kaichou is suffering. All because of you.”Tomochin said angrily.

“We’re s-“

“Shut up. I’m not fucking done yet.” Tomochin said, “You know what the worst thing about all this bullshit is?”
No one dared to answer.

“It’s the fact that you guys did it.”

“You’re very special to Takamina.” Tomochin continued, “I’m not asking you to say sorry to me or to Takamina or to Maeda. What I want is for you to do what you think is right.”

 “And oh, If you really want your beloved president to be happy, never hurt the things – or people that makes her smile. Even if it’s hard for you. Learn how to sacrifice”

Tears started to fall on the eyes of the girls.

Tomochin left the room, tears are also forming in her eyes as the words, ‘Learn how to sacrifice’ echoed in her head.


ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪ヽ(´▽`;)/♪


On the other side of the university, same amount of hidden anger and tears are flowing.





After ONE year   :cow: LOL. I actually re-read the whole story and oh my grammar mistakes  :cry: :cry: :cry: I hope to lessen such things from now on! PLEASE DO COMMENT. haha! I'm not demanding though, but i'm wishing haha!

It's already been a year so i'm not sure whether people will still read this. And what's a story without a reader? I just need an assurance lol  XD But i'm actually liking my own story. I reread it awhile ago and i got frustrated with the author on why the hell there's only 8 chapters then i remembered the author was me lol.

Anyways! I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter! haha! more to come.  :lol:
« Last Edit: July 16, 2014, 08:41:17 AM by atsuki »

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You're back...  :welcome

Why is Yuko so afraid of her father?? Is he strict?? There is some tension between him and Yuko?? He doesn't like Yuko's playfulness?

And Mayuki moment  :inlove:
I can't wait for them to go to the marriage booth  :lol:

And Tomochin is so nice

Keep writing..  :grin:

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thank you author-san, please update again about atsumina  :inlove:
 tomochin :cry: but sorry
minami only to atsuko  :twothumbs

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Ah... been a while

An update at last... Great work as always

Can't wait to see the next games

Thank you for the nice update

Ja... Take care

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« Last Edit: April 23, 2014, 03:27:44 PM by cisda83 »

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Atsuki-san waaahhhhh you update this fic <3 finally after almost a year of waiting *sigh....

thanks for the update atsuki-san. hopefully, you will be able to update more often ater this <3

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Welcome back author-san!  :hip smile:
I feel bad for tomochin, It's must be hard for her heart to accept that the one can makes takamina happy isn't her but someone else.

Looking forward the next update  :thumbup

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An update! Thx author san. Dont make us wait till next year yo! Lol

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@ubulubulbilu hahahahahaha  XD XD XD No Problem  :cow: Thanks for reading my story  :heart: Please look forward for my next update  :deco:
@Tubi T-Thankkks  :heart: Yes, huhuhu i don't want to make Tomochin forever alone in this fic  :cry: Takamina why u no see Tomochin's love?!?!  :banghead: but then, there's also acchan ughh we need another Takamina  :angry: Please do look forward for my next update!  :heart:
@Amachan48 Hi theereeeee! Sorry for the long hiatus  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: lmao university life is really hindering my fandom life ugh. But don't worry, I'll try updating more often maybe... twice a year  :nervous kidding. Please look forward for my next update!  :heart:
@cisda83 Yes, it's really been a while  :nervous haha! Thank you for reading this update  :heart: And do take care too  :heart: Please look frowrd for my next update!  :heart:
@liabont Don't worry  :thumbsup On the next chapter some relationships will be mended! hahaha :)) Let's hope for the best. And prepare for the worst of course Anyways, Thanks for reading the update  :heart: And please do look forward for my next update haha!  :deco:
@olive29 Nice questions  :lol: :lol: :lol: We will find out more about Yuko and her relationship with her father on the future chapters! and tears for kojiyuu  :cry: On the other note, let's see what'll happen to MaYuki and marriage booth haha! prepare yourselffffffffff! Please do look forward for the next update!  :heart:

Thank you guys for reading and commenting on this year-late update  :heart: Comments boost my writing will so thank you veryyy much!  :deco: :thumbup :peace:


 
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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina & Kojiyuu + OTHERS) UPDATE!!!
« Reply #134 on: April 23, 2014, 03:01:37 PM »
I read it and there's happy and sad..
Love the MaYuki!
Wonder about Yuko~
and Tomochin...I'm thinking the last part Takamina..?
Update please..
just love to read alot of fiction story

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina & Kojiyuu + OTHERS) UPDATE!!!
« Reply #135 on: April 23, 2014, 03:34:33 PM »
There is still people reading it, so please continue writing it !

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina & Kojiyuu + OTHERS) UPDATE!!!
« Reply #136 on: April 23, 2014, 06:24:58 PM »
yey!!!! an update!!!!  :mon dance:
thanks for an update atsuki-san ^^

whoa~ the sweet mayuki moment  :luvluv2:

TOMOCHIN!!!! KAKKOIIII!!!!
u right tomochin,love doesnt mean u have to belong the person but true love is happy when see that person happy  :cool1:
im proud to u,tomochin  :on asmo:
but still im atsumina shipper,so please give me atsumina moment soon  :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :shy1: :shy2:

eh? dare? some hear the conversation?
is that takamina? is she will scould them like tomochin?  :tama-uhh:
cant wait for next update,please update soon atsuki-san  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina & Kojiyuu + OTHERS) UPDATE!!!
« Reply #137 on: April 24, 2014, 05:23:57 PM »
adorei a fanfic! :love:
mal posso esperar pela  próxima atualização!!
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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina & Kojiyuu + OTHERS) UPDATE!!!
« Reply #138 on: April 24, 2014, 10:23:01 PM »
Hi there!
I totally love your story! Pls keep the good work up! The story is handsome!
I love Tomochin telling-off! But Atsumina all the way! XD

Thx u again! I await with interest the next update! ;)

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Re: There's More Into Friendship (AtsuMina & Kojiyuu + OTHERS) UPDATE!!!
« Reply #139 on: April 24, 2014, 11:58:23 PM »
An update?!

..Who was crying in the end though... Atsuko... Takamina... Yuko?

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