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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
« Reply #140 on: March 25, 2013, 10:27:18 AM »
Woah~ rena is sooooo cool ! she did everything to protect jurina.
How cool could that be!? and what did mayu and black talk about? Hmmmm..
thanks for the update :D

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 12 update 24/03/13
« Reply #141 on: April 06, 2013, 08:41:50 AM »
THIS FIC IS MY SUNSHINE~

IF GEKI RECOGNISE JURINA,AND JURINO TOO
WILL JURINA ACCEPT RENA? I MEAN,MAYBE JURINA THINK RENA ABANDONE HER AT THAT TIME
AND MAYBE SHE'S MAD CAUSE RENA DONT TRY TO SEARCH HER

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #142 on: April 10, 2013, 10:32:26 AM »
Chapter 13



Acchan was lying on her bed staring at the white ceiling thinking about someone.

Acchan’s pov

*Sighed*

I wonder what she is doing right now…
It’s been weeks I didn’t see her.
Takamina, do you miss me?
Because I miss you…so much!!

Arrghhh!!!
*flip her body and cover her face with the pillow*

Why am I acting like this?!?!!
What have you done to me??
I’ve tried hard to avoid thinking about you by working all day and going to casino...
But still you… *sighed* you keep on running in my head!!
Aren’t you tired?!! Running in my head like this??!!

End of Acchan’s pov


While Acchan was still frustrating, someone knocking on the door.
“Acchan are you in there?”Asked Mariko who was knocking the door just now.
Acchan got up sitting on the bed while fixing her hair and answered her.
“Y-yes…come in.”
Mariko come in and dragged a chair then sit in front of Acchan who sit at the edge of the bed.
Mariko looked at her for a while.
“Are you okay?” asked Mariko seeing Acchan’s frown face.
Acchan looks down and took a deep breath.
“Just tell me what it is Acchan...” said Mariko knowing something is bothering that girl.

“Marichan…c-can I ask you something?” asked Acchan with a low voice.
Mariko chuckled hearing Acchan calling her like that. She lean her back on the chair.
“Just ask me…anything” replied Mariko.
“Uhmm…have you ever always thinking of someone in your mind…?
I mean…like you can’t get the person out of your mind…” Asked Acchan while playing with her bed sheet.
Mariko smirked with the question.
“It was that girl right? On your mind…” asked Mariko without answering her question.
Acchan slowly nodded.
“*sighed* I can’t believe that you would fall for Takamina…” said Mariko looking at the window.
Acchan was shocked hearing Mariko knew her name.
“H-how-“
“-Did I know her name? Is that what you want to say?” Interrupted Mariko.
“Y-yes...” replied Acchan.
“Hmmm…Let’s just say that she’s my old friend. And I’ve been watching you two before…” Mariko says.
“You mean…she’s a mafia too…I mean before??” asked Acchan.
“No she’s not…we’re friend…but in other world, we’re like rivals. It’s hard to explain this…” said Mariko sigh.
Acchan was still trying to process everything.
“Don’t worry Acchan, she’s not a cop.” Smiled Mariko.
“Then what is she?” Asked Acchan again.
“Hmmmm…I can’t tell you that…the author already glaring at me now...” Said Mariko.
“Tell me Acchan…you like her don’t you?” asked Mariko smiling to Acchan.
Acchan blushed when Mariko asked her.
“So you do like her…” smirked Mariko.
“I just…*sighed* I don’t know…what happen to her actually? That she becomes like that?” asked Acchan curious.
“You know Acchan, better you ask Miichan. She knows more than me.” Said Mariko.
“You know Miichan too??” Asked Acchan looking at her.
Mariko got up and goes to the door. Before she walked out, she turned to look at Acchan and smiled.
‘What is that smile means to?’ said Acchan to herself.


