Author Topic: New Life ( marimii and other ) (Read 8727 times)

Elo · « **on:** February 10, 2013, 07:50:04 PM »

Prologue

Finally in Tokio i hope that i can start new here.
First i would like to introduce myself my naame is Shinoda Mariko i was a yankee in the past and because of my past i want to start new. That is what you should know for the first.
I will work as an dance teacher for Akimoto Yasushi he wnted me to teach his AKB48 group.
I hope they will not be a pain in the a** .
If you wonder why i can dance , it has something to do with my past ( i would like to make the person mysery hehe )
Here I am in front of the AKb building .
A new Life beginns .....

How do you find it i dont know if i should write more
sorry for my gramma i am still in school

Haruko · « **Reply #1 on:** February 10, 2013, 08:07:06 PM »

wow mariko sensei!! Mii gusta!! :B

kuro808 · « **Reply #2 on:** February 10, 2013, 08:11:21 PM »

Nice start to the fic

Elo · « **Reply #3 on:** February 10, 2013, 09:16:33 PM »

Chaper 1

I am inside the building I see him Akimoto Yasushi he speaks with someone she is cute through she looks like Gachapin.
I go calmy to him he smiles to me I give him a fake smile " Shinoda-san i am awaiting you i would like to introduce you to Minegishi Minami she is the general manager " I smile to her and give my hand so that she can shake it " Nice to meet you I am Shinoda Mariko " she shakes my hand and says " Nice to meet you too " Akimoto Yasushi said that she should show me around she took me to the rehersal room and she introduced me to the members first was Maeda Atsuko she says " Wife" to her and I meet Takshashi Minami which was jealous to Minegishi I could just watch in amusement next was the TomoTomo pair which they say to themselves their name were Itano amd Kasai Tomomi next were jurina and rena for short Wmatsui and Mayuki and Kojiyuu ( for short ) .

First i observed their moves and i noticed that their moves have no feelings and I stopped them .
" Minegishi-san could you all stop with what ever you do and follow me " . They all nodded and followed me .

I took them to the bus which Akimoto gave me for the group . They all got in and I drove them to a club ( image Step Up or Streetdance) I took them to the V.I.P. room which was above the dance floor .
they watched the dance battles with wide eyes .
I was in front of Minegishi-san and said " minegishi-san I am going for a bit please watch all the dance floor ok ? "
she noddes and i was going down to the dance floor they danced and one crew loosed the battle and I challenged the winner
they made their moves and I mine it was 9 to 1 I won the battle and looked up to the vip room and winked to the wide eyed minegishi minami the other noticed that and smirked to miichan.
I was in the front of the vip room and went in in front of me were the other minus miichan she was in the corner of the room i went to her and asked her " how was it ? I mean what did you see ? ".
She responsed with " What was that why have I another feeling when I am watching you " she looked confused and concerned about the group why cant they dance how I danced that question was on her mind.
I drove them to their home but not miichan I drove her back to the building annd let the bus there .
I went with her into the train room and she stood in front of me and asked " why took you me back here " I smiked to the question and went to the music box and made a tango song on . I stood in front of her and let my hand out so that she could took it but she gave me confused look and I sighed " come on I dont bite " she took my hand and I went behind her I dont know why but my heart starts to beet . I swing her hips with the beat and my head was on the right side of her neck .

Miichan Pov

Her hand were on my hips omg i hope she wont notice my heart beat I could feel her breath on my neck .
She stood in front of me and we danced face to face .
Her face was inches from mine and I couldnt take it anymore and moved forward.

Mariko Pov

Omg my heart beats she moves forward what should I do .
Suddenly I remenberd what my mother said in the past she said I should hear my heart .
I moved forward too .

Our lips meet and I kissed her passionately she kissed me back ....

How is it ?
could you please reply I dont know if i should write more

Sorry for my gramma

kuro808 · « **Reply #4 on:** February 10, 2013, 09:41:28 PM »

I'm kinda loss on the first part of the chapter

Whose POV is it from?

