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Well..this is my first fanfic..I hope you can enjoy it..and i really hope that my english is good..and..there is a 'part' that is not a little logic but i hope you can accept that 'part'..enjoy :yep:
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The First And The Last  ~Chapter 1~

“Hey!! You’re the on who start it!!”– Scold the short boy with a blond hair.

“You’re the one who spill the coffee on our project paper!!” – Continue the blond haired boy.

“Huh!? You’re the one who push me and suddenly my coffee spill on the project!” – Acchan , the girl with a black short hair, continue to offend herself.

“Don’t just talk nonsense, there is no way I would do that to my own hard work!!” – say Kai, the blond haired boy as he glare to Acchan.

"Eh? Did I hear it on mistake? Who’s hard work!!??" – Acchan said as she let out her angry asking tone.

They glare each other eyes and start to tease one and another in their burning of angry heart.

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(Acchan POV)*
Acchan’s Room…

“What the hell was that!? He’s the one who pushed me, then I accidently spilled the coffee! And he still blaming me!? Unbelievable…Even though he’s my boyfriend!!” – I said to myself as I remembering the accident.

After several hour, my angry heart is taken over by my guilty and worried feelings. “Sigh.. I think I should apologize to Kai-kun..” – I again said to my heart while regretting what happened before.

As I looked at the clock at my bedroom’s wall, it is already 10 o’clock. “Ughh…It’s this late already!?” – I sigh again and continue “No choice.. I’m going to apologize to Kai-kun tomorrow” – I began to sleep even though I can’t sleep because I can only think about Kai my lover.

I sleep tiredly without my light being turned off…
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(Kai POV)
Kai’s room…

As I remembering what happen today, I started to feel guilty at my own actions, even if I pushed her accidently because I tripped my left leg, I can only imagine Acchan’s face when we were fighting.

“Huhh…I think I should apologize to her, I don’t want to break my special relationship with Acchan…Tomorrow, yeah, I’ll apologize to her tomorrow. –I said to myself while I lie down on my bed and remembering what we did today.

I sleep as there is no tomorrow because what can I only do is just thinking about my dear Acchan…
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(Acchan POV)
Somewhere on the street…

--As today is a holiday for all the youngster, all the student can freely do their own activities but Acchan seems to be doing something, that is obvious that she is in her way to Kai’s house to apolagize.--

“Hmm…I wonder if Kai-kun will forgive me. Well I hope he can”—I said while predicting it, “but I bet he will forgive me.”- I continue.

“Wow! To think of it…This is our first time fighting…And this is the first time I’ll apologize to Kai-kun…”—I just realized that this is my first time fighting with Kai-kun.

“Ughhh…There is so many couple here! Hm…I want to be lovey-dovey again with my short Kai-kun!!—As I wished for Kai to be by my side again.

Kai-kun is cool, handsome, smart, cute, and everything. I don’t want to lose him!! I love him so much!!— while praising my Kai sweetly in my heart.

Then.....

“Ehhhhh...”—I open my eye as wide as I can

“Watch out!!!!!!”

My heart that is beating normally suddenly stop for a second after I hear a honking from a certain car that is in front of me.

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There it is,chapter 1..well i'm really worried what is your point of view in this fanfic of mine..i really hope you guys like it..thank you for reading this fanfic..excuse my english if there is mistake.oh yeah...and how's that 'part' i was talking about..hope you accept it... :D

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2013, 05:27:37 AM »
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“Watch out!!!!!!”—


Who saying that line !!?? Kai or Acchan ??!!

Omg ! I want to know the next "part" of it

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan) ~BUSY~
« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2013, 05:37:04 AM »
nee~ mina-san...i should be new here and so..umm..anyway..This fanfic of mine will only be update twice a week because of my freakin' busy schedule.. well i'm still 13 and not mature yet..school is bothersome as always..anyway..thank you for reading this sad facfic..as most of you would know what will happen to Acchan..urgghhh...i don't even know where the hell i get this idea from..~!! I'm ready for the comment you all made...if i need to improve, then i will try to improve..if you guys say it's good..i'll try to make it even more interesting!!~ Jya..i think chap. 2 will be update on tomorrow(29/4/13) and the 3rd chap will be update on (30/413) [[For the staring line i'll make it 3 in this week]]...jya...hope you enjoy it~yoroshiku~ :nervous :nervous
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2013, 05:39:39 AM »
@sydney W-san...the one who saying the "watch ou!!!!" line is the one who drive the car..nothing special..gomen..thanks for reading my fanfic~
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2013, 05:43:18 AM »
Tnx for this fanfic

it's really interesting
Acchan getting into an accident
will she loss her memories ??? or something else...

