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Sneaky Whispers [CHP 03] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« on: April 23, 2013, 07:52:49 AM »
Yo guys! :cow:
A plot suddenly pops out in my head so I decided to write it into a fanfic, hoping that I can help to
spread the NyanMari (how Mariko calls them) or MariHaru love.
I want more people to join us! ^^  and the awesome poster credit to @yanouchi thank you very much!!!
 

Hope you guys enjoy!



INDEX
Chapter 01 - The Delusional Husband
Chapter 02 - 'Takamina'
Chapter 03 - The Manager









Chapter 01 – The delusional husband





"Excuse me, Bill please." a man raised his hand and asked.

“I’m sorry Sato-san, but there’s no ‘Bill’ here, I’m Haruna.” The woman walks over to the table, smirking.

“Oh c’mon Kojima-san! You know I don’t need a ‘Bill’ here.” The man laughed.


The woman giggles and hands the bill over to him, the customer pays the amount shown on the bill and said in amazed, “This is only my second time here and you can recognize me already, amazing!”

“Thank you very much Sato-san and this is what we should do. And please write down a happy thing that happened to you today on this piece of paper.” Haruna accepts the cash with a slight bow.

He takes the piece of paper over and smoothly writes down a few words.

“Thank you.” The man handed the paper back to Haruna with a smile and exited the restaurant.

“Thank you very much and please come again!”

She closed the door, turns around and announce loudly,

“Let’s call it a day guys!”

“Yay!! Thank you boss!” all the workers bow and said gratefully.

“Thank you for all your hard work!”

“Thank you for your hard work too boss!” all the workers simultaneously replied.

“Like usual, finish off task and write ONE thing that made you HAPPY today and you’re done with today!”

“Oh and don’t write something meaningless alright, if not I’ll throw you outside.” Haruna added with a you-know-what-to-do smile.

YES BOSS!” the workers laugh.

And so, all of them do as they told and in a couple of minutes, Haruna and another woman are only ones left in the shop. She picks up a few pieces of the papers and read the words written,



‘Finished reading a book this morning.’


‘A child smiles at me’


‘Woke up to a gently kiss on my cheek’




“Aww.... Acchan! Look at this! How cute...” Haruna pats the girl who is sitting beside her.

“Aww... That’s so cute! And look at this.” Acchan shows her the paper she’s reading.



‘I shit a lot this evening.’



“Eww... Hahah I bet this must our worker Yamato. That kid... throw that away, we can't write things like this in a restaurant.” shaking her head, Haruna said.

“C’mon, let write all these down and I’ll meet you at the usual place later?” Haruna asked.

Acchan takes a look at her watch.

“It’s 5:30 now, I’ll meet you there at 8?”

“Yea sure.”

The both of them quietly copy all the notes that are written by the workers and the customers down on pieces of different color small papers. Then they stick it randomly but nicely on the wall of the restaurant which is almost full of small notes, all rewrote by Haruna and Acchan. After a good ten minutes of writing, she suddenly notices the girl beside her has stopped writing and her gaze is fixed on the TV screen. She even has a ‘girlfriend’ smile on her face, like she’s watching her boyfriend on TV.

“Oh and Acchan, could you like, stop staring at the TV?” Haruna nudges her but receive no respond.

“Hello?” Haruna waves her hand beside Acchan’s face and that does not have any effect on Acchan as well.

“Acchannnn~” Haruna calls out like a kid.

MAEDA ATSUKO STOP STARING AT THE TV RIGHT N.O.W. OR I WILL TURN IT OFF NOW AND SELL THIS TV TOMORROW. Haruna states loudly, but it is still not loud enough to catch Acchan’s attention.

Frustrated, Haruna takes the remote and turns the TV off without warning, eh no, she just gave a loud and clear warning.

“YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT KOJIMA HARUNA!” Acchan turns around furiously and trying to take the remote from Haruna, but the latter hides the remote behind her back and sticks her tongue out.

“MY HUSBAND IS PERFORMING! GIVE. ME. THAT. REMOTE. RIGHT. NOW!” Acchan yells like a crazy woman and pounces on Haruna causing the both of them to fall with, of course, Haruna being the cushion for Acchan.

If anyone happens to walk into this situation right now, they would have thought that there’s someone trying to rape Haruna, well, a woman trying to rape Haruna that is. But the truth is, Acchan is just a crazy fangirl who wants to get the remote back in order to watch her ‘husband’ performs on TV.

