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I do make fanfics but NEVER update....<------ lie...I do but i've been to lazy those days......and no killing here *hides behind Takamina*

Anyways! Let's just start  :kekeke

PROLOGUE

''Oi! it's this one''A tall girl with short hair shouted to her friends.
''Eh?!??''Came a 'normal' reaction from a tall girl with long black hair.She was holding hands with a girl shorter than her that looked at them with a bored face.
''Seriously Yuki, how the hell can you make a face like that?''A girl with short brown hair that was down to her shoulders said as she hugged a girl with also short honey-colored hair.
''And you're the student everyone admires, the idol...tch''A gachapin-like girl said smirking.
''Oi! Gachapin!''The tall girl with short hair shouted at the gachapin-like girl.
''What? And who the hell are you calling Gachapin, tall stick!''
''Shut the hell up and come with me''Then they all went to their ship.They all where friends and they decided to go to one of the islands for a trip.The ship was going the way to that Island so they asked if they could ride with them.And got a yes, which was of course good but they had to help the captain of the ship and the workers.
It wasn't much work but it'll take a good while.They went aboard the ship and went to the captain.
''Hello hello, looks like you really came''He gave them a charming smile.The captain was a man in his late thirties he was kind to let them aboard the ship.

''Yes, and like we asked are you really going to take us to the Island?''
''Of course''He smiled again.''But you still have to work here until we arrive''He continued.

''Thank you sir!''
''It's nothing, and please call me Akira''

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Takahashi Minami

A short girl with short honey-colored hair, is really bright and shy.She fails almost every time except when she's serious.Because of her fails is often called Bakamina and cause of her height she's also called Takamidget, Takamini and Takabear.
Has a girlfriend named Meada Atsuko.
Her father is from England and she's born in London, fluent in English and has a British accent when she speaks in English.


Maeda Atsuko

A girl with brown hair down to her shoulders, she's bright,clumsy and a total perv.She can sometimes be scary and her friends call it Acchan's Maji(Serious) mood.She's shy when it comes to strangers and new people, is someone you can trust.
She has a girl friends named Takahashi Minami.But she call her girlfriend Takamina or Takabear.
She's born in Japan, Tokyo.

Shinoda Mariko

Is the oldest one of her friends.She's tall and has short brown hair.She's a troll and loves to troll people, she works as a designer and her interest is in fashion.She's not shy when it comes to new people or strangers.And loves to troll her girlfriend a lot.She's called Mariko-sama,Maritroll and Mari-chan by her friends.If she hand her girlfriend joins forces to tease you then you're so dead.
She has a girlfriend named Minegishi Minami.
She's born in Japan, Fukuoka.


Minegishi Minami

Has a Gachapin-like face, and she's often teased because of that.Loves to eat and teas the other Minami, has a sad past but she doesn't care about it much.She eats when she's sad, angry or annoyed.A bright girl full of jokes, you'll never get bored with her.Because she and Takamina shares the same name 'Minami'.Her friends call her Miichan and her girlfriend calls her Gachapin.If she and her girlfriend joins foreces to teas you then you're dead.
She has a girlfriend named Shinoda Mariko.
Born in Japan, Tokyo.


Kashiwagi Yuki

A tall girl with long black hair.She's the 'reaction queen' of the group.If she get's annoyed or angry at you she may turn to her 'BLACK' side that only her fiance can control.Has big a Oshiri (Back) and big Oppai (chest), her fiance uses to touch them a lot.
Got in trouble with the wrong person in high school and has a child named Michi.
She's engaged to a girl named Watanabe Mayu
Born in Japan, Kagoshima.


Watanabe Mayu

A short girl with brown hair, often tied to two ponytails or one ponytail.Is an Otaku, loves Anime and Manga.Had a big crush on her fiancee during high school.Is often called cyborg by people because of her bored and only get's exited when it comes to her fiancee, Anime, Manga, Anime characters and food.
Engaged to her Kashiwagi Yuki
Born in USA, California and is fluent in English and has an American accent when she speaks in English.


More characters comes soon (of course) but that'll take a chapter or two.

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So this is the new fanfic  :hee:

Feel free to comment about it....but not me getting killed  :on chew:

Now now, if you excuse me....I'll fade *Fades and appears behind you*  :mon cweepy:

Byeeeeeee *le fades in some creepy way*  :mon angel:

Byebye!  :byebye: :mon bye:
« Last Edit: May 31, 2013, 11:18:03 PM by K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS »

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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2013, 10:05:19 PM »
haha dont worry I love your not so finished fics so I will wait

as for the prologue I find it interesting so they are going to an island

and I bet that they will stuck there so that the title of the fic is "" The survival ""

anyway cant wait to read the first chapter
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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2013, 02:24:15 AM »
Great prologue and Intro

Can't wait to see the start of the fic...