Pls.continue ^^

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan) Chap 2 ~
« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2013, 05:49:45 AM »
Hohoh~i really can't restrain myself from posting another chapter of this.. well here we go!!! 2nd chapter will be release now!!!~
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 2~

(Kai POV)
Somewhere on a certain street…

“Uwah…There is still time! Well anyway I’m still going to apologize to my Atsuko.”—I said while some more idea keep popping in my head.

“Ahh…I’ll ask her to go date with me after I apologize to her! Yes…yes…That would make her at least happy.—I’m very excited with my idea to make my dear Acchan happy again.

“Itaiii!!”—‘What the hell’ is what I think that time when I’m being pushed by someone while I am thinking about Acchan’s beautiful face.

As I stand on my feet, I can see people gathering in the middle of the road. When my excited feeling has been replace by curiosity, I go and check what is happening there.

Just as I pushed a person by a person I can already see blood. Again, I push them one by one and I can clearly see a car and a girl covered in red blood.

As I pushed them again, I can clearly see a face I’m familiar with. A lying body which I adore is now covered in red blood, a face which I always praise is now covered in blood, not a single part of her is not covered in her reddish red blood.

I, Takahashi Kai, is feeling shock, guilty, sad, confuse and many more of my negative feelings when I see her, Maeda Atsuko, lying there like a corpse, she’s lying there while I can only stay frown, pale and speechless.

My body started to move on it own, my tears started to fall as I began to walk closer to my Atsuko. I grab her red cold body with all of my heart.

“ATSUKOOOOOOOOO!!!!!” –I scream until I can’t even scream anymore, I can only cry while hugging her body until my own shirt is covered in her blood. My tear is falling without resting.

Word is totally useless to describe my feelings, a feeling that I never felt before, a feeling without any name nor can be described, a feeling that could make me die, a feeling that can make my life and myself useless.

I fainted beside her because of my mixed feelings, I can only lie beside her shoulder, slowly closing my eyes as I moved my trembled hand on her cold cheek.

The feeling I felt for the first time would maybe last longer…

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(Acchan POV)

On the middle of the road, rather than beating fast, my heart stopped for a while. A white car suddenly honking on me. My eye is glued to the white car, then, closer and closer, I could feel my waist is being hit by the car.

“I’m regretting for spacing out, I also regret the fact that I haven’t apologize to Kai…But it’s a good thing that, my last moment is full of Kai’s happy face…” –I think after I feel a pain on my waist.

BAMMMM!!

As I opened my teary eyes. “Ah…The sky…red…Why is the sky become red?” – As I confused with the color of the sky. Then I remembered that I had an accident – As I move my head a little, I can clearly see the white car is now have been decorate by my blood even though my eyes is blurry.

Then, my eyes started to close on its own. I can feel the pain beginning to disappear. “Ah, sou ka?? I’m going to leave this world and Kai-kun” –I think as I am prepare to leave.

Suddenly I heard a familiar voice screaming…

“ATSUKOOOOOOO!!!” – A voice that I really want to hear for the last time calling my first name, no doubt that would be only my Kai-kun.

“But to bad… I can hear his sweet voice but I can’t see his face” –That what I thought while crying silently.

The warmth of his body can be felt by me, hugging me tightly. Then, I can feel my cheek is watered by Kai-kun’s tear. I am so happy that Kai-kun tear is flowing because of me, I’m truly happy.

“Wait…What will happen to Kai-kun after this??” –As I realized I have regret for Kai-kun.

Time has pass, my eyes start to blur even more, I can only see a shadow beside me, a sobbing sound beside my ear. I can’t help but lying on the road, waiting for my soul to be taken away.

“I can’t even apologize to Kai-kun…What a day…” –I think as I’m beginning to loss conscious.

