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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #40 on: February 12, 2013, 04:13:58 AM »
Thank you for the update...

At last about Kumi's past...

Ah... so the one that she wants to kill is Takamina...

And Erena is the one that start all the killing of Kumi's family...

And why did Kumi get send into the prison hope?

If there is a bit of relation between Rappappa... so there is a relation with MG1&2 with this fic.

I thought Minami (Atsuko's friend died) died in MG1 so how is this Minami related to that Minami... Erena's sister?

Still unanswered... more mystery to solve...

I feel sorry for Kumi to lose all her family at such a young age....

What's going to happen with Takamina....?

Wondering what's happening next... can't wait

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #41 on: February 12, 2013, 05:56:44 PM »
Comment for Chapter 12:
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So she is your mom's ex-boyfriend who was gay and had a boyfriend and that boyfriend's ex was a girl who is now married and had *** with a man when she was 17 and that man's dad's mom's grandson's ex girlfriend's who had cheated on him with a another man and that man is now your mom's boyfriend, am I right?''Juri looked at Sayaka.

All I can comment for this is that this is so complicated. haha...

From the chapter, can I conclude that Mayu, Aki and Rubutan actually know all the action that Kumi had done?

Comment for Chapter 13:
For the ending part that about Konan learn about the Kumi's past is not clear. It like she suddenly knew it...hmm...from what I had finally understand I think it is Kumi told Konan about her past.. hehe

From what I remember, Takamina know that Kumi wanted to kill her right?

Nice updated for the Kumi's past :)
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Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #42 on: February 15, 2013, 07:04:51 PM »
This is the last chapter................don't kill me an I hope you enjoy!!


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''Takamina-san? C-can I talk to you?''Kanon asked Takamina who was standing on an edge of a cliff looking at the sea.She turned back looking at Kanon who was standing a few meters from her.

''Sure!''Takamina said.

Kanon took a few steps, she stopped after she took a few steps.

''I...........I...........I'm sorry''Kanon bowed.

''E-eh? why?''Takamina looked at her confused.
''Look who we have here~~''Came a voice.Takamina looked to where the voice came from.In front of her stood Aoi and Gekikara(Rena).
Her eyes widened.

Then Geki's mad giggle started.''Ne, are you mad?''She asked and bit her nails.
''W-who are you? Kanon what's all this?''The confused Takamina asked Kanon who was looking down.
''You shouldn't ask her, you should ask me''Came a familiar voice.
''Kumi''Takamina didn't even need to look up to know who the person is.
''I should have known''
''And now you know''Kumi smirked.
''Why do you keep wanting to revenge?''Takamina asked calmly.
''DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT SEEING YOUR WHOLE FAMILY DIE IN FRONT OF YOU?!?!''Kumi shouted at her while tears was falling down from her eyes to her cheeks.

''I didn't do it''Takamina said.
''Maybe, but you're sister is going to know how I felt''Kumi said but with a calm voice as Black who was now beside Kumi.
Takamina looked at Kanon then Kumi then the others.
''I knew it......the whole time''Takamna confessed.
''I know, and it's your fault that you didn't stop me''Kumi smirked.She had a hand behind her back.She was holing a gun with it.She glanced at her gun.It was a silver gun with her number '0047' inscribed on it.
''Now, Takamina enjoy your death''Kumi smirked and pointed her gun at Takamina.

Takamina didn't move.She closed her eyes knowing that she will feel the feeling again.That feeling, when someone shoots you.Kumi pulled the trigger.
Takamina who had closed her eyes felt it.She let out a loud scream.'I think I'll die before I confess to Acchan'She thought.She opened her eyes and looked at her arm.She looked at the new wound.It was bleeding, she put her hand on it trying to make the blood stop.The others who heard the scream had ran all the way from the Hotel to the beach - or the cliff -.

