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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-8
« Reply #20 on: May 23, 2013, 10:05:54 AM »
Gonna updated everything...today.. :D...before I sleep..for sure.. :P ..this..I change it.. :sweatdrop:

I :sweatdrop: ...gonna added lot of things...BUT not changing the main or the original... :nervous ..but yeah..adding the detail..it's  :doh: ..difficult.. :cry:

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 :nervous i'm sorry...:nervous...I..think..I need more time.. XD..but I'll try my best.. :peace: :peace:

HOPE U ENJOY!!!
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Chapter 8

continuation of the flashback...

After a while of walking and asking here n there….Center ask one last person after she believe she’s quite near to her destination.

“Sorry…but did u know where Gekikara??”

“She’s going that way…”

“Thanks… “

Center arrived at one building, a very quiet place.No one were there at that time.She just walk without knowing her destination. She just walk while believing her own instinct.

“Why would Gekikara going to this place…”

Suddenly….there is quite a big commotion that can be heard by Center that standing next to one room. Center quietly take a look at what happened inside that room.

“Are u really not going to fight back??”

No answer from the other party that actually can’t stand or even sit after being hit and receiving quite a lot of blow from a group of people that just surrounding her.

“Is this really the person that u tell us before??”

“YUP…”

“BUT why she’s not even 1 percent like what u said…”

“I dunno..just…I want all of u to finish her properly…the person that ruined my sister life..she can’t be alive for a second…”

“Alrite…u can count on us…”

Center just watch each of their action. She can’t do anything as she doesn’t really know the situation plus she’s not the type of person that will disturb other matter without knowing the truth. It’s already about 30 minutes passes after center arrived and watched all the things that happened in front of her.

BUT then, there is a small voice asking for forgiveness. It’s the voice of the person that been hit by that group. It’s a very familiar voice for Center. The voice of the person that she search for quite a time that day. Thus, center divert her attention towards that one person that she can’t see properly because of too many people that surrounding that one person.

“U can kill me if u want..BUT let me meet her first…” the owner of that familiar voice begging with all her might.

“Nope..she doesn’t want to see u..” the guy near that girl just shook her head and look down on that girl. There is no sympathy in his eyes. 

“Please…” the voice become more weak than before.

From the place where Center stand, Center can see a fresh blood are flowing from that girl wound. That girl also coughing some blood and didn’t even once giving back all the things that she got. All the beating and kick from the people there.

“Why?? Why she doesn’t fight back??” Center taught to herself many times. she try to focused at that girl face. She's very shock with what she see.

“Gekikara…” Center bit her lips. Her mind struggling to find the solution of this fight that she doesn't knew the reason why.

“Not again…” a guy that hit Gekikara are quite mad as he doesn't get to feeel the excitement of fighting that he taught he can get if he join this plan.

“Please fight!!” another guy shout while kick gekikara stomach.

“COWARD!!!” Center scream out with anger. She can't stand still and just looking anymore. It doesn't make sense for her.

“STOP!!!” Center said while step into that room. She make a decision and she's very firm about it. Gekikara is the person that she need to protect that what she taught and decide.

“Who’s this little kid??” one of the guy said while laughing out loud. He doesn't believe a mere school student are disturbing them.

“Huh…” Center sigh.

“I’M CENTER..” she introduce herself shortly while wearing a  very hateful face for the one that see it.

“SO??”

“LET HER GO!!"Center shout again.

“Are you kidding me…she almost kill my sister n u ask me to let her go..” a guy that look down on gekikara before came the front to face Center.

“Seriously??” he added with a serious face.

“Ah..” center mind went blank as she heard the reason. She doesn't expect it to be this serious.

“Owh…you want to save her without knowing her true colour…who the hell are you??” that guy ask as he curious.

“I..”

“Huh..I guess you really want to be together..” a smirk can be seen clearly at that guy face.

“I..”

“Please let my time here short guys!!! What all of you doing?? ATTACK!!” that guy giving a sign to his followers to attack and with that one sign everyone move and done their work.

Center fighting with all her strength. Her skill doesn’t even lacking from before. She easily won against most of the person that attack her.

“Who are u??” one of the panting while asking. It's quite rare to meet someone that can fight back against them.

“I’m a fighter..” Center give a short answer. She quite displeased with everything that they're done to Gekikara.

“Fighter…” that guy said while act as if he's in a deep taught.

“Wait..she’s center..” the other guy said weakly while stepping back.

“Majisuka Gakuen?? Nezumi friend???”

“YUP!!” Center nod with confidence. She have quite a big influence too in fighting world.

“Huh..”

Most of the attacker felt reluctant after knowing Center’s identity. Some of them sigh and some of them whispered something to each other.

“Like I care..all of u really a coward..not worth my money at all!!” the guy before look uneasy as his follower stop attacking Center.

“BUT..”

“What??” that guy raise his eyebrows.

“Nezumi..”

“Nezumi??” he still can't get any idea about it.

“We sorry..very sorry…we pay it back..later..” one of the guy bow and giving a sign to retreat to others.

All of them going out in panicked. They doesn’t even bother to make things more difficult than it already are.

“I..VERY..VERY..SOR.RY..” the guy that bow before also bowing to Center that look clueless with their reaction BUT she understand it as she did knew about Nezumi power. Nezumi..

“I..I can’t” the only guy that left mumbling alone and stared at the person that lay on the floor. He felt helpless as his plan ruined.

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Back to present

Black, Torigoya, Otabe and Nezumi successfully open the door of the room that Nobunaga and the others in.

“CENTER!!!” Nezumi run towards center than sit in the corner of that room.

“Ah…Nezumi…”

“Otabe…Black..Torigoya…” Nobunaga stand and look at each of her riend and senior while the others are quite shock with everything that they see and heard.

“You look different??” Otabe ask as she’s a bit surprised with Center appearance.

“What differ??”

“U become more like someone that doesn’t hv her spirit at all..” Otabe added her words before. She doesn't even try to talk sweetly and telling the truth.

“Are u worried about Gekikara??” Nezumi that also curious with that change asking the question that she already knew the answer.

Nobunaga just nod weakly her head. Her worried clearly written in her face.

“As expected…” Nezumi take a few step a back as she’s felt a bit disappointed. Even though she already expect that kind of answer from Center BUT she still can’t forget and denying her memory with Center. She just quietly stand behind Black.

“She’s already awake…dun worry too much..” Black smiling in bitter as she’s trying to hide her own feeling that been hurt too with that one answer from Center.

“Let’s GO!!!” Torigoya hold Center’s hand and giving a sign to others to move to the next destination.

“STOP!!!” suddenly  Otabe shouting and giving a sign to everyone to not going out from that room.

“Hmm..can I know why??”

“Otabe…have a problem??” Black walk towards Otabe and asking a few question that she want to ask..

The discussion between Black and Otabe only make the situation for others become awkward and only the silent take place in that room.

Center, Torigoya and Nezumi sit while waiting for Black and Otabe discussing.

“Hmm..Nezumi…why you’re here??”

