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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10)
« Reply #80 on: June 05, 2013, 04:20:52 PM »
yeah me too i though jurina and rena already a couple,but looks like it is not, they had different room...rena with non-chan and jurina with kumi
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10)
« Reply #81 on: June 05, 2013, 06:48:17 PM »
Chapter 10 part 2


When I wake up, I suddenly felt my head hurts, it’s like something hitting my head. I try to get up from the bed, and when I did, I saw Acchan’s head on my legs, while Yuko, Kumi and Jurina are lying on the floor. The room is filled with stench of alcohol, and feels uncomfortable, so I decide to continue my sleep in my room. While I was walking I check what time is it, it’s 7:15 am. It’s too early.

When I open the door, I saw Yuki’s sleeping on the bed, I really don’t want to be by her side this time. But I have no choice, I don’t want to get back to Acchan’s room, So I just laid my body on the bed and cover myself on a blanket, I heard Yuki’s voice. I think I wake her up, but I’m too tired to talked to her, so I just ignored her.

It’s 2:28 pm when I woke up, I look around the house but I didn’t see anyone. So I change my clothes and go outside, I saw them in the beach, they are in their swimsuit, playing and having fun. I look to see where Yuko are, and I saw her playing with Nyan Nyan, looks like she didn’t feel the effects of alcohol, while I saw Acchan lying in the chair and sleeping with Kumi. The others playing happily on the water, and I’m just watching them.

After some minutes, I finally saw Yuki, she having a walk with her boyfriend while Carl follows them. I just laugh at Acchan’s plan to not ruin this vacation. Last night she said she called her bodyguard just keep an eye for Yuki’s lover, Yuko and the others didn’t asked why she did that, I know she hated that guy, but I want to know the reason. So I come closer to Acchan and Kumi and wake Acchan’s up. When she woke up, she look at me with a bored expression on her face

“hmmm.. Mayu what do you want?” she said

I just continue to wake her up, and when she finally did, I asked her the question that bugging me for some time now.  “Nee Acchan, why do you hate Yoshihiku so much?” after I said that to her, she just give me a irritated  expression, then get up and look at me

“simple he is a player, he even tried to flirt to me”

Acchan said with a irritated voice, I just look at her and said “Eh?”

“After I reject him, he called me and Takamina disgusting, so I slap him, I always say’s to Yuki that he’s not good but she always don’t listened to me”

Acchan said, I just stared at her “now I see why always cry to me, but she doesn’t tell me the reason”  I just smile bitterly to what I’ve heard. But Acchan notice it

“Why do you asked?”

she said, I just look at her and said “I feel like I’ve seen him before”

“Mayu stay away from that guy, if Yuko said last night were true I think you should find other person that will love you”

I just smile to her, and denied again my feelings for Yuki

“Mayu, Yuki’s blindly in love with that bastard”

My chest hurt when Acchan said that, but I get up and leave her. While I was walking in the shore, I suddenly felt a someone following me, when I look behind I didn’t see anyone, so I was about to ignore it. But

“BOO!!!”

Jurina scream in front of me, I fell down due to shock, but Jurina help me get up. And I hit her “Jurina what was that for?” I asked her, then she smile at me

“Nothing, It just that you look down”

she said, “Don’t scare me like that” I said to her

“Nee Mayu lets go to the park” Jurina said

But then when she said the word “park” I suddenly remembered something. The park near my house, The lover kissing in the park, the one that I saw in my first day of school. I just smile bitterly , and mumble “It’s him” it’s him the boy that smile to me in the park…



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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #82 on: June 05, 2013, 07:08:14 PM »
Ah..that guy!! he also try to flirt with Mayu... :angry: ..huh..that guy...somone!!! hit him for me..

 :cry: :cry: poor mayu..

 :cry: poor yuki...

Yuki already blindly in love with that guy.. :smhid

Why I think Yuki doesn't deserve Mayu love... :(

n Jurina that love Mayu deserve her more.. ;)


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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #83 on: June 05, 2013, 07:46:01 PM »
 will kill that bastard  :angry:  If I could ^^

poor mayu but hey dont give up you will find love in the end :cry: :cry:


yuki why do you keep being with him he is an a**hole


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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #84 on: June 05, 2013, 07:50:33 PM »
The guy will only make trouble although I wonder why acchan allowed him in the first place.

