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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 7 part 2 ( 26-07-13)
« Reply #80 on: July 29, 2013, 02:01:20 PM »
Hey!!!  :)

I just read u'r Fic and Man!!!! This is Awesome!!!  :twothumbs

Kojiharu!!! Don't Graduate yet!!!... Yuko is just confused.....   :cry:

Kai is Minami's Brother?!  :w00t:

and what plan?.... bad or good?  :?

Minami will finaly see kai again!!!... I wanna know what happens next!!!  :panic:

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 8 (01/08/13)
« Reply #81 on: August 01, 2013, 01:27:29 AM »
Hello guys  :mon hi:
I'm really happy for your comments  :shy2: :on GJ: Thank you  :kneelbow:
So here is Chapter 8  :) I hope you like it  :P

Chapter 8

That time has passed in a flash.  I was ready to go to the karaoke, I was wearing only a trousers and a sweater saying " Dream without fears and love without limits" meanwhile Haruna and Acchan did not leave the bathroom.
" Aaaaaaarg how long are you going to be there?"  Asked .
" We're almost ready! “Haruna said.
This was the fourth time she said that.
" You women are so slow!“ I crossed my arms as I tapped my foot on the floor for several times.
" Enough I'm not going to wait for you anymore! I will without you ! "  I said .
I turned back toward the door , when I heard the sound of the bathroom door open .
" Finall - " when I saw Acchan , I could not finish my sentence.  She had worn a black miniskirt and a white top that said " Bad girl" .
" Close your mouth" murmured Haruna as she passed me.  Immediately closed my damn mouth.
" Nee Minami ... " Acchan said approaching me.
" W-w-w-what?" I stammered .
She approached her mouth to my ear and said :
" Do not think I will forget what happened in the bathroom ," she paused for a moment and then ,with a super seductive voice said " I’m gonna get my revenge"
"Help!! " I muttered.
She gave me a slight bite on the ear , took my hand and led me out of the room.
We went down the elevator, still holding hands, until the entry where they were waiting for us.
" Ah they’re here" said Jurina.
" Sorry for the delay, “said Acchan.
" Nee ... Takamina “said Sae "Are you feeling well?”
Suddenly, all eyes were directed to me.
" You're very flushed “said Rena
Acchan, who was in front of me, went behind me and hugged me.
“She’s great!” She said making me blush even more.
“Ahahahahah I think we already realize what Takamina has" said Jurina.
         
“I have nothing!” I complained.
“Are you sure mi- na- mi?” Acchan asked touching her face to mine.
" A- Acchan ... Stop it , do not tease me ," I muttered .
“But you like ..." she murmured.
" Aaaaaaarg , Rena is someone missing?" I asked .
" Look, Midget is changing the subject " joked Jurina .
" Yes , Sayaka , Sae and Yuko , but Yuko will be there later" she replied .
***
I was with Sayaka in the room , she was ready to leave while I was still undecided about which t-shirt choose .  Had two t-shirts in my hand and the two were my favorite .
" Sae we have to go " Said Sayaka .
"I'm undecided , I do not know which sweater to use " .
She appeared behind me and pointed to my blue t-shirt.
" Use this one, I love when you wear this t-shirt " she said .
Really… This side of Sayaka was so lovely and sweet.
I took off my pajamas , and noticed that she looked at me discreetly .  In her face , began to appear a pinkish color , she was blushing for look at me?  No, that’s impossible ... she must be remembering something that happened to her in the past and made her blush .
       
For yes, for no, I decided to ask her:
"Is something wrong?"
She stopped looking at my body and looked me in the eyes.
"Nothing ... I will wait for you outside," she said.
Carefully I watched every step her took until her leave the room, she’s strange and sometimes very annoying, but this Sayaka is very different from the Sayaka I met a few years ago. We were always grumbling to each other, everything was a topic of discussion. But now everything is different ... She began to show me that deep down in her heart, she is a very lovable.
I put on my t-shirt and left the room. We were both silent all the way up to the hotel entrance.
"Ne ... Why did you looked at me like that?" I asked, breaking the silence.
She took a while to respond:
"No particular reason"
I should have known that she was going to answer this, but I kept asking her things, I wanted to know more about that lovely Sayaka:
"Why  do you not like we to be called Twin Towers?"
She took a few time to respond again, should be admired for  what I questioned.
"I do not know, maybe because we were never friends," she said.
"Do you hate me? " I asked.
When she opened her mouth to answer, we heard someone say:
"Look they’re here!"
It's Rena, we're already here? We arrived too quickly, I wanted to know her answer...
"We're all" Jurina said "Shall we go now?"
"Yes!"

