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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #160 on: April 12, 2013, 05:31:49 PM »
buahahahah thanks to those crazy fangirls we got some mayuki action xD
Skinship~ (=^ェ^=)
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #161 on: April 13, 2013, 02:56:18 AM »
jajaja crazy fans!

ohh atsumina moment..

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #162 on: April 14, 2013, 04:27:05 AM »
Danso mayu is so cool!  :twothumbs

Love atsumina moments!

Update soon!

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #163 on: April 14, 2013, 08:05:00 AM »
it really nice update!
i hope the next update will be about renaxjurina   

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #164 on: April 14, 2013, 09:01:15 AM »
Mayu's fangirls :hiakhiakhiak:
Yuki's slowly falling in love with Mayu :hehehe:
Who's that man? :dunno:
Marimii seem know a lot of things :kekeke:
Anyway, update soon please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #165 on: April 14, 2013, 01:02:11 PM »
REPLIES: :)

steven_0809: yeah poor Mayu~  :lol:
kurogumi: that man? stay tuned~  :hehehe:
kahem: I just thought about the idea to make it funny so I made it! hahaha :wahaha:
cisda83: yeah so much mysteries~  :dizzy: I love making readers curious~   :glasses:
K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: yes Marimii knows him.. ^^ Sae? Don't worry~ I haven't forgot about Sae.... yet?   :mon sweat: I think I didn't even mention Sayaka in this fic..but I felt like you can read my mind.. :on shady: how did you know??!!!  :mon curtain: hehe~
arrow27: Marimii sure knows a lot... hehe  :mon evillaff:
qweakb: yes that man is related to Takamina's past...  :glasses:
Kimcoton: Skinship!!!  :luvluv2:
Haruko: I think I need to make more atsumina~  :mon lol:
Railgun96: Mayu-kun is cool right? hehe~  :mon misch:
Rena-chan Daisuki: I hope so..the next update would be wmatsui~  :mon sweat:
leEwẬy: that man...is...let's just say he's a bad man. :) Marimii is a troll couple lol~  :mon evillaff:

minna, really, thanks for reading my first fic ever in my life!  :bow:  :kneelbow:
and thanks for the lovely comments!!!  :gmon heartu: :gmon bang:
I love you all!!!  :mon love:
p/s: IF I DIDN'T UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHIN THIS 3 DAYS, THEN YOU HAVE TO WAIT FOR NEXT MONTH~ WILL YOU WAIT FOR ME?  :mon cute: TEEHEE~

WMATSUI shippers will be strong!  :mon determined:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #166 on: April 14, 2013, 01:27:21 PM »
Oh! I'm running after mayu too! Coz I can't resist a danso mayu!  :grin:
Visit my FFs:
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http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36072.0

The Foreigner Husband and The Traditional Wife (Wmatsui)
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[Short OS] "Puppy" Love (Pairings: JR + YH)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36408.0

My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 14 update 12/04/13
« Reply #167 on: April 21, 2013, 05:46:50 PM »
MY SUNSHINE~

NE CH.15 MORE WMATSUI HOPE THEY TALK TO EACH OTHER

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #168 on: April 30, 2013, 08:41:06 AM »
Chapter 15


Flashback (Rena’s pov)