*Meanwhile*

At school

“Mayuyu, are you going to school tomorrow night?” asked Mayuyu’s friend.
“For what?” asked Mayuyu confused.
“Ehh?? Don’t you know? Tomorrow night is our school cross-dressing competition!!!” said her friend.
“Really? I haven’t made any preparation for that…” said Mayuyu.
“Well, you still have time today…you should go Mayuyu…it has to be awesome like last year!” said her friend excited.
“You’re right, I should go tomorrow night.” Said Mayuyu.
Suddenly she remembered something.

Flashback when Mayuyu and Black having a small talk.

“What is it?” asked Mayuyu annoyed.
“From now on, If you want to go somewhere at night, call me and I’ll come with you.” Said Black.
Mayuyu smirked.
“What would you do if I didn’t call you?” Said Mayuyu.
Black suddenly grabbed Mayu’s shirt and slammed her softly on the wall.
Mayuyu’s eyes widen by her action.
Black looked into mayuyu’s eyes and told her,
“If you still want me as your bodyguard then, or not I will asked your father
to find other bodyguard for you. Do you want the same thing happen twice like tonight?”

‘Is she threatening me just now?’ thought Mayuyu.

“N-no.” answered Mayuyu pouted.
‘And I don’t want other bodyguard…’ said her in her mind.

End of flashback.

“It can’t be helped then…” mumbled Mayuyu while looking out of the window.






At Miichan’s bakery


Miichan was busy writing a list of ingredients to buy when
A tall figure like a model walking into the bakery.
As she approached the counter where Miichan is still looking down writing something,
Miichan sense a customer is in front of her so she looks up and greeted her.
“Good Evening-“as Miichan saw that person she was shocked and couldn’t say anything.
“Good Evening.” Replied Mariko still with her black glasses on.
“Are you here…to buy something...Shinoda-sama? Asked Miichan raising her eyebrow.
“Nope. I’m just…visiting.” Replied Mariko smiled.
Miichan put both her hand on the counter and looking at Mariko with eyes half open.
“I just want to tell you something.” Mariko said.

Miichan sighed then told her worker to take care of the counter while she brings Mariko to the back room.
Mariko sit on a chair with a big desk in front her while Miichan making a hot chocolate for them.
“Looks like your business going well…” said Mariko looking around the room.
Miichan didn’t answer her and just putting a cup of hot chocolate in front of Mariko and she took a sit at the opposite.
“What is it that you came here by yourself just to tell me something?” Asked Miichan.
Mariko took a sip of her hot chocolate.

“Hmmm…long time no see you.” Said Mariko.
Miichan narrowed her eyes to Mariko and put both her hands on the table and intertwined them.
“Just tell me Mariko…I have worked to do.” Miichan says.
“*sighed* fine~ I just want to tell you about Acchan…”
Miichan shocked.
“Acchan? How did you know her?!!” said Miichan rising voice a bit.

Mariko let out a small laugh.

“Acchan is my group’s member, the new ace.” Replied Mariko.
“WHAAAT??!!! Miichan was shocked hearing it from Mariko.
“Calm down Gachapin~~ She’s not that bad…she’s a good girl.” Explain Mariko.
“But she and Takamina…”
“I know…I’ve seen them once. You know about it too right?” said Mariko.

Miichan nodded.

“But still she’s a mafia like you!! It could danger Takamina’s life you know!!
She’s not ‘that’ Takamina right now as you can see!” said Miichan worried.
“You’re right…” said Mariko.

Both of them sighed. Then they look at each other.
“Acchan likes her.” Said Mariko looking at the cup she’s holding.
“I know…Takamina likes her more…” replied Miichan.
“But if Takamina knows who Acchan really is…she might get mad at her...or herself…” said Miichan again.
“Miichan, like you said, Takamina is not ‘that’ Takamina right now. So I think it safe if they are together.” Explain Mariko.
“You’re talking like they are lovers you know…” said Miichan looking at Mariko.