***

We got there in an instant, the karaoke was near the hotel. We entered a VIP room, there was a small stage with multiple microphones.
We sat on the huge sofa that was there and Jurina was the first to say she wanted to sing. We laughed a lot with Jurina because she did not know the lyrics despite being her favorite song.
When the song ended, it was the turn of Sayaka and next was Sae.
"Now!" Sae said "It's Takamina turn!"
"Oh? Okay ... "I said
She handed me the microphone and I went to the mini stage. I chose the song and started singing it, they were all applauding me.
And suddenly the door opens and I stop singing, the astonishment was so much that stole my voice.
"Yuko you’re here!" Said Rena "Glad you came! This is the friend  you told me about? "
"Yes" she said.
"Hello my name is Takahashi Kai, but can treat me for Kai. It's a pleasure to meet you, "he introduced himself.
I could not believe it, my ex-boyfriend (yes, he and I were dating before I get to AKB) and best friend ... And he’s with Yuko, how did they meet? Does he still remember me? One year has passed since I saw him. After that ...

Flashback *

"Minami, I have to tell you something" he said.
"What is it Kai?"
He inspired, expired and said:
"I'm going to move to another city because of my father's business. I do not know when I come back "
I felt tightness in the chest when he said that, Kai is my best friend since I can remember me.
"So ... this is goodbye?" Asked with tears in my eyes.
He smiled and said:
"It's not a goodbye my dear, I'll be back" he said "I do not know when but when I return I'll find you and I will not give up until I find you"
I hugged him.
I know I'm going to miss him a lot, he is the person most dear to me, I know I can count on him until the end of my days.
"I have to go, my father is waiting for me to go away," he said giving me a kiss on the forehead "you have my number and my email, I will give you news and you give me news too okey?"
I wiped my tears and said:
"Okay ..."

End of the flashback *

However, he never replied to emails I sent or answered my calls, I was a bit disappointed with him, he said he'd send me news and I never received nothing.
"Hello Minami" he said.
Everyone stared at him.
"Hello Kai" I replied.
" Minami  I..."
"Don’t ... I do not want to hear "I said.
"Wait," he said "I understand you're upset with me but I have to talk to you, is a very important and delicate subject. I will not talk now because I do not want to spoil the party of WMatsui, but I want, no ... I really need to talk to you "he said.
I sighed, I know Kai, and I can see through his eyes that the subject is very serious.
"Okay ... My number is still the same, call me whenever you want"
I get off the stage and I sat on the sofa next to Acchan.
"Are you okay Minami?" Acchan whispered in my ear.
"Yes ... Do not worry, I'll explain everything to you," I replied in the same tone.
"Are you sure you want to tell?" She asked.
I sighed.
"Yes ..."
She hugged me and gave me a light kiss on the forehead.
"I will always be by your side Minami" she murmured.

***

After what happened between Kai and the Takamina, tension hung in the air but disappeared when Rena said she wanted to sing. It was a great night full of fun however, Haruna was upset with something. It must be because of the boy who was with Yuko ... I'll talk to her, even though we are not very close friends I care about her.
After Yuko sing I picked up the microphone.
"Well I wanted to say something," I said.
Everyone fell silent and I started my speech:
 "I'm not very good with words, I wanted to apologize to Rena, I know I made you suffer but it was not my intention. It is the knowledge that I love you and I have no problems in taking it. I wanted to thank you all for coming here to celebrate with us, it made us very happy  "I said.
"Be strong" Yuko said "If you need my help just call me"
"I'll also be always by your side" said Sayaka.
"Me too!" Said Sae.
"Thanks girls" Rena said with a big smile.

***

So, that guy who was with Yuko and Takamina were known ...
How strange, Takamina never had spoken of him, anyway ... Yuko and he spent the whole night together talking, laughing and more other things. I was jealous, I wanted to be there with her, as I said, she's determined to forget me. How do I let such a thing happen? I lost the person I love the most ... Unfortunately we only value things when we lose them. Yuko, what I have to do to get you back? As much I ask, the answers do not appear. I feel lost without you, that nice person who could cheer up my life from one moment to the other, that smile that gave me strength to move on ... Is gone ...
Now, I see you with a man. It hurts... My chest hurts, do you know how much I  suffer by not having you by my side? I want to talk to you, explain to you what really happened but only thinking that you will not you believe me, the words disappear and I feel myself falling into a hole without end. On the day of my graduation will be reborn a new me, I'll leave you in peace, I am sure that Kai will make you happy. Not sure if I'll be able to forget because you are the person I most love in my lifetime. I will love you forever Oshima Yuko ...