Why are you doing this to us…?
What is our fault?
What did my parents did that you kill them?
Mom and dad don’t deserve to die like that…
It was all in my mind when I got beat by that black coat man.
Then I started to laugh…a creepy laugh…
“Why?” I said while giving a sad smile.
They beat me again.
I spit out blood.
It does hurt. That I feel numb all over my body.
I got tired because they keep beating me nonstop.
Aren’t they got tired too?
Then one of the men taking out his phone and calling someone.
What are they going to do now?
Aren’t they going to kill me?
Just kill me already…
I couldn’t hear what he said to the other person on the phone.
They suddenly lift my almost dead body and going to their car.
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Slowly open my eyes, I realized that I was in somewhere dark…maybe a room.
I try to move my hands but I can’t…I was being tied…on a chair.
I still could feel pain on my body.
I want to cry…but my tears won’t come out.
I want to scream…but I’m too tired.
Suddenly I remember something…or rather someone.
Jurina…
Where is Jurina now? Is she fine?
I hope she is with good people that can take care of her.
And I hope that bad people didn’t search for her.
It was weird…
Why did not they kill me?
They kill mom and dad…
Life is so cruel…
First, I found out mom and dad is not my real parents.
Second, I saw mom and dad dying in front of me.
Third, the black coat man comes and ‘hunts’ my family.
Suddenly the door open making my eyes shut due to the bright light from outside the room.
A man comes in…his footstep can be heard.
Then he stands in front of me and grab my mess hair making me look up to him.
He smiled evilly.
“Tsk…Tsk…Tsk…look at your face…” said him.
“Now tell me, where is your sister?” asked him to me.
“Just kill me already…” I said in a low voice.
He smirked hearing my answer.
“Tell me where is your sister first, then after that I’ll kill you.” Said him.
Even I don’t know her whereabouts.
“I don’t know…” replied me. He slapped me on my swollen cheek.
He let out a big sigh.
Then he walks behind me. I could feel that the rope around my wrist is getting loose.
“Get up!!!” he shout while grabbing my hair making me to groan in pain.
He throws me to the cold ground.
He then sits on a chair and making a phone call.
“Did you found her?” asked him to the other person.
“Find her in every place! If you found her, kill her!” said him.
He close his phone put it back into his pocket.
He then turns to me while taking out a knife from his other pocket.
“Maybe this way could make you tell us…” said him while playing with the knife.
He got up and walk towards me.
I tried to defense myself when he tried to cut my skin.
Then the knife fall from his hand, I took this chance to quickly take the knife and stabbed right on his chest.
I stabbed him.
My hands started to shake.
I just kill him with my own hand.
“Haha…” I suddenly laugh by my action.
I smiled to the man that I just stabbed.
He’s died.
I started to laugh creepily. I took out the knife from his chest.
I don’t know what is happening…
It felt like my mind is being control by someone else.
The door opens again revealing a man.
When he see the man on the ground, his eyes widen in shocked.
“Ne…Okkotteru?”
The man runs towards me trying to punch me but my body reacts on its own.
I dodge him. My hand stabbed his with the knife.
It was fun…killing people…bad people.
More man coming into the room.
More man that I killed. How strong I am…I killed them all.
I walked out of the room.
I saw one man standing outside, pointing a gun to me. I gave a creepy smile.
Bang!
I got shot.
Bang!
He got shot too. But who shoot him?
I fall on the ground; I can see… some people walking towards me…then my eyes getting blurry…

End of flashback
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Present

Acchan was walking towards Miichan’s house with a happy smile on her face.
Of course, she is going to meet someone. Someone that made her feel happy.
Arrived, she made her way to the front door and knocking on it.
Miichan is the one who open the door.
“Acchan! You’re so early! Come in~” said Miichan cheerfully.
“Acchan comes in and her eyes start to look around.
Miichan, knowing that smirked to her.
“Takamina is still in her room, getting dress up.” Said Miichan making Acchan blushed.

It was weekend so everyone is in the house.
Acchan had promised Takamina to bring her to the park.
Miichan walking to the kitchen, making a breakfast for them.
Lovetan, Mayuyu, Jurina already there having their breakfast.
They greeted Acchan and Acchan did the same.
“Acchan!”  Said Takamina seeing Acchan.
“Ohaiyo Acchan!” greeted Kanon.
“Takamina, have your breakfast first! After that you can go out.” Said Miichan to Takamina.
“Haik!” answered her.
Takamina quickly finished eating her food then said, “Thanks for the food!”

‘Cute.’ Thought Acchan chuckled.

