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Re: Travle To A Distant World Chapter 11- The Live (2013/June/24)
« Reply #160 on: June 25, 2013, 09:21:53 AM »
Garhh!!~!~ Still can't contact the OW...poor Takamina...But oh well~~
 :oops: :huhuh :O

~Kyaa!~!~ Concert!~!~!~ I'm glad that the member like it!~!~ Takamina is amazing!~!~
 :inlove: :w00t: :D

~Uhuhuhuhu...Yuko~~ She tap her leg even though her mouth is busy!~!~ Heavy rotation!~!~
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~Takamina don't really take a bath with AKB OW member...That's why~~ Aw Jane~~
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~Uhuhuh...Somehow, i'm looking forward for Takamina to be teased!~!~
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~Anyway!~! Pls update soon, well i mean...I'll be looking forward for wednesday!~!~!~
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Re: Travle To A Distant World Chapter 11- The Live (2013/June/24)
« Reply #161 on: June 25, 2013, 10:26:48 AM »
minami so cool~~
I cant wait what will happen next... Thank god its wednesday tom XD
And again...thank you for awesome update arrow!
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Re: Travle To A Distant World Chapter 11- The Live (2013/June/24)
« Reply #162 on: June 25, 2013, 10:55:50 AM »
I was away for the weekend and there my internet connection was limited... I saw your updates but I decided I wanna read it on my laptop with ease and concentrated on the story without interruptions rather than reading it on my phones screen with hot sun burning me to exhaustion and lots of things interrupting my peaceful reading...

So I had a blast reading this and OMG, I can't even comment properly other than:


Yuko-sama's soul recognized Heavy Rotation, but she doesn't know that yet~  :ding: She is warming up for Takamina, she was worried when Takamina acted rashly in Chapter 10... owh, I was grinning at that scene~  :hehehe: And she with Kojiharu... what are they doing in their room at nights, huh?  :kekeke:


Rena-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :luvluv1: :luvluv2: Uwa, she is so awesome in this, together with Atsuko seeing through Takamina's eyes~ Those two... no wonder they are my No.2 and No.3 idols~ *irrelevant*  :hee: gah, I am so happy with Rena-sama being more than just a side character~  :wriggly:


Atsuko is Atsuko. I like her perception and the way she treats Takamina~ Acchan, it was so clever of you to tell to Sasshi about the sword~


Which comes to the point where I have to LOL at Sasshi  :mon lmao: She is epic, no matter what, nee?


Ah, Karen was so sweet here~


Apparently I have nothing to say more than squealing about my favorites...  :mon sweat: :mon innocent:


Anyway, I agree with Haruko and others, I also think the citizens(?) found out about the concert or Minami being there and they want to have fresh blood...  :mon scare: Takamina...this time I think you should let Yuko-sama, Rena-sama and Acchan save your ass  :mon geek:



I am waiting for the moment the AW talk with the OW... And oh, I wanna see the teasing about the ofuro taimu~  :mon XD:


I'll be waitin for your update on Wednesday... *checks calendar* Tomorrow!!!! Yay!!!  :mon dance:
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Travle To A Distant World Chapter 12- Start of Something New (2013/June/26)
« Reply #163 on: June 26, 2013, 01:54:18 PM »
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Thanks everyone! Glad you all enjoyed the concert chapter :D You’ll see why the civilians are rampaging this chapter, some of you guessed it right!

kenjoy12: Atsuko and Rena do usually have the same thought process :)
cisda83: Lol would be safer if Jane bathed alone, but I’m sure she can handle herself...hopefully :P
X_Last-Cross_X: Glad you liked her concert! Indeed it sucks she got interrupted lol
karenchan: Glad the videos helped you feel as though you were at the concert! Thank you!
abcari: Haha thanks :) I also wish I could be at that concert :3
bunny_rabbit: At first I never planned on making Sasshi such a main lead, but the first time I included her in a scene, I knew I had to give her a big role :P Yuko would prob not enjoy knowing that another her is the lead of heavy rotation :P
Shinoki: Kind of cut off, yeah. She was close to the end :P And lol no worries I get, I love all my readers too in a none romantic way :P Thanks for the support!
Takaminafan49: Glad you got to use the net again :) I love itoshisa no accel as well!!!
FlameHazeKatsu: Lol I think I get it...like Minami would go into the room and find something that showed/displayed the relationship between rebel Atsuko and Jane right? And the whole bath thing is def a teasing opportunity that the members would not let pass.
Haruko: Glad you enjoyed the songs!
AshuraX: She’s def progressing with the whole ‘changing their minds’ thing :)
Dieyg48: Takamina being teased is always something fun to watch :P
Chichay12: You’re welcome :D Wednesday came in a flash! Hope u had a nice day too!
sakura_drop_: HOPE YOU HAD A NICE WEEKEND :D I also don’t like reading on my phone screen :P Really glad you liked the updates! Glad you like Rena’s role in this, she is one of the important characters :) Both Atsuko’s are perceptive, and Sasshi’s presence is always fun :P lol feel free to squeal about your favourites, we all do it ^__^ Hope you like this update too!

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Chapter 12 – Start of Something New                      

                         
        Atsuko and the rest of us exited through the front doors, I was at the back of the group with Sasshi. Once we came out, the citizens slowly backed away to give room for the members to step out.
        “What’s the problem?” Atsuko asked calmly.
        An angry looking guy holding a sword stepped up, “problem!? Are you kidding! You’re all holding a traitor and not doing anything about it!”
        I was taken aback...By traitor...Are they talking about me?
        “Yeah, what the hell! She should be gone by now!” Another yelled.
        Atsuko firmly took a step forward, “she is none of your concern, and we are dealing with the situation.”
        “Dealing! How! By letting her live normally like one of you, and walking around freely! She should be locked up or executed by now!” An angry woman added.
        I gulped. Oh boy. I was about to step towards the front, maybe explain things, but Sasshi placed a hand on my shoulder and shook her head.
        “No point trying to reason with any of them. They won’t listen.”

