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Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo) - COMPLETED
« on: January 26, 2013, 10:26:54 PM »
*Grins* Hi! *Waving* It's me again with a fanfiction   :onioncheer:
Yaay! I did watch Majisuka Gakuen 3 (more like all the Messi/Yagi moments   :depressed: )

Ok so I wanted to do a fan fiiiiic~~!

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Hai.......Sorry   :kneelbow:

Let me tell you what happened
In the real MG 3 only Paru, Peace and Nanashi went out but in this fic all of them went out (Team Habu and Team Mongoose)
Ok let me start

After all of them went out they went to the nearest place
And it was Tokyo (Dat is no good (I think) )
Ok anyway so this is a fic on what happened in Tokyo and I'm gonna use most of the persons in MG 1 and 2 in this

Ok, I'm really gonna start

P.S The fic is no one's pov unless I put is like 'Paru's pov' or anything like that
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Sound of footsteps on the ground and sounds of people's breathing.That's what you gonna hear if you walk with them.Hmm? Who is 'them'?.The girls who had been in one of the most feared prisons 'Prison Of Hope'.I wonder why it's called 'Prison Of Hope' because there is no hope once you get in.One you get in you can't get out.But those girls are different, they manged to get out without losing anyone or anything.I think you all want to know who the girls is,then let me introduce them.

Name:Shimazaki Haruka    Name:Kizaki Yuria   Name:Kawaei Rina    Name:Kimoto Kanon   Name:Shimada Haruka  Name:Abe Maria
Fight name(?):Paru            Fight name:Peace   Fight name:Nanashi  Fight name:Nantene   Fight name:Uruseeyo    Fight name:TetsuoFight
Age:16                               Age:16                    Age:16                       Age:16                       Age:16                           Age:16

Name:Oba Mina     Name:Yagami Kumi   Name:Mureshige Anna  Name:Ichakawa Miori   Name:Kato Rena  Name:  Yamauchi Suzuran
Fight name:Dasu   Fight name:Komimi    Fight name:Jovijovich    Fight name:Sudachi      Fight name:Shokkaku      Fight name:Bunker
Age:17                   Age:17                      Age:16                          Age:17                          Age:17                             Age:17


Name:Takeuchi Miyu           Name:Nagao Mariya         Name:Takahashi Juri    Name:Iriyama Anna              Name:Matsui Jurina<3
Fight name:Miyu                  Fight nameName:Yagi      Fight name:Messi         Fight name:Annin                 Fight name:Nobunaga         
Age:16                                Age:16                             Age:18                          Age:18                                 Age:18   
 

That’s all of them.The ones who escaped one of the most feared prisons.As they where walking a sigh was heard.Paru looked back to the girl.’’Tired?’’She asked.
‘’Yeah’’The girl said.Paru looked at Nobunaga and Annin.They both nodded and looked back at the girls as the three of them was walking first.’’We are gonna take a break now’’Nobunaga said.All of them (except Messi and Miyu) fell on the ground.Messi sat like a boss while Miyu sat like a normal person.Nobunaga went to a tree and sat down and leaned on the tree.Paru went to where peace is and sat down beside her.Annin went to Nobunaga.For the others,Kumi was lying down in her stomach talking to Kanon and Dasu.Messi was leaning on a tree with Yagi between her legs leaning on Messi’s body.Jovijovich was with Uruseeyo,Tetsuo and Bunker.Miyu was sitting with Nanashi looking at Shukkaku teasing Sudachi.’’Stop it’’Sudachi whined.While Shukkaku just smirked.Miyu and Nanashi was giving them a Are-You-Guys-Serious-look.Back to Paru and Peace.Paru was lying with her head on Peace’s thighs.’’Paru?’’ Peace looked at paru as she noticed Paru starring at her.’’Yeah?’’
‘’Are you ok?’’The latter nodded slowly.’’Just thinking’’
‘’About?’’Peace asked but Paru only starred at her .’’About all the time in the prison’’.’’What do you mean?’’Peace asked.Paru give her one of those smiles.’’If I did not come to the prison.I would not have meet you’’Peace blushed and looked away.Paru smiled and reached her hand up and touched Peace’s cheeks.Peace was not in a good state her face was red.Paru who was enjoying teasing Peace sat up and gave Peace a kiss in her forehead.For Peace she isn’t red any more but turned purple.Paru smirked and laid down and made herself comfortable.While Paru was teasing Peace Annin and Nobunaga had their ‘little moment’ well don’t they where cuddling and all.Yeah….let’s move on.Jovijovich ,Uruseeyo,Tetsuo and Bunker was sitting on a tree resting and talking about random things.Nantene,Komimi and Dasu was talking while Komimi was trying to make herself comfortable on the ground.’’You will get dirty’’Dasu said.While Nantene’s doll Sally was nodding.’’See,even Sally agree’’Dasu said again.Komimi gave her a I-Don’t-Care-Look and continued rolling on the dirty ground.Yagi leaning on Messi while she is between her legs.She was playing with Messi’s glasses and had her head on Messi’s chest.Messi had her head on Yagi’s head and was looking at Yagi innocently playing with her glasses looking like a little child.Messi smirked and gave the Still-Innocent Yagi a kiss on the cheek.The Forever-Innocent Yagi looked at her with a confused look.Messi then gave her a smile.Not like those devilish smiles she used to give but a real smile.Yagi was so glad that she did not believe her eyes.’’Guys,get up we are gonna continue