“Let’s go Minami~” said Acchan to Takamina who’s putting her shoes on and they go out of the house.

Everyone in the house stop doing what they were doing when they heard it.
Miichan who was about to put her food into her mouth stop halfway.
They all look at each other like they have the same think in their mind right now.
“MINAMI?!?!!” They said in unison.
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Meanwhile

Rena has made her decision that she will come and see Jurina to confirm that she is her Jurina.
She couldn’t stop thinking about it until she asked her about it.
That evening, she asked Black to accompany her to see Jurina at Miichan’s house.
Black knows her story because Rena tells her.



At Miichan’s house

Miichan, Kanon and Lovetan were out to buy some groceries.
Only Jurina and Mayuyu at home watching anime.
Mayuyu got a message from Black saying that she and her friend are outside their house.
Mayuyu was confused for a while of what they were doing outside their house.
She then walks to open the front door. There was Black and Rena standing in front of her.
Mayuyu blushed when she saw Black and so do Black.

“What?” asked Mayuyu coldly.

“This is Rena, my friend.” Said Black to Mayuyu.

“So?” said Mayuyu.

“Ano…I want to talk to Jurina.” Said Rena smile.

Mayuyu look at her for a while.
“Why?” asked Mayuyu again.

“You…want to talk to me?” said Jurina who comes out from behind Mayuyu.
“Y-yes…” answered Rena nervous looking at Jurina.
“Let’s get inside then…” said Jurina knowing that she also has something to say to the older girl.

‘They just ignore me…’ said Mayuyu to herself.

“*sighed*… I’m going out.” Said Mayuyu walking out from the house. Black was following her
from behind because it was her job as a bodyguard.
Now, it’s only Jurina and Rena left alone in the house. They were sitting on a couch at the living room.
It was awkward since it was their first time talking to each other.

“So…” they both said in unison.
“Y-you start first.” Said Jurina blushing.

Rena took a deep breath.

“What is your full name?” asked Rena first.
“My name is Matsui Jurina. Why?” Replied Jurina looking at her.
Rena felt happy when she heard that but it was not confirmed that she is the one.
“Ano…Can you tell me about your family? I mean your real family?” Rena asked again.

Jurina thinking for a while.

“I don’t know…I don’t remember…” said Jurina looking down.
Rena felt guilty by asking that question.
“I’m sorry for asking you that.” Said Rena.
“Why are you asking me this?” asked Jurina.
“Because, I want to know whether you are my sister or not…her name also…Matsui Jurina…” explain Rena.
Jurina keep silent while looking at the girl in front of her trying to say something.

After the long silent moment, Jurina finally said something.

“Rena…..chan.”
Rena looks up when she heard it. She gasped.
“W-what did you say just now?” Asked Rena nervous.
“I only remember….Rena-chan…but don’t know who it is… is it you?” asked Jurina looking at her.
Rena now knows that the young girl in front of her is Jurina, her Jurina.
Rena was so happy to see her sister after a long time.
Tears started to fall down on her cheeks.

“Jurina!” said Rena then hugging Jurina tightly.
Jurina was still confused but she can tell that Rena is Rena-chan.
“You are….Rena-chan?” Asked Jurina again.

She can feel Rena nodding her head on her shoulder.

“You are….my sister?” Asked Jurina as her tears started to fall down.
Rena nodding again.

Jurina started to reply the hug and buried her face on Rena’s shoulder.
She was really happy that she has a sister.
They both cry hard while hugging each other tightly.

They hugging each other for a long time.

Rena part the hug. She looks at Jurina in the eyes.
“You really look like mom.” Said Rena smile while cupping both of Jurina’s cheeks.
Jurina also smiles.