        This time Mariko walked forward, “please calm yourselves. She is under our watch; I assure you that you’re safe.”
        “Safe!? How can we be safe with that government loving traitor?”
        “I wouldn’t be surprised if she betrayed the government too in order to get what she wants!”
        “Did you forget everything she did? All the harm and suffering she caused!
        “We know full well what we are doing, she currently poses no threat. We’ll ask you to please leave” Rena spoke up.
        A young man stepped forward and glared, “Ha! No threat! I knew from the beginning she was trouble. I tried to ignore the facts first, but that thing really is the Shinigami. She definitely lives up to her name, staining her hands in blood wherever she goes. She can’t escape her past. Shinigami indeed!” he spat out.
        Shinigami?
        Atsuko charged forward and grabbed the guy by the collar, “don’t refer to her by that name! Don’t speak of things you know nothing about!” The guy looked scared, and both Yuko and Rena gently pulled Atsuko away from him.

        “...Huh. Hey! There she is!” A person in the crowed pointed a finger to me and everyone began to riot again.
        Some tried to push through the AKB members to get to me, but the members held them back.    
        Paruru grabbed hold of a guy that tried to get through, twisted his arm behind his back then pushed him towards the other citizens.  “Stay away from Takamina san!”
        “We won’t let you touch her!” Karen said as she blocked off other people.
        “Back down!” Yui sternly said.
        The one who pointed me out raised another accusing finger, “Why! Why are you defending that murderer?”
        “None of your concern” Haruna said as she stuck her tongue out to mock him. “You aren’t allowed to lay a hand on Minami”
        “You don’t understand any of the member’s thoughts on this matter” Paruru calmly said to him with a salty expression.
        Another citizen yelled out, “were any of you cowards even planning to kill her for her crimes!?”
        “That’s not any of your business” Sayanee answered.
        Yuko moved forward. “She’s our responsibility. She is under out protection at the moment. If you want to get to her, you’ll have to get through us...And let me give you some friendly advice... you don’t want to make us get serious” Yuko crossed her arms, and her small presence was enough to make the entire crowed back away.
        “Leave” Mariko said. “We’ve promised you protection and cooperation, but you must listen to what we say.”
        The crowd angrily muttered but began to leave. Soon enough, the area was clear.
        I let out a sigh of relief, and the members all relaxed too.

        “Come on, let’s get back inside” Atsuko said. We all headed back into the lobby where the others waited. I stopped and looked to all the members. They’d stuck up for me. Protected me...No, maybe not just me...But they protected the Minami they knew...

        “So, are you finishing this thing or what?” Mayu asked as I snapped out of my daze.
        “Huh?”
   “The concert genius. Your last song” she pointed out.
        “Oh, right, I mean... if you guys want!”
        “Go for it!”
        “End off the night on a positive note”
        “Take it away!”
        Members encouraged. I smiled and went back to the front. Before starting the music, I came up with an idea. “Hey! Since this is the last song and all, why doesn’t whoever wants to come up and perform as well. You saw me performing Aitakatta for a bit and saw that the choreo isn’t so bad!” I encouraged.
        Everyone looked around, seeming reluctant.
        I turned to Sasshi, “you’re chance to be an idol” I baited.
        Sasshi’s eyes lit up. “I’ll do it!”
        “I want to try too!” Karen said.
        “Me as well” Riichan came forward.
        “Oh Yuucha, let’s try!” Haruna shouted in excitement.
        “What! No!” Yuko protested.
        “Pretty please” Haruna pouted and Yuko sighed, giving in. Sasshi started the song and everyone followed my lead, most catching on quickly. Many members were shouting, laughing, and having fun. Even the members who just stood and watched smiled or clapped along

        Yes. I missed performing the most. But looking at my surroundings now...I realized I missed performing with my family even more. This feeling that I felt now, was warm and comforting, and seeing everyone’s smiles made it all the better.
               
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        Next day, I awoke in a warm and comfortable bed. I looked over to the other side of the room and saw that Atsuko’s bed was empty, already made. Must have gotten up early. After last night, everyone went off to bed. Atsuko offered me to stay here from now on instead of the cell. At first I declined, but she reassured me it was alright, and that I did have to share with someone since they still technically wanted me to always be guided by a member. Either way, I took up the offer, and waking up now, I felt great!

        I got up and fixed the bed, after that, I headed over to the private showers and got cleaned up. When I’d finished drying my hair, I saw my watch glowing on the table. Walking over, I pressed the ‘answer’ key.
        Sasshi’s image came up. “Morning! Good timing, there’s something I want to talk to you about, regarding calling your friends back home. Can you head over to my room?”
        I nodded, “yeah, I’ll be right there.” After ending the call, I got dressed then headed out towards Sasshi’s place.

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Sasshi’s POV

        Ten minutes later, I heard a knock on my door. Clicking a button beside my desk, the door automatically opened and Takamina walked in.
        “Morning” she greeted and I returned the greeting in kind. “So what did you want to talk about?”
        I took a deep breath. “I figured we’d try to contact your friends again...Except this time...I think we should try it in front of all the members” I seriously told her.
   Her eyes widened. “Wait, you mean actually letting them see my friends...but then, wouldn’t you have to explain everything? About helping the other Minami and all?” she asked with worry, since she remembered that I didn’t want to reveal this when we first learned it.
        However, my eyes sparked with resolution. “Yeah, I’m sure. After what happened yesterday, I learned it was dangerous to keep the truth hidden. The members have a right to know...and also...yesterday they proved they were understanding of a few things so, I’ll tell the truth. I’ll take responsibility! It’s something I’ve decided.”
        Takamina’s facial expression went from shock to a proud smile, “if it’s something you decided, then I’ll respect that, and I’ll be behind you all the way. So...How do we want to do this?”
        I grinned and picked up my laptop and watch. “Let’s go interrupt everyone’s breakfast in the cafeteria, shall we”
She laughed. “Alright.”