'The Survival' & 'Island'...  is it going to be surviving in the island where the ship that they used got into an accident...?

Can't wait to find out more

It's going to be interesting...

Thank you for the intro of the characters and prologue

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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #3 on: May 06, 2013, 04:45:27 AM »
MAYU AND YUKI ALREADY ENGAGED WOW

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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #4 on: May 06, 2013, 06:18:35 AM »
So They're going to an island...
I bet they either get lost or they get left behind and they have to survive...

Awesome Prologue!!!
Can't wait what happens next!!!

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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #5 on: May 06, 2013, 02:17:10 PM »
Don't worry about your not finished fics, I still waiting your new updates 'patiently' :shifty:
Yay, Mayu and Yuki have already engaged :on woohoo:
Takamina and Mayu can speak English fluently :shock:
I think it'd be necessary in someday :ding:
They gonna go to the Island and get stuck or meet some accident :hehehe:
Wanted to know what'll happen :frustrated:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #6 on: May 07, 2013, 11:00:53 PM »
Ugh....to lazy to even thing today  :smhid

But who cares? I'll update  :on gay:

Enjoy!
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''Mama~''A little boy came running to his mother.

''What is it Michi?''His mother asked looking down at her son.

''Papa said we could get ice cream''He gave her a toothy grin.

''Mayu said that?''She asked her son.

''Yes, and papa also said that I could get any flavor I wanted!''He didn't stop that big grin.

''Ehhh~ where is papa?''She asked.

''Here~''Before she could even react she got a back hug.''Hello there~''

''What's my little Yuki doing?''

(Note: Mayu is taller than Yuki here)

''Looking at the ships, and i'm not little!''A pout was formed on Yuki's lips.''Aww~ Is my little Yuki pouting?''Mayu smiled sweetly and stole a peck.

''Shut up''Yuki said and looked away.

''And you said I shouldn't swear cause we have a child here, not look who is telling me to shut-umph!''Before Mayu could say anything more she was silenced by a kiss.It first was an innocent and cute peck but it ended up with a hot and passionate one.
They separated due the lack of air and Michi isn't going to stop whining about his ice cream anytime soon.

''Come on, we're just getting ice cream and then everything is done''Mayu said and took Yuki's hand and Michi's in her other hand.Then they went to buy Michi's ice cream.


''Look at that happy family''Takamina looked at the cute family.

''Jealous?''Mari-chan asked.

''W-why would I?''

''Oh come on~ I'm not stupid''

''Yes i'm jealous, so what?''Takamina blushed and looked away.

''Aww~ Is Takamini jealous of that Mayuki couple?''A voice said from behind Takamina and hands wrapped around her tiny waist.''I love to see the face of my jealous Takabear~''

''Mou~ Acchan, i'm the guy it this relationship''Takamina pouted and looked away blushing.Acchan couldn't help but fangirl at her cute little tiny girlfriend.''My first time seeing such a cute, little, tiny guy~''Acchan's teasing never sopped.

''You should stop hanging around with Mariko-sama, she's rubbing on you.Look at you! My sweet girlfriend has now faded way and now I have this teasing S monster''

''But you love me''

''Of course, who wouldn't love this little monster?''

''Hmm........your ex?''Acchan answered but only got a slap on her arm.''No talking about my ex,ok? And I don't even love him anymore.I love you and only you, I'll kill him if he tries to do something to you!''

''D'aww~ You're just so cute, Takamini''Acchan said and pinched Takamina's cheek.

''I'm not kawaii~''Takamina aka Takamini, whined.But only got ignored by her girlfriend.

''Oi! Are you going to that Island or not? We'll go in a 10 minutes, get ready to get aboard!!''One of the girls that work on the ship shouted.

''Yes, just give us a few minutes, two of our friends and their son is still not here!''Takamina shouted back.

''Haaai~ but I'll give you guys 10 minutes, only 10!''

''Roger!''

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After a while the couple and the child came with the ice cream.''Mayu! Good thing you came, let's get on that ship.We're going soon''Takamina smiled at them.
''Yey!''Michi grinned happily and ran to the ship to where Mariko and Miichan were.

