Author Topic: Mistaken Identity On HOLD (MariMii AtsuMina SasshiRie KojiYuu, etc) (Read 35850 times)

kuro808 · « **on:** May 16, 2013, 08:23:38 AM »

Okay I had this thought after reading a manga and go off on a tangent because I want to do so

Now I know people want pairings... first off I will guarantee MariMii. As for others, I don't know although it could just be Miichan

Anyways I figure to post updates every so often when I have the time to do so

Part 1-1
Part 1-2
Part 1-3
Part 1-4
Part 1-5
Part 1-6
Part 1-7
Part 1-8
Part 1-9
Part 1-10
Part 1-11
Part 1-12

Part 2-1
Part 2-2
Part 2-3
Part 2-4
Part 2-5
Part 2-6
Part 2-7
Part 2-8
Part 2-9
Part 2-10
Part 2-11
Part 2-12
Part 2-13
Part 2-14
Part 2-15
Part 2-16
Part 2-17
Part 2-18
Part 2-19
Part 2-20
Part 2-21
Part 2-22
Part 2-23
Part 2-24
Part 2-25

Part 3-1
Part 3-2
Part 3-3
Part 3-4
Part 3-5
Part 3-6
Part 3-7
Part 3-8
Part 3-9
Part 3-10

ptrd3009 · « **Reply #1 on:** May 16, 2013, 10:06:26 AM »

marimii and kojiyuu please

cisda83 · « **Reply #2 on:** May 16, 2013, 11:17:28 AM »

Interesting start of a new fic...

I like it...

About outer space is it...?

And also fixing with parts...? Android or cyborg?

Interesting... can't wait to see the next

Thank you

Elo · « **Reply #3 on:** May 16, 2013, 12:24:18 PM »

I read it is is mystery and interesting please continue

And yeyyyyy It is marimii finally someone who will write Marimii hehe please update more

kuro808 · « **Reply #4 on:** May 16, 2013, 06:26:34 PM »

Quote from: ptrd3009 on May 16, 2013, 10:06:26 AM

marimii and kojiyuu please

KojiYuu will be participating in the next part in introducing the next set of characters although I wonder if it will become MariMii heavy or not

Quote from: cisda83 on May 16, 2013, 11:17:28 AM

Interesting start of a new fic...

I like it...

About outer space is it...?

And also fixing with parts...? Android or cyborg?

Interesting... can't wait to see the next

Thank you

Yeah outer space miracle she made it yeah

Read the next chapter for the parts

Quote from: Elo on May 16, 2013, 12:24:18 PM

I read it is is mystery and interesting please continue

And yeyyyyy It is marimii finally someone who will write Marimii hehe please update more

Again I wonder if it will be MariMii heavy but I start off as it because that's where the complexity is

Okay Part 1-2 is up on the first post. I'll answer the comments along the way and update on the first post

Elo · « **Reply #5 on:** May 16, 2013, 07:05:53 PM »

hahahahha Miichan Is a MAN hahahaa

I just laughed at the part hahha they have just male things from earth hahaha

cisda83 · « **Reply #6 on:** May 17, 2013, 02:27:56 AM »

Miichan... got heal it's great and all...

But being changed into male...

It's like they change her body from neck to feet...

How about the face... still the same...?

She is like Kuu in Mendol... except she is a male...

Ah... She seems fine now... since she can easily court girls... without being 'GAY'

Interesting... Can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #7 on:** May 17, 2013, 06:19:24 AM »

Quote from: Elo on May 16, 2013, 07:05:53 PM

hahahahha Miichan Is a MAN hahahaa

I just laughed at the part hahha they have just male things from earth hahaha

Yeah that would be the freak out of the century

Quote from: cisda83 on May 17, 2013, 02:27:56 AM

Miichan... got heal it's great and all...

But being changed into male...

It's like they change her body from neck to feet...

How about the face... still the same...?

She is like Kuu in Mendol... except she is a male...

Ah... She seems fine now... since she can easily court girls... without being 'GAY'

Interesting... Can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for the update

The face is still the same but everything below the neck is the same although there will be some moments

Part 1-3 is up.

cisda83 · « **Reply #8 on:** May 17, 2013, 08:03:48 AM »

Miichan is going to be a college guy....

