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~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 2 {MaYuki}
« on: May 26, 2013, 10:00:02 AM »
-REVENGE-





Prologue


Characters:

Watanabe Mayu- A good looking 17  year old  boy who have a big dream to become a doctor but due to financial problem, he stop studying and decided to work to Mr. Kagomaru company.



Kashiwagi Yuki- A very beautiful girl with a princess aura. She is 21 years old and will be next  CEO of her grandfather’s company. Her best friend (s) are Rena, Mayu and Sae. She's very inlove with Mayu but  it her feelings fade away like a wind since that incident happen to Mayu.



Time: Present


Mayu POV

It’s been a month, I and Yuki broke up since that damn incident. I don’t know if I should be glad or not, to be mad or not, to be sad or not.  I don’t know what to feel. 

It’s been a week, I and my best friend, Rena didn’t talk or should I say, I am the one who avoided her. It’s just that. I don’t want her to trouble herself about my personal problem. I am just contented with her presence and serene smile.

It’s been a long day for me when I am in this isolated room in my house that full of memories of My Yukirin. Pictures, Drawings, Videos and even the chocolate wrappers that she ate is in the desk with a colourful sticky notes. I smiled bitterly as I lay my tired in my bed again to sleep to forget those sweet memories and  hell memories.

If  fate will lead  me to those 3 people who get my pride and dignity, I swear to God, I will kill them with my own hands. They will witness the devil inside me that no one knows other than me and Yuki’s grandfather.

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“Look...My favourite and only one heiress of Kashiwagi Electronics Group of Companies, this is the company that you will inherit from me  once I resigned as the CEO and when the times you will grow up and can handle all of this” Mr. Kagomaru Kashiwagi said to her granddaughter while they are touring around the company while Yuki only nod with a cute happy face making her grandfather chuckle.

“Yes grandfather! I will  be a grown up girl that can lead this company of  yours!” Yuki said  cheerfully.

“Ah! I forgot to tell you that there is someone I want you to meet and I am  very sure that you will have a great friendship” Mr. Kagomaru says.

“Really? But Papa doesn’t allowed me to be friends  with somebody that he didn’t know. Only Rena is allowed to be friends with me because Rena’s father is one of the associate of our company” Yuki said with a sad voice.

“Don’t worry, Yuki. I will talked to your father about that but first we should meet them, okay?”. “Okay” Yuki said and they start walking to the veranda of the company.


TBC.....

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« Last Edit: July 21, 2013, 06:57:14 AM by Wmatsui22 »
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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2013, 10:06:51 AM »
Ah... another Mayuki fic of yours... going to be interesting...

Interesting topic there... REVENGE...

Ah.. why did Mayu break up with Yuki...?

Who are these 3 people that Mayu wanted to get revenge on?

What's going on with Mayu that he need to take revenge?

Who is the person that Yuki would be introduced to by her grandfather?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the great prologue

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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2013, 10:49:16 AM »
Mayuki with revenge theme....hmm interesting...can't wait for the next update....

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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2013, 10:53:23 AM »
Interesting theme for this fic

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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #4 on: May 26, 2013, 10:55:23 AM »
What happen with mayu?

Ah they broke up,and yuki feeling for mayu already fade like a wind~

Like a wind,isnt that mean she doesnt loved mayu anymore?

But its mayuki fanfic LOL




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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2013, 11:27:43 AM »
hmmm.... interisting!!!  :thumbsup

i wonder about the incident ?? :?

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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #6 on: May 29, 2013, 01:28:07 AM »
ehhh?! why mayuki break up?! :shocked :panic:
you got me hooked once again :lol:
thanx for this and please update :cow: :bow:
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Re: ~Revenge~ {MaYuki}
« Reply #7 on: May 31, 2013, 03:53:09 AM »
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~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #8 on: June 02, 2013, 08:54:35 AM »
-REVENGE-



Chapter 1

Characters:

Matsui Rena- A 21 years old girl with a pale skin but have a princess aura and a shy personality. She is a good friend of Mayu and Yuki and have a deep feelings for Mayu but she knows Mayu is very in love with Yuki



Miyazawa Sae: A 22 years old handsome boy with a cheerful aura and always smiling. He is very in love with Yuki to the point that he can do anything in order to get Yuki’s attention



A/N: Hi Readers, Sorry for late update. Thank you also who comment in the Prologue of my Story

@Cisda83: Thanks for the review. I think there's a reason why Yuki broke up with Mayu

@Yanouchi: Thanks for comment.

@Kurosawa87: Thanks for comment.

@Kurogomi: Thanks for comment. I think Yuki is in love with Mayu. She's just confused?  :nervous

@Itamana: Thanks for comment. That incident is very important in this story  :nervous

@Mayuki_Daisuki: Thanks for comment. 

