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If Only (Mayuki) Finale part 1 28/03/2014 UPDATED!
« on: June 21, 2013, 05:10:36 PM »
Hi guys! I'm new to writing fanfic. To tell you the truth, I have never planned to write one. But after reading other authors fanfics, I wanted to try writing. Though im not anywhere near their standards. If I ever disappoint you, please forgive me . This is my first fanfic. It would probably be quite short or I would stop writing depending on how badly I would write.

So, without further ado, lets get on with the story...
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Prologue

Who would ever I thought that this would happen? This is all my fault. If only I didn't miss the catch of the volleyball, If only I wasn't careless and clumsy, If only I didn't have to meet you that day, If only I didn't meet you in the first place. This wouldn't happen... If only....

im sorry if the prologue is short. And im sorry for my English..
Should I even continue ?? :?
« Last Edit: March 28, 2014, 11:02:31 AM by Railgun96 »

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2013, 05:30:14 PM »
So i think the clumsy one is yuki and the other mayu

great prolougue Voleyball?

yuki plays voleyball I want to know more ^^


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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2013, 06:18:04 PM »
Volleyball is an interesting topic although figuring who it might be the one who didn't make the catch
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2013, 06:34:04 PM »
Volleyball huh? I actually played this game before I liked it it's fun and easy to understand.But I had to stop cause I was playing Basketball and football at the same time as I was playing Volley.
I play it sometimes when I have nothing to do or I want to xD

Soo...I dunno but I think it's either Mayuki or Kojiyuu, but I don't think it's Kojiyuu cause of Kojinyan who doesn't play those things.

The story looks awesome even if the prologue was short I don't care :)

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2013, 06:36:30 PM »
Hmmm~~ the prologue is really interesting... :D :D


Please continue!!! I want to know how this story will go!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs 

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2013, 07:17:54 PM »
yeaaaaah I like it continue!!  :cathappy: :deco:

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2013, 10:02:49 PM »
i wanna know what happens :bow: more please! :cow:
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Prologue 21/06/2013
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2013, 02:58:34 AM »
UWAAAAAAA PLEASEUPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2013, 06:08:27 AM »
Hey guys! I have read all of the review and Im really happy that you guys are interested in this. Well, I know volleyball is a rare sport used in akb fanfic and Mayu isn't the sporty type of person but hey, a lil change is good right? I really hope this would go fine.

Anyways, Here Chapter 1.... ( Pls don't kill me  :sweatdrop:)
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Mayu POV

I'm in a mystery world, with me the only human. I'm surrounded with only clouds and rainbows. The wind hit through me and with my hair flowing past my face. I realise I was riding on a alpaca,

passing by other fantasy creatures. Coming to a stop. In front, was a huge clock tower. I looked up, in a sec, it started ringing...



RINGGGGGGG~~~~~


I shot up from bed, reach to the table to off my alarm. I winced as my eyes can't take the morning sun ray. Haiz... Another fantasy dream.

I walked down the stairs and found myself enchanted to a certain smell. Mmm.... smells good. I slowly walk into the kitchen and found my sister cooking breakfast.

"Ahh! You're up! I was about to wake you." Yuko Said.

"I'm already old enough to wake myself up." Mayu said without any emotion.

"Are? Few days ago, someone still peed on her pants." Yuko smirked.

"Urusai!" Mayu shouted .

"Okay Okay! Yuko surrender. Geez... I'm just teasing you. You don't have to shout so early in the morning." Yuko pouted

I rolled my eyes. "Lets not wait any longer and eat before the food gets cold." Yuko said

After breakfast, we went to prepared and get ready for school.

OH. I forgot to introduce myself. I'm watanabe Mayu, 16 and 2nd year of high school. im a emotionless person. people called me cyborg.
 
The perverted looking squirrel over there is my sister, Oshima Yuko. "HEY!! I heard that!" yuko shouted.

"Whatever." I said in a bored tone.

Where was I? oh yeah. Yuko is the same age as me, 2nd year in high school. She has a strange fetish. she likes oshiri, and because of her, im starting to like oshiri too. We formed a group called 'The oshiri sister' but only the both of us knows that.