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Minami’s POV

        Sasshi and I entered the cafeteria and saw the members all eating, trying to finish their breakfast before heading off on missions or training.
        “Okay. Okay. I got this. I can do this....Am I moving yet?” Sasshi nervously asked as I sighed.
        “No Sasshi we’re still at the doors. Come on relax, I’ll be right with you.”
        She nodded and we walked through the cafeteria, heading to the other side.
        “Hey Sasshi, Takamina san, grab some food and join us,” Yui called over as we passed by her table with a few others.
        “Sorry, on a mission!” Sasshi announced as she kept going. I gave Yui an apologetic smile and followed Sasshi to the back.
        She cleared her throat and in a barely audible voice said, “Um, can I get everyone’s attention please”
        “...Sasshi...I’m right beside and even I couldn’t hear you...” I sighed. “Here let me.” I grabbed a close by chair and stood on it. “Hey! Can we please get everyone’s attention?” I shouted.
        Everyone stopped what they were doing and looked over to us. At Atsuko’s table, I saw them all eye us curiously.
        “Thanks. Um...First I want to say...Thanks for yesterday. You guys stuck up for me. Whether you thought I was ‘your’ Minami or not, I appreciate it. But I’ve been telling the truth...I’m not the Minami you know. My family...The members back home in my world are the AKB I belong with, and right now, I’m trying to find a way to get back home.” I spoke out.
        “WE’RE trying to find a way” Sasshi took her place beside me. The members looked to one another then back to us.
        “Is there something you want to explain to us” Atsuko encouraged.
        Sasshi hooked up her laptop to her watch then addressed everyone again. “Yes. I haven’t been honest with you all. The Takamina beside me has been telling the truth...She doesn’t belong in this place, and I’m the reason she’s here...Um...You see, a few month after that...incident, I made contact with Takamina.”
        There were collective murmurs amongst the members, but they all paid attention to Sasshi.
        “I just had to get in touch with her! Get an explanation! I know I should’ve told you all that I made contact but...Everyone was still angry and confused but! But I know you guys all wanted to hear from her! Find out her reasons! I thought I could maybe help her clear things up...She never really explained to me what happened, didn’t want me to get caught up her in mess. A few weeks after that...She asked me for help...And I couldn’t turn her down! I wanted to help! She asked me to make a time machine, because there we things she wanted to fix. I know it sounds impossible, but theoretically speaking a time machine could be built, at least one that could rewind time back to about a year...probably no more than that. So I promised her I’d try.”
        All the members were intently listening.
        “After working on it for awhile, I thought I managed to build one. I gave it to Takamina, but couldn’t stay to see if it worked...And then...well this all happened. Turns out my time machine was somehow a portal to an alternate dimension. Our Takamina was sent to a place where AKB are idols, and their Takamina was sent here to us. I know I should’ve told you all as soon as I realized but I was worried...However; I want to take responsibility for this so I’ll accept any penalties! I don’t regret helping Takamina! But now I need to find a way o fix this and bring both of them home”
        Everyone was quiet after the confession. I placed a hand on Sasshi’s shoulder and smiled at her.
        Silence.

        “I think it’s time we all open ourselves to the possibility” Atsuko spoke up.
        “Indeed. It does explain things...As painful as it may be to admit that there are other worlds out there. However, we should accept this is the one that we live in...And that Minami standing there...Doesn’t” Rena confirmed.
        Everyone began to chat and whisper.
        I could see Yuko clench her first beside Atsuko. “You...Really aren’t her...are you?” she said with forced calm.
        I shook my head. “Sorry.”
        “Sasshi, I believe you came here with proof as well correct? Care to share” Mariko said as Sasshi nodded.
        “Yeah! I found a way to make contact with Takamina’s world, so we can talk to them. It doesn’t always work, but it should” She     
clicked a button on her laptop that was still hooked to her watch. A large hologram screen appeared and it was glowing.
We waited.
        Everyone’s eyes were on the screen. After a few minutes...An image appeared.


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Original World

Yuko’s POV


        “Glad you can spend your day off with us Atsuko!” I said to the actress as I got down from the stage. We were all at a private practice, something we ourselves arranged for Nissan stadium in order to get Jane more used to things. Therefore no camera crews or anything, just a few of us members. Atsuko had a day off and decided to drop by and see how we were.
        “How are things?” she asked.
        Miichan stepped up, “not terrible, we’re all nervous for many reasons though!”
        Atsuko lightly laughed, “Understandable...I don’t see Jane however?”
        “She headed out with a few members to buy us some food and drinks” Yui answered.
        “Um guys...Jane’s bag is glowing”
        “Huh” We all turned to where we dropped out stuff, and true enough; the front pocket of the bag was glowing.
        “Oh, it could be Sasshi!” Miichan said as she headed over to the bag.
        “Darn it” I said. “We shouldn’t have let our Sasshi go with Jane. Can you imagine how hilarious it would’ve been if our Sasshi answered the call and then came face to face with herself!”
        Haruna smiled, “that would be entertaining”
        Miichan walked back over to us with the watch. “Okay, I’m answering it” she clicked the button and a hologram screen appeared in front of us showing Sasshi.
        “It worked! Thank gosh!” she let out a sigh of relief. “Before I say anything, Miichan, can you press a red button on the corner of the screen? It’ll increase the image size so I can see everyone with you and you can do the same”
        Miichan shrugged, “sure”

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Alternate World

        After the call got through, Miichan appeared on the screen. I heard a collection of whispers and surprise coming from the members.
        “H...Hey! That’s me!” Miichan said as she pointed to the screen with disbelief.
        Sasshi instructed Miichan to increase the hologram screen size and she did. Now all the members present with her could be seen...and my heart literally stopped. There they were...The members I knew and loved. Even though I see their faces every day here, it didn’t match up to the familiarity I felt when I looked at the ones who I truly belonged with.
        Miichan was there, Yuko, Haruna, Mariko, Tomochin, Yui, Jurina, Yuki, Sakura, Rie, Akicha, Sayanee and Atsuko!
        “Woah!” Everyone back home shouted at the same time.
        “Eh...is that...MINAMI!” All the members rushed closer to the screen and crowded together, all of them talking at once.
        “Hey, hey guys come on. One at a time” I laughed.
        “Minami! Are you okay!” Miichan shouted.
        “Are you an idiot? You have us worried like crazy!” Mariko scolded.
        “Did you seriously fight?” Rie asked.
        “Did you actually hold a concert?”
        “Are they treating you okay?”

        “I saw you naked!” Yuko suddenly shouted as all the members there smacked her head.
        I wisely chose to ignore what Yuko said at the moment, having a possible idea of what she meant. I was amazed they could all ignore everyone’s presence behind me and focus on only me. “I’m fine guys really. I’m just glad to see you all again” I smiled. Atsuko stepped through the crowed and gave me a worrying look.
        “Minami! Are you sure you’re okay?”
        I smiled, “yes, I promise. I’m really glad you’re also there Acchan”
        “Great, now that we have that settled, can we address our doubles behind you” Yuko said as she pointed.
        I laughed. “Sasshi and I told them the truth, and you guys are our proof”

        Some of the members present in the cafeteria walked up closer to the screen as well.
        “This is...amazing” Yui said.
        “Wow, so they’re all idols like you then right!” Karen smiled.
        Jurina ran up, “hey, hey! Do you have a Rena too?”
        I laughed. “Yes, but not everyone seems to be present at the moment”
        “Boo, I’m not there either” Sasshi commented.
        “Ah! Yuuchan look, it’s another you! And me!” Haruna said with excitement.
   
