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Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« on: July 24, 2013, 08:09:55 PM »
INTRO.




Oshima Yuu , who is a single-dad now he is in a church and prayed for his wife. He looked to his daughter with adorable look.
Imitating him although she doesn’t what prey mean.

" Yuuchan " A small girl want to call her father but she is only two year olds so she can’t call him as papa

A man smile and pat his sister head “ Asako ” the daughter of him and “ Asahi ” who died in eleven month ago.
Instead to call him “ papa ” Asako always call him as Yuuchan like her mother always call him.

“ Hmm? My little angel ” Yuu pinch her nose with his widely smile . He think Asako is so cute.

“ I’m very hungry ~ ”  Said Asako before rub her stomach and make very-hungry looked to her father.

Adorable and Cuteness form Asako can make Yuu smile always .
His little angel war born and bonding him and Asahi …..  Asako like everything in widower life as him.

“ What would you want to eat ? Asakochan "

“ Ice-cream…. I want ice-cream ”  A small girl smile and show him with a dimple that she have with a same position of him.

“ but you must eat rice before eat icecream okay my good girl ? ”

“ Yes sir, Yuuchan ”

“ Let’s go home Asakochan , it’s too evening ”

Asako smile and hold her father 's hand and walk together to their home  “ Home ” is used to have three people.
Yuu,Asako and Asahi  but after Asahi died this home have only two people. Yuu felt so much painful about this situation
But he can’t weak and keep look after his daughter by himself. Asahi died when she 25 years old.
Although he know his wife can’t besides him forever. But it’s too fast to accept it.
Thankfull that  Asako is a wonderful kids although her mother is weak but she was born as a strong person.


" AWW!! Yuuchan ,it’s so cool " Asako splash the water to her father. Now they have a shower together.
Bathtub is too large for two people because it was designed for three people but the emptiness was compensate by Yuu
who is a both father and mother for Asako.

“ Asakochan are you kidding me ? ” Yuu laugh

“ HA HA! Yuuchan you like a squirrel when it was touched by water ”

“ Really ,so I’m very cute ne ? ”

“ Yes ,Yuuchan is cuter than squirrel tenfold ” Said she and showed ten fingers to her father.

“  I love you Asakochan ”

“ Me too, Yuuchan ”


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“ Yuuchan Ohayo ~”
A small man almost choke himself from milk when his daughter call and rush to him. He open his arm to receive the hug form
his duaghter.

“ Today you promised me to go to the zoo ” A little girl hug him tightly and make a puppy eyes.

“ Okay ,but you should have a breakfast first. ”

“ Go to the zoo ~ Yeah ” 

“ Please calm yourself ,I can’t dress and comb your hair ” Yuu dress and comb his sister for zoo.

“ Are you finish Yuuchan ? ”

“ Yes ,Now we will go to the zoo ”


Before they go outside the house , the  bell suddenly rang .


“ Wait here Asakochan,I will check who is visit us ”

“ Okay ” A little girl nod.

“…………..” When he look at intercom . He felt a little bit shock , He see a tall and good looking figure
 Kojima Haruna who is reminded him to Asahi ,Like a twin but it’s not. Haruna is a same mother but differrent father with Asahi.

“ Kojima Haruna right ? Please come inside ”

“ Un ,Nice to meet you ” A tall figure small politely and drag her stuff and bag toward this home.


When she inside the room. A little girl rush to her.


“ Mama ” Yuu shocked from Asako'sword “Mama right?” if Haruna don’t accept and don’t understand it. what will happen next ?

A woman who was forced by his daughter smile solftly then carried Asako and sitting at sofa.

“ Mama, Finally you come back to me ” Asako  sob loudly.

Haruna looked at Yuu who smile a little bit and then she hug Asakowho is her niece tightly.

“ Shh~ Mama is here and mama come back to you ,so don’t cry Asakochan "Haruna whipped a tear from a little girl face.

Does it mean she can be mama for his daughter ? – Yuu think with thankfulness.

A tall figure hugged and rubbed Asako's back with pathetic feel.
Although her and her sister is not close to each other but she can’t see Asako seem like this.
Yuu look this situation with a gratefulness. Thank for your gift Asahi.....


to be continued................

First i make a yuu wife is tomochin and their daughter is tamako But i afraid that reader must be confused
so i make yuu wife is Asahi and daughter is Asako. Asahi is a Kojima haruna's role in Mendol(drama)
so Asahi and haruna like twin in here.and then please read and comment it. XD
« Last Edit: July 24, 2013, 08:39:19 PM by yuko88 »

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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina]
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2013, 08:16:59 PM »
I'm a little confused here....

Yuu is a single father and his wife died leaving him with their daughter and Haruna comes in as an "aunt" to see her niece.  There is a lot missing in between :nervous
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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2013, 09:25:29 PM »
oooo im understand ^^

too bad Asahi die

but our Kojiharu como to take care of yuu and Asako XD!

thanks and Update Soon!

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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2013, 12:01:30 AM »
I like the idea of making Asahi and Haruna twins...

Easier for the daughter Asako to accept Haruna...

So it's going to be a love story between Yuu and Haruna...

About how Haruna accepting Yuu's love

But wondering whether he really loved her or just using her as a replacement for Asahi

Can't wait to see the next

When Atsumina is going to turn up...?

Can't wait

Thank you for the interesting story

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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« Reply #4 on: July 25, 2013, 10:58:52 PM »
like the story idea  :twothumbs
there'll be a bunch of sweet moments, ne??  XD

please continue~  :on woohoo:

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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2014, 04:17:27 PM »
I'm curious with this one,
can you continue please...
just love to read alot of fiction story

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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2014, 05:21:25 PM »
wowww.. . if the kojiyuu story could be this interesting, what bout atsumina? i bet it's more interesting.

looks like twins of haruna-asahi makes this story is different with the others.

it's gonna be a deep start between yuu and haruna.

thank you author-san

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Re: Hello Mommy [Kojiyuu, Atsumina] edited.
« Reply #7 on: May 23, 2014, 07:02:21 PM »
I'm a bit.  Confused. . So asahi is haruna likely sister who have died eh?? :? I hope ya will update more

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