Might end up helping Yuki realize her mistake
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #85 on: June 05, 2013, 09:06:06 PM »
oh man, how can Yuki be in love with such a douche. :thumbdown:

what is Jurina going to do in the park, a confession, maybe? :w00t:

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #86 on: June 05, 2013, 09:23:18 PM »
Yukirin open your eyes please  :frustrated:

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #87 on: June 05, 2013, 09:55:03 PM »
Ahh.....*takes out guns and bombs* Where is that bastard!?!?? *shoots everyone*

Here freaking flirted with MY baby! And he is dating many girls at the same time!! D:

Kill him!! >~<

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #88 on: June 06, 2013, 01:35:42 AM »
i vote in the plot that Yuki deserves Mayu's love but now i'm not sure xDD
Now Mayu remember the truth what she will do?? Damn Yuki u.u and that boy!! aggg.
And Jurina confess to mayu in drunk state xDDD aaaaaah what will happen ~
Nice chapters, i'm waiting for the next ones ^^

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #89 on: June 06, 2013, 02:08:11 AM »
If jurina confess,i think mayu should accept...LOL
Maybe just maybe if yuki seeing mayu with someone else,she would realized her feeling toward mayu...and leaving that jerk
I could see,yuki actually having interest in mayu,but because she dating that jerk,she blindly looking it...
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 10 part 2)
« Reply #90 on: June 06, 2013, 04:50:54 AM »
Chapter 11


Time flies so fast, I’m now on my second year of high school, and my sempai including Yuko, Yuki and etc. are in their senior year. Nothing really interesting happened, well nothing for me. Except that, now I know that Yuki is an idiot, did she not know all her boyfriend’s doing? I don’t think so. Our summer vacation is quiet normal I guess, play on the beach, eat some watermelon, watched some firework and many more. Thank’s to Acchan’s plan that boy didn’t even come near to anyone of us, except for Yuki.

When I finally got time to be alone with Yuki, I asked her, I asked her why did she love him? She just smile at me, and said It’s love at first sight and he did save her back then. “Save you?” I asked her, but she didn’t answer me. She change our topic to something else. I’m fine if she didn’t tell me the reason, I just played along with her.

Months past, and like Acchan said that guy is really is a bastard, He tried to flirt with me, and of course I refuse him. He’s really trying to get my attention behind Yuki back. But I didn’t tell it to Yuki, I don’t want us to fight, because I know she won’t listened to me. I always put my mask on Yuki and that guy, I think everyone of my friends can read me now, I can’t hide them my frustration anymore. Acchan and Takamina give me a worried look and even offered me a date with her cousin. But I refuse

But then something pop into my head, I got an idea, but it’s so simple. And I know no matter what the result are I’m gonna be hurt. I got this idea when I remember Yuko said to me that I’m a great actress. I will put on an act that nobody gonna lose except for me. Everybody gonna win, Acchan and the other will have back the old Yuki that they knew, Yuki will wake up from her blindness, and that jerk can’t come to Yuki anymore. And what will be the change for that price, I lose Yuki, Yuki will hate me to the bones, she will hate me, and maybe don’t want me to see her again. But I’m gonna do this just for you, just for this stupid love that I’m feeling for you.

It took me another month before I started this is plan of mine, When that bastard ask me out again, I didn’t refuse him. I just go along with him, we have date and even go to see a movie, behind Yuki’s back.. I thought my plan went perfectly well, but I didn’t notice Yuko and Acchan saw me with that guy and started following me since that date begun. Acchan and Yuko cornered me, ask me so many question like What are doing with that bastard, why are hanging out with him and many more.
So I thought what the hell, Might aswell tell them my plan and let them  participate in this great act of mine. I told them call the others, except for Yuki and I will tell them the truth.

When All of my friends come to my house (except for Yuki) I told them my plan. My plan to wake up Yuki from her blindness with that jerk.  Of course they disagreed to my plan. But I tell all of us will win in this great plan of mine.

“Mayu, Just forget about her!!”

Yuko shout at me, but I just continue to convince them. Until they finally gave up and join my plan as well. I let them participate in this great act of mine…

But before I continue this plan, I want to see her, I want to ask her. I go to Yuki’s house, and see for the last time, that will be friends. Yuki’s was shock for my sudden visit, but let me in. Yuki even offered me to have lunch with her, but I didn’t waste anytime. I ask her

 “Yuki do you love me?”

she seem shock for my sudden question, but then smile to me and hug me tight, and said

“Of course Mayu, I love you, you’re my best friend”

My chest hurt when she said that, so I pinned her down on the sofa, she seem shock for my action.

“Ehh! Mayu what are you doing?”

She asked me, But I didn’t give her any answer, I just kissed her on the forehead. She close her eyes when I kissed her, she looks so clam for what I did, so I just continue my action, I kissed her in the cheek, I kissed her in her nose, I even kissed on the neck, but I don’t have the guts to kissed her on the lips. She just giggled for my action

“Mayu that tickles”

She said while laughing, but I stop my action and get up. And  I gave her just one last smile, this smile was not fake, this time it’s real. A real smile from the bottom of my heart. And she just stared at me. Then I go outside and run, run fast to get away from her. And I text the others to tell them we will do our plan tomorrow.

After that my plan begin, I asked Yoshihiku out for a date, while Acchan, Rena and Kumi asked Yuki to go out, me and that bastard go to the museum, park movies and many more. The date went really well and I can see that this bastard enjoying himself. When it’s about time to end this date we cross passed to Yuki. Yuki saw us holding hand while walking, she gave us a dark look and asked us

“What you guys doing?”