   The girls from my world spoke up again.
   “Ah! It’s kind of weird seeing ourselves. But you’re cute no matter what world Nyannyan!” Yuko said as Haruna blushed beside her.
   “Yuko, behave” Atsuko scolded.
   “I’m curious! Besides, I’m wondering why I look so uptight!”

   Yuko, who was beside me glared at herself, “who are you calling uptight!”
   Yuko from my world spoke up again teasingly, “how can Nyannyan fall in love with such an uptight Yuko”
   Haruna, also beside me spoke, “actually Yuuchan is very playful, she’s just occasionally grumpy”
         “Oi!”
    “Ah!” The Miichan from my world said. “Why don’t we clear up the whole misunderstanding with Jane?”
   Everyone on my side was confused while everyone in the original world exchanged glances.
   “That’s not a good idea Miichan; it’s not our place to say that. Jane needs to, and would want to do that herself” Atsuko said.
   
   Atsuko walked over beside me, “Are you referring to Minami?”
   The girls back home nodded.
   “Wait, you know something!” Yuko asked.
   “Not our place to say” the other Yuko answered.
   “Where is Minami now?” Atsuko asked.
   “She’s out with a few members fetching us food and drinks” Nyannyan answered.
   “...I don’t think this would be a proper way for you all to meet Jane again though” Atsuko said.
   Beside me, Yuko looked like she wanted to protest, but stopped herself. I’m sure they realize that nothing would be solved if they came face to face from only a screen.
   I smiled, “It’s okay, because I’m sure we’ll be able to correct things and meet in person eventually” I said with confidence. From the screen, Atsuko smiled at me.
   
   “Um guys...I’m starting to lose connection” Sasshi said as she screen began to fade in and out.
   “Minami. Be careful okay. We’ll get you back home” Atsuko said to me as the members nodded beside her.
   “Hang in there general manager! And you better be prepared for Nissan stadium!” Yuko said.
   The connection was getting worse, and the last thing we heard before it shut off was Miichan, “Oh! Jane really does miss you all!”

        ....

   “Can’t you call again” Yui asked.
   Sasshi shook her head. “It needs time...”
   Atsuko let out a calm breath. “Sasshi, I give you permission to remain in contact with Minami to try to fix this whole portal business...In private” she said sternly as she faced all the members. “No one else is to make contact when Sasshi calls, is that clear?”
   Everyone nodded. “We’ll decide and see what’ll happen when this is all resolved.”
   Mariko now addressed the group, “alright everyone, enough time was wasted. Let’s get going back to work.
   The members started leaving and Atsuko turned to me, “it’s your choice whether to continue training and aiding on missions.”
   I nodded and thanked her, assuring her I still wanted to help. She then left with Yuko and Haruna.    
   “We’ll see you later Takamina san” Yui waved.
   “Yeah, there’s a lot of things I want to ask you” Karen said excitedly. I waved to them as they too left.

   I turned to Sasshi. “Well, it that went better than expected.
   She laughed, “Yeah...Now I have to do my part to fixing this”

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        Come late afternoon, I was strolling around the base, looking for someone. I caught site of her as she walked through one of the corridors. “Rena! Wait up!” I ran to her and found out she’d just gotten back from a mission.
   “I have a favour to ask” I said.
   “What is it?”
   “Can you...Can you take me to the members graves...The ones that passed away? I...I’ve been wanting to pay my respects to them ever since I heard.
   She nodded in understanding, “alright, follow me”

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   We now stood in front of the members graves that died in battle. The graves were located in a beautiful field behind the base, protected from outsiders. I prayed for each one of them, and Rena patiently waited for me.
   After a few minutes I stood. “I...I can’t imagine losing any of my members like this...” I said solemnly.
   “Many lives are lost in battle; it’s the life we accepted. Each member knows the risks of joining.” I turned and saw Atsuko and Yuko walk up to us. They both paid their respects as well and then faced me.
   “Seems like a pretty unfair life to you guys...” I said sadly.
   “If we don’t fight for our freedom...Who will? Like Atsuko said, we chose this. We chose to trust one another and fight together” Yuko pointed out.
   “...If you don’t mind my asking...how did this rebel group come to exists”
   The three of them exchanged glance. “Technically, Takahashi Minami created the group” Rena said.
   I was taken aback. Their Minami started the group?
   Atsuko looked to me, “you’ve been honest with us, so we’ll tell you the story if you wish”

   I nodded. I wanted to know their past, their relationship. I wanted to know if they truly would kill someone they knew for a long time, even if she betrayed them. I wanted to know more about the other Minami.
   “Alright then, we’ll tell you. It all started.....”

End of Chapter 12


Actually I already have the next chapter written, but I don't want to you guys to feel as though it's too much to read so I'll upload it either tomorrow or friday :)

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Having too much to read is a good thing~

So upload it NAO! OAO

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@arrow: yeah! just like that! :3

awww...they all stuck up to her! that's awesome~ even Yuko now...hahahaha
lol I liked it when they made contact with the original word..that was fun~ (even when Yuko said she saw her naked lolol)  :whistle:
At least they all believe that Takamina is not the one that they know  :on lol:
yeah, another past coming up~  :glasses:
and maybe even Minami's name  where she got the "shinigami' will get explained as well?  :ding:
update it tomorrow~! xD hehehehe  :on drink:
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Bwahaha!~!~! Sasshi really bring me to laughter!! Aitakatta~~
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~Oh yesh!! Can contact the OW!~!~ And with AKB member from both side witnessing it?!?!?!
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~I'm just glad that AW AKB accept it calmly...and decide to cooperate with it~~
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~Ahahahah...So that's how it is, the member reaction seeing each other...AW and OW...
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~Hm...I too want to know the past, Jane created rebel AKB...And the other? I'm getting curious here~
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~I wanna know next!! Pls update the next one!! I'll be waiting for it!~!~!~ Nice masterpiece~~
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UPDEETO NAU~!!!


*cough*

Actually it was a funny chapter  :rofl:

I wanna now the past of AW and also...