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hohohoh...doki doki...here is it...but the chap 3 will still be on the 30/4/13...damn can't even restrain from my own desire..sry if there is mistake...ENJOY IT!!~THANKS
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2013, 06:04:11 AM »
Is alright, author-san. At very least, you granted my wish to update the next fics. So, thank you very much ! I'm looking forward to chapter 3 on 30/4/13. ^_^

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2013, 06:15:24 AM »
wahahaha...with pleasure @sydney-san...i also looking foward to make the 3rd chapter of it....i hope you enjoy this chapter..thanks for reading it.. :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :glasses: hohohoh~ next chapter~i guess what should i make...~

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2013, 07:01:01 AM »
woaah, nice fic  :thumbup
pls update ASAP, i love this fic  :twothumbs

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2013, 07:40:20 AM »
Ah...Atsuko and Kai wanted to apologize to each other...

Eh... Atsuko got hit by a car... there is a possibility of her dying...

Ah... No... don't kill Atsuko...

Poor Atsuko and Kai...

What's going to happen to Atsuko and Kai

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates and the beginning of a nice fic...

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)
« Reply #10 on: April 28, 2013, 08:22:47 AM »
hehe...cisda83-san...kill Atsuko...the possibility is 50%...just stay tune to find out what will happen..muahahahahah,, nobody know what is in my mind now...anyway you guys better pray for her to stay alive!!Muahahahah...LOL.. :kekeke:

~Anyway..thanks for reading my fic cisda83-san..arigatou.. :kneelbow: :kneelbow: and i'm still thinking about the next chapter now..huaaahhhh  :smoke:
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« Reply #11 on: April 28, 2013, 09:20:12 AM »
As you all notice...i should update the 3rd chapter on 30/4/13..well..i make up my mind, after i finished a chapter i'll post it right away...and here we go..i just finish the 3rd chapter..so...i'm going to post it right away!! :on cigar:
muahahahah..yup this time i did really make up my mind!!A chapter  that has been finished by me will be post right away!!SORRY FOR THE SUDDEN.~ :on drink: ...and enjoy it  :on asmo: ...wahahaha
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan) Chap 3
« Reply #12 on: April 28, 2013, 09:33:28 AM »
Here it is...chap' 3..hohoh, now a special guest is coming..make sure you guys watch it..huahaha~
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 3~

(Kai’s POV)
In ward no.402…

As I opened my eyes, I can see light shining through my eyes. I think “Eh…What the heck!?” – I am confused with the light. Then I remember those unforgettable moment.

I get up from the bed and then I realize that I’m in the ward. I also remembered that I fainted beside Atsuko. “Atsuko…Atsuko…where is Atsuko!?” –I can only think that in my panic state.

As I run to reach the exit door from the ward, I bumped into someone. I scratch my head that is in pain and confuse of who did I bumped to.

“Oh…Takahashi-san right?” –A man with a white coat asking me a question while giving his hand to help me stand. I replied “Ah…Haik...Takahashi Kai desu.”

“So…you already awake I see, good then” –He said, as I glare him from the top until the end of it. I take his hand and stand back as I thank him for helping me.

“Oh yeah, I’m sorry for the late introduction. I’m Sato Takeru. Nice to meet you.” –He introduce his self while giving a welcome gesture to me. “Ah…yeah, nice to meet you, well, I’m kinda’ in hurry here, so excuse me…” –As I walk again he stopped me and say –

“Maeda Atsuko…Right?” –He then say the name that make me really shock, I stop for a moment. He continue “It’s okay, she is in stable condition…But if you wanted to see her, let me explain her condition first…” –“She is now in room #408 but…” –

Before he can finish his talk, I rush to the corridor and find the room with a number #408 on it. I search and finally find the room, without thinking or knocking, I open the door and –

I can see her lying on the bed, sleeping peacefully, I also can see her forehead is being wrapped by the bandage. I still can see her blood on the bandage. I approach her, I take her hand slowly and kiss her soft skin for a while.

I really wished I can kiss her in the lips again but then, I can feel her hand is moving a little. I hold her hand tightly, hoping for her to wake up. Her lips begin to move as she want to say something.