“Can’t you see? There’s something between them? You know like…they keep thinking about each other...” smirked Mariko.
“Ahh~~ Now I realized…Takamina doesn’t look happy recently because Acchan is not coming to see her. And I heard from Mayuyu she always ask Black about her...hmm” said Miichan while doing thinking pose.
“Wait, Black? Black too?!!” said Mariko shocked.
“Well, Black is Mayuyu’s bodyguard. You know her? Don’t tell me she’s a mafia too??!!!” shout Miichan.
“*sighed* well, yes Black is my girl…seriously it’s been 5 years I leave you guys but so many have changed…*sighed*” Said Mariko sighing.

Then both of them sighed again.

“Author-san sure knows how thing goes…” said Mariko rubbing the edge of her forehead.
“There’s still a lot of thing that I need to know. And you must tell me EVERYTHING. Mariko…” said Miichan glaring at Mariko.
“Wrong, it’s WE my dear~ so…Are you going back to your old job?” smirked Mariko.
“Uhmmmm…I don’t think so…besides, it’s not complete without no3b~  :P and now Takamina is a ‘kid’…I can’t.” replied Miichan.
“Well then, I tell you everything, and you tell me everything you know. Deal?” said Mariko.
“Deal~ gossip girl~” smirked Miichan.


to be continued~


Hey, anyone?  :?
It's been a looong time~~ hahaha  :lol:
and before that,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TAKAMINA!!!
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I LOVE YOU SOU-CHAN!!!! MUAAHHH MUAHHH MUAHHH!!!
Uhummm...so...how was it? If there's anything wrong with the update please tell me minna..  :kneelbow:
and if you have some idea just tell me~   :mon misch:
k.bye  :mon loveflower:
Oh, and I'll try to update more often~ well, if nothing goes wrong~  :mon santa4:
I gave you a hint about that someone already~  :cool1:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #143 on: April 10, 2013, 11:29:03 AM »
DANSO!!! later on~? xD woooot! And what the hell seriously happen to Takamina that she's acting like that! >_< So Takamina was also a mafia before then...? Well anyways~ thanks for the chapter! xD looking forward to the next ones~
can I wish Takamina turns back into a badass mafia... xD

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #144 on: April 10, 2013, 12:53:42 PM »
Thanks for the update! Very interesting chapter! A few revelations where made like that everyone pretty much knows each other & has a past together! I'm really curious about "that" Takamina. What she was like b4/who she was & what happened!!!
Thanks again! I look forward to the next chapter :D

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #145 on: April 10, 2013, 05:05:22 PM »
yeay an update!  :onioncheer: :whistle: :on woohoo:

interesting.. did not really thought that takamina, miichan and haruna will be no3b in marfia.. haha

now it getting more curious about takamina and acchan past!

Can't wait to know what Black will react when she saw Mayu's danso..haha

please update soon  :mon pray2:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #146 on: April 11, 2013, 12:56:40 AM »
Aachan misses Minami so much...   

Hahaha.... how can Minami in Atsuko's mind is tired of running...  :lol:

Mariko knew Takamina from before....

Eh... rival... what kind?

May be 'love' rival... Mariko likes Miichan but Miichan likes Takamina... or unable to leave Takamina alone in her condition?

Curious here.... more mysteries to solve

Ara... Mayu starting to like Black... she didn't want any other bodyguard

Mayu is going to go shopping for her cross-dress costume with Black

Going to be great shopping experience for Black  :lol:

Ah... so No3b is mafia group... and Mariko used to be in their group...

What kind of Mafia was Takamina, Haruna and Miichan...?

What happen to Takamina that made her become like a child?

Where did Haruna go...?

So the most important person for Takamina and Miichan is Haruna?

Can't wait to see what happen next

Hope you can answer some of the mystery... like make a flashback chapter or something...

Ah... you made me so impatient to know everything about everything...

Great update as always... making it more and more interesting

Thank you for the lovely update

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PS: The one to be in danger if Takamina and Atsuko together would be Takamina with her current condition. Some more, no one seem to recognize Takamina anymore as a mafia member.

