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Offline mayuki_daisuki

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Heyo here’s another fic (one shot), enjoy, sorry if it’s really cheezy, rubbish and really short.  :nervous :banghead:

When my dream is fulfilled, I’ll come for you.


The Team A ace, holding her hand on her chest, with a heavy look of anxiety, while the old Team A captain, resting her hand on the ace’s shoulder, trembling, wiping away the sorrowing tears flowing from her eyes. “I, Maeda Atsuko am going to graduate from AKB48!”. Everyone surrounding with astonished looks on their faces, breaking down.

Atsuko’s pov.

“I’m sorry, I really wanted to tell you all, I felt I should’ve told you guys sooner, but I kept hesitating...but you know what? If I didn’t gather my courage now to move forward, nothing would happen, everyone looked so happy during the first day of the concert, I didn’t wanna ruin the mood, I could sense the unity. Which is why I ended up not telling anyone, and too you, my captain...my midget...my best friend...my lover, I knew you already had an idea in your mind, since last year I told you what I was thinking about, I’m sorry for burdening you with that knowledge, and for not being totally truthful, till now, I am unsure, but I have given this a lot of thought, please forgive me”.

Takamina’s pov.

"Isn’t she very brave? That’s because she’s clumsy. Atsuko.
I knew a little, since we talked last year, over a meal. Mou, I really, really, really don’t want you to graduate!!”.

Takamina’s speech.

“I hope everyone can understand this is not an impulsive decision,
This is a decision that has been given a lot of thought,
I really, really, really don’t want her to graduate!
But we don’t have a right to stop her. What all we can do now is support her.
Everyone please support Acchan’s decision! Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!”.

After the shocking announcement, all the members are shaken, sobbing and weeping,

Atsumina are alone backstage...

“Takamina I’m worried, about what the future holds for me, what holds for AKB...” Atsuko quietly mumbles, hugging and burying her face into Takamina’s chest. Takamina quietly holds her, stroking her soft braided hair, “don’t be afraid Atsuko, you’re strong, I will always be watching you, even from afar”, Takamina whispers softly. Atsuko pulls her head out, and looks deeply at the smaller girl, “And I will always be by your side, Minami...when my dream is fulfilled, I’ll come for you”.

The end to the fic (one shot), but not the end to Atsumina’s relationship!! I felt like making a fic, and since mine are all Mayuki, I thought I try something different. :P
« Last Edit: October 21, 2017, 08:34:03 PM by sophcaro »
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This will be an interesting fic with a driven AtsuMina relationship
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aw it was sweet :) Nice little Atsumina oneshot :D Def not the end to the special connection those two will always have :D Thanks for writing this :)

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Great OS... Too Bad that it's just a OS... you should make a long fic for this

I think It's going to be a very interesting fic....

What's going to happen to both Takamina and Atsuko, after Atsuko's graduation?

I like the promise that Atsuko said to Takamina, that she was going to come for Takamina after her dreams were fulfilled.

Anyway, Thank you for the OS

I can't wait to see more of your OS or long fic...

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this is sooo nice T.T
too bad it's only an OS
I miss atsumina aleady~

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