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Hai this is the first chapter
Tell me what you think.And also it's just so you guys understand everything.Took me one day to write this chapter because I deleted it 2 times   
:err: Yeah it was stuped

Soo please tell me what you think

Bye bye!  :byebye:
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #1 on: January 27, 2013, 01:38:27 PM »
Chapter 2

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''Guys,get up we are gonna continue''
Everyone got up-Well all of them except Komimi who got dragged because she didn't wan't to get up-and started walking to where Nobunaga is leading them.
After a minutes they saw something that looked like some houses.''Am I dreaming?''Bunker stupidly asked.Komimi got an idea so she went and pinched Bunker's left cheek.
''Ahh!''Bunker screamed in pain.''Shh!''
''But she-''
''Shhh!!''Komimi was grinning until Nantene pinched her cheek.

''Guys,I think this is Tokyo''Annin said.
''Yeah''
''I don't think we should use our names''Nobunaga said
''Why?''Nanashi asked.
''Because the prison can find us if we use our names''Nobunaga answered the question.
''We have to change our names''Paru said.
''Think about a name''Komimi grinned again as she came up with the best--or not--name
''Kumi, Yagami Kumi desu!''Komimi half yelled.
''Yuria,Kizaki Yuria desu''Peace said and did a peace sign.
''Oba Mina? Is that good?''Dasu asked.
''Yeah it's good.I'm err.....Shimazaki Haruka''
''Wait! we are all using our real names''Annin said
''But the prison don't know our real names''Miyu said.
''And also i'm Takeuchi Miyu''
''Well then,Takahashi Juri desu''Messi said with a calm.''Nagao Mariya''
''Kimoto Kanon''This time Nantene by herself said.
''Kawaei Rina''
''Ichikawa Miori''
''Kato Rena''
''Mureshige Anna''Jovijovich said''
''Shimada Haruka''
''Abe maria''Tetsuo said.
''Yamauchi Suzuran''Bunker said.
''Why is your name Bunker?''Mureshige asked.
''Iriyama Anna''Annin said.
''Ok let's just go and remember don't ever call each other by your prison name''Nobunaga warned them and started going.The others fallowed quietly.After a few minutes they saw some people walking.''Excuse me,sir''Paru being the most polite one decided to ask one of the people outside.
''Do I really look like a guy?''The person asked.
''Eh?''
''I'm a girl''The girl said.The girl then looked at the others standing behind Paru.They all had where full of bruises and some of them even had scars.She also noticed that their clothes was not what a normal person would wear.Then it clicked her eyes widened.''Are you from Prison Of Hope?''The girl asked in a calm voice.
''We escaped''Messi answered with the same calm voice''The girl smiled.''Wait! you don't seem to fear us''Paru said.
The girl smiled at her.''You don't seem to be that fearsome and also that prison don't really have criminals''The girl said.
''Yeah,and we have been walking all the way from the prison to this place''Nobunaga said.
''This is Tokyo, right?''Annin asked.
''Yeah''The girl said.
''Do you guys have a place to stay at?''The girls asked.
''No''
''You can stay at my place if you want.And also don't worry I won't do anything with you''The girl said again smiling at them.
''What's you name?''Komimi asked.
''Soory, i've been rude.I'm Takahashi Minami you can call me Takamina''
''I'm Takahashi Juri''Juri said and smiled at Takamina.
''Can we really stay at your place?''Komimi asked and of course only to get smacked on her head.''Itaii~''She whined.
Takamina grinned.''Yeah you can stay at my place''
''Sure we will''Juri said.

