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_Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter Three
« on: June 07, 2013, 11:11:22 PM »
Haro~!  it's me again  :mon beam:

And i'm back with another fanfic of  :on asmo:

ANYWAY! This fanfic....will have an start.... xD

Anyway, let's just start!

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PROLOGUE
''Kai-chan?''

''Hm?''

''Would you mind to move your ass and get here?''Kojima Riku who was started to get annoyed by his friend Takahashi Kai, who isn't helping them at all.
''Yes, I do mind''Kai yawned and continued half-sleeping on the chair.

''Mario, can you make Kai help us a little here?''Riku turned to his friend Shinoda Mario who was busy cleaning the tables in the restaurant they work in.Actually, Mario is the owner of the restaurant and his friends work there.And as you can see, Kai isn't working and they are trying to make that lazy kid work.

''Kai, did you get some sleep yesterday?''Mario who was starting to get worried about his friend who always works and it's pretty unusual to see him like that.
''Nope, I'm totally going to die''He sighed.

''What happened?''

''Exams! Freaking exams!! and Acchan won't let me get some damned sleep! I have to like study everyday, every hour, every freaking minute!!''He cried out and kicked the table in front of him and went back to half-sleeping on the chair.
''Hahahahahaha, omg I really love your girlfriend''Mario laughed and patted his friends shoulder.
''Shaddap! You have no idea what kind if hell i'm going through''

''Oh please, I did that on Kuu too''He gave his friend a smirk and pat his head like he was a little kid and went away laughing.
''Gaaay!!''

''Same on you, bebe~''It was actually true, Mario was gay and had a boyfriend named Minegishi Kuu.So don't get so exited ladies~
He had a lot of trouble with hid father who wouldn't just accept the fact that his son was gay and he did a lot of thing to make him think his straight.Which didn't work at all and at the end his father accepted the fact that his son was gay.
''I'm not gay! I freaking have a girlfriend''Kai shouted.

''Yeah yeah, I bet you're cheating on her with some guy''Mario grinned.

''Who's cheating on me?''A sudden voice was heard.
''Oh fuck!''Kai cursed and shot Mario a glare.
''No cursing''Said the voice again and smacked Kai.

''Gomen, Acchan''He pouted and rubbed the spot.
''Now, who's cheating on me?''The so-called-Acchan asked.Making the poor Kai sigh and reply.''No one, just Maritroll trolling''

''Really?''Acchan raised her eyebrow still not sure if Kai was telling the truth.
''I swear no one is cheating on you, I was only dying here trying to get some damned sleep with no one of those two are giving me it''Kai then hugged Acchan's stomach and closed his eyes while leaning on her stomach trying to sleep.While caressing his hair she shot Mario a glare.

''You made me worried!''She hissed.

''Haha, gomen but he called me gay''

''Shaddap and let me sleep''Kai mumbled and snuggled closer to Acchan.

''You should really go easy on him Atsuko''Riku spoke.''And let him fail? Never''

''Well at least give him some sleep''

''I'm giving him 10 hours of sleep...''

''What? I only sleep for 6 hours and can work perfectly fine, what's with him?''Ruki had that one and only expression ----> O.O

''He sleeps for 15 hours..which's like..more than half of the day''Acchan sighed.''He even sleeps on our dates!''The pouting Acchan said.

''Oh my, kill him! If I did that when I and Yuu where on our date...he'll probably harass me to no end''Riku said.Oh yeah, he's also gay...but don't worry cause not all of them are gay, but most of them have girlfriends, so ladies..if you wanna kill me, you're free to do so.Just kidding, i'm to young and handsome to be slapped (Juju's line from Kataomoi Finally (The slapping part near the end).

''Hello guys''A husky voice was heard.They all turned to the owner only to find sexy girl standing there looking at them.''Hello, Tomochin''Atsuko greeted back with a hug.Kai looked up from Acchan's stomach.''Hello Tomo''He mumbled and went back sleeping while hugging Acchan closer to him.