“Who…who are you?” –She throw a question that make my heart stop for a second. “Oi...Atsuko…It’s me, Kai!” –I replied to her question, I wait for her to speak again.

“Kai…who? Please…my hand…you shouldn’t…” –She said in a low tone. I release her hand because I thought her hand must be in pain when I hold her hand tightly. “Gomen…Atsuko is it hurt?” –I ask her a question to conform my action is right or wrong.

“N…no…You shouldn’t take my hand suddenly, I…I don’t know you…you’re s…stranger.” –She said with a low tone again. But this time, that low tone of her really shake my heart into pieces. The word ‘stranger’ give me a big shock.

“Atsuko…Don’t you have any better joke? You know I’m surprise by it right?” –I ask her a question again to escape from the reality.

What can I see is her confused expression on her face. That make me doom forever, the feeling that I myself can’t describe is coming again to attack my heart. I can only cry as I realize that the person named ‘Kai’ is not in Atsuko’s vocabulary anymore.

“Sigh…I already told you…you shouldn’t go see her” –That Takeru guy pat my shoulder and ask Atsuko to rest again. That Takeru guy then bring me to his office and explained Atsuko’s conditions.

“A…Amnesia!?that means…Memory loss!!??” –I said in a shock state as doctor Takeru explained the main cause that she doesn’t know or recognize me back then. My tear start to fall again, then he ask a question “Are you Maeda-san boyfriend?”. That question make me blush a little but I just answer “Yes”.

“I see…Okay then let me explain more further what type of amnesia that Maeda-san have...” –He continue “Amnesia, this type of amnesia is cause by shock, I mean extremely shock.” –As he show me a large picture of Atsuko’s head skulls.

“Maeda-san did get injured on the head but, luckily the damage that is receive by her brain is only a little, but the main cause is that she maybe is in shock when the car hit her.” –He keep talking and I can only nod to what he says.

“She might can only remember her name, family and her other private things. But, Takahashi-san…She might not remember you, maybe…She is thinking about you when she knows that she’ll be hit by the car. So…um…that’s just a theory Takahashi-san, plus one of the people that witnessed the accident say –“That poor girl…before she been hit she call a name called Kai” –The doctor say with a sigh. “That should explain it right?” –He said.

“Anyway…even if you don’t accept it, at least give Maeda-san a little time to rest…” –That doctor Takeru pat my shoulder again and leave his office. I cry and cry while thinking what will happen to me without Atsuko in my life…” –I think as I cry, wanting Atsuko to remember me.

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~oh my god!! i just realize that i made a long fanfic...and yeah...chapter 3's only involve Kai's point of view(POV)...gomen and one more time..thank you for reading this fanfic of mine...oh yeah..OMG that explaining part from doctor Takeru is really confusing me and some of you might think "Wat' ta heck is he trying to explain!!??" like that..well...i'm still a kid..just please understand it hahahah,,gomen ne~Talk about Takeru.. :on asmo: ...a tornado will come!!!!
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« Reply #13 on: April 28, 2013, 09:58:44 AM »
Tornado, u mean it !!! That Takeru and Atsuko might be together ??!! Since Atsuko lost her memory. Love triangle !!??

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« Reply #14 on: April 28, 2013, 10:13:29 AM »
Sydney W-san...buwahahaha...it's seems look like it..but we don't know yet..it should bring more than tornado i think...but i'll promise not to disappoint you and the reader too..it'll be an interesting story from now on!!!! :cool1:
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan) Chap 3.5(bonus chapter)
« Reply #15 on: April 28, 2013, 10:55:58 AM »
Here it is...The bonus chapter...well you know...i'm just boring in here so that's bring me this idea...yup..a bonus chapter..anyway enjoy~
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The First And The Last ~Chapter 3.5~[bonus chapter]

(Kai's POV)

“Oh yeah, I’m sorry for the late introduction. I’m Sato Takeru. Nice to meet you.” –He introduce his self while giving a welcome gesture to me. “Ah…yeah, nice to meet you, well, I’m kinda’ in hurry here, so excuse me…” –As I walk again he stopped me and say –

“Maeda Atsuko…Right?” –He then say the name that make me really shock, I stop for a moment. He continue “It’s okay, she is in stable condition…But if you wanted to see her, let me explain her condition first…” –“She is now in room #408 but…” –

Before he can finish his talk, I rush to the corridor, and then I got a chill feeling on my neck. I stopped for a bit, it’s getting cold and cold.