''Oi, we know nothing about her''Paru warned her.
''But she looks fine''Juri said.
''So are you coming or not?''
''We are coming''Juri quickly answered Takamina's question.
''Good! now come my house is not far away from here''Takamina started walking followed by the others.
About 10 minutes later they arrived at Takamina's house.Well It wasn't exactly a house it was a mansion.They went inside the mansion.
''Ta.Ka.Mi.Na.''Came a voice.Takamina froze.
''Acchan''She mumbled.Everyone looked at her with a confused look.
Suddenly a girl came to them.''Eh? we have guests?''The girl looked at them.
''Prison Of Hope?''She asked.Annin nodded.
''How did you know?''Komimi asked.And of course got smacked by Dasu.
''Clothes''The girl answered simply.
''A-Acchan''Takamina gulped.
''TADAIMA!''Came another voice.
''Hm? Guests? Hi I'm Oshima Yuko''The girl who just came in said her name and grinned at them.The others introduced them self.They also got to know that the first girl's name is Maeda Atsuko and her nickname is Acchan.
''How about school?''Takamina asked them.
''School?''Shimada asked.
''You have to go in school''
''But,we don't have money or anything''Paru said.Acchan smiled at her.''Leave the money for me''
''I'll tell daddy to put them in the same school with us''
''Thanks''Kanon's doll Sally said.As Kanon was hiding behind Komimi's back.
''Yeah,we don't know how to thank you''Paru said being really thank full.Takamina,Acchan and Yuko smiled at them.
''No it's ok''
''Hey daddy said it's ok''Yuko said.
''So tomorrow you will begin school with us''Takamina grinned at them.


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Ok that's all for chapter 2

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo) Chapter 3 First day of school
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2013, 07:41:28 PM »
If you don't know the girls didn't have their 'prison' clothes but had school uniform

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The next day they all went to the school.They went with Yuko,Takamina and Acchan to the principal.''Uncle!''Yuko shouted.

''Hey~~!''
''Oh! Hi,Aki-P''Acchan greeted.All 20 went in the room.
''Those are the girls your dad was talking about?''The guy named Aki-P asked Yuko who nodded.
''I see''He said looking at them.
''So,how old are you?''He asked.And the question got answered by Paru.
''Oh so some of you are in their third year?''
''Yeah''
''I see''
''Yuko,Acchan,Takamina can you take them to their classes?''He asked Yuko,Acchan and Takamina and gave them a little papper.
''Sure''The three answered.Then they went to their classes.No one was in the halls because the classes already started.

(With the girls in 1-C)

''Ok, we have some new girls in this class''The teacher said to the class.Everyone was shouting happily because they don't usually get new kids.''He! so it was true after all''One girl said to her friend who was sitting beside her.
''Yeah,but seriously how does that gossip queen know everything that happen and will happen in this school?''Her friend asked her.
''No one knows''Her friend nodded.
Girls,please get in''The door opened and in came Yagi,Nantene,Jovijovich,Nanashi.The whole class started squealing.Words like 'Kawaii' and 'Kakoii' was heard.

''Can you introduce yourself?''The teacher asked Mureshige who was standing first from the left.''Name Mureshige Anna''She simply introduced herself.And that made the girls in the class squeal.
''Yag-mphmpf''Mariya who was about to introduce herself got cut by Nanashi's hand on her mouth.After Nanashi got a glare and she put her hand down Mariya introduced herself again.
''Nagao Mariya,desu''She said without bowing and showed her fangs.That made the girls squeal even more that before.'What the hell is wrong with them?'Mariya thought.

''Kanon''Nanashi whispered to Kanon who was standing behind her.Being the shyest girl out of them was hard for her.But even thought the girl's name got called a few times she didn't dare to do anything.Rina sighed.

''I'm sorry but she's shy.......sometimes.But her name is Kimoto Kanon''Kawaei Rine introduced Kanon to the whole class.
''And i'm Na-ehm! I mean i'm Kawaei Rina''More squeals was heard.