''Looks like someone is happy''Mariko smiled sweetly when she saw the kid run.

''Y-you!''

''Yes, Gachapin?''

''You never smile like that to me even thought i'm your girlfriend!''

''Oh, I don't?''Mariko gave her a seducing smile.

''No! You've never-hmpff''Before she could say the whole sentence she was silenced by a kiss.

''And they tell us to get a room''Mayu gave them her famous Nezumi-smirk.

''Just shut up and get on this ship, or you want to get kicked of?''One of the workers on the ship said.She was wearing a white uniform with black skirt and white sneakers.She gave them a smirk and showed off her fangs.

''And you're?''

''He, Itano Tomomi.Just call me Tomochin....and remember that''She didn't drop that smirk of hers.''And now get on or I'll seriously kick you into the water''She continued.



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Yooo~ It was meant to be updated yesterday but school ended late + I had homework..  :on study:

But I updated! Yeeey!  :on woohoo:

So Tomochin works on that ship, I wonder what's gonna happen on the next chapter  :dunno:

Well, you'll all see~ nyahahahaha  :hiakhiakhiak:

Also ignore any typo or anything like that....

Now I'll fade into my bed~  :sleep: Wanna come and sleep with me?  :on comhere: .............

Just kidding, I don't share my bed with someone (except my teddy >-> )

Now now,

Byebye!  :byebye: :mon bye:

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Re: The survival (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #7 on: May 08, 2013, 02:39:27 AM »
Ah... Mayuki are are a lovely family there...

I can understand Takamina feeling.. the envy and jealousy as to why we don't have that... or wanting to have that kind of family...

Ah... Takamina is so cute... easily get jealous, being tease, change from upset to happy...

Yeah... Atsumina, Mayuki, and Marimii are going to start their adventure...

Erm... Tomochin is there...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: The survival Chaper 1 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #8 on: May 08, 2013, 11:39:09 AM »
Mayuki + Michi = A happy family :luvluv1:
Takamina jealous with the Mayuki :hehehe:
And also easily being teased by Acchan :hiakhiakhiak:
Miichan jealous with Michi but then Mariko gave her a kiss :shy2:
Tomochin works on that ship :shock:
Then there must be Tomomi, I guess :wahaha:
Can't wait to see what'll happen to the ship :on gay:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: The survival Chaper 1 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #9 on: May 09, 2013, 02:28:35 AM »
ohh.. cute takamiget!

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Re: The survival Chaper 1 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #10 on: May 09, 2013, 03:58:31 AM »
oh hoho this fic is really interesting hehe

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Re: The survival Chaper 1 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2013, 10:35:52 PM »
I'm seriously lazy those days  :smhid

But I'll update!

Enjoy!
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''Oi! You!''

''You? It's the first time someone just calls me 'you' ''Tomochin raised her eyebrow and looked at Mariko who was holding a box.

''Whatever and now tell me where to put this''She said and looked at the box she was holding.

''Tch, put it here''Tomochin said and pointed at the pile of boxes beside one of the workers.''Thank you chin''

''The hell do you mean by chin?''

''Well, you said to call you Tomochin so the chin from Tomochin''Mariko explained with a pokerface.Tomochin glared at her and continued her work.But after a while she looked back at the place Mariko was standing on, she saw Mariko still there standing looking at her.
''What?''She asked bluntly.

''Nothing, just looking''

''Well go do something''

''But before that answer my question, what are you?''

''What do you mean what are you?''

''Like there is a captain and lower things, what are you?''

''First of all, it's called people and not things.Second of all, i'm the right hand of the captain''

''You're a hand?''Mariko gave her a dumb smile but only got a sigh.''Are you really THAT dumb?''

''No, I was joking''Said the one and only troll with her famous pokerface.''Also there is a left hand for the captain''Tomochin continued.

''Oh there is? Who?''Tomochin pointed at a girl who was dressed like Tomochin except that it was in red.''Furukawa Airi 18 years old female...erm..well if you need to know something about her ask her, it has nothing to do with me''Tomochin said while checking if everything is ok.''I wanna know more about You, mind to tell me?''

''Well, name's Itano Tomomi...call me Tomochin, 18 years old...girl...''

''Oh you're a girl? I thought you're a boy''Mariko mocked.

''What more do you want? I have o time, i'm busy as you see''

''Well, what am I supposed to do now?''

''Do?...hmm.....how old are you?''

''24, why?''

