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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 3/30-31/2013 OTP run
« Reply #20 on: April 01, 2013, 06:10:17 AM »
LOL kuro, you were reported for spamming. Please include more lines in ONE post, edit your previous post to add more to it, something... This is just too shameless :P
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 3/30-31/2013 OTP run
« Reply #21 on: April 01, 2013, 06:54:24 AM »
Looks like shirenu beat me to it :lol: Had to wait for my lunch break before I could respond to the report.

Anyway, kurosawa, please compile all your recent posts into one (and delete the rest) and refrain from posting twitter-style here. Some of your posts were made minutes apart and that's considered rapid-spamming. Please also keep in mind that each fanfic post should amount to one chapter worth of events.

Thank you :)

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots
« Reply #22 on: April 01, 2013, 03:22:40 PM »
Since it is April Fool's I'm not sure if it will come out correctly :nervous  PM me if you want the raw one :lol:

Sunshine Girl KojiYuu

Seen from afar

My heart went off

Her height was suspect

But approaching her seemed easy enough

My mouth quivered

Looking at her name tag

Her pouty eyes looked up

The nerves seemed to get the best of me

As I ran off

Deep into my own realm

Her appearance was my only image

Walking back to that spot

The place bore no one

My own fears won

Feeling her arms,

That sudden warmth ran up my back.

“Tomodachi da yo.”

“Ehhh, chotto matte.”

Despite my pleas

I was stuck

She made everything better

Her eyes

Her kooky smile

Her hands travelling deep into my soul

Her warm expressions

Her unusual boyish charms

Her girly style

Her figure

Her perverted ways

Her love for me

It seemed a long time

But it was only yesterday

That she was lost

On my way to my heart

It was a sunny day

I called her my sunshine girl
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/7/2013 HKT one shot
« Reply #23 on: April 08, 2013, 07:45:48 AM »
Blinded by fear

The green monster

Grew hundred times of myself

Yet leader had her charm

The antidote to my disease

She held me close

Like a teddy bear

Whispering encouraging words

Squeezing out the hatred

Forcing a smile onto my face

An ability I wished I had

Forced upon me

Does everyone have a person like that?

Chihiro

Do I must trouble you?

Gomen hundred times before

One more time again

She has more than my heart

She possesses my soul
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/19/2013 Kai/Acchan
« Reply #24 on: April 20, 2013, 12:34:28 AM »
Same bed, but it feels just a little bit bigger now
Our song on the radio, but it don't sound the same
When our friends talk about you all that it does is just tear me down
Cause my heart breaks a little when I hear your name
And it all just sound like uh, uh, uh


“What do you mean?”

“She’s taking him to the awards.”  Riku coughed as the front page bore the two people together.

“It is just an award show.”  Kai smiled as he walked over to the bathroom closing the door behind him.

Heading to the basin, he turned on the faucet and filled the water to brim.  The clear water reflected a broken man with the truth singing in his mind.  Out of the people he had to hurt, he ended up hurting the one he truly respected and loved.  Pushing the hands in, he lifted it up to his face dampening his swollen face.  He lifted his head to view the monster he faced since that day.

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“Acchan, where are you going?”

“I’m leaving, Kai-san please don’t follow me.”

“Acchan… I never meant to return that late.”

“Well you did!  Now you smell and we had a date that you forgot about.”

“I didn’t forget.  I had everything set up but you never came on time and drinking makes me wonder away from the reality.”

“I called but your phone was off.”


Kai stood with his hands to the side watching her walk away.  His throat felt the noose tighten, ready to snap his neck at any moment.  The words escaped into the air.  It was an apology of his stupidity and selfishness.  Looking at the phone there was two messages.  First was confirming her late arrival and the second was his location.  The door slammed like a loud bell, falling to his knees, he looked at the keys with the heart pendant etched with their first initial.

Holding the keys, he threw it into the mirror, cracking the glass into million pieces.  Every shard a dream they had together, slowly falling apart from the wall.  Kai wiped his eyes, holding the truth within his heart.  Acchan was gone.
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Hmmm too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers and held your hand
Should have gave you all my hours when I had the chance
Take you to every party cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby is dancing, but she's dancing with another man.