@Gek_Geki: Thanks for comment.


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Time: Present

*Ding *Dong

“Damn!” Mayu grumbled under his rough breathing.

“Hmm..What is it, Honey?” A random girl says and hug Mayu’s muscular body.

“Nothing, it just that someone is knocking to my door. I will look at it.” Mayu said as he slowly release his body to the naked girl beside her

“Forget it. I want you now! I want to do it again!” the girl whined while giving Mayu’s a peck in his neck and collar bone

“Arghh...Miko stop it.. We do it for the whole night! Beside I am tired and maybe that knock is very important...” Mayu irritably says and remove the girl’s hand in his manhood

Mayu stand up from the bed and he start to wear his underwear and boxer short but not caring to put his shirt on and proceed to the door downstairs

*Ding  *Dong

“Damn that bell sounds!” Mayu irritably says and widely opened the door revealing her best friend who widen  her eyes

Rena POV

It’s been week, my best friend Mayu is avoiding me and  I will not tolerate this time. I had enough of him! I am her best friend for Pete’s sake! but he is avoiding me like a virus just because of her ex-girlfriend. Actually, I am mad at Yuki for doing this to Mayu.

I will make a move now

It’s now or never

I will make Mayu fall in love with me
--
As I walked to his apartment, I want to kick his door because I’ve been standing there and press the damn doorbell for about 30 minutes and yet the owner of this apartment didn’t opened the damn door. Suddenly, the door opened widely to reveal my best friend glorious body  with a six-pack abs.  I am definitely drooling inside when I didn’t compose myself.

“M-Mayu” Damn! Why do I stutter

“Mayu, who’s this girl? Is it your ex?” the girl said with a messy black hair and wearing only a thin bathrobe that her breast is very expose

“U-hh---“ Mayu can’t answer the girl’s question

“I am her best friend. You have a problem with that?” I answer sharply with my one eyebrow  raised and crossed my arms into my chest

“Oh....I see but can you leave now? We are doing a couple thing, if you don’t mind interrupting with us...” She said with a mocking tone

“C-Couple thing?” I stutter and I know my face is now red due to the embarrassment

“Oh! Playing innocent here?” She continuous to mock me

“Stop it Miko. Get dress and leave. I have an important to say to this girl. Girl? She called me girl not best friend or friend but instead a girl? What is he?!

“I see..Okay..Just call me if you need  me” Miko girl says and looked at me with a smirk and go up stairs to get dress

“You can enter and make a cup of coffee of yours” Mayu said and leave me that nothing happened

“Where will you go?” I asked in a very small voice

“Tsk. Getting dress.” He said with a snap voice

“Mayu.....” I said his name softly


--
Time: Flashback [First Year High School] [1]

Rena POV

As I walked to the corridor of our school with my classmate Annin, there’s a boy in front of me holding a card and a flower

“Ano.... Matsui-san, can you go out with me?” He said nervously while bowing and held the card and flower

“I’m sorry...I can’t go out with you” I said calmly and proceed to walked again

“A bit rude ~Rena-chan” Annin tease me which I give her a confused looked

“Nope Annin. I’m not rude. It’s just that. I am being honest to them that I don’t want to go out with anyone...” I said with a bored tone

“Tsk. Tsk. I am very confused about you, ~Rena-chan.” Annin said

“Confused? Why?” I asked her

“~Rena-chan is beautiful, smart, witty and kind but I never hear  that you like someone..” Annin murmured which I slightly blushed at the sudden memory

--
Rooftop

“Ah! I need a fresh air! I am very suffocated to the boys and their shit confession! I just want to vanished at their sight” I said to no one in particular but when I opened my eyes. I saw a handsome angel. He is peacefully sitting in the ground with headphones and I think he is doing something that make me curious as I walked towards him and he didn’t know that I was coming.

“H-Hey..” I shyly stutter and he looked up at me which I am mesmerized at his dark eyes and handsome like  doll face. His eyebrow scrunched which I step back slightly

“It’s a bit rude to looked to what I am doing” He said coldly to me

“I-I-‘m sorry.....” I nervously apologized and walked away to him
--
“~Rena-chan, are you  still on earth?” Annin said as she shake my shoulder furiously

“AH! Annin-chan. What is it? Haha” I say while laughing nervously

“Nothing. Let’s go to our  class” Annin said

Mayu POV

That girl is weird. I sighed and continue my drawing.

*Five seconds had passed..