You probably would be wondering why Yuko and I have different family name. well, my parents divorce when I was very young and my mum got married again. My step-father has a daughter. yup. she's yuko

At first, I don't really talked to her. Years later, Both my mum and step-father got into a accident and from then on, we became very close.



After everything is ready, we left house together. We were walking halfway and suddenly.

"AHHH! I forget my basketball!" Yuko shouted. "I have training today and the companionship is a month away." Yuko anxiously said.

"Haiz.... Go and get your ball. I will wait here for y- eh? I wasn't done talking yet!" mayu shouted. Yuko has already disappeared.

I went to search for the nearest bench to sit while waiting for my sister. While walking, someone bump into me.

"Itai!!" I said while i held my injured arm. "Are you okay?" said the girl. "Oh no! You're bleeding!" the girl exclaimed. She took her handkerchief and wiped my wound.

I blushed when she took my hand. "Done! I placed a bandage on the wound so it won't bleed again." The girl said.

"Ahhh! Im going to be late! sorry i have to go already. Hope we can meet again." The girl said while running off.

I stood up and saw Yuko running to me. "Gomen Mayu! Lets go to school n- hmm? what happened to your hand?" Yuko asked.

"Someone bumped into me and i got injured but she attended my wounds already so you don't have to worry about it." mayu said.

"Oh.. i see.. YABAI! we are going to be late already! Lets go!" yuko shouted while pulling me.



TBC...

Im sorry if its boring. Forgive me :bow:





« Last Edit: November 29, 2016, 02:58:18 PM by Railgun96 »

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Night after alley (Mayuki / Nezumi x Black) - OS (Perv) : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35995.0

More than just a massage (Yukirena) - OS (Perv) : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35995.msg1372238#msg1372238

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2013, 06:24:42 AM »
NoNoNoNo...It's not boring at all, it's interesting!~!~!~
 :lol: XD :yep:

~Ohhh...Is the girl who bump Mayu...Yuki?? Aww... i wanna know!~!~
 :D :? XD

~So, Yuko and Mayu is sister i see~~~But their parents died...Poor them~~
 :( :cry: :banghead:

~Not even a blood related(?)...But they're still like sister!~!~ Oshiri sister!~!~Yay~
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~Oh yeah, pls update more...I'll be looking forward for the next one!~!~ Nice update!~!~
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013
« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2013, 08:41:45 AM »
An interesting chapter :ding:
Mayu dreams that she was riding an alpaca :on spit:
Yuko is Mayu's step sister but after all they're really like sister, Oshiri sisters :wahaha:
Oh, Yuko's playing basketball :shock:...Unbelivable cause her height :on lol:
I wonder who's the girl bumped into Mayu :dunno: Maybe it was Yuki :hehehe:
I want to know more :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013
« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2013, 08:53:06 AM »
Yuko is a basketball person although I wonder when volleyball will appear
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013
« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2013, 08:59:49 AM »
XD i loved the alpaca part XD it killed me XDD

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013
« Reply #13 on: June 22, 2013, 10:07:01 AM »
it's not boring! i like it :3
the dream at the beggining was fun xDD Ahh Yuko and Mayu are sisters? i hope they have a lot of advertures together xD those are so crazy haha
The story plot sounds interesting i'm waiting for the next chapter! :)

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013 AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #14 on: June 22, 2013, 02:48:03 PM »
Hey guys! I did a lil change for chapter 1. I decided to change yuko's age to 16. Same as mayu so I can put them in the same class. Where would all the

fun be if the oshiri sister aren't together right?  :lol:

Do review and be patience. I will upload chapter 2 quite soon. Happy waiting!
 

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 1 22/06/2013 AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #15 on: June 22, 2013, 08:26:06 PM »
hurry up oshiri sisters dont wanna be late for school :lol:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 2 23/06/2013
« Reply #16 on: June 23, 2013, 06:54:57 AM »
This chapter is a bit lame so please read it with an open heart. I read all the reviews and im happy that this is interesting but I will make this story abit shorter as im already lacking ideas of how to end this.