Posted by PWO fail master

Elo · « **Reply #5 on:** February 10, 2013, 10:26:48 PM »

in the beginning it is mariko then miichan in the end it is mariko

kuro808 · « **Reply #6 on:** February 10, 2013, 10:29:17 PM »

Quote from: Elo on February 10, 2013, 10:26:48 PM

in the beginning it is mariko then miichan in the end it is mariko

I see, it seems kinda mixed with many things and the POV's at the end threw me off thanks for clearing it up

Haruko · « **Reply #7 on:** February 10, 2013, 11:05:18 PM »

Wow that was fast! .. Jejej Jealousy minami is cute.. eh?1 Miichanis souchan know?

kahem · « **Reply #8 on:** February 11, 2013, 03:02:23 AM »

wow they are fast lol

Elo · « **Reply #9 on:** February 11, 2013, 10:31:52 AM »

Chapter 2

They broke the kiss and looked for 5 seconds into each others eyes " sorry i dont know what got into me " says mariko. Micchan ran away and mariko went after her " wait it is late let me take you home my car is in front the building " she just nodded in response .

In the car nobody spoke there was a silence .After they reach miichans house miichan got out and mariko went after her " miichan " she blushed " ah gomen can I call you miichan " she came closer to my ear and " you can but if you say why you kissed me" I blushed and say in response " gomen i cant because I dont know myself " I went little steps away and said " before I forgott we will go somwhere else I will collect them tomorrow " befor I turn away she nodded .

At home I look a picture with my parents and my little sister.

Flashback

I fight with some yankees my phone rings and the police said to me that I should go to the hospital . I thought that it has something to do with my fight but I thought wrong .

Flashback end

Something wet was on my cheek tears I rub them away and went to the bedroom.
Next day morning I collect Atsumina Kojiyuu Mayuki Wmatsui TomoTomo last I took Minegishi-san .
I took them to the woods and we went on foot forth .
My goal was the waterfalls we were there and the others could look with wide eyes " I wanted to take you all here because you can feel emotions all plants timber and water have feelings I know you are confused but I want you all to shut your eyes " they all closed their eyes and " do you feel the water how it lives do you hear the plants how they speak with you " .
All they could do was nodd. I brought my music box out and make some slow music on " now search for your partner "
How i thought were the pairs tomotomo mayuki wmatsui atsumina kojiyuu minegishi-san was spare I let my in front of her so that she could take it . She took it and we dance to the beat I perceive that the others could not dance probably " you must have faith in your partner shut your eyes and hear the beat of the melody and your body will dance " .

Atsumina

I dance with a beauty thought minami " ne minami why cant you love me " "ehhh" "nothing forgett it "

Kojiyuu

Omg my nyannyan is so sexy I want to touch those .... "yuko concentate what do you think of " " gomen gomen nyannyan "

Tomotomo

" ne tomochin lets go out on a date " date ??? ok but your treat " she smiked to the response

Mayuki

yuki has such a wonderful butt I want to touch it .... i am touching it she smiked to that and whispered " not here ma.yu.yu. "
I gulped to that and nodded .

Wmatsui

" ne rena-chan can I kiss you pwease " rena just giggled at the cute puppy and just kisses the puppy on the cheek " mou rena-chan I want one on the lips "

Normal Pov ( mariko)

" why did you kiss me say Mariko " "markio ?? " " yeah I will call you mariko and you me miichan " she said energic I just nodded and " you want to know ?" she nodded and I said " ok but we will go somewhere before ok " she nodded .
"Okey that was all for today come one pack all your things we are going back "
They are all home .
I took miichan to my house ....

next chapter I will write about her past and maybe If you like I will write some marimii moments
sorry for gramma

kuro808 · « **Reply #10 on:** February 11, 2013, 05:05:44 PM »

Packing the pairings into this chapter

Extremely interesting how this will pan out

Haruko · « **Reply #11 on:** February 12, 2013, 04:57:12 AM »

yeah we want more marimii moments

BbSis · « **Reply #12 on:** February 12, 2013, 12:52:01 PM »

OMG!!! MariMii *.* You know I love you already? *.*

OH! Mariko took Miichan to her apartment =O ehuehueheu can't wait to read that!!!