''Hello Chin''Mario smirked and gave his friend a hug but only got a slap on his back and a not-so-sweet-smile as a reply.And then the group of friend continued their talking and teasing......

~~~~~___~~~~~

And here I am..the author....I just got beaten up by some random antis who stalked me and i'm now...bleeding to death T^T

Anyway! I'll just fade...byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~  :mon bye:
« Last Edit: June 21, 2013, 06:21:30 PM by WotaOtaku~ »

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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2013, 11:19:18 PM »
omg i wnat to know more

awww how sweet YUUxRIKU

ang MARIOxKUU

I want to know more I and I want more marimii ^^

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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2013, 11:22:57 PM »
This is so gay XD

I wonder how this will pan out
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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #3 on: June 08, 2013, 02:10:32 AM »
ah ~
so intresting :3
acchan scary lol, and mario and riku gay lol  :rofl:



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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2013, 03:49:15 PM »
Yeah... Kai, Riku and Kuu...

I have always like Mendol male characters....

Eh... Kuu and Mario were gay... Ah... I thought you would make Mario with Miichan...

Well it's fine just the same person different gender only...

Poor Kai, he was being pushed to study... Atsuko very harsh...

Eh... 15 hours of sleep was more than enough... more like too much... making Kai even more tired...

Ah... Riku and Yuu were gay too...

Erm... Tomochin... was there too... what's her relationship with other?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the prologue

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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2013, 04:14:31 PM »
Awww. . . Kai is soo cute!  :wub: snuggling with Acchan

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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #6 on: June 08, 2013, 04:26:24 PM »
a few fine, gay men here...this is gonna be interesting!
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Re: Young Love _____ PROLOGUE (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc)
« Reply #7 on: June 10, 2013, 06:57:13 PM »
The GE killed me and I just can't anymore xDD

SasshiCentaa~ I'm pretty sad that mayuyu didn't become the Center but it's ok ^~^

Anyway! Let's just begin :)


Stato chapie one~!!

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''Acchan, please give me a break''The poor Kai was getting lectured by his So-Damn-Sexy-Girlfriend.

''Shut up Kai and focus!''

''Acchan~ please, I beg you just give me a break or I'll die''The poor Kai lied down on the floor and closed his eyes.

''Kai, I don't want you to fail this exam''She sighed.''Plus you failed in every exam and I don't want you to fail in this one, you're in your last year of high school''

''But never meant you have to kill me and not let me get any sleep''He said with eyes still closed.

''Kai, are you serious here? I go to your house everyday around 7 and you go to sleep around 10''She sighed and sat down beside him.

''And when do I wake up?''He mumbled.

''School start 9 and you wake up 8:45''

''How the hell you do you know about that? Are you stalking me or something?''He opened his eyes and stared at her with a confused look.She smiled slowly.''Maybe''She teased and played with his brown, soft hair.
''I'm hungry~''He whined and put his head on Acchan's lap.

''Want me to cook something for you?''Acchan asked.

''Ah! No, no, no, no thanks I'll live like this for a few more seconds then I'll go and make something for myself''He quickly took a firm hold of Acchan's arm so she won't go make him something.He remember the first time she was going to make something and she nearly started a fire, it took her a while and she came to him with some green soup.After drinking the soup he had stomachache for a week, and he doesn't want that to happen again.

''Are you sure? I can go and make you a sandwich or something''She asked again.

''Yes! I'm 100% sure that i'm NOT going to make you poison me again''After saying that he got a fist in his head.

''Say what?!''He didn't even need to look at Acchan to see the scary aura as he was already feeling it.'Great, now how the hell will you get out of this shit Kai?'He cried out mentally.

''Nothing!''He said quickly and stood up.''I'll just go make some food''He shouted and jumped down form the stairs.Yes! He freaking jumped down.But  the stairs wasn't high so he was fine.And then ran to the kitchen before Acchan could kill him.