“I’m..”

“We just came to rescue both of u…” Torigoya smiling widely as she answered that question.

“Rescue??”

“YUP!!!”

“Sado-san make a plan as perfect as possible in a short time..I also surprise..” Torigoya added her words before. She start to explain Sado plan and others thing that related.

Nezumi that heard what Torigoya said just nodding as the sign that she agree with everything.

“BUT…wait..” Center that look confused with all the explanation doesn’t understand one thing. A thing that bothering her so much that she can’t really take a note of everything  that Torigoya said.

“Why…why Sado-san start all this things?? N how Gekikara come to this prison again??” Center face showing everything that she felt that time. Confused, sad, and unbelieved with that one fact that is the reason and why Gekikara end up at her place.

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At the same time….

For the others of the member of Habu and Mangoose that watching from far, it likes they watching a dramas with all kinds of plots. An’nin and Daasu sit together.

“Hmm..”

“What did u think about??” An’nin asking as she see that Daasu kept thinking of something.

“Nothing…just I felt a bit surprise as they can actually come here without having any wound at all.”

“Wound??”

“Yes..wound..there is too many guards here..and lot of CCTV..it impossible for us to run away and all..”

“Owh..”

“Hmm..impossible…”

“Its..Nobunaga friend…I guess they are strong or maybe more strong than Nobunaga…”

“Huh..”

“Like Gekikara…” An’nin kept thinking about the fact that Nobunaga tell her before. The fact that there are lot of people out there that more strong than her.

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“Why we doesn’t run out from here??” Komimi

‘Follow the order??” Nanashi blankly look at her fellow friend.

“We might be killed if going out…” Nantene look serious as she said it.

“KILLED??” Nanashi become panicked as soon as she heard the word killed.

“Nantene…” Nantene playing with her doll while talking with both of them.

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The meeting between Otabe and Black…

“Actually I already sending map n other important information to Shibuya and others..as I heard it from Torigoya…”

“So..why we’re waiting here??”

“Hmm…we need to wait and stand by here…and when they coming…at the same time…”

“Owh..i got what u want to say…BUT still I can go right??”

“Only U??”

“Yeah…only me..”

“Alrite..if its only U..BUT not in a large group..PLUS u already know the way..”

“OK..ROGER…then, I’ll go first..”

After that meeting, black going out of that room and going to the treatment room where Gekikara is while Otabe back to the group of Nezumi, Torigoya and Center. No one really realize that the meeting is ended and Black already gone. At that time….

“Wait..why u can’t answer me???” Center asking the question that she can’t figure out no matter how much she think to Nezumi and Torigoya that trying to not make situation become worse.

“Center…plz…understand us..” Nezumi can’t tell the truth as she also knew a rough story from Torigoya and doesn’t know the truth.

“Why?? Why u can’t tell me??” Center kept asking and begging for the answer.

“Just…” Nezumi is speechless. She doesn’t really have an answer for that question.

“Yeah…we doesn’t hv a right to..” Torigoya trying to calm Center that in not in her right mind anymore and become confuse.

“What…I just dun understand…”

“Center..stop acting like a spoiled kid and being considerate and matured for a while.” Otabe voice out her opinion calmly as she watch Nezumi and Torigoya become speechless. BUT center keep asking and make things difficult for them to explain things. They have become a center of attention for everyone.

“STOP!!!” Otabe that can’t stand it shout this one word to stop Center. Everyone look at them.
« Last Edit: May 23, 2013, 02:35:28 PM by Ando »
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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-8
« Reply #21 on: May 23, 2013, 10:33:15 AM »
You making me curious about Nezumi's power in the story.. great story  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
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Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-8
« Reply #22 on: May 23, 2013, 01:44:37 PM »
Getting more and more interesting...

The plan is getting into the final stage soon enough...

Yeah... Center was rescued already...

But they are still need to wait for Shibuya to come...

And why did Geki being abused like that in the flashback...?

Who was the girl that Geki wanted to meet?

What made Nezumi so great that most people were scared of Nezumi...?

What's going to happen next to Mariko's plan?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-8
« Reply #23 on: May 23, 2013, 04:29:05 PM »
poor geki  :smhid

what's happen next? :? i'm curious!

thank's for your update  :twothumbs

please update soon  :bow:
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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-9
« Reply #24 on: May 23, 2013, 06:12:33 PM »
I hope that people that read in my original post not mad at me.. :sweatdrop: ..cause I adding quite lot of words here n there..n make some correction of something and something... XD

PLUS the original..end at part 10..BUT...bcz of the comment..make me thing more..need to revise again.. XD

@qweakb - nezumi power... XD .. u actually give me an idea.. :bow: ..I will revise and made additional chapter bcz u tell me about this..  :lol: ..might be..in consideration..

@cisda83 - I guess about why geki being abuse and that girl that geki want to meet..hmm, is already been explain but not clear n direct..hihi..that girl..hmm, just someone..as u know geki love blood n love to beat other people..about being abuse..that guy want revenge for her sister..

n about nezumi strength that make people scared.. :D ..i think I make an additional chapter for this..  XD

Chapter 9

“Otabe…” both Torigoya and Nezumi quite surprise with Otabe sudden reaction.

“What happened there??” the other people that watching from far also look curious with what happened at the corner where Nobunaga and her friend are. They become the center of attention once again.

“Nobunaga…”

“Our leader…”

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“ENOUGH!!!” Otabe continue her last word.

“Otabe…” Center look at Otabe that look quite mad. It the first time she see Otabe being mad.

“Huh..I done a good work right?? Nezumi..” Otabe said those word calmly and look at Nezumi. Nezumi blankly watch Otabe’s change drastically.

“What..” Nezumi ask after a while as she realize that Otabe talking to her.

“Center..we doesn’t have a right to tell u all this things..” Otabe just ignoring Nezumi and continue what she want to say.

“BUT” Center trying to giving a reason why.

“Let me finish my word first…” Otabe calmly cut Center words. She showing some sign and start to explaining things one by one.

“One…about how gekikara end here..we’re not at that scene…so we can’t explain every little thing to u…”

“Two..Its better if u heard it directly from Gekikara…as its Gekikara decision from the start”

“Three…Sado knew better than us..later, later when u meet her..u can ask everything from her..” a sigh of relieved came out from Otabe mouth after finishing explaining.

“Understand??” Otabe ask Center that still look a bit confuse.

Center that at last calm down just nodding weakly. She sit quietly and stared at the floor. She kept talking by herself trying to satisfied her own self by questioning and answering by herself.

“Are you shock just now??” Otabe turn her attention towards Nezumi that look at her non-stop while she explain things to Center before.

“Eh…” Nezumi raise her eyebrows as she doesn't believe what she heard.

“Are you??” Otabe suddenly held Nezumi hand and smiling widely after she see the reaction of Nezumi that she rarely see.

“I am…” Torigoya answered for Nezumi as she see Nezumi not reacting to the question that Otabe ask. She came and sit beside Otabe. Otabe felt a bit disappointed. She really want to know Nezumi answer and keep teasing her.

