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I have had an Idea of an fic

Prologue


I have had an mission that was to bring the cristall to the majesty of the Akiba Kingdom.

The enemy called the Daharans were after me I ran away but I dont know how much I can take it .

I cant anymore

But then I saw a creature I think it is a wolf


Or better a White Wolf

How beautiful Then I collapsed





What do you think 

If someone could help me I have an Idea about this fic but I cant write goos so If someone would help me to write this fic it would be very helpful

So please comment
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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( guess the pairings )
« Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 05:58:50 PM »
Maybe it AtsuMina?  :? :? :?
Anyway, I'm interested!  :yep: :yep: :yep:
 
I am happy to help you write this fanfic, if you want.  :P

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( guess the pairings )
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2013, 09:42:58 PM »
I have a feeling telling me it is Wmatsui :D

It looks cool :D

Update soon~

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( guess the pairings )
« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2013, 11:58:34 PM »
Interesting prologue you have there, Elo-san

I think I agree with K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS

The pairing might be WMatsui...

Anyhow... can't wait to see how to story going to start...

Thank you for the lovely prologue

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( guess the pairings )
« Reply #4 on: May 02, 2013, 05:04:55 PM »
Lost heaven-san helped me a lot with this chapter so enjoy  :D :D




Chapter 1

Escape... Escape... Escape...
She could not understand how she could be so careless. How could she hope that the hooded cloak hides her from the Daharans's servants.
Daharans. Daharans. Daharans.
She hates that name. And this hatred gave her strength to run further. She should make it.
Mission. Mission. Mission.
She has a purpose. For this purpose she was born. If she gives up - her life would be meaningless.
Escape. Escape. Escape.
***
She was awakened by the feeling of something wet on her face. And it wet was moving!
She sat down sharply, apparently scaring someone. Because the creature immediately disappeared into the shadows.
She looked around. The cave in which she was located, weakly illuminated by the glow of the setting sun.
She got up and went to the place where the creature hid in the darkness.
Snow-white wool, dark brown eyes, sharp fangs protruding from under slightly raised lip. Wolf. The one she saw before falling exhausted.
- Who are you? - wolf snorted and stood up and walked out of the cave. She followed him.
Before the cave was a place of sand. Wolf came back and with the release claw, began to write.
She stood up next to him and saw that the wolf draws runes, familiar to her from childhood - in the place where she grew up, wrote that way.
- Mi ... na ... mi ... Minami? Is that your name?
Wolf looked at her and nodded slightly in agreement.
- My name is Atsuko, - she sat down next to a she-wolf and stroked her wool. - Let's be friends?
***
- She's supposed to return! - Queen of the Akiba Kingdom  restlessly paced the throne room. - According to my calculations, it should have been back in the morning!
- Mari-chan, sit down, calm down, - the second queen is sitting quietly on the throne. - I think she has a reason why she can linger on the way.
- How can you be so calm? You indifferent to the her fate?
- No, - the second queen went to the first and took her hand. - I just believe her. And you? Do you trust to your daughter?
- Mii-chan ... - the first queen wanted to say something, but they were interrupted by the sound of flung-open door of the throne room.
- Mariko-sama! Minami-sama! - two General of the Kingdom's  Army impetuous step into the hall. They came to the queens and worship them.
- Sayaka, Sae? What happened? - On the face of the second queen immediately display the anxiety. Because if Sayaka and Sae burst in without knocking, then something extraordinary happened.
- We no longer feel the Atsuko's aura. As if she has disappeared! - In the Sayaka's eyes were tears. She was the personal bodyguard of Atsuko.
- It can not be ... - it seemed like Mariko going to faint. - When you lose the power of her aura?
- Recently, - Sae clenched her fists. - At that time she was in the Forest of Whisper.
- Mariko-sama, Minami-sama, tell us find her.
- Yes. Find her.
After the generals are gone, Mariko whispered softly:
- Let her be alive ...



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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 1
« Reply #5 on: May 02, 2013, 08:53:34 PM »
Yay!! Atsumina!!!  :on woohoo:

so Minami is a she-wolf huh?.. Cool!!
and Atsuko is the Daughter of Marimii...

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I wonder what happens next so..
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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 1
« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 10:36:28 PM »
really interesting :)can't wait to find out more :D

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 1
« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2013, 02:07:30 AM »
Interesting... so it's Atsumina... Yeah....

Ah... Atsuko is a princess, a daughter of Mariko and Miichan...

Minami is a wolf... or a werewolf...

What's going to happen to Atsuko...?

Would she be able to return to her kingdom?

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 1
« Reply #8 on: May 03, 2013, 09:40:28 AM »
Yeah I read it but never had the chance to reply until now

Interesting so far and marimii right off the back
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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 1
« Reply #9 on: May 04, 2013, 10:16:37 AM »
The next chapter part 1

Chapter 2.
Part 1.