'Why was I in this class now again''The same girl asked her friend again.
''How the hell am I supposed to know,Mayu?''The friend answered her friend's question by a question.
''Don't answer my question by another one,Rabutan''Mayu said.
''Oh,please''
''But they are pretty cute ain't they?''Another girl sitting on Mayu's left said.
''Yeah''Mayu answered.
''Cuter than Kashiwagi-san?''Rabutan started the teasing.But Mayu just ignored her.
''Mayu''The girl on Mayu's left called her name.
''Hm?''Mayu said.Looking in her bag for her new manga..
''are they cuter than Yuki?''
''Watanabe-san!''The teacher called.
''Which one?''Mayu asked.
''Watanabe Miyuki!''
''Hai?''The girl on Mayu's left half shouted when she heard her name being called.The teacher sighed.''Can you be quiet?''
''But I am''Milky said.The teacher sighed again.Mayu and Rabutan was on the floor laughing.''What's so funny?''The teacher asked.
''Loser''Mureshige mumbled.But unfortunately the teacher heard it.
''What did you just say?''The teacher shot Mureshige a glare.
''Deaf too? I said Loser''The whole class gasped except Mayu,Rabutan and Milky.
''Do you know who I am?''The teacher asked Mureshige who was looking at her nails totally uninterested.''My father?''The class gasped again.
''You!''
''Me what?''The teacher got so angry that she punched Anna.Anna who wasn't prepared for the punch didn't have time to dodge it.She felt it again,the feeling when someone punch you.She smiled,a sweet smile.''Yagi~''She looked at Mariya.''Do it for me I'm not in the mood''She smiled at Mariya.A smile started forming on Mariya's face.
Mariya gave the teacher a dangerous smile.She walked to the teacher.She grabbed the teacher by her collar.She pinned the teacher on a wall.She punched the teacher on her face.She started trowing punches on random places on the teacher's body.She was about to kick the now-bleeding teacher until she heard a familiar clap.She stopped and put down her hand.She stepped back.She turned back only to meet Juri's eyes.

''When did you come here?''She asked.Juri ignored Mariya's question.''Can you two stop all the mess?''Came a voice.
''Loser!''Nobunaga pointed at the teacher.
''Not you too''Annin groaned.
''That's what i've been telling this loser ,that she is a loser until she got angry and decided to punch me.I wasn't in the mood so I called Yagi''Mureshige explained.

Mayu got up from her seat and went to the on-the-floor-still-bleeding teacher,she poked her cheek.''Dead?''She asked Mariya.
''No she just fainted''
''Makes this class without another boring teacher''Rabutan said.
''Uhu,then to teacher means no boring class''Milky said and got up.
''I'm hungry''She said again.
''Thank you for killing this loser over here! and bye!''Mayu said and walked out fallowed by Milky and Rabutan

Juri starred at Mariya.She sighed.'It's gonna be a rough day today'She thought and walked out with the others.


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No comment  :shock:

WHY?!  :frustrated:

I need one comment to continue this fic  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2013, 11:55:53 PM »
lol... it nice, please continue to update the fic :)

so that mean the school will be slowly turning into fighting sch like MG?
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 01:36:45 AM »
Lol 20 girls in a mansion!!!!
This fic is really interesting

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #5 on: January 29, 2013, 04:40:10 AM »
Wah... it's great story... making one after MG3... and all of them survive....

Eh... how Takamina knew about Prison Hope...?

Are you going to make it that the corpse  with a cloth 001 is actually one of the security guy that was killed by Maeda Atsuko to make it looks like she died there. So she can escaped.

Great plot... Thank you for the interesting idea of the story.

I can't wait for the next plot.

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #6 on: January 29, 2013, 05:43:34 PM »
'I already said it's gonna be a damn rough day'Messi sighed for the 9th time.

''Did you know how much this nose cost me?!''The teacher yelled at Yagi.The teacher was really angry about Mariya punching her nose.One the other hand Mariya was looking down eyes closed.Yeah........she was sleeping.Messi sighed again.'How can this girl be like this?'She asked herself mentally.

''Miss Hayashi, can you calm down?''Aki-P was trying to calm the teacher as the teacher keep talking to a half dead body.''HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO CALM DOWN WHEN SHE PUNCHED MY NOSE?!?!''She yelled at Aki-P.
''SHE ISN'T EVEN SAYING ANYTHING!!! WHY?! BECAUSE SHE HAVE NOTHING TO SAY!!!''She yelled again.

''One, don't yell at me.Two, She isn't going to answer because she's sleeping''Aki-P said calmly.
''I'M TALKING AND SHE IS SLEEPING!?? THIS GIRL NEEDS TO KNOW WHO IS WHAT AND NEED TO RESPECT PEOPLE!!''The teacher yelled again.Mariya looked up at Juri.
''Why shout?''She asked Mureshige who also was with them while rubbing her eyes.
''Who knows''Mureshige said.
''YOU!''The teacher pointed at Mureshige.
''Me?''Mureshige  said and smirked after she saw the teacher's angry face.Juri sighed again, why was she here again?
''Takahashi-san''Aki-P looked at Juri.
''Hai~?''
''Can you please take Nagao-san and Mureshige-san with you? i'm gonna calm this loser over here down''He mouthed the last words to her.She smirked, 'so everyone really think of her as a loser'She thought.
''Yag- I mean Mariya and Anna let's go''
''WHERE ARE THEY GOING!! WE ARE STILL NOT DONE!!!''The teacher shouted at them.Juri sighed and went out of the principal's room (It's called room ,right?) with Mariya and Mureshige.

