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TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 02 TALE 1 (27/12/2013)
« on: July 25, 2013, 10:17:01 AM »
Sometimes when the idea ccomes and you need to write it before you forget.

Greetings!

*****-----*****

"If you can have three items to go a desert island, what do you bring there?"

"Three items... it must be objects, right?"

"No, anything is ok!"

"Can I choose a person? If I can choose a person, it's miichan"

"Me?"

"Yeah, because she is my best friend I want to protect her, maybe I can do my best to death if miichan is there, "I'll do my best for miichan" I think so"

After an off topic talk…

"Ok, you guys, go to a desert island"

"Are you serious?"

"It may happen!"

"Scary!"

<This was from Kousagi dojo>

All I remember is that we were drinking orange juice, orange juice! I don't remember anything more, except for the part where some cameramen entered to the karaoke room and... *geh... my head hurts...* I don't remember anything after that... 

Slowly, I opened my eyes but the sunlight hurt my vision and my face felt all hot *please close the curtains...* I mumbled, while looking with my hands for something to cover my face, I don't know, maybe a blanket would be fine.

*... mmfh... turn off the heater...* i heard miichan's voice, wait... miichan? But she is not my roommate!
 
Is here where I feel like in another prank… I open my eyes and realize I can see the clear sky, I can feel the air heat over my body, there are no a single blanket on the bed and indeed I am not in my bed or in my room or somewhere I know of. Something else? Oh yeah! *MIICHAAAAN MIICHAN!* I wish this was a bad dream…

I get up and grab miichan by her shoulders and move from side to side *… Hm… what is it? Minami?* she mumbles and scratch her cheek *Wake up!* I shout before kick her butt.

I am thinking why we are here and the only one reason is…

"It may happen!"

Right now i feel like i wanna cry or laugh, I wonder what will be better. 

*Minami…? What are you doing here?* she sits, and stare at the place *where are we?… * the same I want to know.

*No, no, no, no, no… this can’t be… today I had an interview!* I grab my head, I feel like I'm about to lose it.

*What is this place?* now miichan is astonished, the same as me… I know what is next, she is about to panic *MINAMI WHERE ARE WE? WE ARE LOST?! TELL ME THIS IS AN ILUSSION, PLEASE I AM HAVING A MIGHTMARE!* and the only think I can do is pinch her cheek *Auch! Why did you do that?* she rubs her cheek, I can notice she has tears.

I help her to stand up and we take a large look to the place *seems we are in a desert island…* we hear those words coming from me and a large silence comes. Maybe I should cry, just the same miichan is doing…


#Meanwhile in certain place#

TV: Don’t miss the new reality show, performed by akb members: Takahashi minami and Minegishi minami, what will do the best friends Wminami to survive? Will they still remain best friends after this? You have to follow them, Monday-Saturday 21-23 hours here in "Tales of a desert island!"

The team k is practicing, team a is having a meeting and team b is in the changing room but somebody unexpected bursts into the place -Minna! Hurry up! Minami need me!- Atsuko enters to the akb teather, she brings a really big bag pack and is wearing clothing camping.

~TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND~
PROLOGUE
« Last Edit: December 28, 2013, 06:02:10 AM by rise »

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. PROLOGUE (25/07/2013)
« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2013, 11:42:31 AM »
Ah!!~ Yeah, it's from AKB Kousagi Dojo~~ 1st episode right??~
-Ah...WMinami on action huh??~ Gonna be interesting~~
-And hell!!~ If i were the viewer of the tales of the desert island...
-i might complain on why my Kami-Oshi is taken in that kind of place!!!
-Cruel!! Cuz in there...Might have a dangerous creature awaiting for them!!
-Cruel yet awesome that is!! I'll shut my mouth and will not complain~ *cover mouth*
- Just gonna wait for it~~ Just hoping that this show happen for real~ LOL
-I might complain for real if it goes real...

>Plz update the next one!!~ Nice prologue~ Acchan?? Oh~~

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. PROLOGUE (25/07/2013)
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2013, 11:52:23 AM »
Interesting prologue...

Based on Kousagi Dojo..  :grin:

What will Acchan do??

Can't wait for the 1st chapter

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. PROLOGUE (25/07/2013)
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2013, 12:01:10 PM »
This is an interesting scenario
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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. PROLOGUE (25/07/2013)
« Reply #4 on: July 25, 2013, 05:38:47 PM »
Lmao so they were put in a deserted island and Acchan wants to follow suit XD
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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. PROLOGUE (25/07/2013)
« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2013, 05:45:20 PM »
It interesting !!
I love AKB !
I love AKB fanfic !
I love the most Atsuminaaa!
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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 01 THE JOURNEY (25/08/2013)
« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2013, 09:07:00 AM »
 :cry: Tomochin...

