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The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« on: June 30, 2013, 06:13:48 AM »
Table Of Content

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Opening Song: Kimi Ga Ometteru Yori by Team Surprise http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=MM6KNR7NY8OD

Introduction: The Spiral Space (June 30, 2013)
Chapter 1: Friends (June 30, 2013)
             1-2 Dream (July 1, 2013)
             1-3 Mistrust and Truth (July 4,2013)
             1-4 Domination (July 9, 2013)
Chapter 2: Journey (On Progress)
     
       To Be Announce


                                     
                                   
                                   
                               


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Introduction
The Spiral Space


In the universal dimensional space there is a large ball-like space wandering around it is called the Spiral Space and its of it is there is Five Realms.

The First Realm where the God live and the angel singing in a harmonic and melody songs and where light is always in there, The Aether.

Second Realm The Gehenna this realm is worse than you think this is where the sinful people live with the demons and devils and all of the darkness minions and there is The Nine Circle of Gehenna (Limbo, Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Anger, Heresy, Violence, Fraud and Treachery). Darkness of the Gehenna will always be the threat of all realms.

Third Realm is The Technologia this is where people lives with a high technology devices, weapons, vehicles and buildings,  the Ability Users, Technology User, H.I (Human INTELLIGENCE, G.I (God INTELLIGENCE) and Manipulators is the people who lives in Technologia. our antagonist live in here.

Fourth Realm The Mundus this where normal people they call themselves Humans and of course they have a high technology just like Techonologia.

The Fifth Realm The Magia where Sorcerer, Mage, Sage, Druid, Necromancer, Summoner, Magician, Elementalist, Priest, Bishop, and Prophet live, they have a technology but not high as Mundus and Tecnologia have. Our main characters live in here but one of them will betrayed.

This Five Realms have a war for many years the war of Technologia and Mundus in Universal War I and it end in Universal War III Technologia won, the Battle of Technologia and Magia in Universal War IV Technologia won, The battle of Magia with their allies Aether vs Mundus and Technologia but Technologia won. Technologia is the only one realm always started the Universal War. It stared I, II III, IV, and Universal War V where Technologia won again against Aether. The war will never stop until Technologia will be defeated but………


In the Magia there is a girl name Takahashi Minami a girl who lost her parents in Universal War and now she is with her grandmother and Takamina live in the Fire Country, the capital country of Elemental Continent. Takamina is a Fire mage Class B but she have a dream and that is she wants to be the most strongest magic user in the whole universe, she never think to revenge her parents but the one who kill her parents will pay a lot……………



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Sorry for my bad english.......... What do you think about my Intro is it okay????


Just comment if you want me to continue this..  :) :) :) :)


Sci-fi, Adventure, Action, Supernatural, Comedy, Space Battles and Shoujo Ai is the genre.......

I'm so nervous what will you comment this is my first fanfic so yeahh....
« Last Edit: July 09, 2013, 10:06:49 AM by Ü_VerMillion_Ü »

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2013, 06:26:09 AM »
I like the storyline! Keep it up  :twothumbs


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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2013, 07:04:59 AM »
Oh, welcome to jphip...It is really nice to have you here!~!~!~
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~Hm, sci-fi...actually i like sci-fi~~ Oh yeah!! There's comedy in it!~!~!~
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~Woah...So Takamina is The Magia...A fire mage...Cool!~!~ Takamina!~!~
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~Yossha!! I hope the main character is Takamina!~!~! Kyaa!~!~ Fire mage!~!~
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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2013, 07:25:06 AM »
Wah. . . So interesting!

Please continue. . . . I'm looking forward To your story!  :) :)

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2013, 07:34:02 AM »
Very interesting... Although I already know your story... HEHEHEHEHEHEHE  :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #5 on: June 30, 2013, 08:01:34 AM »
Sound interesting!

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #6 on: June 30, 2013, 09:07:14 AM »
Well I'm interested can't wait
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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #7 on: June 30, 2013, 09:16:19 AM »
Interesting intro...

Can't wait

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #8 on: June 30, 2013, 09:45:31 AM »
Welcome  :welcome :welcome :welcome
Interesting introduce, I like it!  :yep:
Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #9 on: June 30, 2013, 11:32:09 AM »
For suddenly moment I will post the chapter one now..  :lol: :lol: :lol:

@Mai-chan: hehe Thank You

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Chapter 1
Friends

Year X463

“Takamina!!!!!!” grandmother shouted at her in the bed.

“What is it??!! Takamina shout back

“It’s already morning get up now or else you’ll be late in your class…” grandmother said while cooking.

“Eeeehhh!! Why you didn’t tell me earlier??” Takamina rapidly get up in the bed and go to the shower.