T.B.C




I'm back!!!!  :lol:  :k-thrilled:
I even forgot about the storyline lol~  :mon sweat:
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I forgot what I want to say just now...  :mon huh2:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #169 on: April 30, 2013, 09:30:52 AM »
yeahhhh you are bak and bring a very good chapter with you  XD

please update yyour chapters soon because I want to kn XDow more I love your fic
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
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Love this Pairing
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #170 on: April 30, 2013, 10:11:48 AM »
Yay! New chapter :onioncheer:
Rena's sad past :gyaaah:
The reaction of everyone when they heard Acchan call Takamina is Minami :on lol:
Rena finally knew her sister was Jurina and so does Jurina :on woohoo:
What happen to the Mayuki? :on blackhole:
So that man is a bad guy huh? :kekeke:
Want to know what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #171 on: April 30, 2013, 04:48:32 PM »
Yeyyyy! Finally!
WMatsui Sweet Moment
I LOVE IT
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Pls Update soon

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #172 on: April 30, 2013, 05:26:10 PM »
 :lol: happy happy happy of the happy reunion! by the way since they aren't real sisters....can they develop into lovers?  :deco:
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[Short OS] "Puppy" Love (Pairings: JR + YH)
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My Little Brother Can't Be This Cute!
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #173 on: April 30, 2013, 11:24:16 PM »
to tell the truth, this is one of the fanfics that I dropped due to the fact that the prologue made me get the wrong pairing in my head.......... well, good thing that I decided to read it anyways...
yay!! so that was the start of their Rena's gekikara........
They care about each other so much~~ though it was fast.....
lol...... Sae-kun isn't doing anything......
mayuyu danso~~ I prefer the doctor though......
Acchan....... so, whats the big deal with the name Minami?
................this is a friendly fanfic.................

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #174 on: May 01, 2013, 06:15:09 AM »
Hi chiqinna-san!  :deco:

You finally update!  :deco:

I am very happy  :otomerika:

I like the MWatsui, MaYuki and AtsuMina moments!  :wub: :wub:

~thanks

 
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I really love their songs.

I really like their fan fiction.




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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #175 on: May 01, 2013, 01:36:58 PM »
That weird,
why that man want to kill jurina?
not rena first?
So much mistery~

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #176 on: May 01, 2013, 03:13:26 PM »
Ah... so that was what happen to Rena after she separated with Jurina... The birth of Gekikara...

And also as to why she could not go back to be a normal person... she killed people that tortured her...

Who were those that saved her...? Rappappa?

Why did Jurina's family being targeted... and They are still desperate to kidnap Jurina...?

What kind of secret Jurina's family hide?

Ah... they just noticed that Atsuko called Takamina by her name 'MINAMI'...  :lol:

Ah... very touching reunion between WMatsui...

What's going to happen to them next...

They are still people looking for Jurina...

How Atsumina relationship going to develop?

How about BlackxMayu?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 15 update 30/04/13
« Reply #177 on: May 10, 2013, 02:54:51 PM »
its been a while since i open this fanfic thread its update a lot!!!

and wow rena and jurina finally meet each other and they are a sister!!!

well not a really sister and just rena who know that, jurina still doesn't know it.

its funny to look at miichan house now, full of pairing! LOL

first miichan has a relation with mariko in the past, still doesn't know if they dating or not

and acchan fall in love with takamina,its about time to wait they being real couple

but they have their poroblem of course, and it is takamina past

mayu and black, the bodyguard and her kid LOL this pair still develop their relationship....

little by little seed of love will be grown up LOL

rena and jurina, we know they doesn't related by blood,

i wonder who the first start fall in love, its rena or jurina...

rena is kind of dense so maybe jurina,

but jurina think that rena is really her sister so i think she wont try to cross that....