Kochiki: i was thinking the same when the idea came to me. Thank you!

olive29: she will do whatever is necessary to get minami back to the civilization. Thank you!

kurozawa87: thank you!

yuki88: yeah! XD thank you!

nunku: thank you!

Mistakes and those things, sorry u.u

Greetings!

*****-----*****


After the announcement of the new tv program, atsuko took the first thing she saw in her closet and now… she has arrived from somewhere… interrupting the akb activities with a petition of hers… well an order…

-Atsuko? – yuko, incredulous, walks to the ex-ace - what are you doing here? It looks like a delusion! Are you a ghost? – she put her hand on atsuko’s face. 

- I just arrived, what the hell is aki-p thinking doing such a thing?!- she shouts pushing yuko’s hand, she begins to walk to the other members and gives bag packs to each.

-Wait… what are you doing? - asks Jurina, going out of the restroom – so sudden, besides aren’t you filming a movie right now?-  behind her is rena, a little flushed.

-MY minami is MORE important than that movie!- and all the members took the bag packs without hesitation – now go to your rooms and get some clothes!-

-Hey, easy – mariko pets her – your takachibi will be ok – and take a picture just before atsuko look at her with a death glare.

-I’m calm, don’t you see?- she give’s a bag pack to mariko.
 
-Chief! What is the plan?!- sasshi brings a map of the island and shows it to atsuko.

-Hey don’t encourage her more – mayu walks to the entrance, the team a has finished the meeting and is going to their rooms to do what atsuko said – and from where did you get that map? - 

-This? I stole it from togasaki –

-Togasaki… damns it! – yuko put a finger on her chin – Everyone, hurry, bring all you will need to the trip, we need to escape from here before togasaki-san discovers us!-

-what trip?! – Yuki shouts sarcastically, the team b has finished changing their clothes.

-Yeah… rather a suicide act if you ask me… anyway! Hurry, we have… wait a moment please – yuko takes out her cell phone – ok, we have twenty minutes to get out of here, remember just the necessary! And don’t forget to bring your cameras and batteries! –

-For what?-   haruna asks.

-To take pictures and recordings!  Now go! We will meet in the usual bus!- finally yuko ends and all members go out to prepare their luggage.

#TWENTY MINUTES LATER #

-Then… didn’t you say “just the necessary”? – atsuko asks while open the trunk of the bus.

-Sorry but I really need this – yuko brings a grill and chairs buildable plus a beach umbrella.

-Fine… whatever, put those things in the trunk-

 -Yes!-

-And hurry, my contacts told me togasaki-san is coming to the building! - After hearing this all the members threw their bag packs inside the trunk and got inside the car.

-Yukirin where are you?- mayu asks noticing yuki isn’t in the bus yet.

-Mayuyu! Over here! – yuki shouts jumping outside the bus, making signs to mayu to get out of the car.

-There you are!- mayu points to yuki and begins to walk to the door, making a bit of space in the middle of the crow to pass, in that moment.

- Acchan, we need another bus, here the space is insufficient!- says reina inside the bus which is crowded.   

In that moment another bus arrived.

-Wow! – all the members said at the same time.

-Acchan please grant my plea, I wish my nyanyan let me touch her boo…mfhh – haruna covered yuko’s mouth with her hand.
 
-Anooo…. Just two questions… - miho raises her hand – first how did you get the bus? And second who gis driving the another one?-

-Akimoto sayaka here! – sayaka greets from the driver's seat.

-Fine, second question answered… now the first question… - looked disapprovingly.

-I asked for sae-chan and sasshi to help me to get the keys from the driver- sae smiled with concern and Sasshi smiled with a hint of malice.

-What did you do to the driver?- rie asks entering to the second bus.

-Is better of you don’t ask- sae looks away.

-Hurry, my contacts have informed me that togasaki-san is entering to the building and the gate keepers are giving us time.

-No! but… but I want to go with mayuyu!- yuki is being pushed by the other members inside the second bus.

-Yukiriiiiiiin!- mayu shouts as the first bus begins to move.

-Mayuyuuuuu! – yuki shouts as the second car closes the door and begins to move.

-Sayaka… how did you get involved in this?- Tomomi asks, she is the copilot.

-Well… to tell you the truth… atsuko kidnaped me… -

-WHAT?!-

-Minami, resist please, i’m going for you!- sae is driving the first car, atsuko is the copilot.

-Which minami are you referring to? Your wife or the chibi?-  yuko gets next to acchan, mariko is recording the first day of trip.

#AKI-P OFFICE#

-Then all is according to the plan, thank you togasaki and please take care of those girls-

The call ends.