“Aaack!”  Haruna doesn’t let go of the remote even though her back and her butt are hurting like hell right now.

“HOW DARE YOU TURN THE TV OFF WHEN MY HUSBAND IS PERFORMING?!” in order to get the remote, Acchan sits on Haruna’s stomach which causing the latter to cough at the sudden pressure.

Acchan is doing everything she can to get a hold of that remote but Haruna just not letting go.

She realizes don’t have time to be fooling around with Haruna anymore, she stretches her index finger out.









*poke*



“AHHH!”

She pokes the side of Haruna’s waist and instantly, the remote fell out of Haruna’s grip and Acchan takes the chance and grab it. She turns on the TV instantly and her shoulder slumps in disappointment. Her ‘husband’ is now bowing to the audience.

“Look at what you just did? I missed my husband’s performance!” Acchan says darkly.

“What’s the big deal? You can always watch it online anyway.” Haruna stands up and pats her butt slightly.

“Watching it on tv LIVE and watching online REPEAT is two different thing.”

“I don’t see the difference though.” Haruna shrugs.

“Of course you don’t, you old lady.” Acchan pouts angrily.

“Hey, I’m only 24 this year, which is only a year older than you and 24 is NOT OLD. Mind that.” Haruna explains, a bit pissed by the words.

“Whatever.” Acchan replies sourly.





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“Milky!” Acchan calls out loudly in the pub, with Haruna tailing closely behind.

Acchan hugs the girl tightly.

“Hey girls!”

“Milky! This old lady bullied me.” Acchan shows a sad and heart-breaking look.

“Hey hey hey, I totally DID NOT bully you alright.” Haruna said, grinning.

“See? Just look at her face! That cute face is becoming disgusting right now!” Acchan complains.

“HEY!”

The woman called ‘Milky’ laughs pats the chair beside her, signaling the both girls to sit down.

“So what is this all about? Tell me.”

Haruna and Acchan sit down and order their drinks.

“You’re a professional tennis player, can you like, smack some senses into her head with you racket??” Haruna states and grins devilishly at Acchan.

“I don’t need that! You’re the one who needs it!” Acchan retorts.

“Mind explaining??” Milky asks as she takes a sip of her drink and hugs Haruna, which the latter returns the hug.

“She turns off the TV when my husband is performing!”

“Yup I did!” Haruna said it happily.

“YOU SEE THAT?!” Acchan pulls Milky away from Haruna.

After losing the warmth from Haruna’s body, Milky pout slightly but hugs Acchan right away.

“Your husband?” Milky is lost in the conversation.

“Yea, her delusional husband, that unbelievable famous pop singer.”

“Ohh right, what’s her ‘husband’ name again??” Milky asks.

“My husband is-”



When Acchan is about to answer, someone steps onto the stage.

“Please give a round of applause to our singer!” the MC announces happily.

Everyone turns their attention to the direction.

A girl with short hair steps onto the stage with an acoustic guitar in her hand.

Milky stares at the girl in awe. She dressed up in a pretty simple way, not much accessories, simple clothes, a pair of black knee high boots, white jeans, if a normal person wears that, someone might vomits their last meal out, but it does not look lame on her, in fact, her clothing give off a cool, neat vibe. As the girl sits on the chair and prepares to perform, Milky, too, sits up straight and pays full attention to her.

“EVERYONE! YAMAMOTO SAYAKA!” the MC announces and steps down from the stage.

Yamamoto Sayaka, plays the guitar expertly while singing beautifully to the song, leaving everyone in the room in awe. After the first song ends, the audiences respond with a thunderous applause. The singer smiles and thanked the crowds. Later, the audiences sing along with her for the second and third song.

“Thank you everyone for giving such an awesome respond, Yamamoto-san will only sing twice a week at our pub, please show your support to her in the future.” The MC smiles happily.

“Yamamoto Sayaka....” Milky murmurs the name.

“Wow, I have to say, that girl is great in singing and guitar!” Haruna praised.

“Indeed. But my husband is wayyyyyy better!” Acchan agrees but doesn’t forget to defend her husband.

“I like that girl. I wonder which day she’ll be singing...” Milky asks quietly as she hugs Haruna again.

“You can ask the management if you want to know.” Haruna raises an eyebrow.

“That will spoil the fun. I’ll come here every day for a while week.” Watching the girl, Haruna can’t help but to pat Milky’s head lightly.

Liking the action, Milky smiles in satisfaction and snuggles closer to Haruna, causing the latter and Acchan to chuckle at the respond.