You could easily tell that she pissed, but before this bastard could even say something I told yuki

“I’m having a date with my boyfriend”

Yuki’s widen her eyes when I said that, and come run at me and

“PLANK!!”

she slapped me in front of many people Acchan and Rena’s trying to stop Yuki from her rage.

“Why? You’re my bestfriend, why Mayu?”

She said to me, while crying, while Kumi help me stand up I just smirk at her

“You’re an idiot, I never care for you, I just use you, you’re nothing to me”

I said to her, and look at Yoshihiku and smile to him, he looks shock for what was happening. But I pulled him close to mine and kiss him, yeah I kissed him in front of Yuki,

“SHUT UP!! SHUT UP!! SHUT UP!!”

she scream at me and slap me again and hit Yoshihiku and said

“Were over, and I don’t want to see you’re face ever again”

she said and walk out, Rena and Kumi follows her while Acchan come near me and whisper to me

“Are you happy now?”

After that incident my plan works, Yuki woke up from her blindness, And graduate high school without that bastard, I continue to date that Yoshihiku guy until I make sure he won’t bother Yuki ever again. And yeah Yuki didn’t even want to see me or hear my name again.

How did I make sure he won’t bother Yuki ever again? He made a big mistake when he asked me to baby sit his little brother, I didn’t give him any love, I won’t let him touch me, kissed me, hug me or even go to a date with him. When I baby sit his little brother he forgot to lock the door to his room, And I hack to his computer and got all the sex tape that he made with other girls including Yuki’s.


After that I called him and show him the file, He was shock, now he know whose the one that broke his computer and deleted all the files. He asked for forgiveness and trying to explain me something but I said to him

“Give me you’re phone”

he hesitated to give me his phone but I black mailed him, I said to him if he didn’t give me his phone I will give it  all the sex tape to all the parents that he slept with, so he finally did and I whisper to him that were over and don’t even think to come near my friends ever again. He just stare at me with fear in his eyes, while I was walking away from him. After that I throw away his phone to the ocean.

Rena and Yuki choose the same course and go to the College branch in our school. I keep contact with my sempai, were still friends. Everybody knows my secret except for Yuki.

Acchan and Takamina choose the same course also did Yuko, Nyan Nyan and, Kumi.
I heard from Jurina, that Rena’s going out now with her childhood friend Airi in her home town. Oh yeah all of my sempai continue to study in the college branch of this school.

Time really flies so fast, I’m near my graduation in high school. And Jurina ask me out again, but this time I reply

“Yes”

I thought this was a happy ending for all of us, me and Jurina going out and committed the sin of love and lust. I stayed friends with all of my sempai except for Yuki, and that bastard never come near us again. But I never been so wrong. It’s just the beginning of all my problems..



.............TBC.........
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #91 on: June 06, 2013, 05:15:17 AM »
Mayu decided to date the guy to only hurt Yuki to show he was hurting her.  Blackmailing the guy to the extent to put him into his place

In the end she gets Jurina and a possible payback
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #92 on: June 06, 2013, 05:36:25 AM »
That hurts! A lot?! :cry: Mayu why?!

Poor Mayu.. Poor Yuki.. :cry:

College life will start soon.. And this is just the beginning of drama.. :banghead: Can't wait..

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #93 on: June 06, 2013, 05:43:16 AM »
you're update was so fast! i'm happy ^^
waaa, the beggining of her problems? what is going to happen now!!
And Yuki is so dumb hahaha Mayu just go on top of her and kiss her in many places and she dind t thank what is happening with her? xD

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #94 on: June 06, 2013, 06:39:11 AM »
Noooooooo mayu why do you keep doing things that will hurt you  :cry: :cry: :cry:

I hope yuki did learn her lesson :angry:


Mayu dont give up on your love for yuki ^^

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #95 on: June 06, 2013, 07:26:49 AM »
Mayuyu.. :cry: :cry:..u do a right thing... :(

i'm happy that u protect yuki..BUT u're done enough...

hppe ur secret plan been known by Yuki and Yuki know how much she love u..

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #96 on: June 06, 2013, 07:32:13 AM »
sacrifice of love... well, mayu!! she fight so hard for Yuki  :panic:
I hope she can get her return as soon as possible ehehhh  :deco:


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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #97 on: June 06, 2013, 08:39:48 AM »
Eeeeh!!!?




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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #98 on: June 06, 2013, 08:53:42 AM »
The begining of all your problems Mayuuu *cry*

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #99 on: June 06, 2013, 09:21:15 AM »
Mayu sacrifced her friendship with Yuki just to protect her :on cloudeye:
Mayu hacked into that jerk computer and black mailed him. You're doing it right, Mayu :on GJ:
But instead of that, Yuki hate her and doesn't want to talk or hear her name :on shady:
Rena's going out with Airin and this time Mayu's going out with Jurina :on gay:
Jurina and Mayu are gonna go to College :on drink:
It's just the beginning of all Mayu's problems? :on kimbo:
Maybe that Yoshihiku will revenge her or something bad happen between her and Yuki :on blackhole:
I'm too curious about what'll happen :tantrum:
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