Haha, Yuko-sama so epic~ :D


P.S. something was on my mind more about the chapter 11, but I forgot it... Chapter 12 was really nice and so I am waiting for the next one~
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yaaaay!!
that was so epic!!
boo the stupid commoners, at least do something instead of protesting...
lol, Yuko: "I saw you naked!"
I wonder how the uptight Yuko felt at the moment...
like maybe... [is my other self really that perverted..?]

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booo...a cliffhanger :cool2: j/k

the rebels are on stage...that should be funny :on lol:

the video-call scene was great...can't stop laughing at their convo... :hiakhiakhiak:

too bad both sasshi can't met each other...maybe next time they will :kekeke:

ahh...yuuchan and her ossan kyara never failed to made me smile and laugh :on drink: :on lol:

another funny chapter...this brighten my day :on GJ:

so...the rebel group was Jane's idea :hehehe: I wonder what was the reason behind it...does it had something to do with the shinigami-thing :kekeke:

tomorrow please come quickly... :prayers:

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Yeah... most of the rebel protecting Minami from the riot that the citizens made...

Ah... Sashi told the other rebel the truth about her involvement with Minami...

Yeah... they were able to contact each other and they cleared the doubt about Minami status...

But would they get the truth about rebel Minami involvement as to why she was labelled as the traitor later on?

Can't wait to find out about Rebel Minami's past...?

At how she built the rebel group and how she met the rest of the other group members...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Contact~! Yey! And Sasshi able to tell the truth to the rebel members.. Nice, everyone able to understand..

Uwaaa~ Can't wait to hear what the story of alternate world.. :fap

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NICE~ :twothumbs

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Today is wednesday....so that means an UPDATE......
Yatta!!!
Finally they all know the truth about the alternate word :D
Omg i cant wait what will happen next..
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YEHEY!!!!! THE TRUTH HAS BEEN REVEALED!!!!  :fap :fap :fap :panic: :panic: :panic:

TAKAMINA, PRACTICE NOW YOUR SWORDSMANSHIP RIGHT NOW!!!!!!

I like how Yuko said that they saw Takamina in naked... Hahahahaha....

Yuko was less grumpier than the Yuko in Alternate World XD

Waiting for your next update XD
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wow! that call was awesome! xD

now more back sotry~ Im waiting~

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i have a cuestion....
the atsukos in both worlds love minami right, so can we have more moments atsumina?

Update SOON

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Dont make me wait too long please! ñ_n!!


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As always, thanks for your comments and for reading! Glad everyone still likes the story :D Since you guys are all so awesome, I’m uploading chapter 13 today! I’m also glad you guys are looking forward to finding out about the past! Hope you don’t mind, the past story line will be explained in about 4-5 chapters long :)

ENJOY!

Replies:

AshuraX: Lol glad you think so, here is the next chapter, hope it was at least a short wait!
FlameHazeKatsu: Glad you enjoyed the communication b/w OW and AW, I had fun writing that :) And yes, I’ve mentioned the ‘Shinigami’ thing a couple times now in order to set it up for these coming chapters!
Dieyg48: Sasshi rules! & yes, everyone from AW was present, as for OW, only a few members were there to see what happened :)
sakura_drop_: Glad you found it to be a funny chapter, I tried to add in as many light-hearted moments as I could in this one :P
Shinoki: ‘Uptight’ Yuko was probably thinking  “what the hell is wrong with these people” when she heard OW Yuko mention the whole naked thing...and yes, she’d prob think of her as a pervert :P
bunny_rabbit: Lol, I tend to use cliff-hangers :P Glad you found the chap enjoyable! Thanks! And the two Sasshi’s meeting would be so awesome!
cisda83: Yes, the coming chapter will be focused on her past and how she met the first few members :)
kenjoy12: Glad you looked forward to it, thanks!
Chichay12: Yes finally, things should be a bit easier on Minami now with AKB :)
X_Last-Cross_X: After story time she’ll practice her swordsmanship :P Both Yuko’s are quite something eh :D
abcari: Haha thanks :D
Archer1992: Love is indeed in the air...or is it :P but yeah, it’s hard since the two Minami’s are switched, but these coming chapters about the past will have plenty of Atsumina :D

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Chapter  13 – The Birth of AKB48 part 1

Minami’s POV

   I was racing through the streets trying to lose my pursuers. Quickly glancing back, I saw they were hot on my tail, so I increased my pace and ran into a deserted alley. Just a bit further! Once I reached the familiar dead end, I crawled under the dumpster. In fact, this dumpster was completely hollow on the inside, only the borders stood. But no one knew that, and no one checked since this area was abandoned. On the inside, there was a sewer. I lifted the loose metal covering and climbed down the ladder.
   Once I was underground, I knew I was safe from the soldiers. They didn’t know about this place. Why would they? The lived liked like spoiled aristocrats, they’d never bother with areas like these. Above ground they knew their way, but I knew my way beneath the city, through the sewer system. I took out my pocket flashlight and walked along the edge and headed deeper into the tunnel. I arrived in a small isolated area covered by curtains and old pieces of wood. Moving the curtain aside, I stepped in, and took out a lighter and lit the lantern in the middle. Once the light illuminated the area, it displayed my room. My home.

   It may not seem like much at first, but it was warm and comfortable, and it kept me safe. Most would wonder why a fourteen year old girl was living in this place, but the answer was simple. Like many, I was an orphan. However, unlike many, I refused to be sent to the government to work for them. And they don’t like it when you refuse them, because they don’t like not being able to control everything and everyone. Rules were simple, if you disobey; you are an outsider, considered trash that had to be eliminated. I’d seen many adults and kids oppose the government and pay with their lives, but that didn’t faze me.
   I grabbed a small backpack and threw in a few things, including what I’d managed to steal today. Placing it on my back, I turned off the lantern and headed out.

   I’d exited the sewers through another area, and began casually walking about. There were people around, but I didn’t have to worry about them...usually at least. They were poor, weak and sick, and the government decided to just abandon this area and let these people die since they’d be of no use to them. Government soldiers rarely walked around here, and the people didn’t mind my presence, so they never alert the soldiers when they see me.
   I walked up to a broken up rusty house and knocked. An old woman answered along with one kid who was hiding behind her back.
   “Oh. Minami. So good to see you child. Honestly you do nothing but make me worried with all your running around” she smiled and I returned it in kind.
   “Good to see you again Ma’am. I brought in today’s supply; sorry it’s not as much as usual.” I emptied the bag for her that contained medicine, food, water, lighters and matches from today and previous loots.
   She gave me a disapproving look. “Child, still doing dangerous things I see. Don’t you go risking getting caught for us folk here.”
    “I won’t get caught, I promise.” Before I left, I saw the kid behind her glance over. I smiled and bent down to him. “Hey fellah, stay tough alright.” Reaching into my pocket, I pulled out a lollipop and handed it over to him. “Take care now!” I said as I left before I’d be further lectured.