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #147 on: April 11, 2013, 02:50:13 AM »
ohh poo minami T_T

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #148 on: April 11, 2013, 08:00:00 AM »
I'm so curious here
at first, I thought that no3b is mafia but mariko say they weren't
 what did happen to MInami and No3b
and how was that Minami like?
argh..I'm so confused
chiquina-san please update soon
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #149 on: April 11, 2013, 10:20:02 AM »
Lol cross dressing competition huh xD cant wait ! Since black is coming she might just fall for mayu hahahaha
Thanks for the update :D

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #150 on: April 11, 2013, 02:53:19 PM »
Cross-dressing competiton :on woohoo:
Yuki also come to :on gay:
Can't wait to see what happen :on speedy:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 13 update 10/04/13
« Reply #151 on: April 11, 2013, 04:21:06 PM »
Can't wait to see Mayu in the cross-dressing competition ! must be so Kakoi!!!

I bet Black will go  :on bleed: :luvluv1: :nya:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #152 on: April 12, 2013, 12:15:38 PM »

There is some misunderstanding here, Takamina, Miichan Haruna is not a mafia. Hiichan was right.  :)
Maybe you should read chapter 13 again to confirm it~  :P thanks for commenting! I appreciates all your comments and love it!!  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
So many mysteries~  :dizzy: hahaha  :lol:


Chapter 14


After school

As usual, Black was waiting Mayuyu at the school gate.
“Mayuyu!!! Wait for me!!” said Lovetan while running to Mayuyu who walk ahead of her.
Mayuyu ignore her but still walking slowly towards Black.
“Mayuyu, are you going for the competition tomorrow night?” Asked Lovetan.
“Of course I will. I must win this competition again.” Said Mayuyu smile to Lovetan.
“So…what type of ikemen you will be this time?” Lovetan ask her while walking beside her.
“Hmmmmm…I haven’t thought about it yet…” tell Mayuyu.
“Last year you dress as a young doctor…and you won.
 I think you should dress like that again…haha and being chased by many girls~
 I remembered last time they chased you all the way to our house…” Said Lovetan while
imagining what happen during the competition last year.
“Yeah~ yeah~ whatever…this time I have a bodyguard. I don’t think it would be a problem.” Smirked Mayuyu
while Black just followed her from behind.
“You’re right…” replied Lovetan nodding her head slowly.

That evening, Mayuyu and Black going to clothes shop.
She already has an idea for the competition but she won’t tell anyone yet.



Meanwhile,

Jurina and Kanon already finish their extra classes and heading to their home.
Jurina is still thinking about Rena. She really wants to know whether that girl related to her past since she doesn’t really remember anything about her past.
‘I need to ask her’ thought Jurina.
As they were walking home, they did not realize that Rena was watching her from afar.
‘I need to see her once more…’ said Rena to herself.
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Today, someone had been released from prison. Two black-coat men came out from a black luxury car.
 They came to escort him.
“How are you, sir? We came to bring you home.” Said one of the men.
He smiled a little and stretching his arms.
“5 years holiday is not that bad though…” he said then goes inside the car.

They arrived at the big house.
A man came out from the house with his walking stick.
He approached the man that just arrived and hugged him.
“Welcome back, my son.” Said the old average man to him.
“It’s been five years, dad.” Said him smiled.
The two father and son smirked to each other.






Okay Let’s skip to the danso night!!!!  :sweat:


Mayuyu is still at home waiting for Black.
Lovetan, Jurina and Kanon already at the school since early because they
have to help for the preparation since they did not enter the competition.
Mayuyu saw Miichan wearing a casual clothes like she want to go out somewhere.
Miichan was in hurry.
“Where are you going?” Asked Mayuyu.
“Ah! Eh…I have a dinner with my friend tonight, take care of Takamina!!” said Miichan already out of the house.
“W-wait!!! *sighed* I have to go out too!” said Mayuyu but Miichan already far away so she couldn’t hear her.