“Eh?” I asked myself because the scenery that I supposed to sketch is replace by a beautiful and serene face that I greet with a rude words awhile ago

“She’s really beautiful... Matsui Rena...” I said as my lips curved into a true smile
--
*Smack

“Ouch! Why did you do that?! It hurts you know!” I whined to him while holding my head

“It deserve you. I’ve been calling you for the nth time and yet still no response from you. By the way, you’re blushing too. Are you thinking pervert things?” He said to me while crossed his arms into his chest

“N-No...” I said as I cover my red face due to embarrassment

“Oh really? My ~Rena-chan is a silent pervert...” Mayu tease me while grinning widely. It’s unusual for Mayu to crack a joke since that day.

“Anyway, let’s go to my company. You’re my Vice-President and yet you’re not in the meeting today?” I said as Mayu can feel my Gekikara aura as he nod like a doll to its master  and I grin evilly

“Uh—okay ~Rena-chan..Let’s go..” Mayu said in a defeated voice and face

TBC.....






« Last Edit: July 21, 2013, 06:55:22 AM by Wmatsui22 »
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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.06.01 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #9 on: June 02, 2013, 11:13:00 AM »
Ouuuu!!! I was shocked when Mayu is sleeping with a girl...
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~So the flashback is where Rena and Mayu meet~~
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~Ohhhhh~So sweet...Mayu accidently sketch Rena's beautiful face~~uhhh
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~Soo...The accident haven't been answered..I really want to know it!! Can't wait!!
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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.06.01 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #10 on: June 02, 2013, 12:37:44 PM »
Ah... Mayu was sleeping around after the break up...

And also Rena was so in love with Mayu that she able to overlook the situation where Mayu was just sleeping around and being called 'girl' from her best friend.

Ah... for Rena, Mayu was a handsome angel... even if he was so rude at the time...

Eh... Mayu also thought that Rena was very pretty girl... would that feeling develop into anything...?

Mayu was so scared of Geki... he was like a mouse then...

What's going to happen next... to their relationship?

Would their relationship develop into anything?

What would Sae do to get Yuki?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.06.01 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #11 on: June 02, 2013, 09:10:49 PM »
thanx for the update  :cow: :bow:
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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.06.01 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2013, 03:33:27 AM »
Interesting Mayu is with a girl and Rena is on the outside looking in because of Yuki

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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.06.01 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #13 on: June 03, 2013, 08:53:50 AM »
Omoshirooii... =w=

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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.06.01 Chapter 1 {MaYuki}
« Reply #14 on: June 03, 2013, 02:26:53 PM »
Mayu why sleeping around with random girl.. It suppose to be me:twisted:, i mean, to be Yuki..!

Rena's going to make a move..  What will Mayu do? What really happened between MaYuki? What causes the break up?

Thank you for the latest update :twothumbs :bow:

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~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 2 {MaYuki}
« Reply #15 on: July 21, 2013, 06:00:08 AM »
-REVENGE-



Dieyg48- Hi Dieyg48-san! I really like your cute comments with emoticons! Thank for liking my fics... About the incident? I think.... I will not tell it for the mean time... hehe

Cisda83: Thank  you for comment and review! Let’s see what happened to Mayu and Rena relationship in the next chapter! Please stay tune!

Mayuki_Daisuki: It’s been awhile. Anyway, thanks for the comment

Kurosawa87: Thanks for the comment and review!

Ricchan_Sawa: Thanks for the comment!

Kenjoy12: Thanks for the comment. I suddenly laughed at your comment “Mayu why sleeping around with random girl.. It suppose to be me , i mean, to be Yuki..!”
I think Rena will fight her love to Mayu....
For MaYuki... I will not say anything for the mean time XD


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Chapter 2

Time: Flashback [First Year High School] [2]
RenaMayu Moments

Rena POV

After the ungrateful encounter of I and that mysterious handsome boy, I feel that I want him to be my true friend. Actually, Watanabe Mayu is very popular in girls around his age and my age because of his handsome and cute features and have a unique ideas among their difficult subjects. He’s a total G.E.E.K or rather a Handsome Geek.
This day I am going to make sure that he will accept my friendship. I hope so. I am now walking to the rooftop again  to see him once more. My heart beats faster than usual, I don’t know why I feel this. I feel nervous. I hold the knob and twist it.

--
Veranda of Kashiwagi Group of Companies [Flashback]

Yuki POV

I love my grandfather so much. I sometimes think that he’s my father rather than my real father because he’s always there and teach me many things unlike my real father that is so cold and strict to me since my mother died because of me.

Anyway, after our talking, we are now walking to the veranda, I am quite excited to meet the new person that I will  be friends for.

“You’re grinning evilly my granddaughter..” The old man tease me which I only pout

“HAHAHA...You’re indeed beautiful like your grandmother and your mother” He said in a matter-of-fact voice but you can hear the sad voice.

“~grandpa...”