Well its more possible if its rena who start to fall in love with jurina since she know that jurina is not her sister,

so rena wont think loving jurina in a romantic way is wrong....




thank for the update,cant wait the next update it would be interesting if all the yakuza member in miichan house LOL taht would be funny~
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #178 on: May 11, 2013, 07:27:53 AM »
Elo: thanks reading and commenting~ hehe I was late update~  :lol:
leEwẬy: here I give you the answer!  :)
Rena-chan Daisuki: yeay! wmatsui!  :deco:
DC2805: ahaha they maybe~  :lol:
Shinoki: is this a friendly fanfic?  :dunno: hehe btw thanks for deciding to read this fic~  :kneelbow:
Wmatsui22: Wmatsui22!!! I know you've been waiting my update haha~ and the others too~ thanks so much for waiting for me!  :D
gek geki: why that man want to kill Jurina first? stay tuned~  :P
cisda83: yeah Rappapa was the one that saved er...thats all I can say for now. hehe   8)
kurogumi: hmmmmm....you gave me some idea for my next update kurogumi-san...  :hehehe: thanks for reading!  :D

AND THANK YOU FOR EVERYONE WHO WAS READING THIS FIC AND COMMENTING TOO!   :thumbsup



Chapter 16


Flashback (when Black was running from Mayu’s fan girls while Mayu’s on her back)

When they felt Black already far from that crazy fan girl of Mayu, Black stopped running.

She’s panting hard. 
“Good job Black!” said Mayu still on her back.
Mayu’s arm still around Black’s neck.
Mayu was about to got off from her, but her right accidentally touch Black’s breast.

Meanwhile Black felt something touch her breast so she looks at it and saw Mayu’s hand on it.
Realizing what was happening, Mayu quickly get off from Black’s back.

They both felt awkward and blushing hard.
“S-sorry.” Said Mayu to Black who was covering her chest.

“L-let’s go h-home.” Said Mayu started to walk slowly then followed by Black.

‘It was…..big!’ said Mayu in her mind while looking at her right hand.

End of flashback
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“Ehemmm…what is happening here?” said Mayu who saw Rena and Jurina smiling together sitting at the living room.
Mayu and Black still at the front door. They just got home.
Jurina looks at Mayu then at Rena smiling to her.
“Mind to explain?” asked Mayu walking towards them.
“Ermm…Mayu…Rena…is my sister!” said Jurina happy.

Mayu keep her face blank.

“What?!” said Mayu confused.
“un…Rena is my sister. She just told me. I don’t remember but I can felt that she’s my sister.” Explain Jurina while looking at Rena smiling.
“Really?” asked Mayu looking at Rena.
Black just watching them since she already knows the truth.
“Y-yes...she is my younger sister.” Said Rena.
“Owh…” Mayu says.
 

“Tadaimaaaa!!!” shout the three who just got back from the buying groceries.
“Okaeri~” said Mayuyu sitting at the other couch.
“Eh? Hey Black aaaand….you?” said Lovetan pointing at Rena who was sitting next to Jurina.

“She’s my sister!”Said Jurina instead making the trio shocked.

“Sister?” said Miichan.

“How?” said Kanon.

“Well…I also just found out that she is my sister just now.” Said Jurina.

Then Jurina and Rena explain to them and they finally understand.

“So…you’re going to take Jurina with you?” asked Miichan.
“Eh? N-no…I mean…I think Jurina should stay with you guys. I-I can visit her here anytime.” Said Rena.
“Rena’s right…they just got to know each other.” said Black knowing that it was not a good idea for Jurina to stay with them.
“Okay then…” said Miichan.

“Tadaimaaaa~~” said Takamina while opening the front door.
“Acchan. Come in~” invite Takamina to Acchan.
“Hay~” replied Acchan.
‘Acchan?’ said Rena in her mind when she heard Acchan’s voice.

As soon as Acchan saw Rena, her eyes widen.
“Rena?!” said Acchan shocked to see Rena there.
Then she looks at Black who just shrugged her shoulder when Acchan looks at her.
“You know Rena too?” Asked Mayu.
“Eh? S-she…is…my classmate in high school.” Said Acchan.
“So…the three of you are classmate?” Asked Mayu referring to Black, Rena, and Acchan.
“Yes…we are.” Said Rena nodding since she got a signal from Black to just agree with them.
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Meanwhile

*somewhere far away from the country
A tall woman is watching at the beautiful scenery in front her eyes through the window.