“arkhhh…arkhhh…arkhhhh” –A scary-like sound scared me. I then slowly turn my head to see what is at my back. Then when I look at the back, there is nothing. I turn back to my original position, I walk slowly as the sound following me. All the surrounding is black, no one is in the corridor.

I can’t stand it anymore, I then ask “Who is that!” –I ask with a harsh tone. A voice then replies “I want you…I need you…I love you…” –A very familiar voice reply to me. “No doubt that sweet-scary-voice-like must be…Atsuko?” –I am now confuse.
“Kai-kun…help me…help me” –Again the voice that is scaring me asking or help? I gather all my courage and speak up “Oii…Atsuko…is…is that you!?” –Even though I already gather all of my courage, I’m still hesitated to speak.

“Kai-kun…Would you hate me from now on? I’m lonely in here…I’m trapped because of you…YOU SHOULD COME HERE WITH ME!!!!” –She scream. I can feel her overwhelming power is shaking the whole building.

“Atsuko!? Those that mean she is dead!!??” –I think as I’m panicking the fact that the whole hospital building is being shaken by her. “Atsukoooo!! Stop it right now!!” –I’m trying to convince her by talking but then the replies that I got is “I’ll hunt you until you’ll be with me in the other world forever!” –The replies I got from her is even more scarier.

“I’m lonely here without you!!” –She then continue while I hear a sobbing sound from her. Even if I fell scared, but I don’t want my Atsuko to say such things. As my mind is in confuse, a word that I always wanted to say to her come out from my mouth…
“Atsuko!! Don’t say that!! I would always love you!!I would always be on your side!! Please…Atsuko!! I would always love you! More than the moon and the sun!! You’re precious to me!! I would die for you if you ask me to!!  Atsuko!! Kill me and bring me with you!! –I said and scream my feelings to her with a teary eyes.

After I said those word, there is no replies from her, only her sobbing sound can be heard. I chase the sobbing sound until a room with a number 408 on it. Without thinking I…

BAMMMMMMM!!

“Itaiiiiiiii!!! –I scream because of the pain that I feel on my forehead. When I opened my eyes, I actually bumped the door with number 408 on it. I blush because the whole nightmare is only a dream of me…rather than a dream, I am spacing out because only thinking about my Atsuko the whole time.

“hahahaah” –I heard a giggle from my back, that’s make my face like a bright tomatoes. “Damn…damn…damn” –I think again as I blush like crazy.

“Guess I didn’t really have to knock the door after all…hehe~” –I think as patting my forehead that is currently in pain.

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)[Love and Betrayal]
« Reply #16 on: April 28, 2013, 02:40:29 PM »
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~mannnn...i just saw AKB48 live concert in youtube..ARGHHHH!! I only manage to hear their 'sayonara Crawl' perfomance...geezz..i..right now i'm feeling pathetic :on cloudeye:..sigh...well..hope you guys enjoy the previous chapter of my fanfic..i think i wanna kill myself :mon headbang: :on speedy: :on blackhole: but wait..i'll kill myself after i finished this whole chapter...chapter 4 will be awaiting you guys next week!!~ :thumbsup
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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)[Love and Betrayal]
« Reply #17 on: April 28, 2013, 03:40:30 PM »
Ahh... Atsuko lost her memory :(

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)[Love and Betrayal]
« Reply #18 on: April 28, 2013, 11:47:08 PM »
Great fic please update soon :)

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Re: The First And The Last (KaixAcchan)[Love and Betrayal]
« Reply #19 on: April 28, 2013, 11:47:51 PM »
AH... Poor Kai for being forgotten....

How about their relationship....?

Eh... Sato is Atsuko's doctor...

I hope Sato is not going to try to be in the middle of their relationship.

Oh my... Kai is having a day-mare... (a nightmare in a day light)

What a scary thought there.... Atsuko being a ghost that haunted Kai forever...

But Kai lived up to my expectation... Kai even demanded to be killed so that he could be with Atsuko in death if can not be in life.

Great updates... Thank you

Can't wait to see your next chapters

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