#IN THE ISLAND#

-Minami... i'm hungry...-

-Just... wait a moment... -

Michan is watching to minami who is trying to fish with her bare hands.


~TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND~
CH. 01 THE JOURNEY



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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 01 THE JOURNEY (25/08/2013)
« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2013, 09:20:56 AM »
Wow there...I was surprised to see this fic's title in the 1st page...
-Well anyway, i'm really glad that you update this fic though~
-Oh...Are they going to the island too or what?? Or rescue?? Lol..
-Whatever it is, aww...The WMinami is hungry...I'm sad now...Ahaha..
-Just kidding, instead, it's getting interesting!!~
-Hrm...I wonder if they'll make it there...To the island...

>Will wait for the answer on the next update so plz update soon!!~ Can't wait for it!!~

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 01 THE JOURNEY (25/08/2013)
« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2013, 09:40:11 AM »
yeay an update  :twothumbs

lol acchan so worried about minami  :lol:
poor sayaka become victim  :lol:

i want to know more  :D
pls update soon  :jphip:

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 01 THE JOURNEY (25/08/2013)
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2013, 10:58:10 AM »
This chapter is so hilarious...  :lol:  :twothumbs

Seems like all of it are Aki-p's plan..

Can't wait for the next chapter...

Update soon, please... :bow:


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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 01 THE JOURNEY (25/08/2013)
« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2013, 01:40:16 PM »
Friggin LoL'd
Though yar style reminded me of someone...

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 01 THE JOURNEY (25/08/2013)
« Reply #11 on: September 06, 2013, 05:52:16 PM »
Takamina catching fish :drool: :cow:lol ganbate

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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 02 TALE 1 (27/12/2013)
« Reply #12 on: December 28, 2013, 06:01:13 AM »
kochiki: Yeah! Love can everything! Acchan to the rescue! XD Thank you!

blackwhite: there will be a lot of victims, I hope. Thank you!

olive29: Yeah, for sure his plan. Thank you!

AshuraX: Thank you!

diamond kirara: thank you!

*****-----*****

First day of transmission

#TV#


~What would do the general director to face this situation? Let’s see what did they do in their first day!~

*TITLE: First day (14:21)*

*TITLE: the minami duo has been walking for almost two hours*

In the screen are takanima followed by miichan, miichan has a bag pack.

*TITLE: wait please! * +close up+ *from where came this bag pack?*

+back the recording to the moment they found the bag pack+
 
Takamina is drawing a map on a large leaf from some plant –sheeesh… what now?- she doesn’t know what to do and seems worried, scratches her head.

*TITLE: what to do? I know the answer BUT I can’t tell you  :(*

-Whooo! Takamina takamina look at there!- miichan was playing with the sand, suddenly a bag pack appeared on the sea water.

-Huh?! Miichan Catch it!- and as ever, takamina jumps on the water to catch the bag pack – phua! got it!- she got out of the water and raised the prize.

-Nee, you didn’t need to jump like that, besides, nobody else is here to steal it – miichan sits on a rock while takamina walks outside the water and, desperately, opens the bag pack.

*TITLE: what did they found inside?*

+image frozen+

*TITLE: now let’s see what are doing the members who are going to the rescue*

*TITLE: after traveling all day *

-Acchan acchan, say cheese!- mariko is takin pictures while all the group is boarding an airplane.

-Scary… - jurina is pressing rena’s arm tightly.

-Now don’t go away, understood?- yuki is grabbing mayu’s hand.

-Yeah yeah… - mayu is listening music.

-Now let’s see… hey listen I’m going to call the role so be quiet please- sayaka next to the door of the airplane.

-Haaaaaai-

-Nee nee, somebody help yuko-san, she can’t climb the stairs with all these things she brought- sasshi calls – oh yeah, and she brought a bunch of snacks!- after this yuko received a lot of help and sayaka facepalmed because of the disturbance.

*TITLE: aaaaah the youthful… anyway, let’s see what the wminami found inside the bag pack *

*TITLE: takahashi opens the bag pack and what she finds is… *

-… what… - minami falls on her knees – what the hell is this?!- now throws away  the bag pack.

-Eh? What is it? – miichan takes the bag pack and opens it, then pulls a paper – let’s see… - she begins to read, the paper read as follows:

"... because she is my best friend I want to protect her, maybe I can do my best to death if miichan is there, I'll do my best for miichan, I think so "

Today onward, three weeks left.

Welcome to the island.

-You have to be kidding…- miichan glances at takamina.

-If there are no choices, come on, we will survive these three weeks, I'll take care of everything! – she stands up and begins to walk followed by miichan who brings the bag pack. 
 
+back to the present+

-Nee takamina I’m hungry and my feet hurt –

-Hm… what time is it?- looking at the sea.