Torigoya turn to look at Nezumi and asking for something.

“Food??” Nezumi asking to confirming what she think.

Torigoya nodding her head. She’s quite hungry after fighting before.

“Here…” Nezumi give her backpack. It’s full of food that she buy before she came.

“Waa…a lot..” Torigoya take it and say thanks before she make a move.

“Give them too…share it properly…n dun forget our Center.. senpai…” Otabe wearing a wide smile as she said it after seeing Torigoya grin alone and want to move somewhere quiet.

“Owh…of course…” Torigoya stand and start distributing the foods that she got from Nezumi.

*

“Center…here…” Torigoya give some bread to center that still talking to her ownself and going to the other people that sit quite far from them. Then, she just sit near Daasan and An’nin without knowing who are them.

“hmm..sumimasen…can I know what happened there before??”

“Owh..hmm…nothing…just a few serious conversation here and there..”

“serious..”

“how did u know Nobunaga??”

“Nobunaga?? Owh…Center..u called her that name..”

“Yeah..”

“She’s my junior..”

“Junior..’

“YUP..we’re all from the same school…Majisuka Gakuen…”

“Ah…thanks for the food..”

“welcome..its from that girl over there..”

“Who??”

“The one that come running towards Nobunaga before??”

“Yup..she’s Nezumi..friend of Center..”

“But she’s doesn’t look that close..”

“Yeah..for some reason.. that happened currently..”

“Gekikara??”

“Owh..u know her??”

“Yeah..we met her before..”

“Really??”

“Yup..”

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At the same time when Torigoya going to distribute food n others..

“At last..” Otabe smiling widely alone

“What do u mean?? N why u hold my hand??” Nezumi are surprised with Otabe action as she not even realized it at all.

“Ah..u just realize o what?? I already hold it for quite a time now..” a smirk can be seen at Otabe face. Otabe giggling alone seeing Nezumi reaction. Even though Nezumi declining Otabe by words, her action totally opposite from it.

They are on their own world while Center keep quiet by herself and try to be calm before she can meet Gekikara.

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OUTSIDE OF MAJISUKA PRISON…a big group of people move quietly without being detect by any guards that guarding the prison. They move in with the guide  of the senior of Majisuka Gakuen that receive map n info from Otabe.

“I’m sending message to Otabe…” Chokoku said it after seeing the area that they currently in is clear.

“Alrite..then, me..to Sado..” Shibuya suddenly said it while looking at minegishi minami.

“Then..me??” Shaku quite lost as she doesn’t know her role.

“U…hmm, Gakuran??” Kokabuki voice is heard from behind.

“Alrite…WAIT!! Why??” Shaku glared at kokabuki that currently grin because she felt amuse by Shaku reaction.

“U with her right??” Ookabuki added Kokabuki words. Laugh can be heard from behind as they keep teasing Shaku by themselves.

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At the same time..

“They already here…let’s move..before police coming..” Otabe said it after opening the message that she received.

 “What do u mean??” Nezumi look lost as she doesn’t knew what Otabe plan.

“Hmm..later, I will explain..or..open your laptop..” Otabe take Nezumi laptop and give it to Nezumi. She smile widely as she waited Nezumi to open it.

“Owh..” Nezumi quite shock as she see lot of things that she doesn’t see before is existed in her laptop.

“How do u??” Nezumi blink a lot as she can’t believe what she see.

“I’m genius right??” Otabe proudly say it and grin by herself. She felt satisfied as she see Nezumi reaction.

“…” Nezumi kept silent as deep in her heart she's very impress by everything that she currently see.

*
15 minutes later…

The group that been lead by Otabe that including of An'nin, Nobunaga and her group plus torigoya and Nezumi are arrived at the front of treatment room. The way to that place is too clear as every thing is plan out by Otabe. 

**
-the plan-

Treatment room is the safest place for all the prisoner to stay before the right person that in-charge of them will come. As Otabe controlling the camera system properly, the prisoner will get into the room in order as Otabe can only block or turn it safe for few second each time. Everyone that going in as some stranger and not the patient will be put in blind spot where the CCTV is 100 % been hack.

**

“Not everyone can enter..3 people at once..going straight to the place that u want to go..aka the place where ur team are..” Otabe giving a clear information to each of the person that she just met.

“Choose the 3..n go in..hmm, Black gonna guide all of u when you’re already inside..”

“We’re last..n torigoya-san..u can move with them right?? I already told Sado my plan before..hm, she’s gonna control the situation inside…” Otabe showing Center and Nezumi assuming that as 'we' that she mean for torigoya to understand.

“Roger..Gud luck!!!” Torigoya move along and following the order that Otabe said which also Sado plan.

“Yeah, make sure u join us later…” An'nin said to Nobunaga as she walk pass Nobunaga.

“Alrite..” Center said weakly. When everyone are already going in. Center grab Otabe wrist and whispered something.

“I want to meet her..”

“Owh..alrite..u can go in too..n ask Black to going out..” Otabe nodded and let Center go to the place that she want to be.

*

At Gekikara ward…

“Torigoya…n… others..why ur here??”Gekikara quite surprise as she see lot of her friend are there visiting her.

“Owh..Sado-san not tell u??” Torigaya ask as she curious.

“yeah…” Gekikara nod weakly.

“Geki..” a familiar voice calling behind Torigoya.

“Center..” Gekikara felt warm just by seeing Center.

“Let leave them alone..” Black whispering those word carefully to Torigoya.

“It felt strange..” Torigoya still can’t believe what she see.

“Yeah, because she change..that’s why, I want her to be alone with Center… maybe..” Black voice showing her true feeling. She felt very sad at that one fact but she’s happy that Gekikara is awake.

*

“Are u..OK??” Center ask wearing a worried face. She's surely is after seeing Gekikara quite drenched with blood last time.

“I’m fine…hmm..center..u look..” Gekikara caress Center face. There is some scar that she doesn't knew the existence before.

“I’m OK…” Center nod weakly.

“I miss u…” Center said while smiling bitterly.

“why..suddenly..”

“I’m happy..” Center added.

“why??” Gekikara raise her eyebrows. She's very confused at Center reaction.

“that at last..I meet u..” Center eyes surely become a pool of tears. It's already at the edge of broke and flowing out.

“geki…did u remember anything??” Center felt something seems off with Gekikara. She expecting Gekikara to be excited and as usual grin and giggling like when they are together before.

“remember about what??” gekikara ask as she's very curious why Center become emotional like now.

“Why u’re here..at this ward??” Center try to confirming her doubt by asking more.

“Nope..I forget how I end up here…” gekikara bluntly answered Center question while wearing a smile on her face. She look very pure and innocent.

“Geki..” Center sighed. Her heart become more and more pain as she look at Gekikara. Her eyes dried after knowing that fact. It's such a big shock to herself.

How she end like this..it's all my fault..

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The past between Gekikara and Center…continue…


The  guy that can’t stand of everything that just happened grab tightly a knife that he already hold for a long time. He walk slowly towards Center.