Upstairs sat Acchan in her room looking at the door where hher stupid boyfriend ran out from.''Baka''She mumbled and went down.


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''Mariiiiiiiiiio~''A crying boy came running to the group of friend who where sitting in the schools cafeteria chatting happily.He opened his arms and hugged Mario.
''Huh? Kuu? What's wrong?''Mario asked but then got his answer when he saw his fangirls running after Kuu.What was good with Kuu was that he is fast which is really helpful sometimes.
''M-Mario y-you f-fangirls are s-scary''He stuttered and sat on Mario's lap.

''Aww, kawaii''Mario smirked as he saw his 'fan' near him and gave Kuu a peck on his lips.The whole group of fangirls nearly fainted.

''Mario-sama! Why don't you come with me? I'll make you the happiest person on earth!''One of the girls shouted.
''No! Mario-sama if you'll be my boyfriend I'll make you happy!''Another shouted.

''Mario-sama! Come with me!!''One of his crazies fans shouted and was about the drag Kuu.''Oi! Whi the hell gave you the rights to touch MY Kuu?!''Mario suddenly shouted and slapped the girl's hands away from Kuu.
Suddenly the whole cafeteria got quiet as they watched the whole scene.''Eh?''The girls manged to get out.
''I said, who the hell gave you the rights to touch MY Kuu?!''
''...I...''
''I guessed it right, no one did...so if you want or not.Go away''Mario glared at the girl and went back chatting with the others with Kuu in his lap.The girl ran away crying while the other girls followed after her.
''D-did the they g-go?''The poor Kuu stuttered and looked up slowly.He was hugging Mario while burying his face into Mario's chest and looking up with his round eyes.
''Aww, Kuu-chan kawaii''Mario squealed and hugged the kid in his arms.Actually Kuu is in his last year of high school so he is not that young.But cause he's small and acts like a kid his friends calls him Kuu-chan.
''Kuu-chan's not cute''Kuu said and pouted which made Mario squeal more.

''Soo...guys, we have two more weeks and it'll be our last year in school''Riku said.''And i'm excluding Jun, Mayuyu and Non-chan here''He added after he saw the stares of the younger kids.
''Well, they still have two more years..and same for Paruru and Yui-chan, except that they have one more year''Yuu, Riku's boyfriend stated the obvious.And earned a few eye-rolls and a smack from his beloved Riku.
''So?''Tomochin looked at her friend not understanding what the girl meant.
''Why don't we go for a summer vacation somewhere?''She asked grinning.

''Are you serious?''Jun looked at her with a I'm-Not-Believing-You look.

''Yes! I've never been this serious!''

''Acchan, stop dreaming we don't have money for this''Mayuyu said while eating her bento.
''Money is not a problem...I can ask my daddy for some''Tomochin said.
''What the hell is your father's job? It' like he owns everything on earth''Jun mumbled.
''Shut up! Your whole family is a Yukaza family, I bet you're a rich old brat!''Kai glared at Jun who was sitting beside him.
''Shut up old man!''
''Shut up both of you! You're scaring my baby''Mario glared at the two and hugged Kuu-chan.''Don't be scared Kuu-chan, they're just kid who're fighting over a doll''Mario teased while patting Kuu's head.
''Shaddap old hag!''Both of Kai and Jun shouted in unison.

''Anyway! What do you guys think?''

''But, where are we supposed to go Acchan?''Mario asked.
''Hm....how about, New York?''
''Ehhh?? New York? I heard it's a great place...''Yuu said.''See, even Yuu agrees''Acchan said.
''...For shopping...''Yuu added making the other guys facepalm.''We are NOT going shopping''Kai said leaning on Acchan's shoulder and closed his eyes.

''I'll end up with thousands of bags to carry for her''Kai mumbled and pointed at Acchan who was glaring at him.

And so...the group of friends never ended their chatting.But they all decided they'll go to France for a graduating trip and a summer vacation trip.


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So...end..  :mon scare: ehm.....I meant the end of this chapter  :mon lol:

Anyway! Comments are always welcome!  :hee: Ignore my stupid typos and have a nice day  :mon closeup:

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter One
« Reply #8 on: June 10, 2013, 07:06:19 PM »
I like the Kai/Acchan interaction and just looking at it, I feel weird after reading this XD
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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter One
« Reply #9 on: June 10, 2013, 07:19:59 PM »
Awwww they are so sweet

kyaaaaa~ mario and kuu-chan are so cute

I want more ^^