“Then, who’s going to take care of Takamina if I go out too? Black?” said Mayuyu to herself.
But then she has one idea. Mayuyu smirked thinking about what to do.
She took out her phone and text Black.
Black was about to go out of her room when she got the message from Mayuyu.
Black was confused when she read the message.
Then Black goes to Acchan’s bed to do what Mayu told her to.

In Acchan’s room, Acchan was looking out at the window.
She heard the door open so she turns around and saw Black.
There was an awkward moment for a while.
“Ano…I just want to tell that I heard from Mayuyu that…Takamina is…sick.” Black said to Acchan.
Acchan was shocked hearing that.
“What??!! I need to see her.” Said Acchan suddenly stormed out of her room to go to see Takamina.

‘That was fast reaction…’ thought Black.

‘But I saw Takamina is alright and healthy this morning…I wonder what Mayuyu is planning actually…’ said Black to herself then she also started heading to Mayuyu.
Acchan was running all the way to Takamina’s house while Black already arrived at the house. Well, you know…  :whistle: teehee~

Mayuyu and Black are at the living room.
“Mayu-Chan…where is everyone?” said Takamina walking to the living room.
“Miichan is having a dinner she said…and the rest is already at school, and I also going to school now.” Explain Mayuyu while sitting waiting for someone.
“You said Takamina is sick.” Mumbled Black but still can be heard Mayuyu.

Mayuyu only smirked.

Suddenly the front door opens revealing Acchan  panting with worried face.
Acchan then bowed and said,”Ah, sorry for intruding your house.”

As soon as Takamina saw Acchan, her smiles growing bigger.
“Acchann!!!” scream Takamina happily running to Acchan and hug her tightly.
Acchan was still confused but she slowly hugging Takamina back.
“I really miss Acchan~~~” said Takamina still hugging her.
“Eh??” the only word that Acchan could say.

After a while, they part the hug session~
“I thought you were sick…”said Acchan when she saw Takamina is all healthy.
“Sorry for lying to you. Takamina is not sick. I just need someone to take care of Takamina because everyone was all out tonight. Gomen~” said Mayuyu walking to them.
“Sou ka…” replied Acchan.
“We have to go now, bye~ and take care of Takamina!!!” said Mayuyu smirked then walk out to the front door followed by Black.

Acchan realize that they were alone now.
“I miss to play with Acchan~” mumbled Takamina.
“I miss Takamina too~”said Acchan smiled seeing Takamina pout face.
“Ne Acchan, do you want to play with me?” Asked Takamina then smiling widely because
she was too happy seeing Acchan again after a long time.
“But its night, w-we can’t go to playground.” Said Acchan.
“Mou~ we can play here also…I always play this video game with Mayu-Chan and Jurina-chan.” Said
Takamina taking Acchan’s hand and drag her to the living room.
“I see…” said Acchan while sitting at the couch and just watching Takamina setting the video game to play with Acchan.
The Takamina gives her one of the game controller.
‘H-how am I going to play this??!!’ thought Acchan as it was her first time playing that kind of game.





Meanwhile



Miichan already arrived at the restaurant where she and Mariko planned to meet.
They were at the second floor at the restaurant to take a good view.
The wall at the second floor was all glasses and you can see everything outside.
“Sorry for late…” said Miichan as she sat down on the chair and Mariko sat across her.
“Take your order first.” Said Mariko.
After Miichan take order for her foods, they started to talk.