''TAKAMINA!!''Acchan shouted and ran to Takamina.
''What happened? Who did this to you?''Acchan didn't stop her questions.
''Seems like I missed''Kumi pouted.
The girls all looked at Kumi.''WHAT?!''They didn't understand.
''What do you mean by what? I shoot Takaidiot.And I missed''Kumi said simply.
''Kumi why?!''Nobunaga shouted at her.
''Oh....why....? Ask Kanon''Kumi smirked.
''Takamina''She said knowing that Takamina will understand her.
Takamina looked at Acchan.
''Acchan, gomen''She said looking down as tears was falling down.She pushed Acchan and stood on the edge of the cliff again.
''Acchan........I..........I....I LOVE YOU!''She shouted.Kumi then started running to Takamina.Then she pushed Takamina.But Takamina grabbed Kumi's sleeve.So they both fell, down from the cliff.They both heard the girls shout.
As they where falling down Kumi looked at Takamina.
''Gomen''Kumi mumbled.Then.................




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''TAAAAAAAAAAAKAAAAAAAAMINAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!'''
Kanon's legs was giving up.She fell down on her knees.Acchan looked back at Kanon.
''KANON WHY?! KANON!!! TELL ME!!!! NOW!!!!!!!''She shouted.Annin,Yuria and Shimazaki was holding her from doing anything stupid.
''Kanon.......please.............why?''Acchan was now crying.
''I..........had........''Kanon manged to say after a while.
''S-she s-said y-y-you a-all or Ta-Takamina-s-san''Kanon said.
Yuria went to the poor little girl and hugged her.''I'm really sorry b-but your life.........''
''Shhh.......we know''Yuria stopped the girl from saying anything more.She just hugged the girl.
''Hee? They forgot us?''Aoi asked.
''Let's go..........''Airi said.They all started running away all except Juri.She glanced at the girls who was now in the middle of a group hug.She saw Yagi look at her.Their eyes meet, she froze.'Now I know what Kumi meant by ''I feel like she is looking at my soul'' ' She turned around and went with the others 00 members.



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Where am I? Wait? Who am I? And who is this?

The girl looked around.But all she could see was blurred.She closed her eyes.'And why am I here?'She thought.

''Hey! Wake up, now tell me, what's your name?''A girl asked.

''I.....my......name.............I......don't know''The girl looked at the other girl.
The other girl sighed.
''Guess there is no point''Then another girl came into the white room.
''She's awake?''The girl who just came in asked the second girl.
''Mm, and she can't remember her name''
The first girl looked at the two other girls.She then looked around,''Where the hell am I?'



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Ne, as I said........the last chapter...........

I wonder what happened to Kumi and Takababy

now........I wonder if I should make a MG S 2 :D

Should I?

Commento!

Now byebye!  :byebye:

P.S don't kill me pleaseee  :kneelbow:

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #43 on: February 16, 2013, 03:10:43 PM »
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now........I wonder if I should make a MG S 2

Should I?

YES YOU SHOULD!! haha :)

Nice update for the scene of kumii taking revenge on takamina. Actually I hope that this will be a super long chapter as you had mention that it is last chapter :'(

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P.S don't kill me pleaseee 

How can I don't kill you when you had left a mystery behind... haha (joking)

Please make MG S2 soon... :)

(By the way, please also update your other fic soon, I like your  AKB high school project! and  AKB48 family dabbles :) Just that I am quite lazy to comment, usually I prefer to be silent reader and mostly the comment I post is please update soon as there are fanfic seem like already dead :( )
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)
« Reply #44 on: February 16, 2013, 10:54:15 PM »
Eh... I understand the revenge and everything..

But that how 'Majisuka Gakuen After prison (In Tokyo)' finish?

It's not finish yet.... who is this person at the last paragraph...?

Who will survive? Kumi? Takamina? or Both?

There is still more mystery...

Thank you for the update

I hope you can make a sequel for this story

And Yes, please make MG2 Season 2 too

Thank you

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