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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter One
« Reply #10 on: June 10, 2013, 07:28:29 PM »
I feel weird after reading this XD

Same with me..  Hehe >_<

But the chapter 1 soo funny! :lol: Everything so funny! Like how Kuu went to Mario for helped. Jun and Kai arguement and shouted at Mario! That was so FUNNY! :thumbsup Then Kai and Acchan moments just can't stop my giggling when Acchan was about to cook for Kai.. >_<

Whoa! France! Can't wait what will happen there? And can't wait to see more characters interaction.. :thumbsup

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter One
« Reply #11 on: June 11, 2013, 12:00:21 AM »
at first I was like, GAY?
And then I was like, eh.. even though I don't go for shonen-ai or bl this is interesting
then, meh... yakuza ftw!! Jun~kun~ Kuu-chan~ lol

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter One
« Reply #12 on: June 11, 2013, 01:13:24 AM »
It's kinda funny xD

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« Reply #13 on: June 11, 2013, 04:13:21 AM »
Poor Kai being hassled to study again...

Well it was his fault to fail on his every exams.. how could he graduate?

How could he go to the same Uni as Atsuko?

He also nearly being poison again by Atsuko...  :lol:

Kuu was so cute and Mario was so sweet and spoil Kuu...

Mario was so scary... he scared all his fans... so that they would not come near Kuu and him again...

Their friendship was very interesting... bickering on each other...

Great... they were going to go to France for the vacation...

So nice place...

Can't wait to see what happen with them during their trip in France

Thank you for the update

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter One
« Reply #14 on: June 11, 2013, 10:23:53 PM »
@kurosawa87 - why? why so weird?  :?

Anyway! Let's just start!


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''Wait! Are we seriously going to France?''Kai asked lazily while lying on the couch watching TV while his 'wife' was packing for the vacation.

''Yes, we're going, now pack your things lazy man!''

''Please Acchan, let me watch this episode of One Piece, I haven't seen any One Piece in years''He begged while Atsuko stood in front of the TV.''Kai...''

''Come one, it won't hurt..just this once''He pleaded and gave her a quick kiss on her lips and dragged her back to the couch with him to watch his favorite anime.
After finishing the anime they packed together and sat down on the couch again.''So, when are we going to France?''Kai asked again.Actually they all talked about it a week ago but he got sleepy and ended up sleeping on Atsuko's shoulder.
''Tomorrow''Acchan answered simply while trying to find something interesting on the TV.

''WHAT?!''

''What? It's tomorrow morning''Acchan looked at him with a confused look.

''But it can't be tomorrow!''Kai as one the verge of crying.

''Huh? Why?''A confused Acchan asked.

''Cause there is an anime con not so far from here and I sooooo wanted to go there.I need to buy those One Piece figures''Acchan mentally facepalmed and gave Kai the look a.k.a -.- .

''Kai? Are you serious? Do you want to spend your time and money on useless things or go with you girlfriend and soon-to-be-wife to France? With the others'''A serious Atsuko asked.

''Of course.....I wanted to go to that con! It doesn't happen everyday!''Kai stated and took it back after a he got a fist on his dumb head which contains his dumb brain and a angry girlfriend.Kai....*sigh* seriously?.

''Hey! Where are you going?''Asked Kai but got ignored by his girlfriend who went to her room.

''Oh man, I screwed up again..didn't I?''He mumbled and went to make his girlfriend happy again.


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''Ne, Riku''

''Hm?''The boy playing with his PSP and resembles a cat mumbled.

''Do you love me?''Yuu asked.

''What's with the question?''Riku asked without looking at Yuu who was doing everything to get his attention.

''Answer me!''

''Eh?''After hearing Yuu almost shouting it, Riku looked at him quiet scared.''You never pay attention to me and always played with your PSP and leaved me alone while you play with this thing!''Yuu shouted and pointed at Riku's PSP.

'It's not a thing, it's my PSP'Riku commented mentally but never said something and listened to Yuu's angry shouting.

''And you never kissed me! It's always me! It was never you! It was always me who kisses you, it was always me who groped you!''Yuu's never ending shouting continued.
'True, it's cause i'm not some perv so I don't grope people'Riku also continued his commenting.