''Can you scold some people for me? They are around my age and they just have full control on me thought I have a higher rank then them''Tomochin sighed.

''Sure~ Where are they?''

''There''Tomochin pointed at a group of girls.

''Ain't they supposed to be working?''

''Well, yes.But they're like you're seeing just fooling around...mind to tell them to work?''

''Sure~ leave it to me''Mariko said and put on her so-called-charming-pokerface and went to them.She coughed to get their attention, they all looked at her with a 'What?' look.

''Yes?''One of them said annoyed.

''Woul any of you be so damn kind and go and do her job?''

''No? And the the hell are you?''

''The captain''

''Ehhh?!?!?''

''What? You don't even know your own captain cause you're all fooling around, now do your jobs!''Mariko smirked and went back to Tomochin.

''How did it go?''Tomochin asked.

''Awesome, I said that i'm the captain you should have been there their faces ware so priceless I almost laughed''Mariko laughed and Tomochin was laughing so hard and almost reaching the point of crying.

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''Michi, be a good boy and sit here while I and papa Mayu work''Yuki smiled and patted her son.

''Haai~''

''Good boy''

''You're talking to him like a dog''Mayu said after they went out from the room where they where staying until they reach the Island.''Haha, what do you mean?''

''Well, the 'good boy' part''

''Mayu~ come onn~ he is still a little kid''

''But still, it just sounds so wrong for me''Mayu said and patted Yuki. ''Good girl''Mayu smirked and ran around the ship with Yuki chasing her.''Oi! When I catch you, you'll be so dead!''

''Catch me if you can~''Mayu said and stuck out her tongue like a kid at Yukirin.

While the couple was fooling around another couple was working hard, well only one of them.

Acchan standing a few meters away from Takamina and watching her work.''Acchan, who don't you work instead of watching me like that?''Takamina said after she got a break.

''Cause watching you is my work, I can't let anything happen to you~''

''Mou~ Like I said, i'm the guy in this relationship not you, you're supposed to be the-''Before Takamina could say the last word she was shut by a kiss.
''Shh, I do whatever I want~''

''W-what do you mean?''Takamina said looking away to hide her red face.

''Nothing~ Now let's work~''

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Itano Tomomi

18 girl, works on the ship the girls are on.Is the right hand of the captain, and has fangs.Everyone except a few girl respect her.Often called Tomochin or Tomomi-san.Always wear pretty things and loves fashion.


Furukawa Airi

18 girl, is the left hand of the captain.She's quiet and doesn't speak much except if it does mean helping someone or telling someone what to do.Everyone on the ship calls her Airin.
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Done, I'm to lazy to even think  :badluck:

I'm so tired that I just wanna sleep in my bed  :sleep:

But! I just can't let go of my fanfic and sleep and do the same the next day, so here is my update  :wigglypanda:

I wonder why, but I always update at night  :dunno:

Ignore any typos and anything like that, hope you enjoyed this chapter  :hee:

Now now, I need to go and sleep in my dear beddo~ and dream about me running in a field full of flowers.Like this --->  :on gay:

Byebye!  :byebye: :mon bye:
« Last Edit: May 11, 2013, 01:21:30 PM by K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS »

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Re: The survival Chapter 2 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #12 on: May 11, 2013, 06:56:45 AM »
Mariko is naughty tricking the girls by saying she is the captain... it was funny.... I can just see thier reaction  :lol:

Mayu and Yuki are so cute together as always...

Atsuko's job is just to watch Minami.... Very interesting job....  :lol:

Can't wait to find out what happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: The survival Chapter 2 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #13 on: May 11, 2013, 09:00:32 AM »
So Tomochin is the right hand of the Captain and Airin is the left :ding:
Mariko fool those people to work by saying that she was the Captain :hiakhiakhiak:
I really want to see their reaction after hearing that :wahaha:
Mayu and Yuki always sweet :shy2:
Oh! Acchan's job is watching Takamina :hehehe:
Atsumina's kiss :luvluv2:
Can't wait to see what'll happen to them :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: The survival Chapter 2 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #14 on: May 11, 2013, 01:16:38 PM »
Chapter 3!


Enjoy!
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''Captain! It's raining to much and thunder too much!!''Tomochin shouted at the captain.

''What?!''

''Captain! What do we have to do?''

''Nothing, just keep calm and continue your work''The captain said and looked up at the dark sky.

''But-''

''No buts! Just keep doing your work''Tomochin sighed and went back to work.