                             
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   After I left the slums, I went to a more lively part of the city. Placing my hoodie on my head and hands in my pocket, I began to casually stroll through the streets.
         Okay. Now what Takahashi...Maybe I should go get something to eat. Ugh. With what money...I knew I should’ve stolen more. While deep in thought, I didn’t notice someone coming out through the doors and I collided into them. I fell on my back and my hoodie flew off my head. “Ow,” I groaned while slowly lifting myself up.
   “Are you okay?” I looked up and saw a tall beautiful girl with short hair stretching out her hand for me to take. Looking at her, she could almost pass for some model. She only looked about 4-5 years older than me but the air around her was completely different than me.
   I ignored her outstretched hand and stood myself up, dusting off my clothes and putting my hood back on. “Yeah I’m fine; it was my fault for bumping into you. Sorry.” I wasn’t usually self conscious around people, but I was totally dirty compared to her, and figured she probably wanted to be nowhere near me as well.
   She smiled. “Then we’re both guilty, I wasn’t paying attention either. Sorry.”
   I nodded and was about to leave, but she grabbed my arm and said, “Wait, as an apology, why don’t I treat you to lunch or something”
   I was shocked for a second...and tempted. But I didn’t know this girl or what she wanted, for all I knew she could be with the government or is planning to sell me out to them if she’d recognized me.
   I shook my head, “no thanks. I ain’t hungry.” She seemed saddened as I declined her but then her smile returned. “Well, let me make it up to you the next time we cross paths. I’m Shinoda Mariko” she introduced. I just nodded and started walking away, but then I heard her call out.
   “It was nice to officially meet you Takahashi Minami”
   I whirled around with a shocked expression but saw she was no longer there. Who the heck is she...

                                     
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        I kept roaming the streets even after dark, not really in a mood to return home.

        “Well, well, what do we got here. A kid walking all alone during night time. Hey kid, where’s your badge? Do you belong to a branch of the government?”

        I stopped in my tracks and ducked behind a trash bin. Looking over, I saw two soldiers talking to a young girl. It was hard to make out her features in the dark, and her back was to me. The soldiers kept grilling her for answers but she wasn’t saying anything. What are you doing idiot. Run! I slowly started pulling out a dagger from my boot. Damn it Takahashi, you’re not supposed to get yourself involved in these kinds of situation anymore. I took a deep breath and stepped out when I saw the soldier place his hand on the girls shoulder.” Grabbing my dagger from its end, I hurled it through the air. It struck right through the soldier’s hand.

        “Ahhhhh!” he screamed out.  His partner turned to my direction and glared. I grabbed another dagger and prepared to throw it.
        “Didn’t your parents ever teach you not to bully girls” I remarked. The other soldier looked to me and narrowed his eyes.
        “Hey, aren’t you that little brat that keeps robbing us.” His partner was still busy screaming so he was preparing to pull out his gun,  I was also readying myself as well. However, before either of us could make a move, the mystery girl kicked the soldier behind his knee and brought him down, using that opportunity; she grabbed his gun from his belt and shot him right through the head. Swiftly, she turned and shot the other soldier dead.
        I stood there frozen. Shocked. Did she kill them just like that!? I began to take a slow step back, not wanting to catch her attention. A rule of survival was not to catch a person with a gun’s attention. One step back and I slightly hit the trash bin. Instantly, the girl turned and pointed the gun at me. Suddenly, I could make out her features. She was young, maybe around my age. She had short black hair and piercing eyes. She held a blank expression as she aimed the gun my way.
        “Woah! Hold up! I’m not your enemy!” I shouted.
        She raised an eyebrow but still kept the gun locked on me.
        “If you didn’t notice back there, I was trying to save you” I pointed out.
        She titled her head slightly and gave me a questioning look, “does it appear as though I need ‘saving’”
        I glanced at the two dead soldiers then back at her, “clearly I misinterpreted the situation, they’re the ones who needed saving” I grinned but she still didn’t lower her gun. “Oh come on, just put the gun down and we can both go back to our own business.” I said, slightly getting annoyed.
        “You cost me valuable information. I was going to question these two, but your interference left me no choice but to eliminate them” she stated with a frustrated look.
        “You’ve got to be kidding! You shot them! Not like you had to, I only impaired the one guy” What the heck it up with this chick.
        “You’re interference still cost me, and the least you could do is take responsibility”
        “You’re insane’ I remarked.
        She smiled, as though I’d given her a compliment. “The soldier mentioned you were the thief who’d been stealing from them. I’ve heard rumours of you.”
        “You’ve got the wrong person” I stated.
        She faked shock, “really, I don’t believe I do. It’s not nice to lie to someone holding a gun on you yah know”
        I sighed. “What do you want?”
        “Your assistance. I was going to use these two idiots to get information on one of their base camps in order to bag some supplies. Clearly I can’t do that now since they’re dead” she said. Yeah and whose fault is that. “So, since you seem to have a talent at thievery, I’d like you to help us”
        Us? There’s more of her...Honestly Takahashi, just what have you gotten yourself into, and this is why you don’t get involved!  “So all I have to do is help you steal from government soldiers?”
        She nodded.
        I sighed in defeat. “Fine. I’ll help. Now can you put your gun down?”
        She grinned, “Not yet...First, come closer and hold still”

        .....

        “Is this a joke!!!?” I shouted as I tried to pull off the collar she placed around my neck.
        She finally lowered her gun and shrugged, “It’d be troublesome if you tried running away so I figured this was the best way to keep you around”
        I glared at her, “and how exactly does a stupid collar keep me around?”
        “Well first, its lock mechanism can only be unlocked by me at the moment, and it has a built in tracker, so if you tried to break your deal in helping, we’d just track you down using that”
        “You really are insane!” I said shocked as I kept trying to take the collar off. It was a black leather collar that hung a bit loose around my neck.