“Gekikara-san..” the guy mumbling by himself and attack Center with the knife and successfully hurt Center lightly. After that, he hit center until his satisfied.

“CENTER!!!” Gekikara scream out from far. She can’t really stand up properly by her own to help Center.

“Now..your turn…” the guy turn his head towards Gekikara and walk slowly to his subject aka Gekikara.

“GEKIKARA!!” he called Gekikara out loud and run towards her while holding properly the knife  aiming his target.

BUT suddenly…

“Center..” Gekikara quite shock as the person that stand in front of her is Center.  She doesn’t know how Center end up there and being stab by that guy.

“Huh..you…” Center hold that guy hand that quite cold and shivering as the result of his action. He speechless and shock when he realize the target that he aim became the other person.

“YOU!!!” Gekikara try her best to support Center and put her down. She really want to go after that one guy BUT center grab her hand to stop her.

“It’s alright..it’s not deep and serious..” Center weakly said it.

The guys that stab her just run away as he afraid of the things that she done.

After about 2 weeks, Gekikara and Center staying at the hospital. Center actually leaving some memo to the nurse as she going out from hospital early and going to the address that she received from Nezumi. The truth is she ask Nezumi to find out about the guy that hurt Gekikara before.

After 2 days…the day when Gekikara can check out.

“Ano…where is Center??” Gekikara ask the nurse as she doesn't see center for a past few days.

“She…owh..she ask me to give u this…and she already check out 2 days before…” the nurse give some small memo's or note to Gekikara.

“Hmm…really..” Gekikara nod wearing a disappointed face. She really hope that she can spent her day together with Center. 

“Did u want me to call ur family??” the nurse ask as Gekikara look a bit lost.

“No..I already call my friend..” Gekikara replied kindly and bow a bit to thank the nurse.

*

“Are u really fine??? It doesn’t look like that..” Black ask as she find that Gekikara still walking quite slow.

“Black..”

“yeah..yeah..” Black nod a few times as she see Gekikara glared at her.

“Hmm, did u heard anything about Center??” Gekikara ask as she's think Black might know something about Center.

“She..she…” Black felt reluctant to answer it.

“What??”

“She’s been caught by police yesterday..” Black said it directly the thing that she heard. Even though she felt she shouldn't tell it BUT she doesn't want Gekikara unhappy later because of Center. The truth is better than a lie..that what Black taught.

“WHY??”

“She..hmm, I don’t really knew the detail..but..I did heard a word ‘kill’ in the rumour..” Black answered with unsure tone.

“KILL!!”

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Back to present…

“U hurt..” Gekikara caress Center face and look at it with her eyes that slowly crying after holding the tears for a while.

“Geki..” Center wipe Gekikara tears as she caress gekikara cheek.

“Did u knew how I feel right now??” Gekikara suddenly take Center hand and put it on her chest. Her heartbeat that beating fast. She want Center to heard and felt it.

Center nod weakly as she understand it as she also felt the same thing.

“I’m happy that I can died peacefully right now..” Center replied it with a slow voice. She really felt satisfied as she knew that Gekikara is happy and alive in front of her.

“Center..don’t say that word easily…” Gekikara look straight to Center eyes. She felt a bit uneasy with that word.

“It’s not easy Geki..” Center shook her head denying  what Gekikara said.

“I want to live together with u..for a long…long..time..”

“I know..” Center felt touch as she doesn’t even once heard that word directly from gekikara before. She realized it might be a dream as the person that she currently talk is not a REAL gekikara.

“Is it ok…”Center make a cute face as she want a hug from Gekikara.

“Of course…” Gekikara said wearing a wide smile on her face. Center hug Gekikara lightly as she see a signal that ask her to going out.

“I need to go first…eat the medicine and rest..OK??” Center holding Gekikara hand tightly before release it and going out. Gekikara that been leave behind just stared blankly the person that she love so much going out and lost from her sight.

“Going first…first..” Gekikara felt uneasy as if there is something bad will happen. Her heart felt hurt and pain with that last word.


TO BE CONTINUE…

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Sorry for any mistake here and there... :sweatdrop: ..i'm not good but kept improving.. :D not too much... :P

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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-9
« Reply #25 on: May 23, 2013, 06:41:35 PM »
aaaaaaaa GekiCenter  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

thanks for update  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-9
« Reply #26 on: May 23, 2013, 08:36:18 PM »
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@qweakb - nezumi power...  .. u actually give me an idea..  ..I will revise and made additional chapter bcz u tell me about this..   ..might be..in consideration..

please revise addition chapter!!!!!!!!!  :bow: :bow:

it is a must ><
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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-9
« Reply #27 on: May 23, 2013, 09:49:30 PM »
OMG OMG OMG whut is going to happen next lols :P
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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga] C-9
« Reply #28 on: May 24, 2013, 06:19:20 AM »
Ando-san... Thank you for commenting on my comment... and answering the questions that I had...

Otabe was very great and direct... her explanation about Center's questions was being directed to the persons responsible for everything...

That's very logical... and great answer...  :thumbsup

In this story... seems like Center and Geki became very close to each other not so much with Nezumi anymore like in MG2

But Nezumi and Otabe... seem closed well more like Otabe wanting to be closed to Nezumi... and Nezumi wish to be near Center like before...  :shocked

Ah... the newly arrivals were strong... Shibuya, Chokoku, Ookabuki and Shaku.... going to be great fight... soon...  :twisted:

Shaku and Gakuran... together... Yeah... like in MG2

Yeah... Otabe probably hack into all the secret documents that the prison was doing and leaking them into the media or police...

Yeah.. Nezumi was pretty impress with Otabe's genius....

Ah... so Center killed the people that tortured Geki....

Ah... Geki is still in her innocent and lost version of herself....

What's going to happen next...

Can't wait to find out How they are going to destroy the prison...

Thank you for the update

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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga][MJ2+Prison]C-9
« Reply #29 on: May 24, 2013, 04:38:20 PM »
I would advise you to use a spellchecking software before posting a fic, especially if English is not your native language. I honestly think that the spelling mistakes make it very difficult to read your story. It's not "u", it's "you"; it's not "alrite", it's "alright" and so on. I honestly believe you could improve readability a lot by taking a look at English orthography rules :)

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« Reply #30 on: May 24, 2013, 05:12:44 PM »
I would advise you to use a spellchecking software before posting a fic, especially if English is not your native language. I honestly think that the spelling mistakes make it very difficult to read your story. It's not "u", it's "you"; it's not "alrite", it's "alright" and so on. I honestly believe you could improve readability a lot by taking a look at English orthography rules :)

 :sweatdrop: ..sorry, I'm too used to make it short..and yeah..english is not my native language.. XD

BUT  :nervous i'm too used to it that I might not change it..

BUT  :doh: I'll try to reduce it..hmm..cause it based on my mood.. :P

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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga][MJ2+Prison]C-10
« Reply #31 on: May 25, 2013, 04:31:40 PM »
Thanks everyone for reading this... XD ..this is the LAST chapter... :(

 :lol: just kidding..it is the END..it's true..for the original version... :D

Anyway...