“You’re like a cat Milky.” Acchan states casually.

“Nyan.” Milky does a cat pose cutely.

The three of them laugh at Milky’s action. The three of them were high school classmate. Haruna is a year older than the two other girls, the reason to that is that Acchan and Milky both perfectly scored every paper in the last year of their junior high, so the both of them entered a high school which allows them to skip the first year and they did. The both of them aren’t friends at first. But they’ve perfectly scored all the exams together, skipped their first year of high school together and ended up in the same class too. After all coincidences, they’ve finally became friends and this is also the time they knew and became friends with the popular sleeping princess in class, Kojima Haruna, who always scores high in every test.

“Anywayy, where were we... Oh yeah, who is your husband again??” Milky asks, trying her best to recall the name before Acchan says it but she can never beats an excited fangirl speed.

“SHINODA MARIKO!” Acchan answers, fully excited.






TBC

 

So how was it?? I hope you can get the whole picture of this chapter. Of course, the other characters & pairings will be revealing soon. Please do leave a comment and let me know about it. but if you don’t feel like leaving it here (I know some is shy hehe), you can also just PM me. You can say whatever you want to. I don’t bite ;)
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Re: Surreptitious Whispers [Chp 01 on 23/4/13] [MariHaru]
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2013, 08:10:04 AM »
yey new' fic!
Mariharu,sayamilky,
But but atsumari???
No! i want my atsumina :banghead: :banghead:
Nice update by the way!
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Re: Surreptitious Whispers [Chp 01 on 23/4/13] [MariHaru]
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2013, 08:16:07 AM »
Yes!! another MariHaru fic...

Milky such a hugger type which is cute btw :D...

So only Aachan right now like her "husband" Mariko, while Haruna didn't care about it..XD

Can't wait for MariHaru moments...

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Re: Surreptitious Whispers [Chp 01 on 23/4/13] [MariHaru]
« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2013, 10:47:22 AM »
Interesting start

I find it weird only Acchan following Mariko at the moment, I guess something will happen
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Re: Surreptitious Whispers [Chp 01 on 23/4/13] [MariHaru]
« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2013, 06:04:41 PM »
Another MariKoji fic, good sign. 8'D

But... it started with Acchan having fangirl crush on Mariko???? XD

Interesting!
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interesting start
Acchan fangirling over Mariko  :lol:
Definitely slowly turning into a MariHaru fan...
looking forward to more!!

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Eh... Atsuko is having crush on Mariko while Haruna doesn't even care about Mariko...

How will MariHaru and Atsumina pairing are going to develop...?

A nice start of a new fic...I like it....

Thank you for the lovely beginning of a new story....

Can't wait to see the next

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  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: not bad  :twothumbs dow you did threw me off guard when acchan revealed that she was all this time talking about mariko seriously I thought she was gonna say takamina   :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:  :lol: :lol: :lol: oh well cant wait to read the next chapter  :)
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

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Sneaky Whispers 02 [26/4/13]
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2013, 06:43:27 PM »
Chapter 2 – ‘Takamina’



“Mariko, tomorrow morning at 8 you’re going to have a photo shoot for ‘VOGUE NIPPON’ at Ktoyo,  later at 10:30 you have to go for a fashion commercial, at Kyoto as well. Then, at 2, an interview & photo shoot with Weekly Playboy. At 6, guest on a radio show back in Tokyo.”


“Sigh. Alright. Thank you very much for today Takamina.” Mariko said with a yawn at the passenger seat while the manager drives.


The manager laughs, “I did nothing much today, you’re the one who is working your ass off every day, why thank me?”


“Because you’re the manager, without you, my job wouldn’t be this smooth, and you’re also working hard alright. Handle calls from newspaper offices, calls from companies, annoying paparazzi as well.”


Once again, the manager laughs and shakes her head slightly.


“That’s what my job is right? I’ve already prepared for all these back when you said you wanted to be a celebrity.”


“I still don’t get why did you-”


“I’m doing this out of my own will alright? Plus, a huge woman like you who can’t take care of herself, how can I leave you alone? Plus, the pays is good.”


“Hey I am already an adult, I don’t need a kid to take care of me.” Mariko sticks her tongue out and gives the manager a devilish smile. The manager, even though she is focusing on the road, she can still see that annoying face of Mariko from the side of her eyes.


“Whatever whatever Mariko-sama...” she sighs in defeat, knowing that she’ll never win an argument against Mariko.