All she was feeling at that moment - the pain. The pain seemed to fill her all without leaving any living area. The pain spread throughout the body with fire and throughout the soul with ice. She wanted to scream, but instead of shouting from the throat ripped out some strange sounds.
She fell to the floor and seemed to writhe in agony. Slowly her mind fades, passed, giving way to the animal instincts.
Gradually, the torture is over, leaving only apathy and unwillingness to do anything. The pain went away, and to replace came some new sensations. She realized that she could now be hearing a lot more and feel a lot more scents.
She stood up, but the whole world, swaying sharply, becoming too low.
She did not understand what was going on until she saw her reflection in the mirror ...
She was frightened, wheeze escaped from her throat .
At her from the mirror staring White She-Wolf.
***
- Minami! Minami! Are you okay? - A voice was heard as if through a very dense pillow.
Minami felt a hand, stroking her wool and immediately snapped open her eyes, dropping off the remnants of sleep.
She remembered the yesterday she saved girl who running away from someone. As it is there? A, Atsuko.
This name seemed vaguely familiar to Minami, but remember where she had heard the she-wolf could not.
- Minami, you have a bad dream? - Atsuko was sitting on her knees beside her, her eyes were anxiety.
She-wolf stood up abruptly, alienating from the girl's hand and ran out of the cave.
Breaking Dawn. Minami loved this time. Dew still wet with leaves, nature like waking up from a long sleep. Minami loved climbing on the rocks and greet the dawn there, watching leisurely awakening of Forest of Whispers.
She and Atsuko for one more night stay in a cave to give the girl to recover.
Minami jumped on the plateau that forms the cave, and sat almost on the edge, looking at the rising sun. She felt that Atsuko with the help of protrusions in the stone also climbed to the plateau and sat next to her.
- Do you love to watch the sunrise? - Atsuko, seeing that the she-wolf is listening, she continued. - Me too. When I was little, I always thought that the sun - it's a ball. He just jumps very slowly, so the day and night lasts a long time and gradually replace each other.
Minami yawned, by clicking his teeth.
- I have to deliver a very important thing in my hometown, - Atsuko sighed. - I wasn't there for six months ... I wonder, my parents at least sometimes worry about me?
And she paused, continuing to watch the sunrise.
Mines closed her eyes, but then her ears caught something strange.
Minami sharply stood up and growled. Atsuko heard it, too got up and went to the she-wolf.
- Minami, what happened?
Minami, quickly finding the next sand, wrote:
"In the forest, there is some stranger".



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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 1
« Reply #10 on: May 04, 2013, 10:34:27 AM »
She meets Acchan

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 1
« Reply #11 on: May 04, 2013, 10:42:16 AM »
So Minami turned into a Wolf...
hmmm....and can speak...thru writing
...

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 1
« Reply #12 on: May 04, 2013, 10:58:05 AM »
Taka as a wolf?  :O Interesting!
Next chap will be interesting because they will meet :3
Marimii caught my attention XD

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 1
« Reply #13 on: May 04, 2013, 05:53:21 PM »
Ah... so Minami is like a werewolf....

But seem Minami having a nightmare about the 1st time Minami turned into a wolf...

Ah... Minami and Atsuko are so close now...

Eh... strangers... who are they?

Atsuko's parents soldiers... or Daharans's servants?

Can't wait to see what happen next

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 1
« Reply #14 on: May 06, 2013, 02:16:14 PM »
So, this is part 2 of second chapter. I'm sorry, it's very short 

Chapter 2 part 2

- You have not caught her yet!? - Today the Lord of Darkness was clearly not in the spirit, so his subordinates tried not to come close to the throne on which he sat.
- N ... n ... no, Your Majesty, - Lieutenant, who led the operation to capture the ambassador of the Akiba Kingdom, visibly shaking. - We chased her, but ... she seemed to disappear! We searched the woods, trying to find her with spells, but ... All to no avail ...
Lord of Darkness clenched his right hand into a fist and suddenly shot with flame into the nearest wall and burning a couple of ghosts.
- Worthless creature! - now he was angry. - She has something that will allow me to manage the living world and the world of the dead!
He got up from his throne and walked over to the lieutenant.
- The girl should be here tonight, understand?
The lieutenant shook even more.
- Y ... y ... Yes, sir ...
- UNDERSTAND?!!!
- Yes, sir!
***
- Damn! - She did not immediately notice that she lying on the ground.
- Sayaka, are you okay? - Sae sat down next to her companion, barely suppressing a laugh.
- Damn snags! I always stumble on them! - Sayaka sat up and looked at his partner. - What are you laughing?
Sae broke down and laughed.
- You ... you should have seen your face, - she said with a laugh. - Sayaka kawaii ~
- Shut up! - Sayaka stood. - Have you forgotten why we came here?
Sae instantly calmed down and became serious.
- You do not feel anything? - She got up and looked off into the distance.
- No way ... - Sayaka closed her eyes, trying to catch the aura of ambassador. But instead, she felt an aura of darkness. - Oh, no! Acchan!