        “Stop complaining. I’ll take it off after you help us.”
        I let out a frustrated breath. This is humiliating. “Fine already. Let’s just get this over with.”
        She smiled, “then let’s go and meet up with my friends. Oh, right, how rude of me, I forgot to introduce myself” After everything you did this is the part you consider rude! I swear, this girl...
        “I’m Maeda Atsuko, nice to meet you...” she waited for me to tell her my name as we kept walking.
        “I don’t casually go telling strangers my name” I stated.
        “Oh, I see, well then, I suppose I could always give you a name in the meantime” she pretended to be deep in thought, and I was scared with what name she’d come up with. “Oh, I know. How about Pumpkin! ...Or Daisy! Oh, I know, how about... Sweetie!” she walked a bit ahead and turned to look at me with a playful grin. I held a horrified expression and my face grew a bit red.
       Is this seriously the same girl I just met 10 minutes ago! “Ah shut up! It’s Minami okay!”
She gave me her angelic smile again...wait, angelic? The hell am I saying? Everything about her is pissing me off! “I’m honoured you’re giving me permission to address you by your first name already. In that case, call me Atsuko” she teased.
        I blushed again. Annoyed at how easily she was controlling the situation. “Don’t get me wrong! I just don’t want to go blurting out my last name. And I ain’t calling you anything” Damn it! She was messing me with.

           
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        We arrived at an abandoned building after a few minutes, and Maeda led me inside and up the stairs. “Here we are” she said as she entered in a pin number by the door and it opened. She stepped in and I followed. As soon as I entered, I felt a presence close by and took out my dagger and outstretched the weapon towards a girl who aimed a gun at me. The gun was placed by my temple and my dagger by her neck.
        “You’re quick” The girl complimented with a squirrel like grin.
        “Thanks” I said guardedly.
        “Yuko, she’s a guest, play nice” Maeda instructed.
        “Sure thing” the girl named Yuko said as she lowered her gun and I followed by lowering my own weapon. I glanced around and saw that this entire floor was remodelled. Though the building looked old from the outside, this floor looked pretty new. There were beds, chairs, desks and weapons all around.
        “What is this place?” I asked.
        “Home” Yuko said, and then turned to Maeda. “Which is why I’m surprised you brought her in Atsuko. Even with new recruits we have to take proper precautions, not show them our place right away” she said with no real anger in her voice. She actually seemed entertained and amused.
        “Its fine, we can trust her” Maeda stated. I raised an eyebrow at that. How can she say that so easily...?
        “Oh Atsuko san, you’re back, how did the mission go?” Another girl appeared, dark black hair with her hair tied in a side ponytail. Her clothes were covered in grease and I saw she was surrounded by a lot of equipment that was in pieces. The girl looked at me and her eyes widened a bit, “um...Atsuko san, why is she wearing the dog collar that you were supposed to plant on one of the mutts supposedly headed to one of the government facilities?”
       
        “So this is a dog collar!” I said out loud and caught everyone’s attention. Yuko came for a closer look and started to laugh.
        “Looks like Atsuko finally found herself a pet to play with”
        “Get your head out of the gutter Yuko, only you and Haruna would play games like that.” She said nonchalantly. She looked over to me and gave an innocent smile, “the collar does suit her though”
        “Th...That’s not funny!” I complained as she gave a small laugh.
        Yuko joined in and gave me a light smack on my back, “looks like she already knows how to pull your strings. Atsuko’s got a knack for figuring people out”

        After that little display, Maeda explained the deal between me and her.

        “So you’re the rumoured Robin Hood huh” Yuko grinned. “Steal from the rich and give to the poor. You’ve got quite a name for yourself. Apparently you keep slipping out of the government’s reach, someone they can’t catch. Pretty impressive”

        I shrugged, not really finding it such a big deal.

        Yuko walked over to me and kept staring, “what?” I said defensively.
        “So you’re name is Minami huh...You look familiar. Have we met before?” she curiously asked.
        “Yuko, you already have a girlfriend, don’t go try picking up other girls” Maeda scolded.
        Yuko pointed at me, “Please, I’d never go for a kid like her. Haruna is all I need”

        Yuko seemed to have forgotten about her previous question and I sighed in relief. “So when do we start your little operation?” I asked.

        Another girl who I didn’t notice sat up from the couch and tossed the magazine she was reading. Was she there the whole time? She had long golden brown hair, and as she stood, she walked over to us. “I’m surprised you haven’t asked us any questions about this place, who we are or what we’re doing.”

        I looked to all of them and shrugged. “I honestly don’t care. I promised to help with you this task so I’ll do that, get this dang collar off and then be on my way.”

        “Well, aren’t you a sociable one” The tech girl said sarcastically.

        Yuko grinned, “Let us at least properly introduce ourselves. I’m Oshima Yuko, you already met Maeda Atsuko. Over there is Sashihara Rino, and this beautiful girl here is Kojima Haruna. She’s my girlfriend, so don’t go trying anything funny”
        “I’ll try to contain myself” I said sarcastically with a role of my eyes. Atsuko grinned.

         “I like you so far Minami” Oshima said. “Well it’s late, so we’ll rest for the night and figure out what the plan is tomorrow.”

        I was taken aback. “Huh. Wait, we’re not going tonight?”

        “Usually we strike at night but we’d had missions all day so we’re pretty tired.” Kojima said.
        “Just stick with us here for tonight Minami san and make yourself at home” Sashihara said as as she bid good night and walked over to one of the beds.

        Oshima and Kojima headed to the next room and I was left standing with Maeda still present. You’ve gotten to be kidding. How can they go about their day and relax when a stranger is present. I just want to finish the dang mission and leave...

        “One night won’t kill you yah know. We’ll finish the mission tomorrow and then you can be on your way if you wish” she told me.

        I nodded and looked around the room. For some reason feeling uncomfortable. This whole day was weird. I wasn’t used to meeting people around my age or used to places like this. The unfamiliarity of the whole situation made me nervous. My way of living was simple. By myself, underground. That’s where I felt comfortable. 