''There is nothing to do, let's just hope this will be over soon''The captain mumbled after Tomochin went away.


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''M-mama, when will this be over?''Michi asked as he was hugging his mother.

''Soon, now just go to sleep and when you wake up everything will be fine''Yuki said smiling.After a while the kid slept and Mayu looked at her.''Yuki, this may end up bad''
''I know, but we can't tell him that''

''Yes, but.......''Mayu sighed and looked away.''but what?''

''Nothing''

''Mayu, I know you're worried but this will be over soon.It's just rain and thunder''Yuki said and rubbed Mayu's back.Mayu smiled and put her head on Yuki's chest.Smiling, Yuki rubbed Mayu's back gently until they where interrupted by a girl in Red uniform with black skirt.
''Sorry to interrupt your moment but would you mind to help us here?''She asked almost glaring at them.

''Eh...s-sure, but who are you?''

''Furukawa Airi...just call me Airi or Airin, left hand of the captain-''

''Wait! There is a left hand too? I thought it's only left..''Mayu said which made Airi sigh.''Just help us!''

''Sure, sure.What am I supposed to do?''Then the two - Mayu and Airi - went to help the others who worked on the ship.At the same time in the same ship two girl where hiding in a two barrels.You may wonder, why the heck in hind in barrels and why barrels on a ship in the middle of 2020.Well, I honestly don't know...let's ask the captain but not now.
One of the two barrels's lid opened revealing a girl who  peeked outside.''It's raining''She said to the barrel beside her.''Eh?''The barrel spoke.
Wait! Barrels doesn't speak! Is it a ghost?
Then the lid of the second barrel opened revealing another girl.The second girl looked up at the still dark and gloomy sky.''You're right it's raining, it's like a storm''The second girl said.

''Ne, should we hide in another place?''The first girl said.

''No, let's keep hiding in those barrels.The workers here will probably move those barrels to a safer place''The second girl said and went back inside the barrel.The first girl also sighed and also went back to hide inside her barrel.

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I'm sorry for the short chapter  :err:

Well, I hope you liked it anyway  :mon ignore:

Ignore any typos and other stuff

Byebye!  :byebye: :mon bye:

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Re: The survival Chapter 3 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #15 on: May 11, 2013, 01:40:40 PM »
Woah... the ship they are in... is sailing through thunders and turbulent....

Ah... the situation there are in are not good... that they start asking for help from their passengers...

Who are those girls that were hiding inside barrels?

Are they going to be in an accident... ?

Are they going to survive in an island or something...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: The survival Chapter 3 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #16 on: May 12, 2013, 02:53:34 PM »
An update :onioncheer:
The weather turned bad :ding:
They're out of worker so they asked the passengers to help :wahaha:
Mayuki's moment although it was itterupted by Airin - the left hand of the Captain :on kimbo:
Wonder those two girls hidden in the barrel are who :dunno:
Want to know what'll happen to them :on gay:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: The survival Chapter 3 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #17 on: May 17, 2013, 08:39:53 PM »
When was my last update?

Guys, I really need help here...I really can't focus on my studies or the fanfics.I've been in like..another world
I really need help with my fanfics  :cry:

Well, I'm trying my best to get out of this laziness  XD

Now, now thank you for all the comments and let's start chapter FOUR!  :wigglypanda:

Enjoy!
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''Cap'n, I don't think it's the best idea to keep working in the middle of this rain storm!''Tomochin shouted.The storm has gotten worse.''Most of the workers can't even stand and do their work!''She shouted again at the man.
The captain sighed and looked outside, it really got worse.Then suddenly they heard someone shout, ''Help Me! Heeelp!'' they ran out and saw a girl who in some way fell out from the ship but Furukawa Airi in some way had in the last second been able to grab her so she won't fall of the ship.The right hand of the captain went to help the two and helped Airi do pull up the girl.

''Are you ok?''Tomochin asked after the still-shocked girl sat down on the ship in shock.The girl only looked at her with teary eyes.

''Are you ok?''Tomochin asked, she was still unsure if the girl didn't hear her or she was just to scared to answer.After getting no answer from the girl she looked at Airi.

''What do we do with her?''

''I'll take her, you go help the others''Airi said and looked at the girl.Tomochin nodded and went to help the other, Airi looked at the girl and felt like there is no point in asking her if she could walk.
Airi sighed and lifted the girl up on her feet, the girl could barley stand up so Airi decided to carry her.Airi carried the girl bridal style and went to her 'room'.She put the shaking girl on her bed and sat down beside her on the edge of the bed.