“So…how’s Acchan become Rappappa’s member? And ace?” Asked Miichan.
“Well, I found her 4 years ago…she’s running from a gangster and I save her…
she said nothing about why she was being chased…one day, I saw her fighting some
street gangster so I just ask her to join me…and the reason why she’s the ace is because…
she has that kind of aura that Yuko have…” explain Mariko.
“I see…so you’re searching for a new replacement for Yuko?” Asked Miichan again.
“Well, since Yuko retire from the group, Rappappa’s reputation has dropped.
I have to find new ace and I found her. Even though Yuko is fiercer than her…” replied Mariko.
“So how about Black?” Asked Miichan.
“Black was not my member actually, she was a member of our rival but they betrayed her and they kill all of her family, the only left was her…she was lucky to be saved by Watanabe Hiroshi, my client and after that she said she wants to join me.” Explain Mariko.
“No wonder she was Mayuyu’s bodyguard…” said Miichan looking at the food being put on their table.
“Mayuyu? Watanabe Mayu?” Mariko says confused.
“Yeah…Watanabe Hiroshi’s only daughter, but I never met his father actually. But if Black is your member, why did she becomes a bodyguard?” asked Miichan.
“Well, even though she is my member but we need to satisfy our clients, plus Black owed her life to him so she worked with him also.” Tell Mariko.
“Sou ka…”





Meanwhile


Mayuyu is in the dressing room at school to prepare for her turn.
Black was at the guardian’s place since they were also students coming with their parents.
Mayuyu already wears her clothes.
You mean…like this??!!

“Kakkoiiiiii!!! Mayu-kun!!!!!” said some fangirling student when they saw Mayuyu inside the dressing room. They were peeking for the outside actually.
There were also other competitors in there.
Mayu was looking at herself at the big mirror.
“Hmm…not bad.” Said her while fixing her clothe.

Suddenly someone hug Mayuyu from behind making her squealed.
Mayuyu look behind to see the person.
“Lovetan!!! Don’t scare me like that!!” shout Mayuyu to Lovetan who smirked to her.
“Awww~~ Mayu-kun so kawaii when she’s mad~ ahahaha!” laughed Lovetan.
“What are you doing here?” asked Mayuyu.
“I just want to say good luck to you! I have to go now bye~” said Lovetan walking out of the room.





Back to Marimii

As they were eating, Miichan saw a man comes out from a black car.
“Hey, Mariko, look…” said Miichan to Mariko to look at the direction.
Mariko stopped eating when she saw the man.
“Looks like he already got released from the prison.” Said Miichan.
The man with his people entered the casino that was across the restaurant they were at.
“And we know what’s that mean, he’s back.” Mariko says serious.

“By the way, I want to ask you something, do you know someone’s name Rena?” asked Miichan.
“Rena? She’s a member of mine too. Why?”Asked Mariko to Miichan curious.
“Does she have younger sister?” asked Miichan again.
“I don’t know…why?”
“Nothing. You still remember Jurina right?” Asked Miichan.
“Yes, why she’s still with you?” replied Mariko.
“Un, Takamina insist that we should bring her home so...” said Miichan shrugged her shoulder.
 “And, I think Jurina told me that she had an older sister called Rena-Chan when she was still kid but I don’t think she remember about it.” Added Miichan.
“Rena-Chan? Hmmm…maybe they are related…who knows?” said Mariko.




Meanwhile



The competition already started. The participant has to walk and showed their charming smile so that the judges will gave them more marks.
It was Mayuyu’s turn to show up.
Her fans already screaming even before she goes up to the stage.
When she walks on the stage, the audience started to scream and Mayuyu showing her charming smile.
Black saw her on the stage with the cross-dressing.

‘Mayu…yu??’ said Black in her mind.

Mayuyu saw Black was looking at her so she wink at her making all the girls screaming loudly.
Black looking away hides her blush. ‘What is this feeling?’ said Black to herself when she felt her heart is beating faster.

After all the participant finished, it was time to judge their performance.
Long after that, they announced the winner. It looks like Mayuyu win again this year.
And also, it looks like many fan girls will follow her home tonight.

As Mayuyu was about to enter the dressing room to change her clothes, suddenly there was bunch of girls running to her from the opposite site while screaming her name.
“Why there’s always no time to change!?!! I need to run now!” Mayuyu said as she run from them.
Black was waiting for her outside.