When they came out Takamina and Yuko was standing in front of them.''Sorry''Yagi mumbled looking down.Juri sighed.
''Did you two know that everyone in this school started calling that loser by loser?''Takamina said smiling at them.Yuko gave them thumbs up with both her thumbs.
Juri took off that kind-girl mask and smirked.She took out a chain like thing ant put it around Mariya's neck.''Eh? I thought i'm free from this''She looked at Juri with pleading eyes.
''I'm putting this on so no one will get into trouble''Juri said.
''Yeah of course,not getting into trouble.More like when you want her to kill someone''Mureshige said.
''Ehh? I don't kill''Juri smirked.
''My ass''Mureshige replied.

They walked out of the school while chatting.They took a cab to Takamina's 'so called house' mansion.
When they went in they where greeted by Shimada who was grinning at them.Juri who had put one the kind-girl mask took it off as she went in.
''I was awesome ,right?''Mariya grinned back and showed two thumbs up.
''You should see her face after all the beating''Yuko said.

''Mariya!''Came a familiar voice.
''H-hai!''Mariya may look strong but she is a really scared when it comes to scolding.
''We need to talk!''Paru said and went to one of the rooms in the mansion with Yagi.

Yagi got scolded for 4 hours.Juri sighed.
''But she did a good job thought''Acchan smirked.
''Yeah, a really good job''Mureshige said and went to her bedroom which she shared with bunker.A sigh was heard but this time it was Annin who sighed.Nobunaga patted her shoulder and gave her a kiss.Annin pouted and went to the kitchen.While Nobunaga was fangirling about Annin's cuteness.



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Chapter 4 I think is updated  :hee:

I got some comments  :gyaaah:

I'm really thankful  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I came home really tired but when I saw the comments I got all the energy from the comments  :tama-music:

Thank you for all the comments  :monk gboy:

Byebye!   :byebye:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 01:16:34 AM »
Nobunaga and anni  are so cute~

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #8 on: January 30, 2013, 06:27:29 AM »
lol..haha

nice one...hope that the chapter will be longer  XD

this is quite funny to me..haha..everyone starting to call the teacher loser..  :D
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #9 on: January 30, 2013, 12:10:43 PM »
first day of school they already causing troubles....

Calling a teacher, a loser.... is great....

Thank you for the fic... can't wait for the next update

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #10 on: January 30, 2013, 07:38:53 PM »
''Nya nya nya~~~''.''Nya nya nya nya~~''
''Uruseeyo!!''Shimada shouted at Kumi and Rina who was singing one of their 'nyan-songs'.
''Nyan?''Kumi looked at her with puppy eyes.Takamina starred at Kumi.Kumi felt someone looking at her.She turned her head, only to meet Takamina's eyes.

'I got you'Takamina mouthed.Kumi's eyes widened.She looked at Takamina with a 'how-did-you-know' look.Takamina only smiled at her.Anyway you may wonder where they are and what they are doing, right? no? Well anyway I'll tell you.They are on their way to go shopping.Why?, because Acchan said so.And of course you don't want to say no to Atsuko.

''Takabear! Hayakuuuuuu!!!!''Maeda whined.
''Hai, hai''
''Hayakuuuuu~~''
''I'm coming''Takamina replied and looked at Kumi for the last time before running to Acchan who was whining like no tomorrow.Kumi stood there,frozen.
'How did she know?'She asked herself mentally.

''Kumi''Kanon poked Kumi who was just standing there.
''E-eh?''
''Are you ok?''
''Y-yes of c-course!''Kumi shouted.Making the people on the street look at them.Kanon bowed to them then turned to Kumi.
''Are you sure?''She asked.
''Yeah!''
''Ok, let's go then''Kanon dragged Kumi to a store.

(with Yuko,Oba,Rina,Takamina,Acchan,Paru,Peace,Annin and Juri)
''Is this good, Takamina?''Atsuko asked the still-panting-poor-girl.
''Y-y-eah''
''Really?''
''Yes!''Takamina looked back to tell Yuko a thing.But when she turned....

''Nyan nyan!!''Yuko was groping some girl in the store.
''Yuko!''Takamina shouted at her trying to make Yuko stop.
''Get of me!''The girl struggled, trying to make Yuko stop groping her.
''Nyannayn!''Yuko smiled and continued groping the girl.
''Get of me Hentai!!''The girl shouted at Yuko surprising Yuko.Yuko stopped groping the poor girl and looked up at the girl.''W-what?''Yuko who was in the verge of crying asked.