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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 8 (01/08/13)
« Reply #82 on: August 01, 2013, 03:03:07 AM »
in the past you said that riku is takamina´s brother and kai her childhood friend.. Im a little con fused -_-

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 8 (01/08/13)
« Reply #83 on: August 01, 2013, 07:15:57 AM »
What Kai and Minami were lovers?

But they were siblings...

So I guess Kai knew about their blood connection after their break up

Oh... Poor Haruna, she already made up her mind to graduate and let Yuko be happy with Kai

What Minami would do to Kai anout his intention towards Yuko?

How about Haruna and Yuko?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 8 (01/08/13)
« Reply #84 on: August 01, 2013, 10:39:48 AM »
Wait, wait, wait...Ex-boyfriend? I thought that he's Takamina's bro...
-And...Eh?! So Takamina didn't know that Kai is her bro?! Uwa!!
-But why you no reply to Takamina this past years?!
-Wait...Something to talk about? Maybe he'll explain it? Or...
-Ugh!! Don't wanna think about it again!! *changing topic*
-Gyaa!!~ A-A-AtsuMina...B-Bad girl!!~ Dahahaha!!~ *thumbs up*
-But~ Haruna? Yuko? How will this end?! Arghh!!~
-Just gonna wait for what'll happen next~~ *grin*

>Plz update the next chapter!!~ Can't wait for it!!~ 

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 8 (01/08/13)
« Reply #85 on: August 01, 2013, 06:25:07 PM »
Seriously guy. :lol:
He was her boyfriend? Uppps :shocked
And Haruna is really going to graduate. NO WAY. PLEASE :cry:
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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 8 (01/08/13)
« Reply #86 on: August 04, 2013, 05:19:14 PM »
Oh nooooooo yuuchan you don't really decided to forget your precious nyannyan, rite?!
Just leave that kai guy please :( kojiyuu in trouble makes me sick, come on it's just misunderstanding T~T

But I love it! Lol I like how you put a twist here :D getting more excited XD
Thankyou, goodluck for next!

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 9 (05/08/13)
« Reply #87 on: August 05, 2013, 03:02:30 AM »
Hi guys  :onioncheer:
I wanted to thank you for your comments, they give me inspiration to write the chapters  :farofflook:
This chapter will erase some doubts, well i hope so xD
I hope u like it  :)


Chapter 9

Appeared an employee who brought us drinks, we all drank a bit but Takamina drank too much and was completely drunk.
"Acchan is better carry Takamina to your room" said Haruna.
We both looked at her, she was singing and dancing with Jurina and Rena.
"You’re right” I said.
I approached her and told her that we'd better get back to the hotel.
"You want to go back now? This is getting fun "she said.
“Let’s go Takamina" I said putting her arm around my neck and my free hand on her waste.
"I don’t want to go Acchan!" She said looking at me seriously.
“You’ve been sick a few days ago and I-" She stopped what I was saying with a kiss on my lips. I heard a small "ah" background coming from them.
Her lips had the taste of alcohol but that don’t stopped me to want to feel those soft lips. Her tongue invaded my mouth and I felt a sense of déjà vu, this kiss is equal to our first kiss, we gave during that game at Yuko’s house.
She pulled her lips from mine and fell on top of me.
"She fell asleep" said Rena.
"She kissed you" murmured the Yuko admired.
I admit that she caught me off guard with this kiss, I didn’t expect her to do that.
"Sayaka can you help me take her back to our room?" I asked.
"Sure" She took the sleeping beauty and we went quickly to the hotel.

***

I left Takamina on her room with Acchan and I got out of it. Across the hall was a person, about the same size has I with short hair. I approached a bit and saw it was Sae.
"You should be in karaoke" I said.
“I can't be here?" She asked as she approached me.
I laughed of her response, maybe a few weeks ago I bored me with her answer.
"There is no problem, I just think you should be having fun with them" I replied still laughing of her response.
She looked at me trying to understand the reason for my laughter.
"I was very bored and decided to go for a walk” she replied.
I approached the elevator to go to the hotel entrance.
"Come on" I said "Let's go for a walk"
She smiled a smile that I had never seen before.
"She’s so cute..." I muttered.
"Oh? Did you say something?"She asked
"Eh? Ah-ah-ah no, I didn’t say anything”
We went down the elevator and again, silence reigned. We walked side by side, I stared at her discreetly. I took her to the huge garden of the hotel.
"Are you like it here in Guam?" She asked.
"Yes, It’s very fun to be here with everybody “I replied "And you?"
"I feel the same, and I'm happy" she said.
"Why?" I asked.
"I discovered that the person I like, also like me"