@inari -thanks for your advice..I applied it.. :nervous ..maybe.. :sweatdrop: ..difficult for me to change my habit.. :(  XD

@qweakb -I did..n yeah..I will make a few SP... :P..cause i realize there is something missing like nezumi power.

@cisda83-  XD there is lot of things missing in this story.. :lol: ..thanks for pointing it out..i guess I put it all in SP chapter.. :P ..I just realize it as I reading it again.. :lol:


HOPE U ENJOY IT!!!

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Chapter 10 [END]

At director room….the director is alone thinking about the recent incident that quite strange in her eyes. She check up all the camera and there is nothing wrong with it. She’s busying herself and spent most of her time inside her office without knowing the situation that she’s in. She also doesn’t aware that the guards that guarding her office is gone and she’s been surrounded by a few stranger that she doesn’t knew except for that one person Nobunaga.

Few minute before..Someone knock the door….

“Come in..”

“Is there anything that u want to report??”the director busying herself with all the documents and reports that she’s received before.

“NOPE!! Mdm. Director….”Nobunaga said quite loud so that the director aware that she's there.

“YOU!!!  and HOW??” shock by Nobunaga appearance, the director stand up and look every corner of her room. She just realize that she’s alone there with Nobunaga.

“It’s been a long time…” Nobunga slowly walk towards the director.

“What do u want from me??” the director quite nervous as she knew Nobunaga character very well. There is a few incident where Nobunaga try to attack her. It's very terrifying.

“Nothing…I’m currently expecting someone right now..thus, I need to make sure u meet them…” Nobunaga sit calmly in front of the director.

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At the same time…

“HUH!!..at last we’re done here..” Shaku felt relieved as everything finish smoothly like she expect it to be.

“TIRED??? Go meet ur lover..hihi..” Ookabuki tease Shaku again. Shaku reaction is really epic and very amusing.

“YEAh…she’s just at the other building…huhu..together with Black and Torigoya..” added Kokabuki supporting Ookabuki statement while grin and giggling by herself.

“Why are u doing this again…” Shaku sigh as she’s a bit tired to actually playing with them.

“We’re having fun here…” Kokabuki continue with a smirk on her face.

“Huh..I guess we need to put all o them in one place…” Chokoku sudden instruction make them stop from arguing and teasing each other.

“WHY???” Kokabuki and Ookabuki asking at the same time.

“I’m tired..” Shaku sit down at her current place wearing a very tired face.

“Sado ask us to..” Chokoku explaining it shortly.

“Alrite…let’s finish this as fast as we can…” Shibuya start to move a people with Dance help.

“Alrite..” others just nod weakly and continue their job.

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Get out from this place as soon as possible…yeah..of course after all of u done ur job..

By Otabe
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“Owh..we’re not waiting here??” Shibuya ask Chokoku after she receive that message.

“Yes..it’s their matter now..we just a back up team..huhu..” Chokoku that receiving the same message giving a sign to retreat to all. Shibuya also did the same thing.

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At ward..Gekikara can’t stop thinking about Center words. It’s very disturbing.

“Huh..why so suffocating…this kind of feeling…it hurts..”

“Center…”

A few minutes later…Gekikara arrived in front of meeting place that she sure is the destination that Center go that is director room. Her taught is confirm with the Otabe and Nezumi that waiting there.

“U can’t enter…” Nezumi stand in front of Gekikara to stop her.

“What do u mean Nezumi??” Gekikara ask kindly.

“She’s right Gekikara..this is between Center and that director..” Otabe added.

“ARE U SURE???” Gekikara ask while glaring at Nezumi and Otabe. She can't stand the unbearable pain that she feel right now deep in her heart. She must meet Center to know why she felt this kind of feeling.

“CENTER!!!!!” Gekikara shout quite loud and become a bit uncontrollable. She manage to going through Otabe and Nezumi defense.

“Where are Black and Sado??” Nezumi ask while hiding at the back of the door. She doesn't want to interrupt more as Gekikara already going inside the room. It's not really her responsibility to take care them.

“Huh..i’ll forget that I ask them to retreat first..our guest is coming any minute from now..” Otabe whispered as she said it. She doesn’t want her plan been heard by the director.

“You..” Nezumi can’t believe what she heard. When did she plan all this?? Nezumi taught quietly while staring at Otabe.

Gekikara that just came in receiving a big blow as she saw two person that quite far in front of her are currently in sitting position. There is lot of blood on the floor and the director is holding  a knife while crying out loud, while her love and crush, Center is sitting there doing nothing except holding some part of her body . All the memories from the past came out non-stop, rushing into Gekikara head.

Let me…go…first…forgive me…

Forgive her…

Let me end everything for u…

I’m sure everything gonna be ok..

She’s forgive u…


The contain of the memos that she received long-long time ago came back again in her mind. Her memory is fully recovered and the uneasiness that she felt before have its reason and that reason is CENTER that sacrifice herself before.

She run towards Center and without she realize it, the tears keep coming out non-stop from her teary eyes.

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At the same time..

“She’s here..” Otabe look at her phone while saying it.

“Who??” Nezumi ask as she's curious. Otabe always make her surprise after all.

“The people that I called..” Otabe bluntly said it.

“Nezumi..let’s go back..”Otabe added while turning her back from director room and Nezumi.

“Leave them alone?? Seriously!!” Nezumi said as she's afraid something might happened to Center.

“Yeah..they’re gonna be safe..dun worry..” Otabe wave her hand a few times as he denying the unnecessary worried of Nezumi. She lead the way out while Nezumi following closely behind. Nezumi still mumbling by herself while glancing back and forth to her front and her back.

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Everything end as the group of police that been lead by Lieutenant came and arrested the director and all the people that involve with Majisuka Prison. The prisoner that injured are transferred to the certain hospital while the others will return back to the normal prison and their family been informed of their existence that been faked as dead in prison before.

At outside of Majisuka Prison…inside an ambulance that come…one person can’t stop teasing the other person….

“Geki…u’re back..” Center said it while looking directly at Gekikara eyes. Her hand is hurt a bit BUT that doesn’t stop her from playing along with the excitement that she currently felt.

“Ano..Center…” Gekikara can’t hide her worried after she realize that Center hurt. She still felt after effect of embarrassment that she’s going through before.

“U look cute..” Center whispered with playing tone.

“No!!! no I’m not..” Gekikara can’t sit still and did taught to running away from there if she can BUT she can’t leave Center alone. She just can't.

“Of course u were…crying like a baby before..” a smirk clearly showed at Center face while she say it.

“Hmm..not really..” Gekikara shook her head and answered it as if she whispering to someone.

“Thanks..” Center is very thankful towards Gekikara. Her life will not be empty like before.

“What with that smirk??” Gekikara can feel that Jurina just teasing her and felt a bit uneasy as everything goes smoothly as Center plan.

She’s tease me again

“What?? This??” Jurina neglecting Gekikara glare and pointing out her face that wearing a smirk that Gekikara said.