-Well it seems… about two in the afternoon I think-

-And why do you think so?-

-Ah, this book says so-

Hearing this takamina turns and looks at miichan’s hands she has a book – from where…? – pointing to the book.

-It was inside the bag pack-

-What?!- astonished.

*TITLE: Yeah, we left you a bit of help ;) but you didn’t notice because you didn’t look for more*

Takamina tooks the book and read the title – “survival guide, how to survive three weeks on an island with your best friend, no joke” … no joke?!- and throws the book.

-Hey! I want to survive! – miichan takes the book and put inside the bag pack – then what will we eat?-

*TITLE: survival guide: day 1, chapter 2, paragraph 7 “ look for the triangle-shaped rock,  near there are fruits and fresh water”*

-Then let’s go – both walking somewhere.

*TITLE: after looking for almost three hours the wminami found the place, yeeeey! We were worried, you know? *

They are eating fruits and drinking water as if their lives depended on it, after eating…

*TITLE: survival guide: day 1, chapter 1 paragraph 3 “I know you are lost, I suggest you to draw a map, it will be useful”*

*TITLE: BUT our captain is smart and even if she hasn’t read the guide she is drawing the map, let’s appaluse! Sometimes she can be a step in front*

*TITLE: The night is about to come. Survival guide: day 1, chapter 3 paragraph 1 “let’s build a hut!”*

Takamina is building a hut while miichan is reading the book.

-Nee nee takamina, you are wrong there-

-Where?-

-Look, you had to tear up this part, not that-

 -Nooooo, that was the last leaf of palm tree that I got –

-Nee, don’t worry, we can sleep her at least –

*TITLE: well said because out there is almost dark, now I suggest you to make a campfire, and while you make it we will see what are doing the other members*

*TITLE: back to the airplane *

-Am… am…. Are you sure this is safe?- ami asks embracing miho who is losing consciousness because of the lack of air in her lungs.

-You heard the instructor, it’s all safe- atsuko smiles not so sure – anyway, here we are… - the door opens.

-You jump, I jump – says rena to jurina who is trembling and crying because of the fear.

-Hm~ that sounds good, hey nyanyan ¿if I jump you will jump?- asks yuko hugging haruna by her back.

-As if I were crazy… – haruna is looking outside the window.

-Moooo can’t you be a bit more romantic?-

-KYAAAAAAAA! Hey where are you touching?!!!- a loud cry catches the attention of everyone on the plane. 

-What?- asks yuko noticing everybody, except for haruna and other two persons,  is looking at her– It wasn’t me, I swear it! – she raised both her hands.

-Yu-chan didn’t do anything – haruna said and everyone turn to see the second option.
 
-What?- mayu is looking not impressed at the time yuki is holding tightly her hands that are exactly in front of yuki’s chest – they are soft and I needed to give me courage to jump– while mayu is telling this calmly, yuki is all red.

*TITLE: Almost eight in the night, the wminami is having dinner in front of the campfire when a strange sound in the sky calls their attention!*

They are eating more fruits.

-What is that?- minami stop eating.

-Dunno- miichan throws a banana peel.

-Oooh! Look look-

-An airplane?-

-Maybe…-

-We are saved!-

-Woohooooo!-

Both begin to jump and run.

*TITLE: NO, YOU ARE NOT…  :( *

*TITLE: at the same time in the airplane*

- What are these lights in costumes?- tomochin asks turning on and off the lights.

-Stop doing that, acchat will be mad and she dais these were to know our location after landing, for example, the group of yuko has green lights, acchan’s group has white lights,

-Girls! We have to jump! You know we have communicators and remember to do everything as planned. Each group has a receptor, if something happens to you equipment you will be uncommunicated and you will have to go to the point we signed in the maps, don’t forget if somebody find to mimani you immediately advise me, understood?!-

-Yeeeees!-

-Then in pairs get in line!-  and the girls were already in front of the door that was opening - turn on the lights of your suits. Now jump, jump, jump! – and reluctantly all the girls jumped.

*TITLE: and now the wminami are panicking but why?!*

-A… um… these lights look strange…-

-Could this be…-

*TITLE: survival guide: day 1, chapter 3, last paragraph “beware, UFOs visit the island… rarely”*

-UFOs!!- they are panicking looking all these lights falling in the island, in different places.


~TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND~
CH. 02 TALE 01: THE FIRST NIGHT OF SURVIVAL, THE ARRIVAL OF THE HEROINES & THE FALLING UFOs IN THE MIDDLE OF THE DINNER



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Re: TALES OF A DESERT ISLAND CH. 02 TALE 1 (27/12/2013)
« Reply #13 on: December 30, 2013, 01:49:01 AM »
so wminami is going to hide from them...

hope you update soon  :twothumbs

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