''Nyaro!''Came a voice.
''Marichan!''The so called Nyaro runned to the caller and hugged her.The caller was a tall and slim girl.
''Why are you crying?''The tall and slim girl asked.
''S-she was g-groping me''The girl Yuko groped said between her sobs and pointed at Yuko.The tall and slim girl glared at Yuko and patted the girls head.

''She looks like a troll''Nobunaga whispered to Annin who was beside her.Annin only gave her a what-are-you-talking-about look.
''Mariko, did you find -- oh there she is''Another girl came running to the two girls.
''Kojiharu are you crying''The same girl asked the now-so-called-Kojiharu.The tall and slim girl who's name is Mariko pointed at Yuko.''She groped my baby''The girls eyes widened.

''You!''She pointed at Yuko.At that time Yuko was also crying like a baby who's candy got stolen.
While the two girls was crying the rest of them was like  :err:
Yes......they where like that.At the end Takamina went to the three girls asked for forgiveness - More like begged-,which she got.She went back to Yuko who was still crying and hugged the girl.

At the same time Kumi and Kanon came back from all the shopping they did together.But, they did not come back alone.Instead they came back with a girl.

''Guys!''Kanon waved her hands at them.Kumi,Kanon and the other girl went to them.
''Eh? is she crying''Kumi asked Takamina who was still hugging the crying girl.
''Well yes....because...''Takamina turned her head to where the three girls was standing.''Hm? where are they?''She asked after she saw nothing there.
No one said anything.After that Takamina explained why Yuko was crying.When she was done Yuko had stopped crying and is now eating ice-cream.



At the same time behind a wall nearby them a figure was standing there.The figure smiled and put on a hat.

''It's nice seeing you again''The figure smirked and went away


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Sorry if the chapter is short but I have school tomorrow and need to sleep soon  :bored:

I also wonder who the figure is........... hehe i'm not gonna tell you  :mon blblbl:

Don't kill me  :mon pray2: :mon pray2:

So who do you think the figure is and what does Takabear know about Kumi?

Commento!

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #11 on: January 31, 2013, 02:39:26 PM »
your fic so interesting. I'm sorry for only comment your fic after 4 chapter
but I wonder do you want to add more moment of those pairings?  :)
thanks for update
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #12 on: January 31, 2013, 07:43:32 PM »
''I'm hungry''Kumi said loudly enough for the whole class to hear.The teacher raised her eyebrow.
''Miss Yagami, You can keep that to yourself.''The teacher said.
''Hm? What did you just say?''Bunker stood up.''Uruseeyo!''Obe shouted at them.
''I'm hungry~~''Kumi whined.
''Miss Yagami and Miss Yamauchi, Can you please sit?''The teacher who was trying to sound calm asked.
''No''
''I'm still hungry''
''I'm going''Mina stood up.
''Excuse me! We are studying right now!''The teacher half yelled.
''So?''Mina asked as she opened the door and went out.While the teacher's face was red from anger.Kato and Ichikawa also stood up from their seats and went out of the classroom.Bunker was still standing while smirking and Kumi was sitting playing cards with herself.
''Heyy~~''Kumi lifted her eyebrow at Bunker.Bunker went to the teacher who was still red.
''I heard you like girls''The girl smirked after she saw her teacher freeze.She looked back at the class and winked, then went out.A girl then stood up.''Tch, the new girls are pretty much awesome''The girl said.She walked to the door.Kumi looked up at he girl.''Nobunaga?''She mumbled.
But the girl heard it.

''My name is Matsui Jurina''The girl said and looked at Kumi with cold eyes.'Eh? isn't that Nobunaga's real name?'She thought but didn't say anything.Jurina went out.

While the forever-frozen-with-red-face teacher was frozen in her spot the others in the class went out.The only person left was Kumi.The teacher went out after she snapped out of her who-knows-what and saw that no one except Kumi was left in the class.

Kumi smirked and looked behind her.''You can come out now''She said.

A blanket-like-thingy was thrown on the floor.''Hee....you knew?The figure asked.
''You now me, 0047''Kumi smirked.
''Hee......I have a name you know''The figure said looking down.Kumi looked out of the window.She sighed and leaned on her chair still looking out of the window.
''But, you know we are forever 0047 and 0046''Kumi said and sighed.The figure also looked out of the window.She nodded and walked to a chair near Kumi.Kumi looked at the figure.The figure was wearing a hoodie and had a book in its hand.
''I wonder what I am''The figure sighed.Kumi stood up and took a few steps near the figure.She putted her hands on both sides of the hoodie and put down the hood.

''You are xxx xxx''Kumi said but the name of the figure was not heard by anyone except them.The figure's eyes widened when she felt something soft on its lips.When Kumi pulled out from the kiss she gave a smile to the figure and whispered something to it.The figure nodded and Kumi walked out of the room.