Well, As promise, Here chapter 2.

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After running past the park, lake, a couple of roads, an old granny and a dog, we finally reach the school compound. We ninja our way to the classroom to avoid been caught by other teachers as

we missed our morning assembly. As soon as we reach the classroom, both of us crouch outside.

This is all your fault!! If only you never forget to take your stupid ball, I wouldn't get injured and late! Mayu shouted.

You might wanna lower your voice. You don't want to get caught right? Yuko whispered.

And im sorry . There won't be a next time. Yuko said.

You always say that but there is always a next time! Mayu hissed.

Yuko just pouted.


I took a peak over the window and surprisingly, there aren't any teacher inside. Come on! Lets go in. Its safe. Mayu said.

We sneaked in from the backdoor but neither the both of us knows that the teacher is standing near the door, waiting for us to get in.

Busted! The whole class shouted. Detention for the both of you! The teacher said.

Damn! Didn't you say it's safe!? Yuko hissed. I have training later and now, detention. haiz... can't my day just get any worst. Yuko sigh.

Mayu just ignored her and went in. Hey! yuko shouted.


We took our seats and wait for homeroom to start. Good morning student! before homeroom starts, I have something to announce. There is a transferred student who would be join us from today

onwards. The teacher said. You may come in to introduce yourself now.

The student walk in gracefully, as though the time had slow down. Everyone jaw-drop to how beautiful she is. Just like a princess.

Good morning class! My name is kashiwagi yuki. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu.


Its her. the girl who bump into me. Mayu though. I looked at her. I blushed when she wink at me. Luckily nobody saw it.

Kashiwagi-san, please take a seat behind watanabe-san.

I stared at her as she walked past me. Nice oshiri. Mayu thought.

Hi watanabe-san! how's your arm? is it still bleeding? Yuki asked.

Yeah. its fine now. thanks. By the way, Call me Mayu. mayu said.

I will only call you mayu if you call me yuki. yuki smiled.

I felt my face heat up and my heart pounded faster than usual. Why am I feeling this way? Mayu thought.


TBC.....

Im sorry if its short.. im still working on my writing skill. forgive me. :sweatdrop:









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My fics

If Only (Mayuki) - Ongoing (Hiatus) : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35821.0

Night after alley (Mayuki / Nezumi x Black) - OS (Perv) : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35995.0

More than just a massage (Yukirena) - OS (Perv) : http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35995.msg1372238#msg1372238

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 2 23/06/2013
« Reply #17 on: June 23, 2013, 07:01:32 AM »
Busted!!!! Bwahahah!~!~ What a teacher!! A good idea~~Pftt..
 :lol: XD :w00t:

~Oh my, so it's true then, that Yuki is the girl who bump Mayu!~!~ Yay!~
 :yep: XD :oops:

~Ohh...Yuki seats behind Mayu, lucky Mayu!~Kyaa~~I wonder what'll happen!~!~
 :twisted: :wub: :inlove:

~Ahaha...Pls update the next one, i wanna know the next, wanna know what's Mayu feelings is~
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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 2 23/06/2013
« Reply #18 on: June 23, 2013, 07:10:56 AM »
Uwaa~ So happy! Mayu lucky! Hehe :wub:

I guess Yuki got her interest on our little cyborg from the beginning! :fap

Can't wait what will happen next.. Kyaaaa~ MaYuki is love! :wub:

Will Mayu deny her feelings.for Yuki? What will Yuki do to make a move? Does she like Mayu? Kyaa~

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup

EXCITED~ :twothumbs

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Re: If Only (Mayuki) Chapter 2 23/06/2013
« Reply #19 on: June 23, 2013, 07:19:00 AM »
Hahaha....... It is interesting and funny....

Mayu and Yuko get busted.....  XD XD

Poor Yuko has to do detention and training.

She must be exhausted when she reach her house

So Yuki is same age with Mayu

Can I ask about the school? Is it a all girl school?

I want to know that Mayu is in which club

Hope u can update soon.

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