Flashback *

 Sayaka took Takamina to the hotel with Acchan.
"Rena can you explain me 'that'?" I asked Rena.
We distance ourselves a bit from the others and she explained everything to me:
“Sayaka has talked to me a lot lately, she came to ask me for help because ... She is starting to like you and she did not know how to react"
I stared at her not knowing what to do, the feeling I felt inside me was very confused, in my chest reigned feeling warm and very pleasant. I wanted to be with Sayaka now but lack courage was preventing me from doing such a thing.

End of the Flashback *

Rena encourages me and now here I am, walking through the garden with her.
"Do you like anyone?" She asked.
"Yes, it is a person who I thought was very annoying at first but after I got to know this person better and I ended up discovering that, in reality, she is a very cute, dear, helpful, and this is what I like the most in her" I answered.
She didn’t say anything. I was scared, is it really what Rena said? I began to doubt everything, even my own name. Does it worth to continue this conversation?
"Um ... Okay ... I'm tired, I'm going back to the room
                                                                                                                                 Bye ... "she said

That goodbye broke my heart, she was not tired, it was noticed in her face. She seemed upset about something, is that Rena was right when he said that Sayaka likes me? And now? What do I do? A person who I love is going away, this may be my first and last chance to tell the truth, but ... I'm scared!

                                                          'Saisho ni wo KISU wo shiyou rikutsu yori saki ni
                                                                                                                kanjou butsukero yo Do it! '
                                                           
                                                                      (Let's begin with a kiss, before having a reason
                                                                                                                     Express your emotions! Do it!)

I did not think of anything else, I ran towards her, grabbed at her hand, pulled her making she turns to me and I kissed her. I do not care that she hit me, if she call me all the names in the earth... I just wanted to feel those wonderful lips. Her breathing was beating gently on my face, as I kissed her, I hugged her to be able to feel her body.
I was really enjoying that moment until she separated us.
"Sorry!" I said immediately, "I'm sorry if I kissed you! I do not know what went on in my head!"
"Sae" she said but I did not let her keep talking.
"Sorry if I do not like you!" I said.
"But Sae ..." she said again and did not let go.
"Sorry if I love you!" I Screamed.
This time she was silent, sure she was upset with me, but somehow I was happy because I finally realized what I felt, and I had the courage to tell her the truth.
"I liked it" she said.
I looked into her eyes, is she playing with me? 
"I love you too! But I never had the courage to admit it, instead, I discussed with you to erase these feelings, I am very sluggish to understand it so I asked for help "she said looking at me.
Those eyes leave me completely out of me, I cannot explain it seems they have a glow itself.
She came up to me and kisses me, this time more passionate and sweet.
"Stay with me" she whispered.


***

I looked at the small girl sleeping, she really looked like an angel while she slept. I walked over her bed and took off her clothes.
Exactly at the moment when I took off the sweater she wakes up and stares at me trying to understand what the hell I was doing.
"What are you doing?" She asked.
“Put you a pajama" I replied
"Sure?" She whispered in my ear "Nee Acchan, I told you that you look very sexy dressed like that?"
"What are you doing?”I asked when she started kissing me on the neck at various points, each time her lips touched my skin, the desire to have her was growing.
"Mi ... Minami ..." I groaned.
She took my sweater and bra, and enjoyed kissing and giving small cracks in my breasts.
"Be mine ... Atsuko ..."

***

"Ahahahahah it was fun" I said when we left the Karaoke.
"You're right” he said with a big smile.
We get a few moments to look at each other.
"Kai, when did you met Takamina?” I asked.
 He reflected a bit in my question and answered:
"I knew you'd ask that, it's a long story"
"I have time" I replied.
We sat on a bench that was there in the street and he explained everything to me:
"Yuko, I'll tell you this because I love you and want you to know the truth, but do not tell this to anyone, at least until I tell to Takamina. In fact, I and Takamina are twin brothers, however we were separated at birth. I never knew why because my father never explained that to me. She grew up together with our uncles, who died shortly afterwards, until now she thinks Riku is her older brother. But I was always at her side as her best friend and there was even a time when we started dating, but we broke up when she joined AKB. A few days ago my father asked me to come here to tell everything to Takamina and make her give up of AKB”
I was shocked by what he had just told me, Takamina lived a lie her whole life ... It will be a big shock for her to know the whole truth, will also be hard for Kai to tell her.
"But a year ago I had to change a city, however she is upset with me because I told her I was sending her messages and I never did that”
"Why?" I asked.
"My dad did not let me" he replied.
"Poor Takamina" I said.
“This was not the only reason I come to Guam," he said.
"There's more?" I asked.
"Yes, much more, but this I cannot tell you, however, you will know the truth very soon, I promise you ..."