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''And that's how you........''That's all Nobunaga heard until she dozed off.World: off.Dream land: On.
''Ui!''Ui?
''Tsui''Hm? who's that.
''Matsui!!''
''HAII!!''She stood up from her seat half awake and shouted.The whole class laughed.
''Oh''She bowed to the teacher and took a seat on her chair.Annin who was sitting beside her facepalmed herself mentally.Nobunaga looked at Juri who was sitting in the front.Juri was writing something on a paper.The still half-awake half-asleep Nobunaga looked at the book in front of her.Suddenly a paper was throwed on her.She took the paper and opened it.Annin's curiously was killing her so she put her cheek on Matsui's shoulder.And looked at the paper as Jurina was opened the paper.

Why the hell are you sleeping in class?
Also I have to go and check on Yagi and Mureshige.
And I heard from the girl beside me that Oba's class did something to the teacher like the 16:ers.

                                                                                                                                                           -Juri

''Eh? The teacher again?''Annin sighed and looked at Juri.
''Excuse me''Juri looked at the teacher.
''Hai?''The teacher replied.
''May I go to the toilet?''She asked while taking of her glasses.The teacher looked at her, and looked at her, and looked at her, and looked at her until.
''Yes you may go''Juri stood up and went out.Anna and Jurina looked at each other with a  :nervous face.

''And after that you....blah blah blah''The teacher continued lecturing the class.After a few minutes Jurina looked at the clock on the wall.She yawned, and put her head on her desk thingy.She looked at Annin who was playing with her fingers.Annin stole a glance at Jurina, and their eyes meet.Nobunaga ginned at her while Anna blushed...............


And the rest of the class went with Nobu starring at Anna and Anna blushing........

Yeah........moving on


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''So you know?''A girl said.
''Yeah''
''How?''
''I have my ways''
The first girl gave her a you-are-kidding-me look.''I'm just kidding''
''I.........''The girl continued.





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Is the chapter short?

Sorry for that   :mon sweat:

No really i'm sorry  :kneelbow:

I have school and stuff.....yeah

Soo this is chapter.................I.......don't know....... SORRY AGAIN!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I don't know what's wrong with me and I think I need to rest...... :on cloudeye:

Soo Byebye!  :byebye:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #13 on: January 31, 2013, 08:39:51 PM »
comment for chapter 4:
hmm...kumi's character....will she actually be the clever and cool type?

who is that figure? hmm...

comment for chapter 5:
haha..all of them seem like they are going to create more troubles in school everyday...haha
« Last Edit: January 31, 2013, 08:46:58 PM by qweakb »
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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #14 on: February 01, 2013, 01:26:02 AM »
Who is the girl Kuumin kissed????

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #15 on: February 01, 2013, 02:36:22 AM »
Oh man, such troublesome kids. Juri gonna check on them, they are about to get a scolding.. Haha

Hm, is that figure Kanon? I wonder who was talking at the end too???

Cant wait for the next chapter, hopefully some fight goes down

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #16 on: February 01, 2013, 04:53:04 AM »
Interesting.... so Yuko and Haruna don't know each other....

Takamina understands Kumi.... 'Nyaa' language.... how?

Who is the girl with a hat?

All those MG3 prisoners seem to be causing trouble again for the teacher....

Who is this 0047? Kumi is kissing this 0047.... why?

Interesting updates.... Thank you.... can't wait to see more

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #17 on: February 01, 2013, 06:31:40 PM »
A figure has walking on the street between two walls.''Why the hell is the meeting in such a place?''She said loudly.
''Because we don't want some idiot to come her and act like you in school''Came a voice.
''Tch,0047, stop scaring the shit out of me''The figure said not exactly feeling scared.
''Hee? THE Kumi feeling scared?''0047 said.
''Oh, shut up''
''Like hell she would''They looked back and saw another girl.When you see her she looks like a princess but when she is mad......you're dead