Leaving the bathroom, he shielded the guilt from his two friends and jumped onto his bed.  After she left, he was forced to vacate the apartment and begged them to accept him back.  Despite their reservations, they took him in with a smirk on their faces.  Despite all that, the depressing days filled his heart with the alcohol only to fill the void.  Many knocks would pass hoping it would be her but disappointment would follow.  Locked in the room, the voice would return too many times in his mind.  He could only listen to it on repeat until the bottle could block it out.

“Kai… you can’t be cooped up.  You should…” Kuu instructed but stopped midway by Riku.

“Let him just rest, no alcohol will eliminate the lesson.”

Kai knew they were talking about him but the energy for his fight was wiped away with the changing winds.  The white ceiling stared back like a blank canvas.  The lingering smell of whiskey enticed another swig of the sweet liquor before exhaling a belch.

My pride, my ego, my needs and my selfish ways
Caused a good strong woman like you to walk out my life
Now I never, never get to clean up the mess I made
And it haunts me every time I close my eyes
It all just sounds like uh, uh, uh, uh


Closing his eyes, he hummed a sound that would irritate Acchan, smiling he could only let the tears escape into the river between his cheek and nose.  The hum brought back the memories of them although she wasn’t there.  The weight could never escape his arm.  Seeing the face, he punched the air in front of him and rolled off the bed.

“Riku.”  He yelled.  “Get Kuu in here and let me vent again.”
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“Kai-san, you know what today is?”

“Our three month anniversary.”  He said in a monotone.

“Aren’t you excited?”

“I am but I need to dress up and such.”

“If you feel tired, we can stay in.”

“No, we can go.”


Kai grabbed his coat and walked out to the park.  Acchan followed him out to the fireworks display over the bay.  He hinted a smile as he slipped his hand into hers.  Then, as he was approaching her lips, someone grabbed him aside and asked for drinks.  He gave her peck on the cheek instead of the embrace he had planned.  Kai followed him leaving Acchan watching the finale out in the cold.
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Despite their best efforts, Kai was far away from him.  He could not comprehend the situation as he tried to backtrack through the events and could not pinpoint the one moment.  Kai collapsed onto the bed punching the pillow with vigor.  The two tore him away from the bed and took him into the living room.

Too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers and held your hand
Should have gave all my hours when I had the chance
Take you to every party cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby is dancing, but she's dancing with another man.


“Don’t you still have her number?”  Riku asked.  “Why don’t you text her?”

“Do you think she changed her number?”

“I don’t know but why not try it.”

Kai grabbed his phone and stared at the screen.  Tears polished the screen as he left the wallpaper picture of them at the concert.  Opening up a new message, the number came up and inserted into the first space.

To: Acchan

From: Kai

I’m sorry for everything.  If there was anything I can do to make you feel better.  I can do better.  If I was that person, I wouldn’t feel this bad.  Why do you have to curse me?  Your image, voice, and scent still lingers.  I just want to admit my faults and closed the book on us.  Please reply.


Hitting send, he threw the phone to the ground.  The soft indenture was visible on the wooden floor.  He stared at the phone like a hawk.  Minutes grew into hours as the award show was getting to the red carpet event.   As the clock struck five a violent crackle came from the ground.

To: Kai

From: Acchan

I cannot accept any apology.  You know what you did.  That is all I have to say.  You are cursed by me?  It serves you right.  If you want the book to close, you can do so.  I will read it before deleting your number for good.


Kai looked down at the message and nodded slowly.  A smile appeared as he looked over to his right a page of lyrics caught his attention.  Glancing over the words, he saw the words that showed the truth of his guilt.  Typing it quickly, his friends turned on the television to the show.  The red carpet was outside and swiftly he pushed each letter with force.  He pushed himself to finish and looked at the television set.

To: Acchan

From: Kai

Although it hurts I'll be the first to say that I was wrong
Oh, I know I'm probably much too late
To try and apologize for my mistakes
But I just want you to know
I hope he buys you flowers, I hope he holds your hand
Give you all his hours when he has the chance
Take you to every party cause I remember how much you loved to dance
Do all the things I should have done when I was your man!
Do all the things I should have done when I was your man!