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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 9 (05/08/13)
« Reply #88 on: August 05, 2013, 06:31:26 AM »
*shocked + nosebleed + excited*
-W-W-What will happen to A-AtsuMina?!
-Uwa!! *praying* Plz let 'that' happen!! Onegai!!~ lol
-Anyway, so Kai was a good kid from the beginning...
-Only their father...mou...That explain it all...
-Eh? What other reason? For him to come in Guam??

>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for it!!~ *thumbs up*

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 9 (05/08/13)
« Reply #89 on: August 05, 2013, 08:56:13 AM »
I think the father wanted Minami to be used as his pawn to help his business.

Since her father never wanted Minami and now he wanted Minami...

There is no good reason for it...

I somehow don't believe Kai to actually have romantic feeling for Yuko

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait

Thank you

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 9 (05/08/13)
« Reply #90 on: August 05, 2013, 12:17:12 PM »
I'm so excited. What is going to happened next?
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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 9 (05/08/13)
« Reply #91 on: August 05, 2013, 01:31:04 PM »
Thankyou for update!
SaeYaka and AtsuMina, way to go! Great! XD

Uhm, somehow I smelled something suspicious about kai -____-
I dunno, maybe bcoz I love KojiYuu so damn much? Or kai really is hiding something bad? Have no idea lol
Anyway I'm stick to my kojiyuu feels :p tehee~

Looking forward to next~

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #92 on: August 08, 2013, 11:50:35 PM »
Hello guys i'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack :onioncheer: xD
So we are near the end, the next chapter will be the last o/
I hope you enjoy de chap  :hee:

Chapter 10

I woke up the next day, my head was throbbing with pain. I put my hand on my head and opened my eyes.
"What ... WHAT THE HELL?" I screamed.
 Acchan and me lying in the same bed completely naked.
"Huuum ... Minami?" She murmured.
Slowly I remember what happened last night, the kisses, touches ... Aaaaaaarg Takahashi Minami! What the hell did you do? She must be mad at me, our friendship went downhill! And now what I do? She will not forgive me with a simple apology...
But ... I liked it when I gave my body to Acchan, a wonderful feeling went through my body, my hips moving at the same pace of her fingers, her kisses fed the feeling of pleasure that her fingers afforded me.
"Minami?" Asked Acchan awakening me from my thoughts.
I got up from the bed with a sheet to cover my naked body and pressed my back to the wall.
"I'm sorry Acchan ..." I said.
"Oh?"
"I'm sorry! I did not want it to happen, I mean, I wanted to ... But not this way, "I said" I'm sorry ...”
She got up from the bed, walked over to me and looked into my eyes.
"Minami ... I liked it ..." she said.
"Eh?"
She put her hand on my cheek and stroked it gently.
"Minami, I have a secret that I hide from you will since a long time ago, I was afraid to tell you because we weren’t friends, we just start talking after that party ... I always wanted to be with you, hear your voice all days, I wanted your arms to engage my body but never had the courage to speak to you "she said" Minami, the secret that I hide it’s... I love you since the first time I saw you!"
I already knew this, but her voice saying she love me is music to my ears ... But I did not want to take her innocence like this…
"Do not worry Minami, last night was the best night of my entire life," she said "But ... What about you? Can I know how you feel about me? "
I know I love her, but now that it's time to tell her I feel insecure ... I do not know what to do, I'm afraid ... Is it that I want?
"Acchan I..."
"Please Minami!" She said "I know you love me! Please ... Do not leave me in pain again ... "
I saw the pain in her eyes, she was desperate ... Takamina are you happy? You're a stupid, an idiot, selfish! You only think about yourself, you never remember the feelings of others and you end up hurting everyone. What see before your eyes is a person who loves you very much and is begging you to stay on her side, but ... I still do not understand, what is love? What is the definition of love? It´s a complication, but even not knowing what love is, I feel well beside Acchan, I love the feeling of his lips on mine, her hugs are very comfortable and pass me a huge sense of security.
"Acchan I do not think I'm the right person for you, you deserve much better than me, you deserve a big man to protect you and treat you like a real princess" I said and she started crying.
"No ... No! You are perfect! Minami, you're all I want! I do not want any tall man and I know you can protect me! Minami please I beg you, stay with me, "she said, tears kept falling on her face.
 "But-" she did not let me finish the sentence, joined her lips to mine and immediately became the kiss hot sticking her tongue inside my mouth. It was a desperate kiss, full of pure and warm feelings. The natural smell of her skin is so soft and sweet, her lips were delicious.
"Minami ... Please stay with me, I'm nothing without you," she said.
I had to make a decision, leave behind all uncertainties and respond to her, it was the right thing to do. I took courage and said:
"I'll be with you"
A huge bright smile formed on her face now, through her eyes I saw joy and happiness. She hugged me and repeated several times 'I love you'.
"I love you too  Acchan" I said "I'll stay with you forever, now, nothing will separate us" and kissed her again.
 I want to be happy and want to share my happiness with Acchan, I know it will be hard but when I'm with her I feel I am able to face and overcome all barriers, because with effort and dedication everything has a happy ending...