        Maeda must have sensed my discomfort because she came over and grabbed hold of my hand in hers. I blinked in surprised and instinctively flinched. Her hold did not waver and I looked at her. “I’m sorry. I know you don’t want to be here. But we really could use your help” This time I saw she was being serious, and that she honestly meant what she said. She struck me as a mystery, a girl with many faces.
        I hadn’t asked what any of these girls were doing here or what they planned to do. But I didn’t need to. Everyone had their own situations and past. One thing we each most likely had in common was...that we were trying to survive in this world.
        I gave a light sigh. “It’s fine. I promised I’d help so I will. I’m just... not good around people” I reluctantly admitted.
        She smiled, still holding my hand, “I can tell...But you’re not doing so bad...and thank you. You’re actually being pretty nice for someone who was forced into this. I should’ve handled things differently” she said with a slight pout.
        In that moment I told myself that I missed her smile, and didn’t want her to look sad...weird. I’m used to seeing sad faces in this world, but maybe...seeing her smile before...it made me want to protect it-knowing that people could still show such an innocent expression.
         “I already told you its fine. You did what you had to in order to get my cooperation. It took guts so I respect that about you, because I assure you I would’ve escaped if you hadn’t placed this tracker on me” I told her and she lightly laughed.
        “Yes well, you learn a few things from growing up in a place like this”
        “Tell me about it” I muttered. I suddenly felt my hand becoming warm. “Um...your hand” I nervously said.
        She looked down and was surprised to see she was still holding my hand, “sorry” This time I could’ve sworn I saw her face becoming red. Must be my imagination.
        “You can take my bed over there by Rino, I’ll take the couch”
        “It’s not like I’m an actual guest you know. Let me take the couch”
        “It’s fine. You take the bed” she stubbornly said.
        “No it’s not. It’s your bed; I’m fine with the couch”
        We both glared at each other, neither one of us budging.
        “Look, I’m trying to be nice, just take the bed” she said.
        “I didn’t ask you to be nice.” I remarked.

        “For crying out loud decide already! We’re trying to sleep! ” We heard Oshima shout from the other room.

        I turned back to her and decided another approach, “Maeda, I’m honestly more comfortable sleeping on a couch. I’m used to it. So please” I reasoned.
        She was taken aback by my change in attitude and nodded. “Alright. If you need anything, let us know” I nodded in response. “Goodnight” she said.
        “Goodnight” I walked over to the couch, took off my boots and lied down. It’s been a long time since I had someone to say that too...Closing my eyes, I drifted off to sleep.

                 
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        Some racket in the morning awoke me. I rubbed my eyes and had to remind myself where I was. Getting up from the couch, I saw the girls preparing a simple breakfast. Oshima spotted me, “Oi Minami, just in time. Come join us” I blinked back surprise, got up and walked over. They’d made scrambled eggs and had bread.
        I sat down and ate with them.
        “So what’s your secret” Kojima suddenly asked. I literally chocked on my food and had to drink some water to get it down. “M...my secret?”
        She tilted her head, “yes, I’m curious to how you always give the government the slip after stealing from them” Oh, she’s talking about that.

        In that moment though, I realized something. If I were to help them, that’d mean I’d have to take them through the underground root. I’d never shown anyone that before. It was my only advantage against the government, could I trust telling my secret to these girls.
I caught Atsuko’s eyes and she seemed to have noticed my hesitation. I sighed. I did promise I’d help them...And I don’t think they’re working for the government...Maybe it’ll be okay. Maybe I should learn to take chances again. This is way too many ‘maybes’ for my liking...
        “I use the sewers as my getaway” I finally answered. They all looked at me, so I explained to them how I’d mapped out the entire underground route, all the entrances and exits, and that’s how I always gave them the slip.
        They were all shocked. “Wow, I didn’t even know something like that existed. That’s amazing!” Oshima said.
        “It really is amazing, and you say you’ve mapped it all out in your head!”
        I shrugged. “I didn’t want to have any paper records of it in case someone got a hold of them. It’s easy to get lost or hurt down there so I figured I’d leave the advantage to myself”

        Oshima looked to everyone then back at me, “and you never thought to use that to your advantage more?’
        I raised an eyebrow.
        “I mean, you said it yourself, you have this huge advantage, you could do a lot of damage to the government, but instead you’re just stealing things from them”
        I narrowed my eyes, “I am doing something. Taking their supplies and giving it to others.”
        Oshima glared back, “not that your little Robin Hood thing isn’t cute and all, but you’re not even putting a dent to the government.   You’re just stealing supplies that they’ll eventually steal back from other people”
        “I’m not trying to run a crusade here, I’m just doing what I can to survive” I shot back.
        “You mean you’re just continuing to let yourself be oppressed by those bastards. You’re not fighting back, you’re running away” she countered smoothly.
        I gritted my teeth as she hit a nerve, “I’m not running away!” I yelled and got to my feet.
        “But you’re not fighting either” Oshima calmly said as she continued to eat her food.
        “I never said I wanted to. I’m not trying to go around acting out vigilante justice. I’m just trying to live!” This conversation was getting me fed up.
        “Yuko san...” Sashihara said worriedly.
        “What you’re doing can’t be considered living. I’m sure you realize that surviving in this messed up world means more than just staying alive. It means fighting for our freedom. That’s what we’re doing”
         “So that’s how it is huh. You’re all planning to destroy the base, not just steal their stuff, aren’t you?” I let out a bitter laugh. “I need fresh air” I declared as I walked to the couch and grabbed my jacket.
        I heard Atsuko stand up, “Minami, wait”
        I stopped and turned back around. “I promised you I’d get you in, and I’ll keep that promise. But that’s all I’ll do.”  I took one step then looked back to them. “Everyone has their own way to fight; you have no right to criticize people for not following your ideals...Otherwise you’ll be doing no different than the government” I could see their expressions finally falter as they flinched at what I said. Then I headed out.


End of Chapter 13


Forgot to mention, I'll try to put up the next chapter by saturday :)
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Offline Dieyg48

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Ohhh!~!~ I see...at first Jane is doing all that to survive....Naruhodo..
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~Ahahah...Atsuko do have many face...change of mood...everything~~ LOL
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~Ohh...Jane decide to cooperate with them...And knowing only few of them...Or is it just them?
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~Ahh...That collar thing is very hilarious...Robin hood eh??~ Ahahah lol
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~Well, i'll be waiting for the next part, can't wait to dig the past even deeper...Nice update btw~!~
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...ah... read read~
lol, collar... it was a dog collar~
your updates are so epic and fast <3

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uaaaa...nice shot..... :on GJ:
takamina san was always cool!!
I wonder what will happen next...can't wait to know...
pls update as fast as you can.....huhuhu :kneelbow:

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