He hit send as she hit the red carpet with his date.  Kai walked out of the room and took a seat in his room looking up at the ceiling with the bottle in hand.

“This is for my happiness.”  He said as another cup of elixir hit the back of his throat.

“You think Kai got his message through?”

“I don’t know. I would be beat up if I screwed up like that.”  Riku commented when the announcer yelled her fall on the carpet.

“Did… Acchan just fall?”

“She’s crying.  What did he send her?”

Kai heard the knocking again and smiled as the setting sun brushed his face.  The shouting was great enough for him.  Closing his friend, he walked over to the door and grinned at them.  Feeling the weight going forward, he felt the arms of his friends carrying him back to the bed with the bottle near him.
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/19/2013 Kai/Acchan
« Reply #25 on: April 20, 2013, 03:27:18 AM »
Should i guess this fic is sad ending ?? !! Awww, poor Kai x Acchan.

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/19/2013 Kai/Acchan
« Reply #26 on: April 20, 2013, 02:25:35 PM »
Ah... Poor Kai and Atsuko...

It seems that Atsuko wants to be done with Kai....

She wanted to close everything that had anything to do with Kai

But Kai wanted to be with Atsuko...

What's going on with Atsuko?

Why did she cry... was it because of the thing that Kai sent..?

What's about Kai?

What's going to be the ending for this OS?

I do hope there is a continue for this OS

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the OS

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/19/2013 Kai/Acchan
« Reply #27 on: April 22, 2013, 09:52:45 PM »
Should i guess this fic is sad ending ?? !! Awww, poor Kai x Acchan.

Yes it is, can't expect a lot of happy endings with me :lol:

Ah... Poor Kai and Atsuko...

It seems that Atsuko wants to be done with Kai....

She wanted to close everything that had anything to do with Kai

But Kai wanted to be with Atsuko...

What's going on with Atsuko?

Why did she cry... was it because of the thing that Kai sent..?

What's about Kai?

What's going to be the ending for this OS?

I do hope there is a continue for this OS

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the OS

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One shot it shall be... in general they grew apart :nervous
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/19/2013 Kai/Acchan
« Reply #28 on: April 23, 2013, 02:52:57 PM »
hell yeaaa RICE! FUSROODAAA~

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/26/13 MaYuki
« Reply #29 on: April 26, 2013, 06:34:38 PM »
@Riichan_Sawa: I need an explanation XD

My hands cold
Feeling the wood hold strong
As my fist presses into it
Anger grows within me
My stupidity
My foolish ways
Why do you do this?

Answering the door
Your cold eyes
Peer into me
Your lips asking for my existence
Your mind answering quickly
As you let me in

Pushing you into the couch
I wanted to feel your lips
The last time I could I taste the sugar?
Doubts run over you
As you turn away

Is it finally over?
Have I been rejected for one last time?
Yet you smile
Like a jester
Torture me
You could only do so
Play with my emotions
Do it!

Yet these cold eyes
Stare ahead
The smile disappeared
As you let me lay on your lap
Why?
Stroking my hair
You had no verbal answer

Dozing off into my world
The white beauty it presents
Across is the forest
Standing above it
Is you
The cold eyes stare back
Following that path paved
The cold eyes are a welcoming sign
Of my entry
Into your life
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/26/13 MaYuki
« Reply #30 on: April 26, 2013, 09:58:01 PM »
Mayu is suffering because of Yuki (o.O)
Kinda like it (o.o)/

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 4/26/13 MaYuki
« Reply #31 on: April 27, 2013, 12:00:00 PM »
nice small OS there, kurosawa87

Your OS sound a bit like a lyric or a poem...