''Are you ok?''She asked still looking at the girl who had now calmed a little but was still shaking.The girl looked up at Airi with teary eyes and nod.

''You don't look ok to me''Airi sighed.''Why don't you try to lie on the bed, sleeping might help you''

''S-sl...s-sleeping?''The girl shook her head again.''I don't think sleeping will help''

''Then what will help?''

''A hug maybe?''The girl said.

''What's your name?''

''Akane, Takayanagi Akane''The girl smiled.

''Well then, Takayanagi-san-''Airi began but was cut off by Akane.''Just call me Akane''She smiled.

''Well then Akane-san, I would like to know how you came aboard this ship?''

''W-what do you mean?''

''All off our passengers wear a bracelet made of paper, and as I see you don't have it''

''M-Mine....I..threw it..''

''Well, we also tell the passengers to not throw it or they'll be kicked off the ship''Akane's eyes widened after she heard what Airi said.

''Eehh? S-so you'll k-kick me?''Airi sighed and stood up.

''No, you're cute do I wont do that''She smirked and went outside.

''Kawaii? Watashi?''She wondered and pointed at herself.''Uso....''

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''Cap'n! We need stop the engine or we'll all DIE!!''One of the workers said.

''I know, I know and no we wont DIE!''The captain mocked and told Tomochin to go and stop it.Tomochin came back after a while and told the captain that she did and now they need to go inside and wait until the 'End Of The World' ends.
They all went inside the ship and gathered all the passengers in the dining room.

The captain stood on a mini stage and spoke to the passengers.''No need to worry, this will be over and we'll all go home and rest in peace.But until then we'll all stay here until it gets better and then we'll move.And again, until that happens enjoy the food our dear~ chef made''He said as some of the workers who where now dressed nicely came with the food.

The captain walked down the mini stage and went somewhere while the passengers where enjoying their food.Mariko who was standing near a wall leaning on it and looking at the captain go somewhere.''I really hope it'll end up like that''She mumbled and sighed.''But something tells me that it'll not''

''Mariko-nee~''Michi came running to her.

''Haaai~?''She put o a sweet smile before Michi could notice her worried look.

''I want a candy~''He smiled widely.

''Not before dinner~''

''Aww~ come on~ just this time''He whined cutely.

''Nope~ now let's go get some food and then a candy!''Mariko took his hand and they went to get their food.

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''Mistress, there is a ship near this island and they'll probably come here when the weather get's better.What do we do with them?''A figure in green shorts and white no sleeve hoodie asked as the figure bowed to another figure.

''Play with them, get friendly with them..and the rest...well you know it''The second figure answered with a smirk as she walked away.While the first figure stopped bowing and looked up.''As you wish, mistress''The figure smiled sweetly to no one and went out from the room.


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That was my update for chapter 4  :hee:

Hope you enjoyed it and please ignore any typos.And please don't mind my Engrish...  :kneelbow:

I'm still a kid and i'm still learning English from all of you guys here, the English in my school sucks  :mon ignore:

Now if you excuse me, I'll just fade  :mon angel:

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Re: The survival Chapter 4 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #18 on: May 18, 2013, 08:53:35 AM »
Hope you'll focus on your studies and fics :on cny2: Ganbatte! :onioncheer:
The storm got worse :OMG:
Who are those two figure? :frustrated: They seem bad :on shady:
Airin met Akane :ding: She told Akane that she was beautiful so she wouldn't kick her out although she has thrown the paper bracelet away :hehehe:
Mairko is so kind at Michi :shy1:
Wonder what'll happen to the ship everyone was in :on lol:
Update as soon as you could, please :kneelbow:
Working on translating an awesome Kojiyuu fanfic, right now ☆〜(ゝ。∂) :mon beam:

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Re: The survival Chapter 4 UPDATED (Mayuki, Atsumina,Marimii etc)
« Reply #19 on: May 18, 2013, 11:45:09 AM »
Airi and Akane are flirting after such a traumatic event... very weird...  :sweatdrop:

But is Akane really come into the ship legally or illegally?

Ah... The ship is going to be exploded if they kept using the engine...

But what would happen with them if they can't move at all...?

Would they able to survive?

Eh.. Who are these people that wanted to play with the ship?

Would they get attack and kill...?

Would they be captured and interrogated as to why they were there in front of the island?

What's going to happen to them next.... during the attack of the island people?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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