Seeing the short manager’s reaction, Mariko knows that she’d won. She closed her eyes as she steadily losing her conscious, but she is trying her best to stay awake to accompany her manager. She knows that her small manager is also tired from work, and she can’t fall asleep no matter how tired she is because she needs to drive Mariko home. Every time seeing how responsible she is, Mariko can’t help but to work harder in everything. She saw her manager yawns silently, probably don’t want to let Mariko knows that she is tired. The older girl turns on the radio and her song is playing.


Hearing her song, she wanted to switch channel but the manager stopped her.


“What are you doing?”


“Uhh switching the channel of course?”


“Why?”


“Because they’re playing my song.”


“Don’t swtich.”


“But-”


“Don’t switch, I want to listen to it.” the manager smiles and says firmly.


“Okayy....”


The both of them fell into silence, letting the song’s lyrics sinks into their minds and Mariko’s voice pierce through their heart.


*sob*


Upon hearing the sob, Mariko turns to face her manager, staring at her in disbelief.


“Don’t tell me you you’re crying.”


“No I’m not. *sob*”


Mariko rolls her eyes. “Of course you’re not, your eyeballs are just swea-”


Before she has a chance to finish the sentence, the other girl suddenly bursts into tears.


“OH MAI GAH STOP THE CAR TAKAMINA. I’LL DRIVE.”




**********




“What the hell is wrong with you?? I almost experience a flood.” Mariko asks in the driver seat.


“The lyrics together with your voice... Mariko I love you.” Takamina’s eyes are full of admiration, like a little fangirl.


“I don’t love you.” Came a flat reply.


“I know you love me Mariko-sama~~~” Takamina see the traffic light turns red, she unfasten her seat belt, and takes this opportunity and gives Mariko a surprise tight hug.


“Let go of meeeeeee” Mariko whines she is trying to push the short girl away but there’s not much effect since her seat belt is still fasten.


The moment the traffic light turns green, Takamina detaches herself from Mariko and fasten back her seat belt like a good citizen.


“Geez... Having a crazy fan like you around me sure is a pain in da ass.”


“Ohh ho ho, Mariko-sama’s assssssss~”


“Cut it out you pervert!”


Takamina alone laughs so hard at the older girl’s reaction. After a while, the laugh died and the car remains silent. There is not awkward moment between them, this silent is kinda more like a comfortable silent.


“So, Takamina, when is my next off day? Wanna go out for a movie or something??” the driver, Mariko asks.


“Hm... let me see.... the day after tomorrow is a day off for you.” Takamina checked the schedule in her phone and said.


“Ohh so soon? Finally, I didn’t have enough sleep for the past two weeks! 10am, Oblivion. Is it okay with you?”


“OH DAMN! My idol a.k.a. THE Shinoda Mariko is asking me out! But sorry Mariko-sama, I’m gonna spend the day with my family. Family still comes first before you~”


Mariko rolls her eyes.




**********




“Hm... let me see.... Cute high school boy or Handsome office manager?” Mariko mumbles as she opens her wardrobe.


“I think I’ll just go with something simple today.” She laughs at her own idea. Fishing out her phone from her bag, she dialed a number.


“Yo woman! Are you free today? I got a day off!” Mariko says happily.


“Oh you’re going there today? Can I come with you?”


Mariko laughs before continuing, “Don’t worry about my identity, no one there will know me right?”


“Don’t worry, I’ll wear some disguise.”


“See you there in an hour!”




**********




“Hey bitch!” Mariko yells from afar.


“Hey bitch!” the person greets back with a hug.


“What’s with your outfit?”


“I told you I’ll wear some disguise right?”


“But you look just like Takamina...”


Mariko grins at the comment.


“Anyway, let’s get inside.” The person suggested.




**********





“Sayanee!!!!” the children greet happily.


“Hello everybody, how are you guys? Wait for me at the music room guys, I’ll be there in a few minutes.”


“Yes madam!” the children run away.


“Thank you very much for coming Yamamoto-san. The children are so happy every time you visit them.”


“No need to thank me principle, I also wanted to make the kids happy and make them forget about what happened in the past.”


The principle sighs before continuing, “You’re right, all of these poor kids... growing up without knowing why they are here in the orphanage...”


“Anyway, who could this be? A friend of yours?”


“Konichiwa, I’m Takahashi Minami. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!” Mariko ends the sentence with a bow, followed by a grin.


While the girl beside her just stares at her, not knowing what kind of reaction she should give.




**********




“I was still wondering why a fashion leader would dress up like this... Takamina’s fashion sense has improved but.... it’s still too weird for you.”