And Mariko Uekara... from the song...

Is this Mariko is the Mariko who is going to be with Miichan or another Mariko?

Eh... what is this stuff that he suppose to sniff...?

Is that how Miichan become a male... Ryou?

What's going to happen with Ryou in College?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #9 on:** May 17, 2013, 05:58:27 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 17, 2013, 08:03:48 AM

Miichan is going to be a college guy....

And Mariko Uekara... from the song...

Is this Mariko is the Mariko who is going to be with Miichan or another Mariko?

Eh... what is this stuff that he suppose to sniff...?

Is that how Miichan become a male... Ryou?

What's going to happen with Ryou in College?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

Same Mariko

Part 1-4 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #10 on:** May 18, 2013, 11:37:22 AM »

It seems that Mariko has an intimate relationship with Kouchi at one time...

But not now... because Kouchi has a small...****?

How the relationship between Miichan and Mariko going to develop?

They are arriving on earth in two days time...

What's going to happen to them in mean time...?

What's going to happen to them once they arrive on earth?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #11 on:** May 18, 2013, 06:48:45 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 18, 2013, 11:37:22 AM

It seems that Mariko has an intimate relationship with Kouchi at one time...

But not now... because Kouchi has a small...****?

How the relationship between Miichan and Mariko going to develop?

They are arriving on earth in two days time...

What's going to happen to them in mean time...?

What's going to happen to them once they arrive on earth?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

Yeah the relationship is more of comic relief as both just been with each other for a very long time but intimately it has been non-existant

Part 1-5 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #12 on:** May 19, 2013, 08:11:24 AM »

Ryou couldn't do it properly...

Honestly... Mariko is a bit of a perv... to see someone doing that...

What's going to happen next...

What will Ryou learn... about being a man next...?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #13 on:** May 19, 2013, 07:15:50 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 19, 2013, 08:11:24 AM

Ryou couldn't do it properly...

Honestly... Mariko is a bit of a perv... to see someone doing that...

What's going to happen next...

What will Ryou learn... about being a man next...?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

Mariko is sort of the guinea pig in the situation, not like Kouchi would be....

Anyways Part 1-6 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #14 on:** May 20, 2013, 11:42:29 AM »

Really... the next test was about erection...

The next two days... spending time with Mariko...

Learning about techniques...

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #15 on:** May 20, 2013, 06:14:15 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 20, 2013, 11:42:29 AM

Really... the next test was about erection...

The next two days... spending time with Mariko...

Learning about techniques...

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

In a way Mariko is trying to make Ryou adjust to the world as a man and the hope is that he can adapt although will he stay one man woman is yet to be seen

Part 1-7 is up.

cisda83 · « **Reply #16 on:** May 21, 2013, 10:56:14 AM »

Ryou is experiencing some itchiness...

Poor Ryou... getting uncomfortable in an area you don't want to feel....

Ah.. Kouchi nearly didn't want to share the food if Mariko didn't remind him

What's Ryou going to experience next?

Can't wait

Thank you

kuro808 · « **Reply #17 on:** May 21, 2013, 11:41:58 AM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 21, 2013, 10:56:14 AM

Ryou is experiencing some itchiness...

Poor Ryou... getting uncomfortable in an area you don't want to feel....

Ah.. Kouchi nearly didn't want to share the food if Mariko didn't remind him

What's Ryou going to experience next?

Can't wait

Thank you

Ryou is going through the gauntlet

Part 1-8 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #18 on:** May 21, 2013, 11:54:03 AM »

Ryou's body was still weak... I guess even if he was supposed to be a boy now.

Ah... Ryou already experienced his 1st time with Mariko...

What is this hole on the wall...?

What's going to happen to Ryou next?

Can't wait

Thank you again...

kuro808 · « **Reply #19 on:** May 22, 2013, 06:09:10 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 21, 2013, 11:54:03 AM

Ryou's body was still weak... I guess even if he was supposed to be a boy now.

Ah... Ryou already experienced his 1st time with Mariko...

What is this hole on the wall...?

What's going to happen to Ryou next?

Can't wait

Thank you again...

Thank you for commenting

Well the hole in the wall is going to involve research and imagine how Ryou felt at the time

Part 1-9 is up