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''Man class was soooo freaking boring and it's like our third day''Shimazaki said while walking to Yuria.
''Man even the pri---ster's class wasn't that boring''Bunker said and looked around when she saw that every one was giving a DON'T-YOU-EVER-SAY-PRISON look.
Everyone sighed in relief when Bunker said some random name that starts with pri.........I wonder if that's even a name.
''Is there such name as Prister?''Watanabe Milky who had become one of their 'group' member along with Rabutan and Mayu asked.
''Ehh.....err........I.....It's.......''
''Yes there is''Bunker who was trying to find the right words was cut by Maria who lied - or maybe not -.
''Oh....never knew that''Milky said while blushing.
''Hm? Milky? Are you blushing?''Takamina asked.Which led to two smirking girls which is Rabutan and Mayu.
''Yamamoto-san fan much?''Mayu teased.
''Eh?! You what?!!!''Came a voice.Everyone looked at the person who shouted.And it was Yamamoto Sayaka who was talking on the phone.
''Damn you!''She cursed.
''I'll kill you ***********''She started cursing like no tomorrow.
''What's wrong with her?''Mayu said.
''Who would know what she does everyday''Shimada said.
''I know someone who would know what she does everyday''Mayu said and looked at the others.
''Who?''Mureshige asked.
''Her name is Minegishi Minami,Aka the gossip queen.She knows every single thing that happens inside this school and outside it''
''Damn she's like a mouse''Yuko said.
''Excuse me,the only mouse here is her''A girl with a hat and a mask who came out of no where said and pointed at Mayu.
''And you are?''Peace asked.
''You will know soon''The girl said and walked away.

''And that was?''
''Unexpected''
''I've seen her a lot........like a lot.....''Mayu said.She then turned to Rabutan while Rabutan was starring at her.They nodded at each other.
''We are going now,Bye!''Mayu and Rabutan said and Dragged the poor Milky with them.

''Anyway I think I should go now,class is about to start''Maria said and went to her class with Miyu and Shimada.
''What do we have now?''Paru asked Peace who was sitting on her lap.
''History''Peace answered.
''NOOOO!!''



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''Now or not?''
''Soon baby, just relax and watch''
''But-''
''No but's,just watch''
''I wan't to do it too~~''One of the girls whined.
''Shh....''


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''But-''
''It's ok''
''But-''
''No! Marichan and you Tomochin it's ok''
''Really?''
''Yeah''


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''Damn it, this can't be happening''
''Well sorry, it can''A figure wearing black said and then killed the people in the room in a few seconds.
She stuck out her tongue at the dead bodies and went out.

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A figure wearing a hat and a pair of sunglasses was behind a wall panting.She was being chased by a group of 'people'.She painted heavily.She felt something was not right.

She looked beside her and saw one of the 'people' chasing her standing there smirking at her.Her eyes widened.She didn't even have time to scream when the 'person' chasing her hugged her and put it's head on her shoulder and looked at her neck.

''You look awesome,baby''And then she saw nothing but black.


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''They are not there!!!''
''What!?!''
''0047370 and 0047371 are not there''
''DAMN THIS *******''
''We need to find them or else they will kill everyone''
''Remember we need to find them all not only 2 of them''


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''Hee.......this sucks''A girl said while looking at her partner.
''Seriously why do ,0046, always get all the fun?''Her partner asked.
''I want to cry''The first girl said.
''Naw naw.....don't cry baby''0046 said and gave her a kiss.
''You should stop kissing everyone, you're becoming like her''The partner said and pointed behind her.
''Tch, can't she become like me?''Another girl who was behind them asked.She went to 0046 and gave her a kiss, a really deep one,they all knew it didn't mean that she loves them.Because for them,there is no such thing as love


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''Boring''A girl said and stood up from her chair.She took out her phone and walked out of the room.
''Oi! we are still talking miss baka''Another girl said.

''Why am I with you two again?''A girl who was standing,leaning on a wall beside the window asked the girl who is looking outside the window.
''Because i'm awesome~''
''Oh, please''
''Shut up!''

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''Why are you doing this?''The little girl asked the figure in front of her.
''It's our job''
''And also, goodbye!''Sound of someone shooting was heard.The figure smirked and runned away


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Yo! man I love you guys  :shy2:

But seriously I don't even know what I am typing  :depressed:

Comment the couple you want and I'll see who I'll put with who  :kekeke:

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........hah....ha......ha......ha? IDK what i'm typing sooo I gotta go!

Byebye!  :byebye:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #18 on: February 01, 2013, 11:05:08 PM »
Very nice update there... Thank you

However, I don't quite follow it.... coz' there are lots of saying like "this girl", "little girls", etc.... I don't know who you mean? (may be you are trying to be mysterious about your story...)

Apart from that.... it's good story.... can't wait to see the next one...

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #19 on: February 02, 2013, 03:53:24 AM »
However, I don't quite follow it.... coz' there are lots of saying like "this girl", "little girls", etc.... I don't know who you mean? (may be you are trying to be mysterious about your story...)


totally agree with you  XD

I guess it okay as I believe that maybe the next few chapters I will know who they are..haha

haha.. I want mayu x jurina or mayuki or anna x jurina, asumina, kumi x 0047 ??? XD XD XD  :lol: :lol: :lol:

anyway it is up to you to write the couple that you want in your story  :lol:
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Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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