Then she felt a pair of arms around her waist.
She smiles and turned around to look at the other person.
They both smiles to each other.
The she look out at the window again.

“I miss them.” Said the tall girl giving a sad smile.
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In a big mansion, the man and his father were having a dinner together.
“So…dad, I heard that you were going to bring down that Watanabe.” Said him to his father.
“Yes, and Kenzo, you’ll be helping me in this.” Said his father smirking.

“Dad, can you give me time to have fun for awhile? I just got out from that hell prison you know…” said Kenzo.
His father sighed.
“Fine~ besides I’ll have someone to help me.” Said his father smirking.

Kenzo just look at his father smirking and continue eating his food.
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Since that day, Rena and Jurina starting to know each other.
They have been talking to each other like sisters.
One day, Rena was visiting Jurina at Miichan’s house.
Mayu was at home and she had been thinking about something.
Rena was at the living room sitting at the couch while waiting for Jurina to finish shower.

Then Mayu comes toward her.
“Nee...Rena, can I ask you something?” Asked Mayuyu to Rena.
“What is it?” said Rena.
“Hmmm…well, you and Black are classmate right? So…can you tell me her real name?” asked Mayuyu.
“Hmm? Why?” said Rena confused and she also beware not to tell Black’s real identity.
“Well, because I don’t know her real name so I want to know…you must know it right?” said Mayuyu not giving up.
‘Black would be mad at me if I tell her…’ thought Rena biting her lips.
“I can’t tell you…but maybe I can give you a clue.” Said Rena.

“What?”Said Mayuyu.
“Black always brings her identity card with her. That’s all I can tell you.” Said Rena. She thought it was impossible for Mayuyu to take Black’s wallet from Black.
“Rena-chan! I’m ready!” said Jurina walking to the living room.
“Where are you guys going?” Asked Mayuyu.
“Somewhere!” said Jurina happily.
“Let’s go Rena-chan!” said Jurina then they both goes out.
“Hmmm…It’s not that hard to do that…why did not me thinking about that before…”said Mayu smirking to herself.
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 That day also Mayuyu start her mission.
She and Black were walking on a street.
Mayuyu looks like she was searching for something or somewhere.
Then she found a crowded place.

She smirked in her mind.

She walks towards the crowded people but she stopped halfway.
Then she turned to Black, and said to her
“You go first, I’ll walk behind you, it’s so many people here.” Said her to Black.
At first, Black was curious but then she just follows her order.
Black started to walk through the crowded place followed by Mayuyu who was really near her.

They can feel that their body was touching with other people.
That time Mayuyu started her 'Nezumi' action.

After they get out from the crowded place, Mayuyu said to Black that she wants to go to toilet.
In the public toilet, Mayuyu get in one of the cubicle and take out something from her pocket.

Black was waiting outside the toilet.
“I got you~” said Mayuyu while holding the wallet in her hand. It was Black wallet.
Then she started to open the wallet to look at Black’s identity card.

There, she found it…Black’s real name.

Mayuyu grin widely seeing the name on the identity card.
Black’s picture was shown next to it.

“Kashiwagi Yuki…”


T.B.C~




fuhh~ Sorrry late update~  :sweat:
I was too busy reading other fanfic that I forgot to update my own fic~  :lol: also lazy to write it~  :mon sweat:
sorry lack of atsumina now~ hahaha   :mon lol:
this one make me happy~~~  :mon lovelaff:

I need to read this fic again!  :mon determined:

Sae will appear on the next update!!!!!  :mon bye:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #179 on: May 11, 2013, 07:59:04 AM »
ohhhh nezumi's in action xD

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