“Heheh even the orphanage principle didn’t recognize me, so I guess it’s a successful disguise.”


“Whatever.”


The both of them entered the music room together, only to find all the kids cutely sitting together on the floor.


“Sayanee!”


“Hello everyone! Miss me?? And let me introduce to you, this is my friend.... [sigh] Takahashi Minami.”


“Hello everyone, I’m Takahashi Minami. Nice to meet you guys!” out of a pop idol habit, Mariko stretches her hand out for a handshake like she always did on a handshake event. A second later she just realizes what she just did, she quickly squads down so they have the same eye level, and the children seems happy.


“Minami onee-san!”


“Are you going to play guitar for us again today Sayanee?” a girl asks timidly.


“Of course, unless you doesn’t want me to?” Sayaka fakes a sad face.


“No no! I want! Please!”


“If you say so milady. ” Sayaka bows like a gentleman and pats the girl’s head lightly. The girl quickly hides her face behind her friend’s back with a face as red as a tomato.


In a minute, every kid is already sitting on the floor, waiting for Sayaka to start.


“Kids, today we’ll have our *cough* Minami onee-san *couch* to sing for us, let me tell you, she is REALLY good in singing.”


The orphans clap their hands, excited.


Sayaka gives Mariko a knowing look which can be interpret as ‘You are a singer, SING’


Mariko drinks some water and clears her throat.


“This song is Hero, originally performed by Mariah Carey.”


“1, 2, 3...”


There's a hero
If you look inside your heart
You don't have to be afraid
Of what you are..........






**********





“Not bad huh Mariko, the children love you.”


“Of course they love me. I’m Shinoda Mariko.” Says Mariko, proudly.


“No, you’re TAKAHASHI MINAMI. They didn’t know you’re Shinoda Mariko. So the kids love Takamina.” Sayaka grins as they walk towards their respective cars.


“Whatever. I’m starving.”


“Oh how about we go the restaurant I told you last time?”


“Uhh what’s the name again? Happy Little Nyan?” Mariko laughs at the last few words she just said.


“Yes. It may have a weird name, but the foods there are fantastic alright?”


“Sure sure, lead the way. I can eat a cow plus you as the dessert right now.”





**********





A few seconds after the waitress took the orders,


“You almost ordered EVERYTHING on the menu just now!”


“Wow, this ‘Happy little Nyan’ restaurant sure is.... happy.” Ignoring Sayaka’s words, Mariko observes around the restaurant.


Sayaka laughs but didn’t give a reply, she too, is observing the restaurant. The design of the restaurant is modern yet traditional, the workers are wearing a smile of their face which gives off a blissful feeling. Watching the happy workers, Sayaka smiles unknowingly. But there’s two girls stand out the most among the workers. It’s not only the look that stood out, but these two girls also give off a special aura. From the butt slap to hugging, Sayaka can tell they’re very close friends. Besides these two, there’s another who keeps on staring at the screen when she is free. Correction, she keeps eyeing the TV screen anytime possible, even when she is serving customers, she still glances often to the screen. Wondering what is so interesting, Sayaka moves her sight to the TV screen and nearly burst into laughter.


“Psst... Mariko, you got a big fan right there.” Sayaka whispers loudly to the person sitting across the table.


“Huh?” Mariko doesn’t know what her friend is talking about until she turns the direction Sayaka is talking about.


Mariko is on a variety show right now and the ‘fan’ is paying 95% of her attention to what is happening to Mariko. When Mariko got pranked on, she almost throw the plates in her hands towards the screen. When Mariko says something funny, she will ask her collogues to watch.


“Maeda-san! Take this to table two!” the chef shouts.


“Roger that.....” the girl answered with no energy.


They watched the girl takes a deep breath, putting on a smile before she heads to table 2. And after the food is placed on the table, her sight is once again glued to the TV screen.


“What an impressive fan you got there...”


“I know right... I bet this will be fun...”




TBC

So.... how was it? hehe hope it wasn’t too bad... more and more characters and pairings will be reveal soon guys! Stay tuned! Oh and thank to those who left a reply, it gives me motivation to continue writing  :thumbsup
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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #9 on: April 25, 2013, 07:28:16 PM »
Mariko a master of disguise?