Gekikara nodded slowly while avoiding an eye contact with Center that sitting in front of her.

“How about u then..” Center ask while pointing out gekikara face.

“What’s with me??” Gekikara try to defense herself.

“U…giggling non-stop while I’ve received some treatment before right..” Center knew everything that Gekikara done before as she always glancing at Gekikara while she’s been treat before.

“No..” Rena face showing the other answer. Her heartbeat beating as her action been caught by Center.

“TOO CUTE!!!” Center can’t stand the cuteness that being showed by Gekikara. She pinched a bit the blushing cheek of Gekikara that become red by time and caress it slowly.

“STOP IT!!” Gekikara trying to push center hand that kept trying to play with her face.

“Why??” Center ask as soon as Gekikara push and stop her hand.

“I really gone wild if u do it again..”

“Go on..I LOVE to see ur wild self  with that blushing face..” Center answered and laughing out loud afterward.

“MOU!!” Gekikara face redden and she kept trying to hide it by cup her cheek with her hand.

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“Ano..both of u..” Lieutenant came to inform them something.

“yes.. Lieutenant” both Center and Gekikara replied at the same time.

“We gonna move to a new prison…hmm, and about ur sentence..it’s gonna change..in few days..I guess..” Lieutenant smiling while looking at Center.

“Owh..”  Center smiling by herself.

“hmm..” Gekikara staring at the floor and her face become gloomy after hearing that news.

“And you..gekikara..don't worry..you’re not killing anyone..and they can’t really claim anything because of their crime..thus..”  Lieutenant added as she see the differ reaction from Gekikara.

“…….thus??” Gekikara felt relieve as she heard it BUT doesn’t sure what’s gonna happen.

“Wait and see..good news for sure..” Lieutenant giving a sign to move to the other place where other prisoner are together before transferring to the other prison.

**For two people that quite influenced and are the main character in solving this case, both Center and Gekikara receiving a special gift from government – their sentence is shorten and will be out together at the same time.

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D-DAY OUT

A few people anxiously waiting outside the prison.

“Are u sure they gonna be release today??” Sado ask Torigoya that pose like a model while waiting.

“YUP..black tell me” Torigoya bluntly answered it. She pointing Black that sitting calmly in front of her.

“Yeah..they going out exactly at 1pm..” Black voice clearly show that she quite nervous to see Gekikara that she doesn’t see for a while.

“BUT its already 30 minute past 1…” Sado said it as she move and sit beside Torigoya.

“Are u really comfortable wear like this??” Sado asking directly to Torigoya without hide her real intention.

“YES” Torigoya answered shortly while fixing her makeup.

“I don’t like it..” Sado added as she see that Torigoya never care to answer it seriously even though it is a serious question for her.

“BUT I like it..” Torigoya bluntly answer it again.

“Hmm..I don’t like it..look at them..” Sado giving a sign to look at the guards that can’t take their eyes over Torigoya that look very sexy.

“BUT I love it..” Torigoya kept teasing Sado. She knew that fact as lot of men confessing to her after see her for the first time.

“Then..u love them..” Sado felt disappointed with Torigoya that doesn’t care about herself.

“No..I love u..” Torigoya shook her head weakly. Her face blushing while thinking about the moment Sado start to confessing her love with jealousy everytime she’s going out meeting friends and working.

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At the same time...

“Why we didn’t join them??? I WANT TO JOIN THEM??” Shaku start to nagging Gakuran that choosing a place for themselve to wait BUT quite near from others.

“Huh..u really love to being with others than me..it make me sad..” Gakuran kept feeling down everytime Shaku act like this.

“Don’t manipulate my words..I didn’t see them for a while..” Shaku simply want to met her old friends and chatting with them.

“Yeah2..u make me being like this..BUT you’re not being responsible on me..” Gakuran talk like she’s talking to herself. She’s complaining things.

“NO…What’s with making you like this?? I never doing anything wrong on u..” Shaku become confuse with all the fuss that Gakuran make.

“U make me fall in love with u..” Gakuran kept whispering to herself, hoping that Shaku understand her.

“So..”

“So..I can’t really make other girls near me and keep avoiding them because of u..” She explaining all the things that she done for Shaku. All the sacrifice that she made. Her popularity and all.

“OWH!! REALLY!!!” Shaku pretending that she doesn’t knew about it and act like she’s surprise BUT she’s laughing at the end cause she can’t stand it.

“Why u laughing?? I afraid that u might misunderstand me..” Gakuran still voice out what’s in her mind lately.

“Waa..I didn’t knew it at all..” Shaku trying to calm down and kept teasing Gakuran with her act.

“Yeah..u doesn’t even give much attention to me..” Gakuran mumbling by herself.

“U..mad..” Shaku said while looking at Gakuran closely and carefully. Their face is very near to each other. She really love to see Gakuran mad reaction.

“NO..” Gakuran stared at the floor.

“LOVE U!!!” Shaku suddenly hug Gakuran and kissing her lips lightly before running towards others.

“She really change me..” Gakuran sigh as she walk along following Shaku that happily run toward others.

“Waa..too CUTE!!” Shaku excitedly said while run towards Sado and the others. She really love that side of Gakuran.

After greeting the other, she start to chatting and sharing the stories that she heard and knew while Gakuran joining black that sitting alone near them.

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There is a couple that stand a bit far but not too far from others.

“Ano…u said we gonna go to..” Nezumi look disappointed and said those words while searching the song in her mp3.

“Date..” Otabe cut Nezumi words and realize the change of tone in her girlfriend voice.

“Yeah..we will..for sure..after we meeting them..” She’s try to calm her by giving some chewing gum and sweets that she done by herself.

“BUT why should I??” Nezumi took the bite of the sweets and continually voice out her unsatisfying mind.

“Nezumi…plz think before u talk..u really doesn’t change..”

“U want me to change??”Nezumi stop eating and anxiously waiting for the answer as she curious the answer for the question that she ask. It’s quite disturbing as she can feel the coldness of those words like Otabe really meant it.

Is she doesn’t like me? Bored with myself? I can’t change..It’s just me.. the doubt start to blowing in Nezumi mind.

“No..I’m happy of who u are right now..it’s such an attractive charm in my eyes” Otabe smiling widely as she said it. She knew what Nezumi think as she started to observe her long-long time ago before she confessing her love.

Nezumi is flush with the warm feeling that been given to her. Her cheek blushing and redden more as Otabe sit beside her and take one side of the earphone enjoying the same joy and feeling together with her.

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At the back of certain building near the meeting place. There are 2 person hiding after being released quite early that is 2 days before as the result of behaving well at the time in their prison.

“Hmm..so, u knew that we gonna being out early but u lying to me??”Gekikara ask as she quite curious after seeing her friend from far and they currently hiding.

“Kind of..plus I knew that Black gonna believe u no matter what..” Center answered it confidently.

“ What the..”

“Don’t mad at me..I knew that Black have feeling for u..” Center said it while look at their place avoiding Gekikara eyes.