This is so nice! Thank you o/

Elo · « **Reply #13 on:** February 12, 2013, 03:41:51 PM »

Preview

miichan pov

why am i crying why do you make me cry " ne mariko can I stay for the night " " e-eh ok you can stay in my room i will sleep on the coach " shee shook her head " no you will sleep with me in your room" I blushed and nodded.

mariko pov

I told her from my past and she just cry at it I dont now why but I dont want to see her cry then she asked me if she can stay at my place I said that she could and she could sleep at my room and I would sleep on the coah she said that I should slee with her on my room.
Omg my heart beats I hope that I could control myself .

BbSis · « **Reply #14 on:** February 12, 2013, 03:57:55 PM »

*.*

I want to know about MAriko's past too ><

Mariko is already in love *.*

kuro808 · « **Reply #15 on:** February 12, 2013, 05:09:24 PM »

We are hinting to the next chapter are we?

Elo · « **Reply #16 on:** February 16, 2013, 04:27:38 PM »

In front of the house " come in miichan" miichaan got in and sat on the coach . mariko went to the kitchen and took a whine bottle "are you underaged ?" miichan shook her head and mariko gave miichan a whine glass " so what do you want to know ? " " everything why did you come to japan and where did you come from? " " ok first I came from new york second I came because of family problems do you want to know what problems" she nodded and she explained

Flashback Mariko pov

I fought with most of the gangs in new york I got a call from the police they said that i should go to the hospital when I came there they looked at me with painful and sad eyes I just frowned in respond then a doctor approached me and said " mr. shinoda I am sorry to tel you but your parents and sister had an car accident they couldnt make it " " you are lying .... that is a joke isnt it" they all shook their heads I ran away I didnt know where I am . then I saw girls who danced and displayed their feelings by dancing nd I just could watch then thy saw me and approached me " hey whaat are you doing here " " I dont know" thy saw the pain and saddnes in my eyes and said that I should fight with them I didnt know what they man and fought them .
Then their leader approachen me and said " why dont you dance and not fight with what I saw have you talent " I just nodded because I didnt know what to do I mean I loosed my family .
then 2 month later my family butler approached me ( hehe I forgot to say that she is rich but dont want to work for know in the company more later ) " miss shinoda you must go to japan to work there for the company " no I dont want to " then yuko-san( is not the same yuko as in japan more later) our leader approached us and said " mariko go begin a new life and think everytime that fighting is not a solution dance not fight okay " but yuko-san I-" " no buts you should go " she smiled and said " you know you are not alone we are here shibuya geki black and toriyoga " " and maybe you will find something that is important for you " I frowned and she chukled and said " you will undersand later now go " I bowed and went with my buttler then yuko-san shouted " sadooooo if you need help call us " I raised my eyebrow she knew that I was a yankee I looked back and saw that the crew smirked at me

End of flashback

" do you have other questions ?" she just shok her head and I saw tears .

miichan pov

why am i crying why do you make me cry " ne mariko can I stay for the night " " e-eh ok you can stay in my room i will sleep on the coach " shee shook her head " no you will sleep with me in your room" I blushed and nodded.

mariko pov

I told her from my past and she just cry at it I dont now why but I dont want to see her cry then she asked me if she can stay at my place I said that she could and she could sleep at my room and I would sleep on the coah she said that I should slee with her on my room.
Omg my heart beats I hope that I could control myself .

Now I think I know what yuko-san meant as she said that mabe I will fing someone important ......

How do you find it in the next chapter more marimii hehe

please write comments I want to know if this chapter is ok

kuro808 · « **Reply #17 on:** February 16, 2013, 04:47:41 PM »

Both have interesting views on their own situation

Poor Mariko though

Posted by PWO fail master

BbSis · « **Reply #18 on:** February 16, 2013, 05:59:25 PM »

Update *¬*

So sad Mariko's past >< So, there are Mariko's gang in New York and the AKB girls. Good. ahuahuah

Moooore marimiiiiiiiiii *>*

I'm loving it o/

cisda83 · « **Reply #19 on:** February 17, 2013, 12:47:08 AM »

just saw this fic... Wah.. great fic.... Thank you

Mariko is Sado but she is a Yankee in US... Like MG1 but in US

I like the pairing....

I hope Mariko able to relies her feeling soon... so she can have her happy ending with Miichan

Eh... Miichan as a GM so unlikely somehow... not while Takamina is there

Anyhow... can't wait to see the next chapter