It is interesting with all the events happening
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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #10 on: April 25, 2013, 08:41:03 PM »
Hahahahaha, Mariko in disguise and nobody even realized it was her XD
And Takamina is Mariko's manager who's also her fangirl.... XD

This is so exciting! Can't wait until they meet the 'NYAN' XD
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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #11 on: April 26, 2013, 12:29:50 AM »
wow mariko-sama a master of disguise  :twothumbs
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #12 on: April 26, 2013, 11:02:41 AM »
Minami was Mariko's manager and a good friend huh....

Ara... Mariko disguised as Minami... how... she is a lot taller...

But just with wearing clothes that Minami normally wear... she could be Minami? Very unlikely....

Eh... Atsuko is a very big fan of Mariko... what will Mariko do...?

I feel that she was going to do something to Atsuko in the restaurant...?

Will it be AtsuMina with the real Minami... or fake Minami...?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #13 on: April 28, 2013, 06:22:56 PM »
Hmm they meet Acchan first...so Mariko and Sayaneee are two ikemen best friend bitches

hope theres MariHaru moment in the next chapter...

nicely done pinky-san....thanks

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #14 on: April 30, 2013, 09:15:47 AM »
This should be interesting  :)

Mariko meeting her "fan"

I wonder what will she do  :)

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 02] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #15 on: May 01, 2013, 04:40:23 AM »
lol Takamina is so funny bursting into tears
Mariko and Sayanee going to the orphanage is so great
Mariko and Acchan meets
I wonder if Acchan will recognize Mariko in her disguise
Thank you for the update!!

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Sneaky Whispers [CHP 03]
« Reply #16 on: May 06, 2013, 11:23:57 AM »
Chapter 3 – The manager


“Here’s your drink Yamamoto-san.” A cup of green tea is suddenly placed in front of Sayaka which gives the girl a slight shock.


“Ohh.. thank you.” Sayaka looks up from the cup of green tea, she saw a beautiful woman with big talking eyes and hazel hair that looks as soft as a cotton candy which she would like to take a bite if she could. This woman can be consider tall, under her uniform, Sayaka can sees that she has quite a wonderful body, has ideal curves. Her glowing skin looks warm and healthy. Wait, this woman just called her name.


“You remember me??” Sayaka asks in much surprise.


“Yes I do.” The woman replies politely while flashing a lovely smile.


“Impressive.. You are....Kojima-san right?”


“Yes I am.”


“Me me? Do you know my name??” Mariko jumps into the conversation.


“Uhh... you look familiar... but sorry miss, I don’t know your name. May I know your name please?”


“My name is Shi-”


“TAKAHASHI MINAMI! HER NAME IS TAKAHASHI MINAMI!” Sayaka bursts out.


“Takahashi... Minami?” Haruna repeats,


“ehem yes... I’m Takahashi Minami, Yoroshiku onegaishimasu.” Mariko clears her throat and extends her hand out for a handshake and Haruna accepted.


“It’s your first time here right Takahashi-san?”


“Yep, ma first time here~” Mariko answered with a huge grin.


Haruna walks over to the counter and took two name cards and handed over to Sayaka and Mariko.


“Here, this is my name card.”


“Oh it has your email address on it too!” Mariko exclaims excitingly.


“Yes, I’ve put it on my name card just in case.”


“I have some customers to serve, please excuse me.” Haruna left the duo with one last smile.


“That woman is beautiful isn’t she?” Mariko’s eyes follow Haruna around the restaurant.


“Interested?” Sayaka asks suspiciously.


“Hmm... not really, just saying that she a kick-ass-beauty. But I can’t guarantee that I won’t be interested in the future.” Mariko shrugs.


“Why? Attracted?” Mariko shows an evil grin.


“Tsk. No thanks.” Sayaka denies the statement but she IS attracted to Haruna, she just doesn’t want that girl to have something about her that she can make fun of.


“Excuse me miss.” A voice of a female broke into their world followed by a delicious looking bento.


“Wow... looks yummy...” those words left Sayaka’s lips without knowing her knowing.


Mariko chuckled and turns her gaze to the waitress and the girl turns out to be ‘that’ Mariko fan, the girl looks unenergetic but still have a smile plastered on her face.


“Maeda-san?” Mariko reads the name tag and looks the girl in the eyes.

 
“Ye-yes?” Acchan’s heart skipped a beat when their gaze met.


“You have such beautiful eyes.” Mariko showing her powerful gaze, but she is also somehow affected by Acchan’s eyes as the pair of eyes is like a secret garden, full of mystery, unable to understand and Mariko feels she is being drawn into her eyes.


“Thank you...” Acchan answers timidly and drops her head, she doesn’t understand why this first-time customers can make her feel this way.