***

I had to talk with Minami, were 3 pm when I sent her a message saying:
"Minami can we lunch together?"
She took a while to respond:
"Yes"
One Response too short, but at least she responded.
"I'm in ‘Hotel bar’ waiting for you"
She only appeared after 2 hours and now I started to tell her everything. I told her about the fact that we are twin brothers and we were separated at birth, which in reality Riku was our cousin and everything else. She heard everything carefully, this is what I most like about her, however stupid things look she always hears everything until the end, and in the end she asked me:
"So my life has been a lie?"
I sighed, I knew she was going to ask that.
"Sorry, I had to have permission from our father to tell ..."
"I dated my own brother?"
I did not answer her, I was just looking at her.
"Anyway, I will not give up on AKB just because the man who abandoned me asks me to do that, go back to YOUR father and tell him that I will not do what he wants. The AKB is everything to me and give me some time to think, "she said" It's too much information at once. Goodbye "and walked away.
I knew she was going to react like that it is a hard truth.
I sighed.
It was already half past six in the afternoon, I went to the hotel, showered and got dressed. Lacked an hour for my dinner with Yuko, but rather I had to see how it was going to plan. If we fail in the most certain is probably that someone ends dying or something.
I called Haruki to know how things were going.
'We are ready Kai, everything will go well, I'm sure!' He said. Very confident as ever. But you should be asking yourself  what’s this plan right? Okay I'll explain:
As you know, Takeru fell in love with Kojima, but  Kojima always liked Yuko. That night, he texted Kojima on purpose because I knew who was going to read was Yuko. He made sure there was a misunderstanding between the two, so they divided themselves, he wanted to kill Yuko to have Kojima just for him. Haruki, who worked at the Takeru bar, discovered his plan and told me and as I knew they were both friends of Takamina I decided to help them. The problem is that I ended up falling in love for Yuko and now want to protect her and I want her to be mine. Takeru plan was: he appears today on Yuko's room and kill her without anyone realizes. And we made a plan too, Haruki is pretending to be on the side of Takeru to find and give him new information about Yuko then we know exactly what he will do. I'll distract Yuko with this dinner while they will take Takeru and denounced him to the police.
At 8 pm I pick up Yuko on her room and I took her to the restaurant
"Huuum, the food is delicious!" She said.
"You're right ..." I said.
"Kai look a little worried, is something wrong?" She asked.
How is she notices that?
"I'm not ..."
My phone rang.
"Oh, sorry" was Haruki.
"No problem” she said.
I answered immediately.
"Haruki what happens?"
"Kai he discovered where you are! GET OUT OF THERE! "He said.
Oh no, what I feared the most is happening, and now how can I say this to Yuko? No matter I have to get her out of here!
"Yuko we have to get out of here" I said getting up from the table.
"Do not you think it's too late?" Asked someone behind me.
"You!"
We heard a shooting, it was to scare people from the restaurant who were now desperately running for the exit. Yuko was no reaction.
"Oshima Yuko ..." he said approaching Yuko "Are you a woman who my Kojima loves? You have a very cute face, hat a shame… In a few minutes your angel face will be pale and dry ahahahahah "he laughed" Do you know who I am? I'm Takeru, Kojima boyfriend ahahahahah "
"If you touch her I'll kill you!" I said.
He looked at me "Ahahahaha with a bit of lucky, I'll send you both to hell!"
"Shut up" I said giving him a punch in the face.
"Do not you think that you’re risking your life too much boy?" He asked.
"I do not care! I WONT LET YOU HURT HER! "I screamed.
He gave me a punch in the stomach which made me double in pain and then gave me a knee to the face. I spat blood onto the floor, Yuko called my name several times.
"Lord take it easy!" Said someone from the restaurant.
"SILENCE! THIS IS BETWEEN ME AND HIM!"He shouted.
I got up from the floor.
"Ahaha, you must be desperate," I said.
He gave me a punch in the face so hard that made me fall again.
"KAI" Yuko screamed desperately.
He turned back and went to Yuko.
"Your voice annoys me, I'll kill you!" He pointed his gun to the head.
"NO!" Immediately got up, grabbed a chair and gave with the chair on his head, he fell to the ground unconscious.
"Yuko are you okay? 'I asked.
She hugged me.
"Yes and you? Are you okey?" She asked.
"Do not worry"
"I called the police, they should be arriving" warned someone from the restaurant.
 I was happy to know that I could protect the woman I love, now I just had to make her forget completely Kojima.