“Black..” Gekikara did realize about Black feeling BUT she doesn’t knew that Center will actually mind about it.

“Well..I just don’t want to see her smiling excitedly when she see you face to face in front of me..” Center added her statement to make it clear to Gekikara that she currently a bit uncomfortable with the presence of Black beside Gekikara.

She…jealous…..  Gekikara grin by herself when she realize Center intention. She enjoying Center that blushing and trying to hide it from her.

“Are u sure that we should doing this..” Gekikara changing the subject of their conversation so that Center will forget about it and being herself back. Even though she enjoying it more than everything BUT  she doesn’t want Center hurting herself by thinking her relationship with Black that quite close and intimate than any other friends that she had.

“I really want to knew their limit..” Center sudden change did make Gekikara grin again. She really love that one fact of Center that actually easy to coax with just a few words. That’s one of the attractive charm that made Gekikara fall in love with her.

“Why??” Gekikara still ask like she don’t really knew Center intention that totally childish and predictable.

“I wanna fight them…all….”

“BUT I don’t..don’t have a reasonable reason..” Gekikara doing her acting part very well by bit her nails as if she’s  worried unexpected action of Center might make the others misunderstand them even though she knew that everyone will actually knew that this is the repulsive and childish action of Center.

“U have…it’s me..just me…” Center that still too excited in the midst of her own world, confidently take a lead to encouraging Gekikara to fight with her.

“U..” Gekikara felt a bit move with the way Center try to make herself join in her plan.

“Yeah…to protect me..from being hurt..” Center add the reason as she knew that Gekikara will protect her and not letting anyone hurt her.

“Just u..”

“Just me..”

The unexpected event that being plan by Center become their excited memory together as they enjoying each other presence and soul. Everyone quite shock at first BUT they really understand and familiar with them as family and don’t misunderstand at all the reason behind that surprise attack.

THE END!!!!

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Sorry again for all the error that I made..GOMENAsAI!!!  :sweatdrop:

Anyway..the SP...all the things that might be questioning will be answered there.. :peace: :peace:

n again... :cow:

ARIGATOU!!
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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga][MJ2+Prison]C-10
« Reply #32 on: May 26, 2013, 06:42:00 AM »
Ah.. stupid director... only know typing away and scheming things...

But had no ability whatsoever... Now she got cornered...  :sweatdrop:

Ah... Geki remembered everything again... Yeah... I thought she would forever forget her past..

But only because she saw Center injured... I hope Center was fine...  :wub:

Otabe was so good able to organize everything from the removing of all the guard, the assault that Shibuya led and the leading of authorities to come and closed everything...

So great.... better than Nezumi huh???  :lol:

Ah... Good for Geki and Center for being sentence-reduced because of this... and they were closer now... :love:

SadoxTorigoya, NezumixOtabe, GakuranxShaku and GekixCenter... interesting pairings but suitable with your MG situation.

But Poor Black not having anyone... and her love for Geki was only one side.

Thank you for the fic...

I enjoyed the story until the end...

Can't wait to see your extra story... or may be you could make a sequel...

Thank you again...

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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga][MJ2+Prison]C-10
« Reply #33 on: June 14, 2013, 10:29:42 PM »
Author san, no more chapters?  :cry:
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« Reply #34 on: June 17, 2013, 03:48:40 AM »
Author san, no more chapters?  :cry:

Have more...SP... :P  :sweatdrop: might be late..some already written BUT not revise it yet..

 :roll: thanks for still waiting.. :cathappy: :cathappy:

:lol: I hope u like it later..

I don't know if it's good or not.. :nervous

BUT don't putting lot of hope there.. :P


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Re: Just U [Gekikara x Nobunaga][MJ2+Prison]C-10
« Reply #35 on: June 18, 2013, 08:01:21 AM »
Author san, no more chapters?  :cry:

Have more...SP... :P  :sweatdrop: might be late..some already written BUT not revise it yet..

 :roll: thanks for still waiting.. :cathappy: :cathappy:

:lol: I hope u like it later..

I don't know if it's good or not.. :nervous

BUT don't putting lot of hope there.. :P

Okay.. I will be waiting  XD  :cow:
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« Reply #36 on: June 25, 2013, 03:53:27 PM »
Huhu...long time not updating this... :smhid ..yeah..i'm a bad person after all.. :P

OK..now is the first part of the SP n it's not related to PRISON HOPE AT ALL..just the character from Majisuka Gakuen 1 and 2...

ANyway...don't put a lot of hope on it..as my writing is just my own way of writing.. :sweatdrop: ..it can be turn out bored or maybe exciting..I dunno..

BUT i'm glad I made it.. :cathappy: :deco:

HOPE U ENJOY IT!!!
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A few years after Center and Gekikara out of prison.

~At a certain meeting place of a few people – restaurant ~

There are 2 person chatting at one table in the corner of the restaurant. They currently waiting other people that they invite.

“Black..how u overcome it??” an unexpected question came out from Gakuran mouth as she looking at Black that reading her usual favorite book.

“What??” Black stop reading and stared back at Gakuran.

“Hmm, the loneliness of being alone..” Gakuran felt reluctant to say it as Black look at her as if she doing something wrong.

“ME?? I’m not alone…” Black bluntly said and continue to read.

“What’s that meant?? U already have someone?? Really??” Gakuran felt surprise as soon as she heard that one news.

“Yeah…” Black said weakly while kept her eyes on her books and ignoring Gakuran curious face.

“WHO?? Did I know her??” Gakuran said excitedly.

“Yes..” Black answered while still immersed with her own world. She read the book while holding her necklace.

“WHO??” Gakuran can’t really figure out anything as she doesn’t expect Black will actually have ‘that’ special one as she knew Black have one-sided love with Gekikara all this time.

“U will meet her later..” Black said bluntly while changing her sitting position to more comfortable one.

“Later…who will I met later..who…” Gakuran scratching her head that not itchy while thinking about it seriously.

“…Ah..don’t tell me…SHIBUYA!!!” Gakuran snap her finger and pointing at Black while wearing disbelief face.

“Yeah…she is..” Black close her book properly and put it on her table while answering Gakuran with a small nod.

“BUT..I taught she’s with Dance..” Gakuran said straightly what she taught at that time. Honestly, she can’t believe it as she doesn’t see any sign of shibuya or black like each other before.

“She’s not..” Black shook her head and drink the water that she ordered before that just arrived.

“Seriously???” Gakuran ask again for a confirmation.

“What’s that disbelief face for??” a familiar voice asking from her back. It’s shibuya that wearing office attire and sit beside Black as she come in and pass Gakuran.

“…shibuya!!” Gakuran quite shock with Shibuya sudden question. How did she knew my expression?? Gakuran taught quietly while staring blankly at Shibuya.

“LOL..gakuran…why questioning Black…she always serious about everything..” Shibuya said bluntly while wearing a smile on her face.

“Ah..u and black??” Gakuran said weakly while look at Shibuya with uncertain face.