“Because you’re too cute to wake up my dear.” Grandmother said

“That’s not I’m talking about, by the way what day is the contest will held?” Takamina asked

“Next week my dear and hurry up time is gold you need to hurry now here is your bento” her grandmother smile to her.

“Hai!!! Bye grandma” Takamina kiss her grandmother in the forehead.

Takamina use her fire boost to fly and go to school in time. She is come from in the Sky Academy, one of the richest and expensive school in elemental continent it is located in the Raijin Country…

Maeda Atsuko is a Lightning Sage Class S, age 22, born in Blitz Village in Astrapo Country and she is Takamina’s Bestfriend.
Oshima Yuko is an Earth Magician Class A, age 25, born in Terra Village in Gaia Country.
Kojima Haruna is a Water Sorceress Class A, Age 25, born in Aqua Village in Hydro Country.
Kashiwagi Yuki is a Dark Druid Class S, Age 24, born in Tenebris Village in Nyx Country.
Sashihara Rino is a Metal Summoner Class A, Age 20, born in Aurum Village in Metallo Country.
Itano Tomomi is a Light Priest Class S, Age 21, born in Lux Village in
Hemera Country. They are the friend of Takamina since they met in Sky Academy

“Takamina you are so late where you’ve been?” Acchan was pouting at her.

“Eto….” Takamina just scratched her neck

“Is your clock out of energy??” Kojinyan asked

“No. I’m just you know, I had nightmare last night.” Takamina smile at them.

Takamina and others go to school. Takamina, Acchan, Tomochin, Yukirin, Kojinyan use their element to fly while Yuko and Sasshi……….. they can only boost themselves at the land………

School Bell rang

Takamina is the only one in the Class B while the other is in the Class A and Class S…..

 In Takamina’s mind
“Someday I will be in Class A.” Takamina said.

“Someday!!! Someday!!!”  Takamina shout loudly.

“Takamina!!!! What in the world are you doing in your desk? Are you sleeping again??” Maimai asked with her forehead wrinkle.

“She’s drooling again” the girl whispering to other girl.

Takamina’s classmate laughed at her.

Takamina suddenly waked up in her daydreaming and realize that she’s in the class.

“Takamina go outside and run 200 times at the corridor right now!!!” Maimai shout angrily at her.

Takamina run at the corridor at the speed of 200 kph with her flaming aura while running. Suddenly Meetan open the door of the faculty room. When she opens the door, Takamina suddenly rushed, leaving the door burn into dust. Meetan wondered why the door disappeared and frozen from her state. Noro Kayo stops Takamina’s movement with her Time Lock spell.

“Why are you running??” Noro Kayo asked.

“Well I sleep in the class so my teacher said run to the corridor 200 times.” Takamina smiled innocently.

“Hmm so how many times you make? By the way come to my office.” Noro Kayo asked.

“Ahmm 180 times… Okay” Takamina answered swiftly.

In Takamina’s mind
“Hmm what is it??” Takamina tilted her head while the Time Lock spell disappears.

“Ouch!!”  she said as her whole body dropped at the floor.

Oshima Yuko and others are waiting outside but Takamina takes very long and they wonder why.

Takamina suddenly appears on the front of them making them shocked.

“KYAAAA!!!!”  they squeal.

“Where in the heavens you’ve been??” Sasshi asked while she is in shock mode.

“Ahmm in our, ahhmm I don’t know who is that person but her name is Noro Kayo and she talked to me at her office. Do you know her??” Takamina wondered.

Everyone was shock to what Takamina said…

“EEEEEEHHH!!” they shout.

“EHH nani?? Takamina wondered why they are shock.

“Did you say Noro Kayo?? Tomochin asked

“Yes.” Takamina answered.

“Anoo she is our Principal.”  Yukirin said while she is in frozen state.

“EEEEEEEHHHHHH!!!!!!!!” Takamina shout very very loud.

Takamina and others go home but Takamina is still in her frozen state for she doesn’t know that Noro Kayo is their Principal. Just because back in there where Noro talked to her Takamina answered without respect.

At the Technologia.

Orion Base Facility Room #22

Mariko is looking at the UPS (Universal Position System), she is watching the Magia and plan to invade it. Project JUDGEMENT, A project to invade the Magia and make it as their own realm to increase their power and to become the most powerful realm in the Spiral Space. Mayuyu is a G.I (God INTELLIGENCE) she can control the whole world and the other technologies.

“Mayuyu how many remaining days until we will do the Project JUDGEMENT??” Mariko asked.

“Five months and five weeks and five days and five hours and five minutes and five seconds and five milliseconds and five nanoseconds remaining milady” Mayuyu answered swiftly.