Watching the reaction, Sayaka can’t help but feel that this girl is cute. She doesn’t just drops her head down, she is always playing with the hem of her skirt nervously. Sayaka can’t fight the urge to tease this girl.


“Look! Shinoda Mariko in bikini!!” she said loudly and points at the TV.


“Where?!”


Of course, being a Mariko’s wota, Acchan turns her head towards the direction of the TV and almost let out her ‘wota scream’ before she saw what’s currently playing on the TV, which is the ‘NEWS@9’. No sign of her idol. Meanwhile, the idol herself also reacted to the yell, she stood up instantly when she heard her name.


“WHAT?!”


Everyone in the room turns towards her, staring at her with strange look. Only Sayaka alone trying hard to suppress her laughter. Realising what just happened, Mariko bows apologetically at the other customers and sits down quickly.


“Why is your reaction so huge??” Acchan shots Mariko a suspicious look, thinking that there is someone who is an anti of her idol.


“Uhh... because.... because... I ALSO WANTED TO SEE SHINODA MARIKO IN BIKINI!”


“YOU’RE A FAN OF HER TOO?! Oh Mai Godddd!” Acchan overjoyed and held Mariko’s hands.


“Yes!”


“I know EVERYTHING about her!” Mariko confidently adds.


“No, I know my husband more than you!” Acchan moves her face closer to Mariko, which the latter didn’t moves a bit.

 
“Husband??” Sayaka quotes the word.


“Yep, Shinoda Mariko is my husband!” Acchan said proudly.


“But she is a woman!” Mariko retorts.


“So? She is still my husband even though she is a woman.” Sayaka laughs at the sentence that


“Wanna play a game? See who knows more about Mariko.”


“I know I will win this game.” Acchan confidently challenge.


Mariko smirks, no one will know her better than herself.


“Ok then, question number 1-”


“Acchan!!” Haruna yells from behind Acchan.


“Ahh!” Acchan squads down in respond.


“Why. Are. You. Fooling. Around. Here. When. There. Is. Still. A. lot. Of. Things. For. You. To. Do??” Haruna pushes the squading Acchan’s shoulder on every word she said.


“Cut it out NyanNyan!” Acchan tries to push the woman who is on top of her. She tries to stand up while going against the pressure on her shoulder, and she did, but the older girl lost her balance and almost fell on the floor, fortunately someone saved her by pulling her hand, wrapping an arm around Haruna’s waist. And the person is....






“Are you alright?” her life saver’s eyes are filled with worries.


“Oh god! Thank you very much Yamamoto-san!”



Haruna almost had a heart attack from the nearly-fell just now and it is still thumping hard, and now, she is exchanging gaze with a cool customer, who just saved her from pain. The cool and worried gaze did made her heart skipped a beat. Just a beat.


Mariko at the side is staring them, thinking what a beautiful scene. She was the first one to stand up just now to save Haruna, since Haruna is nearer to her. But she wonders how did Sayaka managed to save her first. Anyway, She have the urge to clap and shout ‘Bravo!’ but she decide to keep the ‘Bravo!’ to herself instead and just smile like a happy little girl.


Snapping back to reality, Haruna yelled at the top of her lung and stands on her own feet “Acchan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”


The girl, on the other side, is afraid of what this woman will do and instantly hides behind Mariko.


“Woah woah!” Mariko lets out. Acchan is gripping onto her cloths.


“Protect me Takahashi-san!”


‘Oh yea... I am Takahashi Minami right now...’


“Acchan. Come.” Haruna walks slowly step by step toward Acchan or Mariko you can say.


“That woman will do something scary to me! I’m a rabbit!!” Acchan whines, hugging Mariko’s waist and buries her face into Mariko’s back as she watches the distance between the predator and herself, shortens.


“Rabbit?” Mariko almost laughs when she heard that.


“Rabbit? Ha. Ha. Why are you a rabbit Maeda-san?” Haruna asks in a sarcastic tone.


“Because I look like a defenseless little rabbit that is chased by the scary predator don’t I?” Acchan shows Mariko and Haruna a cute face then resume back to hiding behind Mariko.


“Oh by the way, Takahashi-san, you smell nice!” Acchan grins and buries her face into Mariko’s back.


Mariko laughs and shakes her head. A girl who she just know about 15 minutes ago, which is her top wota, is burying her face in her back, telling her to protect her and even telling her she smells nice. She can’t deny that she is enjoying this herself. And the other customers, it seems that they already get used to situation like this or maybe they find this scene cute, all of them smiles before continue their meal, no one really gives much attention to them.