***

The police arrived and arrested her arms with handcuffs.
"Can I ask him something before you take him?" I asked to policeman.
"Sure, you're welcome"
I approached him and asked him:
"Can you tell me the truth?"
He looked at me with a look that scary to scare.
"What do you want to know?" He asked.
"It was you who ask Kojima to kiss you? Or she kissed you for free will?"
"I threatened to kill you if she did not do what I command her"
So Kojima did not betray me? I've been a stupid for not clarify things with her, all this was just a misunderstanding! I do not know what to do, I want to get back to Kojima but I like Kai, aaaaaaaaa what should I do?


TBC....



Tell me, I could make you guys thought that Kai was bad right? I did it ieeeeeeeeeeeeeei it was on purpose xD Sorry guys.
Did you like the chap? Comment pleaaase =P
See you later  :byebye: :byebye:

Offline cisda83

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #93 on: August 09, 2013, 01:02:31 AM »
Yeah I can see Yuko is very confused over her feeling now.

But if only she knew the truth of Kai's attention at first...

She would not have problem decision her next course of action

Yeah... Atsumina is official...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #94 on: August 09, 2013, 01:22:30 AM »
yuuchan...  :( throw away that stupid feelings of yours for kai and go back to KOJIMA HARUNAAA!!! she's the right person for ya!!!!  :angry: :banghead:  XD



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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #95 on: August 09, 2013, 05:47:35 AM »
Thanks for the update...  :bow:

Atsumina finally together..

Yuuchan belong to Nyannyan..they should be together...

Can't wait for the next chapter...

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #96 on: August 09, 2013, 06:41:09 AM »
thanks for update :3
yuuchan back to nyannyan pls :( nyannyan will suffer and graduate without you  :cry:
yay atsumina finnally together  :twothumbs

waiting for ur next chap

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #97 on: August 09, 2013, 09:27:19 AM »
I'll gladly answer your question Yuko.
Even if you like him, you still love Kojima more. And she love you too more then he like you. So get your ass to her arms. :nervous

Sorry. :sweatdrop: This just crossed my mind. :kneelbow:
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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 10 (08/08/13)
« Reply #98 on: August 09, 2013, 11:29:52 AM »
Eh? The end..next chapter?! Garghhh!!!
-Anyway, yossha cos AtsuMina is official!!
-And Takeru was so annoying and a badass!!! Hate it!!
-So that was Takeru's plan and at first Kai wanted to help but...
-He fell in love with Yuko, what's next then? Oh...Takamina
-I hope you can accept Kai as your brother at least...*nod*

>Gosh...What'll happen next? can't wait for it...Update soon!!~

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Re: It started with a kiss: Chapter 11 (10/08/13)
« Reply #99 on: August 10, 2013, 02:46:53 PM »
Hi guys :)