As Mayuyu was hiding from the crazy fans, she saw Black was waiting for her at the gate.
Mayuyu walking to Black but then she heard a loud screaming from behind.
It was them, but more of them are going after her.
“So many??!! I’m tired to run already!!” said Mayuyu. Mayuyu got an idea.
Suddenly she jumps on Black’s back.
“Just run and don’t look back!” Command Mayuyu to Black while putting her arms tightly around Black’s neck.
But Black looks back also and when she saw them, her eyes widen and give a shocked expression.
“I told you just run already!!!” shout Mayuyu making Black started to run faster.
To the crazy fan, they were confused because Mayuyu suddenly disappeared in front of them.
“Ehhh??! Where is Mayu-kun? She was here just now…” said one of them confused.
"Ehhhh??!!"
 




to be continued~


sorry, I just want to say sorry~  :kneelbow:
please keep on commenting~ :D
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Offline steven_0809

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #153 on: April 12, 2013, 12:43:40 PM »
hahahahahahahaha mayu u just got hunt by fan girl

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #154 on: April 12, 2013, 01:35:05 PM »
LOL

Mayuyu fans!!

Looks like black start to like mayu's

Who's that man?
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #155 on: April 12, 2013, 01:48:50 PM »
The last scene was so funny xD

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #156 on: April 12, 2013, 01:49:21 PM »
Sorry for the misunderstanding, chiqinna-san

I wrote the review after reading everything... and didn't read your story again to confirm it.

Yeah... you did write Minami was not a mafia or a cop... It still doesn't explain what kind of group is No3b... Can't wait to find out...

Eh... Mayu was being chased around when she was danso as a young doctor (as in AKBingo)... I can just image it...  :lol:

Rena and Jurina want to know each other.... Can't wait how they are going to develop

Who is this man and his father... He was prison for 5 years... why and how? Mystery again...?!

Ah... The man seems to have some relation with Mariko's and Miichan in the past... what kind?

Eh... Mayu is so naughty but she was good, she can make Atsuko come to see Takamina after avoiding her...

Atsuko and Takamina are so cute together...

As I thought Miichan was on a date with Mariko...

Eh.. Mariko's group was Yuko's... where did she go... and why she retired?

Mayuyu is so cute in her danso  :) Yuki seems to like Mayu's danso... Her heart was beating very fast... seed of love... :inlove:
 
Yeah... Mayuyu won.... and she is being chased around again...

She has a good common sense... with her being carried by Black... Black can used her speed to help escape Mayu from her fans....

Good trick.... :lol:

Can't wait to see the next one...

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #157 on: April 12, 2013, 02:33:02 PM »
You updated! :D

Huh? Mariko and Miichan knows that dude?

I bet you haven't forgot about Sae....right?

Hmm...how about Sayaka?

Mayu.....Mayu OMG WEIFNWIOFNWFNEWIFNIFN  I fangirled like no tomorrow!! xD

That pic!! Where did you get that?

Acchan can't play xD D'awwh~

Update soon I can't wait! :D

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #158 on: April 12, 2013, 02:36:47 PM »
Thanks for the update! Great chapter as always :D story keeps progressing and its becoming more and more interesting everytime ^^ Minami & Atsuko are as adorable as always, & lol at Mayu for tricking Atsuko :P
So we got to learn some info with the meeting of Marimii since they both seem to know alot, and it was interesting.
Mayu & and blakc scenes were great too!

Thanks again, looking forward to the next chapter!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #159 on: April 12, 2013, 03:37:13 PM »
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There is some misunderstanding here, Takamina, Miichan Haruna is not a mafia. Hiichan was right.

Sorry, have misunderstanding the story as I reading  :dizzy: :kneelbow:

Lol.. Black! Faster fall in love with mayu..haha  XD  :hiakhiakhiak:

who is the man? is he related to the takamina's past???? :mon huh:

it really getting more and more mysteries :dizzy::dizzy::dizzy:

Thank you for updating so fast  :luvluv2: :shy2: :stuffed: :on woohoo: :kneelbow:
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(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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