“Owh..u tell her??” Shibuya turn her face to facing at Black that just nod to answering Shibuya curiosity.

“Yes..i do..” Black added as Shibuya smile at her. She knew Shibuya felt very happy at that time.

“Is it really the truth??” Gakuran ask again.

“Gakuran…Black never lie..” Shibuya said while kept wearing a smile on her face. At this time, she felt very happy and excited as this is the first time Black come out to others about their relationship.

“n if u ask me…I also seriously declare that she’s mine..” Shibuya said with a serious tone.

“Huh..” Gakuran suddenly let out a small sigh.

“U’re sigh?? Is is that bad to see us together??” Shibuya glared at Gakuran as she seeking for explanation.

“No..I don’t mean it like that..” Gakuran shook her head and wave her hand as a sign of ‘NO’. She really meant it. She felt happy and glad that Black and Shibuya are together.

“So…” Shibuya still stared at Gakuran.

“She’s lonely…” Black said while holding Shibuya shoulder to stop her from glaring deathly at Gakuran.

“Really!!  Shaku is an interesting person…I don’t think u will bored with her..” Shibuya still can’t accept that one reason as she knew Shaku personality.

“I’m not..just..” Gakuran stared blankly at the table while her hand stirring the straw in a glass of her favorite drinks.

“JUST…” both Shibuya and Black stared at her waiting for the reason that they doesn’t knew.

“She’s always having fun and leave me out for it..” Gakuran said bluntly while wearing a disappointed face.

“She’s hunger for more love and time from other…as expected from Shaku..” Shibuya nod a few times as she agree about it too.

“..ah..I forgot to call my co-worker..Black..I go out for a while..” Shibuya suddenly said to Black as she remembered about the things that she done in the office before.

“Alright..” Black answered shortly at Shibuya that walk away from her with a smile on her face.

*

~Awkward silent~ between Black and Gakuran…

“Are u that shock??” Black ask as she look at Gakuran.

“Kind of…BUT that’s not really the things that I’m worried right now..” Gakuran said weakly. Her mind seems disturb on something. It’s written all over her face.

“Is it that loneliness things u ask before??” Black said bluntly.

“Hmm..”

“Alright..I tell u..” Black said after push her ‘fav’ book to the side and focus on Gakuran.

“Really??” Gakuran said with full of hope in her eyes.

“BUT with one condition..” Black stared at Gakuran wearing a serious face.

“what??” Gakuran ask as she’s too curious why Black become too serious.

“Don’t laugh when I tell u..” Black said shortly after sipping some of her drinks again.

“Ooo..just that..” Gakuran let out a relieved sigh. She’s afraid that one condition is too much for her before.

“Yeah..” Black nod n still wearing the same serious face like before.

“I..accept it then..”Gakuran said confidently.

“Ok..it’s simple..just with LOVE…” Black said bluntly and avoiding Gakuran eyes after she said it.

-silent for a few second-

“LOVE?? Ah…ur one sided love!!” Gakuran at last get what Black trying to tell her. She laugh out loud as she felt it’s funny to think back about Black one sided love with Gekikara.

She always see Black mumbling something alone and always trying to be with Gekikara as much as she can. The rarely satisfied smile always being wear by Black at that time. Sometimes she can see Black trying her best to please Gekikara even though Gekikara doesn’t felt it weird. Maybe…in her opinion.. as she doesn’t see Gekikara act strange around Black.  As she herself always act strange around the girls that confessing to her. She can’t act normal with them anymore.

“U!!!” Black glared at Gakuran after seeing her laughing out loud without thinking her own feeling.

“Ah…GOMEN!! I didn’t mean it..” Gakuran suddenly stop as she can felt a chilling feeling creep into her body.

“Huh..” Black sigh.

“Then..” Gakuran waiting for more info as she did want Black help her overcome this loneliness that she felt.

“I don’t want to tell it as u already break the condition..” Black said coldly and doing back the things that she done before ignoring Gakuran.

“Waa…Black…please…tell me…” Gakuran said with a pair of desperate pleading eyes.

“We…best friend are we…I always there when u need me..” Gakuran continue to begging with a hope in her eyes.

“..n U there when I need u..” Gakuran said weakly.

“LOL..I never remember it..ur just the ‘junior’ of mine..” Black said coldly as if she doesn’t even once think Gakuran as her friend.

“BUT I taught we’re friend…” Gakuran said with a tone that clearly shown that she felt sad and disappointed.

“Yeah…yeah..Gekikara friend is my friend…satisfied??” Black suddenly felt sorry with what she done before.

“Un..SO??” Gakuran suddenly turn back to her curiosity mode before and asking again.

“So..what??” Black ask as she also doesn’t knew what Gakuran want.

“Tell me!!” Gakuran said excitedly.

“Don’t want..”

~Shibuya come in~

She look surprise when she see Black expression. Black eyes redden as if she’s trying her best to hold her tears.

“Black..” Shibuya said weakly while properly taking her seat and fix her worried eyes on Black. Black not replying and just avoiding her gaze.

“Gakuran!!! what u done??” Shibuya turn to look at Gakuran. She knew something must be happened between them and Gakuran is the one that made her ‘one’ in that state.

“What..what??” Gakuran dumbfounded and shaking as she’s felt the bad things might happen to her as she see the murderous gaze of Shibuya towards herself.

“She rarely pull this kind of face?? What u done?? Better tell me before I kill u..” Shibuya said with a ‘calm’ voice.

“Huh..Black..don’t let shibuya kill me..” Gakuran look at Black with hope that Black said something to back her up.

“Shibuya..it’s nothing..just..she’s laughing when I seriously taught her about something…” Black said bluntly what Gakuran done to her.

“Black..” Shibuya felt sad and down too as she see Black.

“….U!! Gakuran!!! Follow me!!” Shibuya stand and walk towards Gakuran. She’s glared and drag her outside toward the exit and out of the restaurant.

To be continue..

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Sorry for any mistake in writing..  :cathappy: ..i'm an amateur..LOL..

still..hoping u not mad at me..for short words that I made.. :nervous

Thanks for reading it..huhu...

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Offline Shinoki

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Re: Just U SP [MG1xMG2] P-1
« Reply #37 on: June 25, 2013, 04:52:23 PM »
oh, interesting SP~~~
Black X Shibuya... that's abnormal, but interesting in a way~
I wonder what happened...

Offline sayanee123

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Re: Just U SP [MG1xMG2] P-1
« Reply #38 on: June 25, 2013, 06:45:41 PM »
new pairing huh? :?
interesting~  :thumbsup
thanks for update :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
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Re: Just U SP [MG1xMG2] P-1
« Reply #39 on: June 26, 2013, 01:36:50 AM »
Oh... what's going to happen to Gakuran....?

Shibuya was so scary... but she was very protective over Yuki...

What about Gakuran and Shaku relationship?

Yeah... at last Black able to get her happy ending...

Though I would not have thought you would make Shibuya as her pairing...

But it's interesting to say the least...

Great OS...Thank you...

Can't wait to see the continuous...

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