“It’s okay, Yuki.” Grandpa said

“Rena-chan?” I unconsciously says because I didn’t expect her to be here

“Yuki-chan” Rena said surprised

“Grandpa, I know Rena-chan..” I said

“I know that too but the person that I want you to meet is beside Rena-chan” Grandpa said and pointing the boy who is busy in listening in his phone not caring the person gathered in this place which make me irritated

“That boy” I said in a loud and sarcastic voice earning a glance from him which he frown

“Who’s that girl Rena-chan?” The boy asked my best friend Rena

“Mayu. She’s my granddaughter that I want you to be friends for..” Grandpa said and laughed a bit and the boy frowned and slightly pout while I raised one of my eyebrow

“Anyway, you may go to the cafeteria so you can talked to each other comfortably while I am talking to our guest in that room” Grandpa says

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Cafeteria [Flashback Again]

When Mayu saw Yuki, he thought that he saw a very beautiful angel going down to earth

Mayu POV

Wow! She’s very pretty. I never thought that she is more beautiful than my best friend Rena but the two have in common. That is their bangs in the forehead, long black silky hair and their height is almost the same. I think this girl taller than Rena in 1 or 2 centimeter.

I want to talk to her but I don’t know how? Maybe I will ignore her so that she can notice me easily.

So I put my headphones in my ear and closed my eyes although I know that there are people who are talking in front of me.

Great...

She notice me easily but in a rude way. I feel happy for that. She’s really beautiful. I really admire her beauty.
--
Time: Flashback [First Year High School] [2]

RenaMayu Moments

“What are you doing here?” Mayu says and Rena is very surprised and she screamed out loud.

 “Kyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Rena screamed and Mayu quickly cover his mouth by his hand and dragged Rena and shut the door behind them. Rena  widen her eyes due to the fact Watanabe Mayu cover her mouth  and she didn’t know what will happened next to her. After a few minutes, Mayu  released Rena’s mouth and he can see her panting and her face slightly pink.

“What are you doing here?” Mayu asked again and he also want to apologized to her but because of his Pride, he didn’t say it

“Uh—Uh...Anou...I  want you to be my friend!” Rena shouts and bowed to Mayu who have no reaction in his handsome face
“Friend?” Mayu said coldly and Rena looked up to saw Mayu glared at her

“Y-You don’t w-want?” Rena asked and she is stuttering

“I don’t need a friend. A Friend will always betrayed you...” Mayu said and leave the place. His two hands is his both side of his pocket. Rena only kneel down crying silently.

“I messed up again....” Rena murmured 

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Time: Present Time

RenaMayu Moments

Inside the Car

“Stop smiling like that ~Rena-chan” Mayu murmured while his head is rest in the windshield of the car

“Eh? Why?” Rena said tilting her head like a cute child

“I-It’s kind of creepy, you know” Mayu said not looking in Rena’s direction

“Creepy?! How dare you?!” Rena said in an angry voice and went to Mayu’s side to smack him when but when he saw Mayu’s serious face, she stopped and only sighed at his best  friend behaviour

[What I am going to do to you, Mayu? Just to forget Yuki in your heart and soul...]

TBC....


A/N: I hope readers that you are not confused in the Flashback scenes. Sorry!


« Last Edit: July 21, 2013, 06:55:42 AM by Wmatsui22 »
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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 2 {MaYuki}
« Reply #16 on: July 21, 2013, 07:49:37 AM »
 :)Ah,finally an update ^o^ its been a long time you know. Please update soon&i want to see more MaYuki stories please. Btw th anks for your update;)

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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 2 {MaYuki}
« Reply #17 on: July 21, 2013, 12:00:39 PM »
Bwa....Since i just joined this forum recently...
-I haven't even comment on it~~
-Zamn...Somehow, this story have some cute and serious moment..
-That'll make me mood swinging~ But it's still awesome though!!~
-Oh, Mayu don't really need friends huh? Hm.....
-But! I was still in shock that the fact where...Mayu slept with a girl!!
-*shook head* Nah...Actually i like it!!~ *thumbs up + evil grin*

>Anyway, i'll be looking forward for the next one!! Thanks~

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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 2 {MaYuki}
« Reply #18 on: July 22, 2013, 08:34:52 AM »
Mayu fell in love with Yuki at first sight..

Oh Rena have long way to make Mayu forget Yuki..

I don't know who to root a pair.. I want MaYuki and RenaMayu.. :banghead:

Can RenaMaYuki be together?

Or better yet Mayu and me, myself and I be together.. Ahaha.. Please let the girl have her dreams.. :oops:

Looking forward for more :fap

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Re: ~Revenge~ 13.07.21 Chapter 2 {MaYuki}
« Reply #19 on: July 22, 2013, 01:03:38 PM »
ehhh?! poor rena she's so sweet here :( :heart:
mayu is so cold as always :bigdeal:
i actually love the renamayu moments :deco:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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