Haruna scoffs and walks closer and closer over to the duo. She tries to get a grip of Acchan but the younger girl always uses Mariko’s body as her shield. After a few moves, Haruna is hugging Mariko with one hand from the front which results Mariko being sandwiched by two girls. She stiffens up at the situation. Haruna uses her other hand and tries to ‘detach’ Acchan from Mariko but the latter is like STICK securely onto Mariko at the moment.


 After a few tries, Haruna gives up and takes a few steps backwards.


“Whatever whatever, do as you like, I’m going back to work.” As she turns around, and Acchan lets out relieved sigh but the sigh soon came to a halt as her boss turns around and adds, “but you better not screw around for too long, if not, I’ll kill you!”


“And Takahashi-san, you do smell nice.” Haruna smiles at Mariko but shots deadly glare towards the Acchan who is peeking from behind Mariko.


Acchan shivers and slowly removes herself from Mariko. “I better get back to work before NyanNyan kills me...”


“Nyan.... Nyan....??” Mariko and Sayaka repeated.


“Oh, Kojima-san for you that is. She’s the boss here. And sorry for the troubles just now.” Acchan smiles apologetically and bows.


“No big deal.” The two girls waved off the apology.


“Oh but if you really feels sorry, how about giving me your email address, phone number and let me take a picture of you?” Mariko grins and shakes her camera which she fishes out from her pocket just a second ago.


“Sure!” Acchan posed for the picture, then she takes a pen and a piece of paper from the counter and writes down her email address.


“Here! We can exchange news about my husband!” Acchan smiles cutely.


“This is my name card. You can call me Takamina. Everyone calls her that.” Mariko takes a piece of name card out from her purse and hands it to Acchan.


“Her?” Acchan echoes.


“She meant ‘me’! Everyone calls ‘me’ that!” Sayaka quickly covers for Mariko who still hasn’t realized her mistake.


“Thank you! I’ll mail you after work today! We could go and watch my husband’s concert together sometimes!” the waitress finished and get back to work.


“You sure are having fun back there. I saw that pervert smile on your face when both Kojima-san and Maeda-san was hugging you...” Sayaka whispers to the girl who is now taking photo of their bento.


“Do you know dressing up as Takamina is fun? Her clothing is so comfortable that I can even put my camera in my pocket.”


“Tsk. You’re just lucky they don’t know Takamina.”


“I think I’ve found something to play with...”







TBC

A/N: THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING AND I REALLY APPRECIATE THOSE WHO COMMENTED! I love my readers~

There are still lots of idea coming into my mind right now! Oh yeah!


and as for @cisda83 question about Mariko’s disguise, no one knows who Takamina is, so when Mariko disguise as Takamina, they didn’t know that the actual Takamina is short and different.
« Last Edit: May 09, 2013, 05:57:05 AM by pinky.spear »

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 03] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #17 on: May 06, 2013, 11:40:29 AM »
Yeah... I figured that much... they don't know that Takamina is a midget...

Thank you for answering my question, pinky.spear-san

Ah... Mariko likes both Haruna and Atsuko...

But she seems to like Haruna more...

With Atsuko just as a cute girl... that is her huge fan...

But then... she was just having fun....

Eh... Mariko gave Takamina's real card... to Atsuko

What would Mariko do if Atsuko really email or calling the real Takamina for real... ?

Can't wait to see how the story going to develop

Thank you for the update

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 03] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #18 on: May 09, 2013, 04:56:21 AM »
Thanks for the update....so now and both Mariko and Sayaka have a feeling
towards Haruna...love rival?...but Mariko more in playing with Aachan...the feeling not the same as Sayaka... :D

LOL the "you smell nice" part

and nice moves from Mariko get Acchan's contact details and picture so easily...
and shes really having fun both of them sandwiched her...

Mariko's disguise...does she wearing a hat, or glasses?

can't wait for the next update....

and you're welcome Pinky-san...:D
« Last Edit: May 09, 2013, 06:08:39 AM by yanouchi »

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Re: Sneaky Whispers [CHP 03] {MariHaru, AtsuMina, SayaMilky}
« Reply #19 on: May 09, 2013, 08:21:33 AM »
Mariko and her sneaky tricks 
Also the smelling nice part :lol:
Does Mariko like both Haruna and Atsuko??
And its seems like Sayaka like Haruna too... hmmm
Atsuko has Takamina's card now... wonder what will happen between the two
Thank you for the update!!

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