“Will you please don’t make it long? I only said how many days.” Mariko asked with her narrowed eyes.

Mariko is the Marshall General of Orion Country she ruled about 200 or more field army and she is the only Marshall that can activated the Black Materia SPHERE the most powerful material and non material being it is most powerful than dark matter and celestial stone…


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TO BE CONTINUED………..


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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #10 on: June 30, 2013, 12:04:41 PM »
I have a feeling i know this ahmmmm :? Right X_Last-Cross_X.. Teehee :P

Anyway..  Me like it~! :thumbup Oh Mariko-sama's planning to invade Magia! Can't wait to witness everything! :fap

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #11 on: June 30, 2013, 12:37:41 PM »
I have a feeling i know this ahmmmm :? Right X_Last-Cross_X.. Teehee :P

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #12 on: June 30, 2013, 12:59:02 PM »
I have a feeling i know this ahmmmm :? Right X_Last-Cross_X.. Teehee :P

I know what you mean.

Ah, I'm hoping that this would be AtsuYuu but dat ain't happening. Takamina, huh...
I get the vibe that it's gonna turn TakaMari O.O''
Or at least Atsumina >.>
Or better yet, friendship story!

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #13 on: June 30, 2013, 01:11:59 PM »
interesting....

Minami was just in class B...

And here she was a lazy person and liked to day dream....

What did Kayo need with Takamina?

What will Mariko do?

Can't wait to see what's happening next?

Thank you for the update

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #14 on: June 30, 2013, 01:18:09 PM »
Ah...Yeah, on the introduction i was confused on why did all of them is in class A n' S...
 :roll: :huhuh :?

~Well, I wonder why Takamina is the only one in class B...Is it because she's weak than other?~?~?
 :? XD :lol:

~No way in hell!! Takamina i'll be supporting you!~!~ LOL Wow...There many kind of magic eh?~?~?
 XD :) :yep:

~Iya...Somehow i miss the old member already~The queen of comedy and Maimai~~
 :oops: :D :wub:

~Well, so far it is interesting~ Pls update soon!~!~ I can't wait for the next one!~!~
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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #15 on: June 30, 2013, 01:29:37 PM »
HI~~~!!!   :)

UWAAHH~~!!!  :w00t:
This is Very Interestingly Cool!! XD

So Takamina is the only Class B while the Other's are Class S and A?
so does this mean she'll suddenly get all strong and all?  :lol:   :glasses:

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #16 on: June 30, 2013, 02:24:17 PM »
The Story is Awesome!   :twothumbs
I'm confused about the class System...A is higher than B...but what about S?  :?
It Really got me interested  :w00t:
Is Sae & Jurina Gonna be Featured  :wub:  :twisted:
Mariko is Always the Villain... O0
I wonder what the Pairings will be...If any... :nervous
I cant wait for the next part!  :panic:

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #17 on: June 30, 2013, 03:54:03 PM »
My,my . . . Takamina's in trouble  :D lol.

So Mariko is the bad guy huh. . . .
I want to see how this story would develop  :)

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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #18 on: June 30, 2013, 04:02:19 PM »
The Story is Awesome!   :twothumbs
I'm confused about the class System...A is higher than B...but what about S?  :?
It Really got me interested  :w00t:
Is Sae & Jurina Gonna be Featured  :wub:  :twisted:
Mariko is Always the Villain... O0
I wonder what the Pairings will be...If any... :nervous
I cant wait for the next part!  :panic:


Well, DiVAGal2458-san...I suppose 'S' is more higher than any of it...

'S' represent 'special' or what so ever but yeah, 'S' is more higher than 'A' and 'B'...

Hope that could help ya'...Sorry if i'm kinda' rude...And i hope that's true~LOL
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Re: The Conflict Of The Realm (Rerumu no Tairitsu)
« Reply #19 on: June 30, 2013, 04:34:17 PM »
The Story is Awesome!   :twothumbs
I'm confused about the class System...A is higher than B...but what about S?  :?
It Really got me interested  :w00t:
Is Sae & Jurina Gonna be Featured  :wub:  :twisted:
Mariko is Always the Villain... O0
I wonder what the Pairings will be...If any... :nervous
I cant wait for the next part!  :panic:


Well, DiVAGal2458-san...I suppose 'S' is more higher than any of it...

'S' represent 'special' or what so ever but yeah, 'S' is more higher than 'A' and 'B'...

Hope that could help ya'...Sorry if i'm kinda' rude...And i hope that's true~LOL
 :oops: :D XD

Your correct Dieyg48-san....

The ranking system that this fic uses to the class according to its order, from ascending to descending is: S, A, B, C, D and E

That's according to my observation, but it could be possible....  :yep: :yep: :yep:
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