Chapter 11

3 days later*
The Stage went well, I love the feeling of being on stage with the audience calling our name. At the end of Stage, Miichan, Mariko, Haruna and Takamina go back to the stage to make an announcement about our next Stages.
"Hey Yuko" said someone.
"Oh Kai, you're here" I said.
"Yes, I came to see your concert" he said "You sing and dance very well you know?"
"Thanks ..." I said.
A certain atmosphere formed around us, we looked at each other intensely. He moved his face to mine and ...
"Yuko! " Called Acchan behind me, interrupting our moment.
"Acchan what happened?" I asked.
"It’s Haruna! You have to stop Haruna! "She said almost crying.
"Stop her?" I asked confused by what she was saying.
"SHE IS ABOUT TO ANNOUCE HER GRADUATION! STOP HER! "She screams.
What? Haruna will graduate?
"Yuko don’t go! Stay with me, I love you!” Kai said taking my hand" Let her graduate, she will move on and we can be together! "
 NyanNyan never betrayed me ... And now what I do? Kai protected me from Takeru, proved that really loves me but Haruna was always by my side...
"I’m sorry Kai" I said.
 "I want to make an announcement" I heard her say.
"Yuko no ..." he said.
"I’m sorry I can’t be with you… It always was she…” I said
"Yuko ..."
This was the right thing to do.
"Sorry but I choose her"
Turned back, grabbed one of the microphones that were on the table and ran along the corridor.
"YUUUUKOOOOO" I heard Kai screaming.
Sorry Kai, but I love Haruna, I never stopped loving her...
 "I" I climbed the long stairs to the stage, "Kojima Haruna I will-"
"NO" I screamed.
Ooooaaah! We could hear the screams of the public.
"Do not do that Haruna" I shout again.
No one understood what was happening,
"Yuko I've got no reason to be here ... All I had is gone" she said.
"No ..." I said, what I would say next would affect my career, but I did not care, I do everything for her! "All you have is here! And ... AND I LOVE YOU "I shout.
The entire public shouted in admiration, nobody was expecting that.
"Yuko ..." she murmured. I ran towards her and kissed her which made the public even more delirious.
"I choose you Haruna ..." I said.

                                                                 ...


We pass the night together at the hotel and the next day both received a message from Akimoto-sensei saying he wanted to talk to us.
We returned to Japan  on the same day, me,  NyanNyan and Atsumina went talk with him.
"Are you ready?" asked Acchan.
We both sighed.
"We have to be right?" I said.
"Good luck" said Takamina.
I knocked on the door and entered.
"Well” he said when we sat down "I suppose you know why you are here"
“Yes” we said.
"You know the rules, you cannot date?” he said "I have no choice I have to expel you from the group" he said.
"We have lot of fans who always liked to see us together, we are the couple most votes! Do not think they will like to see us together? "I told Haruna.
"But you still cannot date" he insisted.
"Wait" said the Takamina entering the room, the Acchan entered below it.
"If you're going expelled them, you have to expel us too!" She said "Me and Acchan are dating!"
What? I didn’t know this! Atsumina are finally dating and no one said anything?
"You too?" He asked.
"The rules say we cannot go out with boys" Acchan said.
Akimoto-sensei sighed.
He stared at us for a few minutes.
"Who else is dating in the group?" He asked.
"Jurina is dating with Rena and Sayaka with Sae” Takamina replied "You will remove us all? They are the members that give more fans to the group, not to say that is about to expel the dear Ace of AKB"
He was silent for a few minutes until he said:
"I have no other option ..."
We all are waiting for the answer.
"Like Acchan said, you are prohibited dating with guys ..."
"Does that mean?” I asked.
"We can stay?"  Haruna concludes it.
"Exactly"
We kept silence, we did not even know how to react. Until Acchan hugged Takamina and cry with joy, Kojima and I looked at each other and I hugged her.
"But I have to admit… I'm a fan of Atsumina and Kojiyuu" said Aki-p.
"WHAT?" We screamed.

***

"Party! Tonight at my house!" Said Yuko.
"Of course!" Said Acchan.
Now everything is perfect, I can date Acchan without concerns with scandals. This is the happy ending that we all expect.
After all, Yuko spoke with Kai and eventually they become best friends! I ended up forgiving Kai, he is the best brother ever, but I have never forgiven my father for having separated us. Kai and Acchan are the only family I have and I have many nice friends who support me in everything I need.
The WMatsui and Saeyaka are great friends, they spend their free time together doing parties, lunches, dinner, etc ... Of course  Jurina sometimes got jealous of Sayaka but that is normal.
Acchan * Takaminaaaa come back!
Takamina * my love calm down, I'm counting the end of the story!
Yuko * But you can’t do that right!
Haruna * Yuuchan don’t be so rude to her.
Takamina * Well, this is not the end, it is the beginning of our lives!
Acchan * I hope you enjoyed the story!
All* Bye byeeeeeeee o/


Now I know ... There is no description of love because love is made of feelings not words...



The End *







This is the end of my very first fanfic, i hope you liked it :onioncheer:

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