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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 2
« Reply #15 on: May 06, 2013, 04:22:44 PM »
Ah.. who is this lord of the darkness....?

Why did he want to catch Atsuko?

Ah... Sayaka feel the dark aura...

What's going to happen with Sayaka and Sae search for the princess?

What's going to happen to Atsuko and Minami?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 2
« Reply #16 on: May 06, 2013, 05:03:27 PM »
Well something has to be up if Sae and Sayaka are laughing about it.  Must be a mission that tests them a little too much XD
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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 2 part 2
« Reply #17 on: May 08, 2013, 08:11:13 PM »
Chapter 3



The fireball flew almost next to the Atsuko's head, slightly singeing the ends of her hair.
They were attacked almost immediately after Minami found strangers in the woods. There were about a dozen, two of them were magicians. These were Daharans's pawns - on their clothes, pretty ugly, it was stitched image of the sign of his power.
Without warning, they pulled their swords out of the sheath  and rushed to attack on ambassadress.
Atsuko materialized her sword and prepared to attack. The sword was similar to his owner - weightless and elegant, it can easily cut solid objects and seemed to sing his song, when ambassadress delivered attacks.
Block, thrust - and the enemy lies on the ground, unable to rise. Whistling of metal, block, the cutting stroke - the second opponent does not have time to parry the blow and falls dead. The rotation, block, hilt of the sword in the solar plexus - the third opponent went harmlessly falls on the edge of the plateau and stays there lie.
Atsuko corner of her eye saw that Minami fights with two magicians - she trying to hurt them with claws and fangs, simultaneously dodging magic attacks. Her white wool had already changed into crimson. Minami was wounded but fought without noticing it.
Atsuko felt on her own face blood flows - both her and a stranger. She felt that breathing becomes heavier and her eyes become dark.
Yes, Atsuko was taught to fight. Yes, she could in an emergency to protect her own life. But she wasn't a real Master. In the Kingdom they have long does not remain a true Master.
Atsuko did not notice that sword was knocked out of her hands, and she was sitting on the ground.
One of the minions of Lord of Darkness wanted to use her confusion and has raised his hand with a sword for the final blow, but suddenly a powerful stream of water tossed it to a nearby rock.
Minami, who killed the first magician, turned. In her eyes, Atsuko saw fright, almost immediately reverses some humility. She growled something and suddenly, her paws gave way and she-wolf fell with closed eyes.
- Minami! MINAMI!!! - Atsuko wanted to get up and run to a wounded she-wolf, but then someone picked her up and gently whispered:
- Acchan, it's us. Calm down, there is no one but us.
This voice acted by Atsuko as a sleep aid. She slowly closed her eyes and fell asleep, still murmuring incoherently:
- Minami ... Mi ... na ... mi ...
***
Little Atsuko, ran away from her bodyguards, now went to her mother to the throne room to ask her to play with her. Atsuko really missed her mother - after that man betrayed a Kingdom and escaped, mom was very busy and constantly sitting in her office. Atsuko hardly ever saw her mother.
But going to the door of the throne room, she heard that her mother and the girl that her mother calls as her friend talking about something strange.
- Mari-chan, you're really gonna do this?
- Mii-chan, you know. This is the only way outб - was heard that she was very worried.
- But who can bring it? After all need someone you can trust.
- I do not know. Among our soldiers there are none. Among the magicians, too. I've already checked all ...
- But the Crystall will grow only a few years. Maybe we can teach children to choose one of them?
"Crystall?" - Acchan have never heard about this.
- Mii-chan, nobody agree to send their child to that! No one!
At this moment something changed in Atsuko . She opened the door to the throne room and said emphatically:
- I'll go for the crystal.
- Acchan?
On the face of her little daughter Mariko saw the determination and commitment to follow through. Maybe it influenced her choice.
- Alright.





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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 3
« Reply #18 on: May 08, 2013, 11:01:33 PM »
Acchan will risk her life for the crystal and action :twothumbs
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Re: The legend Of the Seeker ( Atsumina , others ) Chapter 3
« Reply #19 on: May 09, 2013, 12:31:46 AM »
thanks for the update!! I love this fic :D Really interesting chapter & great action. Hopefully Minami and Atsuko will be okay.

Thanks again! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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