''And, and-''Before Yuu could continue he was shut by Riku who suddenly kissed him.And how do you think Yuu's face looked like...?

Riku - >/////<

Yuu - OwO

Yup, exactly like that.

''R-Rikunyan''A teary Yuu manged to utter.''Yes, that's me.The one and only, the gorgeous and fabulous one.The sexy and hot one, Kojima Riku''Riku said and clapped his hands.
''Rikunyan!''Yuu suddenly jumped on his boyfriend and gave him a big bear hug.I know what you're thinking, 'This.Fanfic.Is.So.Gay!' Probably something like that.Pretty much, I meant I have no idea what the hell you're thinking.

''Hai hai, let's now chill both and play Kingdom Hearts 3''Riku said and started playing on his PSP again.

''And here I thought you meant play...as on play...on our bed....with..yeah''Yuu sadly started sulking.

And so, they never stopped.

========= The next day 5:00 AM =========

''Acchan, are you serious? It's five in the freaking morning! Let me get some of my beauty sleep for my handsome face's sake!''

''Shaddap and get up! Or I'll make you get up, my way''

''Make me get up then''Kai mumbled.''You choose my way, your problem''Acchan said and went out of Kai's room.

''Ahh, sleep~''Kai turned around and continued his so-called 'beauty sleep'.Then he heard footsteps but he ignored it.Which is something you shouldn't do.

Then suddenly he felt some kind of cold liquid on his face.''UAAAAAAAH!!''He shouted and sat up and looked at Acchan who was grinning evilly while holding a bottle of mineral water.

''What the hell Acchan''

''You said, your way''She laughed evilly and poured more water on him.''Acchan! Stop it! It's freaking cold!''He shouted as he felt the cold water getting on contact with his milky and smooth skin.

''And why would I care?''Acchan said.He glared at her and took the bottle from her hand and poured it on her.

''COOOOLLLLLDDD!! THIS SHIT IS FREAKING COLD!''Acchan started shouting while glaring at him and slapped the back of his head.''Ite!''

''Shddap and get ready! The flight is in two hours''Acchan said and poked his head and went to the kitchen.

''And so, I didn't ger my beauty sleep''He mumbled and went to the bathroom to take a quick shower.And get ready for the long flight to France.


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Did you guys like the chapter?  :dunno:

The next chapter will be about what'll happen in the flight and when they arrive and some other stuff   :hehehe:

Anyways! Ignore my stupid typos  :scolding:

Comments are welcome!  :monk gboy:

Byeeee~  :mon bye:

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter Two
« Reply #15 on: June 11, 2013, 10:35:57 PM »
It is a fast moving fic that's why :lol:

I'm reading it and go blank sometimes when I expect something to happen and it doesn't :nervous

Kai gets splashed with water and Acchan let's it go on him lmao
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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter Two
« Reply #16 on: June 11, 2013, 10:38:41 PM »
you forgott marimii

but it is so sweet i dont find it weird because all fanfics are bout gays ^^

so continue and write more sweet moments ^^
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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter Two
« Reply #17 on: June 11, 2013, 11:49:27 PM »
I'm out of words here...this fic is funny and weird at the same time,just like others had said...but heck,its quite entertaining and refreshing :on GJ:

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter Two
« Reply #18 on: June 12, 2013, 10:21:14 AM »
Kai was so childish... always anime and manga before everything else...

Poor Atsuko seem to always be the second to Kai...

Oh.. Atsuko was so upset now... Kai was in trouble...

How is he going to fix it?

OMG... Atsuko was so mean... poured cold water to Kai...

She didn't want to deal with Kai's nonsense.

Well I thought Riku would have trouble like Kai with Atsuko.

But Riku able to handle it so well with all Yuu complain about his video game.

Yeah... they are going to France...

What other troubles Kai going to cause for Atsuko?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

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Re: _Young Love_ (Atsumina, Kojiyuu etc) Chapter Two
« Reply #19 on: June 12, 2013, 11:59:19 AM »
O_____O it's actually my first time reading a boy to boy relationships

So i really found it weird LOL

But oh well this is really an interesting one!

I love Marimii! And the others

Specially my KaiAcchan!

Its really a good thing that you didnt make Acchan a guy

It will freak me out ahehehe wushhh..
 
Anyway thank you! *Waiting for the next chappie* ^___^
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