Very nice

Thank you for the interesting OS there

Can't wait to see more

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/7/2013 YuiParu
« Reply #32 on: May 08, 2013, 12:01:51 PM »
@mo-chan I like suffering :lol:

@cisda: I write poems based on mood so it comes out often and its easier to flow without dialogue :nervous

Anyways I know many read here and think this is probably rather crappy or he has no feelings for certain pairings ( I do but I do what I want)  Anyways I like to post starters here because I feel no sense make a thread to only throw it away later and I know many are just dying to ask for a request one way , or another (I seriously don't mind but PM me~) So I'll make it up to you guys, if you guys can get something going through here, I'll make a new story because I think Honestly might be getting stale because of Yuki's crazy antics killing time away from AtsuMina, I think so but you guys must have been waiting for Takamina to touch Acchan's naughty butt for a while admit it only to Takamina reasoning to not sleep with her to a constant cycle of crap that she would have pulled anyway.  (Maybe not?  I don't know it is just a thought but did I mention I may not make a perv chapter for the story. :P)

So here's one of many to entertain the mind

The ringing in her ears awoke her from her slumber deep in her mind.  Letting a long yawn from her, Yokoyama Yui never felt awkward in her life but it was the night before that she had met her.  Yui never thought of her as a person to be around but with the few seconds becoming minutes stretching into the three hours she had spent digging into her mind.  She had found love in the wrong place again.  As her drunken escapade led to a kiss she wouldn’t forget but regretted to consider:

What was her name again?

The question popped up like a balloon in the electric lines after a celebration and the crew stared up like fools before taking it down without any special equipment.  Rubbing her forehead with her thumb and pointer, she could feel the pressure build within the cranium of her own decision.  Slouched over the contents of her body were ready to meet its receiver of a white wound bowl glued to the ground.  The clear water soon turned into the murky brown before a flush cleaned it once again to clear of wrong doing.

Another noise awoke her further from the bed as the high pitched sound of the item that was deemed important to people called her attention and flipped it to discover a text eight hours old had given her a few minutes to head to work early for a project.  She couldn’t wait for a day like this to pop up again but still wondered why the last drink felt so good at the time but the horrible decision now.  She grabbed the lone perfume bottle to freshen up and switched into OL mode.

She was responsible for the management of the calendar for her boss, Hashimoto-san.  The text seemed to explain her importance to him although he could be hanging around a younger woman without his poor wife figuring it out for herself.  She stuck a toothbrush into her mouth and squeezed a small amount of gooey paste into her mouth and rubbed her teeth with it before working the tool to rid of the liquor smell from her breath.

The pounding grew to the size of snare drums banging against each other at close distance.  Finishing up her costume to perform today, she rushed out with her purse and keys in hand as the train had just passed her stop and on its way into the city.  Flagging down the cab, she could rest for a brief moment before the horns would awaken her again for no reason except to annoy her.  However, her luck was predicted to be great based on the newspaper a few days ago laying on the seat next to her and hoped for the best as she arrived three minutes late for the meeting.

Taking the next elevator stuffed with people she pushed through the crowd to gain access to the limited room and pushed out to arrive on time like usual in front of the people with her head still pounding.  Yui took her seat and up stood a woman with shoulder length black hair.  Her bangs rested above her round eyes and a smirk like a child not wanting to be in school.

“Hello, I’m Shimazaki Haruka.”

Without warning she pointed toward her.  “I remember you.”

The start of the personal hell.

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I thought about Yui and Paruru for a while already.  Paruru is such a great klutz compared to the elegant beauty that Yui is and add the mogu mogu sound to this.  But I like both but Paruru is such a minor character now, too much weaknesses not enough strengths.  Yui is just too stiff to make anything dynamic except if she was drunk.  Playful yet serious at the end.  Then again I always would put Kitarie as a sex symbol to make my point.  Maybe a perv starter with her lips as weapons... :nervous

Well I don't know how far it would go but I may twist it to my liking or plainly explain my own thoughts.  If you disagree, you can tell me by PM so we don't fill it with hate but to be honest I like challenges and to my readers don't be afraid of me, it is only Black in disguise :lol:
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/9/2013 AtsuMina
« Reply #33 on: May 09, 2013, 03:20:40 PM »
Author's note: If you don't understand this, I understand.  It is dealing with a sport that involved underhand pitching so imagine that first and get a picture.  Anyways this is always worth a shot for this pairing because I feel it should always be this way compared to a love-filled relationship :nervous

Gripping my lucky stick

The pressure is on

Bottom of the 7th

Down one, one out to go, one ready to return home at first base

Yet I’m the one facing her

The ace

The one who mowed down me twice with pitches above my head.

Stepping up to the plate

Her nails digging into the yellow flesh

As she puts the ball into the glove

Hiding the grip from me

I watched her eyes

These eyes I once loved before

Now I face them for one last time

She cocked back once and then tilted forward

Her arm rotated once with the ball coming like a fireball

I sit back as the sound of contact hit my ear

No sound.

I’m up in the count 1-0

Stepping out,

I see the coach clapping her hands

I returned to see the same wind up but reached out instead

Point of no return

1-1

Taking a few pretend contact swings

Before watching her arm crank another ball towards me

Sliding out of the way

The ball escapes the glove

My hand rose to advance the runner closer to home

2-1

Sitting in the same position

I extend my bat out only to see it flair towards the dugout

2-2

Stepping out one more time,

My hands instantly rubbed together

Before gripping the stick again

I watched one wiz over my head

Full count

My last chance to be a hero

A final strike to end the game

I see the exhaustion, panic, and confidence rolled into her

Then, the ball came out awkward

The pitch I dreaded

The pitch I hadn’t hit since we were young

It was the final attack

I waited and saw the rotation

It floated like a butterfly against a natural breeze

Fluttering away from me

I extended at the right time

SMACK

My eyes closed feeling the vibration run through my arms

I charged towards first

Then a loud explosion from behind

Forced me to open them

The ball screamed toward left center

The left fielder could only watch it go over the green wall

I lifted both my hands

As I raced around

The teammates swarmed around home

But the only person I could see was her

Her head down

It was her favorite pitch

I reached home in no time to the slaps on my helmet

My final at bat to eliminate her

I threw my helmet to the dugout

As we lined up

I saw her teammates well up

As we touched hands for one last time

Then at the end trailing behind

The worst of the group

Hiding them with her dirt covered hand

I didn’t know how much it would have hurt

Until I saw her grab me

“You fool.”  She yelled as her coach stood behind her.

“Why?”

“I can’t believe you hit my special pitch.”

“It was for the game.”

“I know.” She admitted.

I gave her a quick hug as I turned back

But she wrapped me from behind and lifted me ten feet off the ground.

“Thank you.”  She whispered before giving me a kiss on the cheek.

Since then, I only faced her once more

An empty stadium

No fans

No teammates

Just us two

The ball came again fluttering

Slowly to the same spot

But

I swung the air below it

My pride sunk

As she gleefully cheered

Yet the one reminder

Stayed on my finger

As we wrapped up our final at bat together
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/9/2013 AtsuMina
« Reply #34 on: May 09, 2013, 03:53:33 PM »
The last two posted are interesting...

The story is easily understand... Very cute story too...

But the last posted is... quite confusing...

I can only guess...

But I enjoyed reading them so

Thank you...

Can't wait to see more

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/14/2013 SaeYaka
« Reply #35 on: May 14, 2013, 06:06:43 PM »
@cisda the last one was about softball and friendship

I promised this a while back but never had the feeling to do so but with certain events and a fic to kick I decided to make a farewell one-shot although it may seem awkward at first but it has a bounce back effect about life in general

Once my shadow

You’ve grown into an adult

Remembering the sculpture of your idol self

In reality, you weren’t always happy

You’ve cried more than smiled

I pitied the people picking on you

Yet

You braved the storm of criticism

Then listening of your story

A past an idol leaves behind

My hand curled into a fist

All I could do was well up

My Sae

Suffered her pain

Then I’m giving her one more

My decision

Even if she understands my reasons

She’ll never understand the pain

Looking up to me as a captain

Now unseeded by the powers above

I must ride away

While the spotlight still shines

Holding back my forbidden words

All my disappointments may haunt you

But I wanted you to remember

All those times I spent grunting

I made you smile

Remember that

As you’ve traveled

Remember that

Smile

It is an idol’s life

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/14/2013 SaeYaka
« Reply #36 on: May 15, 2013, 09:29:28 AM »
Very nice and touching OS there

Thank you

Can't wait to see more

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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/15/2013 UPDATE
« Reply #37 on: May 16, 2013, 03:29:28 AM »
@cisda thnx

I would like to announce I'll be retiring from writing... not really, just the type to force me to ponder over why my writing sucks

Anyways, what I want to say is that, my next fic away from Shrewed Proposal will be more of short writing again like The Cursed Gift, which many loved until the end... anyways for how much I appreciate the readers seeing how bad a patched fic looks like, I will be opening up a suggestion type approach to it because the story so far.... involves too much weird stuff as it is...  So I can take requests just for the sake of the fic (which everyone seemed to like :lol:) by PM as always

Maybe I can go back to my usual stuff which I'm avoiding for now... Also, I might as well put myself up for collaboration if asked. :lol:
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/30/2013 KaiAcchan
« Reply #38 on: May 31, 2013, 04:52:14 AM »
Passing by the hallways
I didn’t know what the word love or lust
Until I met him
A year older
Yet Immature
His sister,
My best friend
Was clueless to my thoughts
And under her nose
I kissed him
The cherry tree
Was our first location
Blossoms fell rhythmically
Upon the afternoon sun
Guilt escaping
Blown into deep space

Fourteen
The first quick heartbeat
A year later
In his arms,
He admired my eyes
As he held me
Fitted my puzzle pieces
Whispering my names millions of times
Soothe every problem in the world

High school
Issues came up
Jealousy
His sister
A curse
Revealing my secret
I felt a lump in throat
His sister knew
I cared for him
Yet wouldn’t allow him to be seen
Their parents
Hesitated until he was healthy
Seeing him back
Lacking the muscle
Pale
Still smiled through it all

Summer break
Was wonderful
Spending a night in a cabin
As he mentioned his stories
I finally saw the charm
His thinned out hair
My hands felt the warmth
Embarrassed by his new look
He hid it under the cap
Laughing until his drew a serious look
Sighing
He was beyond himself
Teary eyed
I decided to gave my present away
Surprised at first
He fumbled away the first three
The fourth he got it on
Pain was my first thought
Yet it felt comfortable
I gazed into his soul
As we connected
Rolling on the carpet
We made amateurish mistakes
But youth asked for it
The red marks
I looked down
It was my gift

Autumn turned into winter
He finally got admitted
His sister angered by our kinship
Refused to inform me
But the parents finally told me the truth
My heart sank a bit
It was cancer
They had found it too late
He was slowly crumbling
Yet he smiled through his pain

Spring came to his final year
As he pushed himself through
He was a shell
Hallowed out by the treatment
He tried to stick it out
Until exhaustion took him away
Standing by his side
He smiled
There was no reason to smile
Tears were my reply
He lasted till the summer
When he went back for another round
Keeping his hands up
He used every last ounce to stay up
And came back for the semester
Frail yet happy

As the leaves turned back green,
He was back in the hospital
Days away from graduation
His classmates stood by his bed
Holding back their responses
As he smiled
Like always he was beyond himself
They gave him one final cheer
Leaving me behind
He held my hand

I wished I did more as a man.

He grinned
As I couldn’t hold back any more
He held my head near his chest
The slow beating heart
Filled the void in the room
He held my head up
And brushed the hair away from my face

Two more weeks
It was graduation day

He couldn’t make the ceremony
Yet he partaken in the festivities
He finally left the jungle
But it was the dead end
Getting his certificate
He smiled as usual
His parents
His sister
I watched him
His eyes fluttering like butterflies
His lips parched
I kissed him
I sat back down
To see him wander off
The clock in front of me
I released my hatred
Every bit went against that curse

His sister forgave me
Yet ten years later
As I stand in front of you
I can never forget the first time we met
In the hallway
Where the sun beamed
My life started
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Re: Kuro's AKB Unusually Weird One Shots 5/30/2013 KaiAcchan
« Reply #39 on: May 31, 2013, 11:24:07 AM »
Very lovely and